脫險(xiǎn)型故事 寫(xiě)作導(dǎo)圖 一、環(huán)境描寫(xiě)（制造緊張感） 自然危險(xiǎn) The storm outside was roaring like an angry monster, making the cabin windows shake. （暴風(fēng)雨像發(fā)怒的怪獸在屋外咆哮，震得木窗咯咯作響） 解析：用"roaring"替代復(fù)雜動(dòng)詞，比喻句幫助理解場(chǎng)景氛圍 Lightning suddenly lit up the dark sky, showing our broken boat in the sea. （閃電突然照亮夜空，映出海上破損的小船） 解析：簡(jiǎn)化視覺(jué)描寫(xiě)，"broken boat"直接傳達(dá)危險(xiǎn)信息 The waves were beating our raft like giant hands, trying to flip us over. （海浪像巨人的手掌拍打救生筏，想把我們掀翻） 解析：使用"beat"和"flip"等基礎(chǔ)動(dòng)詞，比喻貼近生活經(jīng)驗(yàn) Dirty water rose quickly to my chest, making it hard to breathe. （污水快速漲到胸口，呼吸變得困難） 解析：簡(jiǎn)化身體感受描寫(xiě)，用基礎(chǔ)形容詞"dirty"構(gòu)建場(chǎng)景 生物威脅 A shark's fin appeared above the water, moving closer to our raft. （鯊魚(yú)鰭浮出水面，朝著救生筏逼近） 解析：用"appeared"替代復(fù)雜動(dòng)詞，聚焦關(guān)鍵視覺(jué)元素 The jellyfish's long arms looked like poisonous ropes in the moonlight. （水母的長(zhǎng)觸手在月光下像有毒的繩子） 解析：用"ropes"比喻觸手，避免專(zhuān)業(yè)術(shù)語(yǔ) The crocodile's yellow eyes stared at us from the muddy river. （鱷魚(yú)黃眼睛從泥濘河水中盯著我們） 解析：顏色描寫(xiě)增加畫(huà)面感，基礎(chǔ)動(dòng)詞"stare"易理解 Strange glowing things surrounded the plane wreck, making everything look scary. （發(fā)光的怪東西圍著飛機(jī)殘骸，讓一切顯得可怕） 解析：用"glowing things"替代專(zhuān)業(yè)生物名詞，保持神秘感 二、心理描寫(xiě)（情緒變化） 陷入絕望 My frozen fingers could barely hold the rock, and I felt tears mixing with rain on my face. （凍僵的手指幾乎抓不住巖石，淚水混著雨水流下） 解析：具體身體反應(yīng)+自然現(xiàn)象，易產(chǎn)生共鳴 The avalanche's noise was so loud that I couldn't hear my own shouting. （雪崩聲大得蓋過(guò)我的呼喊） 解析：用對(duì)比手法表現(xiàn)無(wú)助感，動(dòng)詞"shout"簡(jiǎn)單明確 Salt water burned my eyes, and I started coughing badly. （鹽水刺痛眼睛，我開(kāi)始劇烈咳嗽） 解析：基礎(chǔ)生理反應(yīng)描寫(xiě)，動(dòng)詞"burn"直接傳達(dá)感受 The quicksand was pulling me down like invisible hands. （流沙像無(wú)形的手把我往下拉） 解析：基礎(chǔ)比喻句，避免復(fù)雜形容詞 希望出現(xiàn) A flashing red light in the distance made my heart jump. （遠(yuǎn)方閃爍的紅燈讓我的心猛地一跳） 解析：用"jump"形容心跳，動(dòng)作描寫(xiě)替代抽象情感 The helicopter sound grew louder, bringing new strength to my tired arms. （直升機(jī)聲越來(lái)越響，給酸軟的手臂注入新力量） 解析：連接聽(tīng)覺(jué)與身體反應(yīng)，動(dòng)詞"grow"表現(xiàn)變化過(guò)程 My hand touched something hard - it was a rusty hook stuck in the ice! （手碰到硬物——是卡在冰里的生銹鐵鉤?。?解析：破折號(hào)制造發(fā)現(xiàn)驚喜，日常物品增加真實(shí)感 Someone was shouting! The voice cut through the storm like a knife. （有人在喊叫！聲音像刀子劃破暴風(fēng)雨） 解析：基礎(chǔ)比喻句，用"cut"強(qiáng)化希望來(lái)臨的力度 三、脫險(xiǎn)行動(dòng)（過(guò)程描寫(xiě)） 智慧應(yīng)對(duì) Using a broken plank as a paddle, we tried to steer toward the light. （用破木板當(dāng)槳，我們?cè)噲D劃向亮光） 解析：具體動(dòng)作描寫(xiě)，用"steer"替代復(fù)雜動(dòng)詞 I shot the last flare into the sky, praying someone would see it. （射出最后信號(hào)彈，祈禱有人能看見(jiàn)） 解析：基礎(chǔ)求生動(dòng)作+心理活動(dòng)組合 We tied empty bottles to the raft to make it float better. （把空瓶子綁在救生筏上增加浮力） 解析：日常物品的創(chuàng)造性使用，動(dòng)詞"tie"簡(jiǎn)單明確 Following the radio's static noise, we found the rescue team. （順著收音機(jī)雜音，我們找到了救援隊(duì)） 解析：用"static noise"替代專(zhuān)業(yè)術(shù)語(yǔ)，保持科技元素 四、主題升華（成長(zhǎng)感悟） The rescue worker's warm hands taught me the meaning of hope. （救援人員溫暖的手教會(huì)我希望的意義） 解析：具體細(xì)節(jié)承載抽象概念，動(dòng)詞"taught"點(diǎn)明成長(zhǎng) As the helicopter lifted us up, I understood how precious life is. （直升機(jī)升起時(shí)，我懂得了生命的珍貴） 解析：用"precious"替代復(fù)雜形容詞，直接傳達(dá)感悟 The survivors' smiles in the hospital made me believe in miracles. （醫(yī)院里幸存者的笑容讓我相信奇跡） 解析：具體場(chǎng)景+抽象信念，用"believe"連接 Now when I see storm warnings, I always prepare carefully - that experience changed me forever. （如今看到暴雨預(yù)警總會(huì)認(rèn)真準(zhǔn)備——那次經(jīng)歷永遠(yuǎn)改變了我） 解析：破折號(hào)連接行動(dòng)與感悟，用"changed"總結(jié)成長(zhǎng) 背精彩句子，讓表達(dá)出彩 1．Tom was shocked to find that the water kept rising．He was trapped in his house and his heart suddenly jumped into his throat.湯姆震驚地發(fā)現(xiàn)水一直上漲。他被困在他的房子里，他的心一下子提到了嗓子眼。 2．Frozen with fear，he stood rooted to the spot，various terrible thoughts flooding in.嚇得僵住了，他站在那里一動(dòng)不動(dòng)，各種可怕的想法向他涌來(lái)。 3．Luckily，some rescue workers came to his aid，bringing him the last glimmer of hope.A sense of calmness immediately replaced the mounting fear and anxiety in his mind.幸運(yùn)的是，一些救援人員來(lái)幫助他了，給他帶來(lái)了最后一線(xiàn)希望。鎮(zhèn)靜立即替代了心里不斷增加的恐懼和不安。 4．Having suffered so much，Tom couldn’t contain his emotions and tears of gratitude trickled down his cheeks，like a broken line of beads.遭受了這么多，湯姆再也不能抑制自己的情緒，感激的淚水像斷了線(xiàn)的珠子一樣滾下他的臉頰。 5．With desperate tears, she suddenly spotted a boat with a figure walking on it． She waved and cried for help with all her strength. 在絕望的淚水中，她突然看到一條船，上面有一個(gè)人在走動(dòng)。她揮揮手，用盡全身力氣喊救命。 6．She was soon picked up and taken towards where her father and sister were． Fortunately, they didn't drown but her father seemed to be giving out, with one hand holding tight to the boat, the other holding Cierrah. 她很快被人抱起，帶他們到她父親和姐姐所在的地方。幸運(yùn)的是，他們沒(méi)有被淹死，但她的父親似乎快不行了，一只手緊緊地抓著船，另一只抓著Cierrah。 7．Later, when asked what gave her the strength and perseverance to continue both in the cold water and in great fear. Kiana thought it had to do with family. “I just wanted to save my family, and I didn't want anything bad to happen to them. So I couldn't spare a second to worry or fear.” She said. 后來(lái)，當(dāng)被問(wèn)及是什么給了她在冰冷的水中和極度的恐懼中繼續(xù)下去的力量和毅力時(shí)，Kiana認(rèn)為這和家庭有關(guān)。 “我只是想救我的家人，我不希望他們發(fā)生任何不好的事情。所以我沒(méi)有時(shí)間去擔(dān)心或害怕?！彼f(shuō)。 8．The man heard Sydney's cry and rushed over. Sydney briefed him on the situation, and the man did not hesitate to help the woman. 那個(gè)人聽(tīng)到Sydney的叫聲就沖了過(guò)來(lái)。Sydney向他簡(jiǎn)要介紹了情況，男子毫不猶豫地幫助了女子。 9．Happily, it worked this time． As a result, the woman threw up the food stuck in her throat and began gasping for air, and she was saved. 幸運(yùn)的是，這一次成功了。 因此，那位女士把卡在喉嚨里的食物吐了出來(lái)，開(kāi)始大口喘氣，她得救了。 10.Nervous and anxious, Norwood struggled to calm herself down and carried out first aid to Simmons. 盡管緊張和焦慮，Norwood努力讓自己鎮(zhèn)靜下來(lái)，并對(duì)Simmons進(jìn)行了急救。 11.Seeing Simmons wake up from passing out, Norwood breathed a sigh of relief. 看到Simmons從昏倒中醒來(lái)，Norwood松了一口氣。 12.We have learnt from the incident that life is valuable and the skill of saving is more valuable. 我們從這個(gè)事件中學(xué)到：生命非常有價(jià)值，拯救生命的技能更有價(jià)值。 13.The big wind roared through our ears, and we were pushed away from the shore farther and farther. 大風(fēng)呼嘯著穿過(guò)我們的耳朵，我們被推得離海岸越來(lái)越遠(yuǎn)。 14.After what seemed a century, I felt very exhausted while swimming hard to keep myself afloat. 似乎過(guò)了一個(gè)世紀(jì)之后，我感到筋疲力盡，同時(shí)，我努力游著以使自己浮在水面上。 15.Hearing the screams, Henry ran to the riverside, threw off his clothes and jumped into the water without hesitation. 聽(tīng)到尖叫聲，亨利跑到河邊，扔掉衣服，毫不猶豫地跳進(jìn)了水里。 高考真題演練 2020年7月浙江卷 閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進(jìn)行續(xù)寫(xiě)，使之構(gòu)成一個(gè)完整的故事。 