熱點(diǎn)08 二胎政策 二胎政策無(wú)疑是今年的火爆熱點(diǎn)之一，它為我們的生活帶來(lái)了極大的便利。今天，選擇的2021年中考英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作預(yù)測(cè)話題是：二胎政策。【預(yù)測(cè)題目】（一）曾經(jīng)的“獨(dú)生子女”政策已經(jīng)改變，全國(guó)各省市已開(kāi)始實(shí)施“單獨(dú)二孩”的政策。你校對(duì)“你是否愿意家中有一個(gè)小弟弟或小妹妹?”的問(wèn)題進(jìn)行了調(diào)查。大多數(shù)同學(xué)表示愿意。假設(shè)你是李華，請(qǐng)你對(duì)此話題用英語(yǔ)給校報(bào)寫(xiě)一封信進(jìn)行介紹，表達(dá)你的觀點(diǎn)，內(nèi)容包括：1．對(duì)這一問(wèn)題，同學(xué)們的觀點(diǎn)和理由。2．你個(gè)人的觀點(diǎn)和理由。參考詞匯：sibling:兄弟姐妹       【答案】Dear Editor,I’m writing to tell you about a survey carried out in our school about whether we are willing to have a younger sibling in our families.According to the survey , 78% of the students would love to have a brother or sister with whom they can play.therefore , they will no longer feel lonely .In addition to,they will learn to share with others.However,17% of them are not in favor of it.In their view, they may worry that they aren’t the only of the family any longer .What’s worse, having a sibling will surely increase the burden of the family , only 5% of the students think it makes no differences to them whether they will have a younger sibling or not .As far as I’m concerned,having siblings does have many advantages.So I’m eager to have a younger sibling.Yours ,Li hua （二）國(guó)家開(kāi)放二胎政策后，很多家庭都可能有新的成員加入，那我們的生活會(huì)怎樣呢？你會(huì)為家里做些什么？假設(shè)你現(xiàn)在是家里唯一的孩子，請(qǐng)以“If I Have a New Brother or Sister”為題，闡述你的想法和理由。If you have a new brother or sisterHow will you feel?ReasonsWhat do you want to say to your parents?What will you do for your family/younger  brother (sister)?......注意：（1）開(kāi)頭部分已寫(xiě)好，只需接著寫(xiě)即可；（2）文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的校名和姓名；（3）所寫(xiě)內(nèi)容必須包括表格中的各項(xiàng)內(nèi)容，并至少寫(xiě)兩條理由；（4）詞數(shù)：80左右，開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。If I have a new brother or sisterI think my life will be different if I have a new brother or sister.___________________________________      【參考范文】  If I have a new brother or sisterI think my life will be different if I have a new brother or sister. I’ll be very happy. Because I’ll have a younger brother/sister to play with and talk with. I want to say thanks to my parents. I will do something for my family. At weekends, I’ll help my mum do some housework, such as cleaning the room and sweeping the floor. I’ll learn to look after myself. Because my parents are too busy to look after both of us. After my younger brother or sister is born, I’ll help my mother look after him/her. When I am free, I’ll take him/her for a walk and play with him/her. And I’ll help him/her with his/her study when he/she is old enough to go to school.In a word, I’m getting ready for the coming of my younger brother/sister.【解析】這是一篇要求介紹自己如果有個(gè)弟弟或妹妹會(huì)是什么樣的作文?，F(xiàn)在在開(kāi)放二胎政策以后，第一個(gè)孩子如何和自己的弟弟妹妹相處是一個(gè)明顯的問(wèn)題，第一個(gè)孩子應(yīng)該理解父母，并且?guī)椭改刚疹櫟艿苊妹谩?/span>【詳解】這是一篇要求介紹自己如果有個(gè)弟弟或妹妹會(huì)是什么樣的作文。動(dòng)筆前先要認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn)，圍繞要點(diǎn)組織材料，然后用正確的英語(yǔ)句子把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)，在此基礎(chǔ)上亦可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點(diǎn)。根據(jù)材料可知本文主要是應(yīng)用第一人稱，一般將來(lái)時(shí)態(tài)，注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)及大小寫(xiě)等問(wèn)題，不要犯語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語(yǔ)意連貫。在幫助父母方面可以做家務(wù)，也可以帶弟弟妹妹出去玩，I’ll help my mum do some housework, such as cleaning the room and sweeping the floor.