同步練習(xí)Part V Writing妙筆生花讀后續(xù)寫閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。??I always wondered how people would react if I tried to approach a total stranger for help in a busy place like a street corner or in a bustling mall. I personally have always hurried past a stranger who tried to catch my attention in a busy place or when I am rushing around. ??Yesterday I had a taste of being stuck in such a desperate situation where my only hope of help would have to come from a total stranger. ??I was in a busy shopping mall buying a large piece of luggage. After the purchase in one of the large，fancy，expensive shops，I picked up my phone from my pocket to call my driver waiting in the parking lot and my phone was dead. ??I then requested the shop assistant who had just sold me the luggage，which was not cheap at all，if she could ring the number of my driver for me. She replied，still all smiles，“I’m sorry，sir，but it is the shop policy that we cannot use mobile phones while working in the shop.”??As I was wondering what kind of policy that was，I saw a nice-looking boy coming towards me. Remembering my wife’s interesting theory that beautiful people are more likely to give you a hand when you’re in trouble，I thought I might have a chance. But before I could say a word，he walked past me. It turned out he simply didn’t see me. ??I waited a bit longer in the mall but it seemed nobody bothered to look at me. Disappointed and tired，I got out of the shop onto the busy street in front. I stood there with people rushing by，looking at their faces to see if there was a sign of kindness. I began wondering how many times I had reacted to strangers like the shop girl and the boy. 注意：續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右。??At that point I saw a young mother with her two kids.                                                                       　                                                                      　??Finally a man wearing a cheap T-shirt and dirty jeans seemed to notice me.                                                                       　                                                                      　　　步驟一：品讀語(yǔ)篇——抓住要點(diǎn)很關(guān)鍵　　前文概要??第一段：作者想知道在繁忙之地向陌生人求助時(shí)，他們會(huì)有何反應(yīng)，而作者自己以前對(duì)于這種求助的反應(yīng)是熟視無(wú)睹、漠不關(guān)心。??第二段：身臨其境，將唯一希望寄托于陌生人。??第三段：在商店購(gòu)買一件很大的行李，當(dāng)與在停車場(chǎng)等候的司機(jī)聯(lián)系時(shí)，手機(jī)沒(méi)電了。??第四段：向商店售貨員尋求幫助，遭拒。??第五段：意欲向經(jīng)過(guò)的男孩求助，遭無(wú)視。??第六段：走出商店到繁華路段，看到匆忙過(guò)往的行人，反思自己遇到這種情況時(shí)的漠不關(guān)心。??步驟二：戴著鐐銬跳舞——研讀首句，高度融合原文，合理想象情節(jié)??①由續(xù)寫第一段所給首句可知，本段緊密銜接原文內(nèi)容，因?yàn)樽髡邚纳痰瓿鋈ミ€是為了獲得陌生人的幫助，以解決無(wú)法與司機(jī)取得聯(lián)系的問(wèn)題，但結(jié)合續(xù)寫第二段給出的提示，顯然第一段作者遇到的a young mother with her two kids并沒(méi)有給作者提供幫助。??② 續(xù)寫第二段所給首句中有個(gè)關(guān)鍵詞finally，正常思維應(yīng)該是作者得到了這個(gè)人的幫助，此處的cheap T-shirt and dirty jeans與原文中的nice-looking形成對(duì)比。??步驟三：斟酌打磨——豐富續(xù)寫詞匯，生動(dòng)描述情節(jié)??話題激活詞匯??情感：angry，anxious，kind，kindness，happy，sad??動(dòng)作：smile，request，wait，walk，help??人生態(tài)度：ignore，warm，cold，serious，friendly，honest，credible??環(huán)境：mall，shop，road，street ??句式翻譯??1. 一個(gè)有著迷人藍(lán)眼睛的漂亮女人一定愿意幫助我。（定語(yǔ)從句） _______________________________________________________________________________________??2. 我迅速朝她走去，臉上掛著得體的微笑。（獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu)） _______________________________________________________________________________________??3. 我禮貌地請(qǐng)求。（主謂狀） _______________________________________________________________________________________??4. 她可能很善良，足以幫我打個(gè)電話。（kind，enough to） _______________________________________________________________________________________??5.我看到的是一張因皺眉而變丑的女人的臉。（過(guò)去分詞作定語(yǔ)） ?  _______________________________________________________________________________________??6. 我聽(tīng)到的是她低聲發(fā)出的驚恐和懷疑的聲音。（主語(yǔ)從句） ?