2022中考英語作文熱點素材+精彩范熱點熱點03 微信-課件下載-教習網(wǎng)

微信無疑是今年的火爆熱點之一，它為我們的生活帶來了極大的便利。今天，選擇的2020年中考英語寫作預測話題是：微信。

【預測題目】
（一）
微信在我們的生活中越來越普及，不管是年輕人還是老年人都喜歡使用微信，請你談論一下微信給我們生活帶來了什么樣的改變，它有什么樣的優(yōu)缺點？
Wechat in our life
要點：1、微信已成為我們生活中的一部分。無論是年輕人還是老年人都在使用微信。
2、微信有什么好處呢？例如：快速發(fā)送信息；可以立刻和朋友分享音樂、照片、視頻等；可以直接發(fā)送語音信息；可以當成地圖使用；可以快速付款等等。
3、但是無論年輕人還是老年人，使用微信太久，對眼睛有害；微信占據(jù)了人們大量地時間，人們很少進行戶外運動或者和家人一起運動游玩，對身體無益。
4、正確使用微信，讓它使我們的生活更美好。
參考詞匯：voice message(語音信息) take up（占據(jù)）
要求：包含要點，適當加入自己的觀點。
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【參考范文】
Wechat gradually comes into our life and Whether the young or the old, we use WeChat.Wechat is a mobile phone software of chatting , which can through the Internet send voice messages, video, images and text,We can make new friends from the wechat. We can communicate with our friends, which can help us get short messages, pictures and so on .We can use it as a map and help us pay the bill.Every coin has two sides, Wechat has brought us both convenience and troubles. We may often lose ourselves in the wechat, and controlled by wechat in some degree, So we seldom have time to exercise with our family.It is bad for our eyes if we use it for a long time.There are countless people walk or drive with head down, then leaded to a disaster. We should use it correctly in order to make our life better.
【解析】
這是一篇給材料作文，談論一下微信給我們生活帶來了什么樣的改變，它有什么樣的優(yōu)缺點？結合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時，人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結構主要為系表結構和動賓結構，注意一些常見句式的應用，比如：WeChat.Wechat is……，We can……，Wechat has……，It is bad for……，There are……，We should……等句式的應用。寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關系。
【點睛】
本文結構緊湊，語言簡練。開頭介紹了微信已成為我們生活中的一部分，接下來介紹微信的優(yōu)點和缺點，最后指出我們應正確使用微信，讓它使我們的生活更美好。此處make friends, communicate with, help sb do sth, and so on, in some degree, be bad for, lead to, in order to等這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少。

（二）
根據(jù)要求完成下列短文寫作。詞數(shù)：60—80詞左右
科技的進步讓我們的生活發(fā)生了巨大變化，人與人之間的交流方式也日新月異?，F(xiàn)在有很多同學的日常生活離不開微信（Wechat），請結合自己的感受談談微信的好處和害處。
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【參考范文】
In recent years, Wechat is becoming increasingly popular. Many people express themselves, exchange ideas and deliver information by Wechat. There are a number of reasons for Wechat to be known. To begin with, Wechat is a relative cheap way of communication, which cuts down a great deal of the cost of making a phone call. Next, Wechat is to the taste of the majority of people. Its attractive interface and various functions are loved wildly. Furthermore, convenience also accounts for its popularity. It is available everywhere and at any time.
【解析】
這篇作文主要寫科技的進步讓我們的生活發(fā)生了巨大變化，人與人之間的交流方式也日新月異?，F(xiàn)在有很多同學的日常生活離不開微信（Wechat），請結合自己的感受談談微信的好處和害處。動筆前先要認真閱讀要點，圍繞要點組織材料，然后用正確的英語句子把這些內(nèi)容表達出來，在此基礎上亦可適當發(fā)揮，注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點。根據(jù)材料可知本文主要是應用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，注意標點符號及大小寫等問題，不要犯語法錯誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關系，語意連貫。

