溫暖親情類故事 寫作導(dǎo)圖 一、沖突構(gòu)建：情感的張力之源 （通過情感矛盾展現(xiàn)親情的珍貴性） 1． 矛盾激化 【生氣沖突】 例句：My mother glanced at me. Something she never did before I had a stepfamily. "You could have picked it up," she said. "That would have been the kind thing to do." （母親瞥了我一眼——這在重組家庭之前她從未有過的動作。"你本可以撿起來的，"她說，"這才是有教養(yǎng)的做法。"） ?解析：虛擬語氣（could have/would have）強(qiáng)化事后的懊悔感，暗示未完成的期待。肢體動作描寫（glanced）替代直接心理描寫，更顯克制張力。 【后悔心理】 例句：I realized how poorly I tied the string on my skirt which was over leggings. I should have asked mom for help. （當(dāng)我意識到自己把罩裙帶子系得一團(tuán)糟時(shí)，真該讓媽媽幫忙的。） ?技巧：細(xì)節(jié)描寫（skirt over leggings）具象化場景，should have done結(jié)構(gòu)強(qiáng)化追悔莫及的心理。 二 情感發(fā)酵（2種進(jìn)階寫法） 【復(fù)合修辭】 例句：Thinking about what I had done to him, regret and guilt overwhelmed me like endless tides. （每當(dāng)想起對他的所作所為，悔恨如無盡潮水將我淹沒。） ?亮點(diǎn)：比喻（tides）+ 夸張（endless）構(gòu)建情感強(qiáng)度，現(xiàn)在分詞前置營造沉浸感。 【動作暗示】 例句：Watching Shirley's smile fading away, Peter frowned. （看著雪莉的笑容漸漸消失，彼得皺起眉頭。） ?解析：非謂語結(jié)構(gòu)（watching）建立畫面同步性，表情變化（smile→frown）暗示情感轉(zhuǎn)折。 三、沖突化解：情感的治愈路徑 （通過具體行動展現(xiàn)親情的力量） 1． 和解三部曲 【真誠道歉】 例句："I’m so sorry," he said, gently petting Jackson’s head. （"真的很抱歉，"他輕撫杰克遜的頭說道。） ?技法：伴隨動作（petting）軟化語言沖擊，副詞（gently）傳達(dá)溫柔態(tài)度。 【暖心原諒】 例句：His mother silenced him by gently putting her finger on his lips, gave a soft kiss on his forehead and walked out of the study. （母親將手指輕按他嘴唇示意安靜，在額頭印下輕吻，悄然離開了書房。） ?解析：動作鏈描寫（putting→gave→walked）構(gòu)建電影鏡頭感，無聲舉動勝于言語。 2． 情感升華 【意象隱喻】 例句：Cheerful singing floating in the room, the two sisters immersed themselves in the beauty of the music. （歡快的歌聲在房間飄蕩，兩姐妹沉醉于音樂之美。） ?亮點(diǎn)：獨(dú)立主格（singing floating）營造環(huán)境氛圍，抽象概念（beauty）具象化親情體驗(yàn)。 【頓悟時(shí)刻】 例句：It was Henry's kindness that made me feel the warmth from our family. I will treasure it with all my heart. （正是亨利的善良讓我感受到家的溫暖，我將用心珍藏這份情誼。） ?技巧：強(qiáng)調(diào)句型（It was...that）突出情感核心，動詞選擇（treasure）體現(xiàn)珍視程度。 四、主題升華：情感的永恒價(jià)值 （通過象征手法深化親情意義） 1． 象征物運(yùn)用【延續(xù)性意象】 例句：From then on, the three chocolates rang the alarm in his heart every time he intended to lie, reminding him to be honest. （自那以后，每當(dāng)想要說謊時(shí)，三顆巧克力就會在心中敲響警鐘，提醒他保持誠實(shí)。） ?解析：具象物品（chocolates）承載抽象品質(zhì)（honesty），建立持續(xù)性的道德隱喻。 2． 成長性表達(dá)【心理蛻變】 例句：I nodded firmly, knowing a flower of kindness and friendship began to blossom in both of our hearts. （我堅(jiān)定點(diǎn)頭，深知善意與友誼之花已在彼此心間綻放。） ?技法：植物意象（flower）隱喻情感成長，進(jìn)行時(shí)態(tài)（began to）暗示持續(xù)發(fā)展。 背精彩句子，讓表達(dá)出彩 1．Cheerful singing floating in the room, the two sisters were absorbed in the beauty of the music. 歡快的歌聲飄蕩在房間里，兩姐妹沉浸在美妙的音樂中。 2．A surge of happiness and warmth running through her, Mom kissed the two sisters gently. 一股幸福與溫暖流遍她的全身，媽媽溫柔地親了親兩姐妹。 3．Every morning, my mother wakes up early to prepare breakfast for the family, filling the house with the aroma of freshly cooked food. 每天早上，我的母親早早地起床為全家準(zhǔn)備早餐，讓整個(gè)房子充滿著新鮮烹制食物的香氣。 4．Whenever I'm feeling stressed or overwhelmed, my parents are always there to offer a listening ear and a shoulder to cry on. 每當(dāng)我感到壓力或不知所措時(shí)，我的父母總是在那里傾聽我的心聲并給我依靠的肩膀。 5．“I want to give you a surprise！” he pointed at a neatly wrapped box with his eyes shining. “我想給你一個(gè)驚喜！”他指向一個(gè)包裝精美的盒子，眼里閃爍著光芒。 6．Every time I faced challenges, a thought of giving up flashed in my mind, but the support of my family gave me the strength to keep going. 每次面對挑戰(zhàn)，我都想放棄，但是家人的支持給了我繼續(xù)前進(jìn)的力量。 7．On rainy days, my family likes to stay indoors and watch movies, snuggled up under blankets and enjoying each other's company. 在下雨的日子里，我的家人喜歡待在室內(nèi)看電影，蜷縮在毯子下享受彼此的陪伴。 8．My parents always make sure to attend my school events and cheer me on, showing their unwavering support and love. 我的父母總是確保出席我的學(xué)?；顒?，并為我吶喊加油，展現(xiàn)他們不動搖的支持和愛。 9．My parents often surprise us with small gifts or treats, showing their appreciation and love for us. 我的父母經(jīng)常給我們驚喜，送上小禮物或小零食，表達(dá)他們對我們的欣賞和愛。 10.he trembling mother's voice was full of unselfish love as she gave her last instruction. 母親發(fā)出最后的叮囑時(shí)，顫巍巍的聲音里充滿了無私的愛。 11.Seeing his families sitting together and staying together harmoniously, Cater felt a sense of happiness. 看到他的家人圍坐著，和諧地待在一起，Cater感覺到一種幸福感。 12.My parents often take us on nature walks, pointing out different plants and animals and teaching us about the environment. 我的父母經(jīng)常帶我們?nèi)ド⒉?，指出不同的植物和動物，并教育我們環(huán)保知識。 13.My parents always make sure to prioritize family time over work or other obligations, showing us the value of spending time together. 我的父母總是把家庭時(shí)間放在工作或其他義務(wù)之前，向我們展示共度時(shí)光的價(jià)值。 14.The warm golden sunlight, flooding in through the window, together with love between my family, warmed us. 透過窗戶的溫暖的金色陽光和我們家人之間的愛，溫暖了我們。 15.Dad fixed his eyes on the paper, a pleasant smile lifting the corner of his mouth. 爸爸眼睛盯著那張紙，嘴角上揚(yáng)，露出愉快的微笑。 高考真題演練 2021年6月新高考卷（母親節(jié)的驚喜） A MOTHER'S DAY SURPRISE The twins were filled with excitement as they thought of the surprise they were planning for Mother's Day. How pleased and proud Mother would be when they brought her breakfast in bed. They planned to make French toast and chicken porridge. They had watched their mother in the kitchen. There was nothing to it. Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what to do. The big day came at last. The alarm rang at 6 a.m. The pair went down the stairs quietly to the kitchen. They decided to boil the porridge first. They put some rice into a pot of water and left it to boil while they made the French toast. Jeff broke two eggs into a plate and added in some milk. Jema found the bread and put two slices into the egg mixture. Next, Jef turned on the second stove burner to heat up the frying pan. Everything was going smoothly until Jeff started frying the bread. The pan was too hot and the bread turned black within seconds. Jenna threw the burnt piece into the sink and put in the other slice of bread. This time, she turned down the fire so it cooked nicely. Then Jeff noticed steam shooting out of the pot and the lid starting to shake. The next minute, the porridge boiled over and put out the fire. Jenna panicked. Thankfully, Jeff stayed calm and turned off the gas quickly. But the stove was a mess now. Jenna told Jef to clean it up so they could continue to cook the rest of the porridge. But Jeff's hand touched the hot burner and he gave a cry of pain. Jenna made him put his hand in cold water. Then she caught the smell of burning. Oh dear！The piece of bread in the pan had turned black as well. 注意： 1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右： 2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。 Paragraph1:?As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2:?The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【范文1】 As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared.?“Don’t panic!” he?handed?each one a wet towel,?helping?them clean the mess quickly.?After that,?Jeff?stammered out?their plan,?his face flushing. However, Father laughed, “Sounds great! I can teach you to cook.”