中考英語二輪復(fù)習(xí)作文熱點(diǎn)素材+精彩范文熱點(diǎn) 09 共享單車 (含答案)-試卷下載-教習(xí)網(wǎng)

熱點(diǎn)09 共享單車共享單車無疑是今年的火爆熱點(diǎn)之一，它為我們的生活帶來了極大的便利。今天，選擇的2021年中考英語寫作預(yù)測話題是：共享單車。【預(yù)測題目】（一）共享單車為人們的出行帶來了越來越多的便利，可是人們?cè)谙碛玫臅r(shí)候卻帶來了一系列的問題。比如有人把單車帶回了老家，有人使用自己的二維碼騙取使用者的錢財(cái)，有人隨意停放共享單車，有人甚至將共享單車扔到溝里，河里……請(qǐng)你寫一封倡議書，倡議人們熱愛公共資源，保護(hù)公共資源，合理使用公共資源，如此，我們的生活才會(huì)因?yàn)楣苍O(shè)施的改善而變得更加美好。請(qǐng)從以下三個(gè)方面去談：1.共享單車方便了人們的出行，減少污染，有利于環(huán)境的改善。2.列舉人們對(duì)共享單車的破壞行為。3.合理使用共享單車，熱愛公共資源，做一個(gè)文明的深圳人。要求：1.詞數(shù)至少80詞，要包含上述三個(gè)方面的內(nèi)容，不必字字翻譯。2.所給詞匯僅作參考，不必都用。3.文章開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：QR Code（二維碼）, public resources（公共資源）, cheat people of their money（騙錢）, environmentally friendly（環(huán)保的），low-carbon life（低碳生活）, civilization（明）, progress（進(jìn)步）Dear allRecently, more and more colorful shared bikes can be seen in the streets. They are making our travelling in the city much more convenient. ______________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Dear allRecently, more and more colorful shared bikes can be seen in the streets. They are making our travelling in the city much more convenient. People can use it anytime and anywhere. Sometimes people work so late that they don’t have a car, so they can go home by share bikes. There are also people who are usually busy with work and don’t have enough time to exercise. They will share bikes to go to work instead of driving, which can not only reduce the damage and environmental pollution but also be beneficial to physical and mental health.However, people have brought a series of problems when enjoying bicycle sharing. For example, someone brought the bike back to his hometown, someone used his own QR code to cheat the user's money, someone parked the bike at will, some people even threw the bike into a ditch, a river and so on.I think people should love public resources and protect them, not destroy them. Only in this way our lives will be better because of the improvement of public facilities.【詳解】1. 題干解讀：本文是一篇議論文，主要是針對(duì)共享單車給人們帶來的便利以及人們對(duì)共享單車的一些破壞行為的表述，以及提出的一些自己的看法，對(duì)帶來的便利和人們對(duì)其的破壞闡述的比較詳細(xì)，也是本文的重點(diǎn)可以通過三個(gè)方面進(jìn)行闡述。2. 例文點(diǎn)評(píng)：文章主要采取三段式，第一段主要說明共享單車給人們的生活帶來的便利好處，第二段主要寫了人們對(duì)共享單車所做的一些破壞行為，第三段主要寫了一些倡議，提倡人們熱愛公共資源。文章結(jié)構(gòu)比較緊密，語言通順，結(jié)構(gòu)嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)。3. 高分亮點(diǎn)：短語：be busy with；instead of；be beneficial to；a series of；for example；not only… but also。句型：so … that引導(dǎo)的結(jié)果狀語從句；who引導(dǎo)的定語從句；when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語從句；I think＋賓語從句。（二）共享單車為我們的生活帶來了極大的便利。假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)九年級(jí)學(xué)生李華，你的美國朋友Jim在給你的郵件中提到他對(duì)中國最新出現(xiàn)的一種共享單車“mobike”很感興趣，并請(qǐng)你做個(gè)簡要介紹。請(qǐng)你給Jim回信，內(nèi)容包括：這種單車的使用方法（如：APP查看車輛、掃碼開鎖等）；2. 這種單車的優(yōu)勢；3. 你對(duì)這種單車的看法。注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右；2. 開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：智能手機(jī)smartphone；掃碼scan the QR code；交通工具a means of transportation。Dear Jim,I’m siting to tell you more about the new form of sharing bike-mobike mentioned in your latest letter. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Hope to ride a mobike with you in China.Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Jim,I’m writing to tell you more about the new form of sharing bike-mobike mentioned in your latest letter.It’s very convenient to use if you have a smartphone. What you do is to find a nearest mobike through the APP, scan the QR code on the bike, and enjoy your trip.Compared to other forms of sharing bike, the greatest advantage of mobike is that you can easily find one and never worry about where to park it. It is becoming a new trend as a means of transportation, which relieves the traffic pressure and does good to the environment as well.Hope to ride a mobike with you in China. Yours,Li Hua【解析】這是一篇要求介紹關(guān)于共享單車的一些事情。動(dòng)筆前先要認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn)，圍繞要點(diǎn)組織材料，然后用正確的英語句子把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來，在此基礎(chǔ)上亦可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點(diǎn)。根據(jù)材料可知本文主要是應(yīng)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)及大小寫等問題，不要犯語法錯(cuò)誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語意連貫。（一）2018年1月以來，瓊海市開始推廣使用共享單車，你對(duì)這一舉措有什么看法？請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面的表格提示內(nèi)容寫一篇短文，談?wù)劰蚕韱诬嚨睦准笆褂霉蚕韱诬嚨慕ㄗh，以便在英語課上與同學(xué)們交流。 shared bikesadvantages: save energy, air pollutiondisadvantages: park in wrong places, bike accidentssuggestions: follow the traffic rules, care for bikes, don’t bring home 要求：1. 語句通順，意思連貫，語法正確，書寫規(guī)范；2. 必須包含所給提示，但不要逐字翻譯，并做適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；3. 行文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)人名、校名或地名；4. 詞數(shù)80左右。(文章開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))Recently shared bikes can be seen everywhere on the street in Qionghai. Many people use them for work, for sport or just for fun. I think_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ What’s your opinion about shared bikes? Will you choose one as your everyday vehicle?【答案】Recently shared bikes can be seen everywhere on the street in Qionghai. Many people use them for work, for sport or just for fun. I think it’s a good idea. As we know cycling can help us save energy and it can greatly reduce air pollution. What’s more, it costs little to use them. However, some people park bikes in wrong places after they use them. Sometimes it’s hard to find a bike on the street. And bicycle accidents do happen once in a while, so we must be careful when riding. Never ride too fast and always follow the traffic rules. At the same time, everyone is supposed to care for the bikes. Don’t bring it home or keep it your own. What’s your opinion about shared bikes? Will you choose one as your everyday vehicle?【解析】亮點(diǎn)說明：這篇習(xí)作的層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達(dá)流暢。文中使用了非常好的短語，例如on the street，a good idea，as we know，help sb. do sth.，save energy，what’s more，park bikes，in wrong places，once in a while，be careful，at the same time等。而As we know cycling can help us save energy and it can greatly reduce air pollution./ What’s more, it costs little to use them. / At the same time, everyone is supposed to care for the bikes.等多種插入語句式的運(yùn)用，豐富了習(xí)作內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣，是本文的最大亮點(diǎn)。點(diǎn)睛：書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。（二）共享單車（sharing bikes)給我們提供了更健康、更環(huán)保的出行方式。但與此同時(shí)，種種不文明現(xiàn)象也相繼出現(xiàn)。假如你是小記者，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下的要點(diǎn)寫一篇關(guān)于共享單車的優(yōu)點(diǎn)以及存在問題的相關(guān)報(bào)道。1. 短文應(yīng)包含以上所有要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名等相關(guān)信息；3. 