根據(jù)前文續(xù)寫：（本文改編自《I survived》系列之《The Bombing of Pearl Harbor, 1941》 Chapter 4+Chapter 5） Danny stood with his mother at the kitchen window of their tiny house. Mom put her arm around Danny. “Just look at that view,” she said. “Can you believe we live here? I think it’s the most beautiful place on earth.” Mom was right; it looked like a postcard out there, with the palm threes swaying in the breeze, the bushes covered with pink and white flowers, and the ocean a sparkling silver strip in the distance. Danny couldn’t stand looking at it. All he wanted was to be back in New York City, looking out his old apartment window at the jumble of dirty buildings, the smoke thick in the air, and his friends. Mom thought that coming here to Hawaii would give Danny a fresh start-just she and Danny. She wanted to get him away from danger and trouble. After a while, Mom kissed Danny good-bye after straightening her white nurse’s cap and went off to work. Slowly Danny stood up, making a plan in his mind for his journey back to New York City. But then he heard a noise in his backyard. There was a crash, a strange squeal, and an earsplitting scream. Danny flung open the back door. Mom’s new pot of flowers lay shattered on the ground. “Was someone in trouble? Or were robbers planning to break in?” thought Danny. He picked up a broom, ready to strike. He didn’t see anyone, but then he caught sight of a small dark head poking out from behind one of the thick bushes. Danny put down the broom and walked over. It was a little kid, maybe three years old. “What the hack was he doing here all by himself? Was he hurt?” thought Danny. “Ahhhhhhhhhh!” the kid screamed. “Hey!” Danny said. The kid turned around. He was grinning like a monkey standing on a mountain of bananas. And he was clutching a little animal of some kind. “Puppy!” the kid said. Danny studied the animal. It was very small and black except for one white ear. He didn’t want to break the kid’s heart, but he was pretty sure it wasn’t a puppy. It looked more like a rat. “My puppy!” the kid said, hugging the poor ugly critter so tight Danny was sure it would pop like a balloon. Danny looked around. The kid was too young to be wandering around on his own. “Who are you?” Danny said, bending down to look the kid in the eye. “Aki!” he said. “Who you?” “I’m Danny,” said Danny. “Danny see my puppy?” Aki held out his poor squished pet like he wanted Danny to give it a big smooch. And then the kid’s eyes got huge. He pointed to something over Danny’s shoulder. “Monster!” he said. Danny spun around and there, moving toward them, was the ugliest animal Danny had ever seen in his life. It was black, the size of a huge dog, with wiry bristles, a pig’s snout, and two huge spiked tusks sprouting right from its face like swords. It did look like a monster. The animal grunted and snorted as it stared at Aki with beady black eyes. Prepare to die! it seemed to be saying. And it seemed the monster was ready to charge at them. Paragraph 1： “Put down the puppy!” Danny said, suddenly understanding:___________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: “Aki want puppy,” he said, throwing his arms around Danny and burying his face in Danny’s chest.__________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ One possible version: “Put down the puppy!” Danny said, suddenly understanding: That was a mother monster, and she thought Aki was stealing her baby. Danny pried the baby out of Aki’s hands. He gently placed it on the ground. The mother rushed up to it, and nudged it with her nose. “My puppy!” Aki screamed. Suddenly, the monster’s sharp tusks aimed right for Aki’s stomach. Danny managed to grab Aki by the seat of his pants and hoist him up just in time. One of the monster’s tusks tore through Danny’s pant leg. Amazingly/Luckily, it missed his flesh. He