?At this, Jenna and Jef almost?jumped to their feet, joy in eyes.?Under his careful guidance,?it didn’t take long before?the French toast and chicken porridge were ready.?Everything settled,?Father left the kitchen, promising to keep their secret. The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.?Meeting their smiling eyes, Mother felt confused?until?they presented the breakfast and said “Happy Mother’s Day”. Mother?gave them a tight hug, “Unbelievable! You can cook! It’s the biggest surprise I have received.”?Her face lit up with happiness. “They have known how to take care of others.” Father said?in response to?her excitement,?winking?at Jenna and Jef. They couldn’t help giggling.?It was a secret only shared between them.? 【范文2】 As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared. One look and he knew what they were up to. Seeing their disappointed faces, he told them to clean up the kitchen while he helped them make breakfast for Mother. The twins cheered up and did as told. Within an hour, the kitchen was cleaned, and Father had made some egg sandwiches and cooked some porridge. Then he went back to bed quietly. The twins prepared the breakfast tray and added a card they had made. The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up. They hugged her and shouted, “Happy Mother’s Day, dear Mummy!” Mother hugged the twins. Her eyes widened at the sight of the breakfast. She shook Father who was pretending to sleep. He faked astonishment when he saw the breakfast. Mother bit into a sandwich and said it was the best she had ever tasted. Jeff immediately wanted to have a bite. Jenna caught her father’s eye and they smiled at each other secretly. 2017年11月浙江卷（和媽媽去旅行） A?vacation with my mother I had an interesting childhood: It was filled with surprises?and amusements, all because of my mother?— loving, sweet, yet?absent-minded?and?forgetful. One strange family?trip?we took when I was eleven tells a lot about her. My two sets of grandparents lived in Colorado and North Dakota, and my parents decided to spend a few weeks driving to those states and seeing all the sights along the way. As the first day of our trip approached,?David, my eight-year-old brother, and I unwillingly said good-bye to all of our friends. Who knew if we’d ever see them again? Finally, the moment of our departure arrived, and we loaded suitcases, books, games,?camping?equipment, and a?tent?into the car and bravely drove off. We bravely drove off again two hours later after we’d returned home to get the purse and traveler’s checks?Mom?had forgotten. David and I were always a little nervous when using gas station bathrooms if Mom was driving while?Dad?slept: “You stand outside the door and play lookout (放哨) while I go, and I’ll stand outside the door and play lookout while you go.” I had terrible pictures in my mind: “Honey, where are the kids?” “What?! Oh, Gosh… I thought they were being awfully quiet.” We were never actually left behind in a strange city, but we weren’t about to take any chances. On the fourth or fifth night, we had?trouble?finding a hotel with a vacancy. After driving in vain for some time, Mom suddenly got a great idea: Why didn’t we find a house with a likely-looking backyard and ask if we could set up tent there? David and I became nervous. To our great relief, Dad turned down the idea. Mom never could understand our objections.?If a strange family showed up on her front doorstep, Mom would have been delighted. She thinks everyone in the world is as?nice?as she is. We finally found a vacancy in the next town.? 注意： 1. 所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右； 2. 至少使用5個(gè)短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語； 3. 續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語已為你寫好； 4. 續(xù)寫完成后，請用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語。 Paragraph 1:??The next day we remembered the brand-new tent we had brought with us.? _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2:?We drove through several states and saw lots of great sights along the way.? _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【解析】 本文以人物為線索展開，講述了作者11歲的一次家庭旅行讓作者了解了自己的母親。在路上作者和弟弟一直擔(dān)心遇到危險(xiǎn)，而媽媽卻堅(jiān)持要在外面搭帳篷睡覺，最后他們搭好了帳篷，在外面度過了美好的一個(gè)假期。 【詳解】 1．段落續(xù)寫： ①由第一段首句內(nèi)容“第二天，我們想起了我們帶來的新帳篷?！笨芍?，第一段可描寫他們回去取帳篷的經(jīng)過。 ②由第二段首句內(nèi)容“我們開車經(jīng)過了幾個(gè)州，沿途看到了許多美麗的景色?！笨芍诙慰擅鑼懰麄冊趹敉獯顜づ褡鲲埖氖虑?。 2．續(xù)寫線索：想起帶來的新帳篷——媽媽堅(jiān)持回去取帳篷——看見美麗的風(fēng)景——搭帳篷準(zhǔn)備飯菜——作者感悟 3．詞匯激活 行為類 建議：recommend/suggest 回去：go back/return 發(fā)現(xiàn)：find/discover 情緒類 準(zhǔn)備好的：ready /prepared 令人愉快的：pleasant /pleasing 【點(diǎn)睛】 [高分句型1] But then we were half an hour away from the hotel, where the tent was left behind. (運(yùn)用了where引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句) [高分句型2] If Mom hadn’t been that absent-minded, it would have saved us the trouble of going back again and again. (運(yùn)用了虛擬語氣) 參考范文1 The next day we remembered the brand-new tent we had brought with us. Thinking of this tent, Mom suggested that we go camping in the next village in excitement, with her eyes glittering. Considering her enthusiasm, we all agreed. When the door of our car opened, Mom stormed out instantly and urged us to put up the tent. David and I were asked to pick up some branches to build a fire. And when we came back, Dad and Mom had already lain down the grass comfortably in front of the tent, talking merrily with a local boy at our age, who kept glancing at this tent curiously. Soon we learnt that the boy in rags even didn’t have a home to live in. Of course, Mom “forgot” to take this tent with us again. We drove through several states and saw lots of great sights along the way. And we also had a nice time living with my grandparents during that trip. But what impressed me most was that tent, which was forgotten deliberately by Mom. Though she did love going camping, she presented that poor boy with this tent out of sympathy. It was Mom that made my childhood colorful. And it was also she that showed me the true meaning of giving. 參考范2 The next day we remembered the brand-new tent we had brought with us.?But then we were half an hour away from the hotel, where the?tent?was left behind.?Dad?recommended buying a new one, while?Mom?insisted on our going back to fetch it, saying “Forgetful?people like me may lose things repeatedly, so it’s unwise to give up the tent.” Finally, we got back the tent and hit the road again. If Mom hadn’t been that?absent-minded, it would have saved us the?trouble?of going back again and again. We drove through several states and saw lots of great sights along the way.?One day, towards evening, we found a great?camping?site at the foot of a high mountain.?David?and I helped Dad put up the tent, and Mom was busy preparing supper. When the setting sun cast an orange light over the mountains, the tent was set up and the meal was ready. Sitting around the camp fire, we talked and laughed. Every time we mentioned the funny incidents of the journey a pleasant smile would spread over Mom’s face.? 