專題05 單元話題滿分范文必背15道 -八年級英語上學(xué)期期末復(fù)習(xí)查缺補(bǔ)漏沖刺滿分 (人教版)-試卷下載-教習(xí)網(wǎng)

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專題05 單元話題滿分范文15道

1.注意篇章結(jié)構(gòu)，合理布局
開始部分說出文中的要點(diǎn)、核心問題。
正文部分圍繞主題展開敘述、討論。
結(jié)尾部分對全文內(nèi)容進(jìn)行總結(jié)和概括。
2.確定主題句
主題句是全文對概括，是文章的主旨。它能在文章中起到“畫龍點(diǎn)睛”的作用。通常主旨句最好放在作文的開頭，而后是對全文主題句所提出的內(nèi)容進(jìn)行解釋、論述。
3.重要連接詞
表示順序增加
First, then / next, after that / next, finally
For one thing … for another…,
On (the) one hand…on the other hand,
Besides / what’s more / in addition / furthermore / moreover / another / also
表示時間順序
now, at present, recently,
at first, in the beginning, to begin with,
later, next, finally,
form now on, from then on,
till, not…until, before, after, when, while, as during,
表示解釋說明
now, in addition, for example, for instance, in this case, moreover
表示轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系
but, however, while, though, or, otherwise, on the hand
表示并列關(guān)系
or, and, also, too, not only … but also, both… and, either …or, neither…nor
表示因果關(guān)系
because, because of, since, now that, as, thanks to…, due to…, therefore

1. Mike 是一名中學(xué)生，他沉迷于玩電腦游戲，并因此影響了他的學(xué)習(xí)。作為Mike的好朋友，你打算怎么幫助他呢？請用下面所給的提示寫一篇80詞左右的短文(開頭不計入總詞數(shù))。
提示：give up; waste time; be interested in; have a great time
Dear Mike，
Thanks for your letter.I am sorry to hear that you are in trouble now._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】Dear Mike，
Thanks for your letter. I am sorry to hear that you are in trouble now. Don't worry. Let me help you. Now, I'll give you some advice about how to do better in your study. If you play too much computer games, you'll waste lots of time. As a result, you'll have little time to do your homework. If you give up playing computer games, you may be interested in other things, like study or sports. So you should give up the computer games and work hard. I think if you keep working hard, you'll have a great time at school with your good friends.
【詳解】
這是一篇材料作文。Mike是一名中學(xué)生, 他沉迷于電腦游戲, 并因此影響了學(xué)習(xí)。假如你是Mike的好朋友，要求你寫一篇短文，給他一些意見和建議幫助他。寫作前要仔細(xì)審題，確定寫作的重點(diǎn)，要把握好時態(tài)和人稱。為使文章更有條理性可以先分條列出寫作計劃，列出所用到的一些基本詞匯、詞組；注意語意要通順，符合邏輯關(guān)系，上下文之間可以適當(dāng)使用連詞。為避免文章的單調(diào)和枯燥，應(yīng)該考慮運(yùn)用比較高級的語法形式讓文章增色。注意不要犯語法、句法以及搭配性錯誤。最后要細(xì)心復(fù)核檢查，確保正確無誤。
提示詞語：give up; waste… time; be interested in; have a great time
2．假如你是Sally，你的好友Helen邀請你下個周末去動物園, 但你因?yàn)橛刑嗟氖虑橐? 只好婉言拒絕。請你根據(jù)下面表格中的提示給她寫一封電子郵件, 向她講述你謝絕的原因。

Morning
Afternoon
Evening
Saturday
Go to see a dentist
Wash clothes and clean the room
Help her classmate with his English
Sunday
Study for a science test
Go to the sports club
Practice the violin
要求：1.語言規(guī)范, 行文流暢；
2.70詞左右(開頭、結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù))。
Dear Helen，
Thanks a lot for your invitation. I'm sorry I can't__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thank you very much for asking.
