中考英語(yǔ)二輪復(fù)習(xí)作文熱點(diǎn)素材+精彩范文熱點(diǎn) 16 獻(xiàn)愛心捐贈(zèng) (含答案)-試卷下載-教習(xí)網(wǎng)

熱點(diǎn)16 獻(xiàn)愛心捐贈(zèng) 獻(xiàn)愛心捐贈(zèng)無(wú)疑是今年的火爆熱點(diǎn)之一，它為我們的生活帶來(lái)了極大的便利。今天，選擇的2021年中考英語(yǔ)寫作預(yù)測(cè)話題是：獻(xiàn)愛心捐贈(zèng)。【預(yù)測(cè)題目】（一）四川省汶川地區(qū)發(fā)生了罕見的大地震，那里的人們痛失親人和家園。全國(guó)人民眾志成城，抗震救災(zāi)。作為一名中學(xué)生，請(qǐng)你談?wù)勀愕淖龇ê透惺堋?/span> 要求：文章語(yǔ)言流暢，邏輯清晰，用詞準(zhǔn)確， 80—100 字左右；詞匯參考：地震 earthquake 悲痛 sorrow 受到感動(dòng) be deeply moved 安慰 comfort 重建 rebuild 自愿做某事 volunteer to do sth _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】on may 12th, a big earthquake happened in wenchun, sichuan. many people lost their relatives and their homes. all the chinese people feel quite sorrow.a lot of people volunteer to help them. some people raise money for them, some people buy something for them, some people go there to comfort the sad children. thousands of soldiers help them to save their relatives and rebuild their homes even foreign friends also give them a hand. I’m deeply moved by these people. so i’ ll use my pocket money to buy some food and school things for the children there. i think all of us should try our best to help them to get out of the trouble together. （二）去年春節(jié)期間，我國(guó)大部分地區(qū)遭受雪災(zāi)，特別是南方，室?guī)资晡从?。公路、鐵路、機(jī)場(chǎng)都被迫關(guān)閉，電網(wǎng)癱瘓，數(shù)百萬(wàn)人不能回家過(guò)年。部分山區(qū)人民生活異常困難，在各級(jí)政府的帶領(lǐng)下，人民群眾、解放軍戰(zhàn)士英勇抗擊雪災(zāi)，涌現(xiàn)出大批可歌可泣的英雄事跡。作為一名中學(xué)生，你有何感想？有何打算？能不能改變這種狀態(tài)？ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】As we know, our country suffered heavy snow last spring festival. everything was covered with heavy snow. it made the buses, trains and planes stop. millions of people couldn’t go home. many people suffered trouble. there was no food, water or light in some places. our government called on people to fight against heavy snow. as a student, I think we should learn from those heroes. we must study hard at school. we should learn all kinds of knowledge to make our motherland stronger, better and richer. （一）根據(jù)中文和英文提示，完成一篇不少于50詞的文段寫作。文中已給出內(nèi)容不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)，所給提示詞語(yǔ)僅供選用。請(qǐng)不要寫出你的校名和姓名。　　假如你是李華，為了幫助洪災(zāi)地區(qū)的小朋友渡過(guò)難關(guān)，你們學(xué)校上周組織了以“友愛、互助”為主題的獻(xiàn)愛心捐贈(zèng)活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文，談?wù)勀阍谶@次活動(dòng)中捐贈(zèng)了什么，為什么捐贈(zèng)這些物品，以及你的感受。　　提示詞語(yǔ)：donate(捐贈(zèng)), book, schoolbag, clothes，toy, help, proud　　提示問題：　　? What did you donate?　　? Why did you donate the things?　　? How do you feel?_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】　　At my school, we had a charity sale last week　　The charity sale was held on our school playground last Saturday morning. We prepared many things which were made by hand in our spare time, such as kites, model planes and so on. They looked very beautiful. We also brought old toys and secondhand books to sell on the sale. At 8：30, the activity started. Many students and teachers came to take part in it. Everyone chose their favorite items and paid for them at a much lower price. In the end, the money we made added up to over 2,000.　　We sent the money to the community to help children who couldn't attend school and the seniors who needed better care.　　I had a wonderful experience. I'm proud of what we have done. If everyone makes a contribution to the charity, the world will become much better. （二）假設(shè)你是李明，你們學(xué)校正在舉辦主題為“付出既是收獲”的征文活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)你聯(lián)系自己平時(shí)的愛心行為和感受寫一篇文章投稿。