熱點(diǎn)20 減負(fù) 減負(fù)無(wú)疑是今年的火爆熱點(diǎn)之一，它為我們的生活帶來(lái)了極大的便利。今天，選擇的2021年中考英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作預(yù)測(cè)話題是：減負(fù)。【預(yù)測(cè)題目】（一）許多學(xué)習(xí)生活中的煩惱都會(huì)使人產(chǎn)生壓力,為了更好地發(fā)現(xiàn)及解決同學(xué)們中存在的心理壓力問(wèn)題,你們班特意開(kāi)展了一次以"Less Pressure, Better Life"為主題的英語(yǔ)演講比賽,請(qǐng)你準(zhǔn)備發(fā)言稿,談?wù)勀愕囊恍┚徑鈮毫Φ暮棉k法,與同學(xué)分享,內(nèi)容包括:(1) 同學(xué)們中普遍存在的壓力是什么;(2) 我的壓力是什么;(3) 我是如何成功緩解我的壓力的。注意:文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名和校名。詞數(shù)80~100。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Less Pressure, Better LifeHello, boys and girls!Pressure is a serious problem in today's world. Students in our class are under too much pressure. Some students can't get on well with their classmates, while others may worry about their exams.I'm always under pressure, too. My parents want me to be the top student in class. So they send me to all kinds of after-classes at weekends. Last Monday evening, I had a talk with my mother. I told her I was not lazy. I really felt tired. I needed time to relax. My mother agreed with me at last. So I think a conversation with parents is necessary to solve the problem.That's all. Thank you!（二）關(guān)于對(duì)減負(fù)看法的 80~100字左右____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Nowadays we students have too much homework ,and we are made very tired to spend so much time doing it Very often we can't go to bed until 11:00 or 12:00 pm.We don't have enough sleep.The next morning we feel tired when we go to school.So I think it is necessary for us to reduce the amount of homework we do every day.If we have less homework,we can then have more time for sports and for our hobbies.With less homework,we will be stronger and healthier.I 100 % agree if we can have much less homework to do every day.（一）減負(fù)后，你有了更多的可自由支配的時(shí)間。請(qǐng)寫(xiě)一篇短文，記述你上周末的活動(dòng)及感受。內(nèi)容需包括：　　1. 你和父母或你和同學(xué)(朋友)的一次外出活動(dòng);　　2. 你的自主學(xué)習(xí)活動(dòng);　　3. 你的感受。注意1.不可逐條翻譯;2.詞數(shù)不少于100詞。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】　　Since our learning burden was reduced, we have had much more time to enjoy ourselves and develop our own abilities.　　Last Saturday, I, together with my friends Zhang Ming and Li Hua, went to the bookstore. We had intended to buy some books to be used as extra homework. But we found that there were so many wonderful books, such as Chicken Soup for the Soul, that we just could not bear to put them down. At last after much mental struggle, we each bought 5 books, including 3 different copies of Chicken Soup for the Soul, so that we could exchange after reading.　　Of course I did not forget my academic study. After I finished my homework, I previewed what to be learned in the next week. I also went online to get some information about what I did not understand in my studies, from which I gained a lot of knowledge.　　In a nutshell, reducing the learning burden not only gives us more time to have fun but also offers a freedom to develop on our own.　　punished by being barred from streaming content for up to five years. （二）給學(xué)生“減負(fù)”成了當(dāng)前的熱門(mén)話題,結(jié)合實(shí)際情況談?wù)効捶ǎ?/span>自由發(fā)揮，寫(xiě)篇不少80字的文章。