寫作提示：1. 事件發(fā)生的時間和地點；
2. 事件發(fā)生的時候你在做什么；
3. 事件的重要意義或令你印象深刻的原因。
寫作要求：1. 語句通順，條理清晰，詳略得當，書寫工整；
2. 100詞左右，開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。
An Unfrgettable Event
I have a gd friend. He is n a basketball team. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.
【答案】例文：
An Unfrgettable Event
I have a gd friend. He is n a basketball team. He had a game last Saturday. I prmised t g t cheer him up, but n that day I wke up late. S I made my way t the playgrund in a hurry. While I was running t the bus stp, I saw a wman and she was lst. She was new here and didn't knw the way t the City Hspital, s I tk her there. Finally, when I gt t the playgrund, the game almst ended. I said srry and explained the reasn. He said, "It desn't matter."
I remember this event well because it reminds me f ding what I shuld d at any time.
【詳解】1. 題干解讀：該題目要求以“An Unfrgettable Event”為題作文，根據(jù)所給提示和要求寫一件記憶深刻的事情。
2. 寫作指導：審題可知，這篇短文應(yīng)以第一、三人稱和一般過去時為主來敘述，寫作時要承接開頭，緊緊圍繞提示內(nèi)容，寫清楚何時、何地、何事，為什么難忘，必要時可作合理的補充，最后簡單總結(jié)，照樣全文；做到主題突出，結(jié)構(gòu)完整。
2．學生需要做家務(wù)嗎？某校針對這個問題對200個學生做了一項調(diào)查。請根據(jù)下面的調(diào)查結(jié)果寫一篇報道，開頭已給出。
Is it necessary fr students t d husewrk at hme? We did a survey abut this.
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【答案】例文
Is it necessary fr students t d husewrk at hme? We did a survey abut this. Accrding t the result, we knew mst f the students (abut 70%) thught it was nt necessary fr students t d husewrk. They thught it was the jb f their parents. As students, their duty was t study hard. They had n time t d husewrk because f their heavy hmewrk. On the ther hand, sme students (abut 30%) thught it was gd fr them t d husewrk. Because they culd learn a lt by ding it, and knew hw hard their parents were. I think we students shuld spend sme time n husewrk, n matter hw busy we are.
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇說明文；
②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般過去時”和“一般現(xiàn)在時”；
③提示：要求根據(jù)表格的調(diào)查結(jié)果寫一篇報道，可適當添加細節(jié)，寫作時保持主謂一致。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，首先引出話題，講述調(diào)查結(jié)果；
第二步，具體闡述不同學生的不同觀點；
第三步，表達自己的看法。
[亮點詞匯]
①Accrding t根據(jù)
②have n time t d sth.沒時間做某事
③be gd fr對……有好處
④spend time n sth.花時間在某事上
[高分句型]
①They thught it was the jb f their parents.（賓語從句）
②Because they culd learn a lt by ding it, and knew hw hard their parents were.（原因狀語從句）
③I think we students shuld spend sme time n husewrk, n matter hw busy we are.（賓語從句）
3．假如某報社正在以“We Shuld D Chres at Hme”為題進行征文比賽活動，請你根據(jù)表格中的提示內(nèi)容用英語寫一篇短文參加比賽。
要求：1. 表達準確，語句通順；
2. 短文須包括所有提示內(nèi)容，可適當發(fā)揮；
3. 詞數(shù)80左右。
We Shuld D Chres at Hme
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【答案】例文：
We Shuld D Chres at Hme
Nw many students dn’t like ding chres at hme. There are mainly tw reasns. One is that they think it’s their parents’ jb t d chres at hme. The ther is that they think ding chres takes up their time fr study. But I think we shuld help t d chres at hme because ur parents are busy with their wrk and are ften tired after wrk. I ften d chres at hme, like making the bed, watering the flwers, cleaning the rms, taking ut the rubbish and ding the dishes. I think ding chres makes us relaxing. I als feel great t help my parents.
