熱點(diǎn)04 手機(jī) 手機(jī)無(wú)疑是今年的火爆熱點(diǎn)之一，它為我們的生活帶來(lái)了極大的便利。今天，選擇的2021年中考英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作預(yù)測(cè)話題是：手機(jī)。【預(yù)測(cè)題目】（一）近十年來(lái)，隨著通訊網(wǎng)絡(luò)的迅猛發(fā)展，手機(jī)幾乎成為了人們不可或缺的東西。毫無(wú)疑問(wèn)，手機(jī)大大改善了我們的生活，但同時(shí)也給我們的生活帶來(lái)了不好的影響。對(duì)于這個(gè)問(wèn)題，你班將于下周舉行一次英語(yǔ)主題班會(huì)來(lái)討論這個(gè)話題。請(qǐng)根據(jù)表格提示，寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)發(fā)言稿。手機(jī)使用的好處可方便隨時(shí)上網(wǎng)查閱信息；如遇突發(fā)情況，可及時(shí)求助；3. ……手機(jī)使用的弊端1. 整天沉迷于手機(jī)，很少花時(shí)間與家人朋友面對(duì)面交流溝通；2. 長(zhǎng)時(shí)間看手機(jī)對(duì)眼睛和脖子健康有害；3. ……個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)和建議自擬 要求：1. 內(nèi)容包含以上要點(diǎn)并作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。      2. 詞數(shù)：80-120（開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）。      3. 文中不能出現(xiàn)自己的姓名和所在學(xué)校的姓名。Nowadays mobile phones are becoming more and more popular among the people around the world. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Nowadays mobile phones are becoming more and more popular among the middle school students. We held a discussion about whether we can take mobile phones with us in our studying time. Different students have different opinions.Some think we can search the information online at any time and contact our family and friends with the cell-phones. Besides, we can relax ourselves by listening to music or watching movies. And we can turn to others for help when we’re in trouble. While others think differently. First, Some are addicted to cell-phones.They seldom communicate with their family. Second, the radiation from mobile phones is bad for health. Many students often play mobile games and read novels with their mobile phones, which affects their study. Third, many students can’t control themselves and play mobile phones in class.In my opinion, we can take mobile phones with us in our studying time. But we must use them in the right way.【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，給出了主要寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)，主要包括三部分的內(nèi)容。手機(jī)使用的好處，手機(jī)使用的弊端，個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)與建議。動(dòng)筆前要先認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn)，然后圍繞要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。寫(xiě)作中，應(yīng)注意描述的全面性，盡量將提示的內(nèi)容利用上；結(jié)合材料內(nèi)容，可知短文主要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)。第三人稱(chēng)或第一稱(chēng)形式。語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。適當(dāng)使用連詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。  寫(xiě)作亮點(diǎn)：短文首先結(jié)合現(xiàn)代人使用手機(jī)的現(xiàn)象，闡述了使用手機(jī)的利與弊，接著告訴人們?cè)鯓诱_地使用好手機(jī)。條理分明，層次清楚。短文包含了提綱的所有信息，語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫。（二）21世紀(jì),許多發(fā)明改變了我們的生活,智能手機(jī)( smart phone)的出現(xiàn)以及對(duì)我們生活產(chǎn)生了巨大的影響,作為一名中學(xué)生,談?wù)勀銓?duì)智能手機(jī)使用的看法。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面提示,寫(xiě)一篇短文。內(nèi)容包括：1.智能手機(jī)使用的現(xiàn)狀2.智能手機(jī)對(duì)生活的的影響;(包活優(yōu)點(diǎn)和缺點(diǎn)）3.呼吁大家合理使用智能手機(jī)要求:1不得照抄原文:不得在作文中出現(xiàn)學(xué)校的真實(shí)名稱(chēng)和學(xué)生的真實(shí)姓名2語(yǔ)句連貫,詞數(shù)80左右。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】As we all know，smart phones are becoming more and more popular and they are playing an important role in our daily life.There is no doubt that we have benefited a lot from smart phones．We can read news，watch films，take photos，chat with friends，keep in touch with our relatives，or play games to get relaxed．But every coin has two sides．Smart phones also have bad effects on people．They are very common for young people to lower down their heads to check on smart phones．