根據(jù)前文續(xù)寫： Love of Life Jack London Two men walked slowly, one after the other, through the shallow water of a stream. All they could see were stones and earth. The stream ran cold over their feet. They had blanket packs on their backs. They had guns, but no bullets; matches, but no food. Suddenly the man who followed fell over a stone. He hurt his foot badly and called: "Hey, Bill, I've hurt my foot." Bill continued straight on without looking back.? The man was alone in the empty land, but he was not lost. He knew the way to their camp, where he would find food and bullets. He struggled to his feet and limped on. Bill would be waiting for him there, and together they would go south to the Hudson Bay Company. He had not eaten for two days. Often he stopped to pick some small berries and put them into his mouth. The berries were tasteless, and did not satisfy, but he knew he must eat them.?In the evening he built a fire and slept like a dead man. When he woke up, the man took out a small sack. It weighed fifteen pounds. He wasn't sure if he could carry it any longer. But he couldn't leave it behind. He had to take it with him. He put it back into his pack, rose to his feet and staggered on.? His foot hurt, but it was nothing compared with his hunger, which made him go on until darkness fell. His blanket was wet, but he knew only that he was hungry. Through his restless sleep he dreamed of banquets and of food. The man woke up cold and sick, and found himself lost. But the small sack was still with him. As he dragged himself along, the sack became heavier and heavier. The man opened the sack, which was full of small pieces of gold. He left half the gold on a rock.? Eleven days passed, days of rain and cold. One day he found the bones of a deer. There was no meat on them. The man broke the bones and he sucked and chewed on them like an animal. Would he, too, be bones tomorrow? And why not? This was life. Only life hurt. There was no hurt in death. To die was to sleep. Then why was he not ready to die? He, as a man, no longer strove. It was the life in him, unwilling to die, that drove him on.? One morning he woke up beside a river. Slowly he followed it with his eyes and saw it entering into a shining sea. When he saw a ship on the sea, he closed his eyes. He knew there could be no ship, no sea, in this land. A vision, he told himself. He heard a noise behind him, and turned around. A wolf, old and sick, was coming slowly toward him. This was real, he thought. The man turned back, but the sea and the ship were still there. He didn't understand. Had he been walking north, away from the camp, toward the sea? He stood up and started slowly toward the ship, knowing full well the sick wolf was following him. In the afternoon, he found some bones of a man. Beside the bones was a small sack of gold, like his own. So Bill had carried his gold to the end. He would carry Bill's gold to the ship. Ha—ha! He would have the last laugh on Bill. His laughing sounded like the low cry of an animal. The wolf cried back. The man stopped suddenly and turned away. How could he laugh about Bill's bones and take his gold?? Paragraph 1： The man was very sick, now. He crawled about, on hands and knees. _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: Three weeks later, when the man felt better, he told them his story. _________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ One possible version: The man was very sick, now. He crawled about, on hands and knees. He had lost everything—his blanket, his gun, and his gold. Only the wolf stayed with him hour after hour. At last he could go on no further. He fell. The wolf came close to him, but the man was ready. He got on top of the wolf and held its mouth closed. Then he bit it with his last strength. The wolf's blood streamed into his mouth. Only love of life gave him enough strength. He held the wolf with his teeth and killed it, and then he fell on his back and slept.?The men on the ship saw a strange object lying on the beach. It was moving toward them—perhaps twenty feet an hour. The men went over to look and could hardly believe it was a man.? Three weeks later, when the man felt better, he told them his story. But there was one strange thing—he seemed to be afraid that there wasn't enough food on the ship. The men also noticed that he was getting fat. They gave him less food, but still he grew fatter with each day. Then one day they saw him put a lot of bread under his shirt. They examined his bed and found food under his blanket. The men understood. He would recover from it, they said. 