One fall, my wife Elli and I had a single goal: to photograph polar bears. We were staying at a research camp outside “ the polar bear capital of the world ” — the town of Churchill in Manitoba, Canada. Taking pictures of polar bears is amazing but also dangerous. Polar bears — like all wild animals — should be photographed from a safe distance. When I’m face to face with a polar bear, I like it to be through a camera with a telephoto lens. But sometimes, that is easier said than done. This was one of those times. As Elli and I cooked dinner, a young male polar bear who was playing in a nearby lake sniffed, and smelled our garlic bread. The hungry bear followed his nose to our camp, which was surrounded by a high wire fence. He pulled and bit the wire. He stood on his back legs and pushed at the wooden fence posts. Terrified, Elli and I tried all the bear defense actions we knew. We yelled at the bear, hit pots hard, and fired blank shotgun shells into the air. Sometimes loud noises like these will scare bears off. Not this polar bear though — he just kept trying to tear down the fence with his massive paws (爪子). I radioed the camp manager for help. He told me a helicopter was on its way, but it would be 30 minutes before it arrived. Making the best of this close encounter (相遇), I took some pictures of the bear. Elli and I feared the fence wouldn’t last through 30 more minutes of the bear’s punishment. The camp manager suggested I use pepper spray. The spray burns the bears’ eyes, but doesn’t hurt them. So I approached our uninvited guest slowly and, through the fence, sprayed him in the face. With an angry roar (吼叫), the bear ran to the lake to wash his eyes. 注意： 1． 所續(xù)寫(xiě)短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右； 2． 至少使用5個(gè)短文中標(biāo)有下劃線(xiàn)的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)； 3． 續(xù)寫(xiě)部分分為兩段，每段的開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)已為你寫(xiě)好； 4． 續(xù)寫(xiě)完成后，請(qǐng)用下劃線(xiàn)標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)。 Para 1: A few minutes later, the bear headed back to our camp. ___________________ Para 2: At that very moment, the helicopter arrived. _____________________________ One possible version: Para 1: A few minutes later, the bear headed back to our camp. Then we realized that the spray had only angered him even more, for he seemed much fiercer this time and violently pushed the fence like mad. My heart raced wildly, not knowing what to do. At this critical moment, Elli grabbed several pieces of garlic bread and threw them over the fence. It worked! The bear stopped the attack and ran to the bread. But it wasn’t long before he ate up all the bread and came back again. Para 2: At that very moment, the helicopter arrived. “Thank goodness we are saved!” Elli cried out. Once the helicopter landed, we got onto it in no time, excited and relieved. When we were safe on the helicopter up in the air, I was amazed to spot that the bear had finally torn down the fence and ran towards the food we left behind. I quickly took out the camera and photographed the rare scene — we were robbed by a polar bear! 模擬演練 1．閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫(xiě)兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。 One of my most memorable trips took place during the summer vacation about three years ago, when my sister, my aunt and I took a trip to Spain because we were moving. On the day of the trip, I lay in bed thinking about my friends whom I was going to leave behind and thoughts were flooding in. When we arrived at the hire station, we seemed to have some problems with our luggage because it was too much for a taxi, so we had to book a van (廂式送貨車(chē)) to take our luggage to the airport. We waited for a long period to find a perfect van that would fit our luggage. Before leaving, I felt very bad because I was going to a different country and was going to miss all my friends and family. I was not comfortable and cried. The journey was almost perfect at the beginning, but soon it began to rain. Because of the rain, the drivers could not see far away, which caused a huge traffic jam. I was sitting by the window with a can of Coke that I had bought in the store earlier. My aunt and sister fell asleep, and during this time. I felt bored and thought about other things that bothered me. My eyes turned to the mountain in front of us. A bus suddenly appeared in the picture. It was very close to us. Cars sped past us without any speed limit. Beside me was a very deep lake: I wondered to myself what if something or someone fell inside it. Suddenly, a bus in front of our van stopped, and because it was raining heavily and the van was going fast, no one could see what was going to happen. Then, bang, we bumped into each other. Our van overturned, but luckily, it didn’t fall into the lake. People came to help us get out of the van because we were blocked and the driver was half-dead. 注意：1.續(xù)寫(xiě)詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右； 2．續(xù)寫(xiě)部分分為兩段，每段的開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)已為你寫(xiě)好。 We struggled to get out of the van and everything we had was gone. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I was losing a lot of blood and then the emergency aid came. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【參考范文】 We struggled to get out of the van and everything we had was gone. Everything was very strange. I had never had that kind of experience before. It was like watching a horror movie. Some people who were also in the accident started crying, looking for their children, tears beginning to increase. My leg was badly injured. My aunt was calling to seek some help, and my sister was full of injury. It almost seemed that the tragedy was never going to end. I was losing a lot of blood and then the emergency aid came. They took us to hospital where we were treated. We had to pay for some fees, but we had no money. The doctors and nurses who were present learned of our condition and paid for us. Although we had experienced a bad accident, we were all lucky to have received help from those warm-hearted people. After that we went on with our journey and reached our destination successfully at last. 【寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)】本文以人物為線(xiàn)索開(kāi)展故事，作者講述了三年前去西班牙度暑假時(shí)，在去飛機(jī)場(chǎng)的路上，遭遇車(chē)禍的故事。 1．段落續(xù)寫(xiě)： ①由第一段首句內(nèi)容“我們掙扎著從廂式送貨車(chē)?yán)锱莱鰜?lái)，發(fā)現(xiàn)我們的一切東西都不見(jiàn)了。”可知，第一段可描寫(xiě)作者目睹遭遇車(chē)禍后的慘狀。 ②由第二段首句內(nèi)容“我正在流血，救護(hù)車(chē)來(lái)了?！笨芍诙慰擅鑼?xiě)醫(yī)生和護(hù)士搶救我們的經(jīng)過(guò)。 2．續(xù)寫(xiě)線(xiàn)索：爬出運(yùn)貨車(chē)——目睹慘狀——絕望——救護(hù)車(chē)到達(dá)——醫(yī)院救助——醫(yī)護(hù)人員籌錢(qián)——感動(dòng) 3．詞匯激活 行為類(lèi) ①尋找：look for/search for ②結(jié)束：go to end/come to a stop ③照顧：treat/take care of 情緒類(lèi) ①哭泣：start crying/burst out crying ②糟糕的：bad/terrible 【典型句式】 [句式1]. Some people who were also in the accident started crying, looking for their children, tears beginning to increase.