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】Since our learning burden was reduced, we have had much more time to enjoy ourselves and develop our own abilities.Last Saturday, I, together with my friends Zhang Ming and Li Hua, went to the bookstore. We had intended to buy some books to be used as extra homework. But we found that there were so many wonderful books, such as Chicken Soup for the Soul, that we just could not bear to put them down. At last after much mental struggle, we each bought 5 books, including 3 different copies of Chicken Soup for the Soul, so that we could exchange after reading.Of course I did not forget my academic study. After I finished my homework, I previewed what to be learned in the next week. I also went online to get some information about what I did not understand in my studies, from which I gained a lot of knowledge.In a nutshell, reducing the learning burden not only gives us more time to have fun but also offers a freedom to develop on our own. （三）給學(xué)生“減負(fù)”成了當(dāng)前的熱門(mén)話題,結(jié)合你自己的實(shí)際情況談?wù)効捶ǎ?/span>自由發(fā)揮，寫(xiě)篇文章。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】Middle middle school students were heavily burdened with all kinds of homework. In the past, they spent about 6.5 hours in their classroom a day. At home, it took them 5 hours to finish their homework. So they only got less than 7 hours sleep. Their free time was only three hours. As a result, their health was badly damaged.Now the things are getting better. About five hours are spent in class and the time for homework had been reduced two hours. So that they have eight hours＇sleep and also two more hours to do whatever they like. （四）給學(xué)生“減負(fù)”成了當(dāng)前的熱門(mén)話題。那么，你認(rèn)為學(xué)生的負(fù)擔(dān)重不重？重在哪里？過(guò)重的學(xué)業(yè)負(fù)擔(dān)會(huì)造成什么樣的后果？請(qǐng)你就這些問(wèn)題，結(jié)合你自己的實(shí)際情況談?wù)効捶?，并將你的看法?xiě)成一篇因果說(shuō)明文。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】We are at senior high school. Every day, we have many exercises that we cant complete and many books that we cant finish reading. The teachers continually repeat the words that we are already able to recite.Teachers and students all work hard in order to improve the percentages of those entering college. But the burden of work in class is so heavy that we have little time to do sports, which has left many of us in poor health. What’s worse, many students have lost interest in their studies altogether.It is known to all that good health is as important as knowledge. Virtues such as bravery, discipline and love of our motherland cant be learned only in classes, but should also be learned through social practice. We should be given the time and opportunity to be exposed to society so we can learn what cant be taught from books.We are young and we have young hearts. We love study as well as amusements. We hope that the number of exercises class will be reduced so we can take part in more after-class activities. In this way we will be able to learn much more and be more effective in our studies.本文第一段和第二段前半部分是擺學(xué)校課業(yè)負(fù)擔(dān)重的事實(shí)，談的是原因。從第二段后半部分開(kāi)始分析負(fù)擔(dān)過(guò)重帶來(lái)的結(jié)果。作者分析了四種結(jié)果，即負(fù)擔(dān)過(guò)重會(huì)影響身體健康，會(huì)使學(xué)生失去學(xué)習(xí)興趣，會(huì)使學(xué)生學(xué)不到社會(huì)公德，還會(huì)使學(xué)生失去娛樂(lè)活動(dòng)的機(jī)會(huì)。所以，本文是一因多果說(shuō)明文。So I think this activity benefits not only our health but also our study.In my opinion, we can do some sports to make us stronger and healthier. What's more, we can take an active part in some social activities as volunteers to help those in need.In a word, let's make full use of our spare time and promote our literacy.In this way we will be able to learn much more and be more effective in our studies.In a nutshell, reducing the learning burden not only gives us more time to have fun but also offers a freedom to develop on our own.Middle middle school students were heavily burdened with all kinds of homework. We are young and we have young hearts. We love study as well as amusements. We hope that the number of exercises class will be reduced so we can take part in more after-class activities. How nice to hear from you again!You want to know what is going on in schools in China? 