?牛津上海版八年級下學期期末復習 查缺補漏沖刺滿分
(期末必考話題作文)
專題09 單元話題滿分范文20篇

1.注意篇章結(jié)構(gòu)，合理布局
開始部分說出文中的要點、核心問題。
正文部分圍繞主題展開敘述、討論。
結(jié)尾部分對全文內(nèi)容進行總結(jié)和概括。
2.確定主題句
主題句是全文對概括，是文章的主旨。它能在文章中起到“畫龍點睛”的作用。通常主旨句最好放在作文的開頭，而后是對全文主題句所提出的內(nèi)容進行解釋、論述。
3.重要連接詞
表示順序增加
First, then / next, after that / next, finally
For one thing … for another…,
On (the) one hand…on the other hand,
Besides / what’s more / in addition / furthermore / moreover / another / also
表示時間順序
now, at present, recently,
at first, in the beginning, to begin with,
later, next, finally,
form now on, from then on,
till, not…until, before, after, when, while, as during,
表示解釋說明
now, in addition, for example, for instance, in this case, moreover
表示轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系
but, however, while, though, or, otherwise, on the hand
表示并列關(guān)系
or, and, also, too, not only … but also, both… and, either …or, neither…nor
表示因果關(guān)系
because, because of, since, now that, as, thanks to…, due to…, therefore

1．（2021·上海奉賢·八年級期中）Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic “The importance of___________”（請以“……的重要性”為題寫一篇不少于 60個詞的短文，要求意思明確、內(nèi)容連貫，標點符號不計字數(shù)）
（注意：作文中不得出現(xiàn)考生的中文姓名及其他相關(guān)信息，否則不予評分。）
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2．（2021·上海浦東新·八年級階段練習）Write at least 60 words about the topic “A problem I’ve solved”.（以“我解決了這個問題”為題，寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文，標點符號不占格）
提示：你可以根據(jù)以下提示講述自己如何解決在學習、生活中遇到的一個問題。
Use the following points as a reference:
1. What was the problem?
2. How did you solve it?
3. What have you learned?
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3．（2021·上海奉賢·八年級期中）Write at least 60 words about the topic “________ are/is important to us”.（以“________是重要的”為題寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文，標點符號不占格）
________ are /is important to us
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4．（2021·上海浦東新·八年級期中）Write at least 60 words on the topic: ________ changed me! 以“ _______ 改變了我”為題, 寫一篇不少于60個單詞的短文， 要求內(nèi)容適切，意思連貫，標點符號不占格。
（注意：短文中不得出現(xiàn)任何人名，學校及其相關(guān)信息，否則不予評分）
Suggested topic： Reading/Doing sports/ Helping fight against pollution/Doing housework/My teacher/My mother… changed me!
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5．（2021·上海金山·八年級期末）Write at least 60 words on the topic “Everyone can change the world”（以“人人都能改變世界”為題，寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文，標點符號不占格）
The E-Waste Girls 的故事告訴我們，只要我們愿意，我們都能為世界貢獻自己的一份力量，都能以自己的行動和智慧改變這個世界。請結(jié)合自己的經(jīng)歷或見聞寫一篇以“Everyone can change the world”為題的文章。
（注意： l. 文中不得出現(xiàn)任何姓名、校名及其它相關(guān)信息，否則不予評分。
2. 照抄閱讀語篇不得分。）
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6．（2021·上海奉賢·八年級階段練習）Write at least 60 words on the topic “Without you, we can’t ________!” 一定有人對你表示過“沒有你，我們不能________”，以此為題，寫一篇不少于60字的短文，標點符號不占格。
少年的你可能沒有感覺到自己的力量吧！其實：在家里，你是父母的掌上明珠；在班級，你是同窗好友的陪伴；在學校，你是老師們的牽掛；在小區(qū)，你是處處在先的志愿者；在抗擊疫情期間，你是做好自我防疫和宣傳的能手或者你是……！請談?wù)劇澳恪痹诩彝?、朋友、學?；蛏鐓^(qū)等各種場合中，“沒你不行”的學習或生活經(jīng)歷！
(注意：短文中不得出現(xiàn)任何人名、校名以及其他相關(guān)信息，否則不予評分。)
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7．（2021·上海浦東新·八年級期末）Write at least 60 words on the topic：A Change in me
花開花落，歲月如梭。我在成長的過程中歷經(jīng)了不少變化。請描述自己的一次親身經(jīng)歷，以“我的變化”為題，寫一篇不少于60個單詞的短文，要求內(nèi)容適切，意思連貫，標點符號不占格。
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8．（2022·上海閔行·八年級期末）Write at least 60 words about the topic “I want to say thanks to my …（以 “我想對……說聲 “謝謝”為題寫一篇不少于 60 個詞的短文，標點符號不占格）
Use the following points as a reference.
