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根據(jù)前文續(xù)寫：（本文改編自典范英語10之White Fang Chapter 12 Going home） Something was in the air. White Fang knew it. All his senses told him that some big change was about to come. “Listen to that.”said Matt one night. Scott listened. Through the open door came a low, anxious whine(哀鳴), like a sobbing under the breath. Then came a long sniff, as White Fang looked at his master, checking he was still there. “I think that dog’s on to you,”said Matt. Scott looked at his friend sadly. “I can’t stay any longer. I’ve got a new job in California. How could I look after a wolf-dog there?" he said. “ He would hate living in a city, anyway.” Matt looked at him. “That dog loves you,” he said. Scott glared across the table. “Don’t make me feel bad! I’ve got to do what I think is best!” He knew a dog like him needed the wide open spaces of the frozen North. Five or six times he changed his mind. But in the end he decided firmly against taking him. Then came the day when through the cabin door White Fang saw his master packing his bags. This was just like last time! He knew his master was going away and leaving him behind! The next day, White Fang’s fears grew and grew. He wouldn’t leave his masters side for a second, and when Scott went inside, he stood outside by the door, watching his every move. Then Scott took his two large bags out of the cabin, followed by a tin box. Now the terrible thing was happening. White Fang watched as two men arrived. They took the bags away down the hill towards the steamship port. Scott called White Fang. “ Poor fellow, ” said Scott, gently rubbing White Fangs ears. “I’m leaving, old boy, where you can’t follow. Now give me one of your growls, the last. A goodbye growl!” But White Fang wouldn’t growl. He gave his master a wistful(若有所求的), searching look and buried his head out of sight, between his master’s arm and body. A ship’s horn sounded. “There she blows!” said Matt. “You’ve got to go now. You don’t want to miss the boat!” The two men closed up the cabin and Matt locked the door. Paragraph 1： From inside, came a low whining and sobbing. _____________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: Surprisingly, Scott found White Fang sitting on the deck of the steamship, watching wistfully._______________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ One possible version: From inside, came a low whining and sobbing. Scott wiped his eyes. “Take good care of him, Matt. ” he said. “Sure, ” replied Matt. “But listen to that, will you?” Both men stopped. White Fang was howling as dogs howl when their masters die. His cry burst upwards, dying down into quavering misery. A heart-breaking cry, it rose up again and again. Leaving White Fang behind, Matt and Scott set out for the steamship port. The steamship was jammed with passengers. Scott said goodbye to Matt and turned to the deck. Surprisingly, Scott found White Fang sitting on the deck of the steamship, watching wistfully. Scott walked close to the dog and saw blood on his muzzle(動物的口鼻) and a fresh cut between his eyes. “You must have butted his way clean through the window of the cabin.” He cried unbelievably. The steamship hooted its final whistle. This time Scott firmly decided to take White Fang with him. The steamship swung out from the bank. Scott waved a last goodbye to Matt on the shore. Then he bent down to pat the dog and said :“ Growl for me now, you stupid, brave fellow!” White Fang growled and nuzzled his beloved master for all he was worth. 文章主題：人與動物—“狼狗白牙不舍主人離開” 本文大意：白牙的主人Scott在California找到新工作，決定將White Fang留在北方，獨自一人坐汽船回南方。聰明的白牙察覺到了主人即將離開的跡象，非常悲傷。他一刻不離地跟著主人，但主人和朋友Matt把他關(guān)在屋里，走了。適合學(xué)生多少詞匯量： 3000左右學(xué)生收獲：本文出現(xiàn)大量有關(guān)狼狗白牙不舍主人離開以及狗狗與人互動的詞匯和句式，另外，還有部分關(guān)于港口的環(huán)境描寫，可以豐富人與動物之間續(xù)寫題材的寫作內(nèi)容。核心、生疏詞匯及拓展: 1. sob (v.) draw in breath noisily and irregularly from sorrow, pain while crying啜泣，抽噎翻譯：我們聽到那間屋子里的小孩在抽抽搭搭地哭著。 _______________________________________________________________________________ 2. firmly (adv.) in a firm way堅實地，堅固地，堅定地翻譯：主席禮貌而堅定地回絕了該建議。 _______________________________________________________________________________ 3. growl (v.) (animals or thunder) make a low threatening sound (動物或雷)作低沉的怒吼聲，作狺狺的叫聲，作隆隆聲翻譯：狗向經(jīng)過房子的陌生人狺狺狂吠。 _______________________________________________________________________________ 雷在遠(yuǎn)處隆隆地響。 _______________________________________________________________________________ 4. howl (v.) ●make a long loud cry of a dog, wolf, etc (狗、狼等的)尖利的的長嚎，嗥叫翻譯：狼群在森林中嚎叫。 _______________________________________________________________________________ ●say sth with a loud and angry voice 怒吼翻譯：“我恨你們所有的人！”她吼叫著說。 _______________________________________________________________________________ 5. quiver (v.) tremble slightly 輕微顫動，抖動翻譯：她氣得渾身發(fā)抖，砰的一聲使勁把門關(guān)上。 _______________________________________________________________________________ 6. be jammed with (Verb Phr.) crowd so as to block 擠滿，塞滿翻譯：春節(jié)期間車站里擠滿了人和行李。_______________________________________________________________________________ 7. pat (v.) tap sb/sth gently with the open hand or with a flat object 輕拍（某人/某物）翻譯：她輕輕地拍著狗的頭。_______________________________________________________________________________ 8. butted his way clean through the window 它直接用頭破窗而出原文自我檢測：環(huán)境描寫： 1. 白牙知道有什么事情正在醞釀之中。他所有的感覺都在告訴他一個巨大的變化即將到來。_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________2. 后來有一天，白牙穿過艙門，看見他的主人在收拾行李。_______________________________________________________________________________ 3. 然后斯科特從小屋里拿出兩個大袋子，然后是一個錫盒。_______________________________________________________________________________ 4. 白牙看到兩個人來了。他們把行李從山上搬到了汽船港。_______________________________________________________________________________ Scott關(guān)愛白牙的動作： 5. “可憐的家伙，”斯科特說，輕輕地揉著白牙的耳朵。 _______________________________________________________________________________ 白牙不舍主人離開的描寫： 6. 從敞開的門里傳來一聲低沉而焦慮的哀鳴，就像一聲嗚咽。 _______________________________________________________________________________ 7.然后長長的嗅了一下，好像白牙看著主人，看看他還在不在。______________________________________________________________________________ 8. 他一刻也不會離開他的主人，斯科特進(jìn)去的時候，他站就在門邊，注視著他的一舉一動。______________________________________________________________________________ 9. 他向他的主人投去渴望和探詢的目光，把頭埋在主人的手臂和身體之間。______________________________________________________________________________、范文自我檢測： Paragraph 1： 1. 汽船上擠滿了乘客。 _______________________________________________________________________________2.白牙像狗在主人死去時一樣嗥叫。 _______________________________________________________________________________3. 他的叫聲突然高亢了，逐漸減弱，變?yōu)轭澏吨耐纯唷?_______________________________________________________________________________4. 一聲令人心碎的叫聲，一次又一次地升起。 _______________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2： 5. 汽船拉響了最后一聲汽笛。_______________________________________________________________________________6. 汽船搖晃著離開岸邊。_______________________________________________________________________________ 7. 然后他彎下腰，輕輕地拍了拍白牙，說：“現(xiàn)在為我而叫吧，你這個勇敢的傻瓜”。 _______________________________________________________________________________ 6. 白牙發(fā)出低吠聲，用鼻子蹭著他心愛的主人，因為他值得。 _______________________________________________________________________________ 參考答案：核心、生疏詞匯拓展仿寫： 1.We could hear the child sobbing in that room. 2.The suggestion was politely and firmly rejected by the chairman. 3.The dog growled at the stranger passing by the house. The thunder growled in the distance. 4. The wolves were howling in the forest. “I hate you all!” she howled. 5. Quivering with anger she slammed the door shut. 6. During the Spring Festival, the train stations are jammed with people and luggage. 7.She patted the dog on the head. 