內(nèi)容要前后銜接，上下連貫,語言表達風(fēng)格一致。
故事內(nèi)容一定要正能量，弘揚社會主義核心價值觀。如迷路了但最終一定回到了家；失敗了或遇到困難了，但最終一定成功了；吵架了但最后一定是言歸于好，和睦相處；犯錯了，最后一定會改過自新，重新做人；賊逃了，最后一定是繩之以法，等等。
凡是故事都應(yīng)有跌宕起伏，其中人物會遇到困難或問題，但最終能解決。
1.讀懂大意，理清脈絡(luò)
讀所給的不完整故事，弄清大意和主題，理清故事的主要人物和事件。
2.細讀首句，構(gòu)思框架
仔細閱讀所給兩段的首句，結(jié)合正能量結(jié)尾，思考大致框架。
3.增加細節(jié)，開始寫作
根據(jù)“所見/遇所想，所為所感”等構(gòu)思具體細節(jié)。
4.修改潤色，整潔謄寫
思考再三，把修正潤色后的續(xù)寫整潔地寫入答卷。
I was blind! It was nly fr six weeks, but it seemed an end f the wrld. During that time, I was in a Clumbus hspital, very scared, very alne, and extremely hmesick fr my husband and five kids. I spent hurs, even days, wndering if I wuld ever be able t see
閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。續(xù)寫的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右。
my children again. I had spent s much time feeling srry fr myself. When the dctr annunced I was getting a rmmate, I was far frm excited. Actually, I didn’t want anyne t “see” me this way. Like it r nt, within a shrt time, my rmmate mved int the bed n the ther side f the rm. Her name was Jni. Hwever, I started liking Jni several days later. She had such a psitive attitude, was always s cheerful, and never cmplained (抱怨) abut her wn illness. She ften said t me jkingly that I was lucky nt t be able t see myself in the mirrr during this time. Whenever I felt scared, Jni culd always get me t laugh with her crazy jkes. Je, my husband, came t visit me smetimes with the five kids. But I never saw anyne visit her.
One evening, Je came alne. Jni must have sensed ur need t be alne. She was s quiet that I wasn’t sure she was in the rm. During my husband’s visit, Je and I talked abut the pssibility that I might never see again. He prmised me that nthing culd change his lve fr me, and we wuld cntinue t raise ur family.
Paragraph 1：After my husband left, I heard Jni stirring(翻身) in her bed. Paragraph 2：After talking with her, I awke frm a deep sleep that night.
主要是根據(jù)記敘文的六要素弄清文章大意，特別要弄清故事的人物，時態(tài)(通常是一般過去時)，事件(故事的起因和經(jīng)過)，語言特色(以便在續(xù)寫時語言特色前后一致，保持不變)，等等。
人物時態(tài)和事件語言特色不要變
●I was blind! It was nly fr six weeks, but it seemed an end f the wrld.
●When the dctr annunced I was getting a rmmate, I was far frm excited.
● Hwever, I started liking Jni several days later. She had such a psitive attitude, was always s cheerful, and never cmplained (抱怨) abut her wn illness.
● During my husband’s visit, Je and I talked abut the pssibility that I might never see again.
I & my husband and five kids && Jni
simple past tense
●我因為生病暫時性失明了一段時間，住在哥倫布醫(yī)院，在這里我認(rèn)識了一個新的室友——珍妮。
●我慢慢了解新室友后，喜歡上喬妮，她總是有著樂觀的態(tài)度，也從不抱怨自己的疾病。她也總是用笑話逗我笑。每次我的丈夫和孩子都來看望我，但是卻沒有人來看望喬妮。
●一天晚上，丈夫來探望我，喬妮知道我們需要獨處而保持安靜，丈夫因為我可能再也見不到他而安慰我。
1.During that time, I was in a Clumbus hspital, very scared, very alne, and extremely hmesick fr my husband and five kids. (adj.補語)2.When the dctr annunced I was getting a rmmate, I was far frm excited. (狀語從句，賓語從句)3.Hwever, I started liking Jni several days later.(連接性副詞)4.Whenever I felt scared, Jni culd always get me t laugh with her crazy jkes. (狀語從句)5.She was s quiet that I wasn’t sure she was in the rm. (狀語從句)6.Je and I talked abut the pssibility that I might never see again. (同位語從句)
兩段首句定一框由續(xù)寫的第一段首句與第二段首句確定第一段的框架。
二框二首正能量第二段的框架，由第二段首句與正能量結(jié)尾來確定。
After my husband left, I heard Jni stirring in her bed. （丈夫走后，我聽見喬妮在床上翻身。）After talking with her, I awke frm a deep sleep that night. （那天晚上，在和她交談之后，我從熟睡中醒來。）
Paragraph 1：
本段是寫作者在丈夫離開后與喬妮展開了些談話，我從喬妮身上看到了新的希望。注意結(jié)尾要與下段語義銜接。
Paragraph 2：
在已定框架范圍內(nèi)，依據(jù)情節(jié)發(fā)展和生活常識，推斷故事中人物所見、所聞、所思、所說、所做等給每段增加5至8個具體細節(jié)，我們稱之為叫“58細節(jié)添加法”。
4.修改潤色，整齊謄寫
審讀初稿，注意語義是否銜接，前后是否連貫，事件是否符合邏輯，語言特色是否與前文一致。在修改潤色之后，整齊工整地謄寫在答卷上。
Paragraph 1 After my husband left, I heard Jni stirring in her bed. When I asked her if she was awake, she said, “Dn’t yu knw hw lucky yu are t have s many peple lving yu? Yur husband and five kids are s beautiful!” At that mment, I realized fr the first time that during ur weeks tgether in the hspital, Jni hadn’t had a husband r child visiting her. Frm her dctr’s visits, I just nly knew she was very sick. Yet she never cmplained and had spent the days f her life giving hpe t me.
Paragraph 2 After talking with her, I awke frm a deep sleep that night. As I lay in bed, tears watered my eyes. I realized that I culd see the brightness f the light with my heart. Even thugh I was nt able t see what Jni lked like, I am sure she is ne f the mst beautiful peple in the wrld. Thanks t Jni, I will never allw myself t lse sight f the imprtant things in family… things like warmth and lve and smetimes even srrw we had t face.
2. Even thugh I was nt able t see what Jni lked like, …
3. …warmth and lve and smetimes even srrw we had t face.

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