中考英語二輪復習作文熱點素材+精彩范文熱點 02 垃圾分類 (含答案)-試卷下載-教習網(wǎng)

熱點02 垃圾分類垃圾分類無疑是今年的火爆熱點之一，它為我們的生活帶來了極大的便利。今天，選擇的2021年中考英語寫作預(yù)測話題是：垃圾分類。【預(yù)測題目】（一）當今中國社會，垃圾分類 (sort garbage) 備受關(guān)注。在校園里，同學們有的贊成進行垃圾分類，有的則反對。請你針對這種情況寫一篇演講稿，內(nèi)容包括：大家對于垃圾分類的不同觀點及可能的原因；強調(diào)垃圾分類的重要性；號召同學們都堅持進行垃圾分類。要求：1、文章內(nèi)容需要包括所有要點，不能出現(xiàn)真實校名或人名；2、不能使用涂改液，注意卷面整潔，字數(shù)在 80 字左右。Good morning, everyone! It's my honor to speak here. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Good morning, everyone! It’s my honor to speak here. Now more and more people get to know it’s important to sort garbage. Some students think it’s very necessary, because it’s good for our environment. However, other students think it’s troublesome to sort garbage, one rubbish bin is enough. Sort garbage not only reduces unnecessary environmental pollution, but also reduces the amount of waste. In order to prevent garbage from endangering the environment as well as our health, it’s of great importance for us to throw the garbage into corresponding types of garbage bins. I hope all the students in our school learn more about sorting garbage to make earth a better place! Thank you!【解析】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇演講稿。文中圍繞有的人贊成垃圾分類，有的人不贊成垃圾分類這一些情況展開描述，并在文中強調(diào)垃圾分類的重要性，最后號召同學們都堅持進行垃圾分類。2.例文點評：本文主要采用的是第一人稱，時態(tài)采用的是一般現(xiàn)在時。準確運用時態(tài)，并保持主謂一致。句子通順，邏輯性強。3.高分亮點：短語：be good for對……有好處；not only…but also不但……而且；in order to為了。句子：Some students think it’s very necessary, because it’s good for our environment句中because引導原因狀語從句；I hope all the students in our school learn more about sorting garbage to make earth a better place句中由that引導的賓語從句，引導詞that已省略。（二）目前，每個城市每天產(chǎn)生大量的垃圾，垃圾分類刻不容緩，成為當前的熱門話題，請根據(jù)下面提示，寫一篇80詞左右的英語短文：垃圾對環(huán)境的危害；垃圾分類的意義；作為學生，該做什么？____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】At present, society produces a large amount of rubbish, such as leftover food, waste paper, used plastic bottles and batteries every day. Rubbish has become a big headache in every city and is becoming a major environmental problem. It makes our living environment and air worse and worse, and also makes our living space smaller and smaller. So how to solve this problem? I think rubbish classification is a good way to deal with it. Waste sorting is becoming increasingly common around our country. I hope all of us can get involved in this meaningful activity. It is important because it can not only reduce the land pollution but also raise our awareness to protect the environment.As students, we can do a lot for waste sorting. First of all, we should know about garbage classification and learn how we should sort the waste. Secondly, we can sort the waste by preparing some bins in different colors at home. Last but not least, it’s also a good choice to hand out leaflets in order that we could call on more people to join the activity.【解析】1. 題干解讀：文章是一篇材料作文。主要是以“垃圾”為中心，主要從垃圾對環(huán)境的危害，垃圾分類的意義以及作為學生應(yīng)該如何做這幾個方面來描寫，結(jié)合生活中的實際情況描寫，要注意語言的準確性和詞語的恰當。2. 例文點評：文章分三段描寫。第一段主要寫每天生產(chǎn)大量的垃圾，垃圾對我們的生活的影響；第二段主要寫垃圾分類的重要性；第三段主要寫作為學生應(yīng)該如何做。整個文章結(jié)構(gòu)完整，思路清晰，語言表達準確，用詞合理，意思明確易懂。3. 高分亮點：短語：a large amount of；such as；deal with；not only … but also；first of all；last but not least；hand out。句型：because引導的原因狀語從句；how引導的賓語從句；in order that引導的目的狀語從句；and引導的并列句。（一）為了保護環(huán)境, 近來我國在一些城市開始逐步推行垃圾分類(rubbish classification)制度, 現(xiàn)請你寫一篇約80詞的英語小短文宣傳這一制度。內(nèi)容：1) 簡單介紹垃圾分類制度；2) 垃圾分類的好處。注意：短文中不得出現(xiàn)真空的姓名、班級、校名, 否則此題不得分。