中考英語二輪復(fù)習(xí)作文熱點(diǎn)素材+精彩范文熱點(diǎn) 21 誠(chéng)實(shí) (含答案)-試卷下載-教習(xí)網(wǎng)

熱點(diǎn)21 誠(chéng)實(shí)無疑是今年的火爆熱點(diǎn)之一，它為我們的生活帶來了極大的便利。今天，選擇的2021年中考英語寫作預(yù)測(cè)話題是：誠(chéng)實(shí)。【預(yù)測(cè)題目】（一）請(qǐng)你以“To Be an Honest Man”為題，用英語寫一篇80詞左右的短文。內(nèi)容包括：說說你對(duì)誠(chéng)實(shí)的認(rèn)識(shí)。2.談?wù)勀阕鲞^或聽過的不誠(chéng)實(shí)的事例以及帶來的危害。3.倡議同學(xué)們做個(gè)誠(chéng)實(shí)的人。提示詞：traditional virtue（傳統(tǒng)美德）, wolves（狼）, tell lies（撒謊）____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】To Be an Honest ManAs we know, honesty is one of the Chinese traditional virtues, so I think it is necessary for everyone to be an honest man.I have heard of the story “Wolves are coming”. The little boy lost all his sheep at last because he told lies to the villagers twice. From the story, I know that if someone is not honest, he or she will lost good friends.Remember that honesty is invaluable. Each of us should try to be an honest man not only in our study but also in our daily life from now on. （二）作文要求：例：1、生活中確實(shí)存在不講誠(chéng)信的現(xiàn)象…2、舉一例說明(如，有毒奶粉、考試作弊等)…3、講求誠(chéng)信的意義…____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】Honesty is a virtueAlmost all of us heard the story “ Here Comes the Wolf “ when we were little kids. What we can learn from the story is that we must be honest. However, there are lots of phenomena of dishonesty nowadays.Being dishonest does great harm not only to other people but also to yourself. Take the case of fake milk powder for example. After drinking this kind of milk, the babies had big heads while their legs and arms were still thin, which badly affected their health. To our great relief, the producers got accused and punished for all the serious consequences in the end.Having the reputation of being honest and reliable will make other people trust you, which will provide you many benefits and give you opportunities that others may not get. Being honest, you will find it easier to cooperate with others and people will be friendly to you and support you. In a sense, if life is a long journey, honesty will be the backpack that should be taken along all the way.Let’s pick up our “ backpack“ —honesty, and start the wonderful journey!（一）誠(chéng)信是金。誠(chéng)實(shí)，你的名聲將成為偉大的;那么關(guān)于誠(chéng)信的英語作文可以怎么寫呢?____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】Honesty means speaking the truth and being fair and upright in act. He who lies and cheats is dishonest.Those who gain fortunes not by hard labour but by other means is dishonest.Honesty is a good virtue. If you are honest all the time,you’ll be trusted and respected by others.A liar is always looked down upon and regarded as a black sheep by the people around. Once you lie, people will never believe you even if you speak the truth.However, in the tide of commodity economy today, it seems that more and more people believe in money at the sacrifice of honesty. To them, among such things as health, beauty, money, intelligence, honesty, reputation and talent, honesty is the only thing that can be east away. They don’t understand or pretend not to understand that honesty is the biggest fortune humans own, and that it is the prerequisite for doing everything well. I think these people are to be pitied.In short, honesty is gold. Honest, your reputation will become great;dishonest, your name will be spoiled and your personality degraded. Therefore, we should never make such an excuse as "A little dishonesty. （二）英語課上，同學(xué)們就“誠(chéng)信”這一話題展開了討論。