* Who do you want to say thanks to?
* Why do you want to say thanks to him or her? (Give at least two reasons: 至少 2 條理由)
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9．（2021·上海徐匯·八年級期中）Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic “_______ healthy life” 通過描寫自己或者自己的一個同學（朋友）、一個家人的某一天生活，談?wù)劷】档纳罘绞?，寫一篇不少?0字的短文。要求： 補全作文題目。不得出現(xiàn)任何人名，否則不予評分。
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10．（2021·上海徐匯·八年級期末）Write a passage of at least 60words about the topic “I learned to be _______ through a school activity”???
開學以來，學校開展了許多活動，如：夸夸我的好家長；校慶170周年等，請你以“通過一次學?；顒游覍W會了……”為題，寫一篇不少于60詞的短文。
注意：1. 在答題紙上將題目補充完整。2. 短文中不得出現(xiàn)真實人名，班級及其他相關(guān)信息。
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11．（2020·上海市進才中學北校八年級階段練習）Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “A respectable person in my eyes”.(以“我眼中值得尊敬的一個人”為題寫一篇60詞以上的短文，標點符號不占格。)
注意：短文中不得出現(xiàn)考生的姓名、校名及其他相關(guān)信息，否則不予評分。
Suggested outlines:
Who is a respectable person in your eyes?
Why do you think he/she is respectable?
What can you learn from him/her?
A respectable person in my eyes
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12．（2021·上海市進才中學北校八年級階段練習）Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “Save energy, love our Earth”. (以“節(jié)約能源，熱愛地球”為題寫一篇60詞以上的短文，標點符號不占格。)
(注意：短文中不得出現(xiàn)考生的姓名、校名及其他相關(guān)信息，否則不予評分。)
Suggested outlines:
Why should we save energy?
As middle school students, what should we do to save energy?
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13．（2021·上海浦東新·八年級階段練習）Write at least 60 words on the topic “A day to remember”（以“值得記住的一天”為題，寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文，標點符號不占格）
（注意：短文中不得出現(xiàn)任何人名、學校及其它相關(guān)信息，否則不予評分。）
The following is for reference only（以下表達僅供參考）
◎Is there a day that you will always remember?
◎What happened on that day?
◎What did you do?
◎How did you feel about it?
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14．（2021··八年級期中）Write a short passage about “My way of saving ________” .（以“我節(jié)約 ________ 的方法”為題，根據(jù)英文提示寫一篇不少于60個單詞的短文。）
1. What do you like to save?
2. Why do you like to save ________?
3. What do you usually do to save it/them?
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15．（2021·上海市川沙中學南校八年級期中）Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic “My Favorite Newspaper”.（以“我喜愛的報紙”為題寫一篇不少于60詞的短文，標點符號不占格）
Use the following points as a reference:（以下內(nèi)容僅供參考）
1. Which is your favorite newspaper?
2. Why do you like it?
3. Do you have any suggestions for your favorite newspaper?
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16．（2021·上海黃浦·八年級期中）Write at least 60 words on the topic “__________ is/are important to us”(以“__________ 對我們很重要”為題，寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文，標點符號不占格)
Use the following as your reference:
1. How much do you know about ...?
2. Why is/are ... important to us?
3. What can we do for it/them? (At least 2 examples)
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17．（2021·上海市羅星中學八年級階段練習）Write at least 60 words on the topic “__________ is/are important to me”（以“__________對我很重要”為題，寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文，標點符號不占格）
Use the following as your reference:
1. What is/are important to you?
2. Why is/are ... important to you?
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18．（2021·上海市進才中學北校八年級期末）Write at least 60 words on the topic “Something I want to do for my school”. （以“我想為學校做件事”為題寫一篇不少于60詞的短文，標點符號不占格。）
