誤會(huì)類故事 寫作導(dǎo)圖 一、設(shè)置誤會(huì) The old man glared at the broken window, firmly believing it was my mischief. （老人怒視著破碎的窗戶，堅(jiān)信是我的惡作劇） 解析：用firmly believing強(qiáng)調(diào)錯(cuò)誤認(rèn)知，通過(guò)具體物件（broken window）構(gòu)建誤會(huì)場(chǎng)景 She clutched her stolen purse, eyes fixed on the man in black jacket. （她緊抓被盜的錢包，眼睛死盯著穿黑夾克的男人） 解析：動(dòng)作描寫（clutched）加強(qiáng)緊張感，stolen暗示誤會(huì)前提 My heart sank seeing Mom's favorite vase in fragments at Tom's feet. （看到媽媽最愛的花瓶碎在湯姆腳邊，我的心沉了下去） 解析：情感動(dòng)詞（sank）推動(dòng)情節(jié)，at Tom's feet制造表面證據(jù) The teacher's frown deepened as I nervously covered the test paper. （當(dāng)我緊張地蓋住試卷時(shí)，老師的眉頭皺得更深了） 解析：神態(tài)描寫（frown）與動(dòng)作（covered）制造行為誤會(huì) 二、發(fā)展矛盾 "You've done this before!" Her accusation cut through the silent classroom. （"你以前就這樣干過(guò)！"她的指控劃破寂靜的教室） 解析：直接引語(yǔ)增強(qiáng)戲劇性，silent classroom營(yíng)造對(duì)峙氛圍 I stepped back, tears blurring the disappointed faces around me. （我后退一步，淚水模糊了周圍失望的面孔） 解析：生理反應(yīng)（tears）體現(xiàn)委屈，群體反應(yīng)（disappointed faces）激化矛盾 The crowd's murmurs grew louder:"Thief...liar...disgrace..." （人群的私語(yǔ)越來(lái)越大："小偷...騙子...恥辱..."） 解析：群體語(yǔ)言制造壓力，漸強(qiáng)結(jié)構(gòu)（murmurs grew louder）推進(jìn)沖突 My trembling hands failed to open the evidence that would clear me. （我顫抖的手打不開能證明清白的證據(jù)） 解析：細(xì)節(jié)阻礙（trembling hands）增加敘事張力 三、揭示真相 Security footage showed a stray cat knocking down the vase. （監(jiān)控錄像顯示是流浪貓碰倒了花瓶） 解析：科技元素（footage）合理化解誤會(huì)，動(dòng)物介入增加趣味性 The receipt in my pocket dated from yesterday - I couldn't have bought it! （我口袋里的收據(jù)日期是昨天——我根本不可能買過(guò)?。?解析：實(shí)物證據(jù)（receipt）邏輯解謎，日期矛盾自然揭曉真相 A tear fell on the diary page: "Wanted to surprise Mom with new vase..." （淚水滴在日記頁(yè)上："本想用新花瓶給媽媽驚喜..."） 解析：私人記錄（diary）揭示動(dòng)機(jī)，情感動(dòng)詞（tear）連接反轉(zhuǎn) The stranger pulled out a police badge, "I was protecting your wallet." （陌生人掏出警徽："我是在保護(hù)你的錢包"） 解析：身份反轉(zhuǎn)（police badge）制造驚喜，直接引語(yǔ)快速解謎 四、情感轉(zhuǎn)變 Her anger melted into guilt as she saw my bandaged rescuing hand. （當(dāng)她看到我包扎的救援傷手時(shí)，憤怒融成了愧疚） 解析：melted準(zhǔn)確描繪情感變化，身體傷痕（bandaged）見證真相 We stood in the shattered glass, laughter replacing accusations. （我們站在玻璃碎片中，笑聲取代了指責(zé)） 解析：環(huán)境細(xì)節(jié)（shattered glass）與情感對(duì)比（laughter vs accusations） His stern face softened, calloused hands gently wiping my tears. （他嚴(yán)厲的面容柔和下來(lái)，粗糙的手輕輕擦去我的淚水） 解析：觸覺描寫（calloused hands）體現(xiàn)情感流動(dòng)，softened顯示轉(zhuǎn)變 The classroom erupted in applause, my cheeks burning with relief. （教室爆發(fā)出掌聲，我的臉頰因釋然而發(fā)燙） 解析：群體反應(yīng)（applause）確認(rèn)誤會(huì)解除，生理細(xì)節(jié)（burning cheeks）外化情緒 五、主題升華 That day I learned: Jumping to conclusions breaks more than vases. （那天我明白：妄下結(jié)論打碎的不只是花瓶） 解析：隱喻手法（vases）深化主題，哲理句式提升立意 Mistakes mended with understanding create the strongest bonds. （用理解修補(bǔ)的裂痕，造就最牢固的紐帶） 解析：比喻（bonds）具象化抽象概念，押韻（mended/understanding）增強(qiáng)記憶 The deepest regrets often bloom from the seeds of haste. （最深的懊悔往往萌發(fā)于匆忙的種子） 解析：自然隱喻（bloom/seeds）生動(dòng)詮釋因果關(guān)系 In the mirror of truth, every misunderstanding finds its reflection. （在真相的鏡子里，每個(gè)誤會(huì)都找到倒影） 解析：比喻（mirror）呼應(yīng)主題，哲理表達(dá)提升故事內(nèi)涵 寫作貼士 物品線索法：讓關(guān)鍵物件（如錢包/花瓶）貫穿始末 例：The red wallet reappeared in the lost-and-found box, its clasp still broken. （紅色錢包重新出現(xiàn)在失物招領(lǐng)箱，搭扣仍然損壞） 感官誤導(dǎo)法：通過(guò)有限視角制造認(rèn)知偏差 例：Through the frosted window, the shadow looked like a thief's silhouette. （透過(guò)磨砂窗戶，影子看起來(lái)像小偷的輪廓） 雙線敘事法：同步描寫雙方視角 例：While I trembled in the closet, Mom was downstairs calling animal control. （當(dāng)我在壁櫥發(fā)抖時(shí)，媽媽正在樓下聯(lián)系動(dòng)物管理局） 環(huán)境映襯法：用天氣/場(chǎng)景強(qiáng)化情緒 例：The sudden downpour mirrored my desperation to prove innocence. （突然的暴雨映照著我證明清白的迫切） 模擬演練 01 閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。 