中考英語二輪復習作文熱點素材+精彩范文熱點 03 暑假 (含答案)-試卷下載-教習網

熱點03 暑假暑假無疑是今年的火爆熱點之一，它為我們的生活帶來了極大的便利。今天，選擇的2021年中考英語寫作預測話題是：暑假。【預測題目】（一）你的美國朋友John計劃暑假來中國旅游。請你根據以下圖示，用英語在QQ中給他留言，介紹并推薦你的家鄉(xiāng)福建，詞數80左右。要求：1.必須包含所有提示信息，開頭與結尾已給出，不計入總詞數;2.意思清楚，表達通順，行文連貫，書寫規(guī)范；3.請勿在文中使用真實的姓校名及提示信息以外的地名。Hi，John, I’m glad to hear that you're planning to travel around China during the summer vacation. I'd like to invite you to my hometown Fujian for a visit.Fujian lies________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I'm looking forward to meeting you!【答案】Hi，John, I'm glad to hear that you’re planning to travel around China during the summer vacation. I，d like to invite you to my hometown Fujian for a visit,Fujian lies in the southeast of China with Fuzhou as its capital city. It has a population of over 38 million. Because of the nice environment, it’s known as Refreshing Fujian, which attracts millions of tourists from home and abroad. If you come, you can enjoy fresh air, blue sky as well as beautiful mountains and clear rivers. Many famous places of interest like Mount Wuyi and Gulang Island are well worth visiting. Besides，you can taste various kinds of delicious food.I'm looking forward to meeting you!【解析】這是一篇看圖作文。根據圖示可知主要介紹福建省的位置，省會城市，人口，名勝，環(huán)境及其他的相關內容。根據內容可知主要采用一般現在時態(tài)，注意主謂一致性。在組成文章時注意語言的邏輯性，詞匯要合適豐富。這篇短文內容涵蓋了題目要求的所有要點，表達準確，意思連貫，符合邏輯。在文章的結構組織上很好地使用了一般現在時，文章脈絡清晰，自然流暢。同時，文章中高分作文比較多，如：Because of the nice environment，it's known as Refreshing Fujian．句中使用短語有："because of 因為"、"be known as 作為…而著名"．If you come，you can enjoy fresh air，blue sky as well as beautiful mountains and clear rivers．句中"If you come"為條件狀語從句，增加了文章的亮點。點睛：1.仔細審題，明確要求。審讀所給信息，弄清楚所要表達的內容要點，然后對所給的信息進行梳理，可根據內容要點適當調整寫作順序，使文章行文連貫。2.列全要點，即提綱要點化，然后寫作成文。此時我們就必須在大腦中將各種信息點補充完整，適時使用高級詞匯和復雜句式。要根據提示將要點表達清楚，使文章的內容完整、飽滿、要點齊全，注意適當增加細節(jié)。同時注意句子與句子之間，段落與段落之間要有合理的過渡銜接。3.檢查核實，確保無誤。（二）隨著新學期的到來，暑假已經結束。相信在這個剛剛過去的暑假當中，一定會有很多事情讓你印象深刻。請以" One of _____ Events in My Summer Holiday"為題，完成作文。1.把作文題目補充完整；2.介紹一件在暑假里發(fā)生的事件；3.事件給你帶來怎樣的感受。要求：1. 不少于100詞；2.短文要包括所有提示要點，可適當發(fā)揮。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】One of the Funny Events in My Summer HolidayThis summer vacation, my parents and I went to the countryside to see my grandparents. We stayed there for a week. The air there was fresh. There was a big farm in Grandpa's house. There were many sheep and pigs there. I helped grandma feed chickens every day. There was a river near our home. Grandpa often took me to go fishing. That day, We waited patiently for an hour and fell into a small fish. Grandpa said that he would go back to stew fish for me in the evening. Grandpa put the fish in the basin of the yard, and we went to the room to chat. When we came out, we found that the fish was missing. We saw the cat eating the rest of the fish tail. What a funny thing!【解析】1.題干解讀：這是一篇命題作文，需要把題目補充完整。隨著新學期的到來，暑假已經結束。相信在這個剛剛過去的暑假當中，一定會有很多事情讓你印象深刻。文中必須包括：1.把作文題目補充完整；2.介紹一件在暑假里發(fā)生的事件；3.事件給你帶來怎樣的感受。2.例文點評：本文屬于命題作文，本篇作文要點齊全，結構完整，條理清晰，應用了較多的語法結構和詞匯，熟練地使用了語句間的連接成分，使整個文章結構緊湊，很好地完成了寫作任務。這篇短文主要用第一人稱，用一般過去時態(tài)進行敘述，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系，不能脫離題目要求。3.高分亮點：短語：for a week；many sheep and pigs；go fishing；go back；the rest of。句型：we found that the fish was missing.；We saw the cat eating the rest of the fish tail.；What a funny thing! （一）假如你是七年級三班的班長，暑假前，老師要求你在班上組織召開關于如何度過暑假的主題班會。請根據提示內容，用英語寫一篇短文簡述你的計劃以及對大家的希望。70詞左右。開頭已經給出，不計入總數。學習每天讀書或者做三個小時的作業(yè)活動1. 幫助父母做家務 2.