參考范文3 The next day we remembered the brand-new tent we had brought with us.?To our delight,?Mom?gave up the idea of?camping?in some stranger’s backyard. Instead, we found a wonderful camping site in the wild. It was a clearing in the woods by a small lake, where?Dad?could catch some fish for dinner. We had no?trouble?setting up our?tent, but we were disappointed to find that Mom forgot to pack up pillows. Needless to say, we all woke up with a sore neck the next morning. We drove through several states and saw lots of great sights along the way.?It was a fantastic?trip. We crossed big rivers and vast plains, climbed high mountains, and overlooked deep valleys. During the trip, Mom’s being?absent-minded?not only got us into much trouble, but also gave us many funny moments. But luckily, she was not so?forgetful?as to leave me and?David?behind in the gas station bathrooms. We all arrived at grandparents’ home safe and sound.? 模擬演練 1．閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段話，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。 As a young boy, I sometimes traveled the country roads with my dad. He was a rural mail carrier and on Saturdays he would ask me to go with him. Driving through the countryside was always an adventure: There were animals to see, people to visit, and chocolate cookies if you knew where to stop, and Dad did. In the spring, Dad delivered boxes full of baby chickens, and when I was a boy it was such fun to stick your fingers through one of the holes of the boxes and let the baby birds peck (啄) on your fingers. On Dad’s final day of work, it took him well into the evening to complete his rounds because at least one member from each fatuity was waiting at their mailbox to appreciate him for his friendship and his years of service. “Two hundred and nineteen mailboxes on my route,” he used to say, and a story at every one. One lady had no mailbox, so Dad took the mail in to her every day because she was nearly blind. He once lectured me that to bring everyone plain pleasure is his greatest pleasure, which has clung to me so far. Mailboxes were sometimes used for things other than mail. On cold days Dad might find one of his customers waiting for him with a cup of hot chocolate. A young girl wrote letters but had no stamps, so she left a few buttons on the envelope in the mailbox; Dad paid for the stamps. With a heavy heart, I traveled back to my hometown on the sad occasion of Dad’s death, and the mailboxes along the way reminded me of some of his stories. I thought I knew them all, but that wasn’t the case. As I drove home, I noticed two lamp poles, one on each side of the street. When my dad was around, those poles supported wooden boxes about four feet off the ground. One box was painted green, and the other was red, and each had a long narrow hole at the top with white lettering: Santa Claus, NORTH POLE. For years children had dropped letters to Santa through those holes. I was among the kids whose letters were always answered in time. I made a turn at the corner and drove past the post office and across the railroad tracks to our house. Mom and I were sitting at the kitchen table when I heard footsteps. There, at the door, stood Frank Townsend, Dad’s postmaster and great friend for many years. Threads of silver ran through his beard and the hair. Obviously, time and sorrow for the past days ploughed deep wrinkles on his brow. Sitting down at the table, he began to tell old stories. 注意：1. 續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150詞左右； 2． 續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語已為你寫好。 Paragraph 1: At one point Frank looked at me with tears in his eyes as if recalling something. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: Thinking of my father’s philosophy of pleasure, I resolved to be this year’s Santa Claus. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【參考范文】 At one point Frank looked at me with tears in his eyes as if recalling something. Hardly had the words telling my father was genuinely the Santa Claus escaped from his trembling lips when my emphasizing look changed into an astonished one. Recalling every letter answered in time, I was choked with gratitude, my eyes moistened with tears. Flakes were still whirling while a sparkle of light zigzagged across the sky, casting warmth onto my heart. Frank’s stories went on and notably conveyed in his tone was pursuit for the gone era. “Your father always considered others’ pleasure as his own,” Frank’s remark occurred to me like a clap of thunder, planting a seed of dedication rooted in my heart. Thinking of my father’s philosophy of pleasure, I resolved to be this year’s Santa Claus. Enduring the needle-like wind howling ruthlessly, I made my way to the lamp poles, carefully fumbling for the old letters. Mature as the previous kids were now, I still put pen to paper to respond the innocence with the signature of Santa Claus. When I brought every letter to every original address, the owners’ eyebrows lifted high but then soothed as I explained to them. Spotting the pleased looks on their faces, I felt a surge of warmth circulating through my body. After waving them farewell, I slackened my steps in the snow and wandered around the familiar road, lost in thought of the past golden days that would never fade away. 【寫作指導(dǎo)】這是一篇夾敘夾議文。文章主要講述了郵遞員父親的簡單、豐富而又充實(shí)、有趣的郵遞員生活，父親是一個(gè)鄉(xiāng)村郵遞員，多年來他都無私地為219個(gè)信箱服務(wù)，一直到他退休，但讓作者沒料到的是，父親還在每年圣誕節(jié)的時(shí)候扮演著圣誕老人的角色，默默地回復(fù)著孩子們寫給圣誕老人的信，這種做法感人至深。 1．段落續(xù)寫： ①由第一段首句內(nèi)容“弗蘭克含著淚水看著我，好像在回憶什么?！笨芍?，第一段可描寫弗蘭克回憶關(guān)于父親的感人內(nèi)容。 ②由第二段首句內(nèi)容“想到父親的快樂哲學(xué)，我決心成為今年的圣誕老人?！笨芍诙慰擅鑼懽髡哐刂赣H的足跡給業(yè)主送信的場景和感悟。 2．續(xù)寫線索：回憶故事——充滿感激——產(chǎn)生共鳴——快樂哲學(xué)——圣誕回信——內(nèi)心感受 3．詞匯激活 行為類 ①逃脫：escape from/get away from ②轉(zhuǎn)變成：change into/transfer into ③前往某處：make one’s way to/turn towards 情緒類 ①含淚：with tears in one’s eyes/be full of tears/be filled with tears ②決心做：resolve to do /be determined to do 【典型句式】 【句式1】Mature as the previous kids were now, I still put pen to paper to respond the innocence with the signature of Santa Claus.(As引起的部分倒裝句式) 【句式2】After waving them farewell, I slackened my steps in the snow and wandered around the familiar road, lost in thought of the past golden days that would never fade away.(運(yùn)用了that引導(dǎo)的定語從句) 2．閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。 School was over, the day was fading and it started to rain. I stood at the school gate, with a loaded backpack on my shoulders. It was Friday again—a weekend of joy with unlimited sleeping hours and dinner courses specially made to my taste. I waved goodbye to my friends as they jumped into their fathers’ warm and comfortable cars. Curiously, this gave rise to a disturbing feeling in me. It was not exactly what they called jealousy (嫉妒), but something like depression. I knew all I could expect was an old bike Mom would ride along on, with the badly-oiled chain creaking against the wheel to announce her arrival. Every Friday when Mom came to pick me up, it was a moment full of great expectation and great unease. I always felt my face burning as we rode our way in and out of the cars and saw my friends’ faces sticking out of the car windows. It was like stepping into a ballroom with beautifully dressed ladies and finding yourself in a smelly T-shirt. To tell you the truth, Mom is quite a headache occasionally. She looks like a homely middle-aged housewife. She knits (編織) most of my sweaters, chiefly in old styles. Whenever caught by some curious classmates asking what brand my sweaters are, I’d force a smile and reply in a half-joking manner: homemade. She simply doesn’t seem to understand what’s in fashion; Chanel or Gucci means nothing to her. I couldn’t remember when I started to find her such an embarrassment. As a little boy, I relied on her so much. She had been working at home, cooking in the kitchen, knitting by the lamp, or riding across town to buy me a book I badly needed. It had always been fun riding with her. I had enjoyed watching our shadows growing longer and shorter in an alternate fashion by the light of the streetlamps along the road. Just now there seemed to be something standing between us, something that made her so strange to me and me to her. 