熱點(diǎn)12 夢(mèng)想 中國(guó)夢(mèng)無(wú)疑是今年的火爆熱點(diǎn)之一，它為我們的思想帶來(lái)了極大的影響。今天，選擇的2020年中考英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作預(yù)測(cè)話題是：夢(mèng)想。【預(yù)測(cè)題目】（一）某雜志正在征集文章, 主題為《中國(guó)夢(mèng), 我的夢(mèng)》。每個(gè)平凡中國(guó)人的夢(mèng)想?yún)R聚成中國(guó)夢(mèng), 中國(guó)夢(mèng)的實(shí)現(xiàn)在于我們努力實(shí)現(xiàn)各自的夢(mèng)想。你的夢(mèng)想是什么?你打算怎樣實(shí)現(xiàn)?你的夢(mèng)想能為祖國(guó)的未來(lái)做出怎樣的貢獻(xiàn), 能使祖國(guó)發(fā)生怎樣的變化?請(qǐng)你以《中國(guó)夢(mèng), 我的夢(mèng)》為題, 寫(xiě)寫(xiě)自己的夢(mèng)想、計(jì)劃以及將來(lái)祖國(guó)的變化（如環(huán)境、教育、科技、生活等方面）。要求：1. 詞數(shù)80詞左右, 至少使用兩處比較級(jí)；2. 不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名或校名。China's Dream, My Dream____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】China's Dream, My DreamEveryone has his dream. My dream is to be a teacher. I will try my best to study hard .I want to let every student study happily. Now our rivers are cleaner than before. We have our own cars in almost every family and our lives are better than before. It is convenient for us to go out every day. Now we also learn in more ways, we can learn knowledge on the Internet, videos and so on. For us, the better our country is, the better our life will be. I think life in our country is getting better and better.【解析】1.題干解讀：該題目要求包含夢(mèng)想是什么?打算怎樣實(shí)現(xiàn)?夢(mèng)想能為祖國(guó)的未來(lái)做出怎樣的貢獻(xiàn)，能使祖國(guó)發(fā)生怎樣的變化?等，注意要有比較級(jí)的運(yùn)用，對(duì)于比較級(jí)的相關(guān)用法要熟悉。2.例文點(diǎn)評(píng)：例文通過(guò)對(duì)夢(mèng)想是什么?打算怎樣實(shí)現(xiàn)?夢(mèng)想能為祖國(guó)的未來(lái)做出怎樣的貢獻(xiàn)，能使祖國(guó)發(fā)生怎樣的變化等一一講述。語(yǔ)句通順，條理清晰，詞組，短語(yǔ)，句型等運(yùn)用靈活。3.高分亮點(diǎn)：詞組：try my best；want to let；study happily；go out；in our country等；句型：I will try my best to study hard. /Our rivers are cleaner than before./It is convenient for us to go out every day ./For us, the better our country is, the better our life will be. /I think life in our country is getting better and better.【點(diǎn)睛】首先認(rèn)真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點(diǎn)；然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)及每個(gè)要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá)，例如try my best；want to let；study happily；go out；in our country等；然后緊扣要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆寫(xiě)作，在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中，要注意句與句、段與段之間的過(guò)渡，必要時(shí)可適當(dāng)運(yùn)用表示轉(zhuǎn)折、因果、并列、比較等關(guān)系的連詞，使文章過(guò)渡平穩(wěn)，自然流暢，如however；最后，要仔細(xì)檢查有無(wú)單詞拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)誤用等，還要檢查語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無(wú)重復(fù)、啰嗦的語(yǔ)言，大小寫(xiě)是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。 （二）假如你是李華，你的美國(guó)朋友 Tim 給你發(fā)來(lái)電子郵件，詢問(wèn)你有何夢(mèng)想。請(qǐng)你給他 回復(fù)電子郵件，主要內(nèi)容包括：1. 你的夢(mèng)想是什么；2. 你為這個(gè)夢(mèng)想做過(guò)什么；3. 為實(shí)現(xiàn)夢(mèng)想你還需要怎樣努力。要求：1. 內(nèi)容要全面，語(yǔ)言表達(dá)要準(zhǔn)確，語(yǔ)意要通順、連貫；2. 詞數(shù)不少于 80 詞。Dear Tim,How’s it going?                                                                                                     ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua【參考范文】Dear Tim,How’s it going?  As we all know, it’s important for us to have dreams. My dream is to be a doctor because a doctor can cure people and even save people’s life.I still remembered what happened when I was a middle school student. I often went to the local hospital to  see what doctors were doing on weekends. Sometimes I even played games about being doctors and patients. Not only was it interesting but also was educative. However, I will try my best to be admitted by my ideal medical  university. In that case, It will be easier for me to be a doctor. Only in this way can I realize my dream better.Look forward to hearing from you.