
(1)情緒:消極情緒(2)細(xì)節(jié):進(jìn)一步解釋描寫(3)轉(zhuǎn)折:個(gè)人的努力或借助外界(4)轉(zhuǎn)機(jī):事情似乎有了轉(zhuǎn)機(jī),并抱有希望,感到欣慰(5)失望:但是問(wèn)題還是沒(méi)有解決或出現(xiàn)了新問(wèn)題(6)新法:突然有了一個(gè)想法(一句話說(shuō)明這個(gè)想法)(7)結(jié)局:過(guò)了一段時(shí)間;事情有了最后的轉(zhuǎn)折(8)總結(jié):點(diǎn)題,呼應(yīng)前文
第1步:消極情緒典型表達(dá)是:感到(這個(gè)可以有很多表達(dá)方式,并且可以結(jié)合在每一個(gè)環(huán)節(jié)中,可有非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞形式和介詞短語(yǔ))1. a flush f (表情緒的名詞)=a wave feeling/sense f...一陣)3. (表情緒的名詞) flded ver sb=swept ver sb?因...顫抖tremble//shiver/shake (with fear, panic excitement, rage...)
第2步:細(xì)節(jié)進(jìn)一步細(xì)節(jié)描寫典型是:流淚;心里想……流淚:1. Tears blurred ne's eyes.?????2. One's eyes gt misty.??3. One's eyes misted/dimmed with tears.淚眼模糊4. clse t tears幾乎要哭了5. tears (rll dwn ne's eyes/cheeks/face)淚水落下?心里想1.? An inner vice tld sb that?從句內(nèi)心的聲音告訴某人...???2. t neself
第3步:轉(zhuǎn)折(個(gè)人努力或借助外界)典型是:鼓起勇氣或另外一方的鼓勵(lì);毫不猶豫pluck up/take/gather/ne's curage (t d...)?毫不猶豫:1. sb culd hardly wait t d sth??2. withut a secnd thught3. withut even thinking??4. withut delay?5. withut hesitatin
第4步:事情似乎有了轉(zhuǎn)機(jī),并抱有希望,感到欣慰典型表達(dá)是:似乎:1. It was like ding sth好像 It seemed as if/ that...好像...希望:1. hping that?從句抱著一絲希望?2. see/feel a glimmer f hpe看到一絲希望3. trying hard t d sth?
第4步:轉(zhuǎn)機(jī)事情似乎有了轉(zhuǎn)機(jī),并抱有希望,感到欣慰典型表達(dá)是:欣慰:1. a sigh f relief松了一口氣?2. with relief松了一口氣3. (A wave f) relief flded thrugh/washed ver sb??4. t ne's relief, ..???使人欣慰的/放心的是
第5步:失望但問(wèn)題還是沒(méi)有解決或出現(xiàn)了新問(wèn)題Amanda felt as gray as the sky utside when she lked acrss the table at her three-year-ld sister. 典型是:不幸的是;不知道做什么不幸的是:1. But bad luck fr sb, ...但是某人真不走運(yùn)3. , but in vain??????4. , but withut success?????5. , but n use?????
第5步:失望但問(wèn)題還是沒(méi)有解決或出現(xiàn)了新問(wèn)題不知道做什么1. Sb did sth, wndering what t d next.2. Sb did sth, nt knwing what t d next.3. Sb did sth, unsure f what t d next.?4. Sb was at a lss what t d.5. Sb was in a dilemma abut whether t d r nt.感到難以決定...
第6步:新法突然有了一個(gè)想法:一句話表示想法典型:某人想到/明白...;?有了主意1. It suddenly ccurred t sb that?從句=It hit sb that?從句=It struck me that?從句?=It dawned n sb that?從句2. (idea, thught...) ccurred/came t sb.= int ne's mind= in ne's mind3. One's mind began t race
第7步:皆大歡喜過(guò)了一段時(shí)間,事情有了最后的轉(zhuǎn)折過(guò)了一段時(shí)間1. nt lng after that, afterwards, lng, didn't take lng befre?從句=It tk sme time befre從句不久, ...?????2. fr an instant/mment一瞬間?
第7步:皆大歡喜過(guò)了一段時(shí)間,事情有了最后的轉(zhuǎn)折?有了結(jié)果1. T ne's surprise(delight)/Strangely enugh, it turned ut that?從句2. But n secnd thughts, ...但是轉(zhuǎn)而一想, But what happened next was pure magic.?接下來(lái)發(fā)生的非常奇妙
第8步:最后總結(jié),點(diǎn)題典型是:直到...才意識(shí)到?倒裝句:Nt until?時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)?did sb realize/ntice that?從句2.?強(qiáng)調(diào)句:It was nly時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)?that sb realized that?從句?還記得某人的話;還在某人的腦海中1. One's wrds (eched/rang ut) in ne's ears.2. One's wrds(vice/sng) lingered/whispered in ne's mind/head.?????3. One's head was still full f...
第8步:最后總結(jié),點(diǎn)題經(jīng)歷與教訓(xùn)1. What sb taught me(sb learned frm sb)!? (valuable/useful/great/painful)2. What sb had!?(enjyable/pleasant/wnderful/unfrgettable/memrable/interesting/valuable)3. Dwn deep in ne's heart, ...在某人的內(nèi)心深處
高考真題實(shí)戰(zhàn)演練浙江卷(2018年6月)
故事梗概:父親帶兒子去西部荒野的一個(gè)朋友家體驗(yàn)農(nóng)場(chǎng)生活,見(jiàn)父親和叔叔騎馬,兒子也很想騎,于是親身上馬體驗(yàn)。臨走叔叔告誡我們不要走偏了路("Dn’t be late fr supper," Uncle Paul cried, "and keep t the track s that yu dn’t get lst!")。一路上,風(fēng)景優(yōu)美,讓人陶醉。
Paragraph 1: Suddenly a little rabbit jumped ut in frnt f my hrse.
Paragraph 2: We had n idea where we were and it was getting dark.
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