（一）
微信已經(jīng)成為我們生活的溝通交流的平臺之一。相信很多同學也在微信上加了很多朋友，你和這些朋友交流的情況怎么樣？請你就此寫一篇短文談談你的看法。
1. 你有多少個微信朋友呢？平時有經(jīng)常交流的又有多少？都是誰？
2. 你在微信上和朋友通常都聊些什么？
3. 你認為什么才是真正的朋友？
作文要求：
1．不得照抄原文；不得在作文中出現(xiàn)學校的真實名稱和學生的真實姓名。
2．語句連貫，詞數(shù)80個左右。作文的開頭已經(jīng)給出，不必抄寫在試卷上，也不計入總詞數(shù)。
It is easy to use WeChat to communicate with our friends.

【參考范文】
It is easy to use WeChat to communicate with our friends. As for me, I have nearly 200 WeChat friends. The number of persons I often talk with is less than 20. Most of them are my classmates and families.
I like to look through my friends’ WeChat Moments to know more about them. Sometimes I give comments or likes to their posts. We even set up a certain chatting group to talk about things happening around us and share some interesting things in life. Besides, we also talk about studies.
As a saying goes, a friend in need is a friend indeed. I think true friends may not talk with you on WeChat most. However, when you need them, they will be there.
【解析】
1.題干解讀：該題目屬于議論文寫作，寫作時要按議論文的格式寫。在寫作時開頭介紹用微信和朋友交流很容易；第二段介紹我們在微信上和朋友交流的內(nèi)容；第三段介紹真正的朋友是什么樣的。
2.例文點評：例文采用三段式；用第一、三人稱來介紹用微信和朋友交流；時態(tài)采用一般現(xiàn)在時，介紹朋友用微信交流的內(nèi)容，敘述完整且條理清晰。寫作中注意運用連詞，注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關系。
3.高分亮點：
短語：less than，like to，look through，set up，in need，talk with。
句型：句型It is easy to use WeChat to communicate with our friends.定語從句As a saying goes, 賓語從句true friends may not talk with you on WeChat most。

（二）
請你根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容提示，以“The Story of Lingling”為題，為社區(qū)宣傳專欄寫一篇短文，介紹在玲玲身上發(fā)生的一件事。
（1）上周晚飯后玲玲和媽媽一起出去散步，在社區(qū)的門口看見一個錢包；
（2）玲玲把錢包撿起，發(fā)現(xiàn)錢包里有身份證和一些錢；
（3）玲玲和媽媽把錢包交給保安，保安把這個消息發(fā)到小區(qū)的微信群中；
（4）失主看到消息后，過來取回錢包并對玲玲和媽媽表示感謝；
（5）你覺得……
參考詞匯：社區(qū) community 身份證 ID card 保安 guard 微信群 Wechat group
失主 owner
要求：
（1）詞數(shù)：80～100個。
（2）短文的題目和開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。
（3）要點齊全，行文連貫，可適當發(fā)揮。
The Story of Lingling
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【參考范文】
The Story of Lingling
Last Friday, Lingling went out for a walk with her mother after supper. She saw a wallet at the door of the community. Lingling picked up her wallet and found that there were ID cards and some money in it. Lingling and her mother handed the wallet to the security guard, who sent the news to the microphone group in the community. When the owner saw the news, he came to fetch her wallet and thanked Lingling and her mother. .I think Li Hua did a good deed.We should learn from her.
【解析】
本文是一篇給材料作文。根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容提示，以“The Story of Lingling”為題，為社區(qū)宣傳專欄寫一篇短文，介紹在玲玲身上發(fā)生的一件事。文章時態(tài)用一般過去時，人稱主要為第三人稱。本文所給材料比較詳細，考生要做的就是用正確的英語把這些內(nèi)容表達出來。動筆前要認真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點，并可適當發(fā)揮。在寫作時，注意緊扣主題，連句成篇，要層次清楚，要點分明，中心突出。同時要注意語言的表述應該符合語法的結構，造句應該符合英語的表達習慣；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，最好不要寫太長的復合句；盡量選取簡單的易拼寫的單詞，確保正確率；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，可以為文章增色添彩。最后要細心復核檢查，確保正確無誤。
【點睛】
首先認真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點；然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫作要點及每個要點中可能要用到的表達；然后緊扣要點，動筆寫作，在寫作過程中，要注意句與句、段與段之間的過渡，必要時可適當運用表示轉(zhuǎn)折、因果、并列、比較等關系的連詞，使文章過渡平穩(wěn)，自然流暢；最后，要仔細檢查有無單詞拼寫錯誤、標點符號誤用等，還要檢查語法結構是否合理，有無重復、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。