【解析】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇書(shū)信作文，你的美國(guó)朋友 Tim 給你發(fā)來(lái)電子郵件，詢問(wèn)你有何夢(mèng)想。請(qǐng)你以李華身份給他回復(fù)電子郵件，首先要認(rèn)真審題，根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)及每個(gè)要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá)；然后緊扣要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆寫(xiě)作。2.例文點(diǎn)評(píng)：本文時(shí)態(tài)為一般過(guò)去和一般將來(lái)時(shí)，人稱主要為第一人稱。文章緊扣題目要點(diǎn)，內(nèi)容完整，表述準(zhǔn)確，語(yǔ)言的表述符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。3.高分亮點(diǎn)：短語(yǔ)：save people’s life.；a middle school student；the local hospital；on weekends.；try one’s best to do sth.。句型：In that case, It will be easier for me to be a doctor.；Only in this way can I realize my dream better. ；Look forward to hearing from you. （一）現(xiàn)在許多人在討論“中國(guó)夢(mèng)”（the Chinese dream），我們的祖國(guó)如何早日夢(mèng)想成真，這需要我們每個(gè)中國(guó)人的努力，因?yàn)槲覀兠總€(gè)人的小夢(mèng)想是中國(guó)夢(mèng)的一部分。請(qǐng)以My Dream為題，談?wù)勀愕膲?mèng)想。提示：1、你的夢(mèng)想是什么？2、你為什么有這樣的夢(mèng)想？ 3、你打算怎樣實(shí)現(xiàn)你的夢(mèng)想？____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】My dreamEveryone has his own dream. Some want to be doctors. Others hope to be scientists. My dream is to become a teacher.Teachers can not teach us many things at school, but they do their best to teach us how to learn. Thanks to them, we learn knowledge. And at the same time, we learn how to live a happy life. They spend most time on their students. They are great in my eyes.I hope to be a teacher because I admire teachers. I know it is not easy to make my dream come true. But I decide to study harder from now on. I am sure my dream will come true.【解析】試題分析：這是一篇材料作文。本文所給材料比較詳細(xì)但很簡(jiǎn)單，我們要做的就是用正確的英語(yǔ)把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)。動(dòng)筆前要仔細(xì)考慮，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，也可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知，本文以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)為主，主語(yǔ)是第一人稱。寫(xiě)作亮點(diǎn)：這篇文章主要是以夢(mèng)想為主題。文中使用了do their best、at the same time、thanks to 、from now on等較高級(jí)的短語(yǔ)和詞匯，而且還使用了They spend most time on their students. it is not easy to make my dream come true等句型為文章增色不少。 （二）夢(mèng)想有多大，舞臺(tái)就有多大。人人都有自己的夢(mèng)想，你的夢(mèng)想是什么？請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)和要求用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文。1.要點(diǎn)：1）你的夢(mèng)想是什么；2）你為什么有這樣的夢(mèng)想；3）你打算如何實(shí)現(xiàn)自己的夢(mèng)想。2.要求：1）文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱；2）詞數(shù)100左右。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】My dreamEveryone has his own dream. Some want to be doctors. Others hope to be scientists. My dream is to become a teacher. Teachers can not only teach us many things at school, but they do their best to teach us how we should learn something. Thanks to our teachers, we learn knowledge. And at the same time, we learn how to live a happy life. They spend most time on their students. They are great in my eyes. I want to be a teacher when I grow up because I admire teachers. I know it is easier to said than done. But I have made a decision to study harder. I am sure my dream will come true one day.【解析】1. 題干解讀：文章是一篇命題作文。貼近學(xué)生生活，有較大的發(fā)揮空間，可以根據(jù)自己的不同的夢(mèng)想做具體闡述，寫(xiě)作時(shí)要注意人稱、時(shí)態(tài)的搭配及主謂一致問(wèn)題，寫(xiě)作時(shí)要包含題目中列出的幾個(gè)要點(diǎn)，也可以做適當(dāng)?shù)陌l(fā)揮。2. 例文點(diǎn)評(píng)：這篇短文主要分三段描述。第一段指出自己的夢(mèng)想是什么，第二段說(shuō)明為什么會(huì)有這樣的夢(mèng)想，第三段為自己的夢(mèng)想要付出的一些努力。整個(gè)文章內(nèi)容完整，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，意思連貫，符合邏輯。在文章的結(jié)構(gòu)組織上使用了簡(jiǎn)單句和復(fù)合句，文章脈絡(luò)清晰，自然流暢。3. 