文章賞析： 《熱愛生命》是杰克倫敦的代表中篇小說，該小說講述了一個悲壯的故事，生動地展示了人性的偉大與堅強。小說將主人公置于絕望的惡劣環(huán)境中，與寒冷、饑餓、疾病、野獸做斗爭，在一系列的生死抉擇中，主人公展現(xiàn)出了人性中永不放棄熱愛生命的執(zhí)著精神，歌頌了生命的堅韌與頑強，給人以震撼人心的力量。原文材料是根據(jù)原版中篇小說的改編版，以適用于高中學(xué)段學(xué)生的理解和學(xué)習(xí)，并且該文本保留了故事的完整性，雖是改編作品，里面依然留有大量豐富的記敘文描寫語言，利用動作、形態(tài)、心理、環(huán)境描寫來刻畫人物，發(fā)展情節(jié)，設(shè)置懸念，抬升沖突，使整個故事引人入勝，過程扣人心弦，結(jié)局震撼人心(李浩）。 適合學(xué)生多少詞匯量： 3000左右 學(xué)生收獲： 本文有大量關(guān)于“走”、“野獸搏斗”的詞匯和句式，另外，還有部分關(guān)于景色的地道描寫，可以豐富人與動物之間續(xù)寫題材的寫作內(nèi)容。 。 本文中核心、生疏詞匯及拓展: 1.limp(v.) to walk impeded by some physical limitation or injury 跛行;不穩(wěn)定地進行 翻譯：我步行，確切點說，是一瘸一拐地走了兩英里才回到家。 _______________________________________________________________________________ 2.stagger (v.) to walk with great difficulty蹣跚 翻譯：那人為什么搖搖晃晃地在屋里走來走去。 _______________________________________________________________________________ 3.sack (n.) a bag made of paper or plastic for holding customer’s purchases 麻袋，包 翻譯：入侵者把所有的東西洗劫一空。 _______________________________________________________________________________ 4. banquet (n.) a meal that is well prepared and greatly enjoyed 宴會 翻譯：他舉行宴會慶祝自己的生日。 _______________________________________________________________________________ 5. strive (v.) to attempt by employing effort 努力；奮斗 翻譯：游泳者正在和激浪搏斗。 _______________________________________________________________________________ 原文自我檢測： 環(huán)境描寫篇： 1.兩個人一前一后慢慢地趟過一條淺淺的小溪。他們只能看到石頭和泥土。溪水冰冷地漫過他們的腳。 _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ 2.十一天過去了，連日陰雨陰冷。 _______________________________________________________________________________ 3.一天早晨，他在河邊醒來。慢慢地，他的眼睛順著它望去，看見它進入一片閃光的大海。 _______________________________________________________________________________ 行走篇： 1. 比爾頭也不回地繼續(xù)往前走。 _______________________________________________________________________________ 2. 他掙扎著站起來，一瘸一拐地走著。 _______________________________________________________________________________ 3. 他把它放回背包，站起來，蹣跚地走著。 _______________________________________________________________________________ 4. 當(dāng)他拖著沉重的步子前進時，麻袋變得越來越重。 _______________________________________________________________________________ 5. 他站起身來，慢慢地朝船走去，他知道那只病狼正跟著他。 _______________________________________________________________________________ 饑餓篇： 1.他的腳很疼，但和他的饑餓相比根本不算什么，饑餓使他堅持到天黑。 _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ 2. 他的毯子濕了，但他只知道他餓了。 _______________________________________________________________________________ 3. 在他不安的睡眠中，他夢見宴會和食物。 _______________________________________________________________________________ 4. 一天，他發(fā)現(xiàn)了鹿的骨頭。上面沒有肉。那人打斷骨頭，像動物一樣吮吸、咀嚼它們。 _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ 熱愛生命篇: 驅(qū)使他前進的是他那不愿死的生命。 _______________________________________________________________________________ 范文自我檢測： Paragraph 1： 1. 他爬來爬去，手腳并用。 _______________________________________________________________________________ 2. 他爬到狼身上，握住狼的嘴。 _______________________________________________________________________________ 3. 然后他用最后的力氣咬了下去。 _______________________________________________________________________________ 4. 狼的血流進了他的嘴里。 _______________________________________________________________________________ 5. 他用牙齒咬住狼，把它咬死，然后仰面倒下睡覺。 _______________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2： 但有一件奇怪的事——他似乎害怕船上沒有足夠的食物。 _______________________________________________________________________________ 參考答案： 核心、生疏詞匯拓展仿寫： 1. I walked, or rather limped, the two miles home. 2. Why is that man staggering about the room like that? 3. The invaders put all to the sack. 4. He celebrated his birthday with a banquet. 5. The swimmer was striving against the current. 原文自我檢測： 環(huán)境描寫篇： Two men walked slowly, one after the other, through the shallow water of a stream. All they could see were stones and earth. The stream ran cold over their feet. Eleven days passed, days of rain and cold. 3.One morning he woke up beside a river. Slowly he followed it with his eyes and saw it entering into a shining sea. 