?人教版七年級(jí)下學(xué)期期末復(fù)習(xí) 查缺補(bǔ)漏沖刺滿分
(期末必考話題作文)
專題03 單元話題滿分范文20篇

1.注意篇章結(jié)構(gòu)，合理布局
開(kāi)始部分說(shuō)出文中的要點(diǎn)、核心問(wèn)題。
正文部分圍繞主題展開(kāi)敘述、討論。
結(jié)尾部分對(duì)全文內(nèi)容進(jìn)行總結(jié)和概括。
2.確定主題句
主題句是全文對(duì)概括，是文章的主旨。它能在文章中起到“畫(huà)龍點(diǎn)睛”的作用。通常主旨句最好放在作文的開(kāi)頭，而后是對(duì)全文主題句所提出的內(nèi)容進(jìn)行解釋、論述。
3.重要連接詞
表示順序增加
First, then / next, after that / next, finally
For one thing … for another…,
On (the) one hand…on the other hand,
Besides / what’s more / in addition / furthermore / moreover / another / also
表示時(shí)間順序
now, at present, recently,
at first, in the beginning, to begin with,
later, next, finally,
form now on, from then on,
till, not…until, before, after, when, while, as during,
表示解釋說(shuō)明
now, in addition, for example, for instance, in this case, moreover
表示轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系
but, however, while, though, or, otherwise, on the hand
表示并列關(guān)系
or, and, also, too, not only … but also, both… and, either …or, neither…nor
表示因果關(guān)系
because, because of, since, now that, as, thanks to…, due to…, therefore

1．假如你是王萍。你對(duì)自己的英語(yǔ)老師一定非常熟悉吧，請(qǐng)以“ My English Teacher ”為題寫(xiě)一篇70詞左右的短文。
要點(diǎn)： name, build, looks, clothes, hobbies
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【答案】例文
My English Teacher
My name’s Wang Ping and I’m in Class 1, Grade 7. Now let me tell you something about my English teacher.
Her name is Li Xiao. She’s of medium height and she’s thin. She has a round face, two big bright eyes and a small nose. She has long curly brown hair. She doesn’t wear glasses. She likes white and she often wears a white coat and blue jeans. She looks young and we don’t know her age.
She likes playing sports very much. And Liu Xiang is her favorite player. She can sing very well. She always has a smile on her face. She is kind and friendly to the students. We all like her.
【解析】
【詳解】
1、題干解讀：題目要求以“My English teacher”為題，寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文，要求包含所給的要點(diǎn)單詞。
2、例文點(diǎn)評(píng)：例文采用三段式；時(shí)態(tài)主要以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主；例文詳細(xì)的介紹了英語(yǔ)老師的情況；結(jié)構(gòu)清晰；邏輯性強(qiáng)。
3、高分亮點(diǎn)：
短語(yǔ)：of medium height；wear glasses；look young；like doing sth.；play sports；be friendly to sb.。
句型：She likes white and she often wears a white coat and blue jeans；And Liu Xiang is her favorite player；She is kind and friendly to the students。
【點(diǎn)睛】
首先認(rèn)真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點(diǎn)；然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)及每個(gè)要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá)，例如of medium height；wear glasses；look young；like doing sth.；play sports；be friendly to sb.等；然后緊扣要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆寫(xiě)作，在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中，要注意句與句、段與段之間的過(guò)渡，必要時(shí)可適當(dāng)運(yùn)用表示轉(zhuǎn)折、因果、并列、比較等關(guān)系的連詞，使文章過(guò)渡平穩(wěn)，自然流暢；最后，要仔細(xì)檢查有無(wú)單詞拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)誤用等，還要檢查語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無(wú)重復(fù)、啰嗦的語(yǔ)言，大小寫(xiě)是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。
2．Mr. White上周末過(guò)得很忙碌：早起晨練，遛狗，打掃房間，購(gòu)物，為家人準(zhǔn)備午飯，看電視足球賽，和朋友踢球，陪女兒玩電子游戲，和家人看電影，看書(shū)……盡管很忙，他卻很高興。請(qǐng)根據(jù)提示，以“A Busy Weekend”為題，描述一下Mr. White這一天的活動(dòng)，開(kāi)頭已給出。
A Busy Weekend
I had a busy weekend. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】One possible version:
A Busy Weekend
I had a busy weekend. I got up early in the morning and played sports. After breakfast, I went out for a walk with my little dog. Then I cleaned the rooms and did some shopping. After that it was 11: 30. I cooked lunch for my family. In the afternoon I watched a big football game on TV and then I played football with my friends. At about 5:00 I played computer games with my daughter. We had dinner outside. After dinner we went to the movies, Before I went to bed, I did some reading. I was really busy, but I was very happy to spend the weekend with my family and friends.