(運(yùn)用了who引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句以及現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語(yǔ)和獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu)) [句式2]. They took us to hospital where we were treated. (運(yùn)用了where引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句) 2．閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫(xiě)兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。 In July 2019, to celebrate his 45th birthday, Colin Dowler booked off a week from his job as a maintenance manager for the Vancouver Island Health Authority. He planned to spend two days on his own, finding a route he would eventually use to climb Mount Doggie Dowler. His wife Jenifer didn't like the sound of her husband's latest plan. She was used to Dowler going on adventures by himself, but this time he'd boat to an unknown bay, bike an unpopulated road , hike through grizzly bear country, and camp overnights alone. There was too much room for disaster. The night before his journey Colin packed the necessities. He filled the remaining pockets of his bag with a handheld GPS, hiking poles, his homemade sausage, and a few other essentials. Instead of his usual Swiss Army knife, he took a three-inch stainless steel pocket knife given to him by his dad. The weather that Sunday, July 28 was nice. Colin pulled his car into the Campbell River port and quickly launched and set off in his motorboat with a mountain bike on board. About eight o'clock in the morning, he arrived at Ramsay Arm, and found a spot to tie the boat near a logging (伐木)camp where he chatted with some logging workers. One of the workers , Vito, gave him a ride in his truck until the forest got too thick. Colin took off his bike and backpack from the truck and started his hiking and route searching. In order not to lose the way back, he marked his trail with blue ribbons (布條). As he made his seven-kilometer marker, he came around a bend and suddenly put on the brakes—a dirty grizzly bear stood right in the middle of the narrow road, 30 meters away. Colin calculated his chances of turning around for a quick escape, but the bear could easily catch up and stop him before he picked up speed. 注意： 1．續(xù)寫(xiě)詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右； 2．請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。 The bear suddenly stood up in a threatening way.??????? _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ After what seemed like hours, Colin came to himself. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【參考范文】 Paragraph 1: The bear suddenly stood up in a threatening way. Meanwhile, Colin threw the sausages in his backpack towards the bear, hoping the flavor would attract it. Unfortunately, the bear rushed to him. Colin was pushed to the ground and bit in the left leg. “Ah!” he screamed with the unbearable pain. Blood flowing out, Colin suddenly remembered the knife in his pocket. He stabbed the bear’s neck as fast and strong as possible. The bear roared with pain and ran away. Losing much blood, Colin lost his consciousness afterwards. Paragraph 2: After what seemed like hours, Colin came to himself. He found himself surrounded by the logging workers in the camp. He was being cared for by a doctor. It was Vito who saved Colin. When he drove back, he spotted the bleeding bear and sensed that something terrible must have happened. With the blue ribbons leading his way, he finally found Colin. “You are so lucky, Colin.Without being noticed, you could have been killed for loss of blood. God help those who help themselves.” said the doctor. 【寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)】本文以冒險(xiǎn)旅行為線(xiàn)索展開(kāi)，講述了Colin Dowler為慶祝生日計(jì)劃騎自行車(chē)穿過(guò)無(wú)人行走的道路上，然后徒步穿越灰熊的領(lǐng)地，最后可以攀登Doggie Dowler山，結(jié)果在灰熊領(lǐng)地，路遇灰熊，與灰熊搏斗，受傷，最終被人發(fā)現(xiàn)并獲救的故事。 1．段落續(xù)寫(xiě)： ①由第一段首句內(nèi)容“那只熊突然站了起來(lái)，以一種威脅的姿態(tài)?！笨芍谝欢慰擅鑼?xiě)Colin和灰熊搏斗，結(jié)果負(fù)傷。 ②由第二段首句內(nèi)容“似乎過(guò)了好幾個(gè)小時(shí)，科林才清醒過(guò)來(lái)?！笨芍诙慰擅鑼?xiě)Colin蘇醒后被照顧的獲救過(guò)程。 2．續(xù)寫(xiě)線(xiàn)索：搏斗——不幸負(fù)傷——幸運(yùn)——獲救 3．詞匯激活 行為類(lèi) ①搏斗：struggle with the bear/fight the bear/ be pushed to the ground ②.負(fù)傷：be injured /be hurt/be bit ③.獲救：be saved/be cared for/ be rescued 情緒類(lèi) ①.不幸：unfortunately /unluckily ②.幸運(yùn)：so lucky /good fortune 【典型句式】 [句式1]. Blood flowing out, Colin suddenly remembered the knife in his pocket.(獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu)作狀語(yǔ)) [句式2]. Losing much blood, Colin lost his consciousness afterwards.(現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語(yǔ)) [句式3]. It was Vito who saved Colin.(強(qiáng)調(diào)句運(yùn)用) 3．閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫(xiě)兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。 On my seventh birthday, I got a gift from my father, which was a book titled Guide to Reptiles and Amphibians. It was my favorite. I kept it under my pillow and read every page over and over every night enjoying the pictures of colorful animals. Some of the sakes were the most beautiful creatures I had ever seen. Little did I know that my book would end up saving a life. Years ago, my family moved into a new house near the woods. My father built a sandbox in our yard. The cat sometimes used the sandbox for a litter box, so my father had to put a plastic cover over it .When I wanted to build sand castles, I had to pull the cover off. One day before dinner, I ran to the sandbox to build 8 miniature city. I pulled off the plastic cover, and there in the sandbox was a snake. It was lying very sill, all coiled up, and it was beautiful. The snake had rings of color around it. I had seen a picture just like it in my guidebook, and I remembered that it was one of the prettiest snakes in it. It said in the book that the poisonous coral snake looked very much like the harmless king snake, the only difference was in the order of the colors. 1 ran inside to get the guidebook. “Mom! Mom! There’s a snake in the sandbox!” I yelled. “I have to find out what kind it is!” Mom came running. “Don’t touch it, Chris! It might be poisonous!” Dad was at work, so my mother went to get our neighbor, Mr. Cook. “Mr. Cook!” my mother yelled across the fence, “We have a snake in the sandbox, and it might be poisonous!” Mr. Cook was retired and lived with his wife in the house on the other side of our back fence. He came running toward the gale with a shovel and tried to kill the snake. 注意：1. 續(xù)寫(xiě)詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右； 2． 請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。 “Wait!” I shouted, waving the guidebook in my hand. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ “So what to do now?” Mr. Cook put down the shovel. