III. Summary Writing
Directins: Read the fllwing passage. Summarize the main idea and the main pint(s) f the passage in n mre than 60 wrds. Use yur wn wrds as far as pssible.
【來源】上海市進(jìn)才中學(xué)2024-2025學(xué)年高三上英語9月月考英語試題
Light the Cities f the Future
The previusly unlit cycle path in the Netherlands has recently drawn ur attentin. It has been resurfaced with a material that cnsists f shining stnes in rder t create a well-lit rute. The Van Ggh path, s called after the artist wh lived in the twn f Nuenen in 1883, cmbines the traditinal with the cntemprary in a gesture that acknwledge Van Ggh’s masterpiece. The Starry Night, but als shws the way ahead fr city lighting. The Van Ggh path is nt a single case: it’s nt difficult t fresee a time when natural materials culd help light the cities f the future.
Why shuld we care abut city lighting? What’s wrng with current electrical lighting anyway? Well, the prblem that it causes is tw-fld. First, f curse, electricity in mst cities cme frm nn-renewable resurces. Accrding t the Internatinal Energy Agency, almst 20% f glbal electricity is cnsumed fr lighting, which is respnsible fr high levels f car emissins. But there’s als the belief that electric light itself is a frm f pllutin by destrying ur view f night sky.
Fr the abve reasns, then, it seems wise t investigate ther appraches. The city f Glasgw, is attempting t use intellect street lighting, t mnitr hw citizen interact with the urban landscape and minimize electricity cnsumptin and thus emissins. This “Smart City” apprach is seen by many as the way f the future, but sme designers are nt cnvinced.
They’re pineering the altgether mre riginal apprach f using materials frm the natural wrld in rder t replace electric light entirely. They believe that this new “technlgy” can ne day cmpletely replace micrchips and digital systems as we find better ways f making use f the light-prducing machines that already exist in the natural wrld.
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【答案】
The passage discusses the innvatin in city lighting by intrducing the Van Ggh Path in the Netherlands, which uses luminus stnes fr illuminatin. It highlights the envirnmental and aesthetic issues with current electrical lighting and explres alternatives such as intelligent street lighting and natural materials t create a mre sustainable and visually appealing urban envirnment.
【導(dǎo)語】本文是一篇說明文。文章首先介紹了荷蘭一條新鋪設(shè)的發(fā)光自行車道——梵高之路，它使用了數(shù)千顆發(fā)光石來照明，以此引出城市照明的未來趨勢。接著，文章介紹了當(dāng)前城市照明存在的問題，包括能源消耗和光污染，并提出了智能街道照明和利用自然材料作為替代方案。最后，文章展望了這些新技術(shù)可能完全取代現(xiàn)有微芯片和數(shù)字系統(tǒng)的未來。
【詳解】1.要點(diǎn)摘錄
①The Van Ggh Path in the Netherlands has been resurfaced with luminus stnes t create a well-lit rute.
②Electrical lighting in mst cities cmes frm nn-renewable resurces and cntributes t high levels f carbn emissins.
③Electrical light is cnsidered a frm f pllutin that destrys ur view f the night sky.
④Alternatives such as intelligent street lighting and natural materials are being explred t create a mre sustainable urban envirnment.
2. 縝密構(gòu)思
將第①要點(diǎn)作為引入，第②和第③要點(diǎn)整合討論現(xiàn)有城市照明的問題，第④要點(diǎn)作為解決方案和未來展望。
3. 遣詞造句
The Van Ggh Path, a luminus cycle path in the Netherlands, represents an innvative apprach t city lighting. Current electrical city lighting is prblematic due t its reliance n nn-renewable resurces and the pllutin it causes.
Alternatives like intelligent street lighting and the use f natural materials are being cnsidered fr a mre sustainable and visually pleasing urban envirnment.
【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1] The passage discusses the innvatin in city lighting by intrducing the Van Ggh Path in the Netherlands, which uses luminus stnes fr illuminatin. 運(yùn)用了一個(gè)復(fù)雜的主從復(fù)合句，對原文第一段進(jìn)行了概括。其中which引導(dǎo)的定語從句，表達(dá)非常高級。
[高分句型2] It highlights the envirnmental and aesthetic issues with current electrical lighting and explres alternatives such as intelligent street lighting and natural materials t create a mre sustainable and visually appealing urban envirnment. 運(yùn)用了such as引出具體的例子，對第二段和第三段進(jìn)行了總結(jié)。其中不定式t create作目的狀語，表達(dá)非常高級。
IV. Translatin
Directins: Translate the fllwing sentences int English, using the wrd given in the brackets.
1．成長與舒適不能共存，難道不是嗎? (cexist) (漢譯英)

【答案】Grwth and cmfrt can’t cexist, can they?
【詳解】考查動詞、名詞和反義疑問句。表示“成長”用名詞grwth，表示“舒適”用名詞cmfrt，二者為并列關(guān)系，用連詞and連接，grwth and cmfrt為主語，句首單詞首字母大寫。表示“不能”用情態(tài)動詞的否定形式can’t；表示“共存”用cexist，位于can’t后，動詞用原形。陳述部分是否定的，反問部分將陳述句的否定形式改成肯定形式，陳述部分用can’t，疑問部分用can，主語用they“它們”，代替Grwth and cmfrt。故翻譯為Grwth and cmfrt cannt cexist, can they?
2．這款新發(fā)布的電子產(chǎn)品在耐用性上比競爭對手的差得多。（inferir）（漢譯英）

