動(dòng)作鏈高分句式
動(dòng)作鏈高分句式
記敘文中的動(dòng)作描寫既能夠推動(dòng)故事情節(jié)的發(fā)展，也能夠塑造人物形象及性格。 但是，籠統(tǒng)的動(dòng)作描寫難以達(dá)到這樣的效果。因此，要構(gòu)建生動(dòng)的故事情節(jié)、塑造豐滿的人物形象，就需要學(xué)會(huì)精細(xì)化地進(jìn)行動(dòng)作描寫，將動(dòng)作分解成可陳述的連貫片段，串聯(lián)成動(dòng)作鏈，從而構(gòu)建生動(dòng)、立體的畫面。
構(gòu)建公式1 動(dòng)詞的三聯(lián)動(dòng)：謂語動(dòng)詞A＋B＋and＋C
仿寫練習(xí)
1.我艱難地說完，盯著里的卡，然后抬頭看著他的眼睛，帶著羞愧和尷尬。
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2.我向Gunter揮手，大步走過去(stride)，一把攬住他(gather)，用力擁抱(embrace)。
____________________________________________________________________________________________3.Gunter撈出了他的小手機(jī),拍了拍(pat)我的肩膀，笑道“合個(gè)影吧”。
____________________________________________________________________________________________4.那位女士只是笑了笑，告訴我的母親這是一份禮物，還沒等她說更多就離開了。
____________________________________________________________________________________________5.我們乘坐一輛舊吉普車穿過茂密的叢林，欣賞美麗的景色，聆聽動(dòng)物的叫聲。
____________________________________________________________________________________________6.他立即上前安慰我，然后建議打電話尋找我丟失的錢包。
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7.這對雙胞胎早早地起床，躡手躡腳地走到廚房，開始為他們親愛的媽媽做一頓美味的早餐。
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8.然后他們端上早餐，上樓叫醒了媽媽。
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9.阿里贏得了三等獎(jiǎng)，獲得了新鞋，像鳥兒一樣飛奔回家。
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10.他攔停下出租車，提著箱子跳上了車，對司機(jī)說：“請到警察局去。”
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11.那個(gè)絕望的女人擦了擦眼淚，抬起眼睛盯著天花板。
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12.男孩們興奮地沖到湖邊，脫下衣服跳進(jìn)水里。
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13.這個(gè)歌手瞥了一眼觀眾，深吸了一口氣，開始唱歌。
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14.他們跨過大河和遼闊的平原，爬上高山，俯瞰深谷。
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15.他把手伸進(jìn)口袋，掏出一把零錢，遞給店員。
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16.他穿上外套，氣沖沖地走了出去，砰地關(guān)上了門。
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17.我跑出房間，瘋狂地向公共汽車跑去，在車開動(dòng)前跳上了車。
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18.他笑了笑，深吸了一口氣，為比賽做好了準(zhǔn)備。
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19.她跳起來，沖上前，緊緊地?fù)肀Я四泻ⅰ?br>____________________________________________________________________________________________
20.她沿著小路爬行，迅速彎下腰，用手輕輕地捧住蝴蝶。
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21.瑞安掙扎著站起來，撣去夾克上的灰塵，走向一個(gè)空座位。
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22莫莉興奮地拉開抽屜，拿出書，立刻從柜臺走了出來。
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答案
1.I finished my wrds with difficulty, stared at the card in my hand, and then lked up int his eyes with shame and embarrassment.
2.I waved at Gunter,strde t him, and gathered him int my arms with a strng embrace.
3.Gunter fished ut his little phne, patted n my shulder and smiled “Let's take a picture tgether!”
4.The wman just smiled, tld my mther it was a gift and left befre she culd say mre．
5.We travelled thrugh the thick jungle in an ld jeep, enjyed the beautiful views and listened t the calls f the animals.
6.He immediately came frward, cmfrted me and then suggested making calls fr my lst wallet.