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【參考范文】 Para. 1: “Wait!” I shouted, waving the guidebook in my hand. “Let me have a check!” I yelled at the top of my throat, and then observed the snake carefully. I really want to keep the little snake alive because I love the little, lovely creature. So cautious I was that I couldn't think anything else, the only sound rang our in my mind was that. “Save it!” I could even felt my heart pounding ever wildly in my chest because I was pretty nervous. Ultimately, I made a judgement “It’s not a poisonous but a harmless snake,” I said with extremely excitement. Para. 2: “So what to do now?” Mr. Cook put down the shovel. Without any doubt that we should let it out, but where? It suddenly dawned on me that king snake prefer warm dry places, which was why the snake in my sand box. “Maybe we can put it in the weeds there always under the sunshine” “Hmm. ok. We’ll do it.” Mr. Cook replied after thinking a while. Finally, Mr. Cook and I brought the harmless snake to the woods and made it back to nature. Fully satisfaction I had, this experience not only gives a chance to see the snake but also let me know the importance of the harmony between people and nature. 【寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)】本文以人物為線(xiàn)索展開(kāi)，講述了一條蛇爬到了作者的沙箱里，作者告訴了媽媽?zhuān)瑡寢屓フ襾?lái)了鄰居庫(kù)克先生，他拿著鏟子跑來(lái)，試圖殺死那條蛇。幸虧作者最后認(rèn)出了這條蛇沒(méi)有毒，于是他們把蛇放生了。 1．段落續(xù)寫(xiě)： ①由第一段首句內(nèi)容“‘等等！’我大喊著，手里揮舞著旅行指南?！笨芍?，第一段可描寫(xiě)作者辨認(rèn)出蛇無(wú)毒的經(jīng)過(guò)。 ②由第二段首句內(nèi)容“‘那現(xiàn)在該怎么辦呢？’庫(kù)克先生放下鏟子?！笨芍?，第二段可描寫(xiě)作者和庫(kù)克先生把蛇放生的經(jīng)過(guò)。 2．續(xù)寫(xiě)線(xiàn)索：檢查蛇——證實(shí)無(wú)毒——把蛇帶到樹(shù)林——放生 3．詞匯激活 行為類(lèi) 檢查：have a check / examine 叫喊：yell/scream 跳動(dòng)：pound/beat 情緒類(lèi) 可愛(ài)：lovely /cute 滿(mǎn)足：satisfaction /content 【典型句式】 [句式1] I really want to keep the little snake alive because I love the little, lovely creature. (運(yùn)用了because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語(yǔ)從句) [句式2] It suddenly dawned on me that king snake prefer warm dry places, which was why the snake in my sand box. (運(yùn)用了why引導(dǎo)的表語(yǔ)從句和which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句) 4．閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫(xiě)兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。 There was a huge pond just a few kilometers from where we stayed. Since moving into our new home in the countryside, my brother, Jim and I used to often sneak out to the pond where we would meet another friend. Mom had warned us not to get close to the pond, especially after a friend informed her that an alligator(鱷魚(yú)) had been spotted there. We ignored her advice though. On this particular afternoon, the three of us had fun in the pond. As evening approached, we finished swimming. Jim and Syed were unwillingly making their way towards the place where they had left their clothes. I stayed back and was bathing in the water when I suddenly became aware of ripples(漣漪) forming on the surface of the water. I raised my head and looked at the ripples. My eyes caught a motion in the water. A log, I thought. Then I saw it—its scary nose and its two mean eyes. “Jim…” I cried. Then I screamed with all my might. Jim turned his head in my direction and immediately recognized the danger. “Get out of the water, Jeff. Hurry! It’s just behind you.” I waded(瞠水) clumsily(笨拙地) in the water. With great effort, I reached the edge of the pond. I looked over my shoulder. Moving quickly towards me was a huge alligator. I froze. Then suddenly I felt a great pain in my leg. Meanwhile, Jim and Syed screamed and started throwing stones at the alligator and managed to distract it. The alligator went for them now. As it opened its jaws, I could see its sharp teeth. I tried to move but a pain shot through me. I was in a pool of blood. Jim and Syed were scared. 注意： 1． 續(xù)寫(xiě)詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右； 2． 請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。 I was about to give up struggling when I thought of the two hunters who passed by just a moment ago. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ When I woke up, I found myself in a totally unfamiliar environment, a hospital. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【參考范文】 I was about to give up struggling when I thought of the two hunters who passed by just a moment ago. I shouted to Jim and Syed, “Run to the hunters quickly. They can help me.” Waking from the dream, Jim rushed away like an arrow. Syed continued to throw stones at the alligator and I continued to fight against it. Luckily, in a few minutes, Jim and the two hunters arrived. One of the hunter fired a shot in the air. It had the desired effect. The alligator wound its way away in the water. Then, I passed out. When I woke up, I found myself in a totally unfamiliar environment, a hospital. Mom stood over me. Seeing her, tears flooded down. Later I learned from my mother that I was rushed to the hospital by the kind hunters. My eyes began to water again. I made an apology to Mom. She ran her fingers on my face and wiped my tears. Mom reminded me of how fortunate I was to have escaped from the jaws of the alligator. It was a narrow escape. 【寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)】本文以地點(diǎn)和人物為線(xiàn)索展開(kāi)，講述了作者忽視媽媽的警告，和朋友一起在危險(xiǎn)的池塘里游泳，結(jié)果被鱷魚(yú)咬傷，然后被送往醫(yī)院救治的故事。 1．段落續(xù)寫(xiě)： ①由第一段首句內(nèi)容“我正要放棄掙扎，這時(shí)我想起了剛才經(jīng)過(guò)的兩個(gè)獵人?！笨芍?，第一段可描寫(xiě)作者尋求獵人的幫助，并成功獲救。 ②由第二段首句內(nèi)容“當(dāng)我醒來(lái)，我發(fā)現(xiàn)自己在一個(gè)完全陌生的環(huán)境，醫(yī)院?！笨芍?，第二段可描寫(xiě)作者后悔沒(méi)有聽(tīng)從媽媽的警告，并表示對(duì)媽媽的歉意和對(duì)獵人的感謝。 2．續(xù)寫(xiě)線(xiàn)索：快跑——到達(dá)——幸運(yùn)——暈倒——道歉——感謝 3．詞匯激活 行為類(lèi) ①.快跑：run quickly/rush ②.到達(dá)：get/arrive 情緒類(lèi) ①.幸運(yùn)：luckily/ fortunately ②.道歉(后悔的)：make an apology/say sorry to/be regretful 【典型句式】 [句式1]. Later I learned from my mother that I was rushed to the hospital by the kind hunters. (運(yùn)用了that引導(dǎo)賓語(yǔ)從句) [句式2]. Mom reminded me of how fortunate I was to have escaped from the jaws of the alligator. (運(yùn)用了how引導(dǎo)賓語(yǔ)從句) 5．閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫(xiě)兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。 A holiday in Penang is an annual affair for my family. My parents grew up in Penang and are very fond of Penang food. In December every year, we would drive up to the island to spend three days visiting their favorite food haunts (常去的地方). This year, we started our journey up north on a Friday morning. It took us six hours to reach our destination. We always stayed at one of the hotels in Batu Ferringhi. The beach was just a short walk from the hotel entrance and our rooms had a lovely view of the sea. We spent our first evening playing on the beach. After dinner, we returned to our rooms to play games. My parents had a rule for our holidays which was that we were to spend time doing things together.???There was to be no TV and no Internet. The next morning, we went to Bukit Bendera and then spent the rest of the afternoon in town visiting our favorite hawker stalls (小販攤位). As we were having tea at a coffee shop, we overheard people talking about an earthquake near Sumatera, an island in Indonesia. We headed back to the hotel and then went to the beach. We took a walk along the beach, picking up seashells along the way. Looking up, I saw the sun shining brighter than I ever knew before. I saw a tree trembling in the distance as it reflected the sun’s rays. It never occurred to us that something awful would take place. Suddenly, I noticed a strange thing. The sea seemed to be leaving from the shore. I called my father to look at the curious occurrence. My father took one look and went pale. We saw a grey line in the distance moving towards the shore. It seemed to grow taller by the second. 