要求：1. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名和校名等相關(guān)信息。2. 80—100詞。標(biāo)題和文章開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Giving is ReceivingI’m a student from Green Middle School. My name is Li Ming. I like helping others because I think it makes me very happy.I often help my classmates with their schoolwork. Sometimes I help clean up city parks. I go to the old people’s home and do some cleaning for them once a month. So I’m pretty popular there. I often visit the children’s hospital to cheer the sick kids up. I read stories and sing songs for them. I am good with children. I also give money to charities to help people in trouble.I think giving is receiving. Helping others is helping ourselves. Do you agree with me? （三）假如你叫王雷，是第一中學(xué)的學(xué)生會(huì)主席。在報(bào)紙和電視上看到有關(guān)報(bào)道，由于伊拉克戰(zhàn)爭(zhēng)，導(dǎo)致許多兒童失學(xué)，生活狀況窘迫，許多孩子淪為童工，處境很悲慘，所以打算給全校的學(xué)生發(fā)一份倡議書，號(hào)召他們奉獻(xiàn)愛心去幫助那些孩子們。提示: warm houses, smile on one’s face, community service, go to school, rich, end the war, live a happy life, the war on Iraq_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】Hello, everyone. As we know, Many Iraqis become homeless people because of the war. Some of them are children. Some used to be rich but now they lose warm houses and have not enough food to eat. The children have no chance to go to school. The hard living conditions make the homeless children become child laborers. What do you think of their terrible life?Let’s make a wonderful program to help these children live a normal life. I think we should call on (呼吁) ending the war. We support these poor child laborers by raising money. So they can live in warm houses, get good educations and live happy lives. We hope there will be smiles on their faces. If you’d like to join the program, please come to our community.【解析】試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文。本文給出了一些要點(diǎn)，并提示了一些詞語(yǔ)。我們要做的就是用正確的英語(yǔ)把要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來(lái)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮想象說(shuō)出自己的觀點(diǎn)。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)來(lái)寫，要注意主謂一致等問題。寫作中要適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。寫作亮點(diǎn)：這篇短文多次使用連接詞and以及主從復(fù)合句如We hope there will be smiles on their faces.（我們希望他們的臉上會(huì)有笑容0。If you’d like to join the program, please come to our community. (如果你想?yún)⒓舆@個(gè)節(jié)目，請(qǐng)來(lái)到我們的社區(qū))，這些都為文章增色不少。學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)，牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ),寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性，更富有條理。（四）假如你是中學(xué)生李兵，上周日你們學(xué)校組織（organize）了一次去孤兒院（orphanage）獻(xiàn)愛心的志愿者活動(dòng)（volunteer activity）。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)提示寫一篇英語(yǔ)短文，講述你們當(dāng)志愿者的故事。內(nèi)容提示：1.給孩子們送禮物；2.給孩子們唱歌、跳舞、講故事；3.與孩子們合影留念。要求：1.語(yǔ)句通順，邏輯清晰，可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2. 80詞左右。構(gòu)思提綱引出話題Last Sunday, my school organized a volunteer activity… 介紹過(guò)程We started our trip at …After we arrived there ,we…Then some of us gave wonderful performances…After that… 總結(jié)感悟Helping others makes me feel…And I have decided to… _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】Last Sunday, my school organized a volunteer activity .we went to the local orphanage to do some voluntary work. On the way, we bought books and toys with the money donated by our classmates. Upon our arrival, we handed out all the gifts to the children, then we patiently taught them to sing songs. Before leaving, we received pictures drawn by them as souvenirs of the visit.When we were about to leave, the children waved their hands and thanked us for our kindness. Seeing the children’s bright smiles, all of us considered the visit to be well worthwhile. We have brought sunshine to the children’s lives, and were really happy to be able to help them.