Yours，
Sally
【答案】Dear Helen，
Thanks a lot for your invitation.I'm sorry I can't go to the zoo with you，because I am pretty busy this weekend.On Saturday morning，I have to go to see a dentist because of my teeth.In the afternoon，I have to wash clothes and clean the room.I will help my classmate with his English on Saturday evening.On Sunday，I plan to study for a science test and go to the sports club to practice playing tennis.And I have to practice the violin in the evening.
Thank you very much for asking.
Yours，
Sally
【詳解】
試題分析：這是一篇材料作文，表中內(nèi)容就是本文的寫作要點(diǎn)。這些要點(diǎn)構(gòu)成寫作的基本框架。我們要做的就是用正確的英語把要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮想象說出自己的觀點(diǎn)。動筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)和一般將來時來寫，要注意主謂一致等問題。寫作中要適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。
點(diǎn)睛：首先認(rèn)真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點(diǎn)；然后根據(jù)表中內(nèi)容，列出寫作要點(diǎn)及每個要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá)；然后緊扣要點(diǎn)，動筆寫作，在寫作過程中，要注意句與句、段與段之間的過渡，必要時可適當(dāng)運(yùn)用表示轉(zhuǎn)折、因果、并列、比較等關(guān)系的連詞，使文章過渡平穩(wěn)，自然流暢；最后要細(xì)心復(fù)核檢查，確保正確無誤。
3．西紅柿炒雞蛋(scrambled eggs with tomatoes)是一道家常菜，它既美味可口又簡單易做。根據(jù)所給提示，以＂How to make scrambled eggs with tomatoes＂為題寫一篇80詞左右的短文。原料：一個西紅柿、三個雞蛋、一個青椒(green pepper)、鹽、油(oil)
步驟：
1. 將西紅柿和青椒切碎；
2. 把雞蛋打破(break)放入碗里并攪拌；
3. 往雞蛋里放些鹽并攪拌；
4. 將平底鍋(pan)加熱，鍋里放些油，然后放入雞蛋、西紅柿和青椒；
5. 翻炒兩分鐘即可。
How to make scrambled eggs with tomatoes
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【答案】How to make scrambled eggs with tomatoes
Do you like scrambled eggs with tomatoes? The dish is delicious and easy to cook. Here’s a recipe for it. First cut up one tomato and one green pepper. Next break three eggs and put them into a bowl and mix them. Add some salt and mix again. Then heat the pan and pour some oil into the pan. Put the eggs, the tomato and the green pepper into the pan. Finally cook for two minutes. Now you can enjoy it.
【詳解】
首先認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的主要內(nèi)容，文章文體和時態(tài)。這篇作文所給材料非常詳細(xì)，我們只要用合適的句式，正確的語言進(jìn)行介紹就可以。根據(jù)該文章是一篇介紹如何做西紅柿炒雞蛋的說明文可知會出現(xiàn)大量的描述應(yīng)該如何做的祈使句。為了說明做菜步驟，選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性和邏輯性。
【點(diǎn)睛】
這篇短文首先利用一句話“The dish is delicious and easy to cook”引入正文，開始介紹西紅柿炒雞蛋的做法。在介紹時，first，next，then，finally表示順序的詞的應(yīng)用使得做菜步驟清晰有序，令讀者一目了然。首尾句“Now you can enjoy it.”使得這篇說明文首尾呼應(yīng)?？傊@篇短文達(dá)到了預(yù)期的寫作目的，是一篇比較成功的文章。
4．請根據(jù)上面短文的內(nèi)容以及下列提示，以"How to Make Tomato and Egg Soup"為題用英文寫一篇短文。
提示:
1.下周末，同學(xué)們準(zhǔn)備辦一次聚會;
2.在聚會上，你打算烹制一款中式的、清淡的西紅柿蛋花湯。
要求:寫出烹制西紅柿蛋花湯的簡易過程;注意烹制的順序步驟;不少于60詞。
提示詞: three tomatoes; some green Chinese onion (大蔥) ， cut into small pieces; a spoon of oil; some salt; two eggs，take out egg white(蛋白) and egg yolk (蛋黃) ; three bowls of water
【答案】How to Make Tomato and Egg Soup
The students are going to have a party next weekend. At the party, I’m going to cook a Chinese tomato egg soup for the students. First, cut three tomatoes and some green Chinese onion into small pieces. Then put a spoon of oil into a pot. When the oil is hot, put them into the pot. Next add three bowls of water and some salt. Then cook for five minutes. Next take out two eggs and take out egg white and egg yolk. After that, mix them together. Finally put them into the pot. Now the delicious tomato and egg Soup is ready.
