讀后續(xù)寫：八步創(chuàng)意模板寫作TOC \o "1-3" \h \u   HYPERLINK \l "_Toc30219" Part1:八步法詳解  PAGEREF _Toc30219 \h 1  HYPERLINK \l "_Toc4409" Part2:高考真題實戰(zhàn)演練  PAGEREF _Toc4409 \h 5  HYPERLINK \l "_Toc3521" 實戰(zhàn)演練1：讀后續(xù)寫浙江卷（2016年真題）  PAGEREF _Toc3521 \h 5  HYPERLINK \l "_Toc26206" 實戰(zhàn)演練2：讀后續(xù)寫浙江卷（2018年6真題）  PAGEREF _Toc26206 \h 8  Part1:八步法詳解 （1）情緒：消極情緒 （2）細(xì)節(jié)：進(jìn)一步解釋描寫 （3）轉(zhuǎn)折：個人的努力或借助外界 （4）轉(zhuǎn)機(jī)：事情似乎有了轉(zhuǎn)機(jī)，并抱有希望，感到欣慰 （5）失望：但是問題還是沒有解決或出現(xiàn)了新問題 （6）新法：突然有了一個想法（一句話說明這個想法） （7）結(jié)局：過了一段時間；事情有了最后的轉(zhuǎn)折 （8）總結(jié)：點題，呼應(yīng)前文 詳述： （1）消極情緒 典型表達(dá)是： 感到（這個可以有很多表達(dá)方式，并且可以結(jié)合在每一個環(huán)節(jié)中，可有非謂語動詞形式和介詞短語） 1. a flush of (表情緒的名詞)=a wave of...=a feeling/sense of...一陣... 2.joy/excitement/pride/anger/rage/panic/terror/sorrow/sadness/grief/embarrassment/dispointment/guilt/shame...) 3. (表情緒的名詞) flooded over sb=swept over sb ? 因...顫抖 tremble//shiver/shake (with fear, panic excitement, rage...) ? （2）進(jìn)一步細(xì)節(jié)描寫 典型是：流淚；心里想…… 流淚： 1. Tears blurred one's eyes.????? 2. One's eyes got misty.?? 3. One's eyes misted/dimmed with tears.淚眼模糊 4. ...be close to tears幾乎要哭了 5. tears (roll down one's eyes/cheeks/face)淚水落下 ? 心里想 1.? An inner voice told sb that?從句內(nèi)心的聲音告訴某人...??? 2. ...thought/said to oneself ? （3）轉(zhuǎn)折（個人努力或借助外界） 典型是：鼓起勇氣或另外一方的鼓勵；毫不猶豫 pluck up/take/gather/one's courage (to do...) ? 毫不猶豫： 1. sb could hardly wait to do sth?? 2. without a second thought 3. without even thinking?? 4. without delay? 5. without hesitation ? （4）事情似乎有了轉(zhuǎn)機(jī)，并抱有希望，感到欣慰 典型表達(dá)是： 似乎： 1. It was like doing sth好像... 2. It seemed as if/ that...好像... 希望： 1. hoping that?從句抱著一絲希望? 2. see/feel a glimmer of hope看到一絲希望 3. trying hard to do sth? 欣慰： 1. ...breathed a sigh of relief松了一口氣? 2. ...sighed with relief松了一口氣 3. (A wave of) relief flooded through/washed over sb?? 4. to one's relief, ..???使人欣慰的/放心的是 ? （5）但是還是問題還是沒有解決或出現(xiàn)了新問題 典型是：不幸的是；不知道做什么 不幸的是： 1. But bad luck for sb, ...但是某人真不走運(yùn) 3. , but in vain?????? 4. , but without success????? 5. , but no use????? 不知道做什么 1. Sb did sth, wondering what to do next. 2. Sb did sth, not knowing what to do next. 3. Sb did sth, unsure of what to do next.? 4. Sb was at a loss what to do. 5. Sb was in a dilemma about whether to do or not.感到難以決定... （6）突然有了一個想法：一句話表示想法 典型：某人想到/明白...;?有了主意 1. It suddenly occurred to sb that?從句=It hit sb that?從句=It struck me that?從句?=It dawned on sb that?從句 2. (idea, thought...) occurred/came to sb.=...came/flashed into one's mind=...crowded in one's mind 3. One's mind began to race （7）皆大歡喜：過了一段時間，事情有了最后的轉(zhuǎn)折 過了一段時間 1. not long after that,...=shortly afterwards, ...=before long, ...=It didn't take long before?從句=It took some time before從句不久, ...????? 2. for an instant/moment一瞬間 ? 有了結(jié)果 1. To one's surprise(delight)/Strangely enough, it turned out that?從句 2. But on second thoughts, ...但是轉(zhuǎn)而一想，... 3. But what happened next was pure magic.?接下來發(fā)生的非常奇妙 ? 皆大歡喜：參考（1） ? （8）最后總結(jié)，點題 典型是： 直到...才意識到... 1.?倒裝句：Not until?時間狀語?did sb realize/notice that?從句 2.?強(qiáng)調(diào)句：It was only時間狀語?that sb realized that?從句 ? 還記得某人的話；還在某人的腦海中 1. One's words (echoed/rang out) in one's ears. 2. One's words(voice/song) lingered/whispered in one's mind/head.????? 3. One's head was still full of... ? 經(jīng)歷與教訓(xùn) 1. What a/an...lesson sb taught me(sb learned from sb)!? (valuable/useful/great/painful) 2. What a/an...experience sb had! ?(enjoyable/pleasant/wonderful/unforgettable/memorable/interesting/valuable) 3. Down deep in one's heart, ...在某人的內(nèi)心深處 Part2:高考真題實戰(zhàn)演練 實戰(zhàn)演練1：讀后續(xù)寫浙江卷（2016森林遇險） 夫妻旅游途中吵架，妻子獨自離開，述路在樹林里，直升飛機(jī)來了幾次授救但沒有看見她。