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】There is a lot of rubbish around us now. We should learn about the rubbish classification in our daily life. There are four kinds of rubbish classification, including kitchen waste, recyclable waste, harmful waste and other waste. It is necessary for us to sort the rubbish. It can reduce the rubbish pollution. It can also help recycle resources. It’s our duty to protect the environment. We don’t throw about things we don’t need anymore. We should think of new ways to put them to good use.【解析】1.題干解讀：此篇作文要求簡單介紹垃圾分類制度及垃圾分類的好處，倡導人們保護環(huán)境。2.例文點評：例文主要用第一人稱和第三人稱進行敘述，時態(tài)采用一般現(xiàn)在時為主。在敘述時，避免漢語式英語，語言表達符合英語習慣，準確運用時態(tài)、主謂一致，句意敘述完整且條理清晰，語句通順，語義連貫。3.高分亮點：短語：a lot of；learn about；rubbish classification；rubbish pollution；throw about；think of；put … to good use。句型：①There is a lot of rubbish around us now.（there be句型） ②It is necessary for us to sort the rubbish.（It is +adj. +to do sth.） ③We don’t throw about things we don’t need anymore.（含有定語從句的復合句）【點睛】寫作六步驟：1.審題：文體，時態(tài)，人稱。2.抓住要點：要點是否齊全，適當補充。3.擴充句子：通過增加狀語，定語，連詞，使句子意思飽滿充實。4.連句成文，合理使用連詞。5.改正錯誤：拼寫是否錯誤，語法時態(tài)是否正確，連詞是否恰當?shù)取?/span>6.謄寫作文：注意書寫工整美觀整潔。（二）垃圾分類我先行，保護環(huán)境靠大家。垃圾分類，人人有責，從我做起，從小事做起，從身邊做起，從現(xiàn)在做起。某英文網(wǎng)站正在開展以“垃圾分類從我做起”為主題的征文活動。假如你是李華，請用英語寫一篇短文投稿，談?wù)勆钪心闶窃趺醋龅?，以及你的感受?/span>提示詞語: put, help, different bins, necessary提示問題:● What do you do in your daily life?● How do you feel?Waste sorting (垃圾分類) plays an important role in protecting the environment. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Waste sorting (垃圾分類) plays an important role in protecting the environment. I start with small things every day to sort waste. Whenever I see litter on the ground, I pick it up and throw it into the right bin. At home I help my parents sort the waste and put it into different bins. What’s more, I often remind people around me of doing waste sorting.I think all such small things are beneficial to our environment. Waste sorting is not only meaningful but also necessary. Let’s take action to make our environment better and better.【解析】1.題干解讀：這是一篇材料作文。寫作時，以“垃圾分類從我做起”為主題，談?wù)勆钪心闶窃趺醋龅?，以及你的感受。文章開頭已給出，根據(jù)題干，時態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時為主。寫作過程中注意要把所給的提示詞都用上。2.例文點評：例文采用兩段式，第一段講垃圾分類從小事做起，分享了自己在日常生活中是怎么做的；第二段講垃圾分類的好處并呼吁大家保護環(huán)境。整篇例文語句通順，要點齊全，條理清晰，題干中所給的詞匯都全部用上了。3.高分亮點：短語：play an important role in；protect the environment；start with；pick…up；throw…into； be beneficial to；take action to do sth.；better and better。句型：Waste sorting plays an important role in protecting the environment；whenever引導的時間狀語從句；What’s more…；Waste sorting is not only meaningful but also necessary；Let祈使句。（三）上海垃圾分類管理新規(guī)：從2019年7月1日起，上海將實施生活垃圾分類管理新規(guī)。因此，英語課上，老師決定開展一次關(guān)于垃圾分類的科普宣傳。假如你是李華，請你根據(jù)所給提示和要求，寫一篇短文向大家介紹垃圾分類。Residual Wastetoilet paper, pens...Household Food Wasteleftover rice or vegetables, fish bones...Recyclable Wastenewspaper, books, schoolbags, plastic bags...Hazardous Wasteused batteries(電池), expired(過期的) medicines... 要求：(1)短文須包括所有提示內(nèi)容,可適當發(fā)揮。(2)短文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的地名、校名和人名。(3)詞數(shù)80個左右(開頭已給出,不計入總詞數(shù))。參考詞匯：Residual Waste(干垃圾), Household Food Waste(濕垃圾), Recyclable Waste(可回收垃圾), Hazardous Waste(有害垃圾)Nowadays, the environmental problems of the earth are becoming more and more serious. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Nowadays, the environmental problems of the earth are becoming more and more serious. Today, I will give you some information about waste sorting.Firstly, toilet paper and pens belong to Residual Waste. So we should throw them into the right dustbin. Secondly, after enjoying delicious food, we must know that the leftover rice, vegetables and fish bones are Household Food Waste. Thirdly, the old newspaper, books and schoolbags are Recyclable Waste. Plastic bags used in daily life also belong to Recyclable Waste. Fourthly, the used batteries and expired medicines are Hazardous Waste. This kind of waste should be paid more attention to.I hope everyone can take action in daily life and make our country more beautiful.【解析】1. 題干解讀：本題屬于材料作文，題目的開頭已給出。根據(jù)題目要求寫一些關(guān)于垃圾分類的科普宣傳。寫作時要緊扣材料內(nèi)容并進行適當發(fā)揮。適當使用副詞和連詞等增加亮點。寫好時，再閱讀一遍，減少語法錯誤，不要犯單詞拼寫上的錯誤。2. 例文點評：這是一篇比較優(yōu)秀的例文。例文緊扣題目要求，介紹了垃圾分類。例文結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，行文連貫，恰當?shù)剡\用了副詞和連詞等用以過渡，增強了整篇文章的邏輯關(guān)系。3.高分亮點：短語：belong to；throw them into the right dustbin；fish bones；Plastic bags；pay more attention to；take action；daily life；句型：Secondly, after enjoying delicious food, we must know that the leftover rice, vegetables and fish bones are Household Food Waste. /This kind of waste should be paid more attention to.（被動語態(tài)）/ I hope everyone can take action in daily life and make our country more beautiful.（賓語從句）（四）2019 年 5 月起，上海進入垃圾分類強制時代，南通市也正在推進垃圾分類處理工作。假如你是李明，請根據(jù)“南通市崇川區(qū)推進垃圾分類工作流程圖”及相關(guān)提示，給你的上海筆友李華寫一封信介紹南通垃圾分類工作的情況。注意：1.流程圖中的內(nèi)容不要簡單翻譯。2.詞數(shù) 90 左右，題目、開頭、結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。3.表達中請勿提及真實姓名。詞匯提示：城管部門 city management department益興名流府小區(qū) Yixing famous Liufu district試點 pilotGarbage Sorting Operation in NantongDear Li Hua,I’m Li Ming,I am writing to tell you something about Garbage sorting operation in Nantong.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Ming【答案】Garbage Sorting Operation in NantongDear Li Hua,I’m Li Ming, I am writing to tell you something about Garbage sorting operation in Nantong. The city management department of our city analyzed many factors,finally it selected the Yixing famous Liufu district as a pilot. There were garbage sorting facilities and guidance boards in the pilot area. The rubbish cans were divided into three colors: blue, gray and red. In order to lead the residents to throw rubbish into the cans correctly, the street and the community arranged the volunteers to carry on the classification instruction. In addition, there were community workers interviewing the people about the work. I hope this garbage sorting pilot work can be a complete success!Yours,Li Ming【解析】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇材料作文，要求按照流程圖中的內(nèi)容，寫出崇川區(qū)推進垃圾分類工作流程，寫作內(nèi)容要涵蓋題干中要求的要點并適當發(fā)揮，緊扣題目。流程圖中內(nèi)容較多，寫作前要注意理順流程內(nèi)容，力爭做到言簡意賅，語句流暢。文章主體人稱為第三人稱，主要時態(tài)為一般過去式。2.例文點評：本例文采取一段式寫法。全文對題干中所給出的流程圖中的內(nèi)容歸納總結(jié)全面，涵蓋所有的要點，寫作時注意要求的流程順序，一一闡述。文章結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語句連貫，行文流暢。這篇例文使用in order to，in addition等短語上下銜接句子，還使用了一些固定句型如There be句型，為文章增色不少。3.高分亮點：短語：finally副詞，selected…as…，be divided into，in order to，throw into，in addition句型：There were garbage sorting facilities and guidance boards in the pilot area. There be句型In addition, there were community workers interviewing the people about the work. 動名詞短語做后置定語修飾名詞。【點睛】英語作文寫作六步驟：1. 審題：文體，時態(tài)，人稱都要審。如本文為一篇材料作文，文體要求按照流程圖寫一篇文章。時態(tài)要以一般過去式為主，人稱以第三人稱為主。2. 抓住要點：要點是否齊全，是否有適當補充。如本文寫作前對給出的要點要先整理組合并串聯(lián)，務(wù)必不能丟失要點?？蛇m當自由發(fā)揮，對文章補充說明。3. 美化全文：通過變化句式，增加狀語、定語、連詞和從句等，使句子含義和文章內(nèi)容充實飽滿。如本文中運用There be句型和部分短語，使得文章語言多樣化。