高分亮點(diǎn)：短語(yǔ)：want to do；hope to do；not only … but also；疑問(wèn)詞+to do；thanks to；grow up；spend … on；make a decision to。句型：when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句；I am sure+賓語(yǔ)從句；how引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句。 （三）中國(guó)夢(mèng)是目前較熱的話題，你們班級(jí)對(duì)夢(mèng)想這個(gè)話題也進(jìn)行了一次討論。請(qǐng)你以“My dream”為題，寫(xiě)一篇短文。要點(diǎn)如下：1、人人都有夢(mèng)想，夢(mèng)想可大可小。其實(shí)，大夢(mèng)想就是由許多小的夢(mèng)想構(gòu)成的。2、作為中學(xué)生，我們有各種各樣的夢(mèng)想。這些夢(mèng)想就是我們的中國(guó)夢(mèng)。3、我們應(yīng)該努力實(shí)現(xiàn)夢(mèng)想，遇到困難時(shí)也不放棄夢(mèng)想。4、我的夢(mèng)想是……注意：1）文章必須包括所給內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，要求語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫。2）第4要點(diǎn)需用2到3句話做適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。3）詞數(shù)80左右。(給出的內(nèi)容不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))My dreamEveryone has his dreams. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】My dreamEveryone has his dreams. The dreams can be very big, they can also be small. In fact ,a big dream is made up of many small dreams. As middle school students, we have all kinds of dreams. These dreams are our China dreams. We should try our best to make our dreams come true. When we meet any difficulty, we won’t give up our dreams. （I also have a dream. I dream of becoming a great scientist. From now on, I have to study hard to achieve my dream. ）【解析】試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，本文已經(jīng)給出了主要寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆前要先認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn)，然后圍繞要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。寫(xiě)作中，應(yīng)注意描述的全面性，盡量將提示的內(nèi)容利用上；結(jié)合材料內(nèi)容，可知本文主要是第一人稱，一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)進(jìn)行敘述。語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。適當(dāng)使用連詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。寫(xiě)作亮點(diǎn)：這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少。如: in fact實(shí)際上；be made up of由……組成；all kinds of各種；try one’s best do sth盡力做某事；give up放棄等。學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ),寫(xiě)作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用, 讓文章更出彩。 （四）人類(lèi)因夢(mèng)想而偉大，夢(mèng)想因奮斗而精彩。你的夢(mèng)想是什么？打算怎樣實(shí)現(xiàn)？將要去哪里工作？何時(shí)開(kāi)始？為什么會(huì)有這個(gè)夢(mèng)想？請(qǐng)以My Dream Job為題目，寫(xiě)一篇短文。要求：1.字跡工整，條理清楚，無(wú)語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。2.詞數(shù)70左右。My Dream Job                                                                                               ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】My dream jobEveryone has his own dream. Some want to be scientists，some want to be artists, hut I want to be a doctor when I grow up.I think it9s meaningful to be a doctor because I can help the sick people and save people's lives. I will study hard to enter a good medical university, then I can study Chinese medicine and improve my skills. After that I will work in the places where they need me most. Maybe I’ll go to the west part of China. I don’t really care. In fact, I just want to try my best to help them.From now on, I will work hard to make my dream come true.【解析】這篇作文要求我們以My Dream Job為題，介紹自己的夢(mèng)想是什么，如何實(shí)現(xiàn)夢(mèng)想，為什么會(huì)有這個(gè)夢(mèng)想等。題目中給出了具體的寫(xiě)作提綱，但是并沒(méi)有具體的寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容，因此學(xué)生們需要自己發(fā)揮想象力來(lái)充實(shí)文章的內(nèi)容，組織語(yǔ)言，串聯(lián)成文。寫(xiě)作時(shí)，應(yīng)注意合理安排文章內(nèi)容，先點(diǎn)明自己夢(mèng)想的工作是什么，然后解釋為什么會(huì)有這個(gè)夢(mèng)想、如何實(shí)現(xiàn)自己的夢(mèng)想。通過(guò)分析可知，這篇短文應(yīng)使用一般將來(lái)時(shí)態(tài)或者一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，根據(jù)自己的表達(dá)來(lái)確定，注意正確使用動(dòng)詞的形式。