內容要前后銜接，上下連貫語言表達風格一致。
凡是故事都應有跌宕起伏，其中人物會遇到困難或問題，但最終能解決。
故事內容一定要正能量，弘揚社會主義核心價值觀。如迷路了但最終一定回到了家；失敗了或遇到困難了，但最終一定成功了；吵架了但最后一定是言歸于好，和睦相處；犯錯了，最后一定會改過自新，重新做人；賊逃了，最后一定是繩之以法，等等。
讀后續(xù)寫 閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構成一篇完整的短文。續(xù)寫的詞數(shù)應為150左右。
A farmer grew sme vegetables in his garden. One day his wife was ill and he had n mney. He had t sell sme cabbages and carrts in the market. The next mrning he tk tw baskets f vegetables t twn. But it was raining hard that afternn and there were few peple in the street. When his vegetables were sld ut, it was dark. He bught sme medicine and hurried t his village.
On his way hme he saw a persn lying n the snw. He placed his baskets n the grund and was ging t help the persn t get up. At that time he fund it was a dead man and there was much bld n his bdy. He was s afraid that he ran away quickly, withut taking the baskets with him.
The next afternn the farmer was sent t the plice statin. Having shwn the baskets, an fficer asked, “Are these yurs?”“Yes, sir,” the farmer answered timidly(膽怯地). “Have yu killed the man?” “N, n, sir,” the farmer said in a hurry. “When did yu see the dead man?” “Abut seven last evening.” “Did yu see wh killed the man?” “N, sir.”
The fficer brught ut a knife and asked, “Have yu seen it yet?” “N, sir.”The fficer became angry and tld the pliceman t beat him up and send him int prisn. The fficer wanted t trap the farmer int the cnfessin(供認), but the farmer didn’t admit he was the murderer.Paragraph 1：The fficer was s angry that he asked the pliceman t beat him up again.Paragraph 2：The farmer was lucky. A few days later,…
主要是根據(jù)記敘文的六要素弄清文章大意，特別要弄清故事的人物，時態(tài)(通常是一般過去時)，事件(故事的起因和經過)，語言特色(以便在續(xù)寫時語言特色前后一致，保持不變)，等等。
人物時態(tài)和事件 語言特色不要變
a farmer, his wife, a dead man, an fficer, a pliceman
simple past tense
●A farmer's wife was ill and he had t sell sme cabbages.
●When his vegetables were sld ut, he bught sme medicine and hurried t his village.
●On his way hme he fund a dead man . He was s afraid that he ran away quickly, withut taking the baskets.
● The next afternn the farmer was sent t the plice statin.
● The fficer wanted t trap the farmer int the cnfessin, but he refused t admit he was the murderer.
語言特色1.When his vegetables were sld ut, it was bught sme medicine and hurried t his his way hme he saw a persn lying n the was s afraid that he ran away quickly, withut taking the baskets with that time he fund it was a dead man. 6.Having shwn the baskets, an fficer asked.
兩段首句定一框 由續(xù)寫的第一段首句與第二段首句確定第一段的框架。
二框二首正能量 第二段的框架，由第二段首句與正能量結尾來確定。
The fficer was s angry that he asked the pliceman t beat him up again.（長官很生氣，他要警察再打農夫）The farmer was lucky. A few days later, （農夫很幸運，幾天之后，……）
Paragraph 1：
本段依然是寫農夫在獄中的遭遇、所想、所做。注意結尾要與下段語義銜接。
Paragraph 2：
在已定框架范圍內，依據(jù)情節(jié)發(fā)展和生活常識，推斷故事中人物所見、所聞、所思、所說、所做等給每段增加5至8個具體細節(jié)，我們稱之為叫“58細節(jié)添加法”。
Paragraph 1從所給材料結尾和本段首句可知，農夫繼續(xù)挨打;從下段首句the farmer was luck才會出現(xiàn)轉機，所以本段應是寫農夫在牢中的所遇和所想。因此，本段可以這樣構思：
Paragraph 1:The fficer was s angry that he asked the pliceman t beat him up again.
Paragraph 2:The farmer was lucky. A few days later, …
所遇農夫被打，遍體鱗傷所想想到死刑，非常害怕不是己為，死不承認陳述真相，無人相信寄托希望，有人相救
Paragraph 2從本段首句可知，會出現(xiàn)轉機，上段末農夫希望有人相助，那么， “幾天后”應是有人出現(xiàn)了。從正能量原則可知，兇手被抓，真相大白，農夫妻子病愈。因此，可以這樣構思：
目擊者出現(xiàn)，提供證據(jù)經過調查，真相大白兇手被抓，農夫回家妻子病愈，夫妻相擁
審讀初稿，注意語義是否銜接，前后是否連貫，事件是否符合邏輯，語言特色是否與前文一致。在修改潤色之后，整齊工整地謄寫在答卷上。
Paragraph 1 The fficer was s angry that he asked the pliceman t beat him up again. The farmer was beaten black and blue all ver. Thinking that he wuld be sentenced t death, he felt extremely frightened. But he didn’t kill anyne, and he was inncent. On n accunt did he admit what he didn't d. He must tell peple the truth, but n ne culd hear his vice. Hpefully, smene culd cme and save him.
Paragraph 2 The farmer was lucky. A few days later, a yung man came t the plice statin with a lt f jurnalists, saying that he saw the murderer. It was the plice fficer wh killed the man! He saw the plice fficer kill the man with a knife and then run away late in the evening. After investigatin, what the yung man said was right. The plice fficer was sent int prisn and the farmer was set free. Hurrying hme, the farmer fund his wife recvered frm her illness. They hugged each ther, with tears in their eyes.

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