中考英語二輪復(fù)習(xí)作文熱點(diǎn)素材+精彩范文熱點(diǎn) 05 微信 (含答案)-試卷下載-教習(xí)網(wǎng)

熱點(diǎn)05 微信微信無疑是今年的火爆熱點(diǎn)之一，它為我們的生活帶來了極大的便利。今天，選擇的2021年中考英語寫作預(yù)測話題是：微信。【預(yù)測題目】（一）今年春節(jié)，很多人加入了搶紅包的游戲，但也有人表示擔(dān)憂。學(xué)校英語校刊《英語天地》對此進(jìn)行調(diào)查，假如你是一名?？∮浾?，請你就此次調(diào)查的結(jié)果進(jìn)行總結(jié)，并談?wù)勀阕约旱挠^點(diǎn)。 Grabbing red packets on lineAgreement(75%)1.a popular form of entertainment, bring more fun 2.bring people closer, make more friendsDisagreement(25%)spend too much time.not have enough communication with family members, feel lonely Your opinion1.2. 提示詞： We chat 微信 Grabbing red packets on line搶紅包注意：（1）詞數(shù)80左右，開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；（2）文章應(yīng)包括題中所提的所有要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，以使行文連貫；（3）文中請勿提及你的真實(shí)姓名、校名和其他真實(shí)信息;As we all know, grabbing red packets on line won popularity with the people during the Spring Festival in 2016. From then on, more and more people have been crazy about it. So we did the survey on the activity of “Grabbing red packets” among students.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】As we all know, grabbing red packets on line won popularity with the people during the Spring Festival in 2016. From then on, more and more people have been crazy about it. So we did the survey on the activity of “Grabbing red packets” among students.About 75% of them think it is a popular form of entertainment, bring them more fun. It can bring people closer , they can make more friends .Grabbing red packets has been part of people’s lives. About 25% of them say some people spend too much time grabbing red packets. They don’t have enough communication with their family members .They may feel a little lonelyPersonally, there's no doubt that not only does it bring people happiness, but also send blessings to people in a special form. Also, it's obvious that it is more convenient. However, as a saying goes, each coin has two sides. It is not an exception, it also has some bad effects. If people can't grab the red packets, people may feel sad or ill-tempered ,even break their cell phones. What's worse, it may lead to the crime.【解析】這篇作文要求我們對學(xué)校進(jìn)行的關(guān)于春節(jié)搶紅包這件事的調(diào)查結(jié)果進(jìn)行總結(jié)，并談?wù)勛约簩@件事情的看法。題目中給出了一個(gè)表格，里面包括了支持搶紅包這個(gè)游戲的人們的觀點(diǎn)以及反對這個(gè)游戲的人們的觀點(diǎn)和理由，只給了一些短語，我們需要組織語言，將這些要點(diǎn)用正確的英語表達(dá)出來，并使文章內(nèi)容更加豐富、完整。最后還要加上自己的看法。因此文章的內(nèi)容應(yīng)主要包括三部分：支持的人們的理由；反對者們的理由；自己的看法，可以分成兩段或者三段來敘述，這樣可以使文章結(jié)構(gòu)清楚，有層次。寫作時(shí)，應(yīng)注意英語表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語的不同，不要逐詞翻譯，應(yīng)從句子整體結(jié)構(gòu)出發(fā)，以簡單句為主，穿插并列句和復(fù)合句。為提升文章檔次，還應(yīng)注意使用高級句型和較復(fù)雜的句式。語句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使文章整體意思連貫、表達(dá)流暢。點(diǎn)睛：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文。首先短文內(nèi)容完整、結(jié)構(gòu)清晰。文章分為三段，第一段是題目中已經(jīng)給出的，因此了文章的話題。第二段中作者表述了支持和反對玩這個(gè)游戲的人們各自的理由；第三段中作者發(fā)表了自己的看法。其次短文中語言得體，句式準(zhǔn)確，符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。文章以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)為主，特別注意了謂語動(dòng)詞的正確形式，語法規(guī)范、準(zhǔn)確。短文中使用了較豐富的句型，如About 75% of them think it is a popular form of entertainment, bring them more fun.