【解析】
【詳解】
1、題干解讀：本文是一篇命題作文，開(kāi)頭已給出，直接按要點(diǎn)羅列出來(lái)即可。時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)用一般過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)，人稱應(yīng)以第一人稱為主。
2、例文點(diǎn)評(píng)：例文包括了所給的要點(diǎn)，條理清晰，語(yǔ)言流暢，無(wú)語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。
3、高分亮點(diǎn)：
get up???起床
go out???外出
clean the rooms???打掃房間
do some shopping???購(gòu)物
watch…on TV???在電視上看……
play football with sb.???與某人踢足球
play…with sb.???與某人玩……
go to the movies???看電影
be happy to do sth.???做某事很開(kāi)心
spend…with…???與……度過(guò)……
Before I went to bed, I did some reading.???before引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句
I was really busy, but I was very happy…???but連接的并列句
3．動(dòng)物和人類共處一個(gè)世界，是人類的朋友。有的動(dòng)物美麗，有的動(dòng)物可愛(ài)，有的動(dòng)物活潑，有的動(dòng)物靦腆。你喜歡哪種動(dòng)物？為什么？請(qǐng)寫(xiě)一篇60詞左右的短文介紹你最喜歡的動(dòng)物。題目和開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
My favorite animal
There are many animals in the world. But _________________________________________
【答案】My favorite animal
There are many animals in the world. But what's my favorite animal, do you know？ Many people like her very much. I also like her. She is from China. She looks kind of lazy but very cute. She is our friend. She likes to eat bamboos. She is very friendly to people. She is black and white. She has two black ears and eyes. And she also has black legs and arms.
Now do you know what the animal is? Yes, she is a panda. I like her because she is a symbol of friendship. And I tell my classmates that my favorite animal is a clever and very beautiful panda.
【解析】
【詳解】
這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少，如in the world，very much，be from，kind of，like to do，be friendly to，black and white，a symbol of friendship，tell sb. sth.等。而B(niǎo)ut what's my favorite animal, do you know？/I like her because she is a symbol of friendship./And I tell my classmates that my favorite animal is a clever and very beautiful panda.等復(fù)雜從句結(jié)構(gòu)的運(yùn)用，使得內(nèi)容豐富，表達(dá)多樣，是本文的最大亮點(diǎn)。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ)，寫(xiě)作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章表達(dá)更有邏輯性，也更富有條理。
【點(diǎn)睛】
書(shū)面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開(kāi)思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語(yǔ)知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語(yǔ)和句式，盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。
4．英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作課上，大家對(duì)平時(shí)選擇哪種交通方式上學(xué)進(jìn)行了討論。有人選擇坐公共汽車，有人選擇走路，有人由父母開(kāi)車接送……假如你叫高琳，你平時(shí)喜歡走路上學(xué)。請(qǐng)你以“My Ways to Go to School”為題，根據(jù)以下提示寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文，說(shuō)明走路上學(xué)的原因及益處。
寫(xiě)作提示：1.家離學(xué)校不遠(yuǎn)；
2.走路上學(xué)是鍛煉的好機(jī)會(huì)；
3.可以欣賞沿途的風(fēng)景(scenery)；
4.和朋友一起走路很有趣。
寫(xiě)作要求：1.語(yǔ)句通順，條理清晰，詳略得當(dāng)，書(shū)寫(xiě)工整；
2. 100詞左右，題目和開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
My Ways to Go to School
I usually go to school on foot. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.
【答案】參考范文：
My Ways to Go to School
I usually go to school on foot. My home is not far from school. It takes me about twenty minutes to walk to school every day. I think walking is good for me. First of all, it’s a good way to exercise. I’m busy studying and have little time to do sports, so walking to school is a perfect chance to take exercise. Next, when I walk, the scenery along the way changes every moment, and I can enjoy it. What’s more, it’s fun to walk together with my friends every day. We can talk about something interesting and know each other better. I hope more and more students will enjoy going to school on foot.
【解析】
1.題干解讀：該題目屬于話題作文。題目要求是假如你叫高琳，你平時(shí)喜歡走路上學(xué)。請(qǐng)你以“My Ways to Go to School”為題，根據(jù)提示信息，寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文，說(shuō)明走路上學(xué)的原因及益處。要包含所有提示信息，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；語(yǔ)句要通順，條理要清晰，詳略要得當(dāng)，書(shū)寫(xiě)要工整；100詞左右。
2.寫(xiě)法指導(dǎo)：本文時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱以第一人稱為主。書(shū)面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所提示的信息，經(jīng)整理后展開(kāi)思維，運(yùn)用所學(xué)的英語(yǔ)知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)出來(lái)。所以，要注意不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，寫(xiě)作時(shí)，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語(yǔ)和句式；同時(shí)要注意要求的字?jǐn)?shù)，不要太多也不要太少。
5．假設(shè)下表內(nèi)是你上周末的活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)以“My Busy Weekend”為題，描寫(xiě)一下你的周末生活。
要求：(1)行文流暢，書(shū)寫(xiě)認(rèn)真，條理清晰，語(yǔ)句通順；(2)不少于50詞，結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
時(shí)間
活動(dòng)
星期六
上午
做作業(yè)
下午
打掃房間
晚上
在電腦前看了一部新電影
星期日
上午
和朋友打籃球
下午
去市場(chǎng)買食物
晚上
看了一場(chǎng)周杰倫的演唱會(huì)(concert)

My Busy Weekend
______________________________________________________________________
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I was a little tired, but I had a good time.
【答案】My Busy Weekend
I had a busy weekend. On Saturday morning, I did my homework and then did some reading. In the afternoon, I cleaned my room. I watched a new movie on the computer in the evening. On Sunday, I played basketball with my good friends in the morning. In the afternoon, I went to the market to buy some food. In the evening, I went to Jay Chou's concert. It was very exciting.
I_was_a_little_tired,_but_I_had_a_good_time.
