（2017年6月浙江卷）
On a bright, warm July afternn, Mac Hllan, a primary schl teacher, was cycling frm his hme t Alaska with his friends. One f his friends had stpped t make a bicycle repair, but they had encuraged Mac t carry n, and they wuld catch up with him sn. As Mac pedaled(騎行) alng alne, he thught fndly f his wife and tw yung daughters at hme. He hped t shw them this beautiful place smeday.
Then Mac heard quick and lud breathing behind him. “Man, that's a big dg!” he thught. But when he lked t the side, he saw instantly that it wasn't a dg at all, but a wlf, quickly catching up with him.
Mac's heart jumped. He fund ut his can f bear spray. With ne hand n the bars, he fired the spray at the wlf. A bright red clud envelped the animal, and t Mac's relief, it fell back, shaking its head. But a minute later, it was by his side again. Then it attacked the back f Mac's bike, tearing pen his tent bag. He fired at the wlf a secnd time, and again, it fell back nly t quickly restart the chase（追趕）。
Mac was pedaling hard nw. He waved and yelled at passing cars but was careful nt t slw dwn. He saw a steep uphill climb befre him. He knew that nce he hit the hill, he'd be easy caught up and the wlf's teeth wuld be tearing int his flesh.
At this mment, Paul and Beeky were driving their car n their way t Alaska. They didn't think much f it when they saw tw cyclists repairing their bike n the side f the rad. A bit later, they sptted what they, t, assumed was a dg running alngside a man n a bike. As they gt clser, they realized that the dg was a wlf. Mac heard a large vehicle behind him. He pulled in frnt f it as the wlf was catching up fast, just a dzen yards away nw.
注意：
1．所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；
2．應(yīng)使用5個以上短文中標有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語；
3．續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語已為你寫好；
4．續(xù)寫完成后，請用下劃線標出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語。
Paragragh 1:
The car abruptly stpped in frnt f him.
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Paragragh 2:
A few minutes later, the ther tw cyclists arrived.
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真題解析
2.1 整體把握：
2.2逐句寫作：
第一段：
1. 麥克跳下自行車，沖向車門。
Mac jumped ff his bicycle and rushed t the dr f the car.
2. 但麥克還沒來得及開門，狼就追上了，撲了上去。
But befre Mac culd pen the dr, the wlf had caught up and jumped t attack.
3. 幸運的是，魔法噴霧第三次救了麥克。
Luckily, the magic spray saved Mac a third time.
4. 看到狼退后，保羅迅速打開車門，受驚的人很快爬上車，重重地關(guān)上身后的車門。
Seeing the wlf back ff, Paul quickly unlcked the dr, and the frightened man climbed int the car in n time, shutting the dr behind him heavily.
5. 貝西從后窗往外看，看見狼站在麥克的自行車上，好像那是一場殺戮。
Bechy lked ut f the back windw and saw the wlf standing ver Mac’s bicycle as if it were a kill.
6. 不久，那只動物跑了。
Sn after, the animal ran ff.
第二段：
7. 他們對所見的感到震驚，于是加入保羅的行列。
They were shcked at what they saw and jined Paul.
8. 麥家的一個朋友挑出一些生肉扔給了狼。
One f Macs friends picked ut sme raw meat and threw it t the wlf.
9. 狼對得到的東西很滿意，就跑進了樹林。
Satisfied with what he gt, the wlf ran int the wds.
10. 麥克感謝保羅和貝基，“你停下來救我，我真是太感謝你了，我還活著，這都歸功于你?！?br>Mac thanked Paul and Becky, “Hw grateful I am that yu stpped t save me and I we it t yu that I’m still alive.”
11. 由于麥克受傷，這三個人不得不放棄剩下的旅程回家。
As Mac gt injured, the three men had t give up the rest f their jurney and returned hme.
2.3 范文賞析
The car abruptly stpped in frnt f him. Mac jumped ff his bicycle and rushed t the dr f the car. But befre Mac culd pen the dr, the wlf had caught up and jumped t attack. Luckily, the magic spray saved Mac a third time. Seeing the wlf back ff, Paul quickly unlcked the dr, and the frightened man climbed int the car in n time, shutting the dr behind him heavily. Bechy lked ut f the back windw and saw the wlf standing ver Mac’s bicycle as if it were a kill. Sn after, the animal ran ff.
A few minutes later, the ther tw cyclists arrived. They were shcked at what they saw and jined Paul. One f Macs friends picked ut sme raw meat and threw it t the wlf. Satisfied with what he gt, the wlf ran int the wds. Mac thanked Paul and Becky, “Hw grateful I am that yu stpped t save me and I we it t yu that I’m still alive.” As Mac gt injured, the three men had t give up the rest f their jurney and returned hme.
素材積累
3.1 情緒類素材積累
主題語境
人與社會--人與環(huán)境、人與動植物
語篇話題
本篇讀后續(xù)寫為記敘文，文章大意為Mac和朋友們在騎行的過程中，遭遇了狼的追趕；Paul和Beeky開車路過，幫著Mac擺脫狼的追趕。
情節(jié)梳理
故事要素
when：On a bright, warm July afternn
where：the way t Alaska
wh：Mac Hllan and his friends; Paul and Beeky
what：Mac Hllan was cycling frm his hme t Alaska and they met a wlf. Paul and Beeky drve and helped them escape frm the wlf.
