人和動(dòng)物類故事 寫作導(dǎo)圖 情節(jié)構(gòu)建方法論 救助與回報(bào)模式 ▌典型情節(jié)：施救行為→建立信任→情感升華→命運(yùn)重逢 ?例句1: Wrapping the injured owl in his jacket, Ethan gently secured its trembling wings. (伊桑用夾克裹住受傷的貓頭鷹，輕輕固定它顫抖的翅膀) [翻譯] 動(dòng)詞鏈wrapping→securing構(gòu)成完整救助動(dòng)作，trembling wings暗示動(dòng)物脆弱性 ?例句2: The golden retriever nudged the boy's limp body toward the riverbank with its muzzle. (金毛犬用鼻尖將男孩癱軟的身體推向河岸) [翻譯] 動(dòng)物救助場(chǎng)景中nudged→pushing構(gòu)成連續(xù)動(dòng)作鏈，limp body營(yíng)造危機(jī)感 ?例句3: Years later, the wolf I'd bandaged emerged from the mist, leading her pack away from our campsite. (數(shù)年后，我曾包扎的狼從迷霧中出現(xiàn)，帶領(lǐng)狼群遠(yuǎn)離我們的營(yíng)地) [翻譯] 時(shí)空跨度搭建命運(yùn)閉環(huán)，leading體現(xiàn)動(dòng)物智慧與報(bào)恩 ?例句4: The fox cub's daily visits evolved from stealing chicken eggs to accepting hand-fed berries. (幼狐從偷雞蛋到接受親手喂莓果的每日造訪) [翻譯] evolve from...to...展示關(guān)系遞進(jìn)，stealing→accepting形成行為對(duì)比 共生日常描寫 ▌情感構(gòu)建：細(xì)節(jié)積累→信任考驗(yàn)→情感認(rèn)同→生命共情 ?例句1: Each dawn, the wounded sparrow would tap its beak against my windowpane, a feathery metronome. (每個(gè)黎明，受傷的麻雀都會(huì)用喙輕叩窗玻璃，像羽毛節(jié)拍器) [翻譯] 比喻手法將日常行為詩(shī)意化，tap...metronome形成聽(tīng)覺(jué)意象 ?例句2: The stray cat's matted fur gradually regained luster under Grandma's meticulous combing. (流浪貓打結(jié)的毛發(fā)在奶奶精心梳理下重?zé)ü鉂? [翻譯] matted→regained構(gòu)成視覺(jué)轉(zhuǎn)變鏈，meticulous combing暗示持久關(guān)懷 ?例句3: Our golden retriever would "accidentally" knock over the cookie jar whenever Mom baked oatmeal cookies. (每當(dāng)媽媽烤燕麥餅干，金毛總會(huì)"意外"撞翻餅干罐) [翻譯] 擬人化雙引號(hào)制造幽默感，展示寵物性格特征 ?例句4: The hedgehog family's autumn nest-building ritual became our favorite backyard theater. (刺猬家族的筑巢儀式成為我們最愛(ài)的后院劇場(chǎng)) [翻譯] ritual→theater比喻賦予動(dòng)物行為儀式感，our體現(xiàn)情感共鳴 主題深化技巧 1． 生命對(duì)話描寫 ▌互動(dòng)范式：語(yǔ)言障礙→行為溝通→情感互通→生命平等 ?例句1: When the injured dolphin pressed its forehead against mine, saltwater mingled with my tears. (受傷海豚將額頭抵住我的時(shí)，海水與淚水交融) [翻譯] forehead against mine建立跨物種親密接觸，mingled象征情感融合 ?例句2: The old shepherd's whistle echoed through the valley, answered by a chorus of bleating lambs. (老牧羊人的口哨回蕩山谷，應(yīng)和著此起彼伏的羔羊叫聲) [翻譯] echoed→answered構(gòu)成聲音對(duì)話，chorus擬人化動(dòng)物回應(yīng) ?例句3: My fingers traced the raised scars on the horse's flank—silent testaments to its survival story. (指尖撫過(guò)馬匹側(cè)腹的凸起傷疤，這些無(wú)聲的生存見(jiàn)證) [翻譯] 觸覺(jué)描寫連接生命記憶，silent testaments深化主題 ?例句4: In the tiger's amber eyes, I saw not ferocity but the same parental anxiety mirroring my own. (在老虎琥珀色眼眸中，我看到的不是兇猛，而是與自己相同的父母焦慮) [翻譯] 眼神描寫突破物種隔閡，mirroring實(shí)現(xiàn)情感映照 情感升華策略 1． 永恒承諾表達(dá) ▌情感錨點(diǎn)：物質(zhì)記憶→精神傳承→生命延續(xù)→永恒羈絆 ?例句1: The dog's weathered collar now hangs on my study wall, its jingling tags still composing phantom melodies. (狗狗磨損的項(xiàng)圈掛在書(shū)房，叮當(dāng)銘牌仍奏響幻影旋律) [翻譯] 物品寄托思念，phantom melodies引發(fā)通感記憶 ?例句2: Every spring, butterflies emerge from the chrysalises we nurtured, carrying our shared summer into the sky. (每年春天，我們培育的蝶蛹破繭，攜著共度的夏日飛向天空) [翻譯] 生命循環(huán)意象，carrying...into實(shí)現(xiàn)情感轉(zhuǎn)化 ?例句3: My daughter now feeds the same oak tree squirrels I befriended two decades ago. (女兒如今喂養(yǎng)著二十年前我結(jié)識(shí)的橡樹(shù)松鼠) [翻譯] 時(shí)間維度拓展情感，same強(qiáng)調(diào)生命傳承 ?例句4: The wolf's howl at dawn wasn't a wilderness cry, but a familiar lullaby from my childhood. (黎明的狼嚎不再是荒野之音，而是兒時(shí)熟悉的搖籃曲) [翻譯] 聽(tīng)覺(jué)記憶轉(zhuǎn)化，not...but...重構(gòu)認(rèn)知 創(chuàng)新視角示范 創(chuàng)新維度：時(shí)空錯(cuò)位→物種置換→情感反轉(zhuǎn)→認(rèn)知顛覆 ?例句1: From my perch in the maple tree, I watched the human child clumsily rebuild my toppled nest. (棲身?xiàng)鳂?shù)，我望著人類孩子笨拙地重建我傾覆的鳥(niǎo)巢) [翻譯] 動(dòng)物視角敘述，perch建立觀察角度，clumsily制造反差萌 ?例句2: The fire hydrant's red paint was fading, just like the old man's memories of our morning walks. (消防栓的紅漆在褪色，如同老人對(duì)我們晨間散步的記憶) [翻譯] 物品見(jiàn)證歲月，like連接物質(zhì)與精神消逝 ?例句3: My paw prints in the wet concrete outlived the construction crew's angry shouts. (水泥地上的爪印比工人們的怒罵更持久) [翻譯] 動(dòng)物視角下的時(shí)間感知，outlived形成幽默對(duì)比 ?例句4: The vet's trembling hands betrayed her professional calm when treating the abused pitbull. (獸醫(yī)顫抖的雙手泄露了她的專業(yè)鎮(zhèn)定，當(dāng)治療受虐比特犬時(shí)) [翻譯] 細(xì)節(jié)描寫人性，betrayed制造情感張力 高考真題演練 2024年1月九省聯(lián)考（聰明的海豚） Last summer, Hilda worked as a volunteer with dolphin trainers at a sea life park. Her job was to make sure the tanks were free of any items so that the trainers could train the dolphins to fetch specific items. However, one day after cleaning, one of the dolphins, Maya, presented Hilda with a candy wrapper from the tank. When Katherine, the trainer, saw this, she blamed Hilda for her carelessness. Upset but not discouraged by this event, Hilda decided to do some spying on Maya. The next morning, Hilda arrived at the park early. She put on her scuba gear（水下呼吸器）and jumped into the tank for her usual, underwater sweep. Finding nothing in the tank, she climbed out of the water just in time to see Katherine jumping in on the other side. After what happened yesterday, Hilda knew what she was doing. She watched as Katherine performed her underwater search, but Hilda wasn't surprised when she surfaced empty-handed. During the tank sweeps, Maya had been swimming playfully, but now the dolphin stopped suddenly and swam to the back part of the tank where the filter （過(guò)濾） box was located. She stuck her nose down behind the box and then swam away. What was Maya doing back there? Hilda wondered. She jumped back into the water and swam over to take a look behind the box, and her question was answered. Hilda then swam across the tank following Maya's path and emerged from the water to find Katherine removing her scuba gear. As Katherine turned around, her mouth dropped open. There was Maya at the edge of the tank with a comb（梳子） in her mouth waiting for her treat. “Maya! Where did you get that?” demanded Katherine, taking the comb and throwing her a fish. “I know where she got it,” declared Hilda climbing out of the tank with a handful of items still wet from their watery, resting place. “What's all this?” Katherine asked, obviously confused. 