【解析】
這篇作文要求我們以My Busy Weekend為題，介紹自己的周末生活。題目中利用表格的形式列出了上個(gè)周末兩天的活動(dòng)，我們應(yīng)用正確的英語(yǔ)將這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)，并補(bǔ)充更多的細(xì)節(jié)內(nèi)容，使文章內(nèi)容更加豐富、具體、充實(shí)。首先通過(guò)審題可知，文章介紹的是自己上個(gè)周末的活動(dòng)，因此這篇短文應(yīng)用一般過(guò)去時(shí)，注意謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞應(yīng)變?yōu)檫^(guò)去式形式，尤其注意不規(guī)則動(dòng)詞過(guò)去式的變化；其次英語(yǔ)句式結(jié)構(gòu)和表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語(yǔ)是不同的，寫(xiě)作時(shí)不能按照表格內(nèi)容逐詞翻譯，應(yīng)從句子的整體結(jié)構(gòu)出發(fā)，寫(xiě)完整的句子。如可以簡(jiǎn)單句結(jié)構(gòu)中的主謂賓或主系表結(jié)構(gòu)為主，這樣的句子結(jié)構(gòu)簡(jiǎn)潔，敘述清晰、明了。穿插使用并列句或者狀語(yǔ)從句以及其他復(fù)雜句式，提升文章檔次。同時(shí)語(yǔ)句之間注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使文章表達(dá)流暢、連貫。
【點(diǎn)睛】
這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者根據(jù)題目要求介紹了自己上個(gè)周末的活動(dòng)。首先短文內(nèi)容完整，包括了表格中的所有信息，沒(méi)有遺漏要點(diǎn)。寫(xiě)作中作者對(duì)題目中的關(guān)鍵詞加以補(bǔ)充，擴(kuò)展成完整的句子，按照時(shí)間的順序進(jìn)行敘述，比較有條理，層次也很清晰。其次短文中使用了正確的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱，文章以第一人稱I、一般過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)為主來(lái)敘述，謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞形式準(zhǔn)確，尤其注意了不規(guī)則動(dòng)詞過(guò)去式的變化，如had, did, went等。句子結(jié)構(gòu)完整，表達(dá)清楚，用詞準(zhǔn)確，語(yǔ)言得體。句式以簡(jiǎn)單句為主，敘述清楚、簡(jiǎn)潔。短文中使用了一些較好的短語(yǔ)和句型，如On Saturday morning, I did my homework and then did some reading、I watched a new movie on the computer in the evening、In the afternoon, I went to the market to buy some food.、It was very exciting等等。
6．假設(shè)你是李華, 請(qǐng)根據(jù)所給信息寫(xiě)一篇短文, 介紹你在周日的活動(dòng)。
內(nèi)容要點(diǎn):
（1）早晨七點(diǎn)起床，幫助媽媽做早餐;
（2）早飯后寫(xiě)作業(yè)、在網(wǎng)上跟朋友聊天;
（3）上午十點(diǎn)半，跟朋友去打籃球;
（4）下午和爸爸去博物館參觀;
（5）你的一天很繁忙，但是很開(kāi)心。
參考詞匯：早飯后 after breakfast;博物館 museum
要求：
（1）詞數(shù)： 60詞左右;
（2）開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù);
（3）要點(diǎn)齊全，行文連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。
Today is Sunday. I get up__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Today is Sunday. I get up at 7 o’clock in the morning and then I help my mother make breakfast. After breakfast, I do my homework and have a chat with my friends online. At half past ten, I usually play basketball with my friends. We are all basketball fans. In the afternoon, my father and I pay a visit to the museum. It is a busy but happy day!
【解析】
1. 題干解讀：該題目屬于記敘文寫(xiě)作。因字?jǐn)?shù)要求不高，可把全部?jī)?nèi)容要點(diǎn)的描寫(xiě)放在一個(gè)段落，切勿遺漏要點(diǎn)；此外，還可以就某些內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)進(jìn)行自我發(fā)揮，以使文章內(nèi)容更加豐富。
2. 寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)：根據(jù)開(kāi)頭提示可知，本文應(yīng)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)描寫(xiě)。本文時(shí)間點(diǎn)較多，可以使用連詞來(lái)增加文章的流暢度，如and then，after breakfast等。
7．疫情之下，越來(lái)越多的人選擇云游。有的同學(xué)喜歡線上云游，有的同學(xué)則喜歡線下旅游。21世紀(jì)英文報(bào)對(duì)在校學(xué)生進(jìn)行“online tour”的調(diào)查問(wèn)卷。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)調(diào)查問(wèn)卷和你的實(shí)際情況，寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文向報(bào)刊投稿。
Questionnaire
1. Do you like online tour or not? Put a tick (√) or a cross (×) in the box.□ONLINE TOUR
2. What do you think of it?
__________________________________________________________________________
3. Why do you like/dislike it?
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注意事項(xiàng)：
1. 短文須包括所有提示內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，要求語(yǔ)句通順、意思連貫；
2. 詞數(shù) 90 左右，作文的開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；
3. 短文中不得提及真實(shí)人名、校名等相關(guān)信息。Online tour
Recently, more and more people choose online tour. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】possible version:
Like:
Online tour
Recently, more and more people choose online tour. I also prefer this new way of travelling. Taking an online tour is popular and easy now.
There are several advantages of travelling from home. First, the Internet is everywhere and people can be connected to it easily. Then, there are different kinds of materials online, like videos, documentaries, live programmes. Moreover, taking an online tour is money-saving. In this way, travelling abroad costs us a little.
????????In my opinion, online tour offers me a chance to see different places of interest and opens up a new world to me.
Dislike:
Online tour
Recently, more and more people choose online tour. Although online tour is common and popular now, it is not my cup of tea.