注意英語(yǔ)表達(dá)和漢語(yǔ)的不同，多使用簡(jiǎn)單句，使文章簡(jiǎn)潔、明了，輔以并列句和復(fù)合句，增強(qiáng)文章的連貫性。【點(diǎn)睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，首先短文的內(nèi)容充實(shí)、完整，包含了題目所需要的所有要點(diǎn)。表達(dá)有序、條理清晰，結(jié)構(gòu)、層次清楚。其次短文中使用了正確的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱，語(yǔ)法規(guī)范、準(zhǔn)確，多以簡(jiǎn)單句為主，也使用了較豐富的復(fù)合句、并列句和固定句型等。如Some want to be scientists， some want to be artists, but I want to be a doctor when I grow up.、I think it’s meaningful to be a doctor because I can help the sick people and save people's lives、After that I will work in the places where they need me most.、In fact, I just want to try my best to help them.、From now on, I will work hard to make my dream come true等。 I think it’s meaningful to be a doctor because I can help the sick people and save people's lives.After that I will work in the places where they need me most.In fact, I just want to try my best to help them.From now on, I will work hard to make my dream come true.I know it is easier to said than done.I am sure my dream will come true one day.it is a dream I have had for years, every time when a car goes by. I cannot help but think about its mechanism. I like games as much as I like science, but I never let worldly things stop me from achieving my goal, that is to be a engineer for it is the jade of my life.I will study hard every day and try to improve abilities to deal with future work. That way my dream can come true.I think if I work hard, my dream will be sure to come true. It is convenient for us to go out every day .For us, the better our country is, the better our life will be. I think life in our country is getting better and better.             （一）中學(xué)生對(duì)未來(lái)生活充滿了種種幻想，并渴望能夠?qū)崿F(xiàn)夢(mèng)想。請(qǐng)以I Want to Be a/an ...為題，寫(xiě)一篇80個(gè)單詞左右的短文。要求在文中講述你的夢(mèng)想，以及你為什么有那樣的夢(mèng)想和你會(huì)通過(guò)怎樣的努力去實(shí)現(xiàn)這個(gè)夢(mèng)想。_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】I want to be an engineer. I have been thinking about it for years. Each time I look up at the sky, I am thinking when I can go up there. I know that to touch the sky I will need to be an astronaut, but I know I will never be like YangLIWei or JaJaLi. I do not have mussels, but I have brain. I can make a spaceship if you let me. I want to be an engineer; it is a dream I have had for years, every time when a car goes by, I cannot help but think about its mechanism. I like games as much as I like science, but I never let worldly things stop me from achieving my goal, that is to be a engineer for it is the jade of my life. I want to be an engineer, but that troubles me a lot. Is this dream just a wish, or is it a hope? I need someone to guide me, maybe that can be you.【解析】本篇作文中小作者想要成為一名工程師，小作者首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時(shí)態(tài)。要求介紹。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過(guò)渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。小作者還必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫(xiě)情況，有無(wú)拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。寫(xiě)作亮點(diǎn)：這篇短文不僅使用了大量的的短語(yǔ)，可見(jiàn)該生英語(yǔ)功底扎實(shí)。如A I want to be an engineer; it is a dream I have had for years, every time when a car goes by, I cannot help but think about its mechanism. I like games as much as I like science, but I never let worldly things stop me from achieving my goal, that is to be a engineer for it is the jade of my life.等使文章的表達(dá)更豐富，更有邏輯性，更富有條理。 （二） 為實(shí)現(xiàn)我們的夢(mèng)想而行動(dòng)起來(lái)吧
 要點(diǎn)提示
 素材串聯(lián)(參考詞匯、句型)
 引出主題
 我們每個(gè)人都有夢(mèng)想，但是我們?nèi)绾螌?shí)現(xiàn)自己的夢(mèng)想呢(realize our dreams)?