（三）
最近，你們班級新建了一個“英語學習”的微信群。請你根據(jù)下面的內(nèi)容提示，為校園廣播站寫一篇廣播稿，介紹這個微信群，并歡迎同學們積極參與。

注意：1. 詞數(shù)不少于100字；
2. 請勿提及學校和個人真實信息；
3. 可適當加入細節(jié)，以使內(nèi)容充實、行文連貫；
4. 開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。
參考詞匯：give a like 點贊； sharing friends 分享朋友圈；forward 轉(zhuǎn)發(fā)
Dear fellow students,
Good news for you! A WeChat group called “Learning English”_____________________________________
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That’s all. Thank you.
Li Hua
【參考范文】
Dear fellow students,
Good news for you! A WeChat group called “Learning English” will be opened in our school. It aims to help us students to communicate better and improve our English level.
We can do a lot of things in this group. First of all, we can share efficient learning experience here to promote our English study. Secondly, if you have any questions or problems, you are welcome to post it here. And possibly, you will find proper solutions to them with the help of our schoolmates. In addition, attracted by interesting topics, we are free to take part in the weekly discussion.
How to join it? Please open your WeChat and follow the public “Learn English”. And every one of us is encouraged to join it.
I am sure the group will be of great help to our English study.
That’s all. Thank you!
Li Hua
【解析】
這是一篇材料作文，根據(jù)圖表提示的信息向同學介紹新建的“英語學習”微信群。作文要從以下幾個方面去完成，建立這個群的目的，在群內(nèi)可以參與哪些活動，入群的方法，可適當加入細節(jié)，以使內(nèi)容充實。注意把提示的要點寫全面，注意文章文體、人稱和時態(tài)。同時應選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。要求語句通順、意思連貫。文章結構緊湊、行文連貫、表達清楚。

（四）
最近，老師經(jīng)常把同學們的作業(yè)完成情況、考試成績等反饋在家長微信群，同學們就此事展開了討論。請你根據(jù)下面表格中的提示選擇一個觀點，寫一篇短文，向校英語報投稿，闡述你的觀點。
贊成
反對
◎同學間可互相了解；
◎家長及時知道學習情況；
◎可及時改變學習方法。
◎不尊重學生；
◎不利于師生關系；
◎受家長更多的懲罰。
要求：（1）短文要求包括所有提示內(nèi)容，可適當發(fā)揮；
（2）短文要求簡潔，正確流暢；
（3）詞數(shù)：80—100，短文首句僅供選擇使用，不計入總詞數(shù)。
參考詞匯：微信群WeChat group；尊重respect
短文首句：My classmates have had a heated discussion about that the teachers always share their homework and marks in WeChat group.
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【參考范文】
My classmates have had a heated discussion about that the teachers always share their homework and marks in WeChat group. I think it’s necessary. First of all, we can know more about our classmates by comparing with each other. Besides, our parents may know how we study at school. If we don’t behave well, they can communicate with us in time. Last but not least, if we can’t get good grades, I think we’d better make an effort to change the way we study. It’s helpful. All in all, it’s convenient for our teachers to do so, and it’s an effective way for our parents to know more about us.
【解析】
1. 題干解讀：該題目屬于議論文寫作。在寫作時應注意要承接開頭，然后提出自己的觀點。作者持贊成的觀點。短文包括提示的三個內(nèi)容：第一部分同學間可互相了解；第二部分家長及時知道學習情況；第三部分可及時改變學習方法。
2. 例文點評：例文采用一段式；用第一人稱討論內(nèi)容；時態(tài)采用一般現(xiàn)在時，觀點明確，條例清晰。
3. 高分亮點；短語：in WeChat group；First of all；know…about..；each other；besides；all in all；communicate with；get good grades。句型：It’s+adj.+for sb to do sth.