Sam is a brave policeman who often comes across dangerous situations. However, when he was young, he experienced a funny story during his work. That was a nice day, and Sam worked at the police station as usual. A rich and beautiful woman carrying a purse drove to work. She parked her car in the street outside her office. When she finished her work that afternoon, she got into her car quickly and started driving home as usual. Suddenly, she noticed a yellow car at her back, whose driver was a man with a very ugly look. To her surprise, when she turned left, the yellow car also turned left. When she turned right, the yellow car turned right, too. When she stopped at the traffic lights, the yellow car stopped behind her. Gradually, fear came into her heart. What should she do? How could she get rid of this terrible man? To deal with this situation, she decided to drive quickly to the police station where Sam worked. However, she was even more surprised when she saw the car still followed her and stopped behind her. “How dare he follow me here?” she said to herself. She could feel her heart beating faster than ever. At that time, Sam was standing on duty outside the police station. Seeing Sam wearing a police uniform, she was more than delighted that she would be safe. At once, she jumped out of her car and ran to Sam without any delay. Pointing at the man inside the car, she said a bad man was following her and asked Sam to arrest him. To find what was happening, Sam walked towards the man who had stopped his car near the woman’s. But what shocked Sam was that the man didn’t try to escape when he saw him. Instead, the man looked relieved. Seconds later, the man walked towards the woman and Sam. 注意： 1．續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右； 2．請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。 The man just smiled and started to tell the truth. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Then, Sam was lost in thought and began to talk with the woman. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】參考范文： The man just smiled and started to tell the truth. Actually, the man just wanted to give the purse back to the woman. He said when the woman got into her car, she dropped the purse on the street unconsciously. The man was parking his car near the woman and saw what had happened. So he started to drive his car to chase the woman. The woman opened the purse and made sure nothing was lost. She bowed to the man, took out 100 dollars and handed it to the man. But the man had left before she knew it. Then, Sam was lost in thought and began to talk with the woman. He told her that though not handsome, the man had a heart of gold. In addition, he taught her not to judge men by their looks. After hearing Sam’s words, the woman felt embarrassed about what she had done. Luckily, she realized her fault and felt grateful to the man. The woman promised that next time, when she saw something strange, she would not make any judgement until figuring out the truth. 【解析】 本文以人物為線索展開，講述了薩姆在做警察時(shí)遇到了一位女士，這位女士認(rèn)為有壞人在跟蹤自己，后來(lái)發(fā)現(xiàn)是因?yàn)榕坑X得那個(gè)男人長(zhǎng)的不好看誤會(huì)了人家，他其實(shí)是想把這位女士的錢包送還的故事。 【詳解】 1．段落續(xù)寫： ①由第一段首句內(nèi)容“這個(gè)人只是笑了笑，然后開始講實(shí)話?！笨芍谝欢慰擅鑼懯虑榈恼嫦?。 ②由第二段首句內(nèi)容“然后，薩姆陷入了沉思，開始和那個(gè)女人說(shuō)話?！笨芍?，第二段可描寫薩姆跟女士講道理，不要以貌取人。 2．續(xù)寫線索：害怕——求助——真相大白——感謝——感悟 3．