請(qǐng)你以李華的名義，根據(jù)以下提示和要求寫一篇短文，談?wù)勆钪心闶侨绾巫龅秸\(chéng)實(shí)守信的以及這樣做的意義。提示：(1) What is your idea about being honest?( 2) What do you do in your daily life to be honest?( 3) Why do you do so?要求：(1)短文須包括所有提示內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。(2)短文中不要出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的地名、校名和人名。(3)詞數(shù)80個(gè)左右(開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))。參考詞匯：promise, virtue(美德)It's one of our traditional virtues to be honest.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】It's one of our traditional virtues to be honest. Honesty is a great virtue which is traditionally encouraged by Chinese people. It's really important for us to be honest in our life.As for me, I consider honesty to be one of the most important rules that should be followed. I never tell a lie to others, no matter what happens. If I do something wrong in life, I usually choose to tell the truth even if it brings me some trouble. Once I make a promise, I will try my best to keep it.Being honest helps us win more respect from people around. All in all, honesty makes the world more trust worthy and a better place to live in.【詳解】題干解讀：這是一篇話題作文。要求根據(jù)“誠(chéng)信”和提示的內(nèi)容完成作文。寫作時(shí)要注意語句通順，語意連貫，緊扣要點(diǎn)，注意句子之間的連接與過渡，要注意涵蓋所給提示。例文點(diǎn)評(píng)：例文采用三段式；時(shí)態(tài)選用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)；將題目要求的要點(diǎn)都很好地融入到文章當(dāng)中，表達(dá)出自己的觀點(diǎn)態(tài)度。高分亮點(diǎn)：短語：tell a lie；tell the truth；make a promise；All in all等。句型：Honesty is a great virtue which is traditionally encouraged by Chinese people. 使用了which引導(dǎo)的定語從句。I never tell a lie to others, no matter what happens.使用了no matter what引導(dǎo)的讓步狀語從句。（三）目前，許多學(xué)校都存在部分學(xué)生抄襲作業(yè)的現(xiàn)象，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)，以“Don’t Copy others’ homework”為題，談?wù)勀銓?duì)這一現(xiàn)象的看法和態(tài)度，并勸誡同學(xué)們不要抄作業(yè)。要點(diǎn)提示：1.抄作業(yè)的原因 (作業(yè)量大，懶惰，……) ；2.你對(duì)抄作業(yè)的認(rèn)識(shí)（違反校規(guī)，不誠(chéng)信，……）；3.你的態(tài)度和建議 (反對(duì)并勸誡) 。要求：1. 適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，補(bǔ)全要點(diǎn)提示；2. 不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和校名；3. 詞數(shù)：80-100詞左右。_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】Don’t Copy others’ homeworkIt is known to us all that some students copy others' homework. As student ,we often do our homework at school , but sometimes we have too many homework ,which are too difficult for us . On the other hand , some of us are lazy and don't work hard at their lessons .So when doing homework ,they sometimes copy others homework in order to complete the task of teacher to please their parents and teachers .In my opinion , it is wrong to copy others homework because it breaks the rules of school . We should be honest and try to completed the task by studying hard instead of copying others homework . what's more ,we should improve our study methods and get help from our teacher an classmates.【解析】試題分析：這是一篇話題作文。要我們就學(xué)生抄襲作業(yè)的現(xiàn)象談?wù)効捶?