下午和朋友們打排球飲食每天早早起床，然后吃雞蛋，喝牛奶，有助于身體健康希望做好計劃，不要總是玩兒電腦游戲或者看電視 Hello, everyone. Summer holiday will come. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Hello, everyone! Summer holiday will come. I plan to spend 3 hours reading or doing homework every day. And I will help my parents do some housework. To keep fit, I will play volleyball with my friends in the afternoon. I will get up early every morning and have an egg and some milk for breakfast. It helps me start the day well. I hope we can make plans. Don’t always play computer games or watch TV during the holiday.【解析】本文敘述的是暑假的計劃，所以句子的謂語動詞用一般將來時，句子的主語用第一人稱，要注意不要遺漏要點，注意上下文的銜接。短文用了一些短語和句式，如：plan to sth計劃做某事；spend...in doing sth花費時間做某事；help sb do sth幫助某人做某事；get up起床；watch TV看電視。I hope we can make plans.這個句子用了賓語從句，增加了文章的亮點。點睛：在寫作中，首先，要根據試題里的“提示”確定一個寫作中心，再根據這個中心，列出寫作提綱，提綱一定要包含所提供的情景要點，同時要盡量使用自己熟悉的詞匯與句型。然后，用自己熟悉的詞匯與句型擴展成篇。自己不熟悉的詞匯與句型能換則換，一定不要用，以免用錯扣分。擴展的內容一定要緊扣主題。千萬不要寫那些與主題無關的內容。擴展時要注意短文的字數，要寫夠要求的字數，以避免由于字數不夠引起的扣分。也不要擴展得太多，字數達到要求既可，以免浪費時間或出現更多的錯誤而扣分。（二）暑假即將來臨,對于如何安排孩子初中畢業(yè)后的第一個假期,家長們和孩子自己有著各自的想法。根據下表提示,寫一篇英語短文,描述他們的不同看法,同時發(fā)表你自己對暑假安排的觀點。Parents' opinionsGet ready for high school. Do some housework…Kid's opinionsHave a good rest. Do some sightseeing…Your opinion…【注意】(1)表格中的觀點僅供參考,允許適當發(fā)揮;(2)開頭已給出,不計入總詞數;(3)文中不得出現真實姓名和校名等信息;(4)詞數:不少于80。How will you spend the coming summer vacation? Parents and kids have their own opinions. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】How will you spend the coming summer vacation? Parents and kids have their own opinions.Some parents think kids should get ready for high school in the sum?mer so it's important to take summer courses. They also think kids can help do housework to learn some life skills. But the kids disagree. They think it's time to take a good rest. They need to hang out with their friends to go sightseeing.In my opinion we can have a talk with our parents. All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy. We need to relax ourselves after working so hard at school. It's good for us to do some sports.【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，本文已經給出了主要寫作要點，動筆前要先認真閱讀要點，然后圍繞要點適當發(fā)揮．寫作中，應注意描述的全面性，盡量將提示的內容利用上；結合材料內容，可知本文主要是第三人稱，一般現在時態(tài)進行敘述．語言的表述應該符合語法的結構，造句應該符合英語的表達習慣．適當使用連詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關系．【點睛】這篇短文用到了一些好的句型：They also think kids can help do housework to learn some life skills. But the kids disagree. They think it's time to take a good rest. They need to hang out with their friends to go sightseeing.這些給文章增色不少。（三）暑假快到了，同學們都在議論著假期的計劃。請根據下面的提示，用英語寫一篇短文，介紹幾位同學和你自己的想法。注意：1.詞數80字左右（文章開頭已給出，不計入總詞數）；2.不得透露學校、姓名等任何個人信息，否則不予評分。Many of my classmates are discussing the summer vocation plans. Anna____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】The summer holiday is coming. Our class have had a discussion about what to do during the holiday. Some are in favor of staying at home. Anna want to do voluntary work for the old. She would like to make new friends.Peter thinks it is better to travel in order to relax himself and learn about culture there.However, he will spend more money and meet some difficulties while traveling.Kelly would like to visit his grandma in the hometown.He also wants to cook himself. In my opinion, it would be much better to stay at home for I can do what I like, such as reading books, watching TV, and helping my parents with the housework.【解析】這篇習作的層次清晰，內容飽滿，表達流暢。