1. It is easy to use WeChat to communicate with our friends.
2. I will share wish you about my unhappy experience between my friends and me.
3. If we don’t behave well, they can communicate with us in time.
4. All in all, it’s convenient for our teachers to do so, and it’s an effective way for our parents to know more about us.
5. First of all, we can know more about our classmates by comparing with each other.
6. I'm sorry to hear that you meet many challenges in the boarding school.
7. Besides, you can also play sports with your classmates.
8. I will send blessing words and red envelopes to my relatives and friends through Wechat.
9. You say you miss your parents very much.
10. I will go to school by myself and not let my parents pick me up.
11. I'm sorry to hear that you meet many challenges in the boarding school.
12. You say you miss your parents very much.
13. I will go to school by myself and not let my parents pick me up.
14. I will send blessing words and red envelopes to my relatives and friends through Wechat.
15. Sometimes parents are worried about their children’s friendship and studies.

The topic of ①-----------------（主題）is becoming more and more popular recently. There are two sides of opinions about it.?
Some people say A is their favorite. They hold their view for the reason of ②-----------------（支持A的理由一）What is more, ③-------------理由二). Moreover, ④---------------(理由三).
While others think that B is a better choice in the following three reasons. Firstly,-----------------(支持B的理由一). Secondly (besides),⑥------------------（理由二）. Thirdly (finally),⑦------------------(理由三).
From my point of view, I think ⑧----------------（我的觀點）. The reason is that ⑨--------------------(原因). As a matter of fact, there are some other reasons to explain my choice. For me, the former is surely a wise choice .

（一）
李文的父母都去外地打工了，把李文送去了寄宿學校。但是到了寄宿學校之后，李文面臨著很多挑戰(zhàn)。假如你是王明，請根據(jù)下列提示，給李文寫一封信，提出合理的建議，幫他迅速適應新的生活。
挑戰(zhàn)
建議
沒有朋友，感覺孤單
積極參加社團，會交到新朋友
作業(yè)比以前多
抓緊時間寫作業(yè)，不會的向老師、同學求助
想念父母
周末用微信和父母聊天，和同學一起做運動

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【參考范文】
Dear Li Wen，
I'm sorry to hear that you meet many challenges in the boarding school. Since you always feel lonely without friends，you'd better join a club to make more friends. You are good at playing basketball，so it's a good choice to join the basketball club. Maybe you used to have a little homework，but now you have more time to do homework at school. And if you have any problems, you can ask your teachers and classmates for help. You say you miss your parents very much. I strongly believe it. Why not chat with your parents on WeChat on weekends? Besides, you can also play sports with your classmates.
I hope you can get used to the new life in your boarding school.
Yours,
Wang Ming
【解析】
題干解讀：本文屬于材料作文，要求學生以王明的身份給李文寫一封信，注意要用信件的格式。信的內(nèi)容包括到寄宿學校后，李文會面臨的三個挑戰(zhàn)以及相應的建議。
例文點評：例文主要以第二人稱進行描述，符合信件的形式，顯得真實關切；時態(tài)采用一般現(xiàn)在時為主。例文嚴格按照信件格式，開頭結尾也有適當?shù)膯柡蛘Z等；內(nèi)容方面把材料要求的幾點挑戰(zhàn)與建議都寫清楚了，行文層次分明、邏輯嚴密、內(nèi)容豐富。
高分亮點：短語：meet challenges in；had better do；be good at；used to do；ask sb. for help；get used to。
句型：that引導的賓語從句；since引導的原因狀語從句；it’s + n. + to do sth.；if引導的條件狀語從句；why not do sth。