【答案】This newly released electrnic prduct is far inferir t its cmpetitrs in durability.
【詳解】考查名詞、形容詞（短語）和非謂語動詞。句子應(yīng)該是介紹當(dāng)前的情況，時(shí)態(tài)宜用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)；主語“這款新發(fā)布的電子產(chǎn)品”可用名詞短語this newly released electrnic prduct，其中過去分詞released作修飾prduct的定語，表被動，“比……差得多”可用形容詞短語be far inferir t，be動詞用is，t的賓語“（它的）競爭對手”可用名詞短語its cmpetitrs，狀語“在耐用性上”可用介詞短語in durability。故翻譯為This newly released electrnic prduct is far inferir t its cmpetitrs in durability.
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【答案】Fr the sake f safety, the authrities insist that turists shuld nt deviate frm the marked paths when sightseeing.
【詳解】考查固定短語、賓語從句和時(shí)態(tài)。因句子表示的是一個(gè)客觀情況，謂語動詞使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。表示“出于……起見”短語為fr the sake f；“當(dāng)局”可譯為the authrities；“堅(jiān)持要求”可用insist that，后面接賓語從句，用虛擬語氣，即(shuld) d；“偏離”可譯為deviate frm；“標(biāo)記的路徑”可譯為marked paths；“在游覽觀光時(shí)”可譯為 when sightseeing。故翻譯為Fr the sake f safety, the authrities insist that turists shuld nt deviate frm the marked paths when sightseeing.
4．讓公眾大為震驚的是，原本用來運(yùn)輸汽油的車卻被用來運(yùn)輸食用油，這又一次引發(fā)了公眾對國內(nèi)食品安全的擔(dān)憂。(intend) （漢譯英）

【答案】T the great shck f the public, the tank truck riginally intended fr transprting gasline was used t carry edible il, which nce again arused public cncerns abut dmestic fd safety.
【詳解】考查固定短語和定語從句。表示“讓某人大為震驚”短語為t the great shck f sb.，表示“公眾”應(yīng)用the public；主語“the public”為the tank truck；表示“原本用來運(yùn)輸汽油”翻譯為riginally intended fr transprting gasline，為過去分詞作定語；表示“被用來”短語為be used t d sth.；表示“運(yùn)輸”用動詞carry；表示“食用油”短語為edible il；后跟which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句，表示“又一次”短語為nce again；表示“引發(fā)”應(yīng)用動詞aruse；表示“公眾對國內(nèi)食品安全的擔(dān)憂”翻譯為public cncerns abut dmestic fd safety。發(fā)生在過去用一般過去時(shí)。故翻譯為T the great shck f the public, the tank truck riginally intended fr transprting gasline was used t carry edible il, which nce again arused public cncerns abut dmestic fd safety.
V. Guided Writing
Directins: Write an English cmpsitin in 120-150 wrds accrding t the instructins given belw in Chinese.
【來源】上海市寶山區(qū)2024-2025學(xué)年高三上學(xué)期10月調(diào)研測試英語卷
假定你是李華，你校讀書月期間組織英語名著閱讀活動，外籍教師Jhn建議以小組合作形式展示分享閱讀成果，現(xiàn)征求學(xué)生意見，請你給他寫一封郵件，內(nèi)容包括：
1. 你對展示形式的看法和理由;
2. 你的建議。
注意：1. 寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右;
2. 請?jiān)诖痤}卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。
Dear Jhn,
Hpe this email finds yu well.
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Best regards,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jhn,
Dear Jhn, Hpe this email finds yu well.
I believe that a grup presentatin wuld be an excellent way t shwcase ur reading achievements. It encurages cllabratin and allws students t learn frm each ther’s perspectives. Wrking in grups helps students develp their cmmunicatin and teamwrk skills. I suggest that each grup chses a different bk t ensure diversity in ur presentatins. I als recmmend that each grup includes a visual aid t help illustrate their pints.
Lking frward t hearing yur thughts n these suggestins and eager t participate in this cllabrative learning experience.
Best regards,
Li Hua
【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生給讀書月期間組織英語名著閱讀活動提出建議，并對展示形式提出看法和理由
【詳解】1.詞匯積累
杰出的：excellent→utstanding
合作：cllabratin→cperatin
觀點(diǎn)：perspectives→viewpints
多樣性：diversity→variety
2.句式拓展
同義句轉(zhuǎn)換
原句：It encurages cllabratin and allws students t learn frm each ther’s perspectives.
拓展句：Nt nly des it encurage cllabratin, but als it allws students t learn frm each ther’s perspectives.
【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1】Wrking in grups helps students develp their cmmunicatin and teamwrk skills. (運(yùn)用了動名詞短語作主語)
【高分句型2】I als recmmend that each grup shuld include a visual aid t help illustrate their pints. (運(yùn)用了that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句且從句使用了虛擬語氣)

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