此句用的結(jié)構(gòu)式help sb. do sth.幫助某人做某事，以及such as結(jié)構(gòu)。 （一）國(guó)家現(xiàn)在放開(kāi)了二胎政策，很多人認(rèn)為有一個(gè)兄弟姐妹很好，你認(rèn)為呢？根據(jù)提示寫(xiě)一篇短文。1．父母要花費(fèi)更多時(shí)間和金錢(qián)，兩個(gè)孩子會(huì)生氣打鬧；2．有玩伴，不孤獨(dú)，學(xué)會(huì)照顧別人，學(xué)會(huì)分享等； 3．……注意：70詞左右；短文開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。       【參考范文】I am the only child in my family. I can get everything I want. If I have a sister or brother, my parents won't spend much time with me and they will spend more money in daily life. Two children may make noise at home. But children can learn to share something with others. They can look after each other. And they won't feel lonely. Anyway, I think two-child policy is good.【解析】本文屬于話題作文，表達(dá)針對(duì)國(guó)家開(kāi)放二胎政策不同的人不同的觀點(diǎn)，并闡述自己的觀點(diǎn)。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫、符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好地完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語(yǔ)言表達(dá)符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如spend with、make noise、share...with...、look after、anyway以及“If I have a sister or brother, my parents won't spend much time with me and they will spend more money in daily life”中if引導(dǎo)的條件句用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，主句用一般將來(lái)時(shí)，即“主將從現(xiàn)”原則，增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫、用詞準(zhǔn)確、句子通順、行文連貫。【點(diǎn)睛】首先認(rèn)真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點(diǎn)；然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)及每個(gè)要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá)，例如spend with、make noise、share...with...、look after以及“If I have a sister or brother, my parents won't spend much time with me and they will spend more money in daily life”等；然后緊扣要點(diǎn)、動(dòng)筆寫(xiě)作。在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中，要注意句與句、段與段之間的過(guò)渡，必要時(shí)可適當(dāng)運(yùn)用表示轉(zhuǎn)折、因果、并列、比較等關(guān)系的連詞等，使文章過(guò)渡平穩(wěn)，自然流暢，例如if和anyway。最后，要仔細(xì)檢查有無(wú)單詞拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)誤用等，還要檢查語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無(wú)重復(fù)、啰嗦的語(yǔ)言，大小寫(xiě)是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。 （二）假如你是初中生李華，在家是獨(dú)生子女，國(guó)家開(kāi)放二孩政策后，你的父母想再生一個(gè)孩子，征求你的意見(jiàn)。恰好你的美國(guó)筆友Peter來(lái)信詢問(wèn)我國(guó)的二孩政策。請(qǐng)你給他回一封信，內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：    1. 簡(jiǎn)單解釋國(guó)家的二孩政策；2. 得知父母打算生二胎后你的想法；3. 征求Peter的看法。注意：1. 詞數(shù)80左右；2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3. 開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)已為你寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入字?jǐn)?shù)。Dear Peter,I have received your letter and I’m glad to explain to you the two-child policy in China.__________________      Yours,Li Hua【參考范文】Dear Peter,I have received your letter and I’m glad to explain to you the two-child policy in China.The Chinese government recently plans to change the one-child policy into two-child policy, meaning that every family is allowed to have two children. Now my parents have made a decision to give birth to a second child, which worries me. Though it is good to have a brother or sister to grow up with, I have to share everything with him or her. Most importantly, what if the love from my parents is totally switched to the new child? Do you have similar problems? What’s your opinion about this?Yours,Li Hua【解析】這篇作文要求我們以李華的身份給自己的外國(guó)筆友Peter寫(xiě)信，內(nèi)容是關(guān)于我們國(guó)家的二胎政策。