情節(jié)走向
通過第一段首句“ The car abruptly stpped in frnt f him.”可預(yù)測，續(xù)寫思路為：Mac上車--狼追上來--麥克與狼智斗--Mac成功上車
通過第二段首句“A few minutes later, the ther tw cyclists arrived.”可預(yù)測，續(xù)寫思路為：兩人震驚--兩人與狼智斗--狼離開--大家脫離險境
絕望 desperately/hpelessly
令人害怕的 frightening/terrifying
毫不猶豫 withut hesitatin
3.2 動作類素材積累
消失 disappear/fade away/be gne
上車 get in /hp in
大聲尖叫 scream ludly/shriek ludly
沖出 rush ut f
轉(zhuǎn)頭 turn ne’s head arund
沖進 rush int
追趕 chase after
扔出 thrw ut
一躍而起 jump t ne’s feet 3.3 環(huán)境描寫類素材積累
太陽開始緩緩升起，給山披上了一層金紗。
The sun began t rise in the sky, bathing the muntain in glden light.
夜幕降臨。
The night settled in.
天空非常黑暗，風在她的四周可怕地怒吼著。
It was very dark, and the wind hwled hrribly arund her.
天空烏云密布。
The sky is cvered with dark cluds.
天氣晴朗，吹來陣陣清風。
The day was bright with a fresh breeze blwing.
一場暴雪侵襲了整個城市。
A snwstrm blanketed the entire city.
四、模擬演練
練習（一）
閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)，使之構(gòu)成一個完整的故事。
Ever since he was a kid, Clin had taken great interest in hiking (遠足）. T celebrate his 40th birthday, he planned t climb Muntain Sunshine.
The night befre his jurney, Clin filled his backpack with hiking ples, a hmemade hamburger, and sme ther necessities. He drve ff at 7 am the next day, his muntain bike in the trunk(后備箱）。When he was already n the way, he suddenly realized there was a pssibility f bear attack.
Abut an hur later, he arrived at a camp and checked in.“Is there anything yu need?”Vit,the camp manager, asked him.
“Bear spray(驅(qū)熊噴霧），”said Clin.
After finding a bttle, Vit ffered him a ride. They trucked alng a rad until the frest gt t thick. As Clin put his muntain bike against a bush s that he culd recver it n the way back, Vit said, “I'll cme fr yu if yu're nt back when the night falls." “Nthing t wrry abut,” Clin replied in a cnfident vice.
With the bear spray in ne pcket,Clin started hiking.He marked his trail(足跡，蹤跡） and made lts f nise t drive away any curius animals.
Befre he knew it, it was getting dark. Nt wanting t get caught in the dark, and satisfied with what he'd finished that day, he started t climb dwn the muntain, and sn recvered his bike.
As he passed a marker shwing 3 kilmeters away frm the camp, he suddenly stpped his bike-a bear std in the middle f the narrw rad,sme hundred meters away. Knwing it culd easily attack him if he sped up, Clin decided nt t anger the bear.
注意：
1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；
2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。
Paragraph 1: The animal came in his directin, clser and clser.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph 2: At that very mment, a truck stpped right in frnt f him.
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練習（二）
閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)，使之構(gòu)成一個完整的故事。
It was a ht July day in Philadelphia. The five bys I was with had been sick f playing marbles and burning hles in dry leaves. S when little Ned suggested climbing the cliff, the rest f kids all agreed excitedly, except me. I hesitated. I lnged t be brave and active, like them, but I’d been a sickly child mst f my eight years and I actually wasn’t as strng as the ther bys.
“Cme n!”Called Jerry, my best friend. “Just being sick is n reasn t be a cward（膽小鬼）.” “I’m cming!” I yelled, and ran alng after them. Thrugh the park and int the wds we went, finally we std beneath the near vertical（垂直的）wall f the cliff, abut 60 feet high. T me it lked like the very symbl f the Frbidden and Impssible.
One by ne, the ther bys climbed upward, finding handhlds and tehlds n rcks. I hung back until the thers were partway up; then trembling and sweating, I began t climb. A hand here, a ft there, my heart punding in my skinny chest, I made my way up and up. At sme pint, I lked back and was hrrified. The grund at the base f the cliff seemed very far belw; ne slip and I wuld fall. But the bys were talking ludly and happily abve me. In a few minutes they started up t the tp while I still struggled and crawled, far behind.
“Hey, wait,” I begged. Sadly, they ignred my request and cntinued their way t the tp, frm where they wuld walk hme by an easier rute. Befre they left, they glanced dwn at me. “Yu can stay if yu want t”, teased Ned. Jerry lked cncerned, but he went with the thers.
I lked dwn and was vercme by dizziness; a nameless frce seemed t be dragging me t fall ff. I grasped the rck as the wrld spun arund. I culd never climb back dwn. It was much t far t g, t dangerus.