They don't have face?to?face communication with others，which is not good．What's worse，more and more students are so addicted to playing games using their smart phones that their grades have gone down．As for me，I think we should make good use of smart phones，which is just a tool，not the main part of our life．【解析】這是一篇給材料作文。要求根據(jù)內(nèi)容提示寫(xiě)一篇短文，談?wù)勛约簩?duì)智能手機(jī)恒用的看法。文章時(shí)態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱(chēng)主要用第一、第三人稱(chēng)。首先認(rèn)真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點(diǎn)；根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)及每個(gè)要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá)；然后緊扣要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆寫(xiě)作。在寫(xiě)作時(shí)，注意連句成篇，保持文章的連貫性，要層次清楚，要點(diǎn)分明，中心突出。同時(shí)要注意語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，最好不要寫(xiě)太長(zhǎng)的復(fù)合句；盡量選取簡(jiǎn)單的易拼寫(xiě)的單詞，確保正確率；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，可以為文章增色添彩。最后要細(xì)心復(fù)核檢查，確保正確無(wú)誤。 （一）現(xiàn)在智能手機(jī)（smartphone）越來(lái)越普及，很多中學(xué)生都有智能手機(jī)。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面的提示，寫(xiě)一篇不少于80詞的英語(yǔ)短文，談一談你對(duì)智能手機(jī)的看法，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。提示：1、在生活中你用智能手機(jī)做什么？2、智能手機(jī)對(duì)你的生活產(chǎn)生了怎樣的影響？3、你對(duì)中學(xué)生使用智能手機(jī)有什么看法？____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】The smartphone is becoming more and more popular nowadays .I also have a smartphone .I usually use it to send text messages, play games,watch videos, listen to music and learn English .It is very useful and  convenient. In fact,the smartphone makes my life colorful. However ,every coin has two sides.Sometimes I spend too much time playing games on the smartphone and get bad results in exams. So I think we students should use our smartphones properly and don’t use them too much .We should pay more attention to our studies.【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，要求根據(jù)內(nèi)容提示，寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文，談一談你對(duì)智能手機(jī)的看法。文章時(shí)態(tài)主要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱(chēng)主要用第一、第三人稱(chēng)。首先認(rèn)真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點(diǎn)；然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)及每個(gè)要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá)；然后緊扣要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆寫(xiě)作。在寫(xiě)作時(shí)，注意連句成篇，保持文章的連貫性，要層次清楚，要點(diǎn)分明，中心突出。同時(shí)要注意語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，最好不要寫(xiě)太長(zhǎng)的復(fù)合句；盡量選取簡(jiǎn)單的易拼寫(xiě)的單詞，確保正確率；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，可以為文章增色添彩。最后要細(xì)心復(fù)核檢查，確保正確無(wú)誤。 （二）隨著智能手機(jī)的逐漸普及,  人們可以用手機(jī)做的事情越來(lái)越多。很多人喜歡玩手機(jī),  尤其喜歡用免費(fèi)WiFi上網(wǎng)。用手機(jī)上網(wǎng)的確能做很多事情,  比如聊天、查詢信息、購(gòu)物等。但是手機(jī)上網(wǎng)也存在一定的弊端和風(fēng)險(xiǎn),  比如個(gè)人信息泄露,  遭遇網(wǎng)絡(luò)攻擊或者網(wǎng)絡(luò)詐騙。請(qǐng)你結(jié)合自身經(jīng)歷，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文,  談?wù)勀銓?duì)用免費(fèi)WiFi上網(wǎng)的看法。要求：1.詞數(shù)不少于80詞；2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】It’s true that many people like getting online by using free WiFi. It’s very convenient. However, there are many dangers lying in using the free WiFi.I used to use free WiFi when I was out. But later, many useless messages came to my phone. And one day, I was told that I won a prize that was worth 5,000 yuan and they needed my bank account. Of course I didn’t believe it. But it was clear that some of my personal information had been exposed to someone.So we should learn to keep us safe online. First, we’d better not use free WiFi in public, especially in strange places. Second, we shouldn’t put too much personal information on the Internet. Finally, we should be careful when we lend our mobile phones to others.