注意： （1）續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150個(gè)左右； （2）請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。 Paragraph1：“This is Maya's secret,” Hilda said with a big smile. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph2：Now Katherine realized what had been going on. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2023年2月四省聯(lián)考（收養(yǎng)小松鼠） My husband and I enjoy seeing life through the eyes of our children. It’s amazing to watch as they discover their world. While we were outdoors last summer enjoying the sunshine, our oldest daughter, Kaytlin, called me to the doorway. Beneath the steps was a baby red squirrel. We watched it from a distance, not wanting to disturb it or scare off its mother. But after a long wait – and looking all around our house for signs of a nest or a mother – we realized the tiny squirrel was lost. Shaking terribly, he was weak, thin, and hungry. We tried to find an expert to help, but the Inland Fisheries and Wildlife website showed that there were no wildlife experts in our area. After some quick research, we concluded that the best way to give the squirrel a fighting chance was to care for him ourselves. So a trip to the local store for milk and supplies was in order. More research taught us how much to feed him, how to estimate his age, how and when to wean (斷奶) him, and that we should let him go as soon as he could survive on his own. Our daughters and I took turns in feeding “Squirt.” Kaytlin took on the most responsibility. She taught him to eat from a bottle, and she woke in the night for his feeds. To our relief, Squirt soon became healthy and strong. Within a few weeks he became more active. He would chatter (吱吱叫) for his next meal, playfully go around the girls, and lie down on them for sleep. It wasn’t long before he was weaned onto solid food and reintroduced to the wild. His first few visits to the great outdoors were funny. Just like a child, he would play in the grass some and then run back to Kaytlin for safety. Soon she had him climbing trees and finding nest material. 注意： 1．續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右； 2．請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。 Paragraph 1：One day in the?trees, Squirt met up with a family of gray squirrels. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2：One night,?Squirt didn't come back to our house and it rained hard. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2023年1月浙江卷（蜂鳥(niǎo)報(bào)恩） I was invited to a cookout on an old friend’s farm in western Washington. I parked my car outside the farm and walked past a milking house which had apparently not been used in many years. A noise at a window caught my attention, so I entered it. It was a hummingbird (蜂鳥(niǎo)), desperately trying to escape. She was covered in spider-webs (蛛網(wǎng)) and was barely able to move her wings. She ceased her struggle the instant I picked her up. With the bird in my cupped hand, I looked around to see how she had gotten in. The broken window glass was the likely answer. I stuffed a piece of cloth into the hole and took her outside, closing the door securely behind me. When I opened my hand, the bird did not fly away; she sat looking at me with her bright eyes. I removed the sticky spider-webs that covered her head and wings. Still, she made no attempt to fly. Perhaps she had been struggling against the window too long and was too tired? Or too thirsty? As I carried her up the blackberry-lined path toward my car where I kept a water bottle, she began to move. I stopped, and she soon took wing but did not immediately fly away. Hovering (懸停), she approached within six inches of my face. For a very long moment, this tiny creature looked into my eyes, turning her head from side to side. Then she flew quickly out of sight. During the cookout I told my hosts about the hummingbird incident. They promised to fix the window. As I was departing, my friends walked me to my car. I was standing by the car when a hummingbird flew to the center of our group and began hovering. She turned from person to person until she came to me. She again looked directly into my eyes, then let out a squeaking call and was gone. For a moment, all were speechless. Then someone said, “She must have come to say goodbye.” 注意： 1. 續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為 150 左右； 2. 請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題紙的相應(yīng)位置作答。 A few weeks later, I went to the farm again. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I was just about to leave when the hummingbird appeared. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ A few weeks later, I went to the farm again. As my car neared it ,my thoughts drifted back to the moment when I rescued the hummingbird from the spider’s web. I rushed back to the deserted house. It was a great comfort that the original hole in the window was nowhere to be found. Leaving the house, I couldn’t help wondering how it was getting on now. Had it managed to find its way back home, or was it still out there somewhere struggling to survive? I was just about to leave when the hummingbird appeared. A flash of movement caught my attention. I turned around to see the same hummingbird hovering in the air. It seemed that the bird was waiting for me, its beady eyes locked on mine as if trying to convey some deep, unspoken gratitude. I felt a surge of relief and awe at the sight of this sound and grateful creature, and I knew that I would always cherish the memories we shared as I climbed into my car and drove away. 