【詳解】
這是篇材料作文，提示內(nèi)容就是本文的寫作要點(diǎn)。這些要點(diǎn)構(gòu)成寫作的基本框架。我們要做的就是用正確的英語把要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮想象說出自己的觀點(diǎn)。動筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)來寫，要注意主謂一致等問題。寫作中要適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。
點(diǎn)睛：首先認(rèn)真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點(diǎn)；然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫作要點(diǎn)及每個要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá)；然后緊扣要點(diǎn)，動筆寫作，在寫作過程中，要注意句與句、段與段之間的過渡，必要時可適當(dāng)運(yùn)用表示轉(zhuǎn)折、因果、并列、比較等關(guān)系的連詞，使文章過渡平穩(wěn)，自然流暢；最后要細(xì)心復(fù)核檢查，確保正確無誤。
5．未來總是讓人充滿幻想, 請根據(jù)下列提示, 以“The Life in the Future”為題寫一篇80個詞左右的英語短文。
提示:
1. 想象一下未來的生活會是什么樣子;
2. 具體介紹一下未來的生活: 很多事情都由電腦和機(jī)器人完成。例如: 料理家務(wù)、購物、看病, 孩子們通過網(wǎng)絡(luò)把課堂搬到家里, 人們可以活到200歲等;
3. 為了未來的生活, 我們現(xiàn)在應(yīng)該努力學(xué)習(xí), 實(shí)現(xiàn)理想。
要求:
1. 語句通順, 內(nèi)容完整, 語法正確;
2. 不要逐字翻譯提示的內(nèi)容, 想象內(nèi)容要合情合理。
The Life in the Future
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【答案】The Life in the Future
What do you think the life in the future will be like?
Every family will have computers and robots. Computers will help us know a lot all over the world. Robots will help us do most of the housework. They can help us do some cleaning, cooking or washing. We can do some shopping and see a doctor without going out. Students can study at home on computers. People will live to be 200 years old because of the better medical care.
Our life will be better and better. For this, we should study hard. I believe we’ll be able to do this.
