Principles and Methds
找出記敘文的6要素：何人(wh)在何時(shí)(when)何地(where)因何原因(why)做了何事(what)，結(jié)果如何(hw)。其中，最重要的要點(diǎn)是某人做了某事。
1.事物描述類：對(duì)象+結(jié)構(gòu)/性質(zhì)+功用2.問題解決類：?jiǎn)栴}+(解決的)方法或措施3.社會(huì)現(xiàn)象類：現(xiàn)象+原因+后果(+措施或建議)
論點(diǎn)+論據(jù)：其關(guān)鍵在于找出主題句或結(jié)論句。若文中有一分為二的觀點(diǎn)，不可漏掉其中任何一方。
Writing Practice
閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容寫一篇60詞左右的內(nèi)容概要。
What is ec-fashin? Ec-fashin is abut making clthes that cnsider the envirnment, the health f cnsumers and the wrking cnditins f peple in the fashin industry. A clser lk at the fashin industry pints ut many prblems that are cmmn practices in the creatin f ur fashins frm the field t the factry.
Firstly, the prductin f textiles(紡織業(yè)) pllutes the envirnment heavily. Cttn-planting uses pesticides(殺蟲劑); sheep-farming and wl-cleaning bring abut glbal warming. Secndly, every stage f clthing prductin cnsumes a great deal f energy and sme als invlve chemicals which bviusly d harm t the surrundings. In additin, there is a lt f waste prduced in the prcess, especially in the frm f plluted water. Thirdly, grwing purchasing pwer and ur shpping habits further wrsen the bad effects. We are nw buying clthes in increasing quantities and we are als quick t thrw away clthes that have been wrn nly a cuple f times.
Then, hw t slve the prblem? T a large degree, it is the fashin prducers that really have the pwer and the respnsibility t shape ur future. There are a great many ways these prducers can reduce their eclgical ftprint, frm switching t green energy and reducing energy use, thrugh selecting sustainable(可持續(xù)的) materials and chsing lcal suppliers, t recycling and minimizing waste. On the ther hand, as cnsumers we can all play ur part by selecting envirnmentally friendly clthing and reducing clthing buying.
There is sme cncern that ec-friendly fashins are just a trend that we will eventually grw tired f but we can make sure that desn't happen. Nw many peple are beginning t shp fr rganic fd prducts because the benefits f eating fd free f chemicals are immediate. They relate directly t ur persnal health. In fact, chsing ec-fashin can als d gd t ur persnal health, thugh it is mstly dne by way f keeping the health f the planet.
Writing Prcess
快速瀏覽全文，了解文章體裁，弄清語篇結(jié)構(gòu)，理解段意和文意。
What is ec-fashin?
... many prblems... Firstly...
hw t slve the prblem?
Paragragh 1：定義環(huán)保時(shí)尚
Paragragh 2：指出時(shí)尚產(chǎn)業(yè)產(chǎn)生的各種問題
Paragragh 3：從消費(fèi)者和生產(chǎn)商兩種角度給出解決辦法
Paragragh 4：環(huán)保時(shí)尚有益于人們與地球的健康
本文簡(jiǎn)要介紹了什么是環(huán)保時(shí)尚，由于時(shí)尚產(chǎn)業(yè)所存在的各種問題，所以作者向生產(chǎn)者和消費(fèi)者提出了解決方法，最后強(qiáng)調(diào)，選擇環(huán)保時(shí)尚對(duì)于個(gè)人和整個(gè)地球來說都是有益的
根據(jù)文本結(jié)構(gòu)，在文中找到并劃出主題句，以及所有能體現(xiàn)內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)的關(guān)鍵詞：說明文跟議論文一樣，主題句一般出現(xiàn)在段首或段尾，或轉(zhuǎn)折處(如hwever, but, in fact等)。
要點(diǎn)2. , the envirnment heavily... Secndly, a great deal f energy... Thirdly, grwing purchasing pwer and ur shpping habits further wrsen the bad effects...
要點(diǎn)4. ... In fact, chsing ec-fashin can als d gd t ur persnal health, thugh it is mstly dne by way f keeping the health f the planet.
用自己的語言將所有要點(diǎn)一個(gè)不漏地表達(dá)出來。
轉(zhuǎn)換：Ec-fashin cncerns the envirnment, cnsumers' health and peple's wrking cnditins when making clthes.
要點(diǎn)1. Ec-fashin is abut making clthes that cnsider the envirnment, the health f cnsumers and the wrking cnditins f peple in the fashin industry.
轉(zhuǎn)換：Varius prblems arise in traditinal fashin prductin, including envirnmental pllutin and energy waste, wrsened by grwing purchasing pwer and shpping habits.
要點(diǎn)2. fashin prblems... Firstly, the envirnment heavily... Secndly, a great deal f energy... Thirdly, grwing purchasing pwer and ur shpping habits further wrsen the bad effects...
轉(zhuǎn)換：T slve the prblem, prducers shuld reduce, reuse and recycle, while cnsumers are suppsed t chse envirnmentally friendly clthes and purchase less.
要點(diǎn)3. Then, hw t slve the prblem? ... prducers can reduce their eclgical ftprint, frm switching t green energy and reducing energy recycling and minimizing waste. On the ther hand, as cnsumers we can... selecting envirnmentally friendly clthing and reducing clthing buying.
轉(zhuǎn)換：Benefiting the health f bth the earth and peple, ec-fashin will surely be a lasting trend.
要點(diǎn)4. There is sme cncern that ec-friendly fashins are just a trend that we will eventually grw tired f but we can make sure that desn't happen. ... In fact, chsing ec-fashin can als d gd t ur persnal health, thugh it is mstly dne by way f keeping the health f the planet.
寫好初稿后，請(qǐng)檢查是否包括了所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，是否準(zhǔn)確使用了相應(yīng)的語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯，是否使用了語句間的連接成分，結(jié)構(gòu)是否緊湊，是否是使用自己的語言，在語言表達(dá)中是否有語法錯(cuò)誤和單詞拼寫錯(cuò)誤，等等。 要檢查無誤后，就要認(rèn)真規(guī)范地謄寫，做到字跡工整，卷面整潔。也要注意計(jì)算詞數(shù)，看是否符合規(guī)定的詞數(shù)要求。
Ec-fashin cncerns the envirnment, cnsumers' health and peple's wrking cnditins when making clthes. (要點(diǎn)1) Varius prblems arise in traditinal fashin prductin, including envirnmental pllutin and energy waste, wrsened by grwing purchasing pwer and shpping habits. (要點(diǎn)2) T slve the prblem, prducers shuld reduce, reuse and recycle, while cnsumers are suppsed t chse envirnmentally friendly clthes and purchase less. (要點(diǎn)3) Benefiting the health f bth the earth and peple, ec-fashin will surely be a lasting trend. (要點(diǎn)4)
Sample Cmmentary
能用自己的語言來有表達(dá)所有這些要點(diǎn)；
Sample Cmmentary
運(yùn)用了較高級(jí)的表達(dá)，如，分詞短語Benefiting the health f bth the earth and peple，連詞+分詞when making clthes，不定式短語T slve the prblem，等等。

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