
(2021·河北省邯鄲市高一下期末) 閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。 Once there was a little girl named Emily. Althugh her singing was very pleasant t hear, lacking curage, she never dared t sing in frnt f strangers. One summer, the neighbrhd where she lived wuld hld a singing cmpetitin. Her best friend, Lucy, came t invite her t participate in the cmpetitin, but Emily said, “I’m afraid t take part in it.” Her mther said, “It’s kay; just d it bravely.” Emily fllwed her mama’s advice and decided t give it a try. The day came. Emily and Lucy went t the cmpetitin site. But she was t timid (膽小的) t walk nt the stage. She had been waiting until thers finished singing. She shakily frced herself t stand n the stage. She started t sing, but her vice was s lw. What’s wrse, she was s nervus that she frgt the lyrics (歌詞) after singing a few wrds. She was laughed at by thers. Embarrassed and shy, she ran away frm the stage. Sme naughty bys ran after her and said, “Emily, cward (膽小鬼)! Emily, cward!” Emily didn’t argue with them. What she wanted was t g back hme as quickly as she culd. Finally, she rushed int the huse, hugged her mm and cried sadly.
“Well, my pr girl. Dn’t cry. Tell me what happened t yu,” asked her mm. Emily lked up at her mther and tld her what she had experienced. Listening t her, her mm cupped her face in her hands and said, “It desn’t matter, my girl. As lng as yu practice singing mre in frnt f strangers, yu will becme braver little by little. S, my girl, dn’t be beaten by a failure. Yu can g ut t practice singing every day. N matter wh is listening t yu, g n singing and never stp. I believe there will be a harvest fr yu.” 注意: 1. 續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右; 2. 請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Paragraph 1: Emily listened t her mther carefully and fllwed her mm’s suggestin. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph 2: Ging n singing, she walked int the park, where many peple were singing and dancing. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
本文是一篇記敘文。文章講述了Emily唱歌很好聽,但是她沒有勇氣在陌生人面前唱歌。一年夏天,Emily參加了一個歌唱比賽。由于膽小,她唱歌的聲音很小,甚至忘詞。淘氣的男孩們嘲笑她是膽小鬼。Emily哭著跑回了家。媽媽知道后,鼓勵她通過練習(xí)在陌生人面前唱歌來讓自己逐漸變得勇敢。
Althugh her singing was very pleasant t hear, lacking curage, she never dared t sing in frnt f strangers. 雖然她唱歌很好聽,但由于缺乏勇氣,她從來不敢在陌生人面前唱歌。 本句是主從復(fù)合句。althugh引導(dǎo)讓步狀語從句,主句是主謂賓結(jié)構(gòu),其中“l(fā)acking curage”作原因狀語。
續(xù)寫第一段開頭:“Emily認真地聽媽媽講話,并聽從了媽媽的建議?!蓖ㄟ^原文我們可以知道媽媽給Emily的建議是在陌生人面前練習(xí)唱歌。那么,接下來可以按照這樣的思路來寫: 1. What did Emily d? She began t practice singing utside. (與母親的建議“Yu can g ut t practice singing every day.”一致。) 2. What changes tk place? Her curage?(與母親讓Emily練習(xí)的目的“yu will becme braver little by little”一致);Her vice/singing?(與原文中的“her vice was s lw”形成對比);The result?(與原文中的“she never dared t sing in frnt f strangers”相對) 3. What happened while she was practicing?(合理發(fā)揮想象,充實第一段的情節(jié)。) 提示:由續(xù)寫第二段開頭的“Ging n singing”可以聯(lián)想到應(yīng)該是Emily在練習(xí)唱歌時被發(fā)生的某件事打擾了。 續(xù)寫第二段開頭:“她繼續(xù)唱著歌,走進了公園,那里有很多人在唱歌跳舞?!辈浑y想象,Emily唱著歌,公園里的人自然會聽到她的歌聲。那么,接下來可以想象: 1. What was peple’s reactin t Emily’s singing?(根據(jù)原文中對Emily唱歌的描述“her singing was very pleasant t hear”可猜想,人們應(yīng)該是欣賞她唱歌的。) 2. Hw did Emily feel?(可以接著描寫Emily在看到人們反應(yīng)后的感受。) 3. Hw did Emily behave when participating in a singing cmpetitin again?(原文用了大量筆墨描寫Emily參加比賽的過程,此處可以寫她再次參加歌唱比賽的表現(xiàn)。)
Paragraph 1: Emily listened t her mther carefully and fllwed her mm’s suggestin. She gt up early the next mrning and began t practice singing utside. Gradually, her curage became ①greater and greater, and her vice was als luder and luder. Mnths later, she was nt afraid at all t sing in frnt f crwds. ②One f the naughty bys wh had laughed at her befre cried t her, “Emily, cward! Emily, cward!” Hwever, she chse t ignre his behavir.