注意：短文中不得出現(xiàn)考生的姓名、校名及其他相關(guān)信息， 否則不予評分。
Use the following points as a guide（短文須包含以下要點）：
1. What do you want to do for your school?
2. Why do you want to do it?
3. How do you plan to do it?
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19．（2021·上海市民辦上寶中學八年級階段練習）日前，某寄宿制山學（boarding school）明文禁止學生叫外賣（order take-away food），學生中議論紛紛。假設(shè)你是學生會主席李明，請代表全校同學給校長寫一封信，信中內(nèi)容包括：
1）向校方反饋同學們對此規(guī)定的看法。
2）向校方提出的意見和建議。（文中不得出現(xiàn)考生姓名、學校等任何真實信息）
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20．（2021·上海普陀·八年級期末）Write a passage of at least 60 words according to the given situation.
?？闹骶幷谡邑撠煵煌婷娴木庉嫞阌幸韵逻x擇，如校園新聞、運動與健康、藝術(shù)和音樂等。請給?？骶帉懸环獠簧儆?0個字的信，簡單介紹自己想負責的版面、申請的理由和讓該版面受歡迎的想法等。信的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出。標點符號不占格。
（注意：短文中不得出現(xiàn)個人任何人名、校名及其他相關(guān)信息，否則不予評分。）
Dear chief editor,
I’ve noticed that you are looking for editors of our school newspaper. I’m very interested in it so I’m writing to apply for the position. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
John

參考答案：
1．例文：
The importance of Confidence
Confidence is very important in daily life. It can help you to develop a healthy attitude. It can bring us courage to stick to what we do. A study shows that the confident people are much happier. They can have more chances to make themselves successful. So confidence is valuable to us.
When I was in Grade 7, once my teacher asked me to make a speech in class. Although I practiced it many times at home, I still felt nervous and forgot the words at the beginning of it. Then I breathed deeply and relaxed myself. You can’t believe how happy I was when I recalled the speech and finished it successfully. My teacher thought highly of my performance and I got much encouragement from my classmates. From then on, I have become more and more confident.
【解析】
【詳解】
1.?題干解讀：題目要求根據(jù)提示要點，談?wù)撟孕诺闹匾砸约白约旱囊淮谓?jīng)歷以及從經(jīng)歷中的收獲是什么，可以適當?shù)陌l(fā)揮，寫作時要運用正確的英語表達，要選用恰當?shù)脑~匯和短語。
2.?寫作指導：寫作時要緊扣主題，本文應該用第一人稱、第三人稱來介紹內(nèi)容；時態(tài)采用一般過去時；在介紹內(nèi)容時，力求語言準確，內(nèi)容完整，保證行文連貫，條理清晰。
2．例文：
A problem I’ve solved
???????I still remember when I just entered the first year of junior high school. I didn’t know how to keep a balance between study and hobbies. My parents thought that I should give my hobby of playing basketball, and concentrate on my study and use all my spare time to study. But I thought that life was boring and I thought I also needed to relax properly, so I communicated with my parents. They allowed me to relax properly, but study mustn’t fall behind. I was very happy.
From this experience, I have learned that when we meet some problems, we should not give up but try our best to solve them actively.
【解析】
【詳解】
1. 題干分析：該題目要求以“我解決了這個問題”為題寫作，包含曾經(jīng)遇到什么問題，通過什么方式解決的，以及從這件事情學到什么。
2. 寫作指導：文章主要用第一人稱，描述經(jīng)歷時用一般過去時，描述經(jīng)歷時注意行文要流暢。
3．例文：
Make Our Hometown More Beautiful Is Important to Us
The clean water and green mountains are our treasures. It’s our dream to have a home with a blue sky, green trees and clean water. So it’s very important for us to realize the importance of protecting the environment and dealing with pollution. But what should we do?
We can take actions in our daily life. We can plant more trees to keep the soil in place. Resources are very important, so we need to save resources to avoid polluting the environment. For example, we can use both sides of the paper. Polluted water should be dealt with in time to keep the river clean because we cannot live without water. When we go to other places, we can choose public transport to reduce air pollution.
In my opinion, everyone can do something small to make a difference. When we see rubbish on the road, we should pick it up immediately. We should also learn to recycle waste by separating the waste into different groups. If all of us work together, we will have a more beautiful home.