【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，在介紹免費(fèi)WiFi上網(wǎng)給人們帶來(lái)便利的同時(shí)，也存在一定的弊端和風(fēng)險(xiǎn)。并結(jié)合自身經(jīng)歷，發(fā)表對(duì)免費(fèi)WiFi上網(wǎng)的看法。本文已經(jīng)給出了主要寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆前要先認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn)，然后圍繞要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，作文主要包括三部分的內(nèi)容。寫(xiě)作中，應(yīng)注意描述的全面性，盡量將提示的內(nèi)容利用上；結(jié)合材料內(nèi)容，可知本文主要是第一人稱(chēng)。注意多種時(shí)態(tài)的交替使用；語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。適當(dāng)使用連詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。 （三）隨著互聯(lián)網(wǎng)和科技的發(fā)展，手機(jī)的功能越來(lái)越強(qiáng)大。然而，對(duì)手機(jī)的過(guò)度依賴卻成了社會(huì)的一種普遍現(xiàn)象。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文。過(guò)度依賴手機(jī)的現(xiàn)象1.熬夜玩手機(jī)；2.作業(yè)不會(huì)查手機(jī)；3.過(guò)馬路看手機(jī)；可能導(dǎo)致的危害1.睡眠不足.……；2.課上不必認(rèn)真聽(tīng)講……；3.……你的看法和建議…… 注意事項(xiàng)：1.短文須包括所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，要求語(yǔ)句通順、意思連貫；2.根據(jù)情況作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；3.90個(gè)詞左右，短文開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；4.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名、校名及地名。With the development of the Internet and technology, many people are depending too much on their mobile phones. ______________________________________________________________________________________                                                         _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________                                                                           【答案】The smart-phone has brought us great convenience. However, it has also brought us some problems. First of all, some students stay up late using the smart-phone. Some students prefer to surf the Internet to search for the answer rather than think it by themselves even when they do their homework. Some use the smart phone when they crossing the street. As we all know, the smart-phone can store a great deal of information, which makes our memory worse and worse. Besides, no one can ignore the fact that a growing number of people are occupied in chatting online and Wechat so that it will be difficult for them to communicate with others face to face in real life. In addition, some teenagers are addicted to playing Internet games, resulting in their suffering a poor sleep, which does great harm to their health. They can’t listen to teachers in class carefully. In my opinion, we should use the smart-phone correctly instead of depending on it too much in our daily life.【解析】這是一篇給材料作文。本文所給材料比較詳細(xì)，我們要做的就是用正確的英語(yǔ)把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，主語(yǔ)是第一人稱(chēng)，注意時(shí)態(tài)語(yǔ)時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)的搭配及主謂一致問(wèn)題。寫(xiě)作中正確使用比較形式，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。 （四）近來(lái)網(wǎng)絡(luò)上流行一句話：“世界上最遠(yuǎn)的距離是我在你對(duì)面，你卻在看手機(jī)。”這句話真實(shí)反映了當(dāng)前的社會(huì)現(xiàn)象，“手機(jī)控”，“低頭族”越來(lái)越多且呈年輕化趨勢(shì)。請(qǐng)你以“My opinion on using the mobile phone"為題針對(duì)這一現(xiàn)象發(fā)表個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)，并提出改進(jìn)建議。