文中使用了非常好的短語，例如have a discussion，what to do，during the holiday，in favor of，would like to do，in order to，In my opinion，stay at home，such as等。而Peter thinks it is better to travel in order to relax himself and learn about culture there./ In my opinion, it would be much better to stay at home for I can do what I like / I will be happy if I can be a member of your club.等多種從句結構的運用更是為文章增色不少。點睛：這是一篇材料作文。根據提示內容可知用一般將來時，按照提示內容逐條翻譯成英文，同時進行適當的發(fā)揮。（四）同學們即將告別緊張而忙碌的初三，迎來兩個月的暑假。是不是有一點點小激動？《鹽城晚報》教育?？瘜⑦M行征文比賽，請您暢談暑假計劃。請根據所給提示以“My Plan for This Summer Holiday”為題，用英語寫一篇短文參加比賽。注意：1、詞數：100詞左右（文章開頭和結尾已給出, 不計入總詞數）；2、文中不能出現真實校名、姓名等信息；3、文章必須包括表格所提供的信息, 并適當發(fā)揮, 注意行文連貫, 書寫規(guī)范。My Plan for This Summer HolidayGrade Three will be over soon. The summer holiday is coming. I think many of us feel very excited about it. Here is my plan for holiday.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope that all of us will have a good time during this summer holiday.【答案】My Plan for This Summer HolidayGrade Three will be over soon. The summer holiday is coming. I think many of us feel very excited about it. Here is my plan for holiday. I will do exercise every day in order to keep healthy. I will want to travel anywhere interesting to keep relaxed. I will read a lot every morning. I will play basketball with my friends in the morning. I hope that all of us will have a good time during this summer holiday.【解析】【亮點說明】這篇習作的層次清晰，內容飽滿，表達流暢。文中使用了非常好的短語，例如be over soon，be coming，many of us，do exercise，every day，in order to，keep healthy，play basketball，in the morning，have a good time，during this summer holiday等。而I think many of us feel very excited about it./ I hope that all of us will have a good time during this summer holiday.等賓語從句的運用更是為文章增色不少。【點睛】這是一篇提綱作文。根據提示內容可知用一般將來時，按照提示要求逐條發(fā)揮，最后連接成一篇通順的短文。 They tried to make me feel at home.；With my friends’ help, I learned a lot. I really appreciate themI am quite good at English and I can always get good marks in the exam, but I know clearly that it’s far from enough especially when I have no chance to communicate with English speakers at school.And I am really concerned about the accommodation----will I live in the dormitory or with host families?I’d appreciate it if you take my application into consideration and I am looking forward to your reply.We went to Beigaofeng, which is located in the east of our city.Beigaofeng was not very far, so we went there on the school bus.In the end we got to the top of it and had lunch there.；Although we were tired, we were excited.。I think many of us feel very excited about it. I hope that all of us will have a good time during this summer holiday.In my opinion, it would be much better to stay at home for I can do what I like I will be happy if I can be a member of your club.They also think kids can help do housework to learn some life skills. But the kids disagree. They think it's time to take a good rest. They need to hang out with their friends to go sightseeing.What a funny thing! （一）假如你是Tom，去年暑假你們一家舉行了一次外出游玩活動，請根據表格內容寫一篇英語日記。要求:1、文章必須包含表格中的內容，可適當發(fā)揮。2、文中不得出現真實姓名。3、字數不少于70詞，開頭部分已給出，不計入總次數。WeathersunnyTransportationon the school bus (30 minutes)PlaceBeigaofeng (北高峰)Activitiestake photos, climb mountainsFeelingtired/excited… Last summer vacation, our family went our for a trip.