注意：1. 續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；
2. 請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。
Paragraph 1: Hwever the way up t the tp was even wrse—higher, steeper, mre challenging.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2: I didn’t knw hw lng it had passed until a familiar vice came belw.
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閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。
At first, Michael didn’t see the black smke r flames shting frm the windws f his neighbrs’ hme. He and his wife had just parked arund the crner frm their wn huse when they gt a call frm ne f his daughters: “The huse next dr is n fire!” He went t check. That’s when he saw tw wmen and a girl helpless and heartbrken n their drway.
“The baby’s in there!” ne f the wmen cried. Thugh the fire department had been called, Michael, then 64, immediately ran inside. “The baby” was 8-year-ld Tiara, the wman’s granddaughter and a playmate f Michael’s three yungest kids.
Entering the burning huse was like “running int a bucket f black paint”. The thick smke caused Michael t stumble blindly arund, burned his eyes, and made it impssible t breathe. The cnditins wuld have been dangerus fr anyne, but fr Michael, wh has severe lung disease, they were life-threatening.
After a few minutes in the smke-filled huse, he retreated utside t catch his breath. “Where is Tiara?” he asked desperately.
“The secnd flr,” her aunt shuted back.
Michael knew he culdn’t hld his breath fr lng. Hwever, taking a deep breath, he went in a secnd time. The darkness was verwhelming. Yet because the huse had a similar design t his, he made it t the secnd flr. He turned t the right and was met by intense heat. He was already ut f breath.
“Baby girl, where are yu?”
His thrat and lungs burned as if he’d inhaled fire instead f the smke in the air. Every blink stung his eyes. All he culd hear was the crackling and ppping f burning wd. Then a sft but distinct man emerged. Still unable t see, Michael fell t his knees n the ht wd flr. He crawled tward the sund, feeling arund fr any sign f the girl. An unlucky thught crssed his mind: I’m prbably gnna die up here.
注意：
1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；
2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。
Paragraph 1: Finally, Michael tuched smething.
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Paragraph 2: Tiara was safe nw; hwever, Michael fainted dwn t the grund, uncnscius.
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范文賞析
練習（一）
The animal came in his directin,clser and clser. Hands shaking,Clin grabbed the hamburger ut f his backpack, and threw it beside the bear, hping it wuld attract the animal. Hwever,the bear just tk ne smell, and then turned back, walking n. With the distance getting s clse,Clin tk ut the spray quickly and fired it at the bear. T his relief, it fell back, shaking its head.Seeing this,Clin rde tward the camp as quickly as he culd.Sadly,a mment later.he heard the bear raring and running after him.
At that very mment,a truck stpped right in frnt f him."Get in!" Smene shuted.It was Vit! Withut any hesitatin, Clin jumped ff his bike and gt int the truck, shutting the dr just befre the bear caught him. S angry was the bear that it kept raring and pushing the truck vilently. After what seemed ages,it gave up,turned arund, and disappeared int the wds, With his heart still in his thrat. Clin hugged his life-saver and thanked him again and again. Perhaps, he wuld never frget the life-risking experience fr the rest f his life.
練習（二）
Hwever the way up t the tp was even wrse—higher, steeper, mre challenging. I wuld never make it. I heard smene sbbing and maning; I wndered wh it was and realized that it was I. The ther bys must have been hme. Time dragged. And with each passing minute, my legs and arms grew sre/numb. Smething rlled dwn my cheeks. It was tears r sweat, r bth. The shadws gradually lengthened, the sun disappeared frm the treetps beynd the clearing belw, and dusk began t gather. The grund belw the cliff became dim. Can yu imagine hw desperate I was at that time?
I didn’t knw hw lng it had passed until a familiar vice came belw. I glanced dwn! It was my dad with a flashlight. But what culd he d? It was impssible fr him t climb up here and carry me dwn. “Cme n dwn, my brave by. Dinner is ready.” His cmfrting tne seemed t have a magic pwer. Smehw, fllwing his light, I struggled t inch ver ne step. And then anther. That’s hw it went. Finally I tk the last step dwn nt the bttm and int my father’s strng arms, sbbing a little, and then, surprisingly, feeling a sense f immense accmplishment and smething like pride.
練習（三）
Finally, Michael tuched smething. A she, then an ankle — It was Tiara! He scped her int his arms and std. Turning, he fught thrugh the smke and made his way t the utside. Michael put Tiara dwn n the drway. And He started CPR — the first time he’d ever dne s. The wmen std behind him, praying silently. Sn a slight cugh came frm Tiara’s thrat. He gave five mre breaths. She pened her eyes and tk a breath n her wn.
Tiara was safe nw; hwever, Michael fainted dwn t the grund, uncnscius. When he wke up, Michael fund himself in the hspital, surrunded by his neighbrs wh cnstantly said thank-yu t the her. Michael spent ver a week in the hspital. Tiara was released frm the hspital after a few days. The fire sickened Michael’s lung disease, and he feels the effects even tw years later. “It’s a small price t pay,” he always replies. “I’d d it again in a heartbeat. Wuldn’t give it a secnd thught.”

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