注意：1. 續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右； 2． 請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。 Today Mom showed up in a raincoat. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Mom tried to cover me with the raincoat again as a storm set in. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】 Today Mom showed up in a raincoat. Once she saw me, Mom called my name excitedly. Almost everybody present looked in her direction. I swallowed hard and fixed my stare on the middle of the road, sweat forming in tiny droplets on my forehead. When she tried to cover me with the back of her raincoat, I simply threw it aside. In silence, I shot her a blaming glance and threw my backpack heavily into the front basket of the bike. Without a single word, I jumped onto the backseat. Mom tried to cover me with the raincoat again as a storm set in. Reluctantly, I pulled it over. With the wind roaring angrily and the raincoat dancing, it felt warm and secure inside. Mom bent forward and pedaled with all her strength, her waist twitching with tension. I started to feel guilty of my coldness, tears welling up in my eyes. Quietly, I slipped my hands around Mom’s waist and gently pressed my face against her back. In the crying wind and pouring rain, I found myself hugging my mother, tighter than ever. 【寫作指導(dǎo)】本文講述了一個(gè)關(guān)于母愛的故事。作者的家庭并不富裕，周五放學(xué)時(shí)，其他學(xué)生的家長開著汽車來接他們，而作者的媽媽卻騎著一輛破舊的自行車來接他，這讓作者感覺很沮喪。媽媽的穿著也很樸素，不懂時(shí)尚，這也讓作者感覺很難堪。事實(shí)上，作者小時(shí)候很依賴媽媽，也很喜歡媽媽騎自行車載自己，不知道從什么時(shí)候開始，作者和媽媽之間的關(guān)系變得陌生了。 1．段落續(xù)寫： ①由第一段首句內(nèi)容“今天媽媽穿著雨衣出現(xiàn)了?！笨芍?，第一段可描寫作者看到媽媽后尷尬的表現(xiàn)。 ②由第二段首句內(nèi)容“暴風(fēng)雨來襲時(shí)，媽媽又試圖用雨衣給我蓋上?！笨芍?，第二段可描寫我被媽媽的行動所感動，深刻地體會到了母愛。 2．續(xù)寫線索：媽媽叫我——我感到尷尬——媽媽給我蓋雨衣——我不愿意接受——暴風(fēng)雨來襲——媽媽再次給我蓋雨衣——我感受到母愛的溫暖 3．詞匯激活 行為類 ①.看見：see/catch sight of ②.開始做某事：start to do sth./begin to do sth. ③.擁抱：hug/embrace 情緒類 ①.激動地，興奮地：excitedly/with excitement ②.不情愿地：reluctantly/unwillingly 【典型句式】 [句式1]. Once she saw me, Mom called my name excitedly.(由Once引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語從句) [句式2]. I couldn’t remember when I started to find her such an embarrassment.(由when引導(dǎo)的賓語從句) 3．閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。 Todd was lying on the family room floor doing math homework, when he heard his mother, back from her shift at the Crafts Cottage. She was later than usual, so she must have stopped on the way home to get groceries after her work. Todd hoped so. Groceries were one of life’s good things. It was getting late, and Todd felt a bit hungry. As a matter of fact, he could hear his stomach growling. He only had some cereal for breakfast this morning. If only he could have a bite at his favorite food—the apple pie made by his mother! But it had been a while since she made desserts for them, for she had been much occupied recently. His mother came into the family room and clicked off the TV. Todd looked at Amy, who was so lost in her book that she didn’t seem to notice their mother’s presence in the room. But their father, dozing (打瞌睡) on the couch with the remote in his hand, came awake with a guilty startle (驚嚇). “David, Todd, Amy.” Quiet voices could sound so much more threatening than shouting ones. “I need you to come into the kitchen. Now!” Amy put her book down then, and the three of them dragged their feet into the kitchen. If they had tails, they would have been tucked (藏住) between their legs. “Look at this place.” Todd’s mother said. It was bad: newspapers in an untidy heap on the table, dirty dishes everywhere, an empty milk carton standing on the counter next to spilled cereal left over from breakfast, and two bags of groceries his mom had just carried in from the car. “I want this cleaned up. I want these groceries put away. I want a decent meal represented on the table in sixty minutes. Call me when it’s ready. I’m going to be upstairs soaking in a hot tub.” Then she was gone. Paragraph 1 Todd, Amy and their father quickly got down to work. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2 After their discussion, they were ready to make dinner. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【參考范文】?????? ?Todd, Amy and their father quickly got down to work. He started loading dirty dishes into the dishwasher, as Amy and their father took the groceries out of the paper bags and put them on the shelves and in the fridge. “How does the food pyramid work?” their father broke the silence to ask. “You are supposed to eat a lot of grains and cereals.” Todd explained, who had studied the food pyramid at school last year. Todd drew a triangle shape on a piece of paper, divided the pyramid into four equal sections and labelled each one. They talked and decided that grains, vegetables, dairy products and protein were what they need. After their discussion, they were ready to make dinner. They chose to make curried chicken breasts with rice. Amy reminded them of vegetables, and their father suggested putting some broccoli on the side. For dairy products, they got some yogurt from the fridge. It turned out that it took plenty of time to choose the recipe, locate the ingredients, and chop the vegetables before you even started to cook. Still, in less than an hour, it was done. When their mother came to the kitchen, she stared in apparent disbelief. “You even fixed broccoli,” she whispered. The family had dinner together and everyone believed it was the best meal they had ever had! 【寫作指導(dǎo)】本文講述了主人公托德的媽媽最近工作很忙碌，但仍要買菜、做飯和照顧家人。一天，媽媽很晚才下班回家，回到家中，看到兒子托德在做數(shù)學(xué)作業(yè)，女兒艾米在看書，丈夫大衛(wèi)正躺在沙發(fā)上打瞌睡，托德的媽媽決定是時(shí)候讓家人幫助她一起做家務(wù)了。她把家人叫到廚房，看著亂糟糟的廚房，囑咐家人整理好并做好晚飯，她打算去泡個(gè)熱水澡緩解疲勞。 1．段落續(xù)寫： ①由第一段首句內(nèi)容“托德、艾米和他們的父親很快開始工作。”可知，第一段可描寫三個(gè)人整理廚房的過程和對晚餐的規(guī)劃。 ②由第二段首句內(nèi)容“經(jīng)過討論，他們準(zhǔn)備做晚飯。”可知，第二段可描寫三個(gè)人做晚飯的過程和媽媽看到晚飯后的反應(yīng)。 2．續(xù)寫線索：整理廚房——規(guī)劃晚飯——三人的討論——開始做飯——晚飯完成——一家人的感受 3．詞匯激活 行為類 ①.開始做某事：start doing sth./begin doing sth. ②.打破沉默：break the silence/break the ice ③.應(yīng)該做某事：be supposed to do sth./be expected to do sth. 情緒類 ①.難以置信地：in disbelief/unbelievably ②.明顯的：apparent/obvious 【典型句式】 [句式1]. When their mother came to the kitchen, she stared in apparent disbelief.(由when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語從句) [句式2]. The family had dinner together and everyone believed it was the best meal they had ever had!(由that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句作believed的賓語，省略了that；由that引導(dǎo)的限制性定語從句，修飾先行詞meal，省略了that) 4．閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。 Larry had butterflies in his stomach. Today was the day for him to meet his girlfriend Kate’s parents. He was planning to leave them a good impression, so he was in his finest suit. On the way, he secretly recited a few jokes he picked up online the previous night. His weird behavior caught Kate’s attention. “What are you doing, honey?” she asked. Blushing, Larry told her what he was doing. She, on the other hand, actually found his eagerness to please her family quite cute. “Well, let’s hear your jokes.” she said teasingly. They were so immersed in their chatter and laughter that before they knew it, they had arrived at the house of Kate’s parents, who gave them a warm welcome. As an orphan, that night, Larry felt the love and warmth he had always longed for since childhood. The next day, they drove downtown to pick their engagement ring. Everything was working out just perfectly. However, on their way home, a truck driven by a drunk driver smashed into their car, sending it flying off the roadside down a steep hill before it got stuck between several trees. Larry struggled out of his seat to save the then unconscious Kate. As he made every effort to wake her up, the car began to slip down again. With only seconds to act, he hastily removed her seat belt and pushed her out of the car before it fell downhill again with him trapped inside. A rescue team finally arrived and drove them to a nearby hospital. Under the doctors’ treatment, Kate woke up the next day. She was only slightly injured, but Larry remained unconscious due to severe damage done to his brain caused by the heavy impact. 注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右了； 2．請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。 Para 1: The doctors were afraid Larry might never wake up again. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Para 2: Larry told Kate to leave him and find someone else. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【參考范文】The doctors were afraid Larry might never wake up again. The doctors told Kate the truth about Larry’s illness and told her to prepare for the worst. She was driving with Larry’s illness notice, tears in the corner of her eyes, and she thought of everything she had with Larry. Only yesterday, they had met with her parents, and Kate came back to the hospital room and saw Larry’s eyes seem to have opened, and he raised his hand slightly to signal Kate to come closer. Larry told Kate to leave him and find someone else. When Kate saw Larry lying on his deathbed, she made some kind of decision. She squeezed his hand and told him“I would never leave you.” Larry’s eyes were filled with joy and a touch of worry. We never know which comes first, tomorrow or accident, but Kate firmly chooses Larry. She doesn’t care about accidents or tomorrow and she only wants to believe in love. The most precious thing in the world is this kind of feeling. I hope you can be as determined as Kate to choose your own life. 【寫作指導(dǎo)】本文以人物為線索展開，講述了Larry在見女友凱特父母的那天受到了他們的熱烈歡迎，感受到了他從小就渴望的愛和溫暖，第二天，他們開車到市區(qū)去取訂婚戒指，卻被一輛卡車撞了，他奮力地將凱特推出車外，使凱特免受重傷，他自己卻因?yàn)榇竽X受到重創(chuàng)而昏迷。 1．段落續(xù)寫： ①由第一段首句內(nèi)容“醫(yī)生把拉里生病的真相告訴了凱特，并讓她做最壞的打算。”可知，第一段可描寫凱特聽見醫(yī)生說的話后的反應(yīng)。 ②由第二段首句內(nèi)容“當(dāng)凱特看到拉里躺在彌留之際的床上時(shí)，她做出了某種決定。”可知，第二段可描寫凱特的決定和拉里的反應(yīng)。 2．續(xù)寫線索：凱特回憶和拉里的一切——拉里示意凱特走近——告訴拉里自己的決定——拉里的反應(yīng)——感悟 3．詞匯激活 行為類 ①想起：think of/recall ②告知：tell sb. sth./inform sb. of sth. ③充滿：be filled with/be full of 情緒類 ①高興：joy/delight ②擔(dān)心：worry/concern 【典型句式】 [句式1] She was driving with Larry’s illness notice, tears in the corner of her eyes, and she thought of everything she had with Larry. (由that引導(dǎo)的定語從句，省略了that) [句式2] I hope you can be as determined as Kate to choose your own life. (由that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句，省略了that) 5．閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。 At nine years old, I went through more than the usual amount of change for a girl of my age. In the past few months, my stable and predictable life had been turned upside down when my parents lost their jobs because of the economic crisis. This set into motion a series of events, including my parents losing our beautiful Victorian home and forcing our family into a fifteen - foot pull trailer we’d previously only used for weekend camping trips. Life in the trailer was tough. We were incredibly crowded. When Mom, Dad, my brother and I all sat on the sofa at the end of the trailer, the entire front end began to tip in our direction, forcing one of us to jump up and rush to the front. Worse still, our food was not enough. One day, my mother sat at the small table and casually wrote a wishing list on a paper towel — all about food, while keeping an eye on the last of our food, fried chicken, on the stovetop. “We need to pray,” she said aloud. “We don’t have enough food to last the week.” Then we joined hands and asked God to offer us some food. Then Mom left the wishing list on the table, got up and started putting the chicken on a plate for dinner. I opened the tiny door and let the smell of dinner follow me as I wandered outside to find my dad. He was working on our broken-down truck. As Dad leaned over the engine, I noticed a disheveled man walking up to our trailer. “Can I help you, sir?” my dad asked in his friendly way. “I’m hoping you can,” he said, “I’m hungry and was wondering if you had any food to spare.” I looked up at Dad, knowing we didn’t have much. “Sure!” Dad said without hesitation. He brushed off his hands and went inside, quickly returning with a fresh piece of fried chicken wrapped in a paper towel. The man’s face lit up. 注意：1. 續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右； 2． 請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。 The man took the wrapped food and paused for a while. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Actually, our family didn’t expect the man would return, so we got across the parking lot for a walk after dinner. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【參考范文】 The man took the wrapped food and paused for a while. Then he ate up the home - cooked food, and I happily listened to a friendly conversation between the two men. The stranger mentioned that he had some canned food that he couldn’t use because he didn’t have a can opener. Dad offered him our can opener, but the man refused, saying he’d bring the cans later. Dad said that wasn’t necessary, but the man insisted. Actually, our family didn’t expect the man would return, so we got across the parking lot for a walk after dinner. When we returned to the trailer, we were surprised to see three brown paper bags near the door, “Well, that man said he was going to leave us some canned food...” Dad whispered, Mom and Dad brought in the bags and began to unpack them on the table. Mom’s eyes got filled with tears when she spoke of her wishing list. “This is unbelievable!” Mom said in a surprised voice. Most of the items I listed are on our table! Milk, eggs, noodles, bread...” The list went on. It was enough to get us through another week. 【寫作指導(dǎo)】本文以人物為線索展開，講述了作者九歲時(shí)，父母因?yàn)榻?jīng)濟(jì)危機(jī)失去了工作，一家人只能住在拖車?yán)?。