First of all, it is important to watch and feel things around us when travelling. We can pick up some local languages, taste local food and feel special cultures there, which online tours cannot give us. Also, making a plan is an important part of the tour, such as where to live, what to eat and when to go. This can improve our ability of planning things well.
In a word, a real tour can bring us a true life experience.
【解析】
【詳解】
1.題干解讀：本文是一篇材料作文。對(duì)于是否喜歡“線上云游”發(fā)表自己的觀點(diǎn)和看法。
2.寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)：本文采用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。從喜歡和不喜歡這兩個(gè)角度來(lái)進(jìn)行描述，開(kāi)頭分別介紹自己喜歡或不喜歡的理由，最后分別表達(dá)自己的觀點(diǎn)。寫(xiě)作時(shí)保持主謂一致性，做到無(wú)語(yǔ)法和標(biāo)點(diǎn)錯(cuò)誤。
8．據(jù)聯(lián)合國(guó)《2020 年全國(guó)糧食危機(jī)報(bào)告》中數(shù)據(jù)顯示, 全世界每天有8.21億人在挨餓，受疫情影響，2021年糧食危機(jī)問(wèn)題更槽糕！而聯(lián)合國(guó)另一份報(bào)道顯示每年大約有三分之一的食物被浪費(fèi)掉。節(jié)約糧食是中華民族的傳統(tǒng)美德，即使如今人們生活富足，我們也應(yīng)當(dāng)提倡節(jié)儉， 避免浪費(fèi)食物。
某英文網(wǎng)站正在開(kāi)展以“拒絕食物浪費(fèi)”主題的征文活動(dòng)。假如你是李華，請(qǐng)以“Don’t waste what’s on your plate”為題，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一份倡議書(shū)，談?wù)劄槭裁匆?jié)約食物，以及大家可以怎么做。
寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)：
1.吃飯時(shí)，不點(diǎn)過(guò)量的食物，讓“餐飲不浪費(fèi)”成為習(xí)慣。
2.盡量“光盤(pán)”，吃不掉的打包帶回家。
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【答案】例文
Don’t waste what’s on your plate
Today about 821 million people around the world go hungry every day. The food crisis in 2021 will be even worse due to the impact of COVID-19. Saving food is a traditional virtue of the Chinese nation. Even though people are living a rich life today, we should also advocate frugality and avoid wasting food.
What should we do to save food? Here are some suggestions. Firstly, don’t order more than what you want to eat in a restaurant. Make it a habit not to waste food. Secondly, if you can’t eat all the food you have ordered, take the rest of it home.???
I believe if everyone tries their best, more and more food can be saved. Let’s get started!
【解析】
【詳解】
1.題干解讀：題目要求以“Don’t waste what’s on your plate”為題寫(xiě)倡議書(shū)，談?wù)劄槭裁匆?jié)約食物及大家可以怎樣做。要包含所有要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。
2.寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)：寫(xiě)作時(shí)要以第三人稱和第二人稱為主，時(shí)態(tài)采用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。文章可分為三段式：第一段介紹為什么要節(jié)約食物；第二段給出節(jié)約食物的建議；第三段發(fā)出倡議。要做到無(wú)單詞拼寫(xiě)和語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。
9．請(qǐng)你根據(jù)表格內(nèi)容提示，描寫(xiě)你的兩個(gè)好朋友，Tina和Laura。注意要從身材、發(fā)型、五官、衣著和愛(ài)好等多方面進(jìn)行描述。
姓名
Tina
Laura
身材
高大
中等身材
體格
有點(diǎn)胖
偏痩
頭發(fā)
短，黑色
卷發(fā)，棕色
眼睛
大，黑
小
鼻子
大
小巧
穿戴
戴眼鏡，運(yùn)動(dòng)鞋
不戴服鏡，校服
愛(ài)好
體育，擅長(zhǎng)排球
音樂(lè)，會(huì)彈鋼琴

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【答案】例文
I’m Jenny. I have two good friends at school. They’re Tina and Laura. Though they’re my friends, they have many differences.
Tina is very tall and a little bit heavy. She has short black hair. She also has big and black eyes. Her nose is big, too. She is good at sports, so she always wears sports shoes. She wears glasses and she plays volleyball very well.
Laura is thin and of medium build. She has curly brown hair. She has a small nose and two small eyes. She doesn’t wear glasses. She always wears school uniforms. She doesn’t like sports, but she does very well in music. She can play the piano well.
【解析】
【詳解】
1.題干解讀：本文是一篇材料作文。介紹自己的兩位好朋友的情況。
2.寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)：本文主要采用第三人稱，時(shí)態(tài)采用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。從姓名，身材，體格，頭發(fā)，眼睛，鼻子，穿戴和愛(ài)好等方面介紹兩位好朋友。寫(xiě)作時(shí)要保持主謂一致性，邏輯性要強(qiáng)，無(wú)語(yǔ)法和標(biāo)點(diǎn)錯(cuò)誤。
10．你的家鄉(xiāng)廣州，是一個(gè)適合人類居住的城市。人們四季都可以進(jìn)行各種有趣的活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下表格提示，進(jìn)行適當(dāng)?shù)难a(bǔ)充，向你的同學(xué)介紹你的家鄉(xiāng)廣州。要求：80 詞以上，文章不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和校名。
地理位置
中國(guó)南方，廣東省的省會(huì)（capital city）

四季簡(jiǎn)介和活動(dòng)
春天溫暖潮濕，人們喜歡到公園賞花；
夏天天氣炎熱，人們可以去海邊游泳；
秋天……，登山遠(yuǎn)足令人舒暢；
冬天……，……
My hometown, Guangzhou, is a beautiful city for people to live in. We can take part in a lot of interesting activities all year round. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
My hometown, Guangzhou, is a beautiful city for people to live in. We can take part in a lot of interesting activities all year round. It's in the south of China. It is the capital of Guangdong Province.