almost fell, but he regained his balance. With Aki held high, Danny ran across the backyard and into the house, slamming the door. “Aki want puppy,” he said, throwing his arms around Danny and burying his face in Danny’s chest. “Sorry, Aki,” Danny said. “But that puppy is the monster’s baby.” “Not my puppy?” Aki said, eyes getting better. “Then, can we be friends?” Aki asked in a voice sweeter than a chocolate doughnut. He gazed up at Danny with an angelic smile, melting Danny’s heart away. “OK.” smiling Danny, thinking it was not too bad to stay there. Just then, Danny heard someone shouting Aki’s name. It turned out to be Aki’s mom. What an adventure! 文章主題：人與動(dòng)物—“野獸口中智救小男孩” 本文大意： 媽媽和Danny是剛剛從New York City搬過來夏威夷，想要開始新生活的一家人，而Danny其實(shí)不大想來，心里想著原本的城市和朋友，很是孤單，還想回去。有一天，媽媽出去上班了，Danny一個(gè)人在家的時(shí)候，聽到院子里有奇怪的聲音，發(fā)現(xiàn)院子里有個(gè)名叫Aki的小男孩，抱著一個(gè)小動(dòng)物，說是自己的“小狗狗”，但其實(shí)不是小狗，而此時(shí)，有一只丑陋無比的野獸出現(xiàn)了，看似對(duì)兩個(gè)孩子很不友好。Danny機(jī)智地保護(hù)了Aki并獲得了友誼。 適合學(xué)生多少詞匯量： 3000左右 學(xué)生收獲： 本文有大量關(guān)于“險(xiǎn)境脫身”、“野獸攻擊”及體現(xiàn)小朋友神態(tài)的詞匯和句式，另外，還有部分關(guān)于景色的地道描寫，可以豐富人與動(dòng)物之間續(xù)寫題材的寫作內(nèi)容。 本文中核心、生疏詞匯及拓展: 1. sway (v.) to move slowly from side to side 搖擺 翻譯：樹葉在溫柔的微風(fēng)中輕輕飄動(dòng)。 _______________________________________________________________________________ 2. poke (v.) to (cause something to) appear or stretch out from behind or through something else 探出來 翻譯： 她輕輕地敲了敲我的門，把腦袋探了進(jìn)來。 _______________________________________________________________________________ 3. clutch (v.) a. to hold tightly (in the hands) (用手)緊緊抓住 翻譯：她手中正緊緊地抓著一個(gè)娃娃。 _______________________________________________________________________________ b. (with “at”) (with at) to try to take hold of 猛地想要抓住 翻譯：我緊緊地抓住一塊漂浮的木板，以免淹死。 _______________________________________________________________________________ 4. fling (v.) a. to rush 猛沖 翻譯：他一下把門沖開了。 _______________________________________________________________________________ b. to throw with great force用力扔 翻譯：他把一塊磚頭扔破了玻璃。 _______________________________________________________________________________ 5. charge (v.) to rush or to move quickly (towards) 沖 翻譯：這只老虎似乎準(zhǔn)備好沖向他了。 _______________________________________________________________________________ 6. nudge (v.) to push something or someone gently, especially to push someone with your elbow (= the middle part of your arm where it bends) to attract the person's attention （用手肘等身體部位）輕推 翻譯：孩子們正一起咯咯地笑著，用手肘輕輕推搡著。 _______________________________________________________________________________ 原文自我檢測(cè)： 環(huán)境描寫篇： 1. 這里的風(fēng)景看上去就像是明信片一樣，棕櫚樹在微風(fēng)中輕輕搖曳，灌木叢上裹著粉色和白色的花朵，遠(yuǎn)處的海面上泛著銀色帶子般的光芒。 _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ 2. 他聽到后院有噪音。有什么東西打碎的聲音，緊接著是一陣奇怪的尖叫，還有一陣震耳欲聾的驚叫聲。 _______________________________________________________________________________ 3. 媽媽的新花盆碎了一地。 _______________________________________________________________________________ Danny的動(dòng)作篇： 1. Danny猛地把門打開。 _______________________________________________________________________________ 2. 他拿起一把掃帚，準(zhǔn)備隨時(shí)出擊。 _______________________________________________________________________________ 萌趣Aki篇： 1. 他看到一個(gè)小小的腦袋從一棵茂密的小樹后探了出來。 _______________________________________________________________________________ 2. 他手上抓著一只小動(dòng)物。 _______________________________________________________________________________ 3. 他咧著嘴笑著，像是一只小猴子站在一大堆香蕉上那樣開心。 _______________________________________________________________________________ 4. “我的小狗狗！”這個(gè)孩子說著，緊緊地把這個(gè)可憐又有點(diǎn)丑丑的小家伙抱住，以至于Danny覺得它隨時(shí)會(huì)像氣球一樣被擠爆。 _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ 5. Aki把他那被擠扁的小寵物伸手遞過來，想要給Danny親親抱抱。 _______________________________________________________________________________ 見到猛獸驚奇篇： 1. 然后，這個(gè)孩子的眼睛睜得很大。他用手指著Danny身后說：“有野獸！”Danny轉(zhuǎn)過身去，然后他看到一只有生以來見到的最丑陋的動(dòng)物正慢慢朝他們過來。 _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ 猛獸描寫篇： 1. 它黑黑的，身材和大狗差不多，身上長(zhǎng)了又短又硬的毛，鼻子和豬一樣，還有一對(duì)像劍一樣鋒利的尖尖的獠牙從嘴巴兩邊長(zhǎng)出來。 _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ 2. 這個(gè)動(dòng)物用它又黑又圓的小眼睛盯著Aki，一邊用鼻子發(fā)出咕嚕聲。 _______________________________________________________________________________ 3. 這只猛獸似乎準(zhǔn)備沖向他們倆了。 _______________________________________________________________________________ 范文自我檢測(cè)： Paragraph 1： 1. Danny撬開Aki的手臂，將小幼崽寶寶奪了出來。 _______________________________________________________________________________ 2. 這媽媽沖向它，用自己的鼻子輕推著自己的寶寶。 _______________________________________________________________________________ 3. 突然，這只猛獸的獠牙對(duì)準(zhǔn)了Aki的肚子。 _______________________________________________________________________________ 4. Danny好不容易一把抓住了Aki的褲襠部分，及時(shí)將其托舉起來。 _______________________________________________________________________________ 5. 這只野獸的一顆獠牙扯破了Danny的一條褲腿。 _______________________________________________________________________________ 6. 幸運(yùn)的是，它沒有咬到他的肉。 _______________________________________________________________________________ 7. 舉著Aki，Danny穿過后院，跑進(jìn)了房子里，猛地關(guān)上了門。 _______________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2： 1. “Aki要小狗狗嘛！” 他說著，一把抱住Danny，把臉埋進(jìn)Danny的胸口。 _______________________________________________________________________________ 2. Aki問道，聲音比巧克力甜甜圈還甜。 _______________________________________________________________________________ 3. 他抬頭凝視著Danny，露出天使般的微笑，將Danny的心都融化了。 _______________________________________________________________________________ 參考答案： 核心、生疏詞匯拓展仿寫： 1. The leaves sway in the gentle breeze. 2. She knocked at my door, poking her head in. 3. a. She was clutching a doll. b. I clutched at a floating piece of wood to save myself from drowning. 4. a. He flung the door open. b. He flung a brick through the window. 5. The tiger seemed to be ready to charge at him. 6. The children were giggling and nudging each other. 原文自我檢測(cè)： 環(huán)境描寫篇： 1. It looked like a postcard out there, with the palm threes swaying in the breeze, the bushes covered with pink and white flowers, and the ocean a sparkling silver strip in the distance. 2. He heard a noise in his backyard. There was a crash, a strange squeal, and an earsplitting scream. 3. Mom’s new pot of flowers lay shattered on the ground. Danny動(dòng)作篇： 1. Danny flung open the back door. 2. He picked up a broom, ready to strike. 萌趣Aki篇： 1. He caught sight of a small dark head poking out from behind one of the thick bushes. 2. He was clutching a little animal of some kind. 3. He was grinning like a monkey standing on a mountain of bananas. 4. “My puppy!” the kid said, hugging the poor ugly critter so tight Danny was sure it would pop like a balloon. 5. Aki held out his poor squished pet like he wanted Danny to give it a big smooch. 見到猛獸驚奇篇： And then the kid’s eyes got huge. He pointed to something over Danny’s shoulder. “Monster!” he said. Danny spun around and there, moving toward them, was the ugliest animal Danny had ever seen in his life. 猛獸描寫篇： 1. It was black, the size of a huge dog, with wiry bristles, a pig’s snout, and two huge spiked tusks sprouting right from its face like swords. 2. The animal grunted and snorted as it stared at Aki with beady black eyes. 范文自我檢測(cè) Paragraph 1： 1. Danny pried the baby out of Aki’s hands. 2. The mother rushed up to it, and nudged it with her nose. 3. Suddenly, the monster’s sharp tusks aimed right for Aki’s stomach. 4. Danny managed to grab Aki by the seat of his pants and hoist him up just in time. 5. One of the monster’s tusks tore through Danny’s pant leg. 6. Amazingly/Luckily, it missed his flesh. 7. With Aki held high, Danny ran across the backyard and into the house, slamming the door. Paragraph 2： 1. “Aki want puppy,” he said, throwing his arms around Danny and burying his face in Danny’s legs. 2. Aki asked in a voice sweeter than a chocolate doughnut. 