【解析】本文是一篇材料作文。根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)提示寫一篇英語(yǔ)短文，講述你們當(dāng)志愿者的故事。文章時(shí)態(tài)用一般過(guò)去時(shí)，人稱主要為第一人稱。本文所給材料比較詳細(xì)，考生要做的就是用正確的英語(yǔ)把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，并可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。在寫作時(shí)，注意緊扣主題，連句成篇，要層次清楚，要點(diǎn)分明，中心突出。同時(shí)要注意語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，最好不要寫太長(zhǎng)的復(fù)合句；盡量選取簡(jiǎn)單的易拼寫的單詞，確保正確率；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，可以為文章增色添彩。最后要細(xì)心復(fù)核檢查，確保正確無(wú)誤。【點(diǎn)睛】首先認(rèn)真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點(diǎn)；然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫作要點(diǎn)及每個(gè)要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá)；然后緊扣要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆寫作，在寫作過(guò)程中，要注意句與句、段與段之間的過(guò)渡，要仔細(xì)檢查有無(wú)單詞拼寫錯(cuò)誤、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)誤用等，還要檢查語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無(wú)重復(fù)、啰嗦的語(yǔ)言，大小寫是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求。 Volunteering is of tremendous benefits to both those in need and the society. This activity is meaningful and we can learn a lot from it, so I hope you can take part in it. In my opinion, each child should have the right to go to school, but there are few chances for the poor children. We can get much happiness by helping others. Friends,don't grudge your love or help,for helping others is just helping yourselves. Finally,helping others is not only a good quality,but also a happy thing. One can't do all the jobs and complete all the things by himself. Looking back, we can know the history of human beings is a history of helping each other. To help others means to help ourselves.We needs a help in order to do the thing well. （一）假如你是學(xué)校英語(yǔ)廣播站的記者，上周六你校組織了一次去養(yǎng)老院為老人獻(xiàn)愛心的公益活動(dòng)．請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面的日程表，用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文，對(duì)這次公益活動(dòng)予以報(bào)道．時(shí)間活動(dòng)地點(diǎn)/方式9：00a．m．前往養(yǎng)老院給老人唱歌、跳舞、講故事；幫老人梳頭、打掃衛(wèi)生幫老人做飯、送老人禮物乘校車10：00a．m．﹣4：00p．m．養(yǎng)老院4：10p．m．﹣5：30p．m．養(yǎng)老院6：30p．m．返校乘校車參考詞匯：梳頭 comb one's hair要求：＝1、短文須包括所有要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2、詞數(shù) 80 左右，短文開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．Dear students，We went to an old people's home last Saturday．_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I hope all of us can learn to care for the old people．【參考范文】Dear students，We went to an old people's home last Saturday. We met at the school gate at nine o 'clock in the morning. Then we arrived at the old people's home by school bus at ten in the morning．We stayed with the old people from ten o 'clock in the morning to four o 'clock in the afternoon．We sang, danced and told stories to them．We also helped them comb their hair and clean the room．From 4：10 to 5：30, we cooked for them．Finally, we gave the old people gifts that we made ourselves．