詞匯激活 行為類 ①追：chase/go after/run after ②意識(shí)到：realize/be aware of 情緒類 ①窘迫的：embarrassed/abashed ②感謝：be grateful/be thankful/show one’s appreciation/show one’s gratitude 【點(diǎn)睛】 [高分句型1]. The man was parking his car near the woman and saw what had happened. (這句話運(yùn)用了what引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句) [高分句型2]. The woman promised that next time, when she saw something strange, she would not make any judgement until figuring out the truth. (這句話運(yùn)用了when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句) 02 “Going to Nationals!” We were all screaming and jumping. Kate, Jenny, Wendy and I embraced each other, bouncing. “Good job, Tara.” Said Kate as she put an arm around me. I am the youngest on the relay race team, but I'm fast. When I run, I leave the skin of my shyness behind, and I feel like a horseman on the Mongolian grassland, free, without boundaries. Everybody ran to their parents in the bleachers ( 露天看臺(tái)). My Mom didn’t make it. Again. I grabbed my phone and called her. It took a while for her to answer. “Yes, hi dear.” “Mom, we won states, and we are going to nationals.” I burst out in one breath. “Great! Let’s talk later; I’ll pick you up from school.” I wanted to say: “Is that it? Why aren’t you proud of me? All other parents are here, why aren’t you?” but all I did was“OK, see you soon.”Does she see me? Do I matter? It was late after 9 PM. All the parents picked up their children, but my Mom wasn’t here yet. Coach Johnson waited with me. We just stood. A speeding car turned the corner; it was my Mom’s Toyota. Coach patted me on the back and left. “I am so sorry I am late.Time just flew.” Said Mom. I wanted to cry in disappointment and tell her that I hate to be always last to be picked up and never have her come to my sporting contests, school plays, or anything else; ask her why she won’t make time for me. But when I looked at her and saw her tired eyes and clenched jaw (咬緊下巴), I just said: “That's OK, Mom, I understand.” Her jaw had stayed clenched since we came to this country as Mom would say: “with two pieces of luggage, a three-year-old (me), and $700.” 注意： 1． 續(xù)寫的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為 150 左右； 2． 請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。 Nationals finally came and my Mom came for the first time ever. ____________________________________________________________________________________________ I had let everybody down and I ran out to hide myself ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Nationals finally came and My Mom came for the first time ever. Seeing my Mom in the bleachers, I was especially excited. I was like racehorses at the gate: nervously waiting and heads held high. I was the last runner???in our team.“ I have to seal the win.” I told myself. After Wendy passed the baton in my hand, I exploded forward. The crowd were screaming. My thoughts rocked with the pulse of the blood.I was beginning to pick up speed again when I was suddenly thrown off balance. Just as I was regaining control, I hit the floor and dropped the baton. My world had just ended. I had let everybody down and I ran out to hide myself. My legs were all bloody, but that's not what hurt. I disappointed everybody. After a while, my mom, with red eyes, found me. “I will quit the team.” I whispered. “No, love! You had the best time in the race. It was an accident.” She continued to make me feel good, but I heard only her soft voice coming as a warm embrace at me, and then I cried out my sorrow,“ You're… never at my meets… always late… you don't have time… you're not proud of me.” Her voice dropped,“I love you so much that I???wanted to build a stronger boat for us. I am proud of you every second.” Thirsty for those words, I ran into her arms. The next day, I went back to the track. When I looked at my Mom in the bleachers, we smiled. 