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”；
③提示：寫作要點已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏表格中給出的關(guān)鍵信息，寫短文表達在家應(yīng)該做家務(wù)這一看法。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，介紹許多學生不愿做家務(wù)這一現(xiàn)象并分析原因；
第二步，介紹自己的觀點并列舉自己常做的家務(wù)；
第三步，談?wù)勛约旱母惺芗翱捶ā?br>[亮點詞匯]
①d chres 做家務(wù)
②ne ... the ther ... 一個……另一個……
③take up 占據(jù)
④be busy with sth. 忙于某事
[高分句型]
①There are mainly tw reasns.（There be句型）
②One is that they think it’s their parents’ jb t d chres at hme.（that引導表語從句；省略that的賓語從句；it固定句式）
③But I think we shuld help t d chres at hme because ur parents are busy with their wrk and are ften tired after wrk.（because引導的原因狀語從句）
4．某中學生英文報社開展了主題為“如何與父母和諧相處”的征文大賽。作為一名初中生，你一定有自己的思想與辨別是非的能力，但你是否曾想過應(yīng)該怎樣和自己的父母相處呢？請以“Hw t Get n Well with Our Parents?”為題寫一篇短文參加此次征文大賽。
要點提示：
1. 與父母和諧相處很重要；
2. 與父母和諧相處的做法或建議；
(1)理解與尊重父母；
(2)多與父母交流。
(3)與父母和諧相處的感受。
要求：
1. 短文應(yīng)緊扣要點，但不要逐字翻譯，可適當發(fā)揮，以使短文銜接、連貫；
2. 詞數(shù)80-100。
Hw t Get n Well with Our Parents?
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【答案】參考范文
Hw t Get n Well with Our Parents?
It’s very imprtant fr us t get n well with ur parents. But hw can we get alng well with ur parents? Here is sme f my advice.
We shuld understand and respect ur parents. Parents talk much because they care abut us. We are suppsed t listen t them. When we want t tell them ur pinins, we’d better be in a plite way. We shuld als talk with them abut ur happiness and tell them abut ur prblems. When we are free, we’d better help them d sme things.
I get n well with my parents. I enjy sharing everything with my parents. My parents are like my best friends. They are prud when I d smething well and they try their best t help me when I have truble. We lve each ther.
Let’s get n well with ur parents because they are ur parents.
【詳解】1. 題干解讀：本文是一篇材料作文。談?wù)勅绾魏妥约旱母改赶嗵?，根?jù)所給提示信息，寫一篇短文，要求緊扣要點，可適當發(fā)揮。
2. 寫作指導：本文要求圍繞如何與父母和睦相處為題寫一篇文章參加征文大賽，所以人稱以第一人稱為主。時態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時為主。寫作時可以分三個方面來寫：文章開頭先點明主題；然后介紹與父母和諧相處的具體建議；接著介紹自己與父母和諧相處的感受；最后總結(jié)全文，前后呼應(yīng)。
5．假如你是李華，你的網(wǎng)友Peter打籃球時意外受傷，請根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容是示，用英語給Peter寫一封電子郵件。
提示：1. 詢問病情并提出建議；
2. 介紹一下你學校的近期活動；
3. 表達祝愿。
要求：80詞左右，開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。
Dear Peter,
I’m srry t hear that yu gt injured while playing basketball.
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Hpe yu’ll get better，and be back t yur schl as sn as pssible.
Best wishes!
Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】One pssible versin:
Dear Peter,
I’m srry t hear that yu gt injured while playing basketball. Hw are yu feeling nw? I think yu shuld have a gd rest at hme. And yu’d better take care f yurself when yu d sprts.
Everything ges well here! I enjy great changes in my schl. Nw, the teachers make their teaching styles clrful. In my science class, my teacher always encurages us t think, and cultivates ur ability t study independently. In additin, we have plenty f time t try what we want t d. We had ur Schl Day last week. There were different kinds f activities, such as the speech cntest, the talent shw, vlunteering…I tk part in the English speech cntest, and I wn the first prize. I will send yu sme phts abut my Schl Day if yu like.
Hpe yu’ll get better, and be back t yur schl as sn as pssible.
Best wishes!
Yurs,
Li Hua
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇應(yīng)用文，為電子郵件；
②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時和一般過去時”；
③提示：寫作要點已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏，適當增加細節(jié)完整表述內(nèi)容。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，詢問病情并給出建議；
第二步，介紹一下你學校的近期活動。
[亮點詞匯]
①encurage sb t d sth鼓勵某人做某事
②in additin另外
③plenty f許多
④such as例如
⑤win the first prize獲得了一等獎
[高分句型]
①I think yu shuld have a gd rest at hme（省略that的賓語從句）
②There were different kinds f activities, such as the speech cntest, the talent shw, vlunteering（there be句型）
6．請你根據(jù)提示及要求，以Let’s help ur parents d chres為題，寫一篇英文倡議書。
要點提示：
（1）父母工作繁忙，我們應(yīng)該分擔家務(wù)；
（2）我們可以做的家務(wù)有：整理床鋪、打掃房間，洗衣服，洗餐具、倒垃圾等。
寫作要求：
（1）包括所有要點提示，可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
（2）80詞左右 (開頭結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù))。
Let’s help ur parents d chres
Dear students,
Helping ur parents d chres is ne f the best ways t care abut them._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Ding chres is nt difficult, but it means a lt. Frm nw n, let’s help ur parents d chres.