13.In order to improve students’ heath, our country carried out 30 rules to reduce students’ pressure.14. If we follow them, we can improve our study as well as health.15. Recently I’ve made a survey about the “Reducing Burden” activity being carried in our school．          （一）你校為推進(jìn)素質(zhì)教育，進(jìn)行了教學(xué)“減負(fù)”活動(dòng)。假如你是學(xué)校學(xué)生會(huì)的學(xué)習(xí)部長(zhǎng)，對(duì)“減負(fù)”前后的情況進(jìn)行了調(diào)查，調(diào)查情況如下圖，請(qǐng)根據(jù)此圖寫(xiě)一篇文章發(fā)表在校報(bào)上。

注意：1.短文必須包括圖表內(nèi)容；
      2.可適當(dāng)增加評(píng)注性語(yǔ)言；
      3.詞數(shù)100左右；
      4.文章的第一段已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
     Recently I’ve made a survey about the “Reducing Burden” activity being carried in our school．_________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】Recently I have made a survey about the “Reducing Burden” activity being carried in our school.We middle school students used to be heavily burdened with all kinds of homework. We spent more than 6 hours in the classroom. At home, we still had to spend over 3 hours on our homework. So we had less than 7 hours to sleep. Besides, we had only about 3 hours‘ free time. As a result, our health was hardly damaged.Now things are getting better, thanks to the activity. We can only spend about 5 hours in the classroom and hours for homework are shortened to about two hours so that we have two more hours to sleep and also two more hours for free time.So I think this activity benefits not only our health but also our study. （二）寫(xiě)作要求：1.作文中可以使用親身經(jīng)歷或虛構(gòu)的故事，也可以參照閱讀材料的內(nèi)容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子。2.作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱。下面這幅照片展現(xiàn)了女兒為回家媽媽拿包的情景。請(qǐng)根據(jù)你對(duì)這幅照片的理解用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文。你的短文應(yīng)包含以下內(nèi)容：1.描述照片內(nèi)容，如情景、人物、動(dòng)作，等等；2.結(jié)合自身實(shí)際，談?wù)勀愕母邢耄?/span>3.舉例說(shuō)明你能為家長(zhǎng)減負(fù)做些什么。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】The burden of students has been a hot topic for years, but the load of parents has received little attention, especially from their own children.The picture shows us a touching moment when a little girl comes to greet her working mom. Realizing her mom must be very tired after a day's work, the girl helps to remove the bag from her shoulder. In response, the mom kneels down to show how happy and thankful she feels.All this reminds me of my mother who has been doing whatever she could to let me have the best. But, totally engaged in my own study, I seldom pay my attention to what mother needs and feels, and always think studying well is the only thing I could do in return. Now I know I can do my bit to help with the everyday washing, bedroom cleaning, or at least prepare breakfast myself, so as to share mother's daily burden. The picture convinces me it is even more important to be a good daughter than a "good" student. （三）最近,為了給學(xué)生減負(fù),部分地區(qū)出臺(tái)了一系列政策限制學(xué)生上各種各樣的補(bǔ)習(xí)班。對(duì)此,家長(zhǎng)和學(xué)生持有不同的觀點(diǎn)。請(qǐng)你以“Should parents stop pushing their children from class to class?”為題,參照表內(nèi)提供的信息,寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文。Parents  ideasYour ideas1.strengthen(鞏固) what is learned in class1.…2. be good for their future2.…3. learn a lot3. … 要求:1.所寫(xiě)內(nèi)容必須包括表格中家長(zhǎng)的觀點(diǎn)和你的至少三個(gè)觀點(diǎn)。      詞數(shù):80詞左右。