、Grabbing red packets has been part of people’s lives、About 25% of them say some people spend too much time grabbing red packets、Personally, there's no doubt that not only does it bring people happiness, but also send blessings to people in a special form.、If people can't grab the red packets, people may feel sad or ill-tempered ,even break their cell phones.等等。文章中也出現(xiàn)了一些語法上的小錯(cuò)誤，總的來說，不影響整篇文章的質(zhì)量。（二）針對運(yùn)用微信投票越來越流行的現(xiàn)象，英語俱樂部就“是否愿意為別人投票選舉”這一話題展開來討論。請你根據(jù)提示，以“ I ____ (am/am not) willing to vote for others” 為題寫一篇短文，向?？陡?，選擇你認(rèn)同的一種觀點(diǎn)，并闡述自己的理由。Be willing to vote for othersBe not willing to vote for others投票方式有趣，方便，免費(fèi)可以用朋友圈（circle of friends）支持自己喜歡的人……投票方式不公平浪費(fèi)時(shí)間，無聊…… 注意：1. 根據(jù)你認(rèn)同的方式，將標(biāo)題補(bǔ)充完整，短文包括表格中所提供的相應(yīng)內(nèi)容，省略號內(nèi)容必須補(bǔ)充完整2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)人名和校名，詞數(shù)：80-1003. 短文首句僅供參考，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。I _____ willing to vote for othersWould you like to vote for the ones you like on WeChat? Different people have different ideas._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】I am willing to vote for othersWould you like to vote for the ones you like on We chat? Different people have different ideas. As for me, I am willing to vote for others on we chat.Voting for others on We chat is not only interesting but also free. It is convenient to do that as long as we have a mobile phone. Besides, if we use We chat, we can use the circle of friends to support people we love. What’s more, it’s a good way to let more people to get to know the people we love.In a word, I think it’s a good idea to vote for others on We chat and I would like to do that.【詳解】本篇是一篇議論文，首先要要題目補(bǔ)充完整，說明自己的觀點(diǎn)是贊成還是反對。文章分為三步走：第一段擺出自己的觀點(diǎn)；接下來第二段陳述自己的觀點(diǎn)，即說明自己的理由；最后一段對自己的觀點(diǎn)進(jìn)行總結(jié)。本篇文章觀點(diǎn)明確，在陳述自己觀點(diǎn)時(shí)，用到Besides…What’s more….等使文章很條理性和連貫性。最后In a word, I think….對自己觀點(diǎn)進(jìn)行最后總結(jié)。非常好的一篇文章。（一）上周，你們班舉行了一場“初中生使用微信的利與弊”的主題班會(huì)，同學(xué)們各抒己見。班長針對同學(xué)們的不同意見，做了以下記錄。請你根據(jù)表格的內(nèi)容，以“The opinion of using WeChat”為題寫一篇英語短文, 說明使用微信的利弊并談?wù)勛约旱目捶?。不少?/span>80字。利：1. 提供交流的平臺。1.過渡沉溺、影響學(xué)習(xí)。2. 認(rèn)識更多的朋友。2.交友不憤、上當(dāng)受騙3. 學(xué)習(xí)更多的東西。3.長期玩耍、影響視力。弊：1. 過渡沉溺、影響學(xué)習(xí)。2. 交友不憤、上當(dāng)受騙3. 長期玩耍、影響視力。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Last week, we had a discussion about using WeChat. Here are the results.Some students think WeChat(微信) is a very useful tool. It can provide a platform (平臺)to communicate with their friends. Besides, they can make more friends and learn more knowledge by WeChat.However, some students think WeChat will affect (影響) their study if they spend too much time using it. And they may be tricked (欺騙) by strange net friends. Last but not least, it will also affect their eyesight to use WeChat for a long time .In my opinion, we shouldn’t use WeChat for too long and make sure that don’t use it when we are studying. In addition(另外), we shouldn’t add strangers casually (隨便)or meet net friends without our parents’ permission. （二）如今微信已成為我們生活中的一部分，尤其受到年輕人的歡迎。　　其優(yōu)點(diǎn)如下：　　1.可以非常迅速地與朋友進(jìn)行文字、表情等交流;　　2.可以與朋友分享圖片、音樂、視頻等;　　3.不僅能發(fā)送語音訊息，而且可以直接通話;　　4.使用時(shí)不受時(shí)間地點(diǎn)限制;　　5.使用時(shí)免費(fèi)。　　