1.原文一致原則內(nèi)容要前后銜接，上下連貫語(yǔ)言表達(dá)風(fēng)格一致。2.正能量原則故事內(nèi)容一定要正能量，弘揚(yáng)社會(huì)主義核心價(jià)值觀。如迷路了但最終一定回到了家；失敗了或遇到困難了，但最終一定成功了；吵架了但最后一定是言歸于好，和睦相處；犯錯(cuò)了，最后一定會(huì)改過(guò)自新，重新做人；賊逃了，最后一定是繩之以法，等等。3.曲折性原則凡是故事都應(yīng)有跌宕起伏，其中人物會(huì)遇到困難或問(wèn)題，但最終能解決。
閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫(xiě)兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。續(xù)寫(xiě)的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右。
The Make-up Guy Dave was a make-up (化妝) artist wh regularly held makeup artistry classes at the lcal cmmunity cllege. He was well knwn as an excellent trainer and enjyed great ppularity. Usually, the majrity f his students were middle-aged husewives, wh wanted t fine-tune their make-up skills s as t make themselves mre attractive. But this time, it was beynd him that his class was attended by a man as well.
The new student was a gentleman in his best years with a seemingly bundless interest in make-up artistry. He was keen t learn as much as he pssibly culd and asked questins whenever and wherever pssible. He was s absrbed in learning that he wuldn’t stp until he was satisfied with the result f his wrk. Understandably, the man was the number ne subject f cnversatin when the ther wmen were alne.
Speculatins (猜測(cè)) quickly started t spread. Why did he learn make-up? Was he t seek fr a wman t be his life partner? Hw abut my neighbr’s yungest daughter? Why n earth wuld he attend such a wman class? Wh culd it be? Dubts like this came crwding in. The cmmunity cllege was placed in a remte rural area, which was why the ther participants were quite dubtful f the man’s intentins.
Thrughut the lessns, ignring the curius wmen arund him, the man carefully listened and wrte everything dwn he learned, leaving the wmen mre and mre curius and puzzled. When the day and class were slwly cming t an end, the gssiping wmen simply culd nt hide their curisity any lnger, fr they knew it was time t remve their dubts, therwise ?
Finally, ne f them culdn’t resist her curisity, s she picked up the curage and asked him why he was s interested in make-up artistry. What fllwed was a dead silence. After what seemed a century, he slwly pened his muth and here came the mst inspiring beautiful reply.
Paragraph 1:He said his belved wife partially lst her eyesight because f diabetes (糖尿病) and she was n lnger able t apply her make-up. Paragraph 2:S he decided t take the curse t surprise his wife.
主要是根據(jù)記敘文的六要素弄清文章大意，特別要弄清故事的人物，時(shí)態(tài)(通常是一般過(guò)去時(shí))，事件(故事的起因和經(jīng)過(guò))，語(yǔ)言特色(以便在續(xù)寫(xiě)時(shí)語(yǔ)言特色前后一致，保持不變)，等等。
人物時(shí)態(tài)和事件 語(yǔ)言特色不要變
●戴夫是當(dāng)?shù)厣鐓^(qū)大學(xué)的化妝師。●他的學(xué)生大多是中年家庭主婦?！竦且晃患澥砍闪怂男聦W(xué)生，而且學(xué)習(xí)非常努力?！衿渌硕紝?duì)這位紳士很好奇?！褡詈?，其中一個(gè)女士問(wèn)他對(duì)化妝藝術(shù)如此感興趣的理由?！袼f(shuō)出了最動(dòng)人的回答。
● wanted t... s as t make themselves mre attractive.●But this time, it was beynd him that...●He was keen t learn as much as he pssibly...●He was s... that he wuldn’t stp until...●Understandably, ...● Thrughut the lessns, ignring the curius wmen arund him, ...