7. The twins gt up early, tipted t the kitchen and settled dwn t cking a delicius breakfast fr their belved mther.
8. Then they carried the breakfast, advanced upstairs and wke up their mther.
Ali wn third prize, gt the new shes and flew t his hme like a bird.
10. He stpped the taxi, jumped in with the suitcase and tld the driver,“G t the plice statin, please.”
11. The desperate wman wiped her tears, lifted her eyes and fcused her eyes n the ceiling.
12. The bys rushed excitedly t the lake, tk ff their clthes and jumped int the water.
13. The singer glanced at the audience, tk a deep breath and began t sing.
14. They crssed big rivers and vast plains, climbed high muntains,and verlked deep valleys.
15. He reached deep int his pcket，pulled ut a handful f change and held it up t the clerk.
16. He put n his cat, strmed ut and slammed the dr shut.17. I ran ut f the rm, made a mad run fr the bus and jumped nt it just befre its departure.
18. He smiled, tk a deep breath and gt ready fr the race.19. She jumped up, dashed frward and hugged the by tightly.
20. She crept alng the path, bent ver swiftly and cupped her hands arund the butterfly gently.
21. Ryan struggled t his feet, dusted the jacket and made his way t an empty seat.
22. Mlly excitedly pulled the drawer pen, tk ut the bk and walked ut frm the cunter immediately.
構(gòu)建公式2 非謂語動(dòng)詞
非謂語動(dòng)詞 ding,having dne 和 dne 作狀語時(shí)，主要表示原因、結(jié)果或伴隨動(dòng)作。ding/having dne 形式所表達(dá)的動(dòng)作與主語之間構(gòu)成主動(dòng)關(guān)系，dne則構(gòu)成被動(dòng)關(guān)系。
句型公式：① 主語十did sth, ding...
②Ding...，主語+ did sth
仿寫練習(xí)
1. 當(dāng)意識到我是金牌得主時(shí)，驚訝和難以置信的感覺包圍了我。（2023?新高考I卷）
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2.“非常感謝您，我親愛的老師，”我用溫柔的聲音說道，低下頭來吸引老師的注意。（2023?新高考I卷）
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3.感覺非常開心，我可以立刻想象我的家人驕傲地?fù)肀业那榫?。?023 新高考I卷）
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4.我向他點(diǎn)點(diǎn)頭，鼓勵(lì)大衛(wèi)參加大型越野賽。（2023?新高考I卷）
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5.我感到緊張和焦慮，我一直在想，如何才能在不被人注意的情況下離開電影院。
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6.被瘋狂的喜悅所淹沒，我站起來，揮舞著拳頭，大聲喊道：“我成功了！”（2023?新高考I卷）
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7.在我的話的鼓舞下，大衛(wèi)用閃閃發(fā)光的眼睛看著我，可愛的臉上露出燦爛的微笑。（2023?新高考I卷）
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8.在歡呼聲中，我在記者的鏡頭前和眾多家長和學(xué)生的目光下接受了金牌。（2023?新高考I卷）
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9.受熱情和鼓舞的激勵(lì)，大衛(wèi)干勁滿滿地加快了步伐。（2022?新高考I卷）
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10.被他的精神所感動(dòng)，我跟著他，一路上為他加油。（2022?新高考I卷）
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11.帶著疲憊感起床后，我檢查了一下郵箱，并未帶有任何期望。（2023?新高考I卷）
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12.因虛弱而在醫(yī)院接受了治療后，他完全康復(fù)了！
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13.大衛(wèi)權(quán)衡了我的話后，低聲而堅(jiān)定地說：“我想跑！”（2022?新高考I卷）
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14.經(jīng)過反復(fù)考慮，我提到了一些因他的決心和毅力而贏得人們贊揚(yáng)的事件。（2022?新高考I卷）
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15.讀完日記后，兒子淚流滿面，開始回憶起他過去和父親坐在一起的日子。
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答案
1. Realizing that I was the winner f the gld medal, I was surrunded by surprise and disbelief.
2. "Thank yu very much, my dear teacher," I said in a gentle vice, lwering my head t catch my teacher's attentin.