There are many interesting activities in different seasons. In spring, the weather is warm and wet. People like to enjoy the beautiful flowers in the parks. In summer, the weather is hot. They enjoy going to the beach and swimming in the sea. In autumn, it’s cool. People often climb mountains or go hiking. And in winter, the weather is warm. There are many wonderful activities in OCT East.
【解析】
【詳解】
1.題干解讀：本文是一篇材料作文。要求根據(jù)所給要點(diǎn)提示，從地理位置和四季活動(dòng)來(lái)介紹自己的家鄉(xiāng)——廣州。
2.寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)：本文采用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。分為兩段：第一段介紹廣州的地理位置；第二段介紹四季的天氣特點(diǎn)以及四季的活動(dòng)。寫(xiě)作時(shí)保持主謂一致性，邏輯性要強(qiáng)，無(wú)語(yǔ)法和標(biāo)點(diǎn)錯(cuò)誤。
11．現(xiàn)在是晚上7點(diǎn)鐘。請(qǐng)根據(jù)表格內(nèi)的提示信息，描述一下全家人正在做的事情。
爺爺和爸爸
下棋
in the sitting room
奶奶
看電視
在沙發(fā)上
媽媽
聽(tīng)音樂(lè)
在床上
姐姐
打電話
in her bedroom
哥哥
看書(shū)
在房間里
我
做作業(yè)
at the desk
妹妹
玩玩具
在地上

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【答案】例文
Hi, this is my family. It’s seven o’clock in the evening. Let’s see what we are doing. My grandpa and my father are playing chess in the sitting room. My grandma is watching TV on the sofa. My mother is listening to music on her bed. My sister is talking to her friend on the phone. She is in her bedroom. Where is my brother? He is reading a book in his room. I am doing my homework at the desk. My sister is only three years old. She is playing with toys on the floor. Everyone is busy.
【解析】
【詳解】
1. 題干解讀：本題屬于材料作文，題目的開(kāi)頭已給出。根據(jù)題目要求寫(xiě)一下全家人正在做的事情。寫(xiě)作時(shí)要緊扣材料內(nèi)容并進(jìn)行適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。因?yàn)榻榻B類的，注意句型上不要過(guò)于單一。寫(xiě)好時(shí)，再閱讀一遍，減少語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤，不要犯單詞拼寫(xiě)上的錯(cuò)誤。
2. 例文點(diǎn)評(píng)：這是一篇比較優(yōu)秀的例文。例文緊扣題目要求，寫(xiě)出了全家人正在做的事情及地點(diǎn)。例文結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，行文連貫，本文挨個(gè)介紹，所以多使用簡(jiǎn)單句。人稱主要是第三人稱，主謂一致使用得當(dāng)。
3.高分亮點(diǎn)：詞組：play chess；in the sitting room；watch TV；listen to music；on the phone；at the desk；three years old；
句型：祈使句Let’s see what we are doing. /My grandpa and my father are playing chess in the sitting room. /Where is my brother? /Everyone is busy.
12．假如你是王丹，剛剛轉(zhuǎn)學(xué)到新學(xué)校，那里有很多規(guī)則要遵守。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下表格提示，用英語(yǔ)給你的美國(guó)筆友Lisa寫(xiě)一封約70詞的英文電子郵件，談?wù)勀愕男聦W(xué)校校規(guī)。
必須
不能
早晨八點(diǎn)前到校
課堂上不能聽(tīng)音樂(lè)
課前打掃教室
不能在教室里吃東西
在校穿校服
不能在走廊里跑

要求： 郵件詞數(shù)約70詞；電子郵件的格式、開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
Dear Lisa,I study in a new school now.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Do you have any school rules? Please write to me.
Yours,
Wang Dan
【答案】例文
Dear Lisa,
I study in a new school now. There are lots of rules in my new school. We must get to school before 8 o'clock in the morning. We have to clean the classroom before class. We also have to wear the school uniforms at school. We can't listen to music in class. We can't eat in the classroom or run in the hallways, either.
Do you any school rules? Please write to me.