At half past six in the afternoon，we took the school bus back to school． I hope all of us can learn to care for the old people．【解析】這是一篇材料作文，根據(jù)材料中的相關(guān)信息介紹一下你去養(yǎng)老院為老人獻(xiàn)愛心的公益活動(dòng)的情況。所提供的材料中列舉了時(shí)間，活動(dòng)和地點(diǎn)。主要從時(shí)間、相關(guān)活動(dòng)和地點(diǎn)三個(gè)方面去介紹。時(shí)態(tài)為一般過(guò)去時(shí)，人稱為第一人稱。注意作文中必須包含材料上的所有信息，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。寫作時(shí)，避免使用漢語(yǔ)式的英語(yǔ)，盡量使用我們熟悉的句子或短語(yǔ)。語(yǔ)法要正確，表達(dá)要符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣，注意時(shí)態(tài)、時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)的搭配及主謂一致問題。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系，表達(dá)具有條理性。【高分句型一】We stayed with the old people from ten o 'clock in the morning to four o 'clock in the afternoon.我們和老人住在一起，從早上十點(diǎn)到下午四點(diǎn)。本題運(yùn)用了from…to…短語(yǔ)。【高分句型二】Finally, we gave the old people gifts that we made ourselves. 最后，我們送給老人我們自己做的禮物。句子that we made ourselves.是由that引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句。（二）中國(guó)自古是禮儀之邦，樂于助人是我們的傳統(tǒng)美德。工作、學(xué)習(xí)和生活中的互幫互助能使我們感覺到溫暖，使我們彼此都能更輕松地面對(duì)人生的各種難題。請(qǐng)以“幫助他人”為主題寫一篇短文，內(nèi)容包括： 1. 簡(jiǎn)單表達(dá)你對(duì)這件事的看法。 2. 講述一個(gè)你幫助別人或受到幫助的經(jīng)歷。 3. 幫助人或被幫助后的感受是什么？ 4.呼吁大家傳承樂于助人的傳統(tǒng)美德。作文要求： 1.不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出現(xiàn)學(xué)校真實(shí)的名稱和學(xué)生的真實(shí)姓名。 2.語(yǔ)句連貫，詞數(shù)80個(gè)左右。_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】Be ready to help othersOne can't do all the jobs and complete all the things by himself,and a cooperation and a help are needed. Looking back, we can know the history of human beings is a history of helping each other. Firstly,helping others is essential,as one's ability is limited and can't finish everything.We needs a help in order to do the thing well.Secondly,to help others means to help ourselves.We can't live in a single world.When we help others in trouble someday, they will do us a favor in return.On the contrary, if we don't offer a help,we won't get a help.Finally,helping others is not only a good quality,but also a happy thing.We can get much happiness by helping others.Friends,don't grudge your love or help,for helping others is just helping yourselves.【解析】試題分析：這是一篇提綱式的話題作文。主要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)和過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)。【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇短文不僅注意避免句式重復(fù)而且使用了大量的的短語(yǔ)，可見該生英語(yǔ)功底扎實(shí)。.如Looking bac,Firstly,Secondly,Finally,not only but also,等使文章的表達(dá)更豐富，更有邏輯性，更富有條理。（三）根據(jù)中文，寫一篇意思連貫、符合邏輯、不少于50詞的英文短文。假如你是某國(guó)際學(xué)校學(xué)生社團(tuán)的負(fù)責(zé)人，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示用英語(yǔ)寫一則通知，通知你校學(xué)生本周六參加一次去敬老院獻(xiàn)愛心的公益活動(dòng)。提示：1. When and where will you meet?2. How will you go to the old people's home?3.What will you do there?4.What's the significance (意義) of this activity?要求：短文須包含以上提示要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮Fellow students,We'll visit the old people's home in our city this Saturday.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】Fellow students,We'll visit the old people's home in our city this Saturday. We'll meet in front of our school library at 7:30 on Saturday morning.We'll take the school bus there and it will take about an hour. After we arrive, we will help clean the old people's rooms and wash their clothes. After that, we will do some fun activities such as singing, dancing, playing games and telling stories. This activity is meaningful and we can learn a lot from it, so I hope you can take part in it.