模擬演練 01 閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。 It was a hot and wet day in late summer. I was a young dad working in a local wood factory. It was dangerous, back-breaking work that paid very little. In the year I had worked there, only four other people hadn’t quit and been replaced with new faces. Those of us who stayed did so only because there was no other work to find to support our families. One day the electric fans weren’t working and all of us were covered in sweat and sawdust . When I looked around every face, they looked angry and frustrated. Suddenly, a voice called out: “Hey! There’s a deer in here. A lost little deer had wandered through the open loading bay doors and was now hiding in fear in between the huge piles of wood. All of us stopped working and went looking for her as she ran about crazily looking for a way out. Now most people where I live hunt deer for meat in the fall but treat them with great kindness the rest of the year. Many will even buy bags of corn to help feed them during the cold winter months. It was no surprise then that all of us were soon quickly working together to free this little deer. By blocking off all the other routes, we were able to guide her crazy search back to the open bay doors. We watched as she jumped out of the building and back into the woods. Then we walked back in to work. I noticed something, though. On every face, there was a joyful smile. It seemed as if this one single act of kindness had energized us again and reminded us of what life was all about. 注意： 1． 續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右； 2． 請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。 I went out of the house and looked into the woods again. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ When I returned to the house, the workers were laughing and talking happily. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 02 “Sun, sun, sun, here it comes…” Danny sang while his fingers pressed and pulled skillfully at the guitar strings, delivering a slow and peaceful tune. A circle of audience had formed, nodding and moving slowly to the song. Lying at the feet of the street performer was his most adoring fan: One-Eyed, a white stray (流浪) dog with pieces of brown. Danny felt the name was suitable considering its physical disability. Usually, One-Eyed would bark loudly as Danny performed. Much to his annoyance, people often mistook the pair as owner and pet. At this time, Danny would reply, “My dog? No!”, eyes rolling at the idea. How he wished the dog would leave him alone instead! On a snowy night, while Danny was performing, a bird flew downward, landing into the midst of the crowd. It cooed happily as if to harmonize with Danny. Unfortunately, that did not sit well with One-Eyed, which immediately bounced at it and the bird flew away desperately. The unexpected chaos upturned Danny's hat, which could have been filled with notes and coins from his appreciative audience, leaving it ignored on the ground. "Argh! The hateful dog!” Danny broke down, thinking to himself, “Either the dog goes or I go!” On the next night, Danny tried to find a new place and chanced upon the park. For a while his earnings were good unsurprisingly as there was a steady flow of visitors. However, that didn't last long. One-Eyed came along and appointed itself as Danny's guardian. "Argh! Here comes the hateful dog again!" That night, Danny hadn't made enough money he should have, all thanks to the troublesome dog. Danny was almost mad with One-Eyed. “What should I do? Call an animal shelter?” Torn by this problem, he walked aimlessly by the lake of the park. With all his mind focused on how to get rid of the dog, Danny didn't watch his steps. Suddenly, he slipped and fell into the lake accidentally. Struggling in the icy water, he cried for help desperately, almost choking to death. Sensing the approach of death, Danny got into overwhelming panic. 注意： 1． 續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右； 2． 請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。 Just then, a familiar barking was heard in the distance. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ “My hero! Thank you for saving me,” Danny said gratefully with watery eyes. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 03 It was one of the hottest days of the dry season. We had not seen rain in almost a month. The crops were dying. Cows had stopped giving milk. The streams were long gone back into the earth. If we didn’t see any rain soon we would lose everything. It was on that day that I learned the true lesson of sharing and witnessed the only miracle I have seen in my life. I was in the kitchen making lunch for my husband and his brothers when I saw my six-year old son, Billy, walking toward the woods. I could only see his back. He wasn’t walking in his usual way. He was obviously walking with a great effort, trying to be as still as possible. Minutes after he disappeared into the woods, he came running out again, toward the house. I went back to making sandwiches, thinking that whatever he had been doing was completed. Moments later, however, he was once again walking in that unusual way toward the woods. This activity