①“greater and greater”與“l(fā)uder and luder”反映了Emily按照母親的建議去做后發(fā)生的變化,她變得越來越勇敢與自信。這與原文最后一段中的“yu will becme braver little by little”呼應(yīng)。②巧妙運用原文中的場景,通過Emily面對同種情況時的不同反應(yīng),從側(cè)面反映了她的變化,“ignre”與她之前的做法形成對比。
Paragraph 2: Ging n singing, she walked int the park, where many peple were singing and dancing. Hearing her beautiful vice, sme stpped t enjy her singing and clapped when she finished the sng. Emily felt ③encuraged and was pleased that she culd finally sing ④cnfidently in frnt f strangers. The secnd year, the neighbrhd held a singing cmpetitin again and Emily signed up fr it. This time, Emily stepped nt the stage bravely, and her lud and beautiful vice f singing mved the audience present. They all ⑤cheered her, including thse wh had laughed at her. Her mther was delighted t see ⑥the timid girl had becme a brave ne.(161 wrds)
③心理描寫:人們的反應(yīng)讓Emily受到了鼓舞(“encuraged”);“pleased”表達出Emily對自己能在陌生人面前自信地唱歌而感到喜悅。④副詞“cnfidently”與“bravely”呈現(xiàn)了上一段“Emily的勇氣不斷增加,歌聲越來越響亮”的結(jié)果,說明Emily變得自信又勇敢。⑤動詞“cheer”反映了人們對Emily的表現(xiàn)的認可。⑥呼應(yīng)開頭,在故事開始時,Emily是 “l(fā)ack curage”的女孩,“the timid girl”與之呼應(yīng);后來,“brave”與“timid”形成對比,說明Emily最終完成了蛻變。
1. be afraid t d sth. 害怕做某事2. laugh at 嘲笑3. cheer vt. 為……歡呼4. be delighted t d sth. 高興做某事
Paragraph 1: Emily listened t her mther carefully and fllwed her mm’s suggestin. She ften went utside t practice singing in frnt f strangers. At first, she was very nervus but after sme time, she seemed nt afraid f ding s. One day, while singing, she met sme f thse naughty bys, wh shuted “Emily, cward!” again. This time, hwever, Emily ignred their shuts as if she had heard nthing. Seeing Emily didn’t care abut their shuts, the bys, wh had intended t make Emily feel ashamed, went away in embarrassment. Paragraph 2: Ging n singing, she walked int the park, where many peple were singing and dancing. This was the best place t practice singing in frnt f a crwd. Her beautiful vice sn attracted the attentin f sme peple, wh gave her admiring glances, and as she finished the sng, they clapped wildly. Emily was glad she culd sing cnfidently in public. When the secnd singing cmpetitin was held, she entered it again. The big day arrived! Emily, wh was the last t sing, perfrmed perfectly and the audience brke int lud applause. Lucy and Emily’s mther, wh were als present, waited anxiusly fr the results. The winners were annunced and Emily wn first prize.(176 wrds)
1. 續(xù)寫自然流暢、情節(jié)合理:作者能夠在閱讀前文和提示句的基礎(chǔ)上展開合理的想象,設(shè)計的情節(jié)符合邏輯,銜接順暢。2. 描寫細致、語言生動、表達準確,較好地完成了寫作任務(wù)。3. 使用了大量高級詞匯和短語,如“ignre”“care abut”“intend t d”“admiring”“give sb. a glance”等。4. 使用了許多高級句型,如wh引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句、as引導(dǎo)的時間狀語從句等,還使用了復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu),如“現(xiàn)在分詞+賓語從句”作狀語。
be delighted at 對……感到很高興/滿意be fascinated by sth. 對……入迷be keen n sb./(ding) sth. 喜愛,對……著迷an extremely happy cuple 極其幸福的一對dance/jump fr/with jy 高興地舞/跳起來be wild with delight 欣喜若狂an encuraging respnse 一個令人鼓舞的回應(yīng)a pleasant evening 一個令人愉快的夜晚be/feel n tp f the wrld 心滿意足,非常幸福