通過(guò)審題可知，短文中應(yīng)主要包括以下內(nèi)容：首先給Peter介紹我們國(guó)家的二胎政策；然后說(shuō)明自己的父母想要二胎以及自己的想法；最后向Peter征求意見(jiàn)。題目中只給出了大概的提綱，具體的寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容，需要學(xué)生們自己發(fā)揮想象力，組織語(yǔ)言，串聯(lián)成文。寫(xiě)作時(shí)，應(yīng)注意英語(yǔ)表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語(yǔ)是不同的，不能逐詞翻譯，并注意句式的完整，不要?dú)埲背煞?。根?jù)題目要求列出寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)，然后羅列出需要用到的單詞和句型，用簡(jiǎn)單句的句式先表達(dá)出來(lái)。然后為提升文章檔次，改變幾個(gè)較高級(jí)的詞匯和復(fù)雜句式，如復(fù)合句、非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞等。同時(shí)需要注意語(yǔ)句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，以使全文意思連貫。【點(diǎn)睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文。首先短文內(nèi)容完整充實(shí)，作者根據(jù)題目中的提綱，解釋了我們國(guó)家的二胎政策以及自己的父母打算要二胎之后自己的想法。文章結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，敘述清楚、明了，語(yǔ)言得體。其次短文中使用了正確的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱，文章以第一人稱為主，時(shí)態(tài)主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞形式準(zhǔn)確，用法規(guī)范，符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。短文中以簡(jiǎn)單句為主，也使用了一些較高級(jí)的句型，如The Chinese government recently plans to change the one-child policy into two-child policy, meaning that every family is allowed to have two children.，這是一個(gè)長(zhǎng)句，使用了句型plan to do sth.，change …into…，以及現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語(yǔ)、被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)等。再如Now my parents have made a decision to give birth to a second child, which worries me. 中使用了非限制性定語(yǔ)從句；Though it is good to have a brother or sister to grow up with, I have to share everything with him or her.使用了讓步狀語(yǔ)從句等。這些句型的使用提升了文章的檔次和水平。 （三）隨著國(guó)家二胎政策的實(shí)行，二胎問(wèn)題成為了時(shí)下熱議的社會(huì)話題。有些同學(xué)贊成生二胎，因?yàn)樽鳛楠?dú)生子女在成長(zhǎng)過(guò)程中，一個(gè)人感覺(jué)比較孤單。而另一些人則有不同的看法，認(rèn)為有了二胎，父母需要賺更多的錢(qián)，會(huì)很辛苦。那么，你的觀點(diǎn)是什么呢？請(qǐng)就此話題，寫(xiě)一篇短文，闡述自己的觀點(diǎn)，你是贊成還是不贊成父母生二胎呢？至少寫(xiě)出兩點(diǎn)原因。要求：    1. 詞數(shù)80-120。    2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名，學(xué)校名。參考詞匯：two-child policy  二胎政策My view on two-child policy                                                   _________________________________      【參考范文】My view on two-child policyFirst of all, two-child policy is the gift for some only child. For some families, maybe the parents are only child and they also can have only child. Put aside the loneliness of their child, when their child grows up and they grow older, their child marry with an only child girl accidentally, the burden on their child and his wife is unimaginably heavy. Their child and his wife have to take care of two old couples. Usually, a young couple looking after an old couple is a little difficult; if the pressure increases twice, how can they stand it. But if their parents have two children, they can share the burden of taking care of their parents. It would be much better.Secondly, two-child policy can guarantee the number of Chinese population. As the widely spread of one-child policy, some people have changed their conception about giving birth. If they firmly believe one-child policy, there will be more and more the dink. After several decades, our country will famous for lack of population.In conclusion, one-child policy has out of date. And two-child policy is needed and necessary. It can solve the problem of nowadays and the future.