went on for over an hour: walking cautiously to the woods, then running back to the house. Finally, my curiosity got the best of me. I crept out of the house and followed him on his journey. He was cupping both hands in front of him as he walked; being very careful not to spill the water he carried. I followed him secretly as he went into the woods. Branches and thorns(刺) slapped his little face but he did not try to avoid them. He might have a much greater purpose, I thought. As I leaned in to spy on him, I saw the most amazing sight. Several large deer appeared threatening in front of him. But Billy walked right up to them, at the sight of which I almost screamed for him to get away. A huge buck(雄鹿) was dangerously close. But the buck didn’t threaten him nor even move as Billy knelt down. And then I saw a baby deer lying on the ground, obviously suffering from thirst and heat, lift its head with great effort to lap (舔)up the water cupped in my beautiful boy’s hands. 注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右； 2．請(qǐng)按如下格式在相應(yīng)的位置作答。 When the water was gone, Billy jumped up to run back to the house. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Instead of scolding him like his father, I decided to help him. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 04 Brady was a recently retired search and rescue dog. He was not happy and missed his owner Al because Al had gone out on a rescue mission without him. Al’s nephew Steve took Brady along when he and his friend Zach went on a overnight hike. But suddenly Steve and Zach smelled something burning and they realized that lightning had set the woods on fire. Wind-blown flame had leaped from the top of one tree to another. The long dry summer had turned the forest into a tinderbox(火絨箱) and the thunderstorm wasn’t helping much. It had more wind and lightning than rain. Zach pulled Steve’s arm. “Let’s go! We can make it back to the river we crossed today.” Steve pulled Brady’s leash（皮帶） and their heads down against the strong fire-wind, they hurried down the path they had followed earlier. The air was full of smoke，and pine branches broke from burning trees with a crisp sound. Steve kept his eyes on the route. All they had to do was to make it down to the river… Brady barked a sharp warning. Ahead of them lay a dense curtain of smoke across the path. They’d never make it through that. They would have to find another escape route. The dog was pulling at his leash trying to draw them away from the smoke. This was what Brady was trained to do, and yet Steve was uneasy. It seemed to him they were moving away from the river. Brady lifted his head and smelled the smoky wind. Suddenly, the dog ran away and disappeared. The boys yelled and shouted for him，but he didn’t come back. They had no choice but to leave him behind. Heartsick, Steve and Zach went up aslope（斜坡）. He couldn’t blame Brady for panicking and escaping. He himself wanted to run even though he didn’t have a clue which way. They hadn’t gone far when there was a familiar bark, and Brady came running toward him. Paragraph1： “Where’ve you been?” Steve cried. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2： Brady led them back down the slope and into the trees. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 05 In 2000, when I was around seven years old, all my family were coming back from a T-ball game, which was our usual weekend adventure, but unlike every other weekend, a surprise was waiting for us in our driveway — two adult geese and a small goose. Obviously startled by our return, the adults flew away in panic, with their baby, too young to fly, left in place, tiny and delicate. Hours passed one after another, and night eventually fell. However, with it also came a deep chill and a fear of watchful animals. It was apparent that the gosling needed protection, warmth, and food to make it to the morning, so we had to help it, and we brought him onto our back yard. We all pretty much slept with one eye open till morning came. And then another morning. And still another. Each morning, we would try to drive the goose away to his parents, who kept coming back to our yard. He wouldn’t go to them, though, and neither would they come close enough to claim him. We kept this up for five days, but no luck. Realizing the young goose had clearly decided we were his family by then, we had to give him a name, calling the little guy Peeper, because he would often follow us around the yard making a peeping (唧唧叫) noise, nonstop. Besides, we decided that Peeper was a boy. I don’t know why; it just felt right. A year passed and we settled into a routine. Peeper slept on our back yard each night and, in typical goose fashion, used it as a public toilet. My dad would spray off all the goose droppings daily. Part of this ceremony included Dad throwing Peeper up into the air so he could flap its wings and flew around the house, and then came back again once the porch was clean. Days turned into weeks, and weeks turned into months. 注意： 1． 所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右； 2． 續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)已為你寫好； Paragraph 1： Before we knew it, the little thing had grown into a big bird with two powerful wings. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: It came as a total surprise to me when, in 2019, an adult goose made his way back to my family home. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 06 A Midnight Rescue It was not uncommon to carry out tasks at night as rescuers. Harry and David were informed of their task when it was nearly midnight. It was urgent so there was no time to hesitate. They headed into the forest. The forest was black and silent. A little way into it they reached a fork in the earth path. Harry and David took the left path. They walked in silence, their eyes on the ground, watching out for the traps like big pits（坑）set by the illegal hunters. Every now and then a ray of moonlight through the branches above lit a spot of scarlet（猩紅的）blood on the fallen leaves. David saw that Harry looked very worried, asking, "Could Unicorn be hurt that badly?" Harry answered, "If we can't find it as soon as possible, it doesn't stand much chance to survive." Of course, Unicorn was not the animal in fairy tales but the nickname of a 3-year-old elephant, the last wild elephant in this forest. The nickname was given by the biodiversity rescuers who were protecting every member in this forest. They knew Unicorn was obedient and not afraid of human beings and that sometimes put it in danger. "Without it, the forest was not complete. Those illegal hunters should be thrown into prison." Harry thought, carrying his first aid kit（急救箱）on his back and walking forward with his flashlight. It seemed that thick fog would come at any time, which would increase the danger. Harry hurried into the heart of the forest with David. They walked for nearly half an hour, deeper and deeper. There were blood splashes（血跡）on the roots of a tree, as though the poor creature had been struggling around in pain close by. "We must hurry up", said Harry. 注意： 1． 續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右； 2． 請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。 Paragraph 1: However, it was really not easy for them to find it. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: Without delay, Harry knelt down to do first aid on its wound with David holding the flashlight. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進(jìn)行續(xù)寫，使之構(gòu)成一個(gè)完整的故事。 Have you noticed how some lucky people just aren’t the worrying type? Take my friend Olline, for example. Living on the same block, we’ve known each other since we were babies, and I’ve seen him act worried maybe five times total. I, on the other hand, am pretty much the exact opposite. I could find something to worry about every day. At my karate(空手道) school, there’s a group of kids that gives karate lessons to younger kids, and I recently tried out to be one of the teachers. Surprisingly, I wasn’t that nervous for the tryouts(選拔). But when I didn’t get the call saying if I was in or out, I started feeling more and more nervous. Before long, my nervousness turned into worrying, and when it came to thinking about anything else or getting anything done, I was useless! So after lunch yesterday, when my little brother Tex asked me to play basketball with him, I could only say, “I can’t. I’m busy!” “Busy with what?” my little sister, Indi, asked. “Busy waiting for the phone to ring!” I grumbled. “You’re reminding me of that old saying,” said our mom. “A watched pot never boils!” “The more you focus on the thing you’re waiting for, the longer it seems to take,” she explained when seeing my brother’s puzzling eyes. Just then, the phone rang, and I raced to grab it. “Hello?” “Hey,” said Ollie. “Oh, it’s just you,” I said. “Wow, you sure know how to make a friend feel special!” said Ollie. “I’m sorry. It’s just that I’ve been waiting for a call telling me if I made it into this karate group, and it’s stressing me out.” “I get it,” said Ollie. “I remember being so stressed waiting to find out if I’d made it onto the select soccer team last year. The best cure was distracting(使分心) myself.” I was surprised. “It thought you never worried.” “I’m pretty sure that’s part of being human,” said Ollie. “And I’m also pretty sure I have just the thing to distract you. Want me to bring it over?” he asked. 注意： 1． 續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右； 2． 請(qǐng)?jiān)诖痤}卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。 “Hmm,” I said suspiciously. “What exactly is this thing?” _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ By the end of the day, we were all worn out and Daisy the dog even fell sound asleep, when suddenly my mom called from the kitchen, “Zona! Telephone.” _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進(jìn)行續(xù)寫，使之構(gòu)成一個(gè)完整的故事。 On a bright, warm July afternoon, Mac Hollan, a primary school teacher, was cycling from his home to Alaska with his friends. One of his friends had stopped to make a bicycle repair, but they had encouraged Mac to carry on, and they would catch up with him soon. As Mac pedaled (騎行) along alone, he thought fondly of his wife and two young daughters at home. He hoped to show them this beautiful place someday. Then Mac heard quick and loud breathing behind him. “Man, that's a big dog!” he thought. But when he looked to the side, he saw instantly that it wasn’t a dog at all, but a wolf, quickly catching up with him. Mac’s heart jumped. He found out his can of hear spray. With one hand on the bars, he fired the spray at the wolf. A bright red cloud enveloped the animal, and to Mac's relief, it fell back, shaking its head. But a minute later, it was by his side again. Then it attacked the back of Mac's bike, tearing open his tent bag. He fired at the wolf a second time, and again, it fell back only to quickly restart the chase（追趕）。 