 Frank為自己的夢(mèng)想所做的努力
 1. 弗蘭克十五歲時(shí)夢(mèng)想當(dāng)一名醫(yī)生，但現(xiàn)在他六十歲了，他整天躺在床上，還想成為一名醫(yī)生(dream to be a doctor)。
2. 弗蘭克只是生活在夢(mèng)想中，而沒(méi)有為之做出任何努力，這就是他沒(méi)有實(shí)現(xiàn)夢(mèng)想的原因(live in，without any actions)。
 自己會(huì)為夢(mèng)想做些什么
 1. 希望長(zhǎng)大以后，成為一名工程師(grow up)。
2. 我每天會(huì)努力學(xué)習(xí)，并且提高應(yīng)對(duì)以后工作的能力(study hard，improve abilities to)。
 中國(guó)夢(mèng)
 民族團(tuán)結(jié)，國(guó)家富強(qiáng)，人民幸福。
 詞數(shù)80～100。We all have our dreams, but how to realize our dreams.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】We all have our dreams, but how to realize our dreams. Frank wanted to become a doctor when he was 15 years old. Now he is sixty, and still lies in bed, dreaming to be a doctor. Frank is only living in the dream, but he doesn’t do anything to realize his dream. This is the reason why his dream doesn’t come true.I have a dream, too. I want to be an engineer when I grow up. I will study hard every day and try to improve abilities to deal with future work. That way my dream can come true.Our country has a dream. That is national unity, strong country and people live a happy life. We must try our best to realize our Chinese Dream.【解析】試題分析：這篇作文要求我們以如何實(shí)現(xiàn)夢(mèng)想為話題寫(xiě)一篇作文。作文應(yīng)主要包括三個(gè)方面。首先是一個(gè)反例，說(shuō)的是Frank，他雖然有夢(mèng)想，但是他從來(lái)沒(méi)有為夢(mèng)想努力過(guò)，我們不能這樣；第二方面是說(shuō)一說(shuō)自己的夢(mèng)想，以及自己想要如何實(shí)現(xiàn)夢(mèng)想；最后說(shuō)一說(shuō)我們的中國(guó)夢(mèng)。我們需要按照題目的要求，用正確的英語(yǔ)將這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)。夢(mèng)想這一話題是學(xué)生們比較熟悉的，平時(shí)的學(xué)習(xí)中所涉及的這方面的詞匯和短語(yǔ)，積累得也比較多，因此學(xué)生在寫(xiě)作時(shí)不會(huì)感到?jīng)]有話說(shuō)。但是要想把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)得準(zhǔn)確，并且還能使意思連貫、流暢，這就需要多下功夫了。我們需要注意長(zhǎng)短句的結(jié)合，把握文章的節(jié)奏，另外，通過(guò)多使用好的句型，來(lái)使文章流暢。【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這是一篇比較優(yōu)秀的范文。作者按照題目的要求，將表格中所列舉的內(nèi)容用正確的英語(yǔ)表達(dá)了出來(lái)。沒(méi)有語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，意思表達(dá)得也很清楚。首先作者把Frank 的例子告訴了我們，Frank is only living in the dream, but he doesn’t do anything to realize his dream.接下來(lái)作者講述了自己的夢(mèng)想，I have a dream, too. I want to be an engineer when I grow up.以及作者如何實(shí)現(xiàn)夢(mèng)想，I will study hard every day and try to improve abilities to deal with future work. That way my dream can come true；最后作者提到了我們的中國(guó)夢(mèng)。中國(guó)夢(mèng)的實(shí)現(xiàn)也需要我們每個(gè)人真正的付諸行動(dòng)的。整篇短文意思連貫，語(yǔ)音準(zhǔn)確，使用好的句型和短語(yǔ)較多。考點(diǎn)：提綱類(lèi)作文。 （三）My Dream提示：羅伯·舒樂(lè)說(shuō)：“夢(mèng)想是生命的靈魂,是心靈的燈塔,是引導(dǎo)人走向成功的信仰。”有了崇高的夢(mèng)想，只要矢志不渝地追求，夢(mèng)想就會(huì)成為現(xiàn)實(shí)，奮斗就會(huì)變成壯舉，生命就會(huì)創(chuàng)造奇跡。請(qǐng)以“My Dream”為題，寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文，談?wù)勀愕膲?mèng)想。要求：1.語(yǔ)言流暢、書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范、卷面整潔，詞數(shù)不少于60個(gè)；2.文中不得使用真實(shí)姓名、校名，否則以零分計(jì)。