【詳解】
1.題干解讀：本篇材料作文要求用第一人稱的方式描述我們未來的生活是什么樣，內(nèi)容包括電腦和機(jī)器人出現(xiàn)在我們?nèi)粘Ｉ?，人們學(xué)習(xí)、看病、購物等方面的變化，為了實(shí)現(xiàn)這樣的生活，我們該努力學(xué)習(xí)等。講述的未來發(fā)生的事情，用一般將來時；書寫時要注意用全所給材料，文句通順，內(nèi)容完整。
2.例文點(diǎn)評：本例文結(jié)構(gòu)嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)，層次分明。開篇用賓語從句引入主題；正文部分描繪有電腦和機(jī)器人，我們未來的生活會是什么樣的；結(jié)尾暢想未來，表達(dá)為實(shí)現(xiàn)未來生活要努力學(xué)習(xí)。文章布局合理，內(nèi)容完整連貫。
3.高分亮點(diǎn)：本篇例文短語豐富、文句簡潔。用will句型和情態(tài)動詞can；短語know a lot ；about help sb do sth；help us do most of the housework；help us do some cleaning, cooking or washing；do some shopping ；see a doctor；study at home on computers；伴隨結(jié)構(gòu)without going out描述未來生活的樣子；用形容詞比較級 better and better展望未來；文句精彩，行文通暢。
【點(diǎn)睛】
本篇材料作文書寫前要認(rèn)真審題，確定人稱（第一人稱）和時態(tài)（一般將來時）；書寫時要緊扣主題，圍繞生活、學(xué)習(xí)、看病、購物等方面的變化來描述我們未來的生活；成文后要檢查人稱、時態(tài)是否一致、單詞的拼寫是否正確、短語和句式的使用是否得當(dāng)。
6．根據(jù)漢語提示及要求，以"My Dream Job"為題用英語寫一篇短文。
提示： 1. 想成為一名記者；
2. 打算給報紙、雜志寫文章；
3.高中畢業(yè)后想去北京上大學(xué)；
4. 想在一家電臺工作并環(huán)游世界。
要求： 1. 條理清楚，語句通順，語法正確，書寫規(guī)范；
2. 不少于60詞。
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【答案】My Dream Job
When I grow up, I'm going to be a journalist. Next year, I'm going to write articles for magazines and newspapers. I'm going to a university in Beijing after senior school. Maybe I'm going to find a part-time job and save some money. Next, I'm going to work for a TV station as a journalist. Then I'm going to travel all over the world.
【解析】
本文屬于材料，要表達(dá)我夢想的工作。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語言表達(dá)符合英語習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時態(tài)、主謂一致，特別適用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如be going to, after, maybe, part-time job, save, next以及then等。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫。
點(diǎn)睛：寫作時可以從以下幾個方面做起：
認(rèn)真審題。審好題是寫好書面表達(dá)的關(guān)鍵。審題時要注意試題的要求，抓住要點(diǎn)，詞數(shù)符合要求。
構(gòu)思提綱。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫作材料。通常書面表達(dá)給出的話題是開放的，而具體的內(nèi)容要求學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀?、明確的關(guān)鍵。
初寫短文。一切都準(zhǔn)備就緒，就可以動筆寫作了，在寫作的過程中我們要注意句子的準(zhǔn)確性、連貫性以及簡潔性。使用的詞語、短語及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。同時還要注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。
修改潤色。修改潤色是獲取高分的必要步驟。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯誤外，還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無重復(fù)、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。
7．假如你是學(xué)校英文周刊的特約小記者，剛剛采訪了丹尼（Danny）一家對電視節(jié)目的喜好。請你根據(jù)下面的提示，寫一篇調(diào)查報告。
提示：
1. What programs does your father love?
2. What programs can’t your mother stand?
3. What programs don’t you mind? ...
要求：
1. 語句通順、符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
2. 80詞左右。開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。
What do Danny’s family think of different TV shows? Let’s have a look. ______________________
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【答案】What do Danny’s family think of different TV shows? Let’s have a look. Danny’s father loves the news and talk shows. He thinks talk shows are educational. He doesn’t mind sports shows or soap operas. Danny’s mother can’t stand the news or sports shows. She thinks they are boring. She doesn’t mind talk shows. Her favorite shows are soap operas. What about Danny? Sports shows and talk shows are his favorite shows. He doesn’t mind the news. As for soup operas, he can’t stand them.
【詳解】
題干解讀：這篇短文主要介紹丹尼一家對電視節(jié)目的喜好，所以用一般現(xiàn)在時，注意第三人稱單數(shù)形式的使用。根據(jù)提示必須介紹丹尼父親喜好什么節(jié)目，她的媽媽不喜歡什么節(jié)目，丹尼不能忍受的節(jié)目，其他可以適當(dāng)擴(kuò)展。
例文點(diǎn)評：這篇短文采用一般現(xiàn)在時對丹尼一家對電視節(jié)目的喜歡進(jìn)行了介紹，注意到了第三人稱單數(shù)形式的變化，不僅介紹了提示內(nèi)容而且進(jìn)行了適當(dāng)?shù)臄U(kuò)展。通過What about Danny?及As for soup operas,的使用，使得短文結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，行文連貫。
高分亮點(diǎn)：
短語：talk shows；soap operas；one’s favorite；As for soup operas
對事物看法的句式：主語+ love/like…; can’t stand…; don’t/doesn’t mind; 賓語從句：He thinks talk shows are educational.