Yours,
Wang Dan
【解析】
【詳解】
1.題干解讀：該題屬于材料作文，用郵件的格式寫(xiě)；給出學(xué)校校規(guī)規(guī)定的三個(gè)必須和三個(gè)不能，在作文里都要體現(xiàn)到；要注意句式的運(yùn)用和轉(zhuǎn)換，避免行文像流水賬一樣；適當(dāng)用一些情態(tài)動(dòng)詞，一般用第一人稱敘述，時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。
2.例文點(diǎn)評(píng)：例文開(kāi)門(mén)見(jiàn)山，直接敘述新學(xué)校里有很多校規(guī)；敘述三個(gè)必須的時(shí)候，分別用must和have to兩種單詞和短語(yǔ)表達(dá)必須；敘述不能做的事情時(shí)，后兩個(gè)要求合并為一個(gè)句子，減少啰嗦，適當(dāng)運(yùn)用also和either來(lái)使行文連貫。
3.高分亮點(diǎn)：
短語(yǔ)：have to；get to school；listen to music；the school uniforms。
句型：there be 句型；含有must的句型；含有can的句型。
13．書(shū)面表達(dá)
學(xué)生應(yīng)當(dāng)遵守學(xué)校的規(guī)章制度。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)提示，以“School Rules”為題，敘述中學(xué)生應(yīng)遵守的一些規(guī)章制度，并談?wù)勀愕目捶ā?0詞左右(開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))。
要點(diǎn)提示：
1．在課堂上不亂講話，要認(rèn)真聽(tīng)老師講課，不帶食物進(jìn)教室，保持教室安靜、整潔；
2．課后要按時(shí)完成作業(yè)；
3．在學(xué)校，要穿校服；
4．保護(hù)學(xué)校的一草一木；
5．與老師和同學(xué)們友好相處。
School Rules
Every school has rules for students. As students, we must obey them._____________
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【答案】School rules
Every school has rules for students. As a student, we must obey them.?First of all, in class, we?shouldn't talk but listen to the teachers carefully. We are not supposed to take food or drinks into the?classroom. We should keep our classroom quiet and clean. Then, after class, we should finish our homework on time. One more thing, we should wear our school uniforms in school. Besides, we should?protect trees, grass and flowers there because they make our school more beautiful. At last, we should get on well with our teachers and classmates.
【解析】
【詳解】
本文是一篇給材料作文。要求以以 "School rules" 為題，敘述中學(xué)生應(yīng)遵守的一些規(guī)章制度，并談?wù)勀愕目捶?。學(xué)生應(yīng)當(dāng)遵守學(xué)校的規(guī)章制度。文章時(shí)態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱主要為第一人稱。本文所給材料比較詳細(xì)，考生要做的就是用正確的英語(yǔ)把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，并可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。在寫(xiě)作時(shí)，注意緊扣主題，連句成篇，要層次清楚，要點(diǎn)分明，中心突出。同時(shí)要注意語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，最好不要寫(xiě)太長(zhǎng)的復(fù)合句；盡量選取簡(jiǎn)單的易拼寫(xiě)的單詞，確保正確率；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，可以為文章增色添彩。最后要細(xì)心復(fù)核檢查，確保正確無(wú)誤。
【點(diǎn)睛】
點(diǎn)睛：首先認(rèn)真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點(diǎn)；然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)及每個(gè)要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá)；然后緊扣要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆寫(xiě)作，在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中，要注意句與句、段與段之間的過(guò)渡，要仔細(xì)檢查有無(wú)單詞拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)誤用等，還要檢查語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無(wú)重復(fù)、啰嗦的語(yǔ)言，大小寫(xiě)是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。
14．書(shū)面表達(dá)。
假設(shè)你是李華，上周末你參加了一次郊游。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面表格中的提示信息寫(xiě)一篇題為“An Exciting Trip”的英語(yǔ)短文。
An Exciting Trip

時(shí)間
上周末
參加者
你和……
地點(diǎn)
北海公園(the Beihai Park)
活動(dòng)
騎自行車、爬山、野炊(have a picnic)、照相、做游戲……
感受
……

要求：1.不要逐條翻譯表格中的信息，可適當(dāng)增減內(nèi)容；2.語(yǔ)句通順，表達(dá)正確；
3．詞數(shù)：60詞左右。
【答案】An Exciting Trip
Last weekend，I went for a trip with my classmates.At 7：30 in the morning，we met at our school gate.We__went__to__the__Beihai__Park__by__bike.On__the__way，we__were__so__excited__that__we__sang__songs.When__we__arrived__there，we__started__to__climb__the__mountain.We__had__a__picnic__on__the__top__of__the__mountain.After__that，we__took__some__photos.Then__some__girls__danced__under__the__trees__and__some__boys__played__games__happily.We__went__home__by__4：00__p．m.We__were__tired__but__very__happy.We__really__had__a__great__time!
What__an__exciting__trip__it__was!
【解析】
【詳解】
這是一篇材料作文。假設(shè)你是李華，上周末你參加了一次郊游。根據(jù)下面表格中的提示信息寫(xiě)一篇題為“An Exciting Trip”的英語(yǔ)短文。本文人稱主要是第一人稱，時(shí)態(tài)主要是一般過(guò)去時(shí)。仔細(xì)閱讀提示和要點(diǎn)、注意事項(xiàng)。這些要點(diǎn)構(gòu)成寫(xiě)作的基本框架。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)提示要點(diǎn)，列出本文的寫(xiě)作提綱，提綱包括所有提示要點(diǎn)。寫(xiě)完以后，注意再讀一遍，看看有無(wú)拼寫(xiě)、語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤（時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致等）。本文提綱：
一次令人興奮的旅行
上周末，我和我的同學(xué)去旅行了。早上7:30，我們?cè)趯W(xué)校大門(mén)口見(jiàn)面。我們
騎自行車去北海公園。在路上，我們?nèi)绱说嘏d奮以至于我們唱起了歌。當(dāng)我們到達(dá)那里時(shí)，我們開(kāi)始爬山。我們?cè)谏巾斏弦安汀Ｔ谀侵?，我們拍了一些照片。然后一些女孩在?shù)下跳舞，一些男孩高興地玩游戲。我們?cè)谙挛?點(diǎn)之前回到了家。我們很累，但很高興。我們真的玩得很開(kāi)心！
這是多么一次激動(dòng)人心的旅行啊！
【點(diǎn)睛】
這篇文章很好地完成了規(guī)定的寫(xiě)作任務(wù)．包含所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，結(jié)構(gòu)完整，語(yǔ)句流暢，意思清楚、連貫．使用較為豐富的語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯，語(yǔ)法和詞匯錯(cuò)誤極少，格式正確，書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范。學(xué)以致用，運(yùn)用了重要句型和短語(yǔ)有：on the way/so…that…/on the top of/have a great time/ What an exciting trip it was!等。（1）學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)，牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ)，寫(xiě)作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性，更富有條理。（2）列好提綱和要點(diǎn)及需要的重要短語(yǔ)或句型。（3）切忌堆砌詞語(yǔ)、句子，注意運(yùn)用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞使句子流暢、連貫。注意表達(dá)的順序。 （4）注意書(shū)寫(xiě)的規(guī)范：大小寫(xiě)、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)等的正確運(yùn)用。（5）注意檢查：?jiǎn)卧~拼寫(xiě)、語(yǔ)法、動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)序、主謂一致等。
15．假如你是李華，來(lái)自美國(guó)的新朋友Tom發(fā)郵件給你介紹了他的個(gè)人情況，并詢問(wèn)你的相關(guān)情況。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面的提示信息，用英語(yǔ)給他回一封郵件。
提示：1. 家庭情況;
2. 飲食習(xí)慣;
3. 學(xué)校生活。
注意：1.詞數(shù)60左右；
2. 文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名和校名;
3. 郵件的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
Dear Tom,
How are you? I’m writing to tell you something about myself. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Come to Anqing and play with me!