4. 連句成文，合理使用副詞和連詞串聯(lián)全文。如本文中使用finally，in order to等短語使文章語句銜接自然，符合英語表達習慣。5. 再審全文：避免出現(xiàn)拼寫、用詞、時態(tài)等錯誤。6. 謄寫作文：注意書寫工整，卷面整潔。 Let’s sore garbage together and try our best to protect the environmentThere were garbage sorting facilities and guidance boards in the pilot area.Secondly, after enjoying delicious food, we must know that the leftover rice, vegetables and fish bones are Household Food Waste. This kind of waste should be paid more attention to.I hope everyone can take action in daily life and make our country more beautiful.There is a lot of rubbish around us now.It is necessary for us to sort the rubbish.We don’t throw about things we don’t need anymore.In addition, there were community workers interviewing the people about the work.Now I’d like to share some ideas about how I will prepare for my speech.First, it’s necessary to tell people to do waste sorting at the beginning of the speech.To make my speech more attractive, I plan to use some body languages. （一）隨著經(jīng)濟的快速發(fā)展，環(huán)境問題日益嚴峻。霧霾天氣肆虐，給人們的生活和健康帶來了很大的威脅。作為學生的我們能為環(huán)保做些什么呢？請根據(jù)以下提示并加以發(fā)揮，寫一篇80-100詞的小短文，呼吁人們保護環(huán)境，共創(chuàng)美好家園。提示：1 騎自行車或步行上學。2 不隨地丟垃圾，積極參與垃圾分類。3 使用節(jié)能燈，并節(jié)約用水用電。4 其他。參考詞匯：垃圾分類waste classifying節(jié)能燈energy-saving lamp____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】With the fast development of economy, our environment is getting worse and worse.It’s time for us to do something to protect the environment. What can we students do to protect the environment?Fistly, we can go to school by bike or on foot instead of taking the bus or car.And we can also ask our parents to ride bikes to work if possible. Secondly, we shouldn’t litter everywhere and we should take part in the activity of waste classiflying actively. We can also tell others the importance of waste classiflying. Thirdly, we can use energy-saving lamps at home and save water when we take a shower or wash our clothes.Don’t fotget to turn off the lights before leaving the room.Finally,---- Now Let’s take actions!【解析】這篇書面表達要求學生表達自己能為環(huán)保做些什么，呼吁人們保護環(huán)境。這是篇材料作文。寫作時首先認真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點；然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫作要點及每個要點中可能要用到的表達；然后緊扣要點，動筆寫作，在寫作過程中，要注意句與句、段與段之間的過渡，必要時可適當運用表示轉(zhuǎn)折、因果、并列、比較等關(guān)系的連詞，使文章過渡平穩(wěn)，自然流暢；最后要細心復核檢查，確保正確無誤。（二）假設(shè)你是李華，你們班上個星期五組織了一次關(guān)于垃圾分類的討論。請你根據(jù)下面的表格內(nèi)容給你的英國朋友Peter寫一封信，向他介紹一下這次討論會。討論會情況你的英語老師Miss Li 介紹了垃圾分類的意義同學們就如何正確地垃圾分類展開了討論你的收獲…… 要求：1. 參考表格內(nèi)容，可適當發(fā)揮；2. 語句通順，意思連貫，書寫工整；3. 文章不得出現(xiàn)任何真實信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；4. 詞數(shù)：不少于70詞。（開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）參考詞匯:：garbage sorting 垃圾分類Dear Peter, How is it going? I want to tell you about a discussion about garbage sorting. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________What's your advice about protecting the environment? Please write to me soon. Yours, Li Hua【答案】Dear Peter,How is it going? I want to tell you about a discussion about garbage sorting. Last Friday, the discussion was held in our classroom. My English teacher Miss Li told us the meaning of garbage sorting. She said that garbage, in fact, is a kind of resources put in wrong places. Garbage sorting can be useful for recycling. Then my classmates discussed about how to properly sort garbage. After the discussion, I realized that garbage sorting is good for the environment. Every one can play a part in protecting our environment. One small thing like garbage sorting can make a difference to the environment. What's your advice about protecting the environment? Please write to me soon. Yours, Li Hua【解析】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇書信體作文，注意書信文的寫作格式。