【解析】
【詳解】
1. 題干解讀：文章是一篇話題作文。主要寫出對我們來說重要的一件事情，為主題展開描寫，主要從保護環(huán)境，節(jié)約資源，垃圾分類等方面做詳細的描述，寫作時要注意文章的層次感和語言的邏輯性要合理。
2. 例文點評：文章分三段描寫。第一段引出綠水青山很重要，我們應該如何做；第二段給出一些具體的做法，第三段給出自己的一些觀點，從生活出發(fā)要怎么做。整個文章結(jié)構(gòu)完整思路清晰，語言表達流暢，意思明確，通俗易懂。
4．例文：
Music changed me!
Everyone has his own hobby, and it may give him lots of happiness. My hobby is listening to music. When I was a child, I enjoyed listening to music, especially the cartoon music, though I wasn’t good at it. I often lost myself in it. When I am in trouble, music can make me calm down. When I am very tired, it can make me comfortable. When I am angry with something, it also can make me happy again. Listening to music keeps me in a good mood and it’s good for my health. Do you like listening to music? If not, hope you can have a try, you will find it beneficial.
【解析】
【詳解】
1.題干解讀：本文是一篇命題作文，介紹什么改變了我，可以從文中提示的話題中選擇一個，要求要點覆蓋全面，可適當擴充；注意寫作時要點齊全，同時也要緊扣主題。
2.?寫作指導：本文使用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)和，人稱用第一人稱，寫作時，注意表達觀點時的常用句式和when引導的時間狀語從句，內(nèi)容上應注意描述的全面性；語言的表述應該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應該符合英語的表達習慣。
5．????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????Everyone can change the world
???????Once I went to school by bus. An old man got on the bus. But there were no empty seats. Because it was full. Although I was still far from the school, I stood up and gave the old man a seat. The others on the bus looked at me approvingly.
???????I believe that as long as everyone pays a little love, the world will be better.
【解析】
【詳解】
1.題干解讀：該題目屬于話題作文，圍繞主題“Everyone can change the world”展開敘述，講述自己過往的經(jīng)歷或見聞，并呼吁人人都可以為世界變好貢獻自己的一份力量。
2.寫作指導：本文主要使用第一人稱來敘述；針對“自己過往的經(jīng)歷或見聞”，要用一般過去時描述；談及感受或未來的展望時，可以活用一般現(xiàn)在時和一般將來時。能夠準確使用語法以及一定的詞匯、短語和句型，清楚連貫地表達思想，保證條理清晰。
6．例文：
Without you, we can’t get the first prize
??????? Last autumn, our school held a sports meeting. All students were encouraged to take part in the games. In our class, it seemed that nobody was willing to join in the 3000 meters’ race. Maybe that’s because it was a too long distance for us. So I made a decision to join in it and challenged myself. I practiced running for half an hour every morning. As time went by, I could run very fast. When the meeting came, I was confident and got the first prize. My teachers and classmates were proud of me. They told me, “Without you, we can’t get the first prize.” I was tired but happy.
【解析】
【詳解】
1. 題干解讀：該題目屬于記敘文寫作，主要寫發(fā)生在自己身上的經(jīng)歷，可以是在家或?qū)W校，也可以在社區(qū)等。
2. 寫作指導：文章主要是第一人稱為主，時態(tài)為一般過去時。文章需要描述清楚事件發(fā)生的時間、地點、人物、起因、經(jīng)過、結(jié)果，保證條理清晰。
7．例文：
A Change in me
I am a junior high school student. I am an outgoing girl. But I used to be shy. I used to be afraid to chat with others. I always stayed at home in my free time. So, I didn’t have any friends. I sometimes felt lonely. By chance, when I played in the park, a girl smiled at me. It changed me. I thought others may be friendly. I started to try to talk to others and played with them. After that, I made good friends with others. Now I am a positive person. And I also have many good friends.
【解析】
【詳解】
1.?題干解讀：題目要求根據(jù)提示要點，自己的變化以及原因，可以適當?shù)陌l(fā)揮，寫作時要運用正確的英語表達，要選用恰當?shù)脑~匯和短語。
2.?寫作指導：寫作時要緊扣主題，本文應該用第一人稱來介紹內(nèi)容；時態(tài)采用一般過去時；在介紹內(nèi)容時，力求語言準確，內(nèi)容完整，保證行文連貫，條理清晰。
8．范文：
I?want?to?say?thanks?to?my friend
Today, I want to say thanks to my best friend Tina. She is a lovely girl with big eyes. She’s always friendly to everyone. Also, she enjoys reading in her free time. One day, I cried sadly because I found it difficult to learn English well. When Tina saw that, she started to help me with my English after class. With her help, I am good at English now. Thank you, my dear friend.