【解析】這篇作文要求我們對(duì)現(xiàn)在國(guó)家實(shí)行的二胎政策提出自己的看法，短文的題目就是My view on Two-child Policy。這是一篇話題類的作文，題目中只給出了二胎這一話題，具體的寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容需要學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮想象力去完成，這對(duì)于學(xué)生們來(lái)說(shuō)是一個(gè)難點(diǎn)，短文寫(xiě)什么，從哪個(gè)方面寫(xiě)，如何組織語(yǔ)言，這就要考查學(xué)生的英語(yǔ)功底了。另外寫(xiě)作的時(shí)候，還要注意寫(xiě)作的層次，內(nèi)容要有條理，不能雜亂無(wú)章。首先點(diǎn)明自己的觀點(diǎn)，再講述自己的理由。通過(guò)分析可知，這篇短文應(yīng)使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，第一人稱來(lái)敘述，要注意正確使用動(dòng)詞的形式，注意主謂一致的問(wèn)題。同時(shí)寫(xiě)作的時(shí)候，可以使用一些短語(yǔ)和句型，使上下文意連貫，表達(dá)流暢。【點(diǎn)睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文中作者根據(jù)題目的要求對(duì)于國(guó)家實(shí)行的二胎政策提出了自己的觀點(diǎn)。整篇短文的內(nèi)容完整，結(jié)構(gòu)清晰。作者主要從兩個(gè)方面闡述了自己的理由，第一個(gè)理由中使用的句型有Put aside the loneliness of their child, when their child grows up and they grow older, their child marry with an only child girl accidentally, the burden on their child and his wife is unimaginable heavy.、if the pressure increasing twice, how can they stand it. But if their parents have two children, they can share the burden of taking care of their parents。第二個(gè)理由Secondly, two-child policy can guarantee the number of Chinese population、If they firmly believe one-child policy, there will be more and more the dink等。 （四）國(guó)家為了優(yōu)化人口結(jié)構(gòu)，在2015年頒布了全面開(kāi)放二孩的政策。上周你班就“你需要一個(gè)弟弟或妹妹嗎？”開(kāi)了一個(gè)班會(huì)，同學(xué)們各抒己見(jiàn)。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下表提示內(nèi)容，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文，投給校報(bào)。要求：1．包含表中所有信息，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2．語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫，書(shū)寫(xiě)整潔；3．詞數(shù)不少于100。開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。贊成1. 歡樂(lè)多了; 減少了孤獨(dú)感 2. 學(xué)會(huì)照顧人了；有利于培養(yǎng)合作精神。反對(duì)1. 占據(jù)時(shí)間; 沒(méi)有時(shí)間進(jìn)行自己的愛(ài)好2. 父母關(guān)愛(ài)少了；有時(shí)相處不好會(huì)導(dǎo)致矛盾。你的觀點(diǎn)……(至少兩點(diǎn)) Last week our class held a class meeting about“Would you like a younger brother or sister?’’.Every student expressed his opinion.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】Last week our class held a class meeting about“Would you like a younger brotheror sister?’’ .Every student expressed his opinion.Some students welcome a younger brother or sister. With a little child around , we may have great fun seeing their pretty faces or meeting many funny situations, which will make our lives full of joy. It can also make us feel less lonely. Besides it is important for us teenagers to learn to take care of a little child. It can help us work closely with each other.However, some other students don’t think so. They think it will take us much time to look after her or him. As a result , we won’t have enough time for our hobbies. What’ s more, parents may spare more time and love to the younger. Sometimes , if we can’t get along well with the younger, we may quarrel with them. In my opinion , I ‘d like to have a younger brother or sister. It’s wonderful to grow up with a brother or sister together. We may share our happiness and sadness with each other. Moreover, when our parents get older, they can live a better life with two children to support them.【解析】這是一篇給材料作文。就國(guó)家2015年頒布的全面開(kāi)放二孩的政策，上周你班就“你需要一個(gè)弟弟或妹妹嗎？”開(kāi)了一個(gè)班會(huì)，同學(xué)們各抒己見(jiàn)。根據(jù)表格中提示內(nèi)容，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文，投給校報(bào)。