8．請根據(jù)表格內(nèi)容寫一篇80詞左右的英語短文，簡單說明你對下列各電視節(jié)目的態(tài)度以及原因。
Programs
Attitudes
Reasons
Talent shows
Like
Interesting and exciting
News
Like
Knowing what is happening in the world
Soap operas
Can't stand
Boring and not real
Sports shows
Don't mind
not very interesting
Talk shows
Love
Learning something from the performers

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【答案】There are many programs on TV.I like talent shows，because they are interesting and exciting.I like news，too.It can tell me what is happening around the world.But I can't stand soap operas.They are boring and the things in it aren't real at all.As for the sports shows，I don't mind them.My favorite programs are talk shows.I can learn something useful from them.They are educational.
【詳解】
短文根據(jù)表格提示，先提到電視節(jié)目。接下來分別介紹了對不同電視節(jié)目的看法：喜歡達(dá)人秀是因?yàn)橛腥ず土钊思樱灰蚕矚g新聞，因?yàn)樗梢愿嬖V我世界上發(fā)生著什么事情；不喜歡電視劇因?yàn)樗鼈儧]趣味，不真實(shí)；最喜歡的節(jié)目是脫口秀，我可以學(xué)到很多東西，有教育意義。整段短文有條理，邏輯性強(qiáng)。
9．根據(jù)提示，以“My Best Friend and I ”為題寫一篇英語短文，比較你倆的特征，至少10句話。除提示外，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。
提示：1.我的好友名叫琳達(dá)；
2.在某些方面，我們看上去一樣；在某些方面，我們看起來不同；
3．我們都有黑眼睛，黑頭發(fā)；
4.她比我高，比我文靜，很認(rèn)真；
5.我外向一點(diǎn)，而且比她風(fēng)趣；
6.都喜歡讀書。
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【答案】My best friend and I
My name is Linda. I have a good friend. Her name is Tina. We are in the same grade but in different classes. My friend and I look the same. We have black eyes and long black hair. But we are different anyway. Tina is taller than I. She is quieter and more careful than I. But I am more outgoing than her. And I am much funnier than her. Both of us like reading books.
【詳解】
亮點(diǎn)說明：本文從外貌和性格多方面介紹了我和我的朋友的異同。運(yùn)用比較級敘述使文章的語言鮮明生動，有可讀性強(qiáng)。在不同語言邏輯關(guān)系中用but和and連接，讓我們更容易理解作者的心情。
【點(diǎn)睛】
書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語知識準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。
10．史密斯先生是一位醫(yī)生，他非常注重自己的身心健康，所以他把自己的業(yè)余生活安排得豐富多彩。請根據(jù)下面表格的內(nèi)容，描述他的業(yè)余活動。
要求：1. 將表格所給信息全部體現(xiàn)在文章中；
2. 行文條理清楚，意思連貫，語句通順；
3. 不少于60詞。
活動
頻率
鍛煉
一周三次
購物
一周一次
去看電影
一月一次
上網(wǎng)
一周兩次
讀書
每天

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【答案】例文
Mr. Smith is a doctor. Usually he is very busy, but he does different activities when he has time. He exercises three times a week. His favorite sports are swimming, ping-pong and basketball. On weekends, he often goes shopping. He shops once a week. He doesn’t like watching TV, but he goes to the movies once a month and uses the Internet twice a week. He enjoys reading very much. He reads books every day. His good lifestyle helps him keep healthy.