注意： 1．續(xù)寫(xiě)詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右; 2．請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。 My father shouted at us to run back to the hotel. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ We waited a long time before going downstairs. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【參考范文】 My father shouted at us to run back to the hotel. He grabbed my hand and pulled me with him. As we reached the hotel gate, we heard a roaring sound behind us. Quickly, my father pushed us towards the stairs. Fear gripped us and we reached the first floor when we heard the roar of rushing water and glass breaking. My father yelled at us to keep climbing. We stopped on the fourth floor and looked down at the water below us. It had stopped rising. After some minutes, it began to drop. We waited a long time before going downstairs. Hardly had the rushing water dropped when we saw the unrecognizable hotel gate. There was dirt and broken furniture everywhere. Some people who were caught in the water were either unconscious or burst into tears with pain. What we saw weakened our heart and we decided to help the victims after a narrow escape. Never had I had such a thrilling yet dangerous vacation before. The special trip to Penang was deeply impressed in my mind. 【寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)】本文以人物為線(xiàn)索展開(kāi)，文章講述了作者一家喜歡去海灘度假，一次在海邊散步時(shí)，作者發(fā)現(xiàn)了大海的異常，海嘯發(fā)生了。 1．段落續(xù)寫(xiě)： ①由第一段首句內(nèi)容“我父親大聲叫我們跑回旅館”可知，第一段可描寫(xiě)父親看到風(fēng)雨欲襲的場(chǎng)面后，想方設(shè)法帶領(lǐng)全家人脫險(xiǎn)。 ②由第二段首句內(nèi)容“我們等了很長(zhǎng)時(shí)間才下樓”可知，第二段可描寫(xiě)海水退去后旅館一片狼藉的景象和我們從中的感悟。 2．續(xù)寫(xiě)線(xiàn)索：在父親帶領(lǐng)下逃生——海嘯退卻——旅館一片狼藉——災(zāi)后感悟 3．詞匯激活 行為類(lèi) ①對(duì)……大喊：shout at/yell at ②抓?。篻rab/seize/hold ③下降：drop/fall 情緒類(lèi) ①害怕，恐懼：fear/ fright ②令人激動(dòng)的：thrilling/exciting 【典型句式】 [句式1] As we reached the hotel gate, we heard a roaring sound behind us.(運(yùn)用了as引導(dǎo)時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句) [句式2] Some people who were caught in the water were either unconscious or burst into tears with pain. (運(yùn)用了who引導(dǎo)限制性定語(yǔ)從句) [句式3] What we saw weakened our heart and we decided to help the victims after a narrow escape. (運(yùn)用了what引導(dǎo)主語(yǔ)從句) 6.閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫(xiě)兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。 It was a fine summer morning, perfect to be outdoors. Two sisters had been out mushroom picking, and were on their way home with heavy baskets full of mushrooms. They sang songs on the way, and played with each other. Soon they reached a point where they had to cross a railway track. They did not think twice about crossing it since there was no train coming, and they could not hear any whistle. They slowly climbed the steep railway embankment, taking care not to drop the baskets. They were very near the track and the little sister Mary was about to cross it first when a train whistled in the distance. Hearing the train coming, Rose the elder sister quickly ran down. She thought that the young one was following her. But as she turned back, she was shocked to see her little sister still up there crossing the track. “Come back here! Run back fast!” she shouted. Mary seemed not to hear the whistle nor her sister’s cry as she was concentrating on stepping over the track with her little feet, and holding on to the basket. Then she tripped and fell on the track, scattering her mushrooms around. The engine driver panicked on seeing a girl between the tracks who was on her hands and knees and he blew the horn with all his strength. Poor Mary, who was frightened by the coming danger, froze and didn’t know what to do. When Rose saw the scene, she screamed at the top of her voice for Mary’s attention. Mary noticed that her sister was not around and cried for help. With the train drawing near, the engine driver grew extremely anxious. As hard as he could, he kept blowing the whistle and started reducing speed. Yet it was not possible for him to stop the heavy train within such a short distance. 注意：1. 續(xù)寫(xiě)詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右； 2． 請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。 Rose wouldn’t watch the tragedy happen before her eyes. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ The train rolled over and finally stopped. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Para 1: Rose wouldn’t watch the tragedy happen before her eyes. She rushed up the embankment staircase, repeating at the top of her voice “Stay off the tracks!” Mary, at the sight of Rose’s coming to her rescue, burst into tears of joy. Though reducing speed as hard as it could, the train was still approaching fast. Seeing there was little time to drag her sister out of danger, Rose jumped over without a second thought and covered Mary’s body under hers. Para 2: The train rolled over and finally stopped. Frightened and worried, the engine driver quickened his pace to see what happened to the little girl. To his great relief, the sisters lied between the rails safe and sound. What a narrow escape! He helped them sit up and comforted them. The two sisters hugged and kissed each other, tears of joy flowing down their cheeks. Never were the two souls so happily united at that moment. They then collected all the remaining mushrooms and, hand in hand more tightly than before, walked back home. 【解析】 本文以人物為線(xiàn)索展開(kāi)，講述了兩姐妹出去采蘑菇，帶著沉重的蘑菇籃子回家，在穿過(guò)鐵軌的時(shí)候小妹妹Mary在鐵軌上摔倒了，姐姐Rose在危急時(shí)刻沖過(guò)去護(hù)住妹妹，最后火車(chē)停了下來(lái)，兩人死里逃生。 【詳解】 1．段落續(xù)寫(xiě)： ①由第一段首句內(nèi)容“Rose不愿看到悲劇發(fā)生在她眼前。”可知，第一段可描寫(xiě)Rose是如何幫助妹妹的。 ②由第二段首句內(nèi)容“火車(chē)翻倒了，終于停了下來(lái)。”可知，第二段可描寫(xiě)火車(chē)停下，兩姐妹獲救。 2．續(xù)寫(xiě)線(xiàn)索：Rose沖上鐵軌——Rose護(hù)住妹妹——火車(chē)停下——獲救 3．詞匯激活 行為類(lèi) ①靠近：approach/get close ②撿起：collect/pick up ③回家：walk back home/get back home 情緒類(lèi) ①快樂(lè)：joy/happiness ②害怕：frightened/scared 【點(diǎn)睛】 [高分句型1] She rushed up the embankment staircase, repeating at the top of her voice “Stay off the tracks!”