【答案】例文
Let’s help ur parents d chres
Dear students,
Helping ur parents d chres is ne f the best ways t care abut them. Our parents are always busy with wrk. They are tired after wrk, but they still have t d chres. If we help them d sme chres, they will have mre time t rest. And sharing husewrk can help us understand ur parents better. S we shuld help them d husewrk as much as we can. In fact, we can d lts f husewrk at hme. Fr example, we culd make the bed, clean up the rm, wash clthes, d the dishes and take ut the trash.
Ding chres is nt difficult, but it means a lt. Frm nw n, let’s help ur parents d chres.
【詳解】1.題干解讀：題目要求以“Let’s help ur parents d chres”為題，根據(jù)寫作要點寫一篇倡議書，可適當增加細節(jié)。
2.寫作指導：首先第一部分，指明要幫助父母做家務(wù)的原因以及做家務(wù)的好處，此處人稱主要為第三人稱；其次第二部分，談?wù)勎覀內(nèi)粘Ｉ钪锌梢宰龅募覄?wù)有哪些，此處人稱主要為第一人稱；最后總結(jié)感受，此處文章已給出結(jié)尾。全文時態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時，行文時要涵蓋要點提示，表達準確，思路清晰，層次分明。
7．假如你是夏華，你所在學校將于“五一”假期帶領(lǐng)學生去農(nóng)場體驗勞動生活。請根據(jù)一下提示內(nèi)容，寫一封60詞左右的郵件向你的外國筆友Mike介紹你們的計劃。要點如下：
1.8:00乘坐校車出發(fā)，8:30左右到達農(nóng)場。
2.男生們給雞喂食，女生們摘蘋果，然后共同去擠牛奶。
3.你們將見到其它學校的學生，并且交很多新朋友。
4.繁重的勞作之后，你們將一起野餐。
5.通過這次活動，你學會了……
參考詞匯：
給雞喂食 feed the chickens 摘蘋果 pick apples 擠牛奶 milk the cws
Dear Mike,
Tday I want t tell yu smething abut ur schl’s farm trip n May Day.
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Yurs,
Xia Hua
【答案】Dear Mike,
Tday I want t tell yu smething abut ur schl’s farm trip n May Day. We will take the schl bus at 8:00 and arrive at the farm arund 8:30.
When we get there, we are ging t busy wrking n the farm. First, we have a plan that bys will feed the chickens, girls will pick apples, and then g t milk the cws tgether in a cperative way. Then we will meet students frm ther schls and make many new friends. After hard wrk, we will have a picnic tgether.
All in all, I firmly believe that we will have a gd time. Nt nly will we make kinds f friends, but als we will experience the life n a farm by urselves.
Yurs,
Xia Hua
【詳解】
[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一封郵件；
②時態(tài)：時態(tài)以“一般將來時”為主；
③提示：寫作要點已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏，適當增加細節(jié)，并突出寫作重點。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，寫作意圖開頭已給出，寫作時可直接介紹具體內(nèi)容。
第二步，具體闡述寫作內(nèi)容，主要圍繞“出發(fā)和到達的時間”、“到了之后的具體安排”展開，適當補充，豐富細節(jié)。
第三步，書寫結(jié)語，寫自己的感悟。
[亮點詞匯]
①arrive at 到達
②be busy ding sth忙于做某事
③milk the cws擠牛奶
④make friends交朋友
⑤have a picnic野餐
⑥All in all總之
⑦have a gd time玩得開心
⑧nt nly…but als…不僅……而且……
[高分句型]
①When we gt there, we are ging t busy wrking n the farm. (when引導的時間狀語從句)
②All in all, I firmly believe that we will have a gd time. (that引導的賓語從句)
③Nt nly will we make kinds f friends,but als we will experience the life n a farm by urselves. (倒裝句)
8．參加志愿者服務(wù)活動可以幫助青少年學習新技能，增強溝通能力和社會責任感。暑假將至，請根據(jù)下面表格中的內(nèi)容提示，以“My Vlunteer Wrk Plan”為題寫一篇英語短文，介紹你選擇的活動項目及活動計劃，并談?wù)剠⒓又驹刚叻?wù)活動的意義。
要求：
1.可選擇表格中的1—2個活動項目，也可自擬活動項目。
2. 語句通順，意思連貫，詞數(shù)80—100。
My Vlunteer Wrk Plan
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【答案】One pssible versin：
My Vlunteer Wrk Plan
The summer hliday is cming. I am ging t d sme vlunteer wrk. I will help t clean up the city parks. Of curse, I will ask mre peple t jin me. I will call up my friends and ask them t cme. We will pick up the litter, the plastic bags and ther waste things. I hpe ur city will be mre beautiful. Besides, I am ging t visit sick kids in hspital. I lve children and enjy getting alng with them. I will sing fr the kids at the city hspital t cheer them up. I hpe they can be better sn.