提示詞：a mobile phone freak 手機(jī)控My opinion on using the mobile phones_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】My opinion on using the mobile phonesMobile phones are widely used these days. More and more people use mobile phones to do different kinds of things, such as chatting and shopping. But they spend too much time on the mobile phones. More and more mobile phone freaks appear. Not only the adults but also the children are members of them.I don't think it's normal. Watching mobile phones too much is bad for our eyes. We have little time to exercise. It's not good for our health. We pay more attention to it, it influences our study and lives. We have less and less time to communicate with others.In my opinion, we can do something meaningful instead of playing with the mobile phones all the time. Reading, exercising, visiting friends and communicating with families are also good ways to spend your free time.I hope people can use the mobile phones correctly.【解析】試題分析：這篇短文要求對(duì)‘手機(jī)控’這一現(xiàn)象發(fā)表個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)，并提出改進(jìn)建議。結(jié)合要求可以首先描述現(xiàn)在的實(shí)際情況，然后發(fā)表個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)，最后提出改進(jìn)意見(jiàn)。短文主要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)。寫(xiě)作亮點(diǎn)：這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色.. Not only the adults but also the children are members of them.，such as，More and more，I don't think it's normal.，less and less ，In my opinion, instead of，學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ),寫(xiě)作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用, 讓文章更出彩。 In my opinion, we can take mobile phones with us in our studying time. But we must use them in the right way.As for me，I think we should make good use of smart phones，which is just a tool，not the main part of our life．In my opinion, we should use the smart-phone correctly instead of depending on it too much in our daily life.In my opinion, we can do something meaningful instead of playing with the mobile phones all the time. I hope people can use the mobile phones correctly.First, when you send messages or play the mobile phone games, you can't pay attention to your study. In addition, some students spend too much money on the phones. And the mobile phone radiation can do harm to our health as well.  So I don't think it's necessary for students to bring mobile phones at school.           （一）目前，中學(xué)生帶手機(jī)上學(xué)已成為一種普遍現(xiàn)象。在一次英語(yǔ)課上同學(xué)們就此問(wèn)題進(jìn)行了討論。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面的提示寫(xiě)一篇發(fā)言稿， 闡述自己的看法。提示：1、學(xué)生玩手機(jī)游戲或接發(fā)短信影響學(xué)習(xí)。3、上課時(shí)手機(jī)鈴聲影響老師上課。2、手機(jī)費(fèi)用給自已和父母帶來(lái)麻煩。4、手機(jī)輻射對(duì)身體有害。要求：1、內(nèi)容充實(shí),語(yǔ)義連貫；2、參考提示內(nèi)容，也可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；3、80-100詞左右，開(kāi)頭已給出，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：手機(jī)輻射mobile phone radiationHello, everyone!We all know that mobile phones have become popular with middle school students. But I think mobile phones can bring us problems.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Hello, everyone!We all know that mobile phones have become popular with middle school students. But I think mobile phones can bring us problems.First, when you send messages or play the mobile phone games, you can't pay attention to your study. Second, the rings of the phone will influence other students and teachers in class. In addition, some students spend too much money on the phones. This brings trouble to themselves and their parents. And the mobile phone radiation can do harm to our health as well.So I don't think it's necessary for students to bring mobile phones at school.【解析】題干解讀：這篇作文要求以中學(xué)生帶手機(jī)上學(xué)這一普遍現(xiàn)象，就此問(wèn)題進(jìn)行討論。并根據(jù)提示寫(xiě)一篇發(fā)言稿。這一題目設(shè)計(jì)非常貼合學(xué)生們的實(shí)際生活，題目給出了一些提示，學(xué)生們可以此為依據(jù)，聯(lián)系自己的生活實(shí)際，組織語(yǔ)言，串聯(lián)成文。審題可知，短文應(yīng)主要從三個(gè)方面進(jìn)行介紹：1.對(duì)學(xué)生的危害；2.對(duì)老師的影響；3.對(duì)家人的影響。文章應(yīng)使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)、第一、三人稱(chēng)敘述。