【解析】這篇作文要求我們以學(xué)校社團(tuán)負(fù)責(zé)人的身份，寫一個(gè)通知，內(nèi)容是學(xué)生本周六去敬老院獻(xiàn)愛心。題目中利用四個(gè)問題列出了文章中的要點(diǎn)，包括：什么時(shí)候、在哪里碰面；怎樣去敬老院；在那里做什么以及這個(gè)活動(dòng)的意義。學(xué)生們可以利用這問題，組織材料，用正確的英語(yǔ)表達(dá)出來(lái)。寫作前應(yīng)注意仔細(xì)審題，確定文章的體裁、主體、時(shí)態(tài)、人稱等。這篇短文要求寫的是一個(gè)通知，文章中應(yīng)包括四個(gè)細(xì)節(jié)信息，其中在敬老院的活動(dòng)應(yīng)該是文章的中心內(nèi)容。文章應(yīng)主要使用一般將來(lái)時(shí)態(tài)，第一人稱來(lái)敘述，注意謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞的正確形式。另外，英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語(yǔ)是不同的，不能按照漢語(yǔ)思維逐詞翻譯?？梢院?jiǎn)單句為主，使用主謂賓或主系表結(jié)構(gòu)，這樣的句式結(jié)構(gòu)簡(jiǎn)單、清晰；為了提升文章水平，應(yīng)穿插使用并列句或復(fù)合句的結(jié)構(gòu)，或使用一些復(fù)雜句式，如非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞等。語(yǔ)句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使上下文意連貫，表達(dá)流暢。【點(diǎn)睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者根據(jù)題目要求以學(xué)校社團(tuán)負(fù)責(zé)人的身份，給學(xué)生們下了一個(gè)通知。短文有以下幾個(gè)優(yōu)點(diǎn)：首先短文內(nèi)容豐富，敘述完整、清晰，有條理。文章以題目中給出的四個(gè)問題為提綱，詳細(xì)交代了一些細(xì)節(jié)，尤其是對(duì)在敬老院的活動(dòng)進(jìn)行了具體的描述，符合情理。其次短文中使用了正確的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱，文章以一般將來(lái)時(shí)為主，主要使用了will+動(dòng)詞原形的結(jié)構(gòu)，語(yǔ)法規(guī)范，句式結(jié)構(gòu)完整，符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。語(yǔ)言得體、地道、通順。第三，短文中句式結(jié)構(gòu)以簡(jiǎn)單句為主，敘述清楚、明了，也穿插使用了一些并列句和復(fù)合句的句型，調(diào)整了文章的節(jié)奏，提升了文章檔次。文章中較好的句型有We'll meet in front of our school library at 7:30 on Saturday morning.、After we arrive, we will help clean the old people's rooms and wash their clothes.、 After that, we will do some fun activities such as singing, dancing, playing games and telling stories等。（四）某學(xué)校將每年的3月5日定為愛心志愿者活動(dòng)日，今年活動(dòng)的主題是“人人為貧困孩子獻(xiàn)愛心”。請(qǐng)你以學(xué)生會(huì)的名義寫一份倡議書，內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)包括：許多孩子因貧困而上不起學(xué)；（too…to…）；在冬天，很多孩子沒有暖的衣服穿。他們沒有足夠的書籍，沒有書包；有些學(xué)校離家很遠(yuǎn)，每天很早就起床，要花費(fèi)一個(gè)半小時(shí)的時(shí)間到達(dá)學(xué)校。（far away, it takes …to do ）；我們能為他們做的是……（至少2點(diǎn)）。文章開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。要求60詞左右。Dear students,In some parts of our country, there are many children out of school.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thanks for your joining! Students’ Union【參考范文】Dear students,In some parts of our country, there are many children out of school. They are too poor to go to school. At the same time, they don't have enough school things and clothes. In my opinion, each child should have the right to go to school, but there are few chances for the poor children. So we should help them as possible as we can, just like giving them school things, clothes and so on. We hope they will have the same chance of getting knowledge as we do in the school.Thanks for your joining! Students’ Union【解析】試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文。本文所給材料比較詳細(xì)，我們要做的就是用正確的英語(yǔ)把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，主語(yǔ)是第一人稱，注意時(shí)態(tài)語(yǔ)時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)的搭配及主謂一致問題。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇短文進(jìn)行了較為全面的說(shuō)明，能用簡(jiǎn)短的詞匯表達(dá)出提綱的內(nèi)容，并且進(jìn)行了適當(dāng)?shù)奶幚?，?zhǔn)確的添加自己的觀點(diǎn)，同時(shí)使用了一些固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少。使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性,更富有條理。

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