詞數(shù)：80 詞左右 (開頭:已:給出，不計(jì)入詞數(shù)）Lately, have you noticed something new in our city? They are orange, yellow, blue and green—they are sharing bikes which are becoming more and more popular._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Lately, have you noticed something new in our city? They are orange, yellow, blue and green—they are sharing bikes which are becoming more and more popular.There are a lot of advantages of sharing bikes. Firstly, it can be rented everywhere. It is so convenient. Secondly, riding sharing bikes instead of driving cars can reduce pollution and it is good for the environment. Thirdly, it is cheaper than taking other kinds of transportation and it can help us save some money.However, it is facing some problems now. For example, some people parked the sharing bikes here and there, which is bad for the road safety. What’s worse, some of the sharing bikes were broken or even stolen by some selfish persons.In my opinion, government should set rules to force the users to obey the rules. The person who broke or stole the bikes should be punished by government. Let’s try to make bike-sharing, a green way of city transport have a better future.【解析】試題分析：這是一篇材料作文，提示內(nèi)容就是本文的寫作要點(diǎn)。這些要點(diǎn)構(gòu)成寫作的基本框架。我們要做的就是用正確的英語把要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮想象說出自己的觀點(diǎn)。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)來寫，要注意主謂一致等問題。寫作中要適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。（三）現(xiàn)在正在推廣使用共享單車，提倡人們“綠色出行，低碳生活” 現(xiàn)在某英文網(wǎng)站就此話題征文，根據(jù)內(nèi)容要點(diǎn) 用英語寫一篇短文投稿，談?wù)勍茝V共享單車的好處。內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)：1.首先, 騎自行車出行方便，可以隨時(shí)租還（rent and return）; 2.其次, 如果更多的人騎自行車，街道上就不會(huì)那么擁擠；3.最重要的是，騎自行車幾乎沒有污染，有助于保護(hù)環(huán)境。要求：1. 短文必須包括所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2.80詞左右，開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Now public bikes are provided for people in many cities in China. I think it’s a good thing________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Now public bikes are provided for people in many cities in China. I think it’s a good thing.First of all, it’s convenient for people to go out by bike. They can rent and return the bikes at any time. Secondly, as we know, there is heavy traffic when people go to school or work. If more people choose to ride bikes, there will be fewer cars and the streets won’t be as crowed as they are now. The most important thing is that riding bikes can help protect environment, because there will be less pollution.I hope more and more people can ride bikes and live a low-carbon life.【詳解】1.題干解讀：這是一篇材料作文。內(nèi)容是根據(jù)所給的要點(diǎn) 用英語寫一篇短文，談?wù)勍茝V共享單車的好處。我們可從以下幾個(gè)方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點(diǎn)：1. 首先，騎自行車出行方便，可以隨時(shí)租還（rent and return）；2. 其次，如果更多的人騎自行車，街道上就不會(huì)那么擁擠；3. 最重要的是，騎自行車幾乎沒有污染，有助于保護(hù)環(huán)境。2.例文點(diǎn)評(píng)：例文采用三段式；時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。人稱主要為第一人稱。第一段開篇點(diǎn)題，提出共享單車。第二段介紹推廣共享單車的益處。第三段呼吁人們“綠色出行，低碳生活”。 3.高分亮點(diǎn)：短語：first of all；go out；at any time；as we know；go to school；more and more。句型：1. First of all, it’s convenient for people to go out by bike. 首先，人們騎自行車出門是很方便的。First of all首先；it is +形容詞 for sb. to do sth. 對(duì)某人來說做某事是……的。2. The most important thing is that riding bikes can help protect environment, because there will be less pollution. 最重要的是騎自行車可以保護(hù)環(huán)境，因?yàn)槲廴緯?huì)減少。that引導(dǎo)表語從句；because引導(dǎo)原因狀語從句；there will be將會(huì)有……。（四）最近，“共享單車(bike-sharing)”風(fēng)靡錫城，大街小巷隨處可見五顏六色的自行車。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下表格信息寫一篇關(guān)于共享單車的英語短文。種類6種；約4萬輛；優(yōu)勢1. 人們使用方便；花費(fèi)少；2. 得到鍛煉，有利健康；3. 減少交通壓力；4. ……弊端1. 有些人不愛惜自行車；2. 有些人做違法的事；建議1. 使用完，保持自行車排放有序；2. …… 注意：1. 