【解析】 本文以人物為線索展開，講述了作者和同學(xué)贏得了洲際比賽，將要沖向全國(guó)的比賽，但是別的同學(xué)的父母都到場(chǎng)和自己的孩子一起歡呼時(shí)，作者只能打電話給母親，電話那頭母親沒(méi)有表示祝賀，作者因此感到很失望，作者希望母親能來(lái)現(xiàn)場(chǎng)看比賽，也希望母親能夠早點(diǎn)來(lái)接自己，但是想到母親一直咬緊牙關(guān)養(yǎng)育自己，作者的內(nèi)心的想法也說(shuō)不出口。 【詳解】 1．段落續(xù)寫： ①由第一段首句內(nèi)容“全國(guó)賽終于來(lái)了，我媽第一次來(lái)了?！笨芍谝欢慰擅鑼懽髡吣赣H來(lái)看作者比賽的場(chǎng)景。 ②由第二段首句內(nèi)容“我讓大家失望了，我跑出去躲起來(lái)。”可知，第二段可描寫作者比賽失誤后的羞愧，母親的鼓勵(lì)。 2．續(xù)寫線索：母親看作者比賽——比賽失誤——作者感到羞愧——母親的安慰和鼓勵(lì)——作者和母親誤會(huì)解開 3．詞匯激活 行為類 ①降低：fall/lower ②使失望：disappoint/upset ③離開：quit/depart from 情緒類 ①溫柔的：soft/gentle ②激動(dòng)的：excited/agitated 【點(diǎn)睛】 [高分句型1]. I was beginning to pick up speed again when I was suddenly thrown off balance.（由連接詞when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句） [高分句型2]. I love you so much that I wanted to build a stronger boat for us.(由so…that引導(dǎo)結(jié)果狀語(yǔ)從句） 03 An unexpected change on the road It was a damp evening in September 2013 when I landed in Kuching, the capital city of Sarawak in Malaysia. I was a 19-year-old Dubai-raised kid away from home for the first time to start my undergraduate studies in mechanical engineering. Alone and homesick, the wet welcome I received at the airport didn't make me feel any better. I had never travelled alone before and the seven-hour flight from Dubai was the longest flight I had ever taken. I pushed my luggage and headed to the airport exit to find a grey van with the name of my university on it. My ride, I assumed, and I was right. As we left the airport, the driver began talking to me; he told me that I was the last of the new students he had to pick up that day. He shared information with me about the city and its people and what I should see and do. As I am a driving enthusiast myself, we started talking about cars and driving in Dubai and his accounts of driving in Kuching. "Never make a Sarawakian angry” he warned. “No road rage (路怒). Very dangerous!" He then went on to list his experiences of road rage and by the time he had finished, I had made up my mind to be very passive on the roads. Not long into our journey, the lights of the car behind flashed at us. This continued more aggressively and my driver started to panic. We pulled over to the roadside in a well-lit area. My heart was pounding but I tried to put on a brave face as the man from the car emerged and made his way to my side of the van. As he reached my window, I lowered it and tried to force a smile. He reached into the van and I let out a loud “Whoa (used to tell someone to become calmer)!" 注意: . 1．續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右; 2．請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。 Then I looked down at his hands to see that he was holding a travel bag.?????????????????????????????? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ With a sigh of relief, I took my bag and thanked this stranger.??????????????????????????????????????????? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Then I looked down at his hands to see that he was holding a travel bag. “Is it yours? I've found it at the airport and tried to catch up with you." the man said. I opened the bag and it contained my passport, return tickets, as well as cash and letters for the university. I had left it behind on the trolley at the airport and this man had been trying to return it to me. At this moment, I realized that we had wronged him completely. (76words) With a sigh of relief, I took my bag and thanked this stranger. The stranger's friendly smile put me at ease. I imagined the horrible scenario had he not returned it. When we arrived, the driver wished me luck with my university studies and drove away. These acts of kindness instantly cheered me up and thanks to this honest stranger, the initial self-doubt I had about my decision to study so far away from home was replaced with hope and excitement. 【解析】 本文圍繞人物展開，主要講述來(lái)自于迪拜的19歲的學(xué)生一個(gè)人來(lái)到馬來(lái)西亞上學(xué)，下了飛機(jī)之后，因?yàn)椴贿m應(yīng)而感覺不好。搭了一輛出租車去學(xué)校，出租車司機(jī)人很好，他們聊了很多，其中關(guān)于不要在路上招惹到司機(jī)，他們?nèi)菀资锹放?，?huì)很危險(xiǎn)。 【詳解】 1．段落續(xù)寫： ①由第一段首句內(nèi)容“然后，我低頭看到他的手里拿著一個(gè)旅行包。”可知，第一段可描寫那個(gè)人來(lái)還我的包。 ②由第二段首句內(nèi)容“我松了口氣，放下心來(lái)，拿過(guò)了我的包并且感謝了那個(gè)男人。”可知，第二段可描寫作者對(duì)馬來(lái)西亞人的善良而感動(dòng)，并且對(duì)在這里的學(xué)習(xí)和生活抱有希望。 2．續(xù)寫線索：發(fā)現(xiàn)——詢問(wèn)——檢查并確認(rèn)——錯(cuò)怪——感謝——希望 3．詞匯激活 行為類 ①發(fā)現(xiàn)：found/notice ②盡力：tried to/manage to 情緒類 ①友好的：friendly/kind ②恐怖的：horrible/terrible????????????? 【點(diǎn)睛】 【高分句型1】At this moment, I realized that we had wronged him completely.（由that引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句） 【高分句型2】When we arrived, the driver wished me luck with my university studies and drove away.（由when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句） 04 A young woman was waiting for her flight at an airport. She was leaving for London because she got a new job there. It was said that her new boss was a typical English gentleman—polite, modest, humorous and considerate. She was excited as well as a little nervous about her new life. With several long hours before her flight, the woman hunted for a book in the airport shops, bought a packet of cookies and found a place to sit. She took out a book and started to read. Although she was absorbed in her book, she happened to see that the man sitting beside her, as bold（大膽的）as he could be, grabbed（抓）a cookie or two from the bag in between them. Educated to be well-mannered, she tried to ignore it to avoid an argument. But to show that she was the owner, she started to take cookies from that bag too. Unfortunately, the man didn`t get that hint（暗示）, since he didn`t stop grabbing the cookies. “How annoying!” she thought. As the greedy cookie thief kept eating, the woman munched（用力咀嚼）some cookies and watched the clock. She was getting angrier as the minutes went by, thinking, “If I weren`t so nice, I would blacken his eyes.” With each cookie she took, he took one, too; when only one was left, she wondered what he would do. With a smile on his face, and a nervous laugh, he took the last cookie and broke it in half. He offered her a half, and ate the other. She grabbed it from him, glared at him and thought, “Oh, brother. This guy has some nerve and he is so rude! Why didn’t he even show any gratefulness?” She had never known when she had been so angry, and sighed in relief when her flight was called. She gathered her belongings and headed to the gate quickly, refusing to look back at the rude thief. She boarded the plane, sank in her seat, and looked for her book, which was almost complete. 注意： 1．所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為 130 左右； 2．續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語(yǔ)已為你寫好； Paragraph 1: As she reached in her baggage, she gasped（喘氣）with surprise. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: Surprisingly, she found the man sitting just behind her. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】As she reached in her baggage, she gasped（喘氣）with surprise. There was an unopened bag of cookies. A terrible thought crossed her mind, “If my cookie bag is here, the other one I ate is his and he just tried to share with me.” She realized that the man wasn’t the irritating cookie thief and he was polite enough. In contrast with him, she was the impolite one. But it was too late to say sorry to him. Surprisingly, she found the man sitting just behind her. Her face burned with shame and apologized for what she did and said to him. “It doesn’t matter!” the man smiled at her and said. It was totally unexpected for her to hear his response. She understood that real politeness and gentleness was sincere kindness, even though others treated you in a rude way. It was the man who taught her the truth. 【解析】 本文以餅干為線索展開，講述了一位女士在登機(jī)前被鄰座的先生“偷吃”了餅干。經(jīng)過(guò)多次試探，這個(gè)先生并沒(méi)有“收斂”，故而她認(rèn)為這位先生非常沒(méi)禮貌并且粗魯。登機(jī)后女士發(fā)現(xiàn)自己的餅干仍然在包中，并且冤枉了那位先生。她意外地發(fā)現(xiàn)那位先生坐在她的后面，并且向他道歉。這件事使她明白真正的禮貌是發(fā)自內(nèi)心的善意。 【詳解】 1．段落續(xù)寫： 由第一段首句內(nèi)容“當(dāng)她伸進(jìn)行李時(shí)，她驚訝地喘著氣?！笨芍谝欢慰擅鑼懪恳庾R(shí)到那位先生并沒(méi)有粗魯?shù)赝党宰约旱娘灨?。相反，自己才是那個(gè)不禮貌且粗魯?shù)娜恕?由第二段首句內(nèi)容“令她驚訝的是，她發(fā)現(xiàn)這位先生正坐在她后面。”可知，第二段可描寫女士向先生道歉，并且明白真正的禮貌的意義。 2．續(xù)寫線索：看到餅干——意識(shí)到錯(cuò)誤——想道歉——發(fā)現(xiàn)那位先生——道歉——感悟 3．詞匯激活 行為類 道歉：say sorry/ apologized 笑：laugh/ smiled 情緒類 令人惱怒的：annoying/ irritating 【點(diǎn)睛】 [高分句型1] She realized that the man wasn’t the irritating cookie thief and he was polite enough.（運(yùn)用了that引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句） [高分句型2] It was the man who taught her the truth.（運(yùn)用了It was…who引導(dǎo)的強(qiáng)調(diào)句） 05 It was dark, cold and raining on December 24. James left his office and walked slowly across the street to the parking place. He was very tired. He took out his car key and put down his umbrella. He put the key into the lock and turned it. Nothing happened. The door would not open. Then James realised that it was the wrong car. His car was red, but this one was dark blue. “Oh dear! I must have parked in a different place this morning,” thought he. Putting up his umbrella, he set off to look for his car. The rain poured down and the evening got colder and colder. Having walked round all the side streets, James didn’t find his car. He was exhausted and angry. “Someone must have stolen my car,” he thought. “Now I shall have to go to the police station and report it.” The policeman there was very helpful. He wrote down a description of James car and then took his address and telephone number. As James was leaving, the policeman wished him a merry Christmas. “Christmas!” thought James. “Oh no! I’ve forgotten all about Christmas. I haven’t bought my wife a present and now all the shops are shut. What shall I do?” When waiting for the bus, he got wetter and more miserable (難受的). He had no umbrella and the rain flowed down into his collar. He felt like bursting into tears. When James got home, he found his wife standing on a chair and looking for something in a very high cupboard. “What are you doing, Jessica?” he asked. “The big gold star for the Christmas tree,” Jessica replied. “Just a moment. I’ll go into the garage (車庫(kù)) and fetch the stepladder (梯子) for you,” said James. When James saw .the well-decorated Christmas tree and lots of presents under it, he felt even more unhappy. “What a lovely tree!” he thought as he went downstairs, “I haven’t even got one present for Jessica. I’ve lost my car and I’m completely wet. I must have lost my umbrella, too.” 