_______________________________________________________________________________________??7. 她把孩子們從我身邊拉開(kāi)，好像被一個(gè)殺人犯嚇著了。（as if） _______________________________________________________________________________________??8. 我仍然站在那里，面無(wú)表情，心往下沉。（with）?  _______________________________________________________________________________________??9. 我擠出一絲微笑并向他提出了同樣的請(qǐng)求。（squeeze，request） _______________________________________________________________________________________??10. 微笑無(wú)法掩飾我的疲倦。（fail to do）? _______________________________________________________________________________________??步驟四：創(chuàng)造性表達(dá)——潤(rùn)色注重細(xì)節(jié)，句式再造升級(jí)??1. 用with介詞短語(yǔ)作定語(yǔ)升級(jí)第1句_______________________________________________________________________________________ ??2. 用if/whether連接第3、4句_______________________________________________________________________________________ ??3. 把第5、6句變?yōu)椴⒘芯?/span>_______________________________________________________________________________________ ??4. 用省略句簡(jiǎn)化第7句_______________________________________________________________________________________ ??5. 用讓步狀語(yǔ)從句連接第9、10句_______________________________________________________________________________________ ??步驟五：高分在即——連句成篇，結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，邏輯銜接?  At that point I saw a young mother with her two kids. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________??Finally a man wearing a cheap T-shirt and dirty jeans seemed to notice me. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Part V Writing參考答案步驟三?  句式翻譯??1. A beautiful woman who has charming blue eyes must be willing to help me. ??2. I walked quickly towards her，an appropriate smile on my face. ??3. I requested politely. ??4. She could be kind enough to make a phone call for me. ??5.What I saw was a woman’s face disfigured by frowning. ??6. What I heard was a sound of panic and suspicion under her breath. ??7. She pulled her kids to escape from me，as if she were scared by a murderer. ??8. I still stood there with a blank face and a sinking heart. ??9. I squeezed a smile and requested him the same thing. ??10. The smile failed to mask my weariness. 步驟四?1. A beautiful woman with charming blue eyes must be willing to help me. ?2. I requested politely if/whether she could be kind enough to make a phone call for me. ?3. What I saw was a woman’s face disfigured by frowning and what I heard was a sound of panic and suspicion under her breath. ?4. She pulled her kids to escape from me，as if scared by a murderer. ?5. I squeezed a smile though it failed to mask my weariness，and requested him the same thing. 步驟五??At that point I saw a young mother with her two kids. I thought that a beautiful woman with charming blue eyes must be willing to help me. So with great expectation，I walked quickly towards her with an appropriate smile on my face，and requested politely if/whether she could be kind enough to make a phone call for me. However，what I saw was a woman’s face disfigured by frowning and what I heard was a sound of panic and suspicion under her breath. Without a word，she pulled her kids to escape from me，as if scared by a murderer. I still stood there with a blank face and a sinking heart. ??Finally a man wearing a cheap T-shirt and dirty jeans seemed to notice me. I squeezed a smile though it failed to mask my weariness，and requested him the same thing. Unexpectedly，he took out his mobile phone for me without hesitation or any further questions. Dancing in his eyes was the real kindness that I had been struggling to seek for so long. From that day on，I began helping other strangers in worry，just like the poor-looking but kind man，with the aim of passing kindness and melting the ice in many people’s hearts. 

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