（二）
再過幾天，中國最重要的節(jié)日——春節(jié)就要到了，請以“My small targets of this Spring Festival” 為題，根據(jù)表中所給中文提示寫一篇 100 詞左右介紹你這個春節(jié)小目標。

春節(jié)前
1.幫助父母做事，包括大掃除、貼春聯(lián)、做饅頭、包餃子；
2.準備好新衣服和小禮物；
3.在除夕夜，與家人吃一頓豐盛的晚餐后，觀看春節(jié)聯(lián)歡晚會，等待新年的到來；

春節(jié)后
1.通過微信，與親戚、朋友互發(fā)祝福話語、紅包；
2. ……（新的一年學習目標）
3.……（新的一年生活目標）
要求：要點全面，補充得當，行文流暢；開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名、校名等信息。
詞匯：貼春聯(lián) put up couplets；親戚 relatives；祝福話語 blessings；微信 Wechat。
My small targets of this Spring Festival
The new Spring Festival is coming in a few days. Now I am setting some small targets of the coming new year.
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My small targets of this Spring Festival
The new Spring Festival is coming in a few days. Now I am setting some small targets of the coming new year. Before the Spring Festival, I plan to do three things. The first, I will help my parents do things, including cleaning, pasting Spring Festival couplets, making steamed bread and making dumplings. The second, I will prepare new clothes and small gifts. The third, on New Year's Eve, after having a big dinner with my family, I am going to watch the Spring Festival Gala and wait for the arrival of the New Year. On the day of Spring Festival, I will send blessing words and red envelopes to my relatives and friends through Wechat. After the Spring Festival,I will study hard to achieve good results. I will go to school by myself and not let my parents pick me up.
【解析】
這是一篇材料作文。以“My small targets of this Spring Festival”為題，根據(jù)表中所給中文提示寫一篇 100 詞左右介紹你這個春節(jié)小目標。本文主要書寫新年打算，可知主要時態(tài)是一般將來時。認真閱讀表格內(nèi)容，審清主題，根據(jù)表格提示要點，列出本文的寫作提綱。寫作中可適當使用連詞，注意表達順序，表達要有條理性，語句通順，意思連貫，要符合邏輯關系，字數(shù)要在100詞以上。寫完以后，注意再讀一遍，看看有無拼寫、語法錯誤（時態(tài)、主謂一致等）。本文提綱：
我今年春節(jié)的小目標
幾天后就要過春節(jié)了?，F(xiàn)在我正在為即將到來的新年設定一些小目標。春節(jié)前，我計劃做三件事。首先，我會幫助我的父母做一些事情，包括打掃，貼春聯(lián)，做饅頭，做餃子。第二，我會準備新衣服和小禮物。第三，在除夕夜，我和家人吃了一頓大餐后，要去看春節(jié)聯(lián)歡晚會，等待新年的到來。春節(jié)那天，我會通過微信給親朋好友發(fā)祝福詞和紅包。春節(jié)過后，我會努力學習，取得好成績。我要自己去上學，不要讓父母來接我。
【點睛】
這篇文章包含了表格中所有的內(nèi)容，條理清楚，語句通順，書寫規(guī)范，時態(tài)運用正確，語句通順，意思連貫，是一篇不錯的文章。（1）學習中注意總結，牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時就可以適當引用，使文章的表達更有邏輯性，更富有條理。（2）列好提綱和要點及需要的重要短語或句型。（3）切忌堆砌詞語、句子，注意運用適當?shù)倪B詞使句子流暢、連貫。注意表達的順序。（4）注意書寫的規(guī)范：大小寫、標點符號等的正確運用。（5）注意檢查：單詞拼寫、語法、動詞時態(tài)、語序、主謂一致等。