詞數(shù)為80左右，開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】　　Nowadays, WeChat has been a part of our life. It is becoming more and more popular with young people because of the following advantages. First, we can communicate with our friends by sending words and expressions very quickly. Second, we can share pictures, music and videos with them. Third, we can not only send voice messages to them but also speak to them directly. Besides, we can use it in any time. Last but not least, we use it for free and can save money. In my view, although WeChat has improved our lives, it should be used properly. We shouldn’t lose ourselves in it. （三）最近，老師經(jīng)常把同學(xué)們的作業(yè)完成情況、考試成績等反饋在家長微信群，同學(xué)們就此事展開了討論。請你根據(jù)下面表格中的提示選擇一個(gè)觀點(diǎn)，寫一篇短文，向校英語報(bào)投稿，闡述你的觀點(diǎn)。贊成反對◎同學(xué)間可互相了解；◎家長及時(shí)知道學(xué)習(xí)情況；◎可及時(shí)改變學(xué)習(xí)方法。◎不尊重學(xué)生；◎不利于師生關(guān)系；◎受家長更多的懲罰。要求：（1）短文要求包括所有提示內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；（2）短文要求簡潔，正確流暢；（3）詞數(shù)：80—100，短文首句僅供選擇使用，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：微信群WeChat group；尊重respect短文首句：My classmates have had a heated discussion about that the teachers always share their homework and marks in WeChat group.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】My classmates have had a heated discussion about that the teachers always share their homework and marks in WeChat group. I think it’s necessary. First of all, we can know more about our classmates by comparing with each other. Besides, our parents may know how we study at school. If we don’t behave well, they can communicate with us in time. Last but not least, if we can’t get good grades, I think we’d better make an effort to change the way we study. It’s helpful. All in all, it’s convenient for our teachers to do so, and it’s an effective way for our parents to know more about us.【解析】1. 題干解讀：該題目屬于議論文寫作。在寫作時(shí)應(yīng)注意要承接開頭，然后提出自己的觀點(diǎn)。作者持贊成的觀點(diǎn)。短文包括提示的三個(gè)內(nèi)容：第一部分同學(xué)間可互相了解；第二部分家長及時(shí)知道學(xué)習(xí)情況；第三部分可及時(shí)改變學(xué)習(xí)方法。2. 例文點(diǎn)評：例文采用一段式；用第一人稱討論內(nèi)容；時(shí)態(tài)采用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，觀點(diǎn)明確，條例清晰。3. 高分亮點(diǎn)；短語：in WeChat group；First of all；know…about..；each other；besides；all in all；communicate with；get good grades。句型：It’s+adj.+for sb to do sth. （四）最近，你們班級新建了一個(gè)“英語學(xué)習(xí)”的微信群。請你根據(jù)下面的內(nèi)容提示，為校園廣播站寫一篇廣播稿，介紹這個(gè)微信群，并歡迎同學(xué)們積極參與。注意：1. 詞數(shù)不少于100字； 2. 請勿提及學(xué)校和個(gè)人真實(shí)信息； 3. 可適當(dāng)加入細(xì)節(jié)，以使內(nèi)容充實(shí)、行文連貫； 4. 開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：give a like 點(diǎn)贊； sharing friends 分享朋友圈；forward 轉(zhuǎn)發(fā)Dear fellow students, Good news for you! A WeChat group called “Learning English”_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________That’s all. Thank you. Li Hua 【參考范文】Dear fellow students,Good news for you! A WeChat group called “Learning English” will be opened in our school. It aims to help us students to communicate better and improve our English level. We can do a lot of things in this group. First of all, we can share efficient learning experience here to promote our English study. Secondly, if you have any questions or problems, you are welcome to post it here. And possibly, you will find proper solutions to them with the help of our schoolmates. In addition, attracted by interesting topics, we are free to take part in the weekly discussion. How to join it? Please open your WeChat and follow the public “Learn English”. And every one of us is encouraged to join it. I am sure the group will be of great help to our English study. That’s all. Thank you! Li Hua【解析】這是一篇材料作文，根據(jù)圖表提示的信息向同學(xué)介紹新建的“英語學(xué)習(xí)”微信群。