【詳解】
題干解讀：這是一篇通過表格給出材料的作文。根據(jù)要求可知首先介紹史密斯先生的基本情況，然后根據(jù)表格介紹五項(xiàng)活動及其每項(xiàng)活動的頻率。主要用一般現(xiàn)在時，注意第三人稱單數(shù)形式的使用。
例文點(diǎn)評：這篇短文語言豐富，句式變化多樣。首先介紹了史密斯的職業(yè)及生活狀況。然后用豐富的語言介紹了他的各項(xiàng)活動及頻率，最后對他的生活方式作出簡單評價。短文條理清晰，結(jié)構(gòu)完整，是一篇很好的范文。
高分亮點(diǎn)：短語：three times a week ；keep healthy；once a week；enjoys reading。
復(fù)合句：Usually he is very busy, but he does different activities when he has time；He doesn’t like watching TV, but he goes to the movies once a month and uses the Internet twice a week.
11．假設(shè)你是David，你的好朋友Toby非常喜歡體育運(yùn)動，但是他的父母不允許他花費(fèi)太多時間在運(yùn)動上，為此他很苦惱。請你根據(jù)下面的提示給他寫一封信，針對他的問題，提出你的建議，并給他一些安慰和鼓勵。
提示：1. What should David do in his study？2. What should David talk to his parents？
3. What should David do to his parents？
要求：1. 語句通順、符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2. 70詞左右。開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。
Dear Toby，
I’m sorry to hear that ___________________________________________________________________________
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Yours，
David
【答案】Dear Toby,
I'm sorry to hear that you have problems with your parents.
As for your problems, I have two pieces of advice. First, finish your homework on time every day，and listen to the teachers carefully in class. Make sure that you won't fall behind. Second, have a talk with your parents. You should let them know that doing sports doesn't take up your study time. Instead, it is good for both your study and health.
Just be patient with your parents. I think they will understand you.
Yours,
David
【詳解】
1. 題干解讀：這是一封建議信，短文要求我們以David的身份給好朋友Toby寫信，對他遇到的問題提出自己的建議。題目中利用問題的形式，列出了文章的主要內(nèi)容，這也是學(xué)生們寫作的依據(jù)。審題可知，短文應(yīng)用一般現(xiàn)在時，第一人稱和第二人稱來敘述。
2. 例文點(diǎn)評：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文有以下幾個優(yōu)點(diǎn)：首先文章內(nèi)容充實(shí)、完整，提出的建議很合理；層次清晰，用First, Second列出了自己的建議。其次短文中使用了正確的時態(tài)和人稱，語法規(guī)范、準(zhǔn)確，語言得體；句式結(jié)構(gòu)完整，符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣；最后使用了較豐富的短語和句型，如賓語從句、狀語從句、祈使句等的使用，增加了文章的表現(xiàn)力。
3. 高分亮點(diǎn)：
短語：as for；have problems with；on time；listen to；in class；fall behind；have a talk with；take up；be good for；be patient with。
句型：First, finish your homework on time every day，and listen to the teachers carefully in class.；You should let them know that doing sports doesn't take up your study time. Instead, it is good for both your study and health。
12．Tom邀請Li Ming參加他這個周日的生日宴會, 但Li Ming的父母出差了, 要到下個月才回來, 奶奶又臥病在床, 需要人照顧。另外, 英語考試即將來臨。因此, Li Ming無法前去參加生日宴會。Li Ming感到很抱歉, 只好寫信辭謝。
　　根據(jù)提示寫一封60~80個詞的信。
Dear Tom,
Thank you very much for inviting me to your birthday party. I’d love to go but I can’t. My parents are?
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Li Ming
【答案】Dear Tom,
Thank you very much for inviting me to your birthday party. I’d love to go but I can’t. My parents are out on business. They are coming back next month. And now I have to look after my grandma because she is ill in bed. And I also need to study for my coming English test. I’m very sorry but I can’t go to your party. Thank you for inviting me. I hope you can have a good time.