t ne’s great jy 令某人非常高興的是a mixture f excitement and happiness 既興奮又開心in cheerful/high spirits 心情愉快/情緒高漲keep ne’s spirits up 振作精神;保持高昂的情緒a satisfied lk 滿意的表情be cntent/satisfied with 對……感到滿意
be full f hpe 大有希望have high hpes fr sb. 對某人寄予厚望have hpes f ding sth. 抱有……的希望exceed ne’s expectatins 超出某人的預(yù)期live up t expectatins 不負眾望with great expectatins 滿懷希望地feel hpeful 抱有希望be (very) hpeful abut sth. 對……抱有(很大)希望
be verjyed at sth./t d sth. 對……感到非常高興shed tears f happiness 喜極而泣yell with delight 樂得大叫be in a gd md 心情很愉快set ne’s mind at rest 使某人安心feel inspired/encuraged 受到鼓舞的perfectly happy 幸福極了,幸福美滿a glimmer f hpe 一線希望
During the camping trip, we were all in high spirits. 野營旅行過程中,我們都興致勃勃。Her eyes sparkled/twinkled with pleasure. 她的眼里閃耀著喜悅的光芒。I am feeling n tp f the wrld. 我覺得非常幸福。I was pleased beynd descriptin. 我的高興無法形容。She was in seventh heaven when she met him. 她見到他時異常開心。The girl was wild with delight. 那個女孩欣喜若狂。Happiness and jy shwed clearly n his weather-beaten face. 他那飽經(jīng)風(fēng)霜的臉上洋溢著幸福與喜悅。Her heart was glwing with happiness. 她的心中洋溢著幸福。
All her heart went up in flames f jy. 她心花怒放。He ndded, and was filled with jy. 他點了點頭,滿心歡喜。Tears f happiness flwed dwn her cheeks. 幸福的淚水順著她的臉頰流淌。When the mther kissed the baby n the cheek, she gave a smile f sweetness. 當(dāng)媽媽親吻寶貝的臉頰時,她露出甜蜜的微笑。They led a happy life with their three children. 他們和三個孩子過著幸福的生活。Yur future is full f hpe. 你的前途大有希望。He was very hpeful abut the utcme f the interview. 他對面試結(jié)果抱有很大希望。
shake/tremble vi. 發(fā)抖,顫抖stress ut (使)焦慮不安mental stress 思想壓力be/feel stressed (ut) 焦慮不安
nervus adj. 緊張的be desperately nervus 極度緊張uneasy adj. 不安的
tense adj. 神經(jīng)緊張的anxius adj. 焦急的tensin n. 緊張,不安be n edge 緊張不安
He lked anxius when he saw his mther in cmpany with his teacher. 當(dāng)看見媽媽和他的老師在一起時,他流露出焦慮不安的神色。Exercise will help imprve yur physical health and help yu cpe with stress better. 鍛煉有助于改善你的身體健康,幫助你更好地應(yīng)對壓力。
S nervus was I abut my exams that I culdn’t sleep. 我為考試緊張得睡不著覺。With my heart in my muth, I went fr the jb interview. 我提心吊膽地前去參加面試。Whenever I have t speak in public, I get butterflies in my stmach and my hands are sweaty. 每當(dāng)我要在公共場合發(fā)言的時候,我心里就直打鼓,手心都是汗。He was pacing the rm nervusly. 他正緊張地在房間里走來走去。Tny had had a hard day and his nerves were n edge. 托尼累了一天,神經(jīng)很緊張。
She tried t hide her nervusness, but it was clear that she wasn’t cmfrtable when making the speech. 她試圖掩飾自己的緊張,但是她演講的時候顯然很不自然。
Everyne waited anxiusly fr the winner’s name t be annunced. 每個人都在緊張地等待著宣布獲勝者的名字。His vice was full f anxiety. 他的聲音飽含焦慮。She lked at the clck with grwing uneasiness. 她看著鐘,心里越來越不安。There was a shrt perid f uneasy calm thrughut the regin. 整個地區(qū)有一段短暫的令人不安的平靜時期。His term paper has been really stressing him ut—he just desn’t knw what t write! 他的學(xué)期論文讓他非常焦慮——他就是不知道要寫什么!She wndered uneasily what he was thinking. 她很不安,想知道他在想什么。
the jys and srrws f childhd 童年的歡樂與悲傷cme as smething f a surprise 有點驚訝be verwhelmed by… 對……感到不能自持be in lw spirits 情緒低落lse heart 喪失信心;泄氣ne’s heart sinks 心里一沉murn (fr) sb./sth.因失去某人或某物而哀悼/憂傷