短文須包括所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，要求語句通順、意思連貫；2. 短文開頭已給出，省略號(hào)處共須2～3句話作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；3. 詞數(shù)90個(gè)左右；4. 參考詞匯：減少 reduce；壓力 stress / pressureNowadays, bike-sharing has been popular in Wuxi. A large number of colourful bicycles can be seen everywhere in the streets。_______________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Nowadays, bike-sharing has been popular in Wuxi. A large number of colourful bicycles can be seen everywhere in the streets. There are six different kinds of bicycles. About 40000 bicycles have been/are in service/use. Bike-sharing has brought some advantages. People can use them easily but pay a little. Riding is a good exercise and is good for our health. It helps to reduce traffic stress. It also helps to protect the environment. But it has caused some problems. Some people can't use bicycles properly. Others even do something against the law. I hope that people should keep bicycles in order after riding them. We should take good care of bicycles.【解析】本文屬于材料作文，要表達(dá)共享單車的優(yōu)點(diǎn)、缺點(diǎn)以及建議。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。【亮點(diǎn)說明】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語言表達(dá)符合英語習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致，特別適用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如advantages, be good for, help to do, properly, against the law, in order以及take good care of等。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫。點(diǎn)睛：寫作時(shí)可以從以下幾個(gè)方面做起：認(rèn)真審題。審好題是寫好書面表達(dá)的關(guān)鍵。審題時(shí)要注意試題的要求，抓住要點(diǎn)，詞數(shù)符合要求。構(gòu)思提綱。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫作材料。通常書面表達(dá)給出的話題是開放的，而具體的內(nèi)容要求學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀?、明確的關(guān)鍵。初寫短文。一切都準(zhǔn)備就緒，就可以動(dòng)筆寫作了，在寫作的過程中我們要注意句子的準(zhǔn)確性、連貫性以及簡潔性。使用的詞語、短語及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。同時(shí)還要注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。修改潤色。修改潤色是獲取高分的必要步驟。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯(cuò)誤外，還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無重復(fù)、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。 1. It’s our duty to save water2. As we know, water is very important to man,3. We can’t live without water.4. The amount of water which is suitable to drink is less and less.5. But some people don’t care about it.6. Many rivers and lakes are seriously polluted. Something must be done to stop the pollution.7. It’s our duty to protect our environment。8. It is very important to take care of our environment　9. We should not throw litter onto the ground10. We should not spit in a public place/ cut down the trees （一）共享單車自從2016年在江陰投入使用以來，給人們帶來了諸多便利，受到人們的追捧，改變了人們的出行方式，但同時(shí)也遇到了一些挑戰(zhàn)，是國民素質(zhì)的“照妖鏡”，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)表格中信息的提示，給21世紀(jì)英文報(bào)寫一篇關(guān)于共享單車看法的稿件。社會(huì)現(xiàn)狀自從出現(xiàn)，飽受贊譽(yù)。諸多優(yōu)勢隨處可見，出行方便有益健康，減少污染費(fèi)用不高，負(fù)擔(dān)得起存在問題未及時(shí)歸還占道擋路你的觀點(diǎn)我認(rèn)為------ 參考詞匯：公共自行車public bicycles注意事項(xiàng)：1.短文須包括表格中所有提示內(nèi)容，要求語句通順，意思連貫。2.表格中“你的觀點(diǎn)”一欄用2-3句話展開合理想象，做適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。3.詞數(shù)在90個(gè)左右，文章的開頭部分已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Public bicycles are becoming more and more popular in our daily life.