作文要從以下幾個(gè)方面去完成，建立這個(gè)群的目的，在群內(nèi)可以參與哪些活動(dòng)，入群的方法，可適當(dāng)加入細(xì)節(jié)，以使內(nèi)容充實(shí)。注意把提示的要點(diǎn)寫全面，注意文章文體、人稱和時(shí)態(tài)。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。要求語句通順、意思連貫。文章結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊、行文連貫、表達(dá)清楚。 It is easy to use WeChat to communicate with our friends.I will share wish you about my unhappy experience between my friends and me. If we don’t behave well, they can communicate with us in time. All in all, it’s convenient for our teachers to do so, and it’s an effective way for our parents to know more about us.First of all, we can know more about our classmates by comparing with each other.I'm sorry to hear that you meet many challenges in the boarding school.Besides, you can also play sports with your classmates. I will send blessing words and red envelopes to my relatives and friends through Wechat. You say you miss your parents very much. I will go to school by myself and not let my parents pick me up.I'm sorry to hear that you meet many challenges in the boarding school. You say you miss your parents very much. I will go to school by myself and not let my parents pick me up.I will send blessing words and red envelopes to my relatives and friends through Wechat.Sometimes parents are worried about their children’s friendship and studies. （一）李文的父母都去外地打工了，把李文送去了寄宿學(xué)校。但是到了寄宿學(xué)校之后，李文面臨著很多挑戰(zhàn)。假如你是王明，請根據(jù)下列提示，給李文寫一封信，提出合理的建議，幫他迅速適應(yīng)新的生活。挑戰(zhàn)建議沒有朋友，感覺孤單積極參加社團(tuán)，會(huì)交到新朋友作業(yè)比以前多抓緊時(shí)間寫作業(yè)，不會(huì)的向老師、同學(xué)求助想念父母周末用微信和父母聊天，和同學(xué)一起做運(yùn)動(dòng) ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】Dear Li Wen，I'm sorry to hear that you meet many challenges in the boarding school. Since you always feel lonely without friends，you'd better join a club to make more friends. You are good at playing basketball，so it's a good choice to join the basketball club. Maybe you used to have a little homework，but now you have more time to do homework at school. And if you have any problems, you can ask your teachers and classmates for help. You say you miss your parents very much. I strongly believe it. Why not chat with your parents on WeChat on weekends? Besides, you can also play sports with your classmates. I hope you can get used to the new life in your boarding school. Yours, Wang Ming【解析】題干解讀：本文屬于材料作文，要求學(xué)生以王明的身份給李文寫一封信，注意要用信件的格式。信的內(nèi)容包括到寄宿學(xué)校后，李文會(huì)面臨的三個(gè)挑戰(zhàn)以及相應(yīng)的建議。例文點(diǎn)評：例文主要以第二人稱進(jìn)行描述，符合信件的形式，顯得真實(shí)關(guān)切；時(shí)態(tài)采用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主。例文嚴(yán)格按照信件格式，開頭結(jié)尾也有適當(dāng)?shù)膯柡蛘Z等；內(nèi)容方面把材料要求的幾點(diǎn)挑戰(zhàn)與建議都寫清楚了，行文層次分明、邏輯嚴(yán)密、內(nèi)容豐富。高分亮點(diǎn)：短語：meet challenges in；had better do；be good at；used to do；ask sb. for help；get used to。