【解析】
【詳解】
1.題干解讀：該題目屬于記敘文寫作，在寫作時應根據(jù)英語提示的內(nèi)容，敘述你想對誰說感謝以及你想感謝他/她的理由，至少說出兩條。
2.寫作指導：本文應該用第一和第三人稱來敘述內(nèi)容，時態(tài)采用一般現(xiàn)在時，在敘述內(nèi)容時，力求語句通順，語法正確，并且故事發(fā)生的背景、起因、過程和結(jié)果等需要敘述完整，保證條理清晰。
9．例文：
My grandfather’s healthy life
Although my grandfather is over 70 years old, he is very healthy. He has a healthy life.
He gets up at 6 every morning and has breakfast at 6:30. He usually has an egg, a glass of milk and some bread for breakfast. Then he goes to the park to exercise. He likes playing Tai Chi. He usually plays Tai Chi in the park for an hour. Then he talks with his friends and takes a walk. He comes home at about 9 o’clock. My grandfather usually eats some rice, meat and vegetables at noon. He likes to eat fish and tomatoes. He thinks they are healthy for him. He sometimes waters the flowers in the afternoon. At about 6 p.m., he has dinner, and then he watches TV for an hour. At about 9 p.m., he goes to bed. He never stays up late. He has a healthy life.
【解析】
【詳解】
1.?題干解讀：題目要求根據(jù)提示要點，寫出爺爺?shù)慕】档纳罘绞降那闆r，可以適當?shù)陌l(fā)揮，寫作時要運用正確的英語表達，要選用恰當?shù)脑~匯和短語。
2.?寫作指導：寫作時要緊扣主題，本文應該用第三人稱來介紹內(nèi)容；時態(tài)采用一般現(xiàn)在時；在介紹內(nèi)容時，力求語言準確，內(nèi)容完整，保證行文連貫，條理清晰。
10．例文
I learned to be self-governed through a school activity
???????Everyone has some unforgettable experiences. I had a very unforgettable experience when I was 13 years old. I had some training with my classmates. We went to Linyi and we needed to live in an apartment for a week. We did everything ourselves. Our parents couldn’t help us, because they didn’t stay with us. We got up very early in the morning. We had to clean ourselves quickly and had breakfast soon. And then we stood in a line. We learnt a lot of things there, such as cooking, washing and even making beds. We sang and danced together and did all kinds of activities. Every day, we had to practice more than six hours.
???Now I think it was very hard for everyone but it was very good for us. Because we are looked after by our parents, but in fact we should learn how to look after ourselves. What an unforgettable experience it is! I learned lots of things. Especially, I learned to be self-governed through the school activity.
【解析】
【分析】
【詳解】
題干解讀：本文是一篇話題作文。要求以“l(fā)earned to be … through a school activity”為題寫一篇短文。首先需要把題目補充完整，然后再列出寫作要點及每個要點中可能要用到的表達；然后緊扣要點，動筆寫作；
寫作指導：本文主要采用第一人稱來展開寫作，時態(tài)主要用一般過去時和一般現(xiàn)在時。文章要圍繞主題準確使用一定的語法、詞匯、短語和句型等；語言的表述要符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應該符合英語的表達習慣；層次要分明、條理要清晰。
11．例文
A respectable person in my eyes
The respectable person in my eyes is my father.
Firstly, he is very strong and makes me feel very safe. Secondly, he is good at many things, such as basketball and ping-pong. I think he plays ping-pong as well as Wanghao. Thirdly, he is very popular in our big family. Everyone in my family loves my father very much. Most important of all, he is a great father and he loves me and my mother a lot. He also helps me a lot. I have learnt a lot from him, such as some ways of solving problems and responsibility for the family. I do think he is as great as Superman. I respect him!
【解析】
【詳解】
1. 題干解讀：本文要求以“A respectable person in my eyes”為題，介紹眼中值得尊敬的人是誰，說明理由及從他/她身上學到了什么，可適當增加細節(jié)。
2. 寫作指導：本文主要以第三人稱來敘述；時態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時為主；第一段點明我尊敬的人是誰。第二段介紹尊敬他的理由，并說明從他身上學到了什么。在寫作時可使用適當?shù)倪B詞讓文章有次序，要做到無標點符號和語法錯誤。
12．例文:
Save energy, love our Earth
As we know, energy is very important to us, we can’t live without energy. The amount of energy is becoming less and less. So we must try our best to do something to save energy.