3.Feeling n tp f the wrld, I culd instantly picture my family members hugging me with pride.
4. I ndded at him, encuraging David t participate in the big crss-cuntry run.
5.Feeling nervus and anxius, I kept wndering hw I culd leave the cinema withut being nticed.
6.Overwhelmed by wild jy, I rse t my feet and punched my fist in the air, shuting ut ludly “I made it！”
7.Encuraged by my wrds, David lked at me with shining eyes, with his big tthy smile n his lvely face.
8.Overwhelmed with cheers, I accepted the gld medal in frnt f cameras f reprters and thusands f eyes f parents and students.
9. Inspired by the enthusiasm and encuragement, David quickened his pace in high spirits.
10.Mved by his spirit, I fllwed him and cheered him up alng the way.
11.Having gt up with tiredness, I checked my mailbx, withut any expectatins t it.
12.Having been treated in the hspital fr weakness, he made a full recvery!
13. Having weighed my wrds, David said in a lw but determined vice, "I want t run!"
14.Having thught it ver, I mentined sme events which wn peple's praise fr his determinatin and perseverance.
15. Having read the diary, the sn was filled with tears and began t reflect n the days when he used t sit tgether with his father.高考典例
1. (2024·新課標(biāo)Ⅰ卷)The mment I gt ff the plane, I ran like crazy thrugh the airprt building and jumped int the first taxi n the rank withut a secnd thught.
一下飛機(jī)，我就瘋狂地跑過機(jī)場大樓，毫不猶豫地跳進(jìn)了排在第一位的出租車。
2. (2024·新課標(biāo)Ⅰ卷)Gunter parked the taxi behind the bus, turned arund, and lked at me with a big smile n his face.
Gunter把出租車停在公交車后面，轉(zhuǎn)過身來，臉上帶著大大的笑容看著我。
3. (2024·新課標(biāo)Ⅰ卷)I jumped ut f the car, made a mad run fr the machine, and ppped my card in, nly t read the message :"Out f rder. Srry."
我跳下車，瘋狂地沖向那臺機(jī)器，把卡插進(jìn)去，卻只看到屏幕上顯示“故障中，抱歉”。
4.(2023·浙江1月卷)He gathered handfuls f damp tree leaves, wrapped them with string, and lit the bunch t create a trch.
他收集了幾把潮濕的樹葉，用繩子把它們捆在一起，并點(diǎn)燃了一束做成火把。
高考典例
翻譯練習(xí)
(2023·全國甲卷)When Derek built ur family huse abut eight years ag, I was heavily invlved, painting the rms and putting dwn the flring thrughut the huse.
當(dāng)?shù)吕锟舜蠹s八年前建造我們家的房子時(shí)，我參與了大量的工作，粉刷房間并鋪好整個(gè)房間的地板。
1.由于經(jīng)濟(jì)衰退，我的父親失業(yè)了，使我們家的情況更糟糕了。
As the ecnmy was in decline, my father lst his jb, leaving ur family even wrse ff．
2.我非常感動(dòng)，把發(fā)生的事情發(fā)到了網(wǎng)上，表達(dá)了我真誠的感謝，并希望能與她結(jié)識。
I was s mved that I psted what had happened nline，expressing my sincere gratitude and hping t make acquaintance with her．
3.為了慶祝我們的十周年紀(jì)念日，我和丈夫預(yù)定了去墨西哥的旅行。
T celebrate ur tenth anniversary, my husband and I bked a trip t Mexic.
4.觀眾們被他們的表演深深打動(dòng)，爆發(fā)出雷鳴般的掌聲。
Deeply mved by their perfrmance, brke int.

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