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】My DreamEverybody has his or her dream. My dream is to be a reporter.I think being a reporter is wonderful because I would like to meet different people and I can make friends with more people. What's more, I can tell people the truth and something interesting. In order to realize my dream, I plan to read newspapers and some helpful books. And I will spend more time talking with different people to know them. I know I may meet many difficulties on the road， but I will never give up. I think if I work hard, my dream will be sure to come true.【解析】1、題干解讀：該題目是命題作文。在寫(xiě)的過(guò)程中，務(wù)必要圍繞“夢(mèng)想”這個(gè)主題，可適當(dāng)添加，但不能跑題。2、例文點(diǎn)評(píng)：例文用第一人稱來(lái)敘述內(nèi)容；時(shí)態(tài)采用一般將來(lái)時(shí)為主；描寫(xiě)流利順暢，無(wú)語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。例文分為三段，第一段引出“我的夢(mèng)想”——記者；第二段描寫(xiě)了作者想成為一名記者的原因以及愿意為此付出的努力；第三段總結(jié)全文，呼應(yīng)主題。3、高分亮點(diǎn)：being a reporter is wonderful 動(dòng)名詞作主語(yǔ)，謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞用單數(shù)because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語(yǔ)從句would like to do sth. 想要做某事make friends with sb. 與某人交朋友What's more 另外，此外in order to do sth. 為了做某事realize one’s dream 實(shí)現(xiàn)某人的夢(mèng)想plan to do sth. 計(jì)劃做某事spend…(in) doing sth. 花費(fèi)……give up 放棄I think if I work hard, my dream will be sure to come true. 賓語(yǔ)從句；if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語(yǔ)從句 （四）假如你是劉紅，最近你們學(xué)校展開(kāi)了以“中國(guó)夢(mèng)，我的夢(mèng)”為主題的活動(dòng)，作為一名中學(xué)生應(yīng)該有自己的夢(mèng)想，你的夢(mèng)想是什么呢？請(qǐng)以“My Dream”為題，寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文。要求：1. 描述自己的夢(mèng)想。2. 為什么有這樣的夢(mèng)想。3. 如何實(shí)現(xiàn)這個(gè)夢(mèng)想。4. 80詞左右，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。5. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名等信息。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】Everyone has his own dream. Some want to be doctors. Others hope to be scientists.My dream is to become a teacher. Teachers can not only teach us many things at school, but they do their best to teach us how to learn. Thanks to our teachers, we learn knowledge. And at the same time, we learn how to live a happy life. They spend most time on their students. They are great in my eyes.I want to be a teacher when I grow up because I admire teachers. I know it is easier to said than done. But I have made a decision to study harder. I am sure my dream will come true one day.【解析】試題分析：這是一篇命題作文。作文內(nèi)容緊扣社會(huì)熱點(diǎn)，貼近學(xué)生生活，學(xué)生有較大的發(fā)揮空間。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真審題，結(jié)合內(nèi)容要求勾勒要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。行文時(shí)要注意人稱、時(shí)態(tài)的搭配及主謂一致問(wèn)題，同時(shí)注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。寫(xiě)作亮點(diǎn): 這篇短文內(nèi)容突出題材要點(diǎn)，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，意思連貫，符合邏輯。在文章的結(jié)構(gòu)組織上使用了簡(jiǎn)單句和復(fù)合句，文章脈絡(luò)清晰，自然流暢。同時(shí)，文章還使用了一些常用的句式、短語(yǔ)以及連接詞，這為文章增色不少。  

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