(運(yùn)用了現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語(yǔ)) [高分句型2] Never were the two souls so happily united at that moment. (運(yùn)用了全部倒裝) 7.閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫(xiě)兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。 It was last February. Noel, a 28-year-old marketing manager was heading from Iceland’s Keflavik International Airport to the capital city Reykjavik with the modern traveler’s two essentials: a dream and a GPSunit. What could go wrong? The dream had been with him since April 14, 2010 when he watched TV news report of the volcano eruption in Iceland. Dark-haired, with a youthful face and thick eyebrows, he had never travelled beyond the United States and his native Mexico. “I want to see this through my own eyes,” he thought as he watched the news on his couch. Four months later, on a cold winter morning, he was driving from Keflavik Airport in a rented car towards a hotel in Reykjavik, excited that his one-week journey was beginning. As the pink sun rose over the ocean and shone light on the snow-covered lava rocks along the shore, he dutifully followed the commands of the GPS that came with the car, a calm female voice directing him to an address—a left here, a right there. But after stopping on a deserted road, he got a feeling that the voice might be steering (引導(dǎo)) him wrong. He had been driving for nearly an hour, yet the GPS put his arrival time at around eight hours later. He entered his destination again and got the same result. Though he sensed that something was off, he made a choice to trust the machine. The farther he drove, the fewer cars he saw. The roads became icier. He was sleepy, cold and hungry. He hadn’t set up his phone for international use, so that was no help. Another three hours passed. As his tires skidded (打滑) along a narrow mountain road that skirted a steep cliff.he knew that the device had failed him. He was lost. He didn’t know where else to go. There was no one else on the road, and there was nothing else to do but follow the line on the screen to its mysterious end. Paragraph 1 The directions ended at a small blue house in a tiny town. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: Knowing what had happened, the woman offered to help him. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Paragraph 1: The directions ended at a small blue house in a tiny town. Noel parked his car and headed towards the door. An old blue-eyed woman answered after the second ring. She smiled as he stammered about his hotel and handed her his reservation. “No. this isn’t the hotel you have booked. Your hotel is 380 kilometres south.” She told him in accented English with a laugh. Noel quickly figured out what happened the address was wrong with an extra “r” in it. Paragraph 2: Knowing what had happened, the woman offered to help him. She provided Noel a free meal and a bed so that he could get a good night’s sleep. The next day, Noel decided to drive to Reykjavik. In light of his previous experience, the woman gave him a map with the main roads and landmarks carefully marked on it in case the device went wrong again. With the help of the woman’s directions, Noel finally reached his destination. “Without her help, I wouldn’t have made it.” He was so thankful to the woman, who was just a total stranger to him. 【解析】 這是一篇讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)。故事以人物為線(xiàn)索展開(kāi)，講述了28歲的Noel從冰島凱夫拉維克國(guó)際機(jī)場(chǎng)前往首都雷克雅未克，但不知怎么回事導(dǎo)航系統(tǒng)把他帶到了一個(gè)偏遠(yuǎn)的地方。他迷路了，但又只能跟著導(dǎo)航繼續(xù)前進(jìn)。 【詳解】 1．段落續(xù)寫(xiě) ①根據(jù)第一段首句“導(dǎo)航的盡頭是一個(gè)小鎮(zhèn)上的一座藍(lán)色的小房子”可知，下文可描寫(xiě)Noel到達(dá)房子后發(fā)生的事情，并且知道了自己為什么會(huì)來(lái)到這么遠(yuǎn)的地方。 ②根據(jù)第二段首句“那個(gè)女人知道發(fā)生了什么事后，主動(dòng)提出幫助他”可知，下文可描寫(xiě)女士是如何幫助Noel的。 2．續(xù)寫(xiě)線(xiàn)索 來(lái)到小房子——發(fā)現(xiàn)女士——知道為什么——女士提供幫助——安全到達(dá)目的地——感激 3．詞類(lèi)激活 行為類(lèi) ①回答：answer/reply/respond ②遞：hand/deliver ③弄清楚，明白：figure out/understand ④決定做某事：decide to do/be determined to do/make up one’s mind to do 情緒類(lèi) ①感激的：grateful/thankful 【點(diǎn)睛】 [高分句型1]She smiled as he stammered about his hotel and handed her his reservation. （運(yùn)用了as引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句） [高分句型2] Noel quickly figured out what happened: the address was wrong with an extra “r” in it.（運(yùn)用了what引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句） [高分句型3]He was so thankful to the woman, who was just a total stranger to him.（運(yùn)用了who引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句） 8.閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫(xiě)兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。 I was finally going to see Giant Rock with my brothers and Dad. I’d been snowshoeing before, and I liked the adventure of hiking through deep snow alongside wild-animal tracks. After putting on our snowshoes, we studied the map. Dad said, “We start here on the red trail, and then we turn left onto the purple one. That’s where Giant Rock is. Remember to stick together, guys!” The trail ran uphill alongside a stone wall. It was easy to follow because red markers were nailed to the trees and the snow had been packed down by other hikers. Half way up the hill, we turned onto the winding purple trail. We settled into a rhythm, with Dad and everyone else in front and me in the back, crunch-crunching through the snow. The late afternoon sun felt warm, although it was already sinking lower. I saw lots of animal tracks-mostly deer, squirrel, and rabbit prints, which I recognized from my field guide. An hour later, we topped the hill and saw the massive rock sitting alone in the forest. “It is really huge, as big as a house!” my brother Josh said, gazing up. Breathlessly standing in the rock’s giant shadow, I noticed the sun had dipped even lower. “Let’s head back,” Dad said. I was a little behind the group when I noticed a set of animal tracks I didn’t recognize. They were hard to see among the snowshoe prints, so I followed them off the trail for a closer look. There were no claw marks, which meant they didn’t belong to a dog or a fox. Instead, they looked like tiny handprints and footprints. “Must be a raccoon (浣熊),” I thought, matching them to prints in my guide. I looked up when I suddenly realized how quiet it had gotten. I was totally alone. “Hey!” I shouted. “Where is everyone?” nothing. Just the sound of my own breathing. “They couldn’t have gone far. I’ll catch up to them if I hurry,” I thought, stepping back onto the trail. The light had grown darker by the second. Without flashlight and phone, I began running. 注意： 1． 續(xù)寫(xiě)詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右； 2． 續(xù)寫(xiě)部分分為兩段，每段的開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)已為你寫(xiě)好。 I came to where I could turn right or go straight. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ “Stop and think,” I told myself, picturing the map again. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Paragraph 1: I came to where I could turn right or go straight. The path to the front looked familiar. But when I walked on, some scenes told me I was going the wrong way. So I reversed direction. My mind started to race. Soon it might be too dark to tell what color the markers were. And I couldn’t just follow my own footsteps because there were so many tracks from other hikers. What if I couldn’t find my way back? I started tearing through the woods in a panic. Paragraph 2: “Stop and think,” I told myself, picturing the map again. To get to Giant Rock we had turned left onto the purple trail. To get back, I needed to do the opposite and turn right onto the red one. I struggled forward in the faint light. Then I noticed the stone wall. This had to be right. I went downhill in giant steps, and then I saw my family! I shouted as I ran toward them. “Honey? Are you OK?” Dad’s voice was urgent. It seemed I had been lost for ages, and all I wanted now was a bear hug from Dad. 【解析】 本文以人物為線(xiàn)索展開(kāi)，講述了作者與兄弟和爸爸去看巨人巖，天色逐漸晚了，作者跟著一組不認(rèn)識(shí)的動(dòng)物腳印和親人走散了，十分慌張。幸好最后和父親團(tuán)聚了。 【詳解】 1．段落續(xù)寫(xiě)： ①由第一段首句內(nèi)容“我來(lái)到了可以右轉(zhuǎn)或直走的地方?！笨芍?，第一段可描寫(xiě)作者走散后的心理活動(dòng)以及反應(yīng)。 ②由第二段首句內(nèi)容“‘停下來(lái)想一想，’我對(duì)自己說(shuō)，一邊又想象著地圖?！笨芍?，第二段可描寫(xiě)作者如何和家人團(tuán)聚的。 2．續(xù)寫(xiě)線(xiàn)索：繼續(xù)前行——改變方向——慌張——想象地圖——看到家人 3．詞匯激活 行為類(lèi) ①繼續(xù)前進(jìn)：walk on/move on ②辨別：tell/distinguish ③大叫：shout/yell 情緒類(lèi) ①慌亂地：in a panic/flurriedly ②焦急的：urgent/anxious 【點(diǎn)睛】 [高分句型1] But when I walked on, some scenes told me I was going the wrong way. (運(yùn)用了when引導(dǎo)時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句和省略that的賓語(yǔ)從句) [高分句型2] Soon it might be too dark to tell what color the markers were. (運(yùn)用了what引導(dǎo)賓語(yǔ)從句) 9.閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫(xiě)兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。 One day, my brother and I were coming back from the islands where we often risked going and got more fish than others. All at once, the sky was covered with dark clouds and in less than a minute we were in a terrible storm. A huge wave covered our boat and we nearly fell into the sea. My brother put his mouth close to my ear and cried out “Moskoe-strom!” The moment I heard the word I became very frightened. I knew what he meant by that one word well enough. With the wind and waves, we were going in the direction of the whirlpool (漩渦). We were hopeless. Nothing could save us. I felt sick, as if I was falling from a mountain top in a dream. We went round and round, nearer and nearer to the horrible edge of the whirlpool. It may appear strange, but at that moment, when we were on the edge of the whirlpool, I felt calmer than when we were moving towards it. I began to think how amazing a thing it was to die in such a way, and how wonderful it was to see the power of nature. Suddenly, we went over the edge. I thought my life was over. But moment after moment passed, and I was still safe. The boat was on the inside of the huge whirlpool and we were going round in circles at great speed. I saw clearly that there were other objects in the whirlpool—trees and barrels (水桶). After a while, I became curious about the whirlpool itself. I then made three important observations. The first, the larger the bodies were, the more rapidly they fell; the second, between two objects of equal extent, round objects fell down less rapidly; and the third, between two objects of the same size, objects shaped like a tube fell down more slowly. So I tied myself to a barrel to help me float. I tried to make my brother understand, but he was too frightened and stayed in the boat. Without waiting, I jumped into the sea to try and escape. 注意：1.所續(xù)寫(xiě)短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右； 2．請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。 Paragraph 1: Some time after I left the boat, I saw my brother struggling in the sea. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: Soon after that, the whirlpool became less wild and then the sky was clear. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】????????Some time after I left the boat, I saw my brother struggling in the sea. I tried my best to approach to him but I failed again and again. I waved and called him to tie himself to another barrel to help him float. I struggled to run away from the whirlpool and prayed the storm could stop as soon as possible. Soon after that, the whirlpool became less wild and then the sky was clear. The wind became calmer, and the moon was shining. I was still tied to the barrel and the waves soon carried me to an area where the other fishermen were. Fortunately, a boat picked me up when I was tired out. The fishermen were very old friends, but they were unable to recognize me at first because I was in a so difficult position. To my great excitement, minutes later, another boat arrived with my brother in it. How lucky we were! 【解析】 本文以人物為線(xiàn)索展開(kāi)，講述了作者和弟弟從我們經(jīng)常冒險(xiǎn)去的島嶼回來(lái)，遇到了可怕的暴風(fēng)雨，離漩渦越來(lái)越近了，作者清楚地看到漩渦里還有別的東西，作者做了三個(gè)重要的觀(guān)察。 【詳解】 1．段落續(xù)寫(xiě)： ①由第一段首句內(nèi)容“我下船后不久，看見(jiàn)弟弟在海里掙扎?！笨芍?，第一段可描寫(xiě)作者試圖救弟弟。 ②由第二段首句內(nèi)容“不久之后，漩渦變得不那么猛烈了，天空也變得晴朗了。”可知，第二段可描寫(xiě)作者和弟弟都獲救。 2．續(xù)寫(xiě)線(xiàn)索：想辦法救弟弟——風(fēng)?！镁?3．詞匯激活 行為類(lèi) ①盡力做：try one's best to do/struggle to do ②救起：pick up/pluck ③到達(dá)：arrive/reach 情緒類(lèi) ①非常疲倦：be tired out/be exhausted ②興奮：excitement/thrill 【點(diǎn)睛】 [高分句型1]I was still tied to the barrel and the waves soon carried me to an area where the other fishermen were.(由關(guān)系副詞where引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句) [高分句型2]Fortunately, a boat picked me up when I was tired out.(由when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句) 10.閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫(xiě)兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。 It was an unusually hot day. Exhausted after football practice, I headed for the bus stop to wait for Bus 112 which would take me home. I was beginning to drift off to sleep when I saw the bus arriving. The sun was in my eyes and that was probably the reason why I got onto Bus 113 I was glad to get a seat. Within minutes, I was sting against the window, fast asleep. When I opened my eyes, it was dark outside. I was the only passenger left on the bus. I could not recognize the part of town we were passing through. I pressed the bell and the bus stopped. I planned to hop across the road and catch a bus going the opposite direction. However, I found myself on a quiet street with a row of shops that were all closed. I kicked myself for not asking the driver for directions. As I was wondering what to do, a motorcycle came down the road. The rider looked at me as he passed and then stopped a short distance away. I went to him and asked him how to get back to the City Square. He smiled and nodded. He patted the back seat and said that he would send me home. Without a second thought, I climbed up behind the rider. He turned the motorcycle around and headed in the direction I wanted. We travelled for about 15 minutes and the surroundings still looked unfamiliar to me. The rider made a few turns and I knew I was hopelessly lost. I asked him where we were going, He did not answer but increased his speed. Alarm bells started to ring in my head. I tapped the man, shoulder and told him to stop. He leaned forward and went at high speed now. Then he slowed down to turn into a dark and narrow road that led into an oil palm plantation. I had had enough. 