，?nèi)容包括學(xué)生們抄襲作業(yè)的原因，對(duì)抄作業(yè)的認(rèn)識(shí)并發(fā)表自己的看法和態(tài)度。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，注意時(shí)態(tài)語時(shí)間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。【亮點(diǎn)說明】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少。如：on the other hand“另一方面”；in orderto“為了”；try to do sth“盡力做某事”；instead of“代替”；what’s more“另外”以及復(fù)合句和不定式的使用。學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)，牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性,更富有條理。（四）“不信不立，不誠(chéng)不行”，誠(chéng)實(shí)守信是中華民族的傳統(tǒng)美德，我們?cè)谌粘Ｉ钪幸矐?yīng)該誠(chéng)實(shí)待人，言而有信。某英文網(wǎng)站正在開展以“誠(chéng)信”為主題的征文活動(dòng)。假如你是李華，請(qǐng)用英語寫一篇短文投稿，談?wù)勆钪心闶窃趺醋龅?，以及這樣做的意義。提示詞語：honest, believe, promise, happy, virtue (美德)提示問題 ? What do you do in your daily life?? Why do you do so?It’s one of our traditional virtues to be honest. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】It’s one of our traditional virtues to be honest. Honesty is a great virtue which is traditionally encouraged by Chinese people. It’s really important for us to be honest in our life.As for me, I consider honesty to be one of the most important rules that should be followed. I never tell a lie to others, no matter the difficulty. If I do something wrong in life, I usually choose to tell the truth, even if it brings me some trouble. Once I make a promise, I will try my best to keep it.Being honest helps us have more confidence in people around us. All in all, honesty makes the world more trustworthy and a better place to live in.【解析】本篇作文，考生需要從兩個(gè)方面作答，列舉日常生活中自己能夠誠(chéng)實(shí)守信做的事情、談?wù)勥@么做的意義。首先，告知誠(chéng)實(shí)守信的重要性，“Honesty is a great virtue which is traditionally encouraged by Chinese people. It’s really important for us to be honest in our life.”然后，列舉出日常生活中自己能誠(chéng)實(shí)守信做的事情，“I never tell a lie to others, no matter the difficulty. If I do something wrong in life, I usually choose to tell the truth, even if it brings me some trouble. Once I make a promise, I will try my best to keep it.”最后，談?wù)勛约哼@么做的意義，“Being honest helps us have more confidence in people around us. All in all, honesty makes the world more trustworthy and a better place to live in.”【詳解】本文是一篇話題作文，某英文網(wǎng)站正在開展以“誠(chéng)信”為主題的征文活動(dòng)。假如你是李華，請(qǐng)用英語寫一篇短文投稿，談?wù)勆钪心闶窃趺醋龅模约斑@樣做的意義。首先認(rèn)真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點(diǎn)；然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫作要點(diǎn)及每個(gè)要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá)；然后緊扣要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆寫作。寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思要連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型，以便使文章更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化。最后要細(xì)心復(fù)核檢查，確保正確無誤。 Honesty is a great virtue which is traditionally encouraged by Chinese people. It’s really important for us to be honest in our life. I never tell a lie to others, no matter the difficulty. If I do something wrong in life, I usually choose to tell the truth, even if it brings me some trouble. Once I make a promise, I will try my best to keep it. Being honest helps us have more confidence in people around us. All in all, honesty makes the world more trustworthy and a better place to live in. Honesty is gold. It means telling the truth and being fair. By doing so, our world will become more and more beautiful.we can pick up the rubbish, recycle things in our daily life, and so on. （一）民無信不立。