中考英語二輪復(fù)習(xí)作文熱點(diǎn)素材+精彩范文熱點(diǎn) 18 夢想 (含答案)-試卷下載-教習(xí)網(wǎng)

熱點(diǎn)6 夢想無疑是今年的火爆熱點(diǎn)之一，它為我們的生活帶來了極大的便利。今天，選擇的2021年中考英語寫作預(yù)測話題是：么夢想。【預(yù)測題目】（一）國家領(lǐng)導(dǎo)人在2019新年賀詞中說，“我們都在努力奔跑，我們都是追夢人”。夢想是我們成長的力量。以下是李華和王軍的夢想，請(qǐng)根據(jù)要點(diǎn)提示，以“We are all dream chasers”為題寫一篇英語短文，介紹你們的夢想和奮斗計(jì)劃。姓名年齡身份夢想奮斗計(jì)劃Li Hua21大學(xué)生開辦自己的公司在校努力學(xué)習(xí)；學(xué)習(xí)與他人合作Wang Jun40出租車司機(jī)最美濱州人學(xué)習(xí)英語；學(xué)習(xí)更好地與他人相處；我………………注意：詞數(shù)100左右，開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】We are all dream chasers“We are all running very hard. We are all dream chasers”, Prisident Xi said in his New Year’s Speech. (給出部分) Li Hua is a 21-year-old university student. He dreams of running his own company. He plans to study hard and he thinks it’s very important to learn how to work with other people.Wang Jun is a taxi driver. He is 40. He wants to be “the best Binzhouee”. He will learn English and more culture about Binzhou. In this way, he can help the foreigners and other tourists better. He also plans to learn how to get on better with others.As for me, I want to be an engineer in the future. I will achieve my dream by working hard.I think learning how to learn is very important. I will never stop learning.Everyone’s dream makes up to Chinese dream. Let’s hold on to it and achieve it earlier.(給出部分) （二）每一個(gè)人,每一個(gè)國家，都擁有夢想。“中國夢”是目前最熱的話題。作為中學(xué)生，你是如何理解中國夢的？你的中國夢是什么呢？為實(shí)現(xiàn)你的夢想，你將怎么做呢？假設(shè)你叫李紅（Li Hong）,請(qǐng)以“My Dream”為題，寫一篇不少于100詞的英語短文。要求： 1. 條理清楚，有表明自己觀點(diǎn)的句子。2. 書寫工整，句式規(guī)范，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)和大小寫使用正確。3. 短文中應(yīng)盡量包括提示內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，但不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、地名。4. 參考詞匯：China dream，come true ,achieve one’s dreams., give up， hold on to, make up of____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】My DreamEveryone has his dreams. As young students, we have many kinds of dreams. These dreams are our China dreams. The dreams can be very big, and they can also be small. In fact ,a big dream is made up of many small dreams.My name’s Li Hong. I also have a dream. I dream of becoming a great scientist. From now on, I have to study hard to achieve my dream. I must learn as much as I can. When I meet any difficulty, I won’t give it up , I must get it over .I’m sure it’s very important to dream,. Some dreams are more realistic, others are not. No matter what our dreams are, we should hold on to them, they can just come true one day（一）每一個(gè)人都有自己的夢想，“中國夢”是目前的最熱話題，作為中學(xué)生，你是如何理解中國夢的？你的中國夢又是什么呢？假如你叫“李紅”，請(qǐng)以“My Dream”為題寫一篇短文。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】MY DREAMEveryone has his dreams. As young students, we have many kinds of dreams. These dreams are our China dreams. The dreams can be very big, they can also be small. In fact, a big dream is made up of many small dreams.My name’s Li Hong. I also have a dream. I have to study hard to achieve my dream. I must learn as much as I can. When I meet any difficulty, I won’t give it up, I must get it over.I’m sure it’s very important to dream, Some dreams are more realistic, others are not. No matter what our dreams are, we should hold on to them, they can just come true one day. （二）為了解同學(xué)們的理想，我們?cè)趯W(xué)校的l00名學(xué)生中進(jìn)行了一次調(diào)查采訪。采訪主要是圍繞“What do you want to be when you grow up？”和“Why？”這兩個(gè)問題進(jìn)行的，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下調(diào)查數(shù)據(jù)寫—份以“the dream jobs”為主題的報(bào)告。并談?wù)勀阕约旱睦硐肱c原因。詞數(shù)80個(gè)左右。（報(bào)告開頭語已給出，不計(jì)人作文總詞數(shù)。）　　                                     The Dream Jobs

　　In order to help us form good ideals （理想）， we made a survey among 100 students in our school。 Here are the results。