由續(xù)寫(xiě)的第一段首句與第二段首句確定第一段的框架。
第二段的框架，由第二段首句與正能量結(jié)尾來(lái)確定。
He said his belved wife partially lst her eyesight because f diabetes and she was n lnger able t apply her make-up.（他說(shuō)他心愛(ài)的妻子由于糖尿病而部分失明。）S he decided t take the curse t surprise her.（所以他決定參加這個(gè)課程來(lái)給她一個(gè)驚喜。）
Paragraph 1：1. 由正文末端結(jié)尾可知，這位紳士作了最動(dòng)人的回答。接著由續(xù)寫(xiě)的第一段首句可知，他心愛(ài)的妻子因?yàn)樘悄虿〔糠质?，不能化妝。2. 由第二段首句可知，他決定參加這個(gè)課程來(lái)給她一個(gè)驚喜，說(shuō)明上一段紳士看到了妻子落寞悲傷的樣子，知道了這個(gè)課程后，想要讓她重新振作起來(lái)。 說(shuō)明本段寫(xiě)紳士看到了妻子因?yàn)槭鳠o(wú)法化妝而郁郁寡歡，黯然神傷的樣子。紳士想要幫助妻子走出困境。注意結(jié)尾要與下段語(yǔ)義銜接。
由第一段框架可知，第一段中紳士看到妻子悶悶不樂(lè)，知道了化妝課程后希望有所幫助。那么本段應(yīng)是紳士對(duì)其他女士們的詳細(xì)回答以及妻子的現(xiàn)狀與心情。Paragraph 2：1. 由續(xù)寫(xiě)第二段首句可知，紳士決定參加這個(gè)課程來(lái)給妻子一個(gè)驚喜。2. 由正能量結(jié)尾可知，妻子最終被丈夫感動(dòng)，而紳士也表達(dá)出對(duì)妻子深深的愛(ài)。
在已定框架范圍內(nèi)，依據(jù)情節(jié)發(fā)展和生活常識(shí)，推斷故事中人物所見(jiàn)、所聞、所思、所說(shuō)、所做等給每段增加5至8個(gè)具體細(xì)節(jié)，我們稱之為“58細(xì)節(jié)添加法”。
Paragraph 1He said his belved wife partially lst her eyesight because f diabetes and she was n lnger able t apply her make-up.（他說(shuō)他心愛(ài)的妻子由于糖尿病而部分失明。）
從所給材料結(jié)尾和本段首句可知，紳士向女士們?cè)V說(shuō)了患有糖尿病而部分失明，不能化妝的情況。由下段首句S he decided t take the curse t surprise her.可知紳士知道了這門(mén)化妝課程后決定幫助妻子重現(xiàn)笑容。所以本段應(yīng)是寫(xiě)妻子患病后不能化妝來(lái)展示美貌而愁眉不展，自我封閉的狀態(tài)。紳士決定要幫助她走出來(lái)。因此，本段可以這樣構(gòu)思：
得糖尿病，部分失明害怕嘲笑，自我封閉無(wú)法化妝，心煩意亂愁云慘淡，悲從中來(lái)丈夫心疼，得知課程決心學(xué)藝，有所作為
Paragraph 2S he decided t take the curse t surprise her.（所以他決定參加這個(gè)課程來(lái)給她一個(gè)驚喜。）
從本段首句可知，紳士決定參加化妝課程給妻子驚喜。那么， 本段應(yīng)是寫(xiě)紳士學(xué)會(huì)了化妝技巧以及妻子對(duì)此的反應(yīng)；因?yàn)槭菍?duì)女士們作出最動(dòng)人的回答， 要寫(xiě)出紳士對(duì)妻子的愛(ài)的話語(yǔ)。因此，可以這樣構(gòu)思：
參加課程，給予驚喜不假思索，分享故事掌握技巧，重現(xiàn)美貌被愛(ài)包圍，深受感動(dòng)最美妝容，內(nèi)在閃耀打動(dòng)人心，最為微笑
審讀初稿，注意語(yǔ)義是否銜接，前后是否連貫，事件是否符合邏輯，語(yǔ)言特色是否與前文一致。在修改潤(rùn)色之后，整齊工整地謄寫(xiě)在答卷上。
Paragraph 1
He said his belved wife partially lst her eyesight because f diabetes and she was n lnger able t apply her make-up. Fearing being laughed at, she lcked herself in her rm, abandning herself t great grief. She was abslutely beautiful even withut make-up. But what upset her was that she simply felt nt cmfrtable leaving the hme withut make-up. Sensing her lneliness in a clrless wrld, I was als at a lss as t what t d. Once infrmed f this class, I determined t learn make-up withut hesitatin, hping t make a difference.
Paragraph 2
S he decided t take the curse t surprise her. Withut a pause, he shared his stry. He mastered a wide range f practical skills, allwing him t help her take n a new lk. Surely, being envelped by an atmsphere f lve, his belved wife at present was deeply affected. “I nt nly want t learn hw t apply her make-up, I want her t wear the mst beautiful make-up s her inner beauty als shines n the utside. ” he annunced, “It is her smile that tuches mst my heart, nt the make-up. ”
1.語(yǔ)義銜接：He said ... 與上文語(yǔ)義銜接，表示動(dòng)人故事將循循道來(lái)；I determined t make a difference. 首段最后一句體現(xiàn)紳士希望學(xué)習(xí)化妝課程讓妻子開(kāi)心，與上下文銜接得當(dāng)。第一段寫(xiě)紳士的妻子因?yàn)槭鳠o(wú)法化妝而郁郁寡歡，紳士想要幫助妻子走出困境；第二段寫(xiě)紳士對(duì)其他女士們的詳細(xì)回答以及妻子重拾笑容的現(xiàn)狀，前后一致。2.語(yǔ)言風(fēng)格：Fearing being laughed at和Sensing her lneliness 與材料中的ignring the curius wmen arund him風(fēng)格一致。3.上下連貫：But, Once 和s等表達(dá)，也與所給材料中的But this time, finally和after等風(fēng)格一致。
■紳士的妻子因得糖尿病而部分失明，不能再化妝。因?yàn)楹ε卤蝗顺靶?，也不喜歡素顏出門(mén)，即使丈夫認(rèn)為自己不化妝也漂亮，還是每天在家自我封閉，黯然神傷。后來(lái)紳士知道化妝課程后，為了妻子努力學(xué)習(xí)，最后讓她被愛(ài)包圍，重現(xiàn)笑容，體現(xiàn)故事的曲折性原則?？傊?，范文符合續(xù)寫(xiě)三原則。

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