誠(chéng)信是一個(gè)道德范疇，是公民的第二個(gè)“身份證”，是日常行為中誠(chéng)實(shí)和正式交流的信用的統(tǒng)稱。某英文網(wǎng)站正在開展以“誠(chéng)信”為主題的征文活動(dòng)。假如你是李華，請(qǐng)用英語寫一篇短文投稿，談?wù)勀阕约褐v誠(chéng)信的一次經(jīng)歷和感受，主要內(nèi)容包括：你經(jīng)歷了一件什么事情體現(xiàn)出了你的誠(chéng)信，你有何收獲及感受。提示詞語：realize, honesty, violate the principle（違背原則）, virtue（美德）, lose提示問題：1. What’s your experience about honesty?2. What can you learn from it?Honesty is gold. It means telling the truth and being fair.___________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Honesty is gold. It means telling the truth and being fair.Last year, when I took the math exam, I had difficulty working out a problem with a high score, which could influence my ranking in class. Feeling anxious, I found the paper of the student in front of me could be seen clearly. I was excited and about to copy it. However, I realized it was shameful to cheat in exams. It violated the principle of honesty, so I stopped.Although I had the thought to copy the student’s answers, I am still an upright student. Honesty, which is the traditional virtue of Chinese people, can make our life easier and more harmonious. Never lose it and be an honest person.【解析】1.題干解讀：細(xì)讀所給的文字提示，提取以下信息：（1）本文要求講述講誠(chéng)信的一次經(jīng)歷并說明感受，屬于夾敘夾說明的文體；（2）講述自身的經(jīng)歷時(shí)用一般過去時(shí)，說明感受時(shí)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)；（3）文中闡述自己的行為時(shí)用第一人稱，講述別人的行為時(shí)可用第三人稱；（4）語句通順，意思連貫，書寫工整；不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)校名和姓名，詞數(shù)不少于50。2.例文解讀：誠(chéng)信要點(diǎn)提示素材串聯(lián)開頭：開門見山，引出話題誠(chéng)信的內(nèi)涵（已給出）正文：講述經(jīng)歷1.參加考試，有一道題解答不出來（have difficulty working out a problem）2.焦急萬分，突然發(fā)現(xiàn)可以抄襲（anxious, be about to copy）3.抄襲他人的試卷是違背原則的，及時(shí)停止了此行為，意識(shí)到自己的錯(cuò)誤（violate the principle of honesty, stop）結(jié)尾：表達(dá)自己的感受1.依然是一名正直的學(xué)生（an upright student）2.誠(chéng)信是中華民族的傳統(tǒng)美德，保證了社會(huì)的和諧（traditional virtue of the Chinese people）3.高分亮點(diǎn)：短語：work out，in front of，make sth. adj.。句型：（1）Last year, when I took the math exam, I had difficulty working out a problem with a high score, which could influence my ranking in class.（have difficulty (in) doing sth.句型、非限制性定語從句）（2）However, I realized it was shameful to cheat in exams.（賓語從句、it作形式主語）（3）Although I had the thought to copy the student's answers, I am still an upright student.（Although引導(dǎo)讓步狀語從句）【點(diǎn)睛】錯(cuò)因分析：類別失分原因審題1.審題不清，偏離主題。本文要求寫關(guān)于自己誠(chéng)信的經(jīng)歷及感受，考生所寫事件不能體現(xiàn)出“誠(chéng)信”這一主題或者沒有寫出自己的收獲；2.文章體裁、時(shí)態(tài)、人稱判斷有誤。在講述審題經(jīng)歷時(shí)考生未使用一般過去時(shí)，在談?wù)撟约旱母形驎r(shí)未使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，且在講述自身經(jīng)歷時(shí)未使用第一人稱；3.所寫內(nèi)容未涵蓋所給的要點(diǎn)提示或所寫要點(diǎn)不全，提示問題必須在文章中全部體現(xiàn)。結(jié)構(gòu)1.層次不清，結(jié)構(gòu)混亂。本文要求寫出自己的經(jīng)歷及感受，并且已給出開頭句總結(jié)誠(chéng)實(shí)是金，解釋了誠(chéng)實(shí)的含義，所以這就要求考生在第二段寫出自己的經(jīng)歷來證明第一段誠(chéng)實(shí)的含義，再引出第三段中自己的感想，從而總結(jié)全文并且再次點(diǎn)明主題；2.句子之間沒有邏輯性和條理性。敘述事件沒有按事情發(fā)展的順序來寫，邏輯混亂。語法1.句子結(jié)構(gòu)不完整，缺少成分，考生在寫句子時(shí)忘記主語、謂語或賓語；2.名詞單復(fù)數(shù)混用、動(dòng)詞短語搭配錯(cuò)誤等。語法比如考生想使用have difficulty（in）doing sth.，但誤寫為have difficult（in）doing sth.。拼寫1.單詞拼寫錯(cuò)誤；2.