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　　                                  The Dream Jobs
　　In order to know about the students‘ ideals， we made a survey among 100 students in our school last week。 Here are the results。
　　Most of the students want to be businessmen， because they want to be rich and buy what they need in the future。 More students are dreaming of being doctors， because they are proud of saving the sick people 。 And being good teachers is some students’ dream。 They think it’s a pleasure to make students learn more from them。
　　Different students have different ideals。 As for me， I want to be a policeman， and make our society much safer。（三）最近，你班就“你的理想職業(yè)”展開了一次調(diào)查。請(qǐng)根據(jù)你們小組的情況寫一篇英語短文，向英語?？陡?。　　組員             理想職業(yè)                         原因　　Mary    時(shí)裝設(shè)計(jì)師(fashion designer)        喜歡漂亮衣服，擅長繪畫　　Kate     園藝工(gardener)                  喜愛植物，想讓城市更美　　Mike    作家                             愿意與別人分享精彩故事　　Tom     廚師                             為別人煮健康美味的食物　　你？？注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右(短文的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入詞數(shù))；2.不得透露學(xué)校、姓名等任何個(gè)人信息，否則不予評(píng)分。　　Recently we did a survey in our class in order to learn about students’ ideal jobs. Here’s a report about my group members’ ideas.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Hopefully everyone can realize their dreams in the future.【答案】Recently we did a survey in our class in order to learn about students’ ideal jobs. Here’s a report about my group members’ ideas.　　Mary wants to be a fashion designer because she likes beautiful clothes and is good at drawing. Kate wants to be a gardener， she likes plants， and she wants to make the cities better. Mike would like to be a writer. He’d like to share his wonderful stories with others. Tom would like to be a cook. He’d like to cook delicious food for others. I would like to be a policeman. I want to protect the people safe.　　Hopefully everyone can realize their dreams in the future. （四）中國夢是目前較熱的話題，你們班級(jí)對(duì)夢想這個(gè)話題也進(jìn)行了一次討論。請(qǐng)你以“My dream”為題，寫一篇短文。要點(diǎn)如下：1、人人都有夢想，夢想可大可小。其實(shí)，大夢想就是由許多小的夢想構(gòu)成的。2、作為中學(xué)生，我們有各種各樣的夢想。這些夢想就是我們的中國夢。3、我們應(yīng)該努力實(shí)現(xiàn)夢想，遇到困難時(shí)也不放棄夢想。4、我的夢想是……注意：1）文章必須包括所給內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，要求語句通順，意思連貫。2）第4要點(diǎn)需用2到3句話做適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。3）詞數(shù)80左右。(給出的內(nèi)容不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))My dreamEveryone has his dreams. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】My dreamEveryone has his dreams. The dreams can be very big, they can also be small. In fact ,a big dream is made up of many small dreams. As middle school students, we have all kinds of dreams. These dreams are our China dreams. We should try our best to make our dreams come true. When we meet any difficulty, we won’t give up our dreams. （I also have a dream. I dream of becoming a great scientist. From now on, I have to study hard to achieve my dream. ）【解析】試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，本文已經(jīng)給出了主要寫作要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆前要先認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn)，然后圍繞要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。寫作中，應(yīng)注意描述的全面性，盡量將提示的內(nèi)容利用上；結(jié)合材料內(nèi)容，可知本文主要是第一人稱，一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)進(jìn)行敘述。語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。適當(dāng)使用連詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。寫作亮點(diǎn)：這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少。如: in fact實(shí)際上；be made up of由……組成；all kinds of各種；try one’s best do sth盡力做某事；give up放棄等。學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用, 讓文章更出彩。  