As middle school students, we must turn off the tap immediately after we use it. We can use a basin to wash our hands and faces. We can also wash some clothes by hand instead of by machine. After we use some water, we can reuse it. We can walk to some places or ride bikes instead of driving. It is a good way to save energy. It is also a good idea to encourage our friends and family members to join us. I think if we save energy, our earth will be better. If everyone makes a little effort, we can make a big difference.
【解析】
【詳解】
1.題干解讀：本文是一篇材料作文。要求以“Save energy, love our Earth”為題，結(jié)合提示問題進行寫作，注意要點齊全，可適當發(fā)揮。
2.寫作指導：寫作時要以第一人稱來行文，時態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時。作文可分為兩段，第一段引出話題，介紹為什么要節(jié)約能源；第二段詳細介紹作為學生可以做什么來節(jié)約能源。要保證語言連貫，無語法和拼寫錯誤。
13．例文：
A day to remember
There is a day that I will always remember.
It was a sunny day. On the way to school, my friend did something rude to me. It made me sad. What’s worse, I got a “C” in my favorite subject. After school, I went home unhappily. It was dark in the room. Suddenly the lights were on, and I heard the song “Happy birthday”. I was surprised to see many people and a big cake. “Oh, it’s my birthday.”
I was so excited and happy. It was my first time to have a birthday party. I’ll never forget that day.
【解析】
【詳解】
1.題干解讀：該題目屬于材料作文。要求我們以“A day to remember”（以“值得記住的一天”）為題，寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文。
2.寫作指導：本文應該用第一人稱來敘述故事內(nèi)容；時態(tài)采用一般過去時為主；寫作時，首先開篇點題；其次介紹哪天很難忘，那天發(fā)生什么以及你做了什么；最后寫出自己的感受。
14．例文
My way of saving water
As we all know, water is necessary in our daily life. We drink water every day, we use water to wash things and cook food, we also use water to make machines. People can’t live without water. Though about 75% of the earth is covered with water, only 3% of it is fresh water. So we must save water by having a shower instead of a bath. We can save water by fixing dropping taps immediately and we can also save water by not washing under running water.
【解析】
【詳解】
1.題干解讀：該題目屬于材料寫作，寫作時要把題目補充完整。本文要從三個方面來敘述：節(jié)約什么，為什么要節(jié)約，通常你怎么做。
2.寫作指導：本文應該用第一人稱來敘述；時態(tài)采用一般現(xiàn)在時；敘述要清條理晰，表達通順連貫完整，適當使用連詞介詞，保證單詞拼寫、語法和標點使用正確，字數(shù)要符合要求。
15．例文
My Favorite Newspaper
Different people like to read different kinds of newspaper nowadays. There’s no denying that China Daily is my favorite newspaper to read. I’ve been on reading China Daily because I can know a lot of important world news from it. Besides, I can also improve my English reading skills by reading it. I think the layout of newspapers needs to be optimized so that readers can easily find the modules they are interested in. All in all, China Daily not only improves my English study, but also widens my view. I like it very much.
【解析】
【詳解】
1. 題干解讀：本文是一篇材料作文。根據(jù)提示問題介紹自己喜歡的報紙。注意要點齊全，可適當增加細節(jié)。
2. 寫作指導：本文以第一人稱，一般現(xiàn)在時進行描寫。首先介紹自己所喜歡的報紙；然后解釋喜歡它的原因；最后給出一些報紙需要優(yōu)化的建議。要保證語言連貫，無語法和拼寫錯誤。
16．范文：
Trees are important to us
Trees are really important in our daily lives. They take in harmful gases and release oxygen into the air for people and other living things to breathe. They make our city more beautiful and less noisy. A lot of things that we use come from trees. The benches we sit on in the parks, the nuts we eat and the pencils we use are all from trees.
However, nowadays, trees on the earth are in great danger. We must try our best to protect the trees, woods and forests on the earth and plant more trees every year.
In a word, trees are our good friends.