3. He gazed up at Danny with an angelic smile, melting Danny’s heart away. 更多的關(guān)于野獸的描寫： 動(dòng)作描寫： growl/howl 嚎叫 snarl 齜牙低吼 circle back and forth 來回轉(zhuǎn)圈 spring at 朝……撲過去 charge at朝……沖過去 hurl oneself at…猛沖過去 leap at 朝……跳過去 fling oneself at 向……跳過去 smash sb down 把某人撞倒 gain on sb 逼近 plunge into 跳進(jìn) curl up 蜷縮著 advance cautiously 小心翼翼地前進(jìn) stagger limply about 瘸著腿走來走去 his tongue lolling out of his mouth 舌頭伸出來 His strength ebbed and eyes glazed. 力氣沒有了，眼睛呆滯了。 The tongue was out and lolling, the white fangs showing white. 舌頭伸出來耷拉著，露出白色的獠牙。 sink its teeth in the neck of…用牙齒咬住……的脖子 put forth all one’s strength 使出全身力氣 buckle down 全力以赴做某事 Danny jerked back his leg, ripping his pants away from the tusk/fang. Danny把腿猛地往后退去，把褲子從獠牙上扯了下來。 長(zhǎng)相描述： gaunt adj. 消瘦憔悴的 battle-scarred adj. 傷痕累累的 cunning adj. 狡猾的，奸詐的 furry adj. 毛茸茸的 知識(shí)遷移：嘗試用上文中的語言遷移續(xù)寫2017年6月浙江卷讀后續(xù)寫的第一段 On a bright, warm July afternoon, Mac Hollan, a primary school teacher, was cycling from his home to Alaka with friends. One of his friends had stopped to make a bicycle repair, but they had encouraged Mac to carry on, and they would catch up with him soon. As Mac pedaled along alone, he thought fondly of his wife and two young daughters at home. He hoped to show them this beautiful place someday. Then Mac heard quick and loud breathing behind him. “Man, that’s a big dog!” he thought. But when he looked to the side, he saw instantly that it wasn’t a dog at all, but a wolf, quickly catching up with him. Mac’s heart jumped. He found out his can of bear spray. With one hand on the bars, he fires the spray at the wolf. A bright red cloud enveloped the anima, and to Mac’s belief, it fell back, shaking his head. But a minute later, it was by his side again. Then it attacked the back of Mac’s bike, tearing open his tent bag. He fired at the wolf a second time, and again, it fell back only to quickly restart the chase. Mac was pedaling hard now. He waved and yelled at passing cars but was careful not to slow down. He saw a steep uphill climb before him. He knew that once he hit the hill, he’d be easy caught up and the wolf’s teeth would be tearing into his flesh. At this moment, Paul and Becky were driving their car on their way to Alaska. They didn’t think much of it when they saw two cyclists repairing their bike on the side of the road. A bit later, they spotted what they, too, assumed was a dog running alongside a man on a bike. As they got closer, they realized that the dog was a wolf. Mac heard a large vehicle behind him. He pulled in front of it as the wolf was catching up fast, just a dozen yards away now. Paragraph 1: The car abruptly stopped in front of him.____________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: A few minutes later, the other two cyclists arrived. ____________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ One possible version: The car abruptly stopped in front of him. Paul shouted through the window, “Get in the car!” Mac jumped off the bicycle and tried to get into the car. Meanwhile, the wolf gained on him. Mac spun around, only to find the wolf’s sharp teeth aiming right for him. The next minute, the beast charged at him. Prepare to die! it seemed to be saying. “Quick!”, urged the couple, grabbing Mac by his arms, trying to drag him into the car. Luckily, it missed his flesh. Mac managed to climb into the car. The creature sprang at/flung at/hurled itself at the door several times, but failed. It circled back and forth, growling. Its tongue was out and lolling, the white fangs showing white. Becky threw some food out of the window and Paul blared the horn to make an alert. At length, the wolf left and vanished from sight.

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