根據(jù)題目要求可知，文章包含兩個要點，一是討論會的情況：老師向同學們介紹垃圾分類的意義及同學們討論如何正確分類；二是自己的心得感受。2.寫作指導：本文主題為“垃圾分類”；文章應(yīng)以第一人稱闡述自己的感悟等；以一般過去時描述討論會的情況，以一般現(xiàn)在時闡述個人觀點，注意主謂一致問題；寫作時要注意語句的連貫性，保證要點齊全。（三）假如你是李華，你們學校正在開展“垃圾分類”宣傳活動，倡議大家在日常生活中正確地進行垃圾分類。為了達到更好的宣傳效果，學校將在本月底開展一次英文演講比賽。你們班的交換生Peter給你發(fā)郵件詢問相關(guān)事情。請用英語回復一封郵件，告訴他演講稿上交的時間，并分享你對演講的一些想法。提示詞語：necessary, waste sorting(垃圾分類), different bins(垃圾箱), body languages提示問題：● When should you hand in the speech paper?● What would you like to share with Peter about the speech?Dear Peter,I’m glad to receive your email.________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________If there is anything more that I can help you, please let me know.Yours, Li Hua【答案】Dear Peter,I’m glad to receive your email. We need to hand in the speech paper before next Friday. Now I’d like to share some ideas about how I will prepare for my speech.First, it’s necessary to tell people to do waste sorting at the beginning of the speech. Besides, the key information of the speech is about how to sort waste. For example, put waste into different bins.To make my speech more attractive, I plan to use some body languages. Hope my ideas will be helpful.If there is anything more that I can help you, please let me know.Yours,Li Hua【解析】1.題干解讀：本題為書信作文，要求向Peter介紹英文演講比賽的相關(guān)事宜。時態(tài)可用一般現(xiàn)在時。書信格式已經(jīng)給出，學生只需要寫好題目所給要點提示即可。2.例文點評：例文按照題目所給要點提示，告知了Peter演講稿的提交時間，以及自己寫演講稿的思路，希望能給予Peter一些啟發(fā)。文章思路清晰，層次分明，熟練使用連接詞使句與句之間銜接順暢，語義連貫。3.高分亮點：短語：hand in，prepare for，at the beginning of，for example。句型：（1）Now I’d like to share some ideas about how I will prepare for my speech.（would like句型，賓語從句）（2）First, it’s necessary to tell people to do waste sorting at the beginning of the speech.（it作形式主語）（3）To make my speech more attractive, I plan to use some body languages.（不定式作目的狀語）（四）隨著經(jīng)濟的發(fā)展和人民生活水平的提高，垃圾問題日益突出。我國有668 座城市，2/3 被垃圾環(huán)帶包圍。這些垃圾埋不勝埋，燒不勝燒，造成了一系列嚴重危害。但是，如果對消費環(huán)節(jié)產(chǎn)生的垃圾及時進行分類，那么垃圾山可以變成金山。請你根據(jù)下文提示寫一篇關(guān)于垃圾匪類的倡議書，詞數(shù)80詞左右。內(nèi)容包括：1. 為何要提倡垃圾分類？2. 我們在實際生活中可以怎樣做（兩至三條建議）？3. 號召同學們參與垃圾分類活動。參考詞匯：分類sore ; 垃圾分類garbage sorting____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】With the economic development, society produces a lot of garbage every day. It has become a big problem in every city. Garbage sorting is a good way of dealing with it.In our daily life, we can divide our living garbage into two parts, recyclable and non-recyclable garbage. Pick out the recyclable things so that they can be used again. When we use up batteries, put them into the recycling bins of batteries in order not to pollute the earth.Let’s sore garbage together and try our best to protect the environment【解析】試題分析：生首先要認真閱讀前面的提示認真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時態(tài)。要求介紹。同時應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。溫馨提醒：考生必須認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等。寫作亮點：本文主要講述的是隨著經(jīng)濟的發(fā)展和人民生活水平的提高，垃圾問題日益突出，本文是一篇關(guān)于拒絕垃圾的倡議書。文章的要點并不清楚，給考生留下的發(fā)揮空間較大，在寫作時可以利用較復雜的句式，也可以使用高級詞匯和適當?shù)倪B接詞讓文章更流暢。這篇短文不使用了大量的的短語，可見該生英語功底扎實。如In our daily life, we can divide our living garbage into two parts, recyclable and non-recyclable garbage.等使文章的表達更豐富，更有邏輯性，更富有條理。考點：提綱類作文。

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