原文自我檢測：環(huán)境描寫篇： 1.Something was in the air. White Fang knew it. All his senses told him that some big change was about to come. 2. Then came the day when through the cabin door White Fang saw his master packing his bags. 3.Then Scott took his two large bags out of the cabin, followed by a tin box. 4. White Fang watched as two men arrived. They took the bags away down the hill towards the steamship port. Scott關(guān)愛白牙的動作： 5. “ Poor fellow, ” said Scott, gently rubbing White Fangs ears. White Fang不舍主人離開的描寫： 6. Through the open door came a low, anxious whine(哀鳴), like a sobbing under the breath. 7. Then came a long sniff, as White Fang looked at his master, checking he was still there. 8. He wouldn’t leave his masters side for a second, and when Scott went inside, he stood outside by the door, watching his every move. 9. He gave his master a wistful(若有所求的), searching look and buried his head out of sight, between his master’s arm and body. 范文自我檢測 Paragraph 1： 1. The steamship was jammed with passengers. 2. White Fang was howling as dogs howl when their masters die. 3. His cry burst upwards, dying down into quavering misery. 4. A heart-breaking cry, it rose up again and again. Paragraph 2： 5. The steamship hooted its final whistle. 6. The steamship swung out from the bank. 7. Then he bent down to pat the dog and said :“ Growl for me now, you stupid, brave fellow!” 8. White Fang growled and nuzzled his beloved master for all he was worth. 知識遷移：嘗試用上文中的語言遷移續(xù)寫2017年6月浙江卷讀后續(xù)寫的第二段 “I’m going to miss you so much, Poppy,” said the tall, thin teenager. He bent down to hug his old friend goodbye. He stood up, hugged his parents, and smiled, trying not to let his emotions（情緒） get the better of him. His parents were not quite able to keep theirs under control. They had driven their son several hours out of town to the university where he would soon be living and studying. It was time to say goodbye for now at least. The family hugged and smiled through misty eyes and then laughed. The boy lifted the last bag onto his shoulder, and flashed a bright smile. “I guess this is it,” he said. “I’ll see you back home in a month, okay?” His parents nodded, and they watched as he walked out of sight into the crowds of hundreds of students and parents. The boy’s mother turned to the dog, “Okay, Poppy, time to go back home.” The house seemed quiet as a tomb without the boy living there. All that week, Poppy didn’t seem interested in her dinner, her favorite toy, or even in her daily walk. Her owners were sad too, but they knew their son would be back to visit. Poppy didn’t. They offered the dog some of her favorite peanut butter treats. They even let her sit on the sofa, but the old girl just wasn’t her usual cheerful self. Her owners started to get worried. “What should we do to cheer Poppy up?” asked Dad. “We’ve tried everything.” “I have an idea, but it might be a little crazy,” smiled Mom. “Without anybody left in the house but us, this place could use a bit of fun. Let’s get a little dog for Poppy. It didn’t take long before they walked through the front door carrying a big box. Poppy welcomed them home as usual but when she saw the box, she stopped. She put her nose on it. Her tail began wagging（擺動）ever so slowly, then faster as she caught the smell. Paragraph 1: Dad open the boxed and a little sweet dog appeared. ______________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: A few weeks later, the boy arrived home from university._____________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ One possible version: A few weeks later, the boy arrived home from the university. When he caught sight of Poppy, he rushed towards her and bent down to pat her. Poppy licked his face and buried his head out of sight between his arm and body. Suddenly, a small golden cloud came racing up to them. It growled and nuzzled Poppy. “Oh, gosh. I can’t believe you got yourself a puppy!” the boy exclaimed. His parents laughed at the look of shock on his face. “We didn’t,” replied Mom, “This puppy is for Poppy!”

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