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】Should parents stop pushing their children from class to class?Nowadays, some parents stop pushing their children from class to class, but some don’t. Because they want to prepare better lives for their kids. And they believe it can help them learn more, which is good for their future. After all, know-ledge is life.However, I don t think so. On the one hand, we students need organized activities. On the other hand, we are under too much pressure, so we need time and freedom to relax ourselves. Also, we need time to do things by ourselves.So, I think parents should give us a bit more time to ourselves.【解析】1.題干解讀：該題目要求寫(xiě)要不要給孩子上各種補(bǔ)習(xí)班，為什么家長(zhǎng)要給孩子上補(bǔ)習(xí)班，最后給出自己的觀點(diǎn)。2.例文點(diǎn)評(píng)：例文通過(guò)對(duì)要不要給孩子上各種補(bǔ)習(xí)班，為什么家長(zhǎng)要給孩子上補(bǔ)習(xí)班，最后給出自己的觀點(diǎn)等一一講述。語(yǔ)句通順，條理清晰，詞組，短語(yǔ)，句型等運(yùn)用靈活。3.高分亮點(diǎn)：stop doing，prepare ……for，it做形式賓語(yǔ)；非限制性定語(yǔ)從句；after all，諺語(yǔ)know-ledge is life，On the one hand……On the other hand，by ourselves等。 （四）為了促進(jìn)中小學(xué)生健康成長(zhǎng)，近日教育部印發(fā)了《中小學(xué)生減負(fù)措施》（減負(fù)三十條）。假如你是李華，請(qǐng)你站在中學(xué)生的立場(chǎng)從下面幾個(gè)方面向你的英國(guó)筆友Mike簡(jiǎn)單介紹其中的內(nèi)容，并談?wù)勀阕约旱目捶ā?/span>1.作業(yè)方面：初中家庭作業(yè)不超過(guò)90分鐘；2.電子產(chǎn)品方面：嚴(yán)禁學(xué)生將手機(jī)帶入課堂；3.習(xí)慣方面：上課專心聽(tīng)講，課后主動(dòng)復(fù)習(xí)；4.你的看法……注意：1.詞數(shù)80~100；2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3.信中不能出現(xiàn)與本人相關(guān)的信息；4.開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Dear Mike,In order to improve students’ health, our country carried out 30 rules to reduce （減少） students' pressure （壓力）. Let me tell you something about them.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Do you have such rules? Hope for your reply.Yours,Li Hua【參考范文】Dear Mike,In order to improve students’ heath, our country carried out 30 rules to reduce（減少）students’ pressure（壓力）. Let me tell you something about them.Generally, it falls into four parts. And I will introduce to you three of them which are close to us students. Firstly, homework for middle school students should take no more than 90 minutes so that we will have more time to relax.Secondly, mobile phones shouldn’t be allowed to appear in class because we are easily absent-minded from the lesson.Thirdly, students are expected to listen carefully and go over lessons in time so that they can master the right method of learning.In my opinion, these rules are helpful to us students. If we follow them, we can improve our study as well as health.Do you have such rules? Hope for your reply.Yours,Li Hua【解析】題目解讀：本文是一篇書(shū)信作文，作文內(nèi)容是向筆友介紹《中小學(xué)生減負(fù)措施》，提示給出三個(gè)方面：作業(yè)方面、電子產(chǎn)品方面和習(xí)慣方面。除介紹這三個(gè)方面外，還需要發(fā)表自己的看法。字?jǐn)?shù)控制在80-100字。根據(jù)提示可知，文章主要人稱是第三人稱，時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，題材為說(shuō)明文。例文點(diǎn)評(píng)：本例文采取多段式的寫(xiě)法，第一段總領(lǐng)全文，以“Let me tell you something about them.”開(kāi)頭，引出下文對(duì)措施的介紹，第二、三和四段采用分條分段的方式，分別從作業(yè)方面、電子產(chǎn)品方面和習(xí)慣方面三個(gè)方面介紹，第五段以“In my opinion…”開(kāi)頭引出自己的想法。這樣分段條理清晰，表述明確。上下文的連接過(guò)渡詞使用得當(dāng)，文中多次應(yīng)用被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)、從句和一般將來(lái)時(shí)，為文章增色。高分亮點(diǎn)：短語(yǔ)：be expected to；go over；in time；so that；in my opinion；be helpful to；as well as。句型：And I will introduce to you three of them which are close to us students.；Secondly, mobile phones shouldn’t be allowed to appear in class because we are easily absent-minded from the lesson.；If we follow them, we can improve our study as well as health. 

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