大小寫錯(cuò)誤；拼寫3.標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)錯(cuò)誤；4.字跡潦草、卷面不整潔等。詞數(shù)詞數(shù)需要超過50詞，考生所寫作文詞數(shù)不夠詞數(shù)或超過卷面所要求的詞數(shù)太多。（二）習(xí)近平總書記在全國(guó)教育大會(huì)上提出了“立德樹人”的人才培養(yǎng)根本任務(wù)，作為初中畢業(yè)生，你有什么人生規(guī)劃？請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示，寫一篇英語演講稿。. 提示： 1. 作為中國(guó)人而自豪：過去，我國(guó)優(yōu)秀的傳統(tǒng)文化影響了世界：今天，祖國(guó)在全國(guó)人民的努力下越來越強(qiáng)大，許多科技世界領(lǐng)先；… 2. 為實(shí)現(xiàn)“中國(guó)夢(mèng)”而奮斗：學(xué)會(huì)做一個(gè)懂感恩、守規(guī)矩、善良誠(chéng)信的人；不畏難，努力學(xué)習(xí)知識(shí)、提高能力，將來成為一名… 要求：語句通順，意思連貫，可根據(jù)提示適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，不要逐句翻譯；演講中不得提及生個(gè)人身份的相關(guān)信息，如人名、校名或地名等；詞數(shù)80—100，開頭結(jié)尾已給出（不計(jì)入詞數(shù)）。Hello,everyone!_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________That's all. Thank you!【答案】Hello, everyone! As a Chinese, I am so proud of it. In the past, our great traditional culture made a difference to the world, such as sailing, communicating and so on. Nowadays, our country is becoming stronger and stronger by working hard of all Chinese. A lot of science and technology lead the world, such as high speed, Chang’e 4 and Hong Kong-Zhuhai-Macau Bridge and so on.As a teenager, we should do as follows to achieve our Chinese dream. First of all, we are supposed to thank all the people who devote themselves to making our country wonderful. What’s more, we need follow the rules. In school we should obey the school rules. Only by doing these dimple things can we become a person that the country needs. In addition, we’d better not lie and be a honest man in order that all people can trust us. Last but not least, we should try our best to work hard and when face difficulties, we never give up. I am going to be a scientists. If I am a scientist, I will do more researches and let other countries admire us.That's all. Thank you!【解析】本文屬于材料作文，談?wù)撟鎳?guó)的偉大強(qiáng)盛以及為實(shí)現(xiàn)中國(guó)夢(mèng)我們應(yīng)該做的努力。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。亮點(diǎn)說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語言表達(dá)符合英語習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如be proud of, make a difference to, such as, and so on, 比較級(jí)and比較級(jí), devote oneself to doing, in order that, try one’s best以及first of all, what’s more, in addition和last but not least等，增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫。【點(diǎn)睛】寫作時(shí)可以從以下幾個(gè)方面做起：認(rèn)真審題。審好題是寫好書面表達(dá)的關(guān)鍵。審題時(shí)要注意試題的要求，抓住要點(diǎn)，詞數(shù)符合要求。構(gòu)思提綱。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫作材料。通常書面表達(dá)給出的話題是開放的，而具體的內(nèi)容要求學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀觥⒚鞔_的關(guān)鍵。初寫短文。一切都準(zhǔn)備就緒，就可以動(dòng)筆寫作了，在寫作的過程中我們要注意句子的準(zhǔn)確性、連貫性以及簡(jiǎn)潔性。使用的詞語、短語及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。同時(shí)還要注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。修改潤(rùn)色。修改潤(rùn)色是獲取高分的必要步驟。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯(cuò)誤外，還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無重復(fù)、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，格式（三）2019年2月20日，中央宣傳部授予北京榜樣優(yōu)秀群體“時(shí)代楷模”稱號(hào)。時(shí)代楷模充分體現(xiàn)“愛國(guó)、敬業(yè)、誠(chéng)信、友善”的價(jià)值準(zhǔn)則。某網(wǎng)站正在開展以“向時(shí)代楷模學(xué)習(xí)”為主題的英語征文活動(dòng)。假如你是李華，請(qǐng)用英語寫一篇短文投稿，談?wù)勆钪心阍撛趺醋觯约斑@樣做的意義。