1. 精選動詞，精準描述
shut ?cry yell scream
smile laugh
whisper murmur
jump/spring t ne's feet // struggle t ne’s feet
glance stare gaze glimpse
adverbs: tightly/cheerfully/hpefully/helplessly/ desperately/fiercely(fight) vilently/swiftlyin+n.：in terrr/excitement/ shck/ srrw/ in a lw(weak/sweet) vicewith+情感名詞：with delight/pleasure/excitement/satisfactin/anger/fearwith +身體部位：with its sharp eyes/ her shaky hand/her pale lips
Suddenly, A mving dt(點) was sptted. As it drew nearer, Jane saw it clearly. "The helicpter,“ Jane murmured, sprang up and rushed t the center f an pen area. She waved her yellw bluse desperately and yelled at the helicpter with excitement. T her great jy, this time she was sptted. Sn afterwards, the helicpter landed steadily n the grund and Tm jumped ut. The mment Tm's eyes fell upn her, Jane threw herself int his arms. "Hney, Never will I leave yu again. "Jane sbbed. The reunited cuple hugged each ther tightly.
2. 添加副詞和介詞短語來修飾動詞
Cmplete the shrt passage with prper adverbs in the bx belw.
It’s sunny that day. Sabrina was _________happy because they wuld g t the Gldshre beach fr family activities.When they gt there, Sabrina became ne f the happy turists wh ________ sat here, enjying the sft sunlight. ________, smething strange happened, there was smething wrng abut the sea water.It ________ ccurred t Sabrina that these were signs f an appraching tsunami, s she _________ ran t a safety fficer and tld him________abut the danger. The safety fficer asked turists t leave the beach as _______as they culd after hearing this. S_________, nbdy gt hurt because f her timely warning.
hwever extremely immediately seriusly frtunately suddenly cmfrtably fast
immediately
1. 上車 He stpped the taxi, jumped int it and tld the driver, “G t the plice statin, please.”2. 跳入湖里The bys rushed excitedly t the lake, tk ff their clthes and jumped int the water.3. 抱住兒子 She dashed frward, knelt dwn and gathered her sn int her arms.4. 歌手唱歌 The singer glanced at the audience, tk a deep breath and began t sing.
=攔車+上車+告訴目的地
= 沖向湖邊 + 脫掉衣服 + 跳入水中
= 沖向前 + 蹲下 + 一把抱住
= 掃視觀眾 + 深吸一口氣 + 開始演唱
5. The little by said srry t his mther.The little by hung his head and said srry t his mther.
6. Jane rush t the rck, climb nt it and waver her yellw bluse madly.
3. 構造動作鏈：并列謂語動詞A and B或者A, B and C。
4. 構造動作面：把動作和情感，環(huán)境，心理，語言等結合，形成動作面。
1. Burning with anger, he?glared?at me with his frightening eyes ,?yelling, “Yu’re such an idit.”（burning with anger是情感描寫，glare和yell是動作鏈，同時將動作和語言描寫結合在了一起，形成了飽滿的動作面，屬于高分表達） 2. Jane?sat n?the grass,?staring?at the vast sky, cld and hungry.
4.Lking straight int my eyes, Mike strke my hair, whispering, “Yu are the mst beautiful girl I’ve ever seen.”
3. They sat n the beach, enjying the sunshine, relaxed and happy.
5. At the sight f the sudden appearance f Ne Zha, these villagers were s scared that they shuted alud with terrr.
跳水救人 Henry jumped int the river and saved Rbert.
________ the screams, Henry________________the riverside, __________ his clthes and ___________ the water withut hesitatin. By great effrt, he ______ Rbert and ___________ Rbert t the shre.
ran/ dashed/ rushed t
brught/ dragged
5. 使用合適語法：
讀后續(xù)寫常用句型：⑴ ding, 謂語動詞 或 謂語動詞, ding Lking up at the farmer, the by said, “Thank yu.” Seeing the wlf lying n the grund, they instantly realized what had happened. She std there shivering/trembling with cld.⑵ A and B, C-ing 或 A，B-ing and C-ing 或 A-ing， B，C-ingThe students came in, talking and laughing.Lking straight int my eyes, Mike strke my hair, whispering, “Yu are the mst beautiful girl I’ve ever seen.”Burning with anger, he?glared?at me with his frightening eyes ,?yelling, “Yu’re such an idit.”
非謂語動詞作狀語形容詞作狀語 定語從句、狀語從句with復合結構…
3. Having dne…, 主句Having queued fr 3 hurs, he was tld that the ticket had been sld ut. =After he had queued fr fr 3 hurs, he was tld that the ticket had been sld ut.4. dne, 謂語動詞 Deeply mved by the stry, the children began t cry.5. dne, 謂語動詞，dingEncuraged by the teacher, Lucy raised her hand, whispering, “I want t have a try.”6. 形容詞作狀語The girl std there, staring at the fd, cld and hungry.They sat n the beach, enjying the sunshine, relaxed and happy.
9. with復合結構
Jenny walked slwly t the frnt, with her legs?trembling?and her heart?beating fast. He turned arund, with tears rlling/streaming?dwn his cheeks.The girl std there, shivering/trembling with cld, with dirt n her face and hair.
7. 定語從句 The yungest kid wanted t get a present, but he was refused by his mther, which made him cry.8. 狀語從句
The mment she saw his husband, Jane rushed t him and hugged him tightly.As?I waited at the stp, I heard a big nise.When the students heard that they gt the first prize in the gymnastics cmpetitin, they cheered and jumped with jy.
Her hands were?trembling with excitement?as she pened the letter.
when they met him , they held him tightly int their arms.
1. The teacher ndded with satisfactin and thumbed up at him.（老師滿意地點了點頭，朝他豎起了大拇指）2. She pened the gift with her hands shaking slightly. （她用輕微顫抖的手打開了禮物）3. She tk the child’s hand and helped him climb the steps.（她拉住孩子的手牽著他爬上臺階）4. He reached fr her hand and held it tightly. （他伸手抓住她的手并緊緊握?。?.He was running frward, waving his arms.6. He std there with crssed arms, lking angry.（他站在那里，雙手交叉抱在胸前，看上去很生氣）7. She flded her arms and stared at him. （她雙臂交叉，盯著他）8. He grasped the rpe with bth hands.12. She shivered, rubbing her hands tgether fiercely.13. Her hands shk/trembled as she lifted the glass t her lips.14. A strng hand reached ut and caught/ hld f her arm.15. I cupped my hand ver the phne s they culdn't hear me.16. He sat with his head in his hands.17. They walked hand in hand alng the path.
12.她一邊顫抖，一邊使勁搓著雙手。13.她的手顫抖著把杯子送到唇邊。14.一只有力的手伸了出來抓住了她的手臂。15.我用手捂住電話，免得他們聽到我的話。16.他雙手抱著頭坐著。17.他們手拉手沿著小路走。

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