注意： 1．續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右； 2．請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。 As James opened the garage door, he spotted something, frozen in amazement. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Pleased to know his car was there, James entered the room with the present. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】As James opened the garage door, he spotted something, frozen in amazement. Inside the garage was his red car. He suddenly remembered that it wouldn’t start this morning so he just took a taxi to work. James was overjoyed. He was just about to rush upstairs and tell Jessica the good news when he heard, “Meow! Meow!” He looked inside the car and there sat a small kitten with pointed ears and green eyes. James’ eyes were glued to the kitten for a few minutes and a brilliant idea struck him. “This is for Jessica.” He picked the kitten up. Pleased to know his car was there, James entered the room with the present. “This is your present,” said to Jessica happily. “Oh, thank you, darling. I’ve always wanted a kitten,” her face lit up. Just then the telephone rang. It was the policeman. James was told that his car hadn’t been found but his umbrella was got in the police station. Putting the phone down, James gazed at Jessica, joy welling up inside him. Bathed in the warm Christmas atmosphere, James walked over to Jessica and hugged her tightly. 【解析】 本文以人物為線索展開，講述了主人公James在圣誕節(jié)的時(shí)候誤認(rèn)為自己的車丟了，心情變得沮喪，沒(méi)有給家人買圣誕禮物，天下著雨，雨傘也丟了，心情非常糟糕，渾身濕透的回到家里，后來(lái)發(fā)現(xiàn)車在車庫(kù)里，警察也找到了丟失的傘，心情變好的故事。 【詳解】 1．段落續(xù)寫： ①由第一段首句內(nèi)容“詹姆斯打開車庫(kù)門，發(fā)現(xiàn)了什么東西，驚訝地僵住了?！笨芍?，第一段可描寫James發(fā)現(xiàn)自己的車在家里，也找到了給妻子的禮物，以及他的心情變化。 ②由第二段首句內(nèi)容“詹姆斯很高興知道他的車就在那里，他帶著禮物進(jìn)了房間?！笨芍?，第二段可描寫James愉快地和妻子在一起，警察找到了雨傘，James非常高興，沐浴在圣誕節(jié)溫暖的氣氛中。 2．續(xù)寫線索：找到了車——發(fā)現(xiàn)了小貓——給妻子送禮物——警察找到了雨傘——高興起來(lái) 3．詞匯激活 行為類 ①?zèng)_上樓：rush upstairs/dash upstairs/go upstairs hurriedly ②.突然想起：strike /occur to/hit 情緒類 ①.高興：overjoyed/very delighted/extremely happy 【點(diǎn)睛】 [高分句型1]. He suddenly remembered that it wouldn’t start this morning so he just took a taxi to work.（運(yùn)用了that引導(dǎo)賓語(yǔ)從句，so連接并列句式） [高分句型2]. Putting the phone down, James gazed at Jessica, joy welling up inside him.（運(yùn)用了現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語(yǔ)，獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu)） [高分句型3] . Bathed in the warm Christmas atmosphere, James walked over to Jessica and hugged her tightly.（運(yùn)用了過(guò)去分詞作狀語(yǔ)） 06 The Rude Boy James Selton was one of the rudest boys in the village where he lived. If a person in the street was well dressed, he would cry out, “Dandy(花花公子)!” If a person’s clothes were dirty or torn, he would throw stones at him, and annoy him in every way. One afternoon, just as the school was dismissed, a stranger passed through the village. His dress was plain and somewhat old, but neat and clean. He carried a cane(手杖) in his hand, on the end of which was a bag and he wore a broad-brimmed(寬邊的) hat. No sooner had James seen the stranger than he winked to his playmates, and said, “Now for some fun!” He then silently went toward the stranger from behind, and, knocking off his hat, ran away. The man turned and saw him, but James was out of hearing before he could speak. The stranger put on his hat, and went on his way. Again did James approach, but this time, the man caught him by the arm, and held him tightly. However, he contented himself with looking at James a moment in the face, and then