注意: 1．續(xù)寫(xiě)詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右; 2．請(qǐng)按如下超式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。 I jumped off the vehicle and fell onto the ground. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I got off the taxi and rushed into my house. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】I jumped of vehicle and fell onto the ground. The man turned around and rode towards me. I swung my schoolbag at him and he lost his balance and fell off his motorcycle. Without looking back, I just ran and ran. When I dared to stop, I found that I was on a main road. Cars were passing by, I was relieved to see a taxi and waved desperately, praying that it would stop. It did. I got in and gave the driver my house address, shaking uncontrollably. I got off the taxi and rushed into my house. I threw myself into my mum's arms and broke into tears. When my family learned what had happened, they were horrified. My parents told me that I should have just looked for a public phone and called home when I was lost. I knew I had been foolish to believe a stranger. It was a frightening experience which I hoped would never happen to me again. It's better to be safe than sorry. 【解析】 本文以人物為線(xiàn)索展開(kāi)，講述了足球訓(xùn)練結(jié)束后，我筋疲力盡，我走向公共汽車(chē)站，錯(cuò)上了反方向的車(chē)。下車(chē)后，外面一片漆黑，正當(dāng)我不知所措時(shí)，一輛摩托車(chē)從路上開(kāi)了過(guò)來(lái)，騎手主動(dòng)要求搭載我。一路上，他走的路很陌生，我要求他停下來(lái)，他卻全速前進(jìn)。 【詳解】 1．段落續(xù)寫(xiě)： ①由第一段首句內(nèi)容“我從車(chē)上跳下來(lái)，摔在了地上”可知，第一段可描寫(xiě)我是如何跳下摩托車(chē)，逃離這個(gè)陌生人的。 ②由第二段首句內(nèi)容“我下了出租車(chē)，沖進(jìn)屋去”可知，第二段可描寫(xiě)我把這件事情告訴父母，父母告訴我今后遇到類(lèi)似的事情，該怎么辦。 2．續(xù)寫(xiě)線(xiàn)索：筋疲力盡——上錯(cuò)車(chē)——搭載摩托車(chē)——遇險(xiǎn)——逃跑——訴說(shuō)——感悟 3．詞匯激活 行為類(lèi) 轉(zhuǎn)身：turn around /turn back 沖進(jìn)：rush into /dash into 情緒類(lèi) 絕望地：desperately / hopelessly 大哭：break into tears / burst out crying 【點(diǎn)睛】 [高分句型1] When I dared to stop, I found that I was on a main road. (運(yùn)用了when引導(dǎo)時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句) [高分句型2] It was a frightening experience which I hoped would never happen to me again. (運(yùn)用了which引導(dǎo)定語(yǔ)從句) 12.閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫(xiě)兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。 It’s a beautiful sunny day. The Bonds boarded their boat for a carefree day trip to Dove Island for some fishing as a family custom. Thomas Bond, a 30-year-old construction worker, loved the sport, especially catching bass (鱸魚(yú)) and had impressed on his oldest daughter, Lizzy, a love of the outdoors, teaching her how to bait (下誘餌) a hook and cast a line and brave the waves. The family spent the day fishing in the vast ocean, and then left the island in the early evening. Upon setting off from the shore, they found thick fog rolling in. Lizzy fell into a light sleep beside her five-year-old sister, Molly, at a table on the boat’s lower deck (甲板). Their father’s sharp orders woke her up: “Get out of the boat. The boat’s sinking!” Lizzy pushed her sister into the cold, dark water. Both girls wore life jackets. The adults did not. The girls were followed by their mother, Petra Bond, who was expecting a baby at that time. Within seconds, the boat was damaged and was left just the tip of its bow in the air. Looking into the faces of her father, mother, and sister, Lizzy wasn’t frightened. After some time, her father told them he would swim for help. “I’ll be back,” he said before disappearing into the darkness. “Dad is like the superhero to me. I believe he will get help to rescue us,” Lizzy said to herself. After some time, her mother became quiet and stopped swimming. Lizzy wrapped a rope around her mother’s chest and tied her to the boat so she wouldn’t float away. Then her sister fell quiet too and she stayed beside her. To keep herself awake, Lizzy daydreamed about what they would do after they were rescued. They would stay in a hotel, order room service, and lie comfortably under the blankets in bed, cozy and warm. 注意： 1． 續(xù)寫(xiě)詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右； 2． 請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。 After several hours, Lizzy heard her name called in the distance. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ On the coast, an ambulance was waiting for them. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】????????????After several hours, Lizzy heard her name called in the distance. “It’s dad.” Lizzy called out and began to shake her sleepy mother and sister. Mother opened her eyes and squeezed out a faint smile and fell asleep again. Through the thick fog, a white small boat sliding close. Lizzy cried out, “Dad, here”, with tears rolling down her face. Finally, Dad got three of them into the boat where Lizzy finally closed her eyes, exhausted and relieved. She knew they were rescued. On the coast, an ambulance was waiting for them. With the help of the nurses, they all got in. Wrapped in a warm blanket, Lizzy sit beside her family, looking at her mom on the bed. Suddenly, Lizzy turned to her father and said, “I knew you would be back, Dad.” “I knew you would keep mother and sister safe”, her father hugged her. Tears???rolled down their faces. 【解析】 本文以人物為線(xiàn)索展開(kāi)，講述了Lizzy和妹妹跟隨爸爸媽媽出海釣魚(yú)，遭遇沉船落水，爸爸留下Lizzy照顧媽媽和妹妹，自己游去尋求救援，媽媽的妹妹體力不支快失去意識(shí)，只有Lizzy堅(jiān)持著保護(hù)著她們，等待爸爸歸來(lái)。 【詳解】 1．段落續(xù)寫(xiě)： ①由第一段首句內(nèi)容“幾個(gè)小時(shí)后，利奇聽(tīng)到遠(yuǎn)處有人叫她的名字?！笨芍?，第一段可描寫(xiě)爸爸歸來(lái)，三人獲救。 ②由第二段首句內(nèi)容“在海岸上，一輛救護(hù)車(chē)正等著他們”可知，第二段可描寫(xiě)獲救后利齊與爸爸的對(duì)話(huà)。 2．續(xù)寫(xiě)線(xiàn)索：爸爸歸來(lái)——三人獲救——得到救助——父女對(duì)話(huà) 3．詞匯激活 行為類(lèi) ①大喊：cry out/yell/scream ②營(yíng)救：rescue/save ③在……的幫助下：with the help of/with the aid of 情緒類(lèi) ①疲倦的：exhausted/tired 【點(diǎn)睛】 [高分句型1] Finally, Dad got three of them into the boat where Lizzy finally closed her eyes, exhausted and relieved.(運(yùn)用了where引導(dǎo)定語(yǔ)從句和形容詞作狀語(yǔ)) [高分句型2] She knew they were rescued.(運(yùn)用了省略連詞的賓語(yǔ)從句) [高分句型3] Wrapped in a warm blanket, Lizzy sit beside her family, looking at her mom on the bed.(運(yùn)用了過(guò)去分詞和現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語(yǔ))

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