某天母親寫下了一張關(guān)于食物的愿望清單，結(jié)果被一個(gè)來作者家要食物的男人看到了，男人吃完了作者家的飯菜，最后拿來了清單上的食物。 1．段落續(xù)寫： ①由第一段首句內(nèi)容“男人拿著包好的食物，停了一會兒。”可知，第一段可描寫陌生人來作者家吃飯的經(jīng)過。 ②由第二段首句內(nèi)容“事實(shí)上，我們家人沒想到那個(gè)人會回來，所以晚飯后我們穿過停車場去散步?！笨芍?，第二段可描寫男人為作者家買來了清單上的食物，作者一家非常感動。 2．續(xù)寫線索：男人吃光食物——堅(jiān)持拿罐頭過來——發(fā)現(xiàn)紙袋——清點(diǎn)食物——實(shí)現(xiàn)食物清單 3．詞匯激活 行為類 ①提供：offer/provide ②拒絕：refuse/turn down 情緒類 ①高興地：happily /gladly ②驚訝的：surprised /astonished 【典型句式】 [句式1] The stranger mentioned that he had some canned food that he couldn’t use because he didn’t have a can opener. (運(yùn)用了that引導(dǎo)賓語從句和because引導(dǎo)原因狀語從句) [句式2] When we returned to the trailer, we were surprised to see three brown paper bags near the door, “Well, that man said he was going to leave us some canned food...”(運(yùn)用了when引導(dǎo)時(shí)間狀語從句) 6.閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。 It’s hard to talk to dads sometimes. The roles we often expect our fathers to play—protector, provider—can make them seem impenetrable(不可理解的). That’s how it was with my dad. He came to Canada at the age of ten and settled in an immigrant community. He was never much of a talker. He rarely drank, so we didn’t get to see him loosen up after a few beers. He didn’t tell stories about himself at the dinner table or when we went for walks in the park. He was a private person and seemed to want to stay that way. Bringing up the many questions I had about life before I was born-his early hopes and dreams, loves and heartbreaks—let alone sharing my own feelings, felt like too much for us to handle. I didn’t want to threaten the integrity(完整)of his hard shell. I had gotten used to it, and it made me feel secure. But when my relationship and career took a hit a year ago at the same time, things had to change. I was facing serious questions about my own nature, and I wanted to know that he had faced them, too. I needed to know how he had found his way, because I felt like I had lost mine. In a severe moment of desperation, it occurred to me that sending an email might be the key. An email can be crafted(精心制作)slowly and carefully. I could speak at a comfortable distance and give him room to adjust. He’d be up in his office—a comfortable place filled with bookshelves, dusty CD-ROMs and piles of old newspapers. I’d be at my desk in an apartment 20 minutes away. So I wrote to him. I told him about my regrets and fears, and I asked him to answer, if he felt like it, and to share something about himself, something that would give me much-needed perspective on my life, especially on relationship and career. Para 1: Two weeks later, his response showed up in my email box. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Para 2: I closed the email and started to cry. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Para 1: Two weeks later, his response showed up in my email box. It was a scanned three-page document. Apparently, my dad had carefully considered my message, reached back into his memory and crafted a response. In the letter, he shared his history of love, longing, self-doubt, fears and struggles in life. He also offered me some practical suggestions on how to handle my relationship and career. While reading, I got the sense that it must have been really tough for my dad to settle down in a new country at an early age. I was also impressed by the great perseverance he showed in the face of difficulty. Para 2: I closed the email and started to cry. I cried because I wished I had opened up earlier but was grateful it wasn’t too late. I cried because in the midst of my own struggles, his letter instantly put me at ease. And I cried because in the end, it was so simple: I just had to hit “Send”. We’ve since had many exchanges. My problems haven’t been magically solved, but getting to know my dad better–and learning to love him more–has made the tough stuff more manageable and life sweeter. It’s hard to talk to dads sometimes, but I’m glad that I found a way to talk to mine. 【解析】 這是一篇記敘文。文章以人物為線索展開，講述了作者的父親是一個(gè)少言少語的人，作者習(xí)慣這樣的父親，也覺得這樣很安全。但當(dāng)作者的婚姻和職業(yè)受到打擊時(shí)，他/她感到迷失了自我，想到父親也可能曾經(jīng)面臨這樣的問題，于是決定通過寫郵件向他求助。 【詳解】 1．段落續(xù)寫 ①根據(jù)第一段首句內(nèi)容“兩周后，他的回信出現(xiàn)在我的郵箱里”可知，下文可描寫父親在信里真誠地分享了自己的經(jīng)歷，以及作者的感受。 ②根據(jù)第二段首句內(nèi)容“我關(guān)了郵件開始哭起來”可知，下文可描寫作者哭的原因，以及慶幸找到了和父親進(jìn)行交流的方式。 2．續(xù)寫線索：受到回信——父親分享自己的經(jīng)歷——對父親有了更多了解——哭起來——為什么哭——慶幸能和父親交流 3．詞類激活 行為類 ①思考：consider/think ②提供：offer/supply/give/provide ③解決：solve/settle 情緒類 ①艱難的：hard/tough/difficult ②感激的：grateful/thankful ③高興的：glad/delighted/pleased 【點(diǎn)睛】 [高分句型1]While reading, I got the sense that it must have been really tough for my dad to settle down in a new country at an early age. （運(yùn)用了狀語從句的省略） [高分句型2]I cried because I wished I had opened up earlier but was grateful it wasn’t too late. （運(yùn)用了because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語從句，和虛擬語氣） 7．閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。 “Has Priya not come home as yet?” Surya asked. He had just returned from work. He was a cashier in the State Bank of Hyderabad, while his wife, Sharada a lab assistant in Reddy College for Women. Their daughter, Priya, was a Class X student in Saint Anne's School around six kilometers away. There was a direct bus from Priya's school. “She should have been here by 4.30. It is 5:30 now and she still has not come,"Sharada replied.＂Yesterday too she was late. In fact, since the last few weeks she has been coming home late." “Did you ask her?” “Yes, I did, last week.” “What did she say?” “She numbed something about spending time with her best friend, then she kept quiet. You know she is not very forthcoming.One day she would be become an engineer or doctor."Priya was to appear for the Class X examination in April the next year. This was the month of July and her studies had started in real earnest. Morning six to eight she went for Maths and Physics tuition, and in the evening seven to eight for Chemistry. The next day, Surya happened to discus Priya's strange behaviour with his colleague, Durga, who too had a teenaged daughter. “Surya, you should not take it so lightly. I have an idea. My brother, Ajay, works in a Detective Agency. I will tell him. I am sure he will agree to follow her. Since Priya does not know him, she will not get suspicious.” Surya kept silent for a while, finally agreed. On Wednesday, Surya got a call in the office. “Hello! Surya? This is Ajay?” “Yes, Ajay. Any news?” “Plenty. Can you come to Arts College at 4.30 in the evening?” “Why?” “I will explain when we meet.” Sharp at 4.30, Surya parked his scooter in front of the Arts College Building. Ajay was waiting for him. “Come with me, “he said. They went behind the building and took a path which led to a small Hanuman Temple. Surya had been there with Priya a couple of times and they both quite liked the serenity of the place.When they reached the place, Ajay asked him to quietly look from behind a boulder. 1．續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右； 2．請按如下格式作答。 As Surya looked, he was surprised ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ “I left my paintings in the temple. I want to become a painter.” Priya answered on the sofa. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】As Surya looked, he was surprised. He saw Priya sitting in the small courtyard in front of the temple. There was a canvas in front of her and she was busy painting. A few paint bottles, brushes and drawing sheets were lying around. Beside her were several canvases, Surya was struck by the beauty, the raw energy, of his daughter’s art. Then he left, determined not to disturb her. But why did she spend so much time painting at the approach of the Class X examination? Surya kept wondering until Priya came home that evening. “Why are you late again? Spending time painting? Where are your paintings?” he asked directly. “I left my paintings in the temple. I want to become a painter. Priya answered on the sofa. “I do not mind struggling, even starving to realize my dream. Is it really that wrong to chase one's dream?” Struck by the child's determination, Surya was lost in thought. They always wanted their daughter to study Physics, Chemistry, Maths, Biology,and become an engineer or a doctor.They believed painting couldn't guarantee her bread and butter but engineering or medicine could. Maybe it was time to change. 【解析】本文以人物為線索展開，講述了Surya發(fā)現(xiàn)女兒Priya一直回家很晚，為了弄清楚女兒的這些奇怪行為，他的同事建議讓自己的兄弟Ajay幫助他弄清楚，最后Ajay帶著Surya來到了一所寺廟，發(fā)現(xiàn)女兒在畫畫。 【詳解】 1．段落續(xù)寫： ①由第一段首句內(nèi)容“當(dāng)Surya看著，他感到很驚訝?！笨芍?，第一段可描寫Surya發(fā)現(xiàn)女兒在畫畫，畫的很好，Surya沒有打擾她，等到女兒回家，直接詢問女兒的經(jīng)過。 ②由第二段首句內(nèi)容“‘我把我的畫留在了寺廟里。我想成為一名畫家?！疨riya坐在沙發(fā)上回答道?！笨芍诙慰擅鑼慞riya告訴Surya渴望實(shí)現(xiàn)自己成為畫家的夢想，Surya陷入深思，他們總是想要讓女兒學(xué)習(xí)物理，化學(xué)，數(shù)學(xué)等，想要讓她成為醫(yī)生或者工程師，現(xiàn)在Surya有了改變。 2．續(xù)寫線索：看到女兒畫畫——父親被吸引——詢問——女兒決心實(shí)現(xiàn)夢想——父親反思——做出改變 3．詞匯激活 行為類 ①.忙于做某事：be busy doing sth./be occupied in doing sth. ②.被……吸引：be struck by/be attracted by ③.下定決心做某事：determined to do sth./make up one’s mind to do sth. 情緒類 ???好奇：wonder/ be curious/be full of curiosity 【點(diǎn)睛】 [高分句型1]. Surya kept wondering until Priya came home that evening.（運(yùn)用了until引導(dǎo)時(shí)間狀語從句） [高分句型2]. They believed painting couldn't guarantee her bread and butter but engineering or medicine could.（運(yùn)用了省略連接詞的賓語從句） 8．閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。 A GIFT FOR GRANDPA Summer vacation was coming. Jack and his brother Berlin were filled with excitement as they thought of visiting their grandparents again. The big day came at last. After the happy family got ready, they set out for the grandparents’ eagerly. On the way, the brothers were excitedly talking about the fun they had with grandparents. A little blue house with a tall white chimney finally appeared. Behind the property was the forest carrying their good memories with Grandpa. They arrived at the driveway, at the end of which Grandma was waiting for them joyfully. Jack and Berlin each gave Grandma a big hug and then swept to the living room, shouting excitedly “Grandpa, we are back!” Seeing his grandsons, Grandpa was wild with joy and tried to get up with all his strength from the chair but in vain. A helpless expression flashed on his face. Grandma explained that his health was declining rapidly and maybe couldn’t stand up on his own forever. But Grandpa declared stubbornly (倔強(qiáng)地), “I can!” Certainly, he was stuck in his boyish way. Mum and grandparents were happy to meet again after a long time. They sat together and chatted about what happened recently. The brothers were soon bored with adult conversation, went out and wandered into the forest. Tall trees stretched up to the heavens with large branches crossing each other, while young ones rose straight like soldiers. Grandpa was once a great explorer full of wisdom. He could tell where the birds came from only by their calls and songs. The trees, birds, lizards, lots of bugs...How many merry moments they spent with Grandpa in the kingdom! But now Grandpa couldn't get up. This made them worried. “We’d think out a way to cheer him up.” Jack said. “Grandpa is a bird lover, and we can catch him a bird.” Berlin suggested. “But he hates birds being caged!” Jack shook his head. Then a bright idea came to Jack’s mind. “Why not make a cane (拐杖) out of a young tree!” 注意： 1．續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右； 2．請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。 Berlin thought it was a good idea. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Jack and Berlin handed the cane to Grandpa. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Berlin thought it was a good idea. When the two brothers reached an agreement, they quickly ran back to their grandfather’s house, got the tools they needed to make the cane, and ran back to the woods. Jack said, “What kind of tree should we pick for the walking stick?” Berlin thought for a moment and said, “I think we should choose a straight tree, so no knots will scratch grandpa’s hands.” Jack nodded his head in agreement. They found a straight tree and set to work. They cut the tree down, and with a knife they took the bark off. It was a wonderful tree, which was smooth and was just of the right size. They thought grandpa would love it. ???Jack and Berlin handed the cane to Grandpa. When grandpa took the cane, his hands shook with joy, thinking, “This is made by my grandsons themselves. How precious it is!” Jack said, “Grandpa, we hope this cane will help you stand up and come with us to explore the woods.” Grandpa smiled and decided to give it a try so as not to make his grandchildren disappointed. He held the cane in his right hand and the arm of his chair in his left hand. He stood up with strength on his legs. Everyone was surprised and excited to see grandpa stand up. At that moment, Jack noticed a tear coming from the corner of his grandfather’s eye. 【解析】 本文以人物為線索展開，講述了暑假即將來臨，杰克和他的弟弟柏林去看望祖父母，他們卻發(fā)現(xiàn)爺爺站不起來了，兄弟倆走進(jìn)了森林，杰克突然想到了一個(gè)好主意，就是給爺爺做一根手杖。 【詳解】 1．段落續(xù)寫： ①由第一段首句內(nèi)容“柏林認(rèn)為這是個(gè)好主意。”可知，第一段可描寫兄弟倆怎么做手杖。 ②由第二段首句內(nèi)容“杰克和伯林把手杖遞給爺爺。”可知，第二段可描寫爺爺拿到手杖后的反應(yīng)。 2．續(xù)寫線索：拿工具——做手杖——爺爺嘗試站起來——眾人反應(yīng) 3．詞匯激活 行為類 ①拿：get/fetch ②砍下：cut down/chop down ③站起來：stand up/rise to one’s feet 情緒類 ①高興：joy/delight ②興奮的：excited/thrilled 【點(diǎn)睛】 [高分句型1]When the two brothers reached an agreement, they quickly ran back to their grandfather’s house, got the tools they needed to make the cane, and ran back to the woods.(由when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語從句) [高分句型2]It was a wonderful tree, which was smooth and was just of the right size.(由關(guān)系代詞which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句) 9．閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。 