她感到很失望， One weekend in July,?Jane?and her husband,?Tom, had driven three hours to camp overnight by a?lake?in the forest. Unfortunately, on the way an unpleasant subject came up and they started to quarrel. By the time they reached the lake, Jane was so angry that she said to Tom. “I’m going to find a better spot for us to camp” and?walked?away. ? ? ? With no path to follow, Jane just walked on for quite a long time. After she had?climbed?to a high place, she turned around, hoping to see the lake. To her surprise, she saw nothing but forest and, far beyond, a snowcapped mountain top. She suddenly realized that she was lost. ? ? ? “Tom! ”she cried. “Help!” ? ? ? No reply. If only she had not left her mobile phone in that bag with Tom. Jane kept moving, but the farther she walked, the more confused she became. As night was beginning to fall, Jane was so tired that she had to stop for the night. Lying awake in the dark, Jane wanted very much to be with Tom and her family. She wanted to hold him and tell him how much she loved him. ? ? ? Jane rose at the break of day, hungry and thirsty. She could hear water trickling (滴落）somewhere?at a distance. Quickly she followed the sound to?a stream.?To her great joy, she also saw some berry bushes. She drank and ate a few berries. Never in her life had she tasted anything better. Feeling stronger now, Jane began to walk along the stream and hope it would lead her to the lake. ? ? ? As she picked her way carefully along the stream, Jane heard a?helicopter.Is that for me? Unfortunately, the trees made it impossible for people to see her from above. A few minutes later, another helicopter flew overhead. Jane took off her?yellow blouse, thinking that she should go to an open area and flag them if they came back again. 注意： 1. 所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為l50左右； 2. 至少使用5個短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語； 3. 續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語已為你寫好； 4. 續(xù)寫完成后，請用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語。 Paragraph 1： ? ? ??But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: ? ? ??It was daybreak when Jane woke up. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 第一段：But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again.(但是沒有直升機(jī)來了，天又黑了。) 第二段：It was daybreak when Jane woke up.簡醒來的時候天已經(jīng)亮了。 實戰(zhàn)演練2：讀后續(xù)寫浙江卷（2018年6月） 父親帶兒子去西部荒野的一個朋友家體驗農(nóng)場生活，見父親和叔叔騎馬，兒子也很想騎，于是親身上馬體驗。臨走叔叔告誡我們不要走偏了路（"Don’t be late for supper," Uncle Paul cried, "and keep to the track so that you don’t get lost!"）。一路上，風(fēng)景優(yōu)美，讓人陶醉。 閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進(jìn)行續(xù)寫，使之構(gòu)成一個完整的故事。 It was summer, and my dad wanted to treat me to a vacation like never before. He decided to take me on a trip to the Wild West. We took a plane to Albuquerque, a big city in the state of New Mexico. We reached Albuquerque in the late afternoon. Uncle Paul, my dad’s friend, picked us up from the airport and drove us up to his farm in Pecos. His wife Tina cooked us a delicious dinner and we got to know his sons Ryan and Kyle. My dad and I spent the night in the guestroom of the farm house listening to the frogs and water rolling down the river nearby. Very early in the morning, Uncle Paul woke us up to have breakfast. "The day starts at dawn on my farm," he said. After breakfast, I went to help Aunt Tina feed the chickens, while my dad went with Uncle Paul to take the sheep out to graze(吃草). I was impressed to see my dad and Uncle Paul riding horses. They looked really cool. In the afternoon, I asked Uncle Paul if I could take a horse ride, and he said yes, as long as my dad went with me. I wasn’t going to take a horse ride by myself anyway. So, my dad and I put on our new cowboy hats, got on our horses, and headed slowly towards the mountains. "Don’t be late for supper," Uncle Paul cried, "and keep to the track so that you don’t get lost!" "OK! " my dad cried back. After a while Uncle Paul and his farm house were out of sight. It was so peaceful and quiet and the colors of the brown rocks, the deep green pine trees, and the late afternoon sun mixed to create a magic scene. It looked like a beautiful woven(編織的) blanket spread out upon the ground just for us. Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. 注意： （1）所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為l50左右； （2）至少使用5個短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語： （3）續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語已為你寫好； （4）續(xù)寫完成后，請用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語。 Paragraph 1: Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: We had no idea where we were and it was getting dark. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 1: Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. Paragraph 2: We had no idea where we were and it was getting dark. ? 讀后續(xù)寫續(xù)寫1.A wave of terror swept over her.一陣恐怖的浪潮席卷了她。1.情緒2.Her heart pounding fiercely and her palm sweating, an inner voice told her that she had to find a safe place.她的心劇烈地跳動著，手心冒汗，一個內(nèi)在的聲音告訴她，她必須找到一個安全的地方。2.細(xì)節(jié)：詳述情緒3.Tired and terrified as she was,Jane plucked her courage to feel the way. 雖然她很累，也很害怕，但簡鼓起勇氣去感受這條路。3.轉(zhuǎn)折∶ 個人努力 4.Luckily, it didn't take long before she found a cave. 5. Sighing with relief, she felt a glimmer of hope, saying to herself."Tomorrow is another day." 4.幸運(yùn)的是，沒過多久她就找到了一個洞穴。 5.松了一口氣，她感到了一絲希望。 對自己說。 “明天又是新的一天?！?轉(zhuǎn)機(jī)：成功、希望來了。With that, she went to sleep, in whose dream her husband kept her company.說完，她就去睡覺了，她丈夫在夢里陪伴著她。銜接句讀后續(xù)寫續(xù)寫1.Hungry and disappointed, she found not any helicopter overhead,at a loss what to do. 1.饑餓和失望，她發(fā)現(xiàn)頭頂上沒有任何直升機(jī)，不知所措。再度失望（出現(xiàn)新問題）2.It suddenly dawned on her that she should find a big open area first. 3. Having gobbling down some blackberries, she can't wait to set off. 4. After what seemed a century,such an area did come into sight. Her face brightened up.2.她突然明白，她應(yīng)該先找一個大的空地。 她狼吞虎咽地吃了些黑莓，迫不及待地要出發(fā)了。 4.好像過了一個世紀(jì)之后，這樣的地區(qū)確實出現(xiàn)了。 5.她的臉變亮了。 突然有了辦法What a coincidence that meanwhile, a helicopter was flying towards her. Upon its landing, out dashed her husband who hugged Jane tightly, tears welling up in their heart.6.與此同時，一架直升機(jī)正朝她飛來，真是巧合。 7.她的丈夫緊緊地?fù)肀е?，眼淚涌上心頭。結(jié)果解決問題，巧不成書，皆大歡喜 It was at the moment that they decided not to quarrel any more but learned to compromise. 8.就在這時，他們決定不再爭吵了，而是學(xué)會了妥協(xié)（總結(jié)）讀后續(xù)寫八步創(chuàng)意寫作1. A wave of nervousness swept over me especially when the horse ran like crazy.（情緒）2. My heart pounding and my palms sweating, an inner voice told me that I had to calm down.（細(xì)節(jié)詳述）3. Though in a panic, I plucked my courage to pull on the reigns.（轉(zhuǎn)折：個人努力）4. Luckily, it didn’t take long before I settled down the horse.（轉(zhuǎn)機(jī)：成功，希望來了）5. Just at that moment, Dad ran over, gasping ? for air.（銜接句：新問題來了）6. “Boy, we are way off the track.” He said seriously, a look of concern spreading across his face.1. Hungry and frustrated, we tried to find a way out but in vain.(努力，失敗)2. It suddenly dawned on me we could rode down the river nearby.（突然有了辦法）3. Unexpectedly, the river brought us to the familiar track at last.（開始做）4. After what seemed two hours, Uncle Paul’s farm house did come into sight.（成功了）5. My father’s face brightened up, so did mine.（感受）6. Upon our arrival, Uncle ? Paul couldn’t wait to asked us, “Where have you been? I am just calling ? 911.”（幽默對話）7. “To Alice’s Wonderland” my father answered, winking at me with a ? big grin.8. What an unforgettable?experience we had!(總結(jié))