Nt nly d I feel gd abut helping ther peple, but als I get t spend time ding what I lve t d. All in all, I will enjy myself during the summer hliday.
【詳解】
[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②時態(tài)：時態(tài)以“一般將來時”為主；
③提示：寫作要點已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏，適當增加細節(jié)，并突出寫作重點。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，開門見山，寫出假期計劃是做志愿工作；
第二步，具體闡述寫作內(nèi)容，主要圍繞“在城市圖書館幫忙”、“舉辦一個慈善義賣活動”、“去養(yǎng)老院”等展開，適當補充，豐富細節(jié)；
第三步，書寫結(jié)語，表達做志愿工作的收獲和感受。
[亮點詞匯]
①be ging t d sth 打算做某事
②help t d sth 幫助做某事
③clean up 打掃
④ask sb t d sth 叫某人去做某事
⑤call up 召集
⑥pick up 撿起
⑦enjy ding sth 喜歡做某事
⑧get alng with sb 和某人相處
⑨Nt nly…but las…不僅……而且……
⑩enjy neself 玩得開心
[高分句型]
①I hpe ur city will be mre beautiful.（省略that的賓語從句）
②Nt nly d I feel gd abut helping ther peple, but als I get t spend time ding what I lve t d.(倒裝句和賓語從句)
9．助人為樂是中華民族的傳統(tǒng)美德，作為中學生，我們應(yīng)該樂于做好人好事。請以“Helping Others Makes Me Happy”為題，寫一篇60—80詞的短文，與大家分享一下你做好人好事的感受。
1．要點提示：(1)確定“助人為樂”這一主題；
(2)圍繞這個主題，介紹或描述某一事例及感受；
(3)總結(jié)自己的觀點。
2．時態(tài)： 一般現(xiàn)在時。
3．人稱： I/we。
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【答案】例文
Helping Others Makes Me Happy
We all knw that everyne needs help. S it is necessary fr every ne f us t help thers.
As fr me, I ften help t clean up the classrm. When I sit in the nice and clean classrm, I feel cmfrtable. In my neighbrhd, I usually help the ld hld heavy things while walking tgether with them. I really feel happy when they say thanks t me.
I want t d mre fr peple arund. I think if peple help each ther, ur wrld will be a big family full f lve.
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②時態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時；
③提示：寫作要點已給出，考生注意不要遺漏要點，并適當添加細節(jié)，突出重點。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，點明主題；
第二步，介紹自己做過的好人好事，并表達自己的感受；
第三步，表達自己的觀點。
[亮點詞匯]
①as fr關(guān)于
②clean up打掃
③say thanks t sb向某人道謝
[高分句型]
①We all knw that everyne needs help.（that引導賓語從句）
②When I sit in the nice and clean classrm, I feel cmfrtable./ I really feel happy when they say thanks t me.（when引導的時間狀語從句）
③I think if peple help each ther, ur wrld will be a big family full f lve.（賓語從句；if引導的條件狀語從句）
10．請結(jié)合你了解的健康知識，寫一篇題目為“The Ways t Keep Healthy”的短文。
注意：
1. 語言表達要準確，內(nèi)容要客觀；
2. 詞數(shù)60—80。
參考詞匯：balanced diet 飲食平衡； stay up 熬夜
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【答案】例文
The Ways t Keep Healthy
Health is very imprtant t every ne f us. S it is necessary t knw the ways t keep healthy.
We shuld have a balanced diet. Fruit and vegetables are gd fr health, s we shuld eat lts f fruit and vegetables. Dn’t eat t much every meal. And we shuld exercise every day t keep strng. We shuld als sleep fr abut 8 hurs at night. Remember, it’s nt gd t stay up t late.
If we fllw the advice, I am sure we can keep healthy.