Mac was pedaling hard now. He waved and yelled at passing cars but was careful not to show down. He saw a steep uphill climb before him. He knew that??once he hit the hill, he’d be easy caught up and the wolf’s teeth would be tearing into his flesh. At this moment, Paul and Beeky were driving their car on their way to Alaska. They didn’t think much of it when they saw two cyclists repairing their bike on the side of the road. A bit later, they spotted what they, too, assumed was a dog running alongside a man on a bike. As they got closer, they realized that the dog was a wolf. Mac heard a large vehicle behind him. He pulled in front of it as the wolf was catching up fast, just a dozen yards away now. 注意： 1． 所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右； 2． 應(yīng)使用5個(gè)以上短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)； 3． 續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)已為你寫好； 4． 續(xù)寫完成后，請(qǐng)用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)。 The car abruptly stopped in front of him. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ A few minutes later, the other two cyclists arrived. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。續(xù)寫的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右。 “Misssy,” I cried to my wife. “Did you put his banana skin on my desk?” “No, honey, Meghan probably did.” As I’d feared, she had missed the real purpose of my question, which was to make it clear to her that she hadn’t done her job of defending my desk against the invader-our naughty girl. I abandoned the conversation. I sat at my desk and stared at the screen. I waited patiently for ideas to come to me as I tried to think up exam questions for a test I would give my English students. My wife was off to a party somewhere, but I was not alone. Meghan, our 22-month-old angel, kept me company. Yet her plans seemed to go against mine. She followed a daily routine that was both time-consuming and challenging. It included certain basic tasks: watching the fish, sweeping the floor in her room, climbing up and down on her bed. At first I was able to concentrate on designing my test paper. But I was soon sidetracked. I had not counted on the arrival of the “bib-bibs”---“bib-bibs” were birds. “Bib-bibs!” Meghan screamed excitedly, her eyes alive with expectation. She insisted that I came with her to the window. “In a minute. Just let me finish this question.” I said. She pulled me by the hand (two fingers, actually) toward the window. I saw myself as a fool, being led to watch the “bib-bids”. They chattered and leaped back and forth on the lawn just outside our apartment window. Meghan was absorbed, but as I watched them, I still thought about my work. With her attention off me, I left the window and went back to my desk. Five minutes later, she returned. She reached up to my keyboard and pressed a bunch of keys, adding a long line of scrabbled letters to my question. I struggled to bring my annoyance under control. “No, thank you, Meghan. Daddy’s seen your work. I will do it myself.” She backed off. 注意： 1． 續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右 2．請(qǐng)按照如下格式在答題卡上的相應(yīng)位置作答。 A few minutes later, she stood in front of me with her shoes and socks in her hand. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I finally decided to take Meghan to the park. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進(jìn)行續(xù)寫，使之構(gòu)成一個(gè)完整的故事。 Every year, Tia Vargas and her dad go hiking: this summer’s trip was up Table Rock in the Grand Tetons in early July. Vargas was just below the 11, 000-foot peak with her dad waiting about a mile down the trail (路線) when she ran into a family of hikers who had found an injured English springer spaniel (斯賓格獵犬). They couldn’t find the limping (跛的) pup’s owner and, because the family were hiking with kids, Vargas figured it would be easier for her to carry the pup to safety. “I had to crawl under him to get him up on my shoulders,” Vargas, a single mother of three from Idaho Falls, Idaho, tells MNN. “I felt the difficulty of it right away. I never felt 55 pounds like that before.” Vargas soon ran into her dad, Ted Kasper, who snapped some photos when he saw his daughter coming down the trail with a dog on her shoulders. “Dad laughed and said. ‘Isn’t this hike hard enough? You have to carry a dog too?’” Vargas recalls. “My dad makes me laugh. He is such a great man.” That sense of humor helped Vargas get through the hard journey of carrying the heavy dog down the steep trail, she says. The trip was hard and nearly unbearable at times. “Every time I put him down to rest, it was difficult. And every time I got down on my knees to put my head under his belly and try to use neck and body strength to lift him it was painful and difficult. I thought we would see people on the trail on the way down to help. But that wasn’t the case.” she says. Paragraph 1: The group of three got lost once because of the fallen trees that made the trail disappear. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: Finally hiking six miles and reaching the bottom of the trail, Vargas found a very small note that said, “Lost dog named Boomer, call this number.” _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進(jìn)行續(xù)寫，使之構(gòu)成一個(gè)完整的故事。 