例文點(diǎn)評(píng)：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，從實(shí)際生活出發(fā)，根據(jù)題干中給出的關(guān)鍵詞，介紹了手機(jī)在學(xué)生生活中對(duì)學(xué)生、老師及家長(zhǎng)的影響，提出了自己的看法和建議。首先文章內(nèi)容完整，結(jié)構(gòu)清晰。短文分三段：第一段總體說(shuō)中學(xué)生帶手機(jī)上學(xué)很普遍，但會(huì)帶來(lái)危害；第二段具體說(shuō)影響及危害是什么；第三段只有一句話，是對(duì)整篇文章的一個(gè)總結(jié)，提出了學(xué)生帶手機(jī)上學(xué)是沒(méi)有必要的。短文中使用了正確的人稱(chēng)和時(shí)態(tài)，語(yǔ)法規(guī)范，用詞準(zhǔn)確。句式結(jié)構(gòu)完整，符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。文章中使用了簡(jiǎn)單句、賓語(yǔ)從句、狀語(yǔ)從句等結(jié)構(gòu)，句式多變，表達(dá)流暢。高分亮點(diǎn)：短語(yǔ)：pay attention to；do harm to；play the mobile phone games；in addition；as well。句型：1. First, when you send messages or play the mobile phone games, you can't pay attention to your study. 2. In addition, some students spend too much money on the phones. 3. And the mobile phone radiation can do harm to our health as well. 4. So I don't think it's necessary for students to bring mobile phones at school. （二）隨著手機(jī)的普及，越來(lái)越多的人癡迷于手機(jī)，紛紛加入低頭族。請(qǐng)你參考下圖反映的現(xiàn)象及內(nèi)容提示，圍繞“拒為低頭族”（stop phubbing），用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇80詞左右短文。開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。             內(nèi)容提示：1.我身邊也有很多低頭族，非常喜歡玩手機(jī)。2.他們不停用手機(jī)發(fā)信息、上網(wǎng)、玩游戲或拍照。3.影響學(xué)習(xí)和生活。上課或工作時(shí)間玩手機(jī)極大浪費(fèi)時(shí)間。4.引發(fā)健康問(wèn)題，長(zhǎng)時(shí)間玩手機(jī)引發(fā)眼、背、頸痛。Nowadays, lots of people have their own mobile phones, but more and more people are crazy about their mobile phones. It is common to see people staring at their mobile phone everywhere all the time, taking no notice of the people around them. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Nowadays, lots of people have their own mobile phones, but more and more people are crazy about their mobile phones. It is common to see people staring at their mobile phone everywhere all the time, taking no notice of the people around them. There is a lot of phubbing around me. They like playing with mobile phones very much. They can’t stop sending text messages, surfing the Internet, playing mobile games and even taking photos with mobile phones.However, phubbing influences /affects not only our studies, but also our life. Phubbing, whether playing phone games or sending text message, especially in class or at work, is a big waste of time. What’s more, it can lead to health problems. For example, using a mobile phone too much can cause eyes or back and neck pain.In my opinion, it is time for us to throw away our phones and raise our heads. We should do more exercise and take part in real-life activities. When we use phones properly we can live a happy life.【解析】試題分析：考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀寫(xiě)作提示并認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱(chēng)和時(shí)態(tài)。要求介紹。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過(guò)渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。在檢查環(huán)節(jié)，考生必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫(xiě)情況，有無(wú)拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。寫(xiě)作亮點(diǎn)：這篇文章語(yǔ)言規(guī)范，敘事清楚，詞匯及時(shí)態(tài)運(yùn)用正確，能夠把提示的內(nèi)容敘述清楚，語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫是一篇不錯(cuò)的文章。 （三）根據(jù)要求完成大作文，70-80詞。(15分)智能手機(jī)(smart-phone)的使用現(xiàn)在已經(jīng)非常普遍了，尤其是在年輕當(dāng)中。它在給我們帶來(lái)方便的同時(shí)，也帶來(lái)了一些問(wèn)題：1、手機(jī)強(qiáng)大的儲(chǔ)存功能使得人們的記憶力越來(lái)越差；2、網(wǎng)絡(luò)聊天、微信使得人與人之間缺乏面對(duì)面的交流，造成人際交往困難；3、青少年沉迷于網(wǎng)絡(luò)游戲，導(dǎo)致睡眠質(zhì)量差，影響身體健康；4、學(xué)生甚至做作業(yè)也依賴智能手機(jī)，不愿自己獨(dú)立思考。5、你的觀點(diǎn)……（寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容）1.智能手機(jī)帶來(lái)的問(wèn)題；2.