Li Ming
【詳解】
這是一篇材料作文，根據(jù)材料中的相關(guān)信息介紹一下Li Ming不能參加Tom這個周日的生日宴會的原因。所提供的材料中列舉了不能去的原因：父母出差了, 要到下個月才回來, 奶奶又臥病在床, 需要人照顧。另外, 英語考試即將來臨。時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時，人稱為第一人稱。在寫的時候要注意以下幾點(diǎn)：首先，要對Tom表示感謝，并且介紹不能去的原因。其次，介紹自己現(xiàn)在必須在家要做的事情，如，照顧生病的奶奶，自己要為考試看書。第三，要祝愿Tom玩得愉快。第四，可以借鑒的詞匯如，birthday party, on business, look after, study for, have a good time等。語法要正確，表達(dá)要符合英語習(xí)慣，注意時態(tài)、時間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系，表達(dá)具有條理性。
【高分句型】
And now I have to look after my grandma because she is ill in bed.
現(xiàn)在我得照顧我奶奶，因?yàn)樗P病在床。because she is ill in bed.是由because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語從句。
13．請以“My life in ten years為題，根據(jù)以下提示，用英語寫一篇不少于60詞的短文。提示 (短文須包含下列要點(diǎn))：
1. What do you want to be in ten years ? And why?
2. where will you live in ten years?And why?
3. Say something about your family or your free time activities in ten years.
4. What should you do to achieve your dreams?
注意：短文中,不得出現(xiàn)任何與考生本人有關(guān)的真實(shí)人名、校名及其它相關(guān)信息, 否則不予評分。
My life in ten years
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【答案】My life in ten years
What do think your life will be like in 10 years? Well, I will be a popular and famous singer and I will sing around the world. I will buy a big house for my parents in Hainan. Because I`ve ever been to Hainan a few times and I`ve already fallen in love with it. I will keep a pet dog and I might even keep a cute koala. I will work hard and try my best to make it come true! How about yours?
【詳解】
試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，本文已經(jīng)給出了主要寫作要點(diǎn)，動筆前要先認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn)，然后圍繞要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。寫作中，應(yīng)注意描述的全面性，盡量將提示的內(nèi)容利用上；結(jié)合材料內(nèi)容，可知本文主要是第一人稱，一般將來時態(tài)進(jìn)行敘述。語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。適當(dāng)使用連詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。
寫作亮點(diǎn)：這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少。如: fall in love with愛上；work hard努力學(xué)習(xí)；try one’s best盡力；come true實(shí)現(xiàn)等。學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時就可以適當(dāng)引用, 讓文章更出彩。
14．假設(shè)今天的英語課上大家都在討論“Dream Job”。你對此有什么想法呢？請根據(jù)下面的提示，寫一篇短文談?wù)撘幌履憷硐氲穆殬I(yè)，與大家分享。
提示：1. What's your dream job？
2. Why do you want to do it？
3. How are you going to make your dream come true？
……
要求：1. 語句通順、符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
2. 不少于65詞。開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。
Dream Job
Do you know what I want to be when I grow up？
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【答案】Dream Job
Do you know what I want to be when I grow up？I want to be a tour guide. I'm outgoing and I like traveling. Another reason is that I want to learn more about different countries and different people. So I think working as a tour guide will be a perfect job for me.