I think it’s meaningful to be a doctor because I can help the sick people and save people's lives.After that I will work in the places where they need me most.In fact, I just want to try my best to help them.From now on, I will work hard to make my dream come true.I know it is easier to said than done.I am sure my dream will come true one day.it is a dream I have had for years, every time when a car goes by. I cannot help but think about its mechanism. I like games as much as I like science, but I never let worldly things stop me from achieving my goal, that is to be a engineer for it is the jade of my life.I will study hard every day and try to improve abilities to deal with future work.            （一）某雜志正在征集文章, 主題為《中國夢, 我的夢》。每個(gè)平凡中國人的夢想?yún)R聚成中國夢, 中國夢的實(shí)現(xiàn)在于我們努力實(shí)現(xiàn)各自的夢想。你的夢想是什么?你打算怎樣實(shí)現(xiàn)?你的夢想能為祖國的未來做出怎樣的貢獻(xiàn), 能使祖國發(fā)生怎樣的變化?請(qǐng)你以《中國夢, 我的夢》為題, 寫寫自己的夢想、計(jì)劃以及將來祖國的變化（如環(huán)境、教育、科技、生活等方面）。要求：1. 詞數(shù)80詞左右, 至少使用兩處比較級(jí)；2. 不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名或校名。China's Dream, My Dream____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】China's Dream, My DreamEveryone has his dream. My dream is to be a teacher. I will try my best to study hard .I want to let every student study happily. Now our rivers are cleaner than before. We have our own cars in almost every family and our lives are better than before. It is convenient for us to go out every day. Now we also learn in more ways, we can learn knowledge on the Internet, videos and so on. For us, the better our country is, the better our life will be. I think life in our country is getting better and better.【解析】1.題干解讀：該題目要求包含夢想是什么?打算怎樣實(shí)現(xiàn)?夢想能為祖國的未來做出怎樣的貢獻(xiàn)，能使祖國發(fā)生怎樣的變化?等，注意要有比較級(jí)的運(yùn)用，對(duì)于比較級(jí)的相關(guān)用法要熟悉。2.例文點(diǎn)評(píng)：例文通過對(duì)夢想是什么?打算怎樣實(shí)現(xiàn)?夢想能為祖國的未來做出怎樣的貢獻(xiàn)，能使祖國發(fā)生怎樣的變化等一一講述。語句通順，條理清晰，詞組，短語，句型等運(yùn)用靈活。3.高分亮點(diǎn)：詞組：try my best；want to let；study happily；go out；in our country等；句型：I will try my best to study hard. /Our rivers are cleaner than before./It is convenient for us to go out every day ./For us, the better our country is, the better our life will be. /I think life in our country is getting better and better.【點(diǎn)睛】首先認(rèn)真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點(diǎn)；然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫作要點(diǎn)及每個(gè)要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá)，例如try my best；want to let；study happily；go out；in our country等；然后緊扣要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆寫作，在寫作過程中，要注意句與句、段與段之間的過渡，必要時(shí)可適當(dāng)運(yùn)用表示轉(zhuǎn)折、因果、并列、比較等關(guān)系的連詞，使文章過渡平穩(wěn)，自然流暢，如however；最后，要仔細(xì)檢查有無單詞拼寫錯(cuò)誤、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)誤用等，還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無重復(fù)、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。（二）假如你是李華，你的美國朋友 Tim 給你發(fā)來電子郵件，詢問你有何夢想。請(qǐng)你給他回復(fù)電子郵件，主要內(nèi)容包括：1. 你的夢想是什么；2. 你為這個(gè)夢想做過什么；3. 為實(shí)現(xiàn)夢想你還需要怎樣努力。要求：1. 內(nèi)容要全面，語言表達(dá)要準(zhǔn)確，語意要通順、連貫；2. 詞數(shù)不少于 80 詞。Dear Tim,How’s it going?                                                                                                     ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua【參考范文】Dear Tim,How’s it going? As we all know, it’s important for us to have dreams. My dream is to be a doctor because a doctor can cure people and even save people’s life.I still remembered what happened when I was a middle school student. I often went to the local hospital to see what doctors were doing on weekends. Sometimes I even played games about being doctors and patients. Not only was it interesting but also was educative. However, I will try my best to be admitted by my ideal medical university. In that case, It will be easier for me to be a doctor. Only in this way can I realize my dream better.Look forward to hearing from you.