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇話題作文；
②時態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時；
③提示：題目已給出，圍繞“保持健康”寫一篇60—80字的文章。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，開門見山，首先介紹健康的重要性；
第二步，具體闡述保持健康的方法，從飲食及鍛煉兩方面展開；
最后一步，總結(jié)全文。
[亮點詞匯]
①keep healthy 保持健康
②be gd fr 對……有好處
③fllw the advice遵循建議
[高分句型]
①S it is necessary t knw the ways t keep healthy.（it作形式主語，不定式作真正主語）
②If we fllw the advice, I am sure we can keep healthy.（If引導條件狀語從句）
11．以“An Accident”為題并根據(jù)下面的提示，請寫一篇記敘文。
提示：
1. 我喜歡和同學一起踢足球。
2. 但上周六我摔了一跤，一條腿嚴重受傷。
3. 同學們送我去了醫(yī)院。我在住院期間……(發(fā)揮想象，適當表達)
4. 感謝同學們幫了我，今后我也會……(發(fā)揮想象，適當表達)
要求：
1. 句子通順，條理清晰，無語法、單詞拼寫及標點符號錯誤。
2. 所寫短文與提示內(nèi)容相符。
3. 詞數(shù)：80詞左右。
An Accident
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【答案】例文
An Accident
I like playing ftball with my classmates. But last Saturday, I fell dwn and hurt ne f my legs badly when we played tgether. My classmates tk me t the hspital quickly. The dctr put sme medicine n the cut, and then put a bandage arund the hurt part f the leg.
During my stay in the hspital, sme f my classmates visited me and helped me with my schlwrk. That’s very kind f them. I will try my best t help thers in the future.
【詳解】[總體分析]
① 題材：本文是一篇記敘文，為材料作文；
② 時態(tài)：時態(tài)以“一般過去時”為主；
③ 提示：寫作要點已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏“信息提示”中每一項內(nèi)容，適當添加細節(jié)，并突出寫作重點。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，介紹自己喜歡和同學踢足球；
第二步，具體闡述上周六發(fā)生的事故；
第三步，最后表達對同學的感謝以及今后自己也會怎么做。
[亮點詞匯]
①fall dwn跌倒
②help sb with sth幫助某人某事
③try ne’s best t d盡某人最大的努力做
[高分句型]
I fell dwn and hurt ne f my legs badly when we played tgether. （when引導的時間狀語從句）
12．許多孩子喜歡吃零食，這是導致他們肥胖的主要原因之一。英語課上，老師引導學生就吃零食這一問題展開討論。請你參考以下提示寫一篇英語短文，簡要談?wù)勀愕目捶ā?br>提示：
1. 吃零食是一種壞習慣；
2. 科學家們說有些零食含有大量的脂肪和糖，人們攝取的脂肪和糖越多，越容易發(fā)胖。
要求：
1. 80詞左右；
2. 可適當補充細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。
參考詞匯：snack n.零食 take in攝取 verweight adj.肥胖的；超重的
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【答案】例文
Mst f the students in ur class like eating snacks. I think it’s a bad habit. Snacks are delicius, but they are bad fr ur health if we eat lts f them. D yu knw why? Scientists say sme snacks have t much fat and sugar. The mre fat and sugar we take in, the mre easily we will becme fat. Becming verweight can cause a lt f health prblems and even illnesses. S in rder t keep healthy, we shuldn’t eat lts f snacks.
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇材料作文，為議論文；
②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”；
③提示：寫作要點已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏作文提示里的要點，適當添加細節(jié)，并突出寫作。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，表明寫作意圖。借用“大多數(shù)學生都吃零食”來引出重點介紹的內(nèi)容；
第二步，具體闡述寫作內(nèi)容。從“吃零食有害健康、科學家論證等”幾個方面介紹具體情況；
第三步，書寫結(jié)語。呼吁大家少吃零食，保持健康。
[亮點詞匯]
①bad habit壞習慣
②delicius美味
③be bad fr對……有害
④verweight超重
⑤health prblems健康問題
[高分句型]
①the mre fat and sugar we take in, the mre easily we will becme fat. (“the+比較級，the+比較”句型）
②S in rder t keep healthy, we shuldn’t eat lts f snacks. (“in rder t”引導目的狀語)
13．暑假中，Le喜歡玩手機游戲，最近他的脖子有點難受。假如你是Le的朋友Denny，請你寫一封信，幫Le分析一下他的問題，并就此提出幾點建議。
提示：（1）久坐不動有害健康；
（2）注意休息；
（3）適當增加鍛煉。
詞數(shù)：不少于80；開頭、結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。
要求：語句通順，不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名、校名等相關(guān)信息。
Dear Le,
I am srry t hear abut yur prblems. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
If yu fllw all these tips, yu’ll be better sn!
Yurs truly,
Denny
【答案】【參考范文】
Dear Le,
I am srry t hear abut yur prblems. As we knw, health is very imprtant t all f us.