行走篇： 1.Bill continued straight on without looking back.? 2.He struggled to his feet and limped on. 3.He put it back into his pack, rose to his feet and staggered on. 4.As he dragged himself along, the sack became heavier and heavier. 5.He stood up and started slowly toward the ship, knowing full well the sick wolf was following him. 饑餓篇： His foot hurt, but it was nothing compared with his hunger, which made him go on until darkness fell. His blanket was wet, but he knew only that he was hungry. Through his restless sleep he dreamed of banquets and of food. One day he found the bones of a deer. There was no meat on them. The man broke the bones and he sucked and chewed on them like an animal. 熱愛生命篇： It was the life in him, unwilling to die, that drove him on. 范文自我檢測 Paragraph 1： 1. He crawled about, on hands and knees. 2. He got on top of the wolf and held its mouth closed. 3. Then he bit it with his last strength. 4. The wolf's blood streamed into his mouth. 5. He held the wolf with his teeth and killed it, and then he fell on his back and slept. Paragraph 2： But there was one strange thing—he seemed to be afraid that there wasn't enough food on the ship. 更多的關(guān)于野獸的描寫（周陶陶）： 動作描寫： growl/howl 嚎叫 snarl 齜牙低吼 circle back and forth 來回轉(zhuǎn)圈 spring at 朝……撲過去 charge at朝……沖過去 hurl oneself at…猛沖過去 leap at 朝……跳過去 fling oneself at 向……跳過去 smash sb down 把某人撞倒 gain on sb 逼近 plunge into 跳進 curl up 蜷縮著 advance cautiously 小心翼翼地前進 stagger limply about 瘸著腿走來走去 his tongue lolling out of his mouth 舌頭伸出來 His strength ebbed and eyes glazed. 力氣沒有了，眼睛呆滯了。 The tongue was out and lolling, the white fangs showing white. 舌頭伸出來耷拉著，露出白色的獠牙。 sink its teeth in the neck of…用牙齒咬住……的脖子 put forth all one’s strength 使出全身力氣 buckle down 全力以赴做某事 Danny jerked back his leg, ripping his pants away from the tusk/fang. Danny把腿猛地往后退去，把褲子從獠牙上扯了下來。 長相描述： gaunt adj. 消瘦憔悴的 battle-scarred adj. 傷痕累累的 cunning adj. 狡猾的，奸詐的 furry adj. 毛茸茸的 知識遷移：嘗試用上文中的語言遷移續(xù)寫2016年10月浙江卷讀后續(xù)寫的第一段 閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進行續(xù)寫，使之構(gòu)成一個完整的故事。 One weekend in July, Jane and her husband, Tom, had driven three hours to camp overnight by a lake in the forest. Unfortunately, on the way an unpleasant subject came up and they started to quarrel. By the time they reached the lake, Jane was so angry that she said to Tom. “I'm going to find a better spot for us to camp" and walked away. With no path to follow, Jane just walked on for quite a long time. After she had climbed to a high place. she turned around, hoping to see the lake. To her surprise, she saw nothing but forest and, far beyond, a snow-capped mountain top. She suddenly realized that she was lost. “Tom! "she cried. "Help!" No reply. If only she had not left her mobile phone in that bag with Tom. Jane kept moving, but the farther she walked, the more confused she became. As night was beginning to fall, Jane was so tired that she had to stop for the night. Lying awake in the dark, Jane wanted very much to be with Tom and her family. She wanted to hold him and tell him how much she loved him. Jane rose at the break of day, hungry and thirsty. She could hear water trickling (滴落） somewhere at a distance. Quickly she followed the sound to a stream. To her great joy, she also saw some berry bushes. She drank and ate a few berries. Never in her life had she tasted anything better. Feeling stronger now. Jane began to walk along the stream and hope it would lead her to the lake. As she picked her way carefully along the stream, Jane heard a helicopter. Is that for me? Unfortunately, the trees made it impossible for people to see her from above. A few minutes later, another helicopter flew overhead. Jane took off her yellow blouse, thinking that she should go to an open area and flag them if they came back again. But no more helicopter came and it was getting dark. The temperature got lower and it was bound to be a night of cold. Jane hurriedly put on her yellow blouse but was seized by fatigue and horror. Suddenly, she fell over a stone. However, she struggled to her feet and limped on, hoping to meet Tom as soon as possible. She dragged herself along slowly and cautiously until she found a flat rock to rest herself. Lying on her back, Jane felt very lonely, regretted quarreling with Tom and missed Tom much. Through her restless sleep, she dreamed of banquets and of food. ,

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