
讀后續(xù)寫 三個(gè)的萬能情感句 TOC \o "1-3" \h \u HYPERLINK \l "_Toc8508" Part1:第一個(gè)情感萬能句 PAGEREF _Toc8508 \h - 1 - HYPERLINK \l "_Toc3558" Part2:第二個(gè)情感萬能句 PAGEREF _Toc3558 \h - 2 - HYPERLINK \l "_Toc6788" Part3:第三個(gè)情感萬能句 PAGEREF _Toc6788 \h - 3 - HYPERLINK \l "_Toc32521" Part 4:素材日積月累 PAGEREF _Toc32521 \h - 4 - Part1:第一個(gè)情感萬能句 To one's +情緒名詞,主句 這個(gè)句式,非常簡單。屬于入門級的情感描述句。主句是用來描述情緒產(chǎn)生的原因。首先我們來看例句:To my surprise,Tom won the first prize in the English Speech Contest.令我驚訝的是Tom 居然獲得了英語演講比賽的第一名。 要想這個(gè)句子學(xué)好,必須積累情緒名詞,比如:【正態(tài)度】amazement驚奇, delight高興, joy高興, satisfaction滿足,excitement興奮, 【負(fù)態(tài)度】annoyance煩惱, disappointment失望, horror恐怖, shame,羞恥 sorrow悲傷, 【中性態(tài)度】puzzlement迷惑, regret后悔, relief欣慰, surprise/ amazement驚訝 下面我們把這個(gè)簡單句型,進(jìn)行升級。【升級1】加強(qiáng)情緒的語氣比如我想要表達(dá)的是:非常令我吃驚的是,湯姆在英語演講比賽中獲得了一等獎(jiǎng)。你可以這樣寫:Much / Greatly to my surprise, Tom won the first prize in the English Speech Contest.也就是在to前面加上much, greatly,或者在名詞前面添加great這個(gè)形容詞:To my great surprise, Tom won the first prize in the English Speech Contest. 【升級2】to the +情緒名詞+ of ?sb(名詞或者代詞),比如我想要表達(dá)的是: 令他的父母感到吃驚的是,他在英語演講比賽中獲得了一等獎(jiǎng)。To the surprise of his parents, he won the first prize in the English Speech Contest. 這里把To my surprise改成了To the surprise f his parents ,本質(zhì)上,是兩種所有格的變換。 【升級3】情緒名詞疊加使用。 比如我要表達(dá):令他驚訝和高興的是,他在英語演講比賽中獲得了一等獎(jiǎng)To his surprise and joy, he won the first prize in the English Speech Contest. 【升級4】:“to one’s +情緒名詞”位置可變換這個(gè)短語的位置可以句首,句中,句末。請看下面例句: I,to my surprise, found that Tom won the first prize in the English Speech Contest Part2:第二個(gè)情感萬能句What+情緒動(dòng)詞+sb?+was +that從句 What 主語從句描述情緒,that表語從句描述情緒產(chǎn)生的原因,在續(xù)寫里通常可以表達(dá)故事發(fā)展情節(jié)。 【舉例】讓我驚訝的是Tom 居然獲得了英語演講比賽的第一名。What?surprised?me was?that Tom won the first prize in the English Speech Contest. 【歸納整理】【高興類】delight, please, excite, cheer, amuse, satisfy, 【生氣類】annoy, upset【驚訝類】surprise, astonish, shock, amaze ,【害怕類】frighten, scare, terrify, 【失望類】depress, disappoint, discourage, bore 【憂慮類】worry, concern, 【其他類】puzzle, confuse, interest, relax, touch, move, embarrass, impress Part3:第三個(gè)情感萬能句 sb. felt a great sense of + 情緒名詞+ welling up in sb’s heart and surging through sb. 這句話表示:“某人感到一股強(qiáng)烈的......在內(nèi)心升騰、奔涌?!? 這個(gè)萬能句也可以用來描寫情緒和心理,比句式結(jié)構(gòu)比前兩個(gè)句子要復(fù)雜,表現(xiàn)力也要更豐富。well up表示“涌出”,我們可以這樣記憶:well表示“好”以外,還可以表示“井”?!坝砍觥笔怯玫搅恕熬边@個(gè)含義。surge表示“洶涌”。這個(gè)句子的亮點(diǎn)是后半句welling up in sb’s heart and surging through sb.,把情緒的描寫形象化,具體化了。我們先來看兩個(gè)例句: 舉例:Jane感到一股強(qiáng)烈的恐懼,在她心中升騰,奔涌。 