本文時(shí)態(tài)主要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)輔以一般過(guò)去時(shí)，人稱主要用第一、三人稱。在寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意文章所給出的提示要點(diǎn)，“贊成的、反對(duì)的”給出的要點(diǎn)比較具體，學(xué)生需要用正確的英語(yǔ)準(zhǔn)確的表達(dá)出來(lái)；最后在表達(dá)自己的觀點(diǎn)時(shí)，要發(fā)揮想象力，使文章更加的豐富、充實(shí)。注意上下文的意思要連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系；句與句、段與段之間的過(guò)渡要平穩(wěn)、自然流暢；要靈活運(yùn)用自己熟悉的高級(jí)詞句，以提高文章的檔次；最后要細(xì)心復(fù)核檢查，確保正確無(wú)誤。 Recently, the government announced that all parents would be allowed to have a second child.In my opinion , I ‘d like to have a younger brother or sister. It’s wonderful to grow up with a brother or sister together.Moreover, when our parents get older, they can live a better life with two children to support them.It can help us work closely with each other.Sometimes , if we can’t get along well with the younger, we may quarrel with them. Besides it is important for us teenagers to learn to take care of a little child.I think it is good to have a brother or sister to grow up with.it makes no differences to them whether they will have a younger sibling or not.I want to grow up with him or her happily.          （一）上周的一堂英語(yǔ)課上，老師就“二孩政策（ two-child policy ）”展開(kāi)了全班調(diào)查。請(qǐng)你以“ Do you want to have a brother or a sister?” 為題目用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文，先匯總班上同學(xué)的觀點(diǎn)，再陳述自己的想法。觀點(diǎn)理由不想有弟妹，愿意當(dāng)獨(dú)生子女（21%）不愿意與別人分享父母的愛(ài)，父母會(huì)很辛苦，......想要弟妹，不愿意當(dāng)獨(dú)生子女（62%） 渴望有伴，有更多的親人，有人分享......不介意，都可以（17%） ……你的觀點(diǎn)……要求：文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名和學(xué)校名稱，100字左右，開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入字?jǐn)?shù)。Do you want to have a brother or a sister?Do you want to have a brother or a sister?Last week,____________________________________________      【參考范文】Do you want to have a brother or a sister?Do you want to have a brother or a sister?Last week,we had a discussion about two-child policy.Some students think they don’t want to have  a brother or a sister. Because they don’t want to share parents’ love with others.Also, parents can be tired because of two children. However,others think they want to have a brother or a sister. Because they are eager for a person to play with.They can share their happiness and sorrow.17% of students think they can’t mind having a brother or a sister.It should be decided by their parents.I think it is good to have a brother or sister to grow up with, I can share everything with him or her.【解析】試題分析：這是一篇以“Do you want to have a brother or a sister?”為話題的調(diào)查報(bào)告，介紹同學(xué)們對(duì)“二孩政策（ two-child policy ）”不同的觀點(diǎn)，并闡述理由。動(dòng)筆前應(yīng)根據(jù)主題組織材料，確定寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容，列出簡(jiǎn)單提綱，確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、關(guān)鍵單詞等問(wèn)題。結(jié)合材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)表達(dá)。注意不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，做到語(yǔ)句通順。為了使意思更加連貫可適當(dāng)使用連接詞。還要注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系，注意文后要表達(dá)自己的觀點(diǎn)和想法。【寫(xiě)作亮點(diǎn)】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練。本文恰當(dāng)使用了had a discussion about，share parents’ love with，because of，play with, however，also, be good to等詞（組）。采用了豐富的句型，比如：原因狀語(yǔ)從句、I think賓語(yǔ)從句、被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)等多種句式交替運(yùn)用，使文章增色不少，這是一篇不錯(cuò)的范文。 （二）國(guó)家開(kāi)放二胎政策后，學(xué)校進(jìn)行了一項(xiàng)調(diào)查關(guān)于我們是否愿意有一個(gè)弟弟或妹妹，同學(xué)們各有主張，假如你是李華，請(qǐng)你據(jù)此給報(bào)社寫(xiě)一篇文章，要點(diǎn)如下表：　　　　主張理由78%的學(xué)生愿意不再感到孤獨(dú)，學(xué)會(huì)分享。17%的學(xué)生不愿意擔(dān)心他們并不是的家庭唯一，增加家庭的負(fù)擔(dān)5%的學(xué)生無(wú)所謂是否有弟、妹毫無(wú)差異你的觀點(diǎn)自列舉1-2點(diǎn)Dear Editor,     I’m writing to tell you about a survey carried out in our school about whether we are willing to have a younger sibling（兄弟姐妹） in our families._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua【參考范文】Dear Editor,I’m writing to tell you about a survey carried out in our school about whether we are willing to have a younger sibling（兄弟姐妹） in our families.According to the survey, 78% of the students would like to have a brother or sister whom they can play with, as a result, they will no longer feel lonely. Besides, they will learn to share with others. However, 17% of them are against it. They worry that they aren’t the only of the family any longer. What’s worse, having a younger sibling will surely increase the burden(負(fù)擔(dān)) of the family. Lastly, 5% of the students think it makes no differences to them whether they will have a younger sibling or not.In my opinion, having a sibling does have many advantages. So I hope to have a younger brother or a sister. I want to grow up with him or her happily and support our parents with them together to make our parents enjoy their life when they become old. Yours,Lihua【解析】題干分析：閱讀題干，這是一篇要求寫(xiě)看法關(guān)于國(guó)家開(kāi)放二胎政策后，我們是否愿意有一個(gè)弟弟或妹妹的看法的作文。題干已經(jīng)給出了第一段，表明了寫(xiě)作的目的“調(diào)查一項(xiàng)關(guān)于我們是否愿意在家里有一個(gè)弟弟妹妹的意愿。”。在寫(xiě)作時(shí)，要表述清楚他人的觀點(diǎn)及理由，同時(shí)也要闡明自己的觀點(diǎn)及理由。這是一份調(diào)查說(shuō)明，時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)該是一般現(xiàn)在式。例文點(diǎn)評(píng)：例文采取的是三段式寫(xiě)作手法，第一段是題干給出的，表明寫(xiě)作目的；第二段詳細(xì)的介紹了關(guān)于二胎政策學(xué)生們看法；第三段開(kāi)始闡述自己的觀點(diǎn)。例文運(yùn)用大量短語(yǔ)與句型，觀點(diǎn)表述清楚，結(jié)構(gòu)清晰。【高分亮點(diǎn)】短語(yǔ)：According to根據(jù)；would like to sth想要做某事；as a result結(jié)果；share sth with sb與某人分享某事物；What’s worse更糟糕的是；In my opinion照我的想法；hope to do sth希望做某事；grow up長(zhǎng)大。句型：（1）According to the survey, 78% of the students would like to have a brother or sister whom they can play with根據(jù)這項(xiàng)調(diào)查，78%的學(xué)生希望有一個(gè)可以一起玩的弟弟或妹妹。Whom引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句；（2）Lastly, 5% of the students think it makes no differences to them whether they will have a younger sibling or not.最后，5%的學(xué)生認(rèn)為是否有弟弟妹妹對(duì)他們來(lái)說(shuō)沒(méi)有區(qū)別。Whether引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句。 （三）國(guó)家現(xiàn)在放開(kāi)了二胎政策，很多人認(rèn)為有-個(gè)兄弟姐妹很好，你認(rèn)為呢？根據(jù)提示寫(xiě)一篇短文。1.父母要花費(fèi)更多時(shí)間和金錢(qián)，兩個(gè)孩子會(huì)生氣打鬧；2.有玩伴，不孤獨(dú)，學(xué)會(huì)照顧別人，學(xué)會(huì)分享等； 3.……注意：1.詞數(shù)：80詞左右；2.請(qǐng)不要逐句翻譯，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；3.文中不出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名、校名和地名； 4.短文開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。I am the only child in my family. I get everything I want. If I have a sister or brother,___________________      【參考范文】I am the only child in my family. I get everything I want. If I have a sister or brother, my parents don’t spend much time with me and they spend more money in daily life. Two children may make noise at home. But children can learn to share something with others.They can look after each other. And they can’t feel lonely .I think two-child policy is good.