a strng sense f lss 強烈的失落感fall int despair 陷入絕望be in a bad md 心情不快a sense f release 解脫感ease the pain 減輕痛苦a brken heart 破碎的心heartbrken adj. 極為悲傷的,心碎的be vercme with grief 悲痛欲絕with a heavy/sinking heart 心情沉重地
He came t me with a lng face. 他哭喪著臉來找我。I feel like I am flating in an cean f sadness. 我感覺自己漂浮在悲傷的海洋里。I didn’t want t break dwn in frnt f the children. 我不想在孩子們面前失控痛哭。Jane turned t me with tears in her eyes, and begged me t help her. 簡眼含淚水地轉(zhuǎn)向我,懇求我?guī)椭?。Upn hearing the bad news, Mary felt seized by a burst f sadness and culdn’t help weeping bitterly. 聽到那個壞消息,瑪麗感到一陣悲傷,忍不住痛哭起來。Wrds cannt express my srrw. 言語無法表達我的哀傷。
She held the letter, her hands shaking/shivering and her eyes shwing deep srrw. 她拿著信,雙手顫抖,眼睛流露出深深的悲傷。When he heard the news f his friend’s accident, his face cluded ver. 當(dāng)聽說朋友出了事故時,他的臉色陰沉下來。
The dg lay at his feet, lking up frm time t time with big murnful eyes. 那條狗趴在他腳邊,不時地抬起頭來看看, 大大的眼睛里充滿了憂傷。
be speechless with rage 氣得說不出話rage at sb. 對某人發(fā)火cmplain cnstantly 不斷地抱怨panic vi. & vt. (使)驚慌 n. 驚慌,恐慌flame with anger (臉)氣得通紅fly int a rage 勃然大怒,暴跳如雷be shaking/trembling with rage/anger 氣得發(fā)抖be dark/purple with rage/anger(臉色)氣得發(fā)青/發(fā)紫get irritated 被激怒get mad at sb. 對某人很生氣
afraid adj. 害怕的,擔(dān)心的be afraid f sb./sth. 害怕某人/某物frightened adj. 受驚的shcked adj. 震驚的hrrified adj. 充滿恐懼的,震驚的startled adj. 吃驚的,受驚的fearful adj. 可怕的;恐懼的;擔(dān)憂的alarmed adj. 擔(dān)憂的;恐慌的terrible adj. 可怕的;非常嚴重的;糟糕的freeze/stiffen with fear/terrr/hrrr 嚇呆be easily annyed at trifles 易為瑣事惱火
feel numb with hrrr 驚呆a resentful lk 充滿怨恨的眼神be paralysed with fear嚇得呆若木雞
drive sb. crazy/mad 使某人發(fā)瘋be furius with sb. 生某人的氣stamp ne’s ft in anger 氣得跺腳get annyed 惱火
His remark left his bss speechless with anger. 他的那番話氣得老板啞口無言。Filled with anger, Jim was unable t say a single wrd. 吉姆滿腔憤怒,一句話也說不出來。He was silent, a fire f rage burning in his heart. 他沉默著,一股怒火在心中燃燒。Seeing the rm was in a mess, he trembled with anger frm head t ft. 看到房間雜亂不堪,他氣得渾身發(fā)抖。
Mum will be angry with us when she finds ut abut the brken vase. 媽媽知道花瓶被打破了會生我們的氣的。She was white with anger and culd nt speak. 她氣得臉色發(fā)白,說不出話來。And then the fierce, buried anger surged up int his thrat. 然后,埋藏在心頭的滿腔怒火直沖到他的喉嚨里。Biling with rage, Jim shk his fist at me. 吉姆怒火中燒,朝我揮拳。Filled with fury, Jim was unable t utter a single wrd. 吉姆滿腔憤怒,一句話也說不出來。He lked as if he were ging t burst. 他看上去快要氣炸了。His face cluded ver with anger. 他怒容滿面。
Sam strmed ut f the rm, slamming the dr furiusly behind him. 薩姆沖出房間,狠狠地摔上門。Sally was mad at the children fr making s much nise. 薩莉?qū)τ诤⒆觽兡敲闯臭[非常生氣。The yung man’s face flushed angrily. 那個年輕男子的臉氣得緋紅。A fld f fear welled up inside him. 他心中涌起一陣恐懼。At the sight f the fierce wlf, I frze with hrrr, t scared t mve an inch. 看到那只兇惡的狼時,我嚇呆了,不敢動彈。Dan rushed ut f the rm, terrr in her eyes. 丹從屋子里沖出來,眼里顯出害怕的神色。Fear flded ver him. 他心中充滿恐懼。
He suddenly realized t his hrrr that the brakes weren’t wrking. 突然間,他驚恐地意識到剎車失靈了。He turned t me, with his eyes full f hrrr. 他轉(zhuǎn)向我,眼里充滿了恐懼。He was s frightened that his knees were kncking. 他嚇得兩個膝蓋直打哆嗦。I std still, scared t mve frward and scared t g back. 我站著不動,不敢前進,也不敢后退。Their faces were white, and their eyes were filled with terrr. 他們臉色慘白,眼里充滿恐懼。It made my hair stand n end. 它嚇得我毛骨悚然。I was frightened t mve in case the branch brke. 我不敢動,怕樹枝斷掉。