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文：
Dear Tom,
How are you? I’m writing to tell you something about myself.
I have a happy family. My father is 38 years old. He’s a teacher. My mother is 36. They love me very much. I am in a middle school in Anqing. I have seven classes every school day. At school, we have Chinese, English, math, music and so on. English is my favorite subject.I think it’s interesting. After school, I often play basketball with my friends. For food, I like rice, fruit and vegetables. They are good for my health.
Come to Anqing and play with me!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【詳解】
1.題干解讀：該題目為應(yīng)用文，要求寫(xiě)一封郵件介紹自己的情況，注意要按照三個(gè)要點(diǎn)來(lái)展開(kāi)。開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，只寫(xiě)出正文就好。。
2.寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)：時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，主語(yǔ)為第一人稱，依次介紹自己的家庭情況、飲食習(xí)慣以及學(xué)校里的生活，可適當(dāng)進(jìn)行擴(kuò)展，注意使用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞。
16．以 My best friend???為題目，寫(xiě)一篇作文。
提示：1.介紹你的好朋友Joe的外貌及性格特征。
2.他的生日是2004年6月1日。介紹他在學(xué)校喜歡的課，喜歡吃的食物及喜歡的運(yùn)動(dòng)和樂(lè)器。
3.他的愿望是當(dāng)一名演員。
要求：1.使用所給的全部信息，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。
2.條理清晰，語(yǔ)法正確；
3.字跡工整；字?jǐn)?shù)80。
【答案】My good friend is Joe .He is 14 years old.He is tall and thin with two big eyes.He was born on June1,2004.His favorite subject is history.He likes reading history because he thinks it is very interesting.He likes carrots best.He likes sports.He often plays football with his friends after class.He also plays violin well.His wants to be an actor in the future.
【解析】
【詳解】
這是一篇要求介紹自己的好朋友Joe。動(dòng)筆前先要認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn)，圍繞要點(diǎn)組織材料，然后用正確的英語(yǔ)句子把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)，在此基礎(chǔ)上亦可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點(diǎn)。根據(jù)材料可知本文主要是應(yīng)用第三人稱，一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)及大小寫(xiě)等問(wèn)題，不要犯語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語(yǔ)意連貫。
三、電子郵件
17．假如你是張麗，你的美國(guó)朋友Jack給你發(fā)來(lái)一封電子郵件，詢問(wèn)你喜歡的運(yùn)動(dòng)和食物。請(qǐng)根據(jù)表格內(nèi)容給他回一封電子郵件。

喜歡
理由
不喜歡
理由
食物
雞肉
健康又美味
漢堡包
不健康
西紅柿
運(yùn)動(dòng)
棒球
有趣又放松
乒乓球
很難
足球
要求：1.語(yǔ)句通順，語(yǔ)意連貫，語(yǔ)法正確；2.表格提示內(nèi)容全部包括，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
3.詞數(shù)60左右，開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
Dear Jack,
I’m happy to get your e?mail.Now let me tell you something about me.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That’s all.
Yours,
Zhang Li
【答案】例文：
Dear Jack,
I’m happy to get your e-mail. Now let me tell you something about me. I think I have good eating habits. I like eating chicken and tomatoes.They are healthy and nice. I always eat them for lunch. But I don’t like hamburgers. I think they’re not healthy.????????
For sports, I like to play baseball and soccer. I think they’re interesting and relaxing. I always play them with my friends. But I don’t like ping-pong. It’s difficult for me.
That’s all.