【解析】試題分析：這是一篇材料作文，提示內(nèi)容就是本文的寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)。這些要點(diǎn)構(gòu)成寫(xiě)作的基本框架。我們要做的就是用正確的英語(yǔ)把要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來(lái)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮想象說(shuō)出自己的觀點(diǎn)。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)來(lái)寫(xiě)，要注意主謂一致等問(wèn)題。寫(xiě)作中要適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。【點(diǎn)睛】首先認(rèn)真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點(diǎn)；然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)及每個(gè)要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá)；然后緊扣要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆寫(xiě)作，在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中，要注意句與句、段與段之間的過(guò)渡，必要時(shí)可適當(dāng)運(yùn)用表示轉(zhuǎn)折、因果、并列、比較等關(guān)系的連詞，使文章過(guò)渡平穩(wěn)，自然流暢；最后要細(xì)心復(fù)核檢查，確保正確無(wú)誤。 （四）假如你是學(xué)生王俊, 在家是獨(dú)生子女, 國(guó)家開(kāi)放二胎政策后, 你的父母想再生一個(gè)孩子, 征求你的意見(jiàn), 恰好你的美國(guó)筆友Peter來(lái)信詢問(wèn)我國(guó)的二胎政策, 你給他回一封信, 內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下:1.簡(jiǎn)單解釋國(guó)家二胎政策；2.得知父母打算生二胎后你的想法；3.征求Peter的看法。注意:1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié), 以使行文連貫；3.開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)已給出, 不計(jì)入總字?jǐn)?shù)。Dear Peter,I have received your letter and I’m glad to explain to you the two-child policy in China.__________________      Yours,Wang Jun【參考范文】Dear Peter,I have received your letter and I’m glad to explain to you the two-child policy in China.The Chinese government recently plans to change the one-child policy into two-child policy, meaning that every family in China is allowed to have two children. Now my parents have made a decision to give birth to a second child, which worries me a great deal. Though it is good to have a brother or sister to grow up with. I have to share everything with him or her. Most importantly, what if the love from my parents is totally switched to the new child? As you have a younger sister, did you have similar problems? What’s your opinion about this?I am looking forward to your early reply【解析】1、題干解讀：題干要求給你的美國(guó)筆友回一封關(guān)于我國(guó)的二胎政策的信，信的內(nèi)容要包括所給的要點(diǎn)以及peter的看法。2、例文點(diǎn)評(píng)：例文采用三段式；時(shí)態(tài)主要以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主；例文詳細(xì)的介紹了我國(guó)的二胎正常和Peter的看法；結(jié)構(gòu)清晰；邏輯性強(qiáng)。3、高分亮點(diǎn)：短語(yǔ)：plan to do；give birth to；share with；make a decision to do sth；most importantly。句型：The Chinese government recently plans to change the one-child policy into two-child policy, meaning that every family in China is allowed to have two children；what if the love from my parents is totally switched to the new child。【點(diǎn)睛】首先認(rèn)真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點(diǎn)；然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)及每個(gè)要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá)，例如plan to do；give birth to；share with；make a decision to do sth；most importantly等；然后緊扣要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆寫(xiě)作，在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中，要注意句與句、段與段之間的過(guò)渡，必要時(shí)可適當(dāng)運(yùn)用表示轉(zhuǎn)折、因果、并列、比較等關(guān)系的連詞，使文章過(guò)渡平穩(wěn)，自然流暢；最后，要仔細(xì)檢查有無(wú)單詞拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)誤用等，還要檢查語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無(wú)重復(fù)、啰嗦的語(yǔ)言，大小寫(xiě)是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。 

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