
本單元的寫作項目屬于新課標(biāo)中應(yīng)用體類別中的詢問類電子郵件。詢問類電子郵件屬于正式電子郵件,詢問類電子郵件要清楚地說明要詢問的內(nèi)容,語言要簡潔,態(tài)度要誠懇,格式要正確。正式電子郵件包括收件人地址、寄件人地址、郵件的主題、開頭、正文、結(jié)束語和簽名。
Sectin Ⅵ Writing——詢問類電子郵件
Ⅰ.Pre-writing(Ⅰ)Learn t write after the mdel.Frm:T:enquiries@***filmclub.cmSubject:questins abut the Yuth Shrt Film Festival
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing t ask fr infrmatin abut entering a film in yur festival! I am sixteen years ld and I am a student at N.1 Senir Secndary Schl.I started making music vides three years ag.Last year, I made my first shrt film.
I wuld like t ask abut the films fr yur festival.D yu accept sprt dcumentaries? I am currently wrking n a sprt dcumentary with a schl friend.Fr the past few mnths, we have been interviewing and filming yung players abut their interest in basketball.Culd yu tell me if this kind f film wuld be acceptable? I wnder if yu culd als give me mre infrmatin abut hw t apply fr this festival.Can grups as well as individuals enter? Can we enter ur film t anther film festival at the same time? In additin, wuld it be pssible t tell me abut the prizes? Are there prizes fr different age grups and fr different types f films?
I appreciate yur help and lk frward t hearing frm yu.
Yurs faithfully,Liu Ze
Greeting:Dear Sir/Madam
篇章結(jié)構(gòu)Sender’s address:’s address::The tpic f the e-mail
The first part:Explain why yu are writing the e-mail.
The secnd part:detailed intrductin f yur inquiry cntents
The third part:ending and wishes
Signature:Liu Ze
(Ⅱ)Preparatin fr writing—Wrds and phrases
①________________ 對……感興趣②________________ 專注于……③________________ 參加;從事④________________ 理解;弄清楚⑤________________ 提出⑥________________ n. 日程安排;時刻表⑦_(dá)_______________ 玩得開心⑧________________ 互致問候⑨________________ 追溯到;遠(yuǎn)在……年代
be interested in
be absrbed in
exchange greetings
date back t
⑩________________ 期望,期待?________________ 以這種方式?____________________ 取得突破?________________ n. 專題研討會?________________ n. 家庭教師;導(dǎo)師?________________ 這學(xué)期
lk frward t
by this means
make a breakthrugh
Ⅱ.While-writing
假定你是李華,計劃暑假期間去英國學(xué)習(xí)英語,為期六周。下面的廣告引起了你的注意,請給該校寫封電子郵件,詢問有關(guān)情況(箭頭所指內(nèi)容)。
注意:1.詞數(shù)100左右;2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫;3.參考詞匯:住宿—accmmdatin。
Step 1 List the utline f the passage
①____________?、赺___________ ③____________
①稱呼語:____________________________②首段:______________________________________________③中段: ____________________________④尾段:____________________________⑤簽名:____________________________
Dear Sir/Madam
說明寫郵件的原因(想詢問暑假英語課程的情況)
Step 2 List the wrds, phrases and sentences.1.Wrds and phrases
①______________________ 參加暑期學(xué)校②________________________ 六周的英語課程③________________ 在假期期間④________________ n. 廣告⑤________________ n. 住宿⑥________________ 為……付錢⑦_(dá)_______________ 寄宿家庭⑧________________ n. 學(xué)生宿舍⑨________________ 想要;愿意⑩________________ 渴望;盼望;期待
attend a summer schl
six-week English curse
during the vacatin
advertisement
2.Sentences
①我是一名中國學(xué)生,我計劃在假期去英國上一所暑期學(xué)校。(and連接并列句)___________________________________________________________________________________________②我還想知道我要付多少學(xué)費,是否包括住宿。(賓語從句)__________________________________________________________________________________________
I am a student in China and I plan t g t Britain t attend a summer schl duringthe vacatin.
I’d als like t knw hw much I have t pay fr the curse and whether accmmdatin is included.
Step 3 Draft the article by using the fllwing wrds.
Frm:T:enquiries@***six-weekenglishcurse.cmSubject:questins abut the Yuth Shrt Film FestivalDear Sir/Madam,I am a student in China and I plan t g t Britain t attend a summer schl during the vacatin.I’ve seen yur advertisement, and I’d like t knw smething mre abut yur six-week English curse.
First, when will the curse start and hw many class hurs are there per week? Besides, I wish there wuld nt be t many students in a class.I’d als like t knw hw much I have t pay fr the curse and whether accmmdatin is included.Wuld there be hst family r university drmitry?I am lking frward t yur early reply.Yurs faithfully,Li Hua
Ⅲ.Pst-writing—plishing the passage
Exchange yur passage with yur partner and pay attentin t the fllwing pints:□1.Is the frmat f the email right?□2.Are there any spelling mistakes?□3.Are there any grammar mistakes?□4.Des the e-mail include all the main cntents?□5.Are advanced and cmplex sentences used crrectly?□6.Is the writing written prperly and clearly?
?精彩開頭語1.I’m happy/glad/pleased t receive yur e-mail dated by May 1st. 很高興收到你五一發(fā)來的電子郵件。2.I’m writing t thank yu fr yur help during my stay in England. 我寫這封信是為了感謝我在英國時你對我的幫助。3.I’m srry nt t answer/reply t yur e-mail in time because I have been busy these days. 很抱歉沒有及時回復(fù)你的電子郵件,因為這些日子我一直很忙。
4.I’m srry t learn that yu did nt d well in the entrance examinatin.得知你在入學(xué)考試中發(fā)揮不好,我很難過。5.I’m glad t receive yur e-mail saying that yu have been ffered a gd jb in a big cmpany.Cngratulatins t yu.我很高興收到你的郵件,郵件中說你被一家大公司聘用了,祝賀你。6.I have been missing yu a lt since we met last time.自從我們上次見面以來,我一直很想你。
7.Hw are yu getting n with yur English study?你英語學(xué)得怎么樣了?8.I am srry fr nt writing t yu sner.很抱歉沒有早點給你寫信。?精彩結(jié)尾語1.In the end, I will be very glad if yu find my suggestins useful.最后,如果你發(fā)現(xiàn)我的建議有用我會非常高興。2.I’m lking frward t hearing frm yu sn.盼望很快收到你的來信。
3.Please give my regards t yur family. 請代我向你的家人問好。4.If yu have any mre questins, please let me knw. 如果你還有問題,請告訴我。5.Wish yu the best f health and success! 祝您身體健康,工作順利。6.I lk frward t ur next meeting. 期待我們的下次相見。
無職銜的男子:Mr.Wang/Zhang已婚女子:Mrs Wang/Zha未婚女子:Miss Wang/Zhang博士:Dr.Zhang教授:Pr.Lin還有一些表示感情色彩的詞。如:Dear Dr.Smith/Dear madam/Dear sir
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