提示詞語：pick up, rubbish, study, honest, important提示問題：● What should you do in your daily life? ● Why do you do so? As a middle student, I can do a lot to learn from our role models. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】As a middle student, I can do a lot to learn from our role models. First, we can protect the environment. For example, we can pick up the rubbish, recycle things in our daily life, and so on. Second, we shall respect people around us. Respect others to start from small things. Third, behave well. We should be kind to others, warm-hearted to everyone, and generous to our friends. By doing so, our world will become more and more beautiful.【解析】題干解讀：該題目屬于應(yīng)用文寫作，但寫作時(shí)要按照應(yīng)用文格式寫，寫作時(shí)承接短文開頭，具體寫出怎樣做以及這樣做的意義。例文點(diǎn)評(píng)：例文采用的是一段式，人稱用的是第一人稱復(fù)數(shù)形式，時(shí)態(tài)主要用的是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，描述具體怎么做時(shí)，描寫細(xì)致，條理清晰。高分亮點(diǎn)：短語：protect the environment；pick up the rubbish；behave well；be kind to sb；more and more beautiful。句型：By doing so, our world will become more and more beautiful；we can pick up the rubbish, recycle things in our daily life, and so on。（四）誠(chéng)信是中華民族的傳統(tǒng)美德，也是社會(huì)主義核心價(jià)值觀內(nèi)容之一。而你的朋友Da ming最近卻被誠(chéng)信危機(jī)所困擾。上周末，他本來和Ling ling相約一起去電影院看電影，但是他卻因?yàn)樵诩覐?fù)習(xí)考試，把這件事忘了，直到第二天才想起來。因此，Ling ling很生氣，并且不愿接受Da ming的道歉。請(qǐng)你就此事給校報(bào)投稿，以“The Importance of Promise”為題，內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：1、簡(jiǎn)述事件；2、談?wù)勛约旱目捶ǎ⒔oDa ming一些建議。注意：1、詞數(shù)80—100；2、行文連貫，邏輯合理；3、文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的校名和人名； 4、文章的開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。 The Importance of PromiseDear editor,People always emphasize（強(qiáng)調(diào)） the importance of the promise, and they hate people who break their promise. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Promise is very important. Everyone should keep it. Yours,Tony【答案】The Importance of PromiseDear editor,People always emphasize（強(qiáng)調(diào)）the importance of the promise, and they hate people who break their promise.Recently, a thing happened to my friend, and I think it was really his fault. Last weekend, my friend Daming had a date with his friend Ling ling to watch a movie. But he totally forgot it that day because of his review for his exam. So Ling ling got too angry to forgive him. In my opinion, it was really his fault. Forgetting the date not only led to Ling ling’s anger, but also made her lose trust in him. Keeping promises is always the traditional virtue of the Chinese nation. What Da ming should do now is to ask for forgiveness and promise that he will never do that again.Promise is very important. Everyone should keep it. Yours,Tony【解析】本文為一篇稿件，需要學(xué)生通過大明和玲玲之間，大明沒有信守承諾的事情，談自己的看法。信守承諾是中華民族的傳統(tǒng)美德，在寫作過程中，注意文章結(jié)構(gòu)，先寫出大明和玲玲之間的事情，然后再說自己對(duì)此的看法。首先，第一句話直接點(diǎn)明作者的觀點(diǎn)，大明是犯錯(cuò)了的。然后仔細(xì)闡述了事情發(fā)生的經(jīng)過。接下來說出自己對(duì)此事件的看法，不信守承諾會(huì)導(dǎo)致失去別人的信任，對(duì)大明的建議是除了認(rèn)錯(cuò)之外，還需要再次保證永不再犯。【點(diǎn)睛】文章結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，符合邏輯，先表明自己觀點(diǎn)，然后闡述事情，提出自己的觀點(diǎn)和建議。整篇文章在謀篇布局上，比較嚴(yán)密。除此之外，中間也使用了一些連接詞，例如but，so，because of等，使文章更加通順。

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