你的觀點(diǎn)。（寫(xiě)作要求）只能用5個(gè)句子表達(dá)全部?jī)?nèi)容。文章開(kāi)頭已給出The smart-phone has brought us great convenience. However, it has also brought us some problems.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】The smart-phone has brought us great convenience. However, it has brought us some problems. First of all, as we all know, the smart-phone can store a great deal of information, which makes our memory get worse and worse. Besides, no one can ignore the fact that a growing number of people are occupied in chatting online and WeChat so that it will be difficult for them to communicate with others face to face in real life. In addition, some teenagers are addicted to playing Internet games, resulting in their suffering a poor sleep, which does great harm to their health. Last but not least, some students prefer to surf the Internet to search for the answer rather than think it by themselves even when they do their homework. As a consequence, in my opinion, we should use the smart-phone correctly instead of depending on it too much in our daily life.【解析】試題分析：考生首先要仔細(xì)審題，要點(diǎn)是以提綱形式出現(xiàn)的，做題時(shí)包括以下幾個(gè)方面：（1）層次結(jié)構(gòu)，（2）句子的時(shí)態(tài)（3）內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)。尤其是內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)要把握準(zhǔn)確到位，要點(diǎn)需要考生拿捏準(zhǔn)確以及正確，這加大了寫(xiě)作難度。再者考生要注意盡可能使句子的表達(dá)形式多樣化，適當(dāng)?shù)氖褂靡恍└呒?jí)句式和高級(jí)詞匯，以提高書(shū)面表達(dá)的檔次和可讀性。因?yàn)橹荒苁褂?/span>5個(gè)句子表達(dá)全部的內(nèi)容。又要包括所有的要點(diǎn)，考生要多使用復(fù)雜句，一句話中多包含些信息。寫(xiě)作亮點(diǎn)：范文使用一些多變的高級(jí)句式，如定語(yǔ)從句的使用First of all, as we all know, the smart-phone can store a great deal of information, which makes our memory get worse and worse.和In addition, some teenagers are addicted to playing Internet games, resulting in their suffering a poor sleep, which does great harm to their health..等；高級(jí)詞匯和短語(yǔ)的靈活運(yùn)用，如Last but not least，As a consequence等 （四）請(qǐng)以“Mobile phone”為題寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文。要求：1. 詞數(shù)80左右，文中不能出現(xiàn)自己的姓名和班級(jí)的名稱(chēng)；2. 要求從手機(jī)的生產(chǎn)、形狀、功能等等方面闡述手機(jī)的過(guò)去與現(xiàn)在的不同；3. 書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范，卷面整潔。參考詞匯：智能手機(jī)smartphone 功能 function 形狀 shape 微信wechatMobile phone____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】With the fast development, more and more people have mobile phones. Mobile phones used to be very big, but now they get smaller and smaller. They have more functions. They are called smart phones. The smart phones bring lots of happiness to people and we can use them to do a lot of things. Such as, we can talk with each other by WeChat. No matter how far we are, we can send text messages, take photos, listen to music, read, play games and so on. It is very convenient for us to use mobile phones. But if we spend too much time on the phone, it's bad for our health. So we should use it properly.【解析】試題分析：這是一篇以“手機(jī)”為話題的作文，結(jié)合寫(xiě)作要求把各項(xiàng)有條理地表達(dá)出來(lái)。根據(jù)內(nèi)容提示可知本文主要運(yùn)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，注意人稱(chēng)和一些常見(jiàn)句式的應(yīng)用。寫(xiě)作中注意連詞、固定短語(yǔ)的交替使用，使文意連接緊密，還要注意使用豐富的語(yǔ)句，注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。寫(xiě)作亮點(diǎn)：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練。文中使用了used to, bring...to..., such as，no matter , send text messages, take photos，listen to, but, so等詞或固定搭配，使上下文意連接緊密, 過(guò)渡自然。同時(shí)，本文最大亮點(diǎn)是敘事條理、表達(dá)清晰；還使用了被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)、if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語(yǔ)從句、固定句型“It’s +形容詞+for sb. +to do sth.”等豐富的句型，為文章增色不少，這是一篇不錯(cuò)的范文。 

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