To make my dream come true，I'm going to study more foreign languages. And I will go to university to learn how to be a tour guide. I believe that I can be an excellent tour guide in the future！
【詳解】
題干解讀：這是一篇話題作文。根據(jù)英語提示，可知首先要說明你的理想職業(yè)是什么，然后解釋為什么這是你的理想職業(yè)，為了實(shí)現(xiàn)夢想你打算怎么做。在說明為了夢想打算怎么做時，采用一般將來時。寫作時注意避免漢式英語。
例文點(diǎn)評：這篇作文內(nèi)容完整，語言豐富，時態(tài)準(zhǔn)確。這篇短文首先表明自己的理想職業(yè)，然后例舉了兩條理由說明為什么這是自己的理想職業(yè)，之后寫出自己打算怎么做，最后用I believe that I can be an excellent tour guide in the future結(jié)尾，與開頭呼應(yīng)。
高分亮點(diǎn)：
短語：want to be，working as a tour guide，To make my dream come true，how to be a tour guide，in the future
復(fù)合句：Another reason is that I want to learn more about different countries and different people，I believe that I can be an excellent tour guide in the future！
15．請以“My trip to——”為題，根據(jù)以下要求與提示，用英語寫一篇短文，記敘你的一次旅行。
要求：
1.請?jiān)陬}目空格處填入你旅行的地點(diǎn)，如：Beijing，Jinan或Qingdao等；
2.短文中不得出現(xiàn)任何真實(shí)的人名、校名及其他相關(guān)信息。否則不予評分；
3.不少于60詞。
提示：
1. Where did you go?
2. What did you do there?
3. How did you feel about the trip?
My trip to ________
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【答案】My trip to Beijing
Have you ever been to Beijing?I’ve been there once.I went to Beijing by train with my family last summer vacation.
I visited many famous places of interest,such as the Great Wall,the Summer Palace,the Palace Museum and the Bird’s Nest.I took a lot of photos with my camera.On the Great Wall I met some foreigners and I talked with them in English.I told them there’s an old saying.He who has never been to the Great Wall is not a true man.They liked the saying very much and they told me that they were true men at that time.We all laughed happily.I ate Beijing roast duck.It was very delicious.
I felt a little tired but I was happy.I look forward to visiting Beijing again.
【詳解】
這是一篇話題作文。題目是“My trip to ”，記敘你的一次旅行。給出了提示要點(diǎn)。提示要點(diǎn)是本文的寫作提綱要點(diǎn)。本文人稱主要第一人稱，時態(tài)主要是一般過去時。短文必須包含提示中的所有內(nèi)容，并做適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。字?jǐn)?shù)應(yīng)在80-100詞。要運(yùn)用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有連貫性。根據(jù)提示要點(diǎn)，列出本文的寫作提綱。寫完以后，注意再讀一遍，看看有無單詞拼寫、標(biāo)點(diǎn)、語法錯誤（時態(tài)、主謂一致等）。本文提綱：
我的青島之行
去年暑假，我和家人去了青島。我們乘火車去了那里，住在海邊的一家大旅館里。我們在那里呆了三天。
第一天，我們沿著海邊散步。之后，我們?nèi)ビ斡荆谀抢锱牧撕芏嗾掌?。第二天，我們在一個著名的市場買了許多紀(jì)念品。最后一天，我們在海邊野餐。當(dāng)?shù)厝吮硌萘撕芏喙?jié)目，這讓我們很高興。我們都很開心。這是難忘的。
青島是游覽的好地方。如果我有機(jī)會，我會再去那里。
【點(diǎn)睛】
書面表達(dá)題要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語知識準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，語言要規(guī)范，時態(tài)運(yùn)用要正確，敘述清楚條里，信息表達(dá)清晰、完整，意思連貫。要學(xué)以致用，本文運(yùn)用了重要句型和短語有：On the first day, /The next day / The last day, /We all enjoyed ourselves./ Qingdao is a good place to visit. If I have a chance, I will go there again.等。（1）學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)，牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性，更富有條理。（2）列好提綱和要點(diǎn)及需要的重要短語或句型。（3）切忌堆砌詞語、句子，注意運(yùn)用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞使句子流暢、連貫。注意表達(dá)的順序。（4）注意書寫的規(guī)范：大小寫、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號等的正確運(yùn)用。（5）注意檢查：單詞拼寫、語法、動詞時態(tài)、語序、主謂一致等。

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