Two months to save my girl’s life As my feet pounded the pavement, sweat dripped down my forehead and back. “Just a little bit further,” I told myself, determined to push forward. Though I’d never been much of a runner, I had a crucial motivation to save my little girl, Bridie. Born in January 2017, she had beautiful big blue eyes. But shortly after her arrival, doctors pointed out that her head was measuring quite large. Within days, she was diagnosed with sagittal craniosynostosis. Doctors explained that she’d need surgery. They also noticed that her limbs and fingers were measuring quite short, so Bridie went through genetic testing to find out why. When the results came back, my wife and I met with the specialist. “Bridie has Mainzer-Saldino syndrome,” he said. He also revealed the rare condition would cause reinal (視網(wǎng)膜的) degeneration, meaning she could go blind and develop kidney (腎) disease. So, when Bridie fell ill in 2019 with common flu, it caused a loss to her little body. Sadly, the medications she needed to help her recover weakened her kidneys even further. By December that year, her specialist revealed they were only functioning at 30 percent. “If it gets any worse, she will need to start dialysis (透析),” he admitted, adding that a transplant might be required sooner than we first thought. It broke my heart, and I knew I had to step up to help save my girl. So I volunteered to give her one of my kidneys right away. After undergoing multiple tests, I was declared a match. But there were still several barriers I had to overcome before I had the all-clear to donate. “You’ll have to lose 15 kilos before we consider you fit to transplant,” the specialist told me in June. He gave me two months to get into shape. At 96.5 kilos, I wasn’t overweight, but I needed to lower my BMI to be fit for the surgery. 注意： 1． 續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右； 2． 請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。 I was determined to do whatever it took to save my little girl. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ In November, the big day finally arrived. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】???????I was determined to do whatever it took to save my little girl. I cut back on beer and pub meals, such as fried chicken and chips, and stuck to eating healthier options, such as lean meat and vegetables instead. I also invested in a new pair of joggers and went running every day. Incredibly, by August, I had managed to lose weight and was given the all-clear to go ahead. In November, the big day finally arrived. Wheeled into operating theatre around 8 am, my nerves were very tense. When I came to several hours later, my wife was there by my side, smiling. Thankfully, Bridie’s surgery was also believed to be a success. After two days, I was finally well enough to visit my precious daughter. I felt so good to see a smile on her face. Our brave girl had more energy with each day that passed. Seeing the smile on our beautiful Bridie’s face makes it all worthwhile. 【解析】 本文以人物為線索展開，講述了作者的女兒患有腎病，需要移植手術(shù)，作者自愿馬上給她一個(gè)腎，但是必須在兩個(gè)月之內(nèi)減掉15公斤。 【詳解】 1．段落續(xù)寫： ①由第一段首句內(nèi)容“我下定決心要不惜一切代價(jià)救我的小女兒。”可知，第一段可描寫作者如何努力減肥。 ②由第二段首句內(nèi)容“11月，這個(gè)大日子終于到來了?！笨芍?，第二段可描寫做手術(shù)及手術(shù)的效果。 2．續(xù)寫線索：健康飲食——跑步——做手術(shù)——手術(shù)成功 3．詞匯激活 行為類 ①減少：cut back on/cut down on ②跑步：go running/go jogging ③進(jìn)手術(shù)室：wheel into operating theatre/enter the operating room ④看望：visit/pay a visit to 情緒類 ①難以置信地：incredibly/unbelievably ②感激地：thankfully/gratefully 【點(diǎn)睛】 [高分句型1]When I came to several hours later, my wife was there by my side, smiling. (由when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語從句和現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語) [高分句型2]Our brave girl had more energy with each day that passed. (由關(guān)系代詞that引導(dǎo)的限制性定語從句) 10．閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。 It was six o’clock when Breanna heard her mother’s phone receive a text message as it’s at on the kitchen bench. “Mum, I bet it’s Dad!” Breanna said and jumped up from the sofa, books spilling out in front of her. She had been deciding which story her dad would read in one of his funny voices for the night. Breanna’s mum rubbed her temples (太陽穴) and sighed softly. “Honey, would you mind seeing if that’s Daddy? I’ve got a bad headache but I want to start cooking a lovely meal for us to enjoy tonight.” “Sure, mum,” Breanna skipped into the kitchen to check the phone. Her dad had been away for two whole nights working on a malfunction (故障) at his company’s warehouse that was at risk of theft. Breanna felt sure he’d been able to act like a superhero and save the day — but did it have to take so long? She picked up the phone and read the message, “Just leaving now — can’t wait to see you both.” Breanna confirmed excitedly, “It’s from Daddy! He’s on his way home!” Her mother managed a weak smile as her daughter clapped her hands with joy. It had been four months since she’d lost her job and with only one income to support the family. Her husband had taken on as many shifts and extra duties as he could to make ends meet. Times were tough and he was working long hours, but it made the time Breanna spent with her daddy even more special. “Oh, that’s wonderful news. Now let’s see what I can find to eat,” her mother rose painfully from the sofa and added. 注意： 1． 續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右； 2． 請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。 “Great! Mum’s got a bad headache but I’m going to help her cook dinner. See you soon!” Breanna sent her dad a quick reply. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Another message from her father drew Breanna’s attention. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 “Great! Mum’s got a bad headache but I’m going to help her cook dinner. See you soon!” Breanna send her dad a quick reply. As Breanna opened the door of the refrigerator, she heard her mother sigh again. The shelves of the refrigerator had been almost empty for too long. Her mother said, “Oh, I think maybe we have tomatoes and carrots tonight, honey. Could you get those out for me?” While her mother pushed two more headache tablets into her hand, Breanna started cutting the carrots, just the way her mother had shown her. Another message from her father drew Breanna’s attention. She stared at the new message: Red, round and sweet, Seed of love and what I love to eat. Her dad loved entertaining her with riddles and rhymes! Was this about dinner? Breanna went through all the fruits she could think of that were red. Suddenly, Breanna remembered a story her father told her about a fruit regarded as a vegetable. It used to be called a love apple and now it is called tomato. Breanna felt very delighted that she got her father’s real message. 【解析】 本文以人物為線索展開，講述了Breanna的爸爸外出加班賺錢，她的媽媽在家準(zhǔn)備晚餐，而她又開始頭疼了，Breanna的爸爸發(fā)來了短信說很快會回來，她很開心，媽媽痛苦地從沙發(fā)上站起來準(zhǔn)備做晚餐。 【詳解】 1．段落續(xù)寫： ①由第一段首句內(nèi)容““太好了！媽媽頭痛得厲害，但我要幫她做飯。再見！”布里安娜很快給她爸爸回了信?！笨芍谝欢慰擅鑼態(tài)reanna幫媽媽準(zhǔn)備做晚飯的食材。 ②由第二段首句內(nèi)容“她父親的另一條信息引起了布里安娜的注意?！笨芍?，第二段可描寫B(tài)reanna的爸爸發(fā)來的是謎題，Breanna猜謎題。 2．續(xù)寫線索：打開冰箱——切胡蘿卜——看到謎題——猜中謎題 3．詞匯激活 行為類 ①打開：open/unfold ②切：cut/chop ③盯著：stare at/gaze at ④得到：get/receive 情緒類 ①嘆氣：sigh/suspire ②高興的：delighted/happy 【點(diǎn)睛】 [高分句型1]While her mother pushed two more headache tablets into her hand, Breanna started cutting the carrots, just the way her mother had shown her.（由連接詞while引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語從句和that引導(dǎo)的定語從句，省略了引導(dǎo)詞that） [高分句型2]Breanna went through all the fruits she could think of that were red.（由關(guān)系代詞that引導(dǎo)的定語從句）

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