【解析】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇書信作文，你的美國朋友 Tim 給你發(fā)來電子郵件，詢問你有何夢想。請(qǐng)你以李華身份給他回復(fù)電子郵件，首先要認(rèn)真審題，根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫作要點(diǎn)及每個(gè)要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá)；然后緊扣要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆寫作。2.例文點(diǎn)評(píng)：本文時(shí)態(tài)為一般過去和一般將來時(shí)，人稱主要為第一人稱。文章緊扣題目要點(diǎn)，內(nèi)容完整，表述準(zhǔn)確，語言的表述符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。3.高分亮點(diǎn)：短語：save people’s life.；a middle school student；the local hospital；on weekends.；try one’s best to do sth.。句型：In that case, It will be easier for me to be a doctor.；Only in this way can I realize my dream better. ；Look forward to hearing from you. （三）現(xiàn)在許多人在討論“中國夢”（the Chinese dream），我們的祖國如何早日夢想成真，這需要我們每個(gè)中國人的努力，因?yàn)槲覀兠總€(gè)人的小夢想是中國夢的一部分。請(qǐng)以My Dream為題，談?wù)勀愕膲粝搿?/span>提示：1、你的夢想是什么？2、你為什么有這樣的夢想？ 3、你打算怎樣實(shí)現(xiàn)你的夢想？____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】My dreamEveryone has his own dream. Some want to be doctors. Others hope to be scientists. My dream is to become a teacher.Teachers can not teach us many things at school, but they do their best to teach us how to learn. Thanks to them, we learn knowledge. And at the same time, we learn how to live a happy life. They spend most time on their students. They are great in my eyes.I hope to be a teacher because I admire teachers. I know it is not easy to make my dream come true. But I decide to study harder from now on. I am sure my dream will come true.【解析】試題分析：這是一篇材料作文。本文所給材料比較詳細(xì)但很簡單，我們要做的就是用正確的英語把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來。動(dòng)筆前要仔細(xì)考慮，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，也可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知，本文以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)為主，主語是第一人稱。寫作亮點(diǎn)：這篇文章主要是以夢想為主題。文中使用了do their best、at the same time、thanks to 、from now on等較高級(jí)的短語和詞匯，而且還使用了They spend most time on their students. it is not easy to make my dream come true等句型為文章增色不少。（四）夢想有多大，舞臺(tái)就有多大。人人都有自己的夢想，你的夢想是什么？請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)和要求用英語寫一篇短文。1.要點(diǎn)：1）你的夢想是什么；2）你為什么有這樣的夢想；3）你打算如何實(shí)現(xiàn)自己的夢想。2.要求：1）文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱；2）詞數(shù)100左右。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】My dreamEveryone has his own dream. Some want to be doctors. Others hope to be scientists. My dream is to become a teacher. Teachers can not only teach us many things at school, but they do their best to teach us how we should learn something. Thanks to our teachers, we learn knowledge. And at the same time, we learn how to live a happy life. They spend most time on their students. They are great in my eyes. I want to be a teacher when I grow up because I admire teachers. I know it is easier to said than done. But I have made a decision to study harder. I am sure my dream will come true one day.【解析】1. 題干解讀：文章是一篇命題作文。貼近學(xué)生生活，有較大的發(fā)揮空間，可以根據(jù)自己的不同的夢想做具體闡述，寫作時(shí)要注意人稱、時(shí)態(tài)的搭配及主謂一致問題，寫作時(shí)要包含題目中列出的幾個(gè)要點(diǎn)，也可以做適當(dāng)?shù)陌l(fā)揮。2. 例文點(diǎn)評(píng)：這篇短文主要分三段描述。第一段指出自己的夢想是什么，第二段說明為什么會(huì)有這樣的夢想，第三段為自己的夢想要付出的一些努力。整個(gè)文章內(nèi)容完整，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，意思連貫，符合邏輯。在文章的結(jié)構(gòu)組織上使用了簡單句和復(fù)合句，文章脈絡(luò)清晰，自然流暢。3. 高分亮點(diǎn)：短語：want to do；hope to do；not only … but also；疑問詞+to do；thanks to；grow up；spend … on；make a decision to。句型：when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語從句；I am sure+賓語從句；how引導(dǎo)的賓語從句。

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