高中英語外研版 (2019)必修第一冊Unit 6 At one with nature一課一練-試卷下載-教習(xí)網(wǎng)

同步練習(xí)Part IV Writing妙筆生花閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。續(xù)寫的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右。 I always wondered how people would react if I tried to approach a total stranger for help in a busy place like a street corner or in a bustling mall. I personally have always hurried past a stranger who tried to catch my attention in a busy place or when I was rushing around. Yesterday I had a taste of being stuck in such a desperate situation where my only hope of help would have to come from a total stranger. I was in a busy shopping mall buying a large piece of luggage. After the purchase in one of the large，fancy，expensive shops，I picked up my phone from my pocket to call my driver waiting in the parking lot and my phone was dead. I then requested the shop assistant who had just soldme the luggage，which was not cheap at all，if she could ring the number of my driver for me. She replied，still all smiles，“I’m sorry，Sir，but it is the shop policy that we cannot use mobile phones while working in the shop.” As I was wondering what kind of policy that was，I saw a nice-looking boy coming towards me. Remembering my wife’s interesting theory that beautiful people are more likely to give you a hand when you’re in trouble，I thought I might have a chance. But before I could say a word，he walked past me. It turned out he simply didn’t see me. I waited a bit longer in the mall but it seemed nobody bothered to look at me. Disappointed and tired，I got out of the shop onto the busy street in front. I stood there with people rushing by，looking at their faces to see if there was a sign of kindness. I began wondering how many times I had reacted to strangers like the shop girl and the boy. At that point I saw a young mother with her two kids. Finally a man wearing a cheap T-shirt and dirty jeans seemed to notice me. 步驟一：品讀語篇——抓住要點(diǎn)很關(guān)鍵　　前文概要第一段：作者想知道在繁忙之地向陌生人求助，他們會(huì)有何反應(yīng)？而作者自己以前對于這種求助的反應(yīng)是熟視無睹、漠不關(guān)心。第二段：身臨其境，將唯一希望寄托于陌生人。第三段：在商店購買一件很大的行李，當(dāng)與等候在外的司機(jī)聯(lián)系時(shí)，手機(jī)關(guān)機(jī)了。第四段：向剛剛賣給作者行李的商店售貨員尋求幫助，遭拒。第五段：向經(jīng)過的男孩求助，遭無視。第六段：走出商店到繁華路段，看到匆忙過往的行人，作者反思自己遇到這種情況時(shí)的漠不關(guān)心。步驟二：戴著鐐銬跳舞——研讀首句，高度融合原文，合理想象情節(jié) 由第一段所給首句可知，本段緊密銜接原文內(nèi)容，因?yàn)樽髡邚纳痰瓿鋈ミ€是為了解決與司機(jī)聯(lián)系的事情，期盼得到陌生人的幫助，但結(jié)合第二段給出的提示，顯然第一段作者遇到的a young mother with her two kids并沒有給作者提供幫助。根據(jù)第二段所給首句中的關(guān)鍵詞Finally，正常思維應(yīng)該是作者得到了這個(gè)人的幫助，此處的a cheap T-shirt and dirty jeans與原文中的nice-looking形成對比。步驟三：斟酌打磨——豐富續(xù)寫詞匯，生動(dòng)描述情節(jié) 話題激活詞匯情感：angry，anxious，kind，kindness，happy，sad 動(dòng)作：smile，request，wait，walk，help 人生態(tài)度：ignore，warm，cold，serious，friendly，honest，credible 環(huán)境：mall，shop，road，street 句式翻譯 1. 一個(gè)有著迷人藍(lán)眼睛的漂亮女人一定愿意幫助我。（定語從句） _________________________________________________________________________________ 2. 我迅速朝她走去，面帶得體的微笑。（with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)） _________________________________________________________________________________ 3. 我禮貌地請求。（主謂狀） _________________________________________________________________________________ 4. 她很善良，可以幫我打個(gè)電話。（kind enough to） _________________________________________________________________________________ 5. 我看到的是一張因皺眉而變丑的女人的臉。（過去分詞短語作定語） _________________________________________________________________________________ 6. 我聽到的是她低聲發(fā)出的驚恐和懷疑的聲音。（主語從句） _________________________________________________________________________________ 7. 她把孩子們從我身邊拉開，好像被一個(gè)殺人犯嚇著了。（as if） _________________________________________________________________________________ 8. 我仍然站在那里，面無表情，心往下沉。（介詞短語作狀語） _________________________________________________________________________________ 9. 我擠出一絲微笑并向他提出了同樣的要求。（squeeze，request） _________________________________________________________________________________ 10. 微笑無法掩飾我的疲倦。（fail to do）_________________________________________________________________________________步驟四：創(chuàng)造性表達(dá)——潤色注重細(xì)節(jié)，句式再造升級 1. 用介詞短語作定語升級第1句 _________________________________________________________________________________ 2. 用if/whether連接第3、4句_________________________________________________________________________________ 3. 把第5、6句變?yōu)椴⒘芯?/span>_________________________________________________________________________________ 4. 用省略句簡化第7句_________________________________________________________________________________ 5. 用讓步狀語從句連接第9、10句_________________________________________________________________________________步驟五：高分在即——連句成篇 At that point I saw a young mother with her two kids. Finally a man wearing a cheap T-shirt and dirty jeans seemed to notice me.
Part IV Writing參考答案步驟三1. A beautiful woman who has charming blue eyes must be willing to help me.2. I walked quickly towards her with an appropriate smile on my face. 3. I requested politely.4. She could be kind enough to make a phone call for me.5. What I saw was a woman’s face disfigured by a frown.6. What I heard was a sound of panic and suspicion under her breath.7. She pulled her kids to escape from me，as if she was scared by a murderer.8. I still stood there with a blank face and a sinking heart.9. I squeezed a smile and requested the same thing from him.10. The smile failed to mask my weariness.步驟四1. A beautiful woman with charming blue eyes must be willing to help me.2. I requested politely if/whether she could be kind enough to make a phone call for me.3. What I saw was a woman’s face disfigured by a frown and what I heard was a sound of panic and suspicion under her breath.4. She pulled her kids to escape from me，as if scared by a murderer.5. I squeezed a smile though it failed to mask my weariness，and requested the same thing from him.步驟五One possible version： At that point I saw a young mother with her two kids. I thought that a beautiful woman with charming blue eyes must be willing to help me. So，with great expectation，I walked quickly towards her with an appropriate smile on my face，and requested politely if/whether she could be kind enough to make a phone call for me. However，what I saw was a woman’s face disfigured by a frown and what I heard was a sound of panic and suspicion under her breath. Without a word，she pulled her kids to escape from me，as if scared by a murderer. I still stood there with a blank face and a sinking heart. Finally a man wearing a cheap T-shirt and dirty jeans seemed to notice me. I squeezed a smile though it failed to mask my weariness，and requested the same thing from him. Unexpectedly，he took out his mobile phone for me without hesitation or any further questions. Dancing in his eyes was the real kindness that I had been struggling to seek for so long. From that day on，I began helping other strangers in a worry，just like the poor-looking but kind man，with the aim of passing kindness and melting the ice in many people’s hearts.

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