相關(guān)課件

課件新高考讀后續(xù)寫 專題3 “情緒級差”表達(dá)法：

這是一份課件新高考讀后續(xù)寫 專題3 “情緒級差”表達(dá)法，共6頁。

2024年讀后續(xù)寫 10 讀后續(xù)寫：八步創(chuàng)意模板法 (word+ppt)：

這是一份2024年讀后續(xù)寫 10 讀后續(xù)寫：八步創(chuàng)意模板法 (word+ppt)，文件包含10讀后續(xù)寫八步創(chuàng)意模板法pptx、10讀后續(xù)寫八步創(chuàng)意模板法docx等2份課件配套教學(xué)資源，其中PPT共18頁， 歡迎下載使用。

2024年高考英語讀后續(xù)寫+概要寫作課件匯總新題型-讀后續(xù)寫-第13篇：

這是一份2024年高考英語讀后續(xù)寫+概要寫作課件匯總新題型-讀后續(xù)寫-第13篇，共22頁。PPT課件主要包含了三大原則，四個步驟，讀懂大意理清脈絡(luò)，細(xì)讀首句構(gòu)思框架，增加細(xì)節(jié)開始寫作，修改潤色整潔謄寫，參考范文，范文評析等內(nèi)容，歡迎下載使用。

英語朗讀寶

相關(guān)課件 更多

20 讀后續(xù)寫：修辭改裝法（PPT課件版）-2022年高考英語讀后續(xù)寫專項技巧訓(xùn)練

20 讀后續(xù)寫：修辭改裝法（PPT課件版）-2022年高考英語讀后續(xù)寫專項技巧訓(xùn)練
13 讀后續(xù)寫：with伴隨構(gòu)造大法 （PPT課件版）-2022年高考英語讀后續(xù)寫專項技巧訓(xùn)練

13 讀后續(xù)寫：with伴隨構(gòu)造大法 （PPT課件版）-2022年高考英語讀后續(xù)寫專項技巧訓(xùn)練
10讀后續(xù)寫：八步創(chuàng)意模板法-2022年新高考英語讀后續(xù)寫核心技能突破（PPT課件版）

10讀后續(xù)寫：八步創(chuàng)意模板法-2022年新高考英語讀后續(xù)寫核心技能突破（PPT課件版）
05讀后續(xù)寫：友情類（故事構(gòu)造“三步法”）-2022年新高考英語讀后續(xù)寫核心技能突破（PPT課件版）

05讀后續(xù)寫：友情類（故事構(gòu)造“三步法”）-2022年新高考英語讀后續(xù)寫核心技能突破（PPT課件版）
資料下載及使用幫助
版權(quán)申訴
版權(quán)申訴
若您為此資料的原創(chuàng)作者，認(rèn)為該資料內(nèi)容侵犯了您的知識產(chǎn)權(quán)，請掃碼添加我們的相關(guān)工作人員，我們盡可能的保護(hù)您的合法權(quán)益。
入駐教習(xí)網(wǎng)，可獲得資源免費(fèi)推廣曝光，還可獲得多重現(xiàn)金獎勵，申請 精品資源制作， 工作室入駐。
版權(quán)申訴二維碼
高考專區(qū)
歡迎來到教習(xí)網(wǎng)
  • 900萬優(yōu)選資源，讓備課更輕松
  • 600萬優(yōu)選試題，支持自由組卷
  • 高質(zhì)量可編輯，日均更新2000+
  • 百萬教師選擇，專業(yè)更值得信賴
微信掃碼注冊
qrcode
二維碼已過期
刷新

微信掃碼，快速注冊

手機(jī)號注冊
手機(jī)號碼

手機(jī)號格式錯誤

手機(jī)驗證碼 獲取驗證碼

手機(jī)驗證碼已經(jīng)成功發(fā)送，5分鐘內(nèi)有效

設(shè)置密碼

6-20個字符，數(shù)字、字母或符號

注冊即視為同意教習(xí)網(wǎng)「注冊協(xié)議」及「隱私條款」
QQ注冊
手機(jī)號注冊
微信注冊

注冊成功

返回
頂部