pushed him from him. No sooner had the naughty boy found himself free again than he began to pelt(連讀投擲) the stranger with dirt and stones. But James was very frightened when the man was struck on the head by a brick, and badly hurt. All the boys ran away, and James skulked(偷偷摸摸走動(dòng)) across the fields to his home. As he drew near his house, his sister Caroline came out to meet him, holding up a beautiful gold chain and some new books for him to see. She told James, as fast as she could talk, that their uncle, who had been away several years, had come home, and was now in the house; that he had brought beautiful presents for the whole family; that he had left his carriage at the tavern(客棧),a mile or two off, and walked on foot, so as to surprise his brother, their father. 注意：1.續(xù)寫的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右； 2．請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。 She said while he was coming through the village, some wicked boys threw stones at him. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ His uncle went up to him, but stopped suddenly when seeing his face. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Paragraph 1: She said while he was coming through the village, some wicked boys threw stones at him. He was badly/severely hurt and the wound was just over the eye. Hearing this, James immediately realized that it was he that hurt his uncle. Shameful and frightened, he dared not step into the house. At that time, he heard his father calling him to come in. “What makes you look so pale?” asked Caroline, changing her tone. With palms sweating, he had no choice but to obey. Inside the room sat the stranger, or rather his uncle, with his forehead bound up, talking happily with his father. What a sense of shame did James now feel! Hanging down his head, he walked toward / approached his uncle. Paragraph 2: His uncle went up to him, but stopped suddenly when seeing his face. Then he cried, “Oh! It’s you!” But when his uncle saw the puzzled father, he immediately explained that he just met James in the street. In a flash, James learnt that his uncle was ready to forgive him. But facing such a kind uncle, he couldn’t conceal his guilt. Having confessed what he had done to his uncle, James felt relieved. He never forgot this lesson so long as he lived. It cured him entirely of his low and insolent/rude manners. 【解析】 本文以人物為線索展開，講述了James Selton是他住的村子里最粗魯?shù)哪泻⒅?，他?jīng)常捉弄他人。一天下午，放學(xué)時(shí)，一個(gè)陌生人經(jīng)過(guò)村子，James開始捉弄這個(gè)陌生人，用磚塊擊中陌生人的頭部并受重傷。James嚇壞了趕緊回家，妹妹告訴他，他們的叔叔離開這里多年，現(xiàn)在回到家里，并給他們?nèi)屹I了漂亮的禮物。 【詳解】 1．段落續(xù)寫： ①由第一段首句內(nèi)容“她說(shuō)，當(dāng)他穿過(guò)村子時(shí)，一些壞男孩向他扔石頭。”可知，第一段可描寫叔叔受傷的情況和James的擔(dān)心和害怕，不敢回家。 ②由第二段首句內(nèi)容“他的叔叔走到他跟前，但當(dāng)他看到他的臉時(shí)突然停住了?！笨芍?，第二段可描寫James的叔叔認(rèn)出來(lái)他。James向叔叔坦白了自己的一切，如釋重負(fù)，決定改掉自己低賤無(wú)理的舉止。 2．續(xù)寫線索：意識(shí)到——害怕——羞愧——坦白——改正 3．詞匯激活 行為類 ①.意識(shí)到：realize/be aware of/become aware of ②.交談：talk with/chat with/ have a chat with ③.坦白：confess/acknowledge/admit 情緒類 ① .愉快地：happily /merrily/cheerfully ②.羞愧：shame /disgrace 【點(diǎn)睛】 [高分句型1]. Hearing this, James immediately realized that it was he that hurt his uncle.(運(yùn)用了現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語(yǔ)和賓語(yǔ)從句) [高分句型2]. Inside the room sat the stranger, or rather his uncle, with his forehead bound up, talking happily with his father.(運(yùn)用了倒裝結(jié)構(gòu)，with的復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)，現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語(yǔ))

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