Yours,
Zhang Li
【解析】
【詳解】
1.題干解讀：本文是一篇書(shū)信作文，要求以張麗的名義給好友杰克發(fā)一封電子郵件，按照表格內(nèi)容介紹自己喜歡的及不喜歡的食物和運(yùn)動(dòng)，并分別闡述原因。
2.寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)：本文主題為“喜歡及不喜歡的食物和運(yùn)動(dòng)”；文章時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，以第一人稱為主，注意主謂一致問(wèn)題；寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意層次清晰，條理清楚，先介紹喜歡及不喜歡的食物并闡明原因，再介紹喜歡及不喜歡的運(yùn)動(dòng)并表述原因。
四、看圖作文
18．書(shū)面表達(dá)
假如你叫李平，你的網(wǎng)友瑪麗（Mary）將去你家拜訪你，但她不知道怎么從火車站去你家。請(qǐng)參照下面的路線圖給瑪麗發(fā)一封電子郵件，告訴她具體的路線。
寫(xiě)作要求：信息全面，路線表達(dá)清晰、明了，符合電子郵件格式，60詞左右。

___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】Dear Mary,
　　I will tell you the way to my house．Please take a taxi from the train station．You pass a bank on your right．Turn right and go along Red Street．You can find a police station on your right．Turn left at the second crossing and go along White Street．Then turn right at the first crossing．You can see my house on your left．It's across from a hospital．
【解析】
【詳解】
根據(jù)題干，要注意電子郵件的格式。首先頂格寫(xiě)稱呼（Dear Mary,）；最后在郵件右下角寫(xiě)署名（Yours, Li Ping）。郵件使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)即可。.郵件正文可分為兩部分：
①首先，要對(duì)瑪麗的來(lái)訪表示歡迎，并且樂(lè)意告訴她來(lái)自己家的路線。
②其次，要詳細(xì)介紹怎么到自己家。出火車站后，筆直走，如果看到一個(gè)銀行，則要向右轉(zhuǎn)，再沿著里德街道走；看到警察局向左轉(zhuǎn)到懷特街，到第二個(gè)路口時(shí)向右轉(zhuǎn)，自己家在左側(cè)，即醫(yī)院的對(duì)面。
【點(diǎn)睛】
首先認(rèn)真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點(diǎn)；然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)及每個(gè)要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá)；然后緊扣要點(diǎn)，要仔細(xì)檢查有無(wú)單詞拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)誤用等，還要檢查語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無(wú)重復(fù)、啰嗦的語(yǔ)言，大小寫(xiě)是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。
五、書(shū)信作文
19．假如你是Kate，現(xiàn)在就讀于北京某國(guó)際學(xué)校，上周你學(xué)校組織了一次旅行。你們游覽了北京的許多名勝古跡（place of interest），如長(zhǎng)城、故宮、天安門(mén)廣場(chǎng)（Tian’anmen Square)等。請(qǐng)你給你的同學(xué)Mike寫(xiě)一封60詞左右的書(shū)信介紹一下你的這次學(xué)校旅行。
Dear Mike,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Kate
【答案】例文：
Dear Mike,
How are you? How was your school trip?
I went on a school trip with my classmates last week in Beijing, China. It was great. You know Beijing is the capital of China. It has lots of places of interest. Last Sunday, the weather was sunny. We went to the Great Wall and it was great and exciting. Then we went to the Palace Museum. It was cool! Next we visited Tian’anmen Square. It was beautiful. Oh, I took a lot of photos on the trip. All of us had great fun on the school trip!
Please write back soon and tell me about your trip.
Yours,
Kate
【解析】
1.題干解讀：本文是一封書(shū)信，要注意書(shū)信的格式，文章主要是向朋友介紹上周的學(xué)校旅行，題中給出了旅行的相關(guān)內(nèi)容，在寫(xiě)作中要進(jìn)行運(yùn)用，也可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使文章更加流暢。
2.寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)：本文主要是向朋友介紹上周的學(xué)校旅行，在介紹北京的情況時(shí)，用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，介紹旅行過(guò)程時(shí)用一般過(guò)去時(shí)。第一段主要是問(wèn)候朋友；第二段重點(diǎn)介紹北京并描述旅行過(guò)程和感受，寫(xiě)作時(shí)要注意連接詞的使用，使文章更加有層次；最后一段表達(dá)祝愿。寫(xiě)作中注意時(shí)態(tài)的轉(zhuǎn)換，同時(shí)保證無(wú)語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤和單詞拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤。
20．你的筆友Bill打算在暑假期間來(lái)看望你，并來(lái)信問(wèn)及你所在城市的天氣情況。請(qǐng)你給他寫(xiě)一封信，介紹一下你們城市夏天的天氣情況。要求：內(nèi)容合理，語(yǔ)句通順；70詞左右；信的開(kāi)頭、結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
Dear Bill,
I’m happy you will come to Beijing. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Ming
【答案】例文：
Dear Bill,
I’m happy you will come to Beijing. Let me tell you the weather here. Usually, the summer here is from June to September. It is very hot in summer here, but in the early morning it’s cool. People usually go out in the morning. In the afternoon, they often relax in the house or go swimming in the pool. At night, people go out to shop or see friends. It often rains here in summer. I hope you can enjoy the summer here.
Yours,
Li Ming
【解析】
1.題干解讀：該題目屬于書(shū)信作文，題目要求是給你的筆友Bill回一封信，向他介紹一下你們城市夏天的天氣情況。內(nèi)容要合理，語(yǔ)句要通順；70詞左右。
2.寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)：本文是一篇書(shū)信，信的開(kāi)頭、結(jié)尾已給出，我們首先要承接開(kāi)頭，引出話題，介紹自己所在城市的天氣情況。時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主，人稱使用第一人稱介紹。寫(xiě)作時(shí)，要注意緊扣文章主題，內(nèi)容要完整，表述要準(zhǔn)確，語(yǔ)言的表述要符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句要符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。


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