________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Public bicycles are becoming more and more popular in our daily life. They have won high praise since they appeared. Public bicycles have brought us many advantages. They can be seen everywhere so that it’s easy for us to get around on public bicycles. Also, Riding bicycles not only is good for our health but also can help reduce pollution. What’s more, using public bicycles costs so little that we can afford it. But there are some problems too. Some people can’t return public bicycles in time. Sometimes because public bicycles take up too much of the road, they are in our way. I think we should encourage more people to use public bicycles. After all, it’s a way of living a green life.【解析】這是一篇材料作文，要求給英文報(bào)社寫一篇投稿，介紹對(duì)共享單車看法。作文應(yīng)包括4個(gè)主要內(nèi)容，一個(gè)是社會(huì)現(xiàn)狀，第二個(gè)優(yōu)點(diǎn)，第三是存在的問題，最后發(fā)表個(gè)人的觀點(diǎn)。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真審題，深入挖掘題材內(nèi)涵，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。要注意上下文的連貫，將這些內(nèi)容有機(jī)的連接起來，不要逐句翻譯。使用一些好的句型和短語，注意正確的時(shí)態(tài)和語態(tài)以及謂語動(dòng)詞的形式，還需要注意英語表達(dá)和漢語習(xí)慣的不同，讓整篇短文表達(dá)流暢。（二）共享單車(shared bikes)在廈門投入使用以來，給人們帶來了諸多便利，受到人們的追捧，改變了人們的出行方式，但同時(shí)也遇到了一些挑戰(zhàn)，它是國民素質(zhì)的“照妖鏡”，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)表格中信息的提示，給《21世紀(jì)英文報(bào)》寫一篇關(guān)于共享單車看法的稿件。社會(huì)現(xiàn)狀自從出現(xiàn)，飽受贊譽(yù)。諸多優(yōu)勢1.隨處可見，出行方便2.有益健康，減少污染3.費(fèi)用不高，負(fù)擔(dān)得起存在問題1.未及時(shí)歸還2.占道擋路你的觀點(diǎn)我認(rèn)為……(考生自擬，至少2點(diǎn)) 注意事項(xiàng):1.短文須包括表格中所有提示內(nèi)容，要求語句通順，意思連貫。2.表格中“你的觀點(diǎn)”一欄用2―3句話展開合理想象。作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。3.詞數(shù)在90個(gè)左右，文章的開頭部分已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Public bicycles are becoming more and more popular in our daily life.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Public bikes are becoming more and more popular in our daily life. They have won high praise since they appeared.Shared bikes have brought us many advantages. They can be seen everywhere so that it's easy for us to get around on shared bikes. Also, riding bicycles not only is good for our health but also can help reduce pollution. What's more, using shared bikes costs so little that we can afford it.But there are some problems too. Some people can't return shared bikes in time. Sometimes shared bikes take up too much of the road, so they are in our way.I think we should encourage more people to use shared bikes properly. After all, it's a way of living a green life.【解析】這篇作文要求我們給《21世紀(jì)英文報(bào)》投稿，談一談自己對(duì)共享單車的看法。題目中利用表格的形式給我們列舉了短文的主要內(nèi)容，包括：共享單車的優(yōu)勢；存在的問題以及你自己對(duì)這件事情的看法。前兩個(gè)內(nèi)容我們需要根據(jù)表格的提示用正確的英語表達(dá)，而自己的觀點(diǎn)則需要學(xué)生們自己發(fā)揮想象力，組織語言，并表達(dá)出來，要求至少兩點(diǎn)。通過審題可知，這篇短文應(yīng)主要使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，第三人稱來敘述，短文可以分成兩段或者三段，一個(gè)內(nèi)容一段或前兩個(gè)內(nèi)容合到一段。寫作時(shí)，應(yīng)注意英語表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語的不同，不能逐詞翻譯，而應(yīng)從句子的整體考慮，簡單句、并列句和復(fù)合句交叉使用，改變文章句式節(jié)奏，使用不同的句式，避免單調(diào)。語句之間注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使整篇文章意思連貫、表達(dá)流暢。用到的短語有reduce pollution 減少污染；What's more 此外，take up 占據(jù)，in our way擋我們的路，living a green life 過綠色生活。【點(diǎn)睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文。首先短文內(nèi)容完整，包含了題目要求的所有信息。短文分成了四段，第一段引出話題共享單車；第二段講述了共享單車的一些優(yōu)點(diǎn)；第三段介紹了一些問題；最后一段作者提出了自己的看法。分段敘述使文章的結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，主題明確，有層次性。其次短文中使用了恰當(dāng)?shù)臅r(shí)態(tài)和人稱，文章以第三人稱、一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)為主，語法規(guī)范，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句式富于變化。