Yu shuldn’t play the mbile phne games all the time. It is harmful t sit in the same way fr t lng withut mving. Since yu have sme prblems with yur neck, yu shuld stp playing the mbile phne games first. Then yu shuld take breaks after yu play with yur phne. Besides, exercise can help yu keep healthy. S try t take mre exercise. If yu still have a bad neck pain, yu shuld see a dctr.
If yu fllw all these tips, yu’ll be better sn!
Yurs truly,
Denny
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”；
③提示：寫作要點已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏題干和提示中對Le的問題分析和建議，適當添加細節(jié)，并突出寫作重點。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，緊接首段，指出健康的重要性
第二步，指出Le的問題在于長時間玩手機游戲，久坐不動；
第三步，針對Le的問題提出具體的建議；
[亮點詞匯]
①all the time 總是
②have sme prblems with 有問題
③take breaks 休息
[高分句型]
①It is harmful t sit in the same way fr t lng withut mving.（運用句型：It is adj. t d“做某事是……的”）
②Since yu have sme prblems with yur neck, yu shuld stp playing the mbile phne games first.（since引導原因狀語從句）
③If yu still have a bad neck pain, yu shuld see a dctr.（if引導條件狀語從句）
14．假如你是李華，你在美國的筆友David要來中國參觀，向你詢問有關(guān)中國的天氣情況以及來中國的最好時間等。請你根據(jù)提示給你的筆友寫一封郵件，介紹一下中國的氣候特點，并為他的參觀提供一些建議。
要點提示：
1. Hw many seasns are there in yur cuntry?
2. What’s the weather like in each seasn?
3. What’s yur advice?
寫作要求：
1. 參考提示信息，可適當發(fā)揮；
2. 語句通順，意思連貫，書寫工整；
3. 文中不得出現(xiàn)你的任何真實信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；
4. 詞數(shù)：不少于70詞。（開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，但不計入總詞數(shù)。）
Dear David,
I’m very glad that yu will cme t visit China. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】例文：
Dear David,
I’m very glad that yu will cme t visit China.
Yu asked me abut the weather in China. There are fur seasns — spring, summer, autumn and winter. Summer is the httest seasn f the year. It ften rains heavily. And winter is the cldest. Smetimes it snws, especially in the nrth f China. If yu like snw, yu can cme at this time f year. But I think the best time t visit China is in spring r autumn because the weather is nt cld r ht. It’s very pleasant t visit many places f interest in China, such as the Great Wall, the West Lake and Munt Tai.
I hpe yu can cme sn.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇應(yīng)用文，為電子郵件；
②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”；
③提示：寫作要點已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏要點提示中的關(guān)鍵信息，寫郵件介紹中國的氣候特點，給筆友提供一些建議。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，對筆友的到來表示歡迎；
第二步，介紹中國的氣候特點并給筆友一些建議；
第三步，期待對方的到來。
[亮點詞匯]
①places f interest 名勝古跡
②such as 例如
[高分句型]
①There are fur seasns — spring, summer, autumn and winter. Summer is the httest seasn f the year.（there be句型）
②If yu like snw, yu can cme at this time f year.（if引導條件狀語從句）
15．請根據(jù)漢語提示寫一篇英語短文：
寒假來臨，你的英國朋友Mike計劃來中國做客。請你寫信給他介紹一下中國的情況，例如：天氣、人口、傳統(tǒng)習俗等等。
注意：1. 詞數(shù)：80左右；
2. 可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3. 文中不能出現(xiàn)真實的學校及學生名字。
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【答案】例文
Dear Mike,
I am glad t knw that yu will cme t China as a guest. Let me intrduce China t yu.
It’s winter nw. It’s very cld, s yu shuld bring warm clthes. China has 1.4 billin peple. And Chinese peple are very welcming. There are als many traditinal custms in China. Fr example, yu shuld shake hands when yu meet smene fr the first time. When eating in a Chinese family, yu shuld let the elderly eat first. Secnd, yu can’t beat the bwl with chpsticks. When yu have fd in the muth, yu’d better nt speak.