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Last summer vacation, our family went out for a trip. We went to Beigaofeng, which is located in the east of our city. It was sunny that day. Beigaofeng was not very far, so we went there on the school bus. It took us 30 minutes to get there. There were many people. We began climbing the mountain and we took photos along the way. The scene is very beautiful with many trees and grass. The air is fresh, too. In the end we got to the top of it and had lunch there. We had a good time. Then we started to go down the hill. Although we were tired, we were excited.【解析】1. 題干解讀：這個題目要求寫一篇日記，記敘去年暑假和家人一起去游玩的事情。題目中利用表格的形式列出了寫作的要點，包括這次旅行的具體信息，學生們應在文章中將這些信息有序組織起來，并補充一些細節(jié)，使文章內容更加充實，然后用正確的英語表達出來。審題可知，短文應以一般過去時為主，第一人稱來敘述。2. 例文點評：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文。首先短文內容包含了表格中的所有信息，并對細節(jié)進行拓展，豐富了文章內容。文章按照事情發(fā)展過程記敘，敘述清晰、條理。其次短文中使用了正確的時態(tài)和人稱，文章使用了一般過去時和一般現在時，記敘這次經歷用了一般過去時，而事實主要用了一般現在時。語法規(guī)范，用詞準確。句式結構完整，符合英語的表達習慣，文章中使用了簡單句、并列句和狀語從句，表達流暢，意思連貫。3. 高分亮點：短語：be located in；take photos；the top of；have a good time；go down。句型：We went to Beigaofeng, which is located in the east of our city.；Beigaofeng was not very far, so we went there on the school bus.；In the end we got to the top of it and had lunch there.；Although we were tired, we were excited.。（二）某英語雜志社刊登廣告，組織中學生利用暑假時間去美國進行為期兩周的夏令營（summercamp）活動，假如你是中學生李華，想報名參加，請你根據以下要點寫一封郵件。你想參加夏令營的原因；你的英語水平；咨詢住宿（accommodation）條件及費用注意：1. 字數在100字左右；可適當增加細節(jié)，使行文連貫；開頭語已給出，不計入總次數。Dear Sir or Madam,I noticed your advertisement that you would organize a summer camp in America during the summer holiday. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Sincerely yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Sir or Madam,I noticed your advertisement that you would organize a summer camp in America during the summer holiday. I am writing to apply for admission.I am quite good at English and I can always get good marks in the exam, but I know clearly that it’s far from enough especially when I have no chance to communicate with English speakers at school.And this winter camp will be an excellent opportunity for me to talk with native speakers as well as know the western culture better. By the way, how much should I pay for the camp? And I am really concerned about the accommodation----will I live in the dormitory or with host families?I’d appreciate it if you take my application into consideration and I am looking forward to your reply.Sincerely yours, Li Hua【解析】這篇作文要求我們以李華的身份給雜志社寫信，說明自己想要參加去美國的一個夏令營，作文內容包括：想去參加夏令營的原因、你的英語水平、咨詢一下住宿條件及費用等。通過審題可知，這是一篇半開放的作文，題目中只給出了大概的提綱，里面的具體內容需要學生們自己組織語言來完成，這一點對于學生們來說是一個難點。寫作時，還需要注意語言的得體性，要有禮貌，符合題目設置的情境。還應注意英語句子表述和漢語的不同以及語法的準確性。在短文里，還應使用一些好的句型和短語，使整篇文章表達流暢、連貫。點睛：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，首先這篇短文內容完整，要點全面，層次清楚。短文主要分成三個部分，第一段是點明自己寫信的目的；接下來解釋了自己想要參加夏令營的原因和自己想要了解的一些信息；最后重申了自己的希望，盼望能收到回復。其次短文使用了正確的人稱和時態(tài)，語氣委婉得體，符合文章的情境。最后短文里使用了一些好的句型，如I am quite good at English and I can always get good marks in the exam, but I know clearly that it’s far from enough especially when I have no chance to communicate with English speakers at school.、And I am really concerned about the accommodation----will I live in the dormitory or with host families?、I’d appreciate it if you take my application into consideration and I am looking forward to your reply.等。（三）假如你是Laura，最近在英格蘭參加暑假課程，請你寫一封回信給Linda，介紹你在英格蘭的學習生活情況。內容如下：1. 介紹你目前的情況（如學習、生活情況和周末的活動等）；2. 談談你的收獲和感受。作文要求：1. 不能照抄原文；2. 不得在作文中出現學校真實姓名和學生的真實姓名;3. 語句連貫，詞數80個左右，開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數。Dear Linda,It’s nice to hear from you. I am writing to tell you about my summer course in England recently.