Michael sat on the wooden bench outside the house holding a four-leaf clover. Michael had believed that four-leaf clovers brought good luck, but he started doubting that kind of power. Michael was eleven. It had been two months since his mum and dad died in an accident. A widow by the name of Jill adopted him. Michael had a dislike for Jill. Her voice was loud. She also made him do her chores. Michael felt not as much as a son to her. He dreamed a lot. He spoke little. He cried secretly. He had even been working on a plan for two weeks to flee the house. That was, until he heard Jill parking her Honda into the garage. Michael stuffed the four-leaf clover in his left pocket. Before he realised it, Jill was standing in front of him, with a small beagle in her hand. She put the beagle down. It ran to Michael and sat on his Nike tennis shoes. Michael knelt down to pet it. After a while, he looked up，“Is the dog for me？” Jill laughed，“Of course! You are the slowest little boy ever! I've got you a little puppy to make you work faster.” Michael couldn't see how a beagle would help with his chores, but he thought it would be nice to have a friend. “Give him a name,” Jill said. Michael thought for a moment. He saw a big, black spot on his back. That's it! Spot！“I'll name him Spot！” Michael announced. “Spot, Spot, stupid name but it'll do. Now, you'd better clean the bathroom and finish your homework before dinner's ready.” “Yes, ma'am.” 注意： 1．續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右； 2．請(qǐng)按如下格式作答。 Michael ran to the bathroom, with Spot by his side. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Two weeks passed, and everyone could see something changed in Michael. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進(jìn)行續(xù)寫，使之構(gòu)成一個(gè)完整的故事。 One day when I was 12, my mother gave me an order: I was to walk to the public library, and borrow at least one book for the summer. This was one more way for her to solve my strange problem—inability (沒(méi)能力)to read. In the library, I found my way into the “Children’s Room”. I pulled a few books off the shelf and sat down on the floor. The cover of a book caught my eye. It presented a picture of dog. I had recently had a dog, the first and only animal companion I ever had as a child. He was the one I could share secrets with, but later he was given away to someone who had space and money to care for him. I never forgot my dog. On the book’s cover, there was a dog which looked the same as mine. I figured the??picture of the dog on the cover. My eyes ran across the little, Amos, the Dog with a Plan. Without opening the book, I borrowed it from the library for the summer. Under the shade of a bush, I started to read about Amos. I read very, very slowly with difficulty and got the main ides of the story about a dog who, like mine, had been separated from his family and who finally found his way back home. At the end of the story, my mind continued the final scene of reunion. When I finished my reading, a stream of tears ran down my cheeks. It was until then that I realized I had begun to overcome my inability to read. Thus, this was the very first book for me which I had read through and deeply immersed myself in the real scene. 注意： 1．續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右； 2．請(qǐng)按如下格式作答 My mother’s call brought me back to the real world and I suddenly realized something. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Last year, my mother was so proud that her son was awarded a PhD in literature. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 閱讀下而材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。 The Biggest Dog on the Mountain We liked hiking together. Today, we were looking for a trail over Wallace Mountain. ”It’s been over an hour,” said Jessc, my nineteen-year-old son. “Do you think the trail still exists?” We had explored several paths but with no luck. We pushed through weeds mid-calf high for us, but neck-high for our rusty-brown dog, Shadow. Once in a while, we would call Shadow back when she was attracted by the pleasant smell of flowers. No longer slim and bouncing with energy, Shadow was the size of a large house cat, and always content to curl up on the couch beside one of us. Suddenly, we heard what sounded like many dogs barking in the distance, an unusual sound in the wilderness around us. Curious, we climbed the ridge (山脈), only to find what seemed like a dog factory. Small dogs, big dogs, brown dogs, and dogs I can’t even describe poured out. The hounds (獵狗) hit the ground, sniffing the air and turning to face us. Before long, they went down from their side of the mountain. Jesse shot an alarmed glance at me before turning to call in a firm voice, “Shadow, come here, stay.” I patted my pockets, feeling for the pepper spray (防狼噴霧), so small it would never work against so many animals. I turned, surveying the nearby brush for a potential weapon. With the help of adrenaline (腎上腺素), I broke off two thick branches from a tree and rushed to Jesse’s side, “Here you are!” “OK,” he said, “Dad, they are coming to us.” My-mouth went dry. I glanced over at Jesse, his lips pinched (夾緊) tight. The pack emerged from the valley, marching straight toward us. The dogs in the lead were now close enough for us to see that most of them were three times larger than Shadow. With deep growls (怒吼聲)，they ran straight for us. Jesse swallowed hard and looked at me. 注意： 1．續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右； 2．請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。 Shadow’s back fur rose. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Surprisingly, the entire mass of dogs turned tail and fled. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。續(xù)寫的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右。 