I was terrified that my father wuld find ut I had lied t him. 我很害怕父親會發(fā)現(xiàn)我對他撒了謊。Tm turned white, a lk f hrrr n his face. 湯姆臉色變得蒼白,臉上露出驚恐的表情。She gt int a real panic when she thught she’d lst the ticket. 當(dāng)以為自己把票弄丟了時,她著實驚慌起來。When he came back he lked scared stiff, as if he’d seen a ghst. 他回來時看上去害怕得要命,好像見了鬼似的。
unfulfilled adj. 未滿足的,未實現(xiàn)的upset n. 失望,沮喪 adj. 失望的,難過的discuraged adj. 沮喪的,氣餒的discntent n. 不滿;不滿足glmy adj. 沮喪的let sb. dwn 使某人失望feel let dwn 感到沮喪be depressed abut sth. 對某事感到沮喪depressing news 令人沮喪的消息
disappint vt. 使失望 → disappinted adj. 失望的,沮喪的 → disappinting adj. 令人失望的 → disappintment n. 失望,掃興despair vi. 絕望 → despairing adj. 無望的;感到絕望的displease vt. 使不愉快 → displeased adj. 不滿意的hpeless adj. 絕望的 → hpelessness n. 絕望desperate adj. 絕望的 → desperatin n. 絕望dissatisfied adj. 不滿意的
He felt very disappinted abut his failure t pass the exam. 他對沒有通過考試感到非常失望。She was cmpletely vercme by disappintment. 她完全被失望的情緒壓倒。Wrds cannt express hw disappinted I was. 言語無法形容我是多么失望。She swallwed her sigh f disappintment and lked at her dancing partner. 她忍住失望的嘆息,望著她的舞伴。I wuld think it was a very tearful and desperate time fr him. 我認為這對他來說是一個非常令人傷心和絕望的時刻。
A plice fficer gave evidence that n arrival at the plice statin, the cmplainant was very upset and tearful. 一名警官作證說,起訴人一到警察局就感到非常沮喪,而且淚流滿面。Lucy gave a frwn f disappintment and shk her head after a mment. 露西失望地皺了皺眉頭,一會兒又搖了搖頭?!癐 despair f her,” he sighed. “我對她感到絕望?!彼麌@息道。Finally, never leave the examinatin hall in despair, hwever hpeless things may seem. 最后,永遠不要絕望地離開考場,無論事情看起來多么無望。I was smewhat glmy and depressed thse days, but I felt refreshed by the surrunding trees and flwers. 那些日子我有些陰郁和沮喪,但周圍的樹木和花朵使我感到神清氣爽。
Every nerve in my bdy is tense. 我的每根神經(jīng)都繃得緊緊的。My heart is as sweet as hney. 我心里像喝了蜜一樣,甜滋滋的。Her heart almst leapt int her thrat. 她的心快要跳到嗓子眼了。A smile lit up her face. 微笑使她容光煥發(fā)。A ripple f sadness welled up inside him. 他內(nèi)心涌起一陣陣悲傷。His heart was punding with excitement. 他激動得心怦怦直跳。Lneliness and grief cme in waves. 孤獨和悲傷不斷涌上心頭。S angry was she that she went red in the face. 她氣得面紅耳赤。I felt as if a knife were piercing my heart and my tears kept running dwn. 我心如刀絞,眼淚不住地往下流。
She felt extremely excited and delighted, her eyes glittering/sparkling with jy and sweetness. 她感到極度興奮和喜悅,她的眼睛因喜悅和甜蜜而閃閃發(fā)光。She bit her lwer lip t keep it frm trembling and then tears filled her eyes and started running dwn her cheeks. 她咬著下唇不讓它發(fā)抖,然后眼淚充滿了雙眼,開始順著臉頰往下流。Her eyes misted ver as she immersed herself in their gd memries. 當(dāng)她沉浸在他們之間的美好回憶中時,淚水模糊了她的眼睛。At the sight f the fierce wlf, I was seized by a strng sense f hrrr and my palms were sweating.一看到那匹兇猛的狼,我就被一股強烈的恐懼感所控制,手心出汗。When the hst annunced that she wn the prize, her heart was thumping with excitement. 當(dāng)主持人宣布她獲獎時,她激動得心怦怦跳。
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