Chinese peple are very friendly. If yu have a prblem, yu can ask them fr help. Finally, I hpe yu have a pleasant trip in China.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【詳解】[總體分析]
① 題材：本文是一篇書信作文；
② 時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”；
③ 提示：寫作要點已給出，注意不要遺漏信息，適當添加細節(jié)，并突出寫作重點。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，表達自己很高興聽說對方要來中國做客；
第二步，介紹一下中國的情況；
第三步，最后希望對方過得愉快。
[亮點詞匯]
① Fr example比如
② shake hands握手
③ ask sb fr help向某人求助
[高分句型]
① When eating in a Chinese family, yu shuld let the elderly eat first.y.（when引導的時間狀語從句）
② If yu have a prblem, yu can ask them fr help.（if引導的條件狀語從句）
16．現(xiàn)在，中學生周末的活動也安排得很滿。下面表格中是Mary的周末活動安排。在下列時間段你正在做什么？請你寫一篇70詞左右的英語短文，描述自己的活動安排。
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【答案】One pssible versin:
While Mary was reading English, I was listening t English tapes. At 10:00, while she was ding math hmewrk, I was watching TV. Because my favrite prgram was n at that time. After that I had lunch with my parents. Frm 14:00 t 15:30, I had a pian lessn with Mary. Bth f us like playing the pian. But at 16:00 while Mary was visiting her friends, I was ding my hmewrk.
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇記敘文，為材料作文；
②時態(tài)：時態(tài)以“過去進行時”為主；
③提示：寫作要點在表格中已給出，考生注意不要遺漏要點，并注意適當添加細節(jié)，突出寫作要點。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，介紹瑪麗在各個時間點做的事；
第二步，介紹自己在上述時間點做的事。
[亮點詞匯]
①listening t English tapes聽英語磁帶
②had a pian lessn上鋼琴課
[高分句型]
①While Mary was reading English, I was listening t English tapes.（“While”引導時間狀語從句）
②Because my favrite prgram was n at that time.（“Because”引導原因狀語從句）
17．假如你是李華，下表是你和你的家人昨天晚上八點的活動。請你根據(jù)表格內(nèi)容，介紹一下你們昨晚八點各自的活動內(nèi)容，并對活動進行適當描述。
要求：
1. 語句通順、語法正確，要適當發(fā)揮；
2. 不少于70詞。
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【答案】例文：
At eight ’clck yesterday evening, my family were busy. At that time, my father was reading a newspaper because he likes reading newspapers in the evening. My brther was watching TV. He was watching an interesting cartn mvie. My mther was calling her friend up. They were talking happily n the telephne. I had a lt f hmewrk t d. S I was busy ding my hmewrk at that time. Anyway, we were all happy.
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②時態(tài)：過去進行時為主；
③提示：寫作要點已給出，考生注意不要遺漏要點，并適當添加細節(jié)，突出重點。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，引出主題，介紹昨晚八點家人活動內(nèi)容；
第二步，細節(jié)介紹家人活動內(nèi)容。
[亮點詞匯]
①call up打電話
②busy ding sth.忙于做某事
[高分句型]
At that time, my father was reading a newspaper because he likes reading newspapers in the evening.（because引導的原因狀語從句）
18．假設(shè)你是李華，最近你的美國筆友Tny在與同學的交往中遇到了煩惱，他寫郵件向你尋求幫助。請你給他回一封郵件，提出你的一些建議。要求：詞數(shù)60—80。
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【答案】Dear Tny,
I’m srry t hear that yu have prblems with yur classmates. I’m glad t help yu. Here are sme suggestins fr yu.
First, when yu have difficulties, yu shuld talk t yur parents, yur teachers r yur friends. Please share yur sadness and happiness with them. They will help yu wrk ut the prblems.
Secnd, when yu get alng with yur friends, yu shuld respect them.
Third, yu shuld be friendly t peple arund yu. Yu can help each ther.
Last but nt least, yu have t be hnest t yur friends. Then yu will make mre friends.
I hpe everything will g well with yu sn.
Yurs.
Li Hua
【詳解】[總體分析]
① 題材：本文是一篇電子郵件；
② 時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”；
③ 提示：寫作內(nèi)容提示已給出，考生要注意不要遺漏內(nèi)容提示中的信息，并且要在內(nèi)容提示的基礎(chǔ)上適當發(fā)揮，使文章內(nèi)容更加豐滿。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，表示對Tny問題的同情，并引出下文的建議；
第二步，陳述自己的建議，這一部分可以自己自由發(fā)揮，只要合情合理即可；
第三步，表達自己的祝愿。
[亮點詞匯]
① have prblems with sb.和某人有問題，和某人有沖突
② share sth. with sb. 和某人分享某物
③ wrk ut解決
④ get alng with sb.和某人相處
⑤ last but nt least最后但同樣重要的是
[高分句型]
① First, when yu have difficulties, yu shuld talk t yur parents, yur teachers r yur friends.（when引導的時間狀語從句）
19．我們在這個世界上最親的人是父母，他們給予了我們生命，含辛茹苦地撫養(yǎng)我們長大。請根據(jù)以下提示以“Care fr ur parents”為題，聯(lián)系實際，適當發(fā)揮，寫一篇不少于80詞的短文。
提示：父母盡力給我們提供最好的生活和教育；希望父母鍛煉身體，保持健康；主動幫助父母做家務(wù)。
提示詞：ffer…t… 為……提供……
Care fr ur parents
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【答案】例文：
Care fr ur parents
Our dear parents, yu lve us mre than anybdy else in the wrld. As yur children, hw shuld we care fr yu? Yu have tried t ffer the best life and educatin t us, s yu are very tired and have t much pressure. T keep healthy, yu shuld d mre exercise. Yu shuldn’t stay up s that yu can get enugh sleep. Yu shuld als eat healthy fd.