My husband, Donald, took our daughter Sarah out for some ice cream the night before driving her to college. As they were walking back to the car, they saw a young man sitting on the ground and giving his puppy a cone. “A cute dog,” Donald said as they walked by. “A free dog,” the young man replied. Donald asked him what he meant by that and the man explained. He was moving away from Vermont and did not think the travel would be good for the dog. He had raised her from a small puppy. The man said she was a 6-month-old cross between the Doberman and the Labrador named Rhubarb. Donald took his phone number. The rest, as they say, is history. Rhubarb was a sweet dog and very friendly and loved everyone. Whenever someone came to the house, she was always happy. She also got along with Willie, an older Samoyed we had. Willie was not well and died about a year later, but, fortunately, Rhubarb’s company helped him keep going for longer than that if he had been alone. But the interesting thing about Rhubarb was that she never barked. She would sometimes get excited when she saw a chipmunk (花栗鼠) and make a little crying sound. One hot night when she was about 4 years old, we went to bed with the windows open and the doors unlocked. At about 3 a.m., I woke up to the sound of Rhubarb barking. I woke Donald and we got out of bed. Rhubarb was coming toward us. We turned on the lights and noticed the door to the kitchen was open. Then we saw the door leading into the house from the garage was also open. We quickly locked all the doors, and we did not get any sleep that night. It was deep into the night, so we didn’t call the police. Paragraph 1: The next day we noticed there was cigarette ash on the floor. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: My purse was right next to the door. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。 It seemed like it had only been a few years ago that Indigo had first rushed through our door. Her underbelly showed the signs of the litter she’d recently delivered. She had a nose for trouble. On one occasion, I had come home to find that she’d eaten a five-pound bag of flour. She was covered in white powder, and flour paw prints were everywhere, including, incredibly, on the countertops(臺(tái)板). I asked the dog what the hell had happened, and Indigo just looked at me with a glance that said, I cannot imagine what you are referring to. Time raced by. Our children grew up and went off to university. The mirror, which had reflected a young mum when Indigo first arrived, now showed a woman in late middle age. I had surgery for cataracts(白內(nèi)障). I began to lose my hearing. We all turned grey: me, my spouse(配偶), the dog. In August 2017, I took Indigo for one last walk. She was slow and unsteady on her paws. She looked up at me sadly. You did say you’d take care of me when the time came, she said. You promised, Jenny. She died that month, a tennis ball by her side. I’d owned a succession of dogs since 1964, each one of them a witness to a particular stage of my life. But with the loss of Indigo, all that was over. The days of my dogs, I now understood, were done at last. But one morning, as I was passing the Bed ’n’ Biscuit in my car, somehow I pulled over. I could at least lay eyes upon one cute dog, a tiny sweet thing. What harm could it do? She had a soft face. Not long after, I got a call from the Bed ’n’ Biscuit, our dog daycare(日托所). One of their customers was leaving, and her dog which was the one I saw that morning, Chloe, needed a home. Given our recent loss, they asked, might our family be interested in adopting her? 注意： 1． 所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右； 2． 續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)已為你寫好； Paragraph 1： I told them that we were sorry but we wouldn’t be adopting any more dogs. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2： When Chloe entered our house, she was cautious, uncertain. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。 It was a hot and wet day in late summer. I was a young dad working in a local wood factory. It was dangerous, back-breaking work that paid very little. In the year I had worked there, only four other people hadn’t quit and been replaced with new faces. Those of us who stayed did so only because there was no other work to find to support our families. One day the electric fans weren’t working and all of us were covered in sweat and sawdust . When I looked around every face, they looked angry and frustrated. Suddenly, a voice called out: “Hey! There’s a deer in here. A lost little deer had wandered through the open loading bay doors and was now hiding in fear in between the huge piles of wood. All of us stopped working and went looking for her as she ran about crazily looking for a way out. Now most people where I live hunt deer for meat in the fall but treat them with great kindness the rest of the year. Many will even buy bags of corn to help feed them during the cold winter months. It was no surprise then that all of us were soon quickly working together to free this little deer. By blocking off all the other routes, we were able to guide her crazy search back to the open bay doors. We watched as she jumped out of the building and back into the woods. Then we walked back in to work. I noticed something, though. On every face, there was a joyful smile. It seemed as if this one single act of kindness had energized us again and reminded us of what life was all about. 注意： 1． 續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右； 2． 請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。 I went out of the house and looked into the woods again. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ When I returned to the house, the workers were laughing and talking happily. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

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