同步練習(xí)Part IV  Writing妙筆生花　　閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Steve was the most amazing person in all of Minneapolis，and he was my cousin. By the age of 19，Steve was a star baseball player at the University of Minnesota. I wanted to be exactly like him. So when Steve asked me to go with him on a spring fishing trip in northern Minnesota，I was excited!　　After planning the trip，we gathered clothes and supplies，and began our great adventure. We reached the Superior National Forest in northern Minnesota by early evening. On our way to the campsite，Steve pointed to a small house faraway in one of the mountains，saying that it was the ranger station（護(hù)林站） where the forester worked.　　Finally，after a long walk，we reached the campsite and set up camp as the sun was setting. Steve knew all the tricks of an experienced wilderness camper. After we gathered enough wood from the forest，he started the campfire using only stone and steel—no matches. For supper we feasted on freeze-dried beef，wild rice and pea soup. I ate greedily after all that work.　　Tired enough，we climbed into our sleeping bags early and talked about our plans for fishing the next day. We were still talking quietly when a sudden north wind picked up；the temperature dropped and it began to snow. Steve found a way to increase the temperature inside the tent. He dragged a log （原木） from the forest to the opposite side of the campfire. Then he wrapped aluminum foil（鋁箔） around the log. The heat from the fire reflected off the foil and into the tent. Soon images of lake fish were filling my dreams.　　The snow had stopped，but sometime later a powerful wind must have kicked up the flames of our dying fire. I was abruptly awakened by Steve. Our tent was on fire. Frightened，I ran out of the tent immediately. The tent collapsed（倒塌） with Steve inside. Without any thought of endangering myself，I reached into the burning tent and pulled him to the icy lake. Fortunately，we were not seriously hurt.注意：續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右。Later，as we stood by the burning tent to keep warm，we considered our difficult situation.        ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Suddenly，we heard a noise in the forest.     _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________步驟一：品讀語篇——抓住要點(diǎn)很關(guān)鍵　　前文概要　　第一段：我的堂兄史蒂夫是我的偶像。他讓我和他一起去釣魚旅行時(shí)，我很興奮！　　第二段：傍晚，我們到達(dá)了一個(gè)國家森林。在去營地的路上，我們看到了護(hù)林員工作的護(hù)林站。　　第三段：我們在日落時(shí)搭起帳篷，生火吃飯。　　第四段：晚上氣溫下降，開始下雪。史蒂夫把鋁箔包在原木上使帳篷更加暖和。　　第五段：大風(fēng)把我們快要熄滅的火吹旺了，點(diǎn)燃了我們的帳篷。幸運(yùn)的是，我們沒有受重傷。步驟二：戴著鐐銬跳舞——研讀首句，高度融合原文，合理想象情節(jié)　?、倮m(xù)寫第一段所給首句為“Later，as we stood by the burning tent to keep warm，we considered our difficult situation.”。本段緊密銜接原文內(nèi)容，因?yàn)閹づ裨诖蠡?/span>中化為灰燼，包括衣服、手機(jī)以及其他所需物品，加之營地遠(yuǎn)離公路，面對這樣的困境，即使史蒂夫也不知道該怎么辦。　　②續(xù)寫第二段所給首句為“Suddenly，we heard a noise in the forest.”。本句提示有個(gè)關(guān)鍵詞Suddenly，由此可推知在極大的困境中，事情有了新的轉(zhuǎn)變……步驟三：斟酌打磨——豐富續(xù)寫詞匯，生動(dòng)描述情節(jié)　　話題激活詞匯　　情感：unsure　anxiously　were able to　a friend and equal　　動(dòng)作：get out of　heard　listened　appeared　had spotted   drove us to　continues　　環(huán)境：in the deep of the forest　far away from the highway　in the middle of nowhere　in the cold airthe darkness　　句式翻譯　　1.我們的營地位于森林深處，遠(yuǎn)離公路。（主系表）　　____________________________________________________________________________________　　2. 我們身處茫茫荒野中。（主系表）____________________________________________________________________________________　　3.我們只穿著內(nèi)衣，我們的日用品和手機(jī)都化為了灰燼。（并列句和被動(dòng)結(jié)構(gòu)）____________________________________________________________________________________　　4.我們唯一能做的就是坐在寒冷的野外。（定語從句和不定式作表語）____________________________________________________________________________________　　5. 我們想知道怎么才能走出森林。（主謂賓）____________________________________________________________________________________　　6. 我們焦急地聽著，凝視著黑暗處。（并列謂語）　　____________________________________________________________________________________　　7. 一位護(hù)林員發(fā)現(xiàn)了火光，前來檢查。（并列句）____________________________________________________________________________________　　8. 護(hù)林員開車送我們到護(hù)林站。（主謂賓）____________________________________________________________________________________　　9. 我們有了衣服，也可以給父母打電話了。（被動(dòng)語態(tài)）____________________________________________________________________________________　　10. 正是在這次旅行中，史蒂夫開始把我當(dāng)作一個(gè)平等的朋友，而不是堂弟。（強(qiáng)調(diào)句）____________________________________________________________________________________步驟四：創(chuàng)造性表達(dá)——潤色注重細(xì)節(jié)，句式再造升級1. 把句2和句3合并為一個(gè)簡單句 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2. 把句4和句5合并________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________3. 把句7變?yōu)楹蟹侵^語動(dòng)詞的簡單句________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________4. 把句8和句9變?yōu)楹蟹窍拗菩远ㄕZ從句的復(fù)合句________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________步驟五：高分在即——連句成篇，結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，邏輯銜接Later，as we stood by the burning tent to keep warm，we considered our difficult situation.        ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Suddenly，we heard a noise in the forest.     _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Part IV  Writing參考答案步驟三1.Our campsite was in the deep of the forest，really far away from the highway.2.We were in the middle of nowhere.3.We wore only underwear，and our supplies and cellphones had been burnt into ashes.4.The only thing we could do was（to） sit in the cold air.5.We wondered how to get out of the forest.6. Anxiously we listened and stared into the darkness. 7.A forester had spotted the light from the fire and he came to have a check.8.The forester drove us to the ranger station.9.We were given clothes and were able to call our parents.10.It was on this trip that Steve began to treat me more like a friend and equal，rather than a younger cousin. 步驟四1.We were in the middle of nowhere，wearing only underwear，with our supplies burnt into ashes and our cellphones included.2.The only thing was just for us to sit in the cold air and wonder how to get out of the forest.3.A forester had spotted the light from the fire，coming to have a check.4.The forester drove us to the ranger station，where we were given clothes and were able to call our parents.步驟五　　Later，as we stood by the burning tent to keep warm，we considered our difficult situation. Our campsite was in the deep of the forest，really far away from the highway. We were in the middle of nowhere，wearing only underwear，with our supplies burnt into ashes and our cellphones included. Even Steve was unsure what to do next. The only thing was just for us to sit in the cold air and wonder how to get out of the forest.　　Suddenly，we heard a noise in the forest. Anxiously we listened and stared into the darkness. A jeep appeared. A forester had spotted the light from the fire，coming to have a check. We jumped into the warm vehicle and the forester drove us to the ranger station，where we were given clothes and were able to call our parents. Steve and I had many more camping adventures from then on，but it was on this trip that Steve began to treat me more like a friend and equal，rather than a younger cousin. Our friendship continues to this day. 

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