句型：that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句；since引導(dǎo)的原因狀語從句；it’s + n. + to do sth.；if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句；why not do sth。（二）再過幾天，中國最重要的節(jié)日——春節(jié)就要到了，請以“My small targets of this Spring Festival” 為題，根據(jù)表中所給中文提示寫一篇 100 詞左右介紹你這個(gè)春節(jié)小目標(biāo)。春節(jié)前1.幫助父母做事，包括大掃除、貼春聯(lián)、做饅頭、包餃子；2.準(zhǔn)備好新衣服和小禮物；3.在除夕夜，與家人吃一頓豐盛的晚餐后，觀看春節(jié)聯(lián)歡晚會(huì)，等待新年的到來；春節(jié)后1.通過微信，與親戚、朋友互發(fā)祝福話語、紅包；2. ……（新的一年學(xué)習(xí)目標(biāo)）3.……（新的一年生活目標(biāo)）要求：要點(diǎn)全面，補(bǔ)充得當(dāng)，行文流暢；開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名等信息。詞匯：貼春聯(lián) put up couplets；親戚 relatives；祝福話語 blessings；微信 Wechat。My small targets of this Spring FestivalThe new Spring Festival is coming in a few days. Now I am setting some small targets of the coming new year.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】My small targets of this Spring FestivalThe new Spring Festival is coming in a few days. Now I am setting some small targets of the coming new year. Before the Spring Festival, I plan to do three things. The first, I will help my parents do things, including cleaning, pasting Spring Festival couplets, making steamed bread and making dumplings. The second, I will prepare new clothes and small gifts. The third, on New Year's Eve, after having a big dinner with my family, I am going to watch the Spring Festival Gala and wait for the arrival of the New Year. On the day of Spring Festival, I will send blessing words and red envelopes to my relatives and friends through Wechat. After the Spring Festival,I will study hard to achieve good results. I will go to school by myself and not let my parents pick me up.【解析】這是一篇材料作文。以“My small targets of this Spring Festival”為題，根據(jù)表中所給中文提示寫一篇 100 詞左右介紹你這個(gè)春節(jié)小目標(biāo)。本文主要書寫新年打算，可知主要時(shí)態(tài)是一般將來時(shí)。認(rèn)真閱讀表格內(nèi)容，審清主題，根據(jù)表格提示要點(diǎn)，列出本文的寫作提綱。寫作中可適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意表達(dá)順序，表達(dá)要有條理性，語句通順，意思連貫，要符合邏輯關(guān)系，字?jǐn)?shù)要在100詞以上。寫完以后，注意再讀一遍，看看有無拼寫、語法錯(cuò)誤（時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致等）。本文提綱：我今年春節(jié)的小目標(biāo)幾天后就要過春節(jié)了?，F(xiàn)在我正在為即將到來的新年設(shè)定一些小目標(biāo)。春節(jié)前，我計(jì)劃做三件事。首先，我會(huì)幫助我的父母做一些事情，包括打掃，貼春聯(lián)，做饅頭，做餃子。第二，我會(huì)準(zhǔn)備新衣服和小禮物。第三，在除夕夜，我和家人吃了一頓大餐后，要去看春節(jié)聯(lián)歡晚會(huì)，等待新年的到來。春節(jié)那天，我會(huì)通過微信給親朋好友發(fā)祝福詞和紅包。春節(jié)過后，我會(huì)努力學(xué)習(xí)，取得好成績。我要自己去上學(xué)，不要讓父母來接我。【點(diǎn)睛】這篇文章包含了表格中所有的內(nèi)容，條理清楚，語句通順，書寫規(guī)范，時(shí)態(tài)運(yùn)用正確，語句通順，意思連貫，是一篇不錯(cuò)的文章。（1）學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)，牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性，更富有條理。（2）列好提綱和要點(diǎn)及需要的重要短語或句型。（3）切忌堆砌詞語、句子，注意運(yùn)用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞使句子流暢、連貫。注意表達(dá)的順序。（4）注意書寫的規(guī)范：大小寫、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號等的正確運(yùn)用。（5）注意檢查：單詞拼寫、語法、動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)、語序、主謂一致等。（三）我們經(jīng)常使用微信（WeChat）與同學(xué)和朋友交流，這里面可能涉及到個(gè)人隱私，假如你的父母想看你的聊天記錄，你會(huì)同意嗎？學(xué)校英語報(bào)正在就此話題進(jìn)行討論，請你整理以下討論結(jié)果，并發(fā)表自己的看法。理由同學(xué)觀點(diǎn)1.每個(gè)人都有自己的隱私，微信是我們與朋友一起分享心事，傾述煩惱的理想(ideal)場所，不希望父母看到。2.父母會(huì)過度擔(dān)心我們的交友，學(xué)習(xí)等。你的觀點(diǎn)… …注意：1.