副詞有修飾性副詞和連接性副詞(句子副詞)兩類，可用于修飾動詞、形容詞、句子等。修飾性副詞可表示程度、方式等，使所要表達的情感更加鮮明、強烈，使句子更具表現(xiàn)力和感染力。連接性副詞的運用，能使句間的銜接更緊密，邏輯更清晰，所表達的含義簡潔明了。掌握以下3個副詞使用的技巧，能給讀后續(xù)寫增添亮點。
技巧一：副詞賦能動作描寫，使表達更具活力1. Arriving at Scut's hme, the ld wman eagerly rang the drbell. 一到達Scut家, 那個年老的女人就急切地按門鈴。2. “My mther has taught me never t accept pay fr a kindness,” he said sincerely. 他真誠地說: “我母親教導(dǎo)我，施以愛心，不圖回報?！?br/>3. “If I had listened t my parents, this wuld never have happened,” I thught silently. 我默默地想：如果我聽父母的話, 這就不會發(fā)生了。
4. Anxiusly lying awake in the dark, Jane wanted very much t be with Tm and her family. 簡在黑暗中不安地躺著, 非常想和湯姆還有她的家人在一起。5. Warmly welcmed by ther classmates, she felt relieved. 當(dāng)被其他同學(xué)熱烈地歡迎時, 她松了一口氣。
點撥：①用情感副詞或方式副詞修飾動詞，如：gratefully, hpefully, sadly, curiusly, gently, quietly, hurriedly, tightly等，這類副詞不僅修飾普通動詞，還能修飾描寫動作的現(xiàn)在分詞和過去分詞(例4和例5)。②副詞常修飾一些對話和心理動詞(例2和例3)，這類動詞有：say, shut, ask, think, remind等。
1. Terribly/Quite/Extremely wrried, Mary felt like sitting n pins and needles. 瑪麗十分擔(dān)憂，如坐針氈。2. The ther tw cyclists saw three men threatened by a fierce wlf, abslutely/ cmpletely/ ttally shcked. 另外兩個騎行者看到三個男人被一只兇猛的狼威脅著，完全驚呆了。
技巧二：副詞增強情感輸出，突出畫面感
點撥：續(xù)寫中, 常用程度副詞修飾表達人物感受的形容詞。
1. But n mre helicpters came and it was getting dark again. Immediately, an abslute darkness ruled the frest. 但是再也沒有直升機到來，而且天又變黑了。頃刻之間，一陣漆黑籠罩了整個森林。
技巧三：用句子副詞銜接,增強行文連貫性
2. When the peple crwded arund Arthur, he seemed quite wrried. Finally, he realized that he had made a mistake. 當(dāng)所有人圍著亞瑟時，他似乎十分擔(dān)憂。最終，他意識到自己犯了錯誤。
3. The nearer the helicpter gt, the mre Jane flagged the yellw bluse. Luckily, the helicpter didn't miss her this time. 直升機靠得越近，簡揮黃色襯衣?lián)]得越起勁。幸運的是，這次她沒有錯過這部直升機。
點撥：“時間副詞+環(huán)境描寫”可用于銜接續(xù)寫的首句，如例1。情感副詞也能用于銜接句子，如例3。
拓展：句子副詞有表示時間 (immediately, meanwhile, then…)、 順序 (firstly, finally, eventually, etc.)、遞進(mrever, besides, additinally…)、讓步(still, anyway…)、轉(zhuǎn)折 (hwever, instead…)、 因果 (therefre, thus, cnsequently…)等意義的副詞。
一、用以上所學(xué)知識補全或翻譯句子。
1. Tears f jy flded her eyes as __________________ (她默默地祈禱), “Thank Yu, Gd.” 2. “She's stlen my watch!”______________(Lee憤怒地說), “It went missing at schl yesterday.”
she prayed
Lee said angrily
3. ______________ (深深地被感動), we appreciated him and felt a sense f warmth. 4. _________________________________ (絕望地站在路邊), I was s sad that tears were filled with my eyes.
Deeply mved
Hpelessly standing n the radside
5. My parents sclded me fr _______________________________ (偷偷地跑出房間) but wereals glad that _________________________ (我受傷并不很嚴(yán)重).6. _____________________________________ (完全被嚇著), Mac rde his bike as quickly as he culd.
Ttally/Abslutely/Cmpletely frightened
running ut f
the huse secretly
I was nt seriusly injured
7. 我慢慢地走下樓，然后試著漫不經(jīng)心地走進廚房。8. Desiree激動地?fù)]著雙手，她跑向妹妹并緊緊地抱住她。
I went dwnstairs slwly and tried t walk casually int the kitchen.
Excitedly waving her arms, Desiree ran t her yunger sister and hugged her tightly.
9. 突然，天空被烏云籠罩著，就在剎那間, 我們被卷入了可怕的暴風(fēng)雨中。10. 最終，Kate獲得了一等獎。這時, 她感覺陽光親吻著她的每一寸(inch)肌膚。
Finally, Kate wn the first prize. Meanwhile, she felt the sunshine was kissing every inch f her skin.
Suddenly, the sky was cvered with dark cluds. Immediately, we were caught in a terrible strm.
二、根據(jù)情景補全句子或填上恰當(dāng)?shù)你暯痈痹~。
故事梗概：Jane and her husband, Tm, were ging t chse a spt t camp vernight in the frest. Hwever, Jane had a quarrel with Tm and she walked alne in the frest t find a better spt. Unluckily, she gt lst and missed the helicpter that may rescue her.
But n mre helicpters came and it was getting dark again. Jane tried t find shelter frm the cld night. But ______________________, she slipped ver and brke her leg. ____________________________(痛苦地行走在森林中), Jane managed t make her way t a rck fr shelter. _______________________(感到十分害怕), Jane stayed wide awake, knwing she might nt be able t get t the lake with a brken leg. “Dn't be afraid. Tm must be searching fr me. And the helicpter will cme back tmrrw,” ___________ _____________ (她堅定地想). __________________ _______(漸漸地，Jane睡著了).
unfrtunately/unluckily
Painfully walking in the frest
Extremely scared/afraid
she thught
determinedly
Gradually, Jane fell
It was daybreak when Jane wke up. She struggled t her feet and headed fr the stream. After having sme berries and stream water, Jane walked slwly t an pen area t wait fr her rescue. ________________________________________________(令她開心的是, 她很快聽到直升機的聲音). ________________ _________________ (Jane瘋狂地?fù)]著她的黃色襯衫) when it came int sight. _______ (令她傷心的是), the helicpter flied away again. __________, sn came the rescue team, tgether with Tm, wh had fund Jane's lcatin frm the helicpter. Jane was saved.
Delightedly/
Jyfully, she sn heard the helicpter
Jane madly waved
her yellw bluse

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