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我們經(jīng)常使用微信（WeChat）與同學和朋友交流，這里面可能涉及到個人隱私，假如你的父母想看你的聊天記錄，你會同意嗎？學校英語報正在就此話題進行討論，請你整理以下討論結果，并發(fā)表自己的看法。

理由
同學觀點
1.每個人都有自己的隱私，微信是我們與朋友一起分享心事，傾述煩惱的理想(ideal)場所，不希望父母看到。
2.父母會過度擔心我們的交友，學習等。
你的觀點
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注意：
1.詞數(shù)：80左右
2.包含以上各點，意思連貫、符合邏輯。
Talking on mobile WeChat has become more and more popular now. But will you share everything on your WeChat with your parents?_______________________________________________________________________
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Talking on mobile WeChat has become more and more popular now. But will you share everything on your WeChat with your parents?
With WeChat, we can communicate with friends by sending text messages, voice messages, we can share our photos or videos, share our location, we can even chat with lots of friends at the same time. More important, it is free for the users. Some think that everyone has their own privacy. WeChat is the ideal place for us to share our thoughts with friends, and we don't want our parents to see it. Sometimes parents are worried about their children’s friendship and studies.
In my opinion, we may share our ideas with our parents. They can help us solve problems.
【解析】
這里是一篇關于微信的，可不可以讓家長來看，在短文中寫出同學們的觀點和自己的問題。不要遺漏要點，所寫的句子要符合英語語法，要使用自己熟悉的單詞和句式，短語用了一些短語和句式，用了that引導的賓語從句，增加了文章的亮點。
【點睛】
1.仔細審題，明確要求。審讀所給信息，弄清楚所要表達的內(nèi)容要點，然后對所給的信息進行梳理，可根據(jù)內(nèi)容要點適當調(diào)整寫作順序，使文章行文連貫。
2.列全要點，即提綱要點化，然后寫作成文。
此時我們就必須在大腦中將各種信息點補充完整，適時使用高級詞匯和復雜句式。要根據(jù)提示將要點表達清楚，使文章的內(nèi)容完整、飽滿、要點齊全，注意適當增加細節(jié)。同時注意句子與句子之間，段落與段落之間要有合理的過渡銜接。
3.檢查核實，確保無誤。

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假如你是Li Na，在一個名為“Growing Pains（成長的煩惱）”的微信群里，看到以下內(nèi)容。請根據(jù)問題及寫作要求，回復微信。講述發(fā)生在你和朋友之間的一件不愉快的經(jīng)歷。針對這些煩惱，你又有什么建議的？
要求：60詞左右，開頭己給出：

Hello! I am Frank. I got a fight with my best friend last week. I felt very upset. Do you have the same experience? Can you give us some advice? If we talk to others, we' ll surely feel better.

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Hello! I am Li Na. I will share wish you about my unhappy experience between my friends and me. Never can I forgot the time when I prepared for my final exam. During those days, I had endless homework so that I couldn’t finish it. In order to deal with the problem, I decided to copy my friend’s homework. But to my surprise, she refused me and gave me no reason. I felt very angry with her. After that, I felt very sorry for that and tried my best to improve our relationship.
In my view, it is best not to run away from the problems. If you are brave enough, you are halfway to being successful. You had better talk with your friends or ask your parents for help. When you share problems with your friends, you should find a chance to communicate with them.
【解析】
1. 題干解讀：文章是一篇話題作文，主要圍繞“Growing Pains（成長的煩惱）”展開討論，直接分享自己的親身經(jīng)歷，描述自己的成長的煩惱，以及自己在煩惱過程中所采取的方法，然后把這個方法或者建議和好朋友一起分享，讓朋友也能從中得到一些建議。
2. 例文點評：文章采取兩段式，直接開篇直入主題，講述自己與朋友之間發(fā)生的不愉快，第二段給出自己的建議，供朋友參考。文章結構完整，語句銜接較自然，語言表達準確。
3. 高分亮點：短語：prepare for；deal with；feel sorry for；try one’s best to do sth；in one’s view；run away from。