詞數(shù)：80左右2.包含以上各點(diǎn)，意思連貫、符合邏輯。Talking on mobile WeChat has become more and more popular now. But will you share everything on your WeChat with your parents?_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】Talking on mobile WeChat has become more and more popular now. But will you share everything on your WeChat with your parents?With WeChat, we can communicate with friends by sending text messages, voice messages, we can share our photos or videos, share our location, we can even chat with lots of friends at the same time. More important, it is free for the users. Some think that everyone has their own privacy. WeChat is the ideal place for us to share our thoughts with friends, and we don't want our parents to see it. Sometimes parents are worried about their children’s friendship and studies.In my opinion, we may share our ideas with our parents. They can help us solve problems.【解析】這里是一篇關(guān)于微信的，可不可以讓家長來看，在短文中寫出同學(xué)們的觀點(diǎn)和自己的問題。不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，所寫的句子要符合英語語法，要使用自己熟悉的單詞和句式，短語用了一些短語和句式，用了that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句，增加了文章的亮點(diǎn)。【點(diǎn)睛】1.仔細(xì)審題，明確要求。審讀所給信息，弄清楚所要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，然后對所給的信息進(jìn)行梳理，可根據(jù)內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)調(diào)整寫作順序，使文章行文連貫。2.列全要點(diǎn)，即提綱要點(diǎn)化，然后寫作成文。此時(shí)我們就必須在大腦中將各種信息點(diǎn)補(bǔ)充完整，適時(shí)使用高級詞匯和復(fù)雜句式。要根據(jù)提示將要點(diǎn)表達(dá)清楚，使文章的內(nèi)容完整、飽滿、要點(diǎn)齊全，注意適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)。同時(shí)注意句子與句子之間，段落與段落之間要有合理的過渡銜接。3.檢查核實(shí)，確保無誤。（四）假如你是Li Na，在一個(gè)名為“Growing Pains（成長的煩惱）”的微信群里，看到以下內(nèi)容。請根據(jù)問題及寫作要求，回復(fù)微信。講述發(fā)生在你和朋友之間的一件不愉快的經(jīng)歷。針對這些煩惱，你又有什么建議的？要求：60詞左右，開頭己給出： Hello! I am Frank. I got a fight with my best friend last week. I felt very upset. Do you have the same experience? Can you give us some advice? If we talk to others, we' ll surely feel better. Hello! I am Li Na. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】Hello! I am Li Na. I will share wish you about my unhappy experience between my friends and me. Never can I forgot the time when I prepared for my final exam. During those days, I had endless homework so that I couldn’t finish it. In order to deal with the problem, I decided to copy my friend’s homework. But to my surprise, she refused me and gave me no reason. I felt very angry with her. After that, I felt very sorry for that and tried my best to improve our relationship.In my view, it is best not to run away from the problems. If you are brave enough, you are halfway to being successful. You had better talk with your friends or ask your parents for help. When you share problems with your friends, you should find a chance to communicate with them.【解析】1. 題干解讀：文章是一篇話題作文，主要圍繞“Growing Pains（成長的煩惱）”展開討論，直接分享自己的親身經(jīng)歷，描述自己的成長的煩惱，以及自己在煩惱過程中所采取的方法，然后把這個(gè)方法或者建議和好朋友一起分享，讓朋友也能從中得到一些建議。2. 例文點(diǎn)評：文章采取兩段式，直接開篇直入主題，講述自己與朋友之間發(fā)生的不愉快，第二段給出自己的建議，供朋友參考。文章結(jié)構(gòu)完整，語句銜接較自然，語言表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確。3. 高分亮點(diǎn)：短語：prepare for；deal with；feel sorry for；try one’s best to do sth；in one’s view；run away from。

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