Learning t care fr ur parents is what we shuld d. First, we can help d mre husewrk. Secnd, we shuld respect them and get n well with them. Third, we shuld study hard and try nt t make them wrry abut us.
We lve yu, ur parents.
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”；
③提示：寫作要點已給出，考生注意不要遺漏“要點”中主要幫助父母做家務(wù)，注意不要遺漏要點。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，開篇點題，表明父母很愛我們，我們應(yīng)該關(guān)心父母；
第二步，具體介紹如何關(guān)心父母以及我們能為父母做的事情；
第三步，書寫結(jié)語，表達我們愛我們的父母。
[亮點詞匯]
①t much太多
②keep healthy保持健康
③get n well with sb.與某人友好相處
④wrry abut擔心
[高分句型]
①Yu shuldn’t stay up s that yu can get enugh sleep. （s that引導狀語從句）
②Learning t care fr ur parents is what we shuld d.（動名詞短語作主語；what引導表語從句）
20．哈佛大學的一項研究表明，愛做家務(wù)的孩子更容易體驗到幸福感。請你以“Help with Sme Husewrk”為題寫一篇100詞左右的英語短文，描述你平時所做的家務(wù)以及你對做家務(wù)的看法。
提示：
Help with Sme HusewrkIt is reprted that children wh lve ding chres have a better future and are easy t feel happy. As fr me, I
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【答案】例文：
Help with Sme Husewrk
It is reprted that children wh lve ding chres have a better future and are easy t feel happy. As fr me, I usually sweep the flr, take ut the rubbish, wash my clthes and d the dishes at hme.
Different peple have different pinins abut this. Sme peple say that there is n need t d husewrk. They think it’s a waste f time. In my pinin, it’s quite imprtant fr children t d sme husewrk. Firstly, it can develp ur independence. Children depend n their parents t much. If we learn t d husewrk, we can take care f urselves when we get lder in the future. Secndly, it’s nt just parents’ jb t prvide a clean and cmfrtable envirnment at hme. Everyne shuld play a part in ding husewrk.
【詳解】［總體分析］
①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②時態(tài)：本文時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”；
③提示：注意表明自己的觀點，材料所給內(nèi)容不得遺漏，可適當發(fā)揮，語意要通順，無拼寫和語法錯誤。
［寫作步驟］
第一步，介紹自己平時做的家務(wù)活；
第二步，自己的看法；
［亮點詞匯］
① a waste f time浪費時間
② In my pinin 以我的觀點
［高分句型］
① If we learn t d husewrk, we can take care f urselves when we get lder in the future. （條件狀語從句）
有必要（30%）
沒有必要（70%）
1. 多數(shù)學生不會千家務(wù)活。
1. 學生的任務(wù)是學習而不是勞動。
2. 做家務(wù)可以鍛煉吃苦耐勞的精神。
2. 學習任務(wù)繁重，沒有做家務(wù)的時間。
3. 做家務(wù)可以體驗父母的艱辛。
3. 做家務(wù)活是父母的事情。
你的看法：……
現(xiàn)存現(xiàn)象
你常做的家務(wù)
你的體會和看法
許多學生不愿做家務(wù)，原因如下：
1. 認為做家務(wù)是父母的工作；
2. 做家務(wù)占用學習的時間。
●整理床鋪
●澆花
●打掃房間
●倒垃圾
……
……
Vlunteer Wrk
◎Help in the city library
◎Clean up the city parks
◎Hld a charity bazaar (義賣)
◎D vlunteer wrk in a hspital
◎Visit the ld peple’s hme
◎…
9:00—9:30
read English
10:00—11:00
d math hmewrk
12:00—13:00
have lunch with Dad
14:00—15:30
have a pian lessn
16:00—17:00
visit her friends
My father
read newspapers
like reading newspaper
My brther
watch TV
interesting
My mther
n the telephne
talk happily
I
d my hmewrk
be busy ding hmewrk
Opinins
Prs：develp ur independence; take care f urselves；…
Cns: a waste f time; n need t；…

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