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Please write to me and tell me more about your learning experience.Best wishes,Yours,Laura【答案】Dear Linda,It's nice to hear from you. I am writing to tell you about my summer course in England recently. I'm having a good time here. The students here are very friendly to me. They always help me. My spoken English has improved a lot.My host family is really good. They tried to make me feel at home. They made my favorite food. They took me to the movies at weekends.My biggest challenge is to learn how I can behave well at the table. I don’t know how to use knives and forks. With my friends’ help, I learned a lot. I really appreciate them.Please write to me and tell me more about your learning experience. Best wishes,Yours,Laura【解析】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇書信作文，題目要求寫一封回信給Linda，介紹你在英格蘭的學習生活情況。要求要點覆蓋全面，可適當擴充；根據題目要求可知，本文應以第一人稱和第三人稱為主，時態(tài)為一般現在時和一般過去時態(tài)。2.例文點評：文章分為三部分，第一段介紹自己的學習情況；第二段介紹自己的生活情況。第三段介紹了自己的收獲很感受。全文要點明確，結構嚴謹，使用了正確的時態(tài)人稱，語言簡潔大方，使讀者一目了然。3.高分亮點：短語：have a good time；be friendly to；spoken English；at weekends. make me feel at home.；with their help。句型：They tried to make me feel at home.；With my friends’ help, I learned a lot. I really appreciate them （四）快樂輕松的暑假就要來臨，尤其是對于即將畢業(yè)的初三學生來說，假期更顯漫長，大部分學生假期里過多地看電視、玩電腦、睡覺等，讓假期過得散漫之極，初中的最后一個暑假，也是高中前的一個休整時期，你打算怎么過得充實又有意義？請以“My summer holiday”為題，根據以下提示介紹下自己的暑假計劃。Lifestyle
get up and go to bed early, healthy food, watch TV or play computer for only an hour
Study
do some reading, learn to play the guitar
Sports
run , ride a bike or swim…
Housework
help…do …
Traveling
go to … with …
…
…
要求：1．內容應該包括以上提示，可適當發(fā)揮。2．條理清楚，語句通順, 語法正確，書寫規(guī)范。3．文中不得出現真實姓名和校名。4．80詞左右,開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數。My Summer VacationThe summer vacation is coming. What are you going to do during the vacation? I am going to …______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I am sure I am going to have an interesting and meaningful summer vacation.【答案】My Summer VacationThe summer vacation is coming. What are you going to do during the vacation? I am going to plan a healthy liftstyle. I will get up and go to bed early. I will eat healthy food. Also I will watch TV or play computer for only an hour. These are good for my health.Then I plan to read four great books to improve myself. After that I am going to play the guitar because I like it very much.As for sports , I will run , ride a bike or swim and so on . I hope to be in good health. And I'll travel to Beijing with my parents for two weeks. Also, I want to be a volunteer to serve in the volleyball games in Tai'an. Of course, I would like to help my parents do some cooking, washing and so on.I am sure I am going to have an interesting and meaningful summer vacation.【解析】試題分析：這是一篇給材料的表格作文。在寫作中注意抓住“充實又有意義”來描寫。本文所給材料比較詳細。我們要做的就是用正確的英語把這些內容表達出來。動筆前要認真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點，并適當發(fā)揮。根據材料內容可知本文主要是一般將來時態(tài)，主語是第一人稱，注意時態(tài)語時間狀語的搭配。寫作中適當使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關系。寫作亮點：這篇短文內容切題，意思連貫，表達清楚、完整。詞匯和句型句式運用恰當，多見好句型和習慣表達用語。如：As for sports , Of course, I would like to help my parents do some cooking, washing and so on. Then I plan to read four great books to improve myself.等等。學習中注意總結,牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時就可以適當引用, 讓文章更出彩。

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