Jane felt a great sense of horror welling up in her heart and surging through her. 舉例2:Jane感到一股強(qiáng)烈的嫉妒,在她心中升騰,奔涌。 Jane felt a great sense of jealousy welling up in her heart and surging through her. (jealous嫉妒的,jealousy是“嫉妒”的名詞形式。) 我們再來看看,這個(gè)句型還可以如何拓展升級。非常簡單,就是加上非謂語動(dòng)詞,在不同的位置,發(fā)揮的作用不同。 升級一:句首可以加上doing sth,表示這種情緒產(chǎn)生的原因。 舉例:看到丈夫再跟一個(gè)漂亮的女孩聊天 ,Sunny感到一股強(qiáng)烈的恐懼在內(nèi)心升騰,奔涌 Seeing his husband chatting with a beautiful girl , Jane felt a great sense of jealousy welling up in her heart and surging through her. 升級二:句尾可以加上doing sth,表示這種情緒產(chǎn)生后的結(jié)果。 請看下面的例句: 簡感到一種強(qiáng)烈的嫉妒感在她心中涌出來,把書扔向女孩。 Jane felt a great sense of jealousy welling up in her heart and surging through her ,throwing the book at the girl. Part4:素材日積月累 人物情緒描寫之一:開心(通過心理、表情、動(dòng)作來表達(dá)) 平庸版:He was happy. 進(jìn)階版:1. Her eyes shone/glittered/sparkled /twinkled with joy. Her face lit up with pleasure.(容光煥發(fā)) Her heart was pounding with excitement. (砰砰直跳) Happiness/joy/pleasure/delight took hold of him.(極度開心) She was overflowing with happiness/joy/pleasure/delight.(幸福洋溢) He shed tears of joy.(流下開心的淚水) 例句: 1. His eyes twinkled with pleasure when he saw the news. 當(dāng)他看到新聞,他的眼里閃耀著快樂。 He grinned with delight when he saw us. 當(dāng)他看到我們,咧開嘴開心地笑了。 The smile on her face shone like a diamond. 她臉上的笑容像鉆石一樣閃耀。 I couldn’t restrain my joy and jumped into the house. 我抑制不住內(nèi)心的喜悅,蹦蹦跳跳地進(jìn)了家門。 He cast us a look/glance,with his face wearing a broad/wide/radiant/warm smile. 她看向我們,面帶燦爛/溫暖的笑容。 When his mother kissed him on the cheek,it seemed as if the baby were on the top of the world. 當(dāng)媽媽親吻他的臉頰時(shí),小嬰兒開心極了。 人物情緒描寫之二:傷心(心理、表情、動(dòng)作) 平庸版:He was sad. 進(jìn)階表達(dá): 不同的哭:cry 哭(泛指,哭出聲) sob 嗚咽,啜泣 wail 嚎啕大哭 weep 小聲/無聲流淚 burst into tears 放聲大哭 fight back tears 抑制住淚水 be close to tears / be on the verge of tears 快要哭了 be in tears 含淚 Her eyes were wet with tears 例句: He sighed with disappointment. 他失望地嘆了口氣。 He struggled to fight back his tears. 他試圖控制住自己的淚水。 His eyes brimmed with tears of sorrow. 他的眼里噙滿了悲傷的淚水。 He stood silently, tears rolling down his cheeks. 他靜靜地站著,眼淚流下他的臉頰。 I feel like I am floating in an ocean of sadness. 我感覺自己漂浮在悲傷的海洋里。 I saw an old lady wailing with fist beating her chest in the street corner. 我看到一個(gè)老奶奶在街角捶胸痛哭。 When he embraced me with his arms open wide, I felt my throat choke with sob. 當(dāng)他張開雙臂擁抱我時(shí),我覺得自己喉頭哽咽。 Upon hearing the bad news, she felt seized by a burst of sadness and couldn’t help crying bitterly. 一聽到這個(gè)壞消息,她就被一股悲傷之感控制,忍不住哭泣。
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