例如They can be seen everywhere so that it's easy for us to get around on shared bikes. Also, riding bicycles not only is good for our health but also can help reduce pollution. What's more, using shared bikes costs so little that we can afford it.這幾個(gè)長句；另外文章中還使用了恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，如Also, What’s more, But, sometimes, After all等等。正確文章行文連貫、語句通順、表達(dá)流暢。（三）中國很多城市時(shí)下最流行的綠色出行方式——共享單車(Sharing Bikes)，越來越受到關(guān)注。假設(shè)你是李雷，你的美國筆友Peter對(duì)此很感興趣。請(qǐng)你給他發(fā)封郵件，詳細(xì)介紹一下共享單車的利弊，如它清潔環(huán)保、十分便捷，及它引發(fā)的一些問題。要求：1. 語言流暢、書寫規(guī)范、卷面整潔，詞數(shù)不少于80個(gè)（開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；2. 文中不得使用真實(shí)姓名、校名，否則以零分計(jì)。Dear Peter，Let me tell you something about the sharing bikes.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours， Li Lei【答案】Dear Peter，Let me tell you something about the sharing bikes. First of all, it's very convenient. Also, it helps to reduce the traffic pressure. There will be less pollution because of bike－sharing. Besides, bike－sharing helps people take more exercise. However, it also brings some problems. For example, some people throw them away after using sharing bikes. Even some people damage and steal them.In my opinion, we should support the sharing bikes. At the same time, we should try to be civilized and follow these rules of using sharing bikes.Yours，Li Lei【詳解】1.題干解讀：該題目屬于書信寫作。在寫作時(shí)應(yīng)緊接開頭繼續(xù)寫作，根據(jù)內(nèi)容提示講述共享單車的利弊，并發(fā)表自己的看法。2.例文點(diǎn)評(píng)：例文主要用第三人稱進(jìn)行寫作，主要采用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)來寫作，講述共享單車的利弊敘述完整且條理清晰。3.高分亮點(diǎn)：短語：first of all；because of；for example；throw them away；in my opinion; at the same time; try to; be civilized。句型：Let me do…祈使句；there be+名詞的句子；and表示并列的句子；we should do…表示建議的句子。（四）假如你是李明，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下信息完成一篇倡議書，要點(diǎn)如下：1. 現(xiàn)在很多學(xué)生作業(yè)多，沒有時(shí)間鍛煉身體，很少參加戶外活動(dòng)；2. 目前共享單車很受歡迎，建議同學(xué)們經(jīng)常騎車鍛煉身體；3. 共享單車借還非常方便，也利于環(huán)保；4. 就鍛煉身體補(bǔ)充一兩點(diǎn)建議。注意：1. 詞數(shù)60-80；2. 內(nèi)容要連貫得體。參考詞匯：outdoor activities戶外活動(dòng)；sharing bikes共享單車；environment環(huán)境____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】　　Hello, everyone I'm Liming. Nowadays, many students have too much homework. So they don't have time to take exercise. And they seldom take part in outdoor activities. At present, bicycle sharing is very popular. I suggest we can do exercises by bikes. And bicycle sharing is also very convenient and it’s good for the environment protection. 　Here are other suggestions about exercise. First of all, we can run in the morning. Secondly, we can swim or play basketball in the weekend. We should make sure to exercise for at least an hour every day. 　 Let's take action!【詳解】1、題干分析：閱讀提干，這是一篇倡導(dǎo)文章，倡導(dǎo)的是學(xué)生要多鍛煉。例文分為三段，第一段是提出應(yīng)該多鍛煉，騎共享單車就是一個(gè)鍛煉的方法，第二段提出建議，第三段發(fā)出倡議讓我們行動(dòng)起來吧。這類文章一般以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主。2、例文分析：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的例文，很好的完成了試題所給的任務(wù)，并且例文也符合英語語言語境。文章為一篇倡導(dǎo)學(xué)生多鍛煉的文章，每一個(gè)任務(wù)點(diǎn)之間連接自然，文章井井有條。同時(shí)例文中也有一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，增強(qiáng)了邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫。3、高分亮點(diǎn)：短語：take exercise鍛煉；take part in參加；be good for對(duì)...有益；make sure確定；at least至少；句型：（1）And bicycle sharing is also very convenient and it’s good for the environment protection.騎共享單車很方便，并且對(duì)保護(hù)關(guān)鍵也有好處。be good for對(duì)...有好處；（2）We should make sure to exercise for at least an hour every day. make sure確保；at least至少。

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