【解析】
【詳解】
題干解讀：題目要求以“... is/are important to us”為題，講題目補充完整，根據(jù)提示問題寫一篇短文。
寫作指導：此作文時態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時為主，采用第一人稱口吻。寫作時要結(jié)合問題介紹你對某物了解多少、某物為何是重要的及我們能為其做些什么。要做到無單詞拼寫和語法錯誤。
17．例文：
Health is important to me
From my point, health is important to me. When I was young, I had a fever, and I could not go to school or play outside. I felt very sad. So I exercise and keep good eating habits to keep healthy. Because I am healthy, I can do many things I like. Therefore, I think health is very important.
【解析】
【詳解】
1.題干解讀：本文要求以“__________對我很重要”為題寫一篇短文，題干中給出了細節(jié)要點，也可適當發(fā)揮。
2.寫作指導：本文應該用第一人稱來描述健康對“我”的重要性；時態(tài)采用一般現(xiàn)在時為主，用一般過去時舉例；舉例時，應貼合實際，具有說服力；短文需要敘述完整，保證條理清晰。
18．例文
I want to do something for my school. I’m leaving my school. I want to plant a tree in my school garden. I have found there are too many buildings and few trees in our school yard. I want to make my school much greener and more beautiful. If I plant a tree there, maybe more and more students will do so. In their spare time, the students can read under the trees. I am going to ask my teacher to agree with me. Then I am going to buy a tree and plant it before I leave.
【解析】
【詳解】
1.題干解讀：本文是一篇材料作文。以“我想為學校做件事”為題寫一篇短文。
2.寫作指導：本文采用一般將來時和一般現(xiàn)在時。從想為學校做什么，為什么想這么做，以及如何計劃等方面來描述。寫作時保持主謂一致性，做到無語法和標點錯誤。
19．例文
Dear sir,
On behalf of all students in our school, I’m writing to you about the school ban on ordering take-away food imposed by our school recently.
We all agree that the ban on take-away food is reasonable. The quality of take-away food is not good and might do harm to our health, so this ban is aimed at protecting our health and helping us form a good eating habit. Meanwhile, there are still some problems even if we don’t order take-away food. We sincerely hope our school will improve the service of the school canteen. It is too crowded during lunch break, and many of us have to line up too long. Besides, we strongly advise our school to offer the night-time snacks. Most students turn to instant noodles to satisfy ourselves at night, which is bad for health.
To sum up, our school has made a right decision, while there is still room for improvement, which all students are looking forward to.
Yours faithfully,
Li Ming
【解析】
【詳解】
題干解讀：這篇作文要求學生們以李明的身份給學校校長寫信，對學校禁止學生叫外賣的規(guī)定發(fā)表看法，并對校方提出意見和建議。題目中只給出了文中應包括的兩個要點，并沒有規(guī)定具體的寫作內(nèi)容，學生們應發(fā)揮自己的想象力，結(jié)合自己的生活實際，組織語言，并用正確的英語表達出來。
寫作指導：審題可知，這篇短文應以一般現(xiàn)在時、第一人稱和第三人稱為主敘述。首先應對學校的這一規(guī)定發(fā)表看法，支持或反對，并給出理由；然后對學校提出一些建議。注意英語句式結(jié)構(gòu)的特點和與漢語表達習慣的不同，以簡單句結(jié)構(gòu)為基礎(chǔ)，穿插并列句、復合句的使用，提升作文檔次。同時注意上下文意的銜接，使文意連貫、表達流暢。
20．例文
Dear chief editor,
I’ve noticed that you are looking for editors of our school newspaper. I’m very interested in it so I’m writing to apply for the position. I want to be in charge of the sports and health section.
First, I have a healthy eating habit. I can give some advice on eating healthily. Second, I am a member of the sports club. I am also good at some sports, such as swimming and playing basketball. If I am chosen as a sports and health editor, I think I will introduce a few healthy foods every day. What’s more, I will introduce a kind of sport which is suitable for students every time. I hope I can get the position.
I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
John
【解析】
【詳解】
1.題干解讀：本文是一篇書信作文。給?？骶帉懸环庑?，申請自己想負責的版塊。
2.寫作指導：本文采用一般現(xiàn)在時和一般將來時。分為三段式：第一段引出主題，闡明自己想申請的位置；第二段介紹自己的優(yōu)秀以及如何讓該版面受歡迎的想法；最后一段期待收到對方的回復。寫作時保持主謂一致性，做到無語法和標點錯誤。


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