人教版八年級(jí)下冊(cè)英語 Unit 5 What were you doing when the rainstorm came？滿分話題作文范文與解析 學(xué)案 1．假如你是李華，請(qǐng)根據(jù)提示完成作文，記錄你和你的家人昨晚7: 00做的事情，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。 詞數(shù)：不少于65詞 (開頭和結(jié)尾部分已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))。 1. 你在做作業(yè)，而你哥哥在玩電腦游戲； 2. 你的媽媽在做飯而你的爸爸在看球賽； 3. 你的爺爺奶奶在聊天，你的妹妹在和寵物玩。 參考詞匯 do one’s homework, play computer games, watch football games... Now I’d like to share a family moment with you. At 7 o’clock last night, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ How happy we were! 【答案】例文 Now I’d like to share a family moment with you. At 7 o’clock last night, I was doing my homework at home. I would have an important test next day. Meanwhile, my brother was playing computer games. While my mother was cooking in the kitchen, my father was watching football games on TV in the living room. Where were my grandparents? They were in the living room, too. While they were talking happily with each other, my little sister was playing with her lovely pet. How happy we were! 【解析】 【詳解】 1.題干解讀：本文主要描述自己家人昨天晚上7點(diǎn)正在做的事情，題干中給出了細(xì)節(jié)要點(diǎn)，寫作時(shí)不要遺漏，也可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使文章更加流暢。 2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文以第一人稱和過去進(jìn)行時(shí)為主。文章主要描述7點(diǎn)時(shí)每個(gè)人正在做的事情，寫作時(shí)要注意運(yùn)用過去進(jìn)行時(shí)，也要運(yùn)用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞使文章層次清晰、邏輯清楚。做到無單詞拼寫和語法錯(cuò)誤。 2．根據(jù)提示寫一段短文，談?wù)勀愫蚆ary上星期天做的事情, 80詞以上，開頭已寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。These days students have a lot of stress from school.They are always busy even on Sundays. Last Sunday, Mary was very busy. What about you? Last Sunday, Mary was very busy, and so did I._____________________________________________ 【答案】One possible version: Last Sunday, Mary was very busy, and so did I. When Mary was reading English at 9:00, I was listening to the English tapes. At 10:00, while she was doing math homework, I was watching TV, because my favorite program was on at that time. After that I had lunch with my dad . From 2:00 to 3:00 p.m. Mary and I were having a piano lesson together. Both of us like playing the piano. But at 4:00 last Sunday afternoon, while Mary was visiting her friends ,I had to do my homework. 【解析】 【詳解】 本文屬于材料作文，談?wù)撐液蚆ary上個(gè)星期做的事情。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。 【亮點(diǎn)說明】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語言表達(dá)符合英語習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致，特別適用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如busy，so did I，English tapes，while，at that time，have a piano lesson,both of us等。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫。 點(diǎn)睛：寫作時(shí)可以從以下幾個(gè)方面做起： 認(rèn)真審題。審好題是寫好書面表達(dá)的關(guān)鍵。審題時(shí)要注意試題的要求，抓住要點(diǎn)，詞數(shù)符合要求。 構(gòu)思提綱。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫作材料。通常書面表達(dá)給出的話題是開放的，而具體的內(nèi)容要求學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀?、明確的關(guān)鍵。 初寫短文。一切都準(zhǔn)備就緒，就可以動(dòng)筆寫作了，在寫作的過程中我們要注意句子的準(zhǔn)確性、連貫性以及簡(jiǎn)潔性。使用的詞語、短語及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。同時(shí)還要注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。 修改潤(rùn)色。修改潤(rùn)色是獲取高分的必要步驟。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯(cuò)誤外，還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無重復(fù)、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。 3．你經(jīng)歷過什么令你印象深刻的事情嗎？ 假設(shè)在本周的英語口語課上，老師要求每個(gè)小組講述一件記憶深刻的事情。請(qǐng)你以“An Unforgettable Event”為題，寫一篇英語短文， 代表小組發(fā)言。 寫作提示：1. 事件發(fā)生的時(shí)間和地點(diǎn)； 2. 事件發(fā)生的時(shí)候你在做什么； 3. 事件的重要意義或令你印象深刻的原因。 寫作要求：1. 語句通順，條理清晰，詳略得當(dāng)，書寫工整； 2. 100詞左右，開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。 An Unforgettable Event I have a good friend. He is on a basketball team. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________. 【答案】例文： An Unforgettable Event I have a good friend. He is on a basketball team. He had a game last Saturday. I promised to go to cheer him up, but on that day I woke up late. So I made my way to the playground in a hurry. While I was running to the bus stop, I saw a woman and she was lost. She was new here and didn't know the way to the City Hospital, so I took her there. Finally, when I got to the playground, the game almost ended. I said sorry and explained the reason. He said, "It doesn't matter." I remember this event well because it reminds me of doing what I should do at any time. 【解析】 【詳解】 1. 題干解讀：該題目要求以“An Unforgettable Event”為題作文，根據(jù)所給提示和要求寫一件記憶深刻的事情。 2. 寫作指導(dǎo)：審題可知，這篇短文應(yīng)以第一、三人稱和一般過去時(shí)為主來敘述，寫作時(shí)要承接開頭，緊緊圍繞提示內(nèi)容，寫清楚何時(shí)、何地、何事，為什么難忘，必要時(shí)可作合理的補(bǔ)充，最后簡(jiǎn)單總結(jié)，照樣全文；做到主題突出，結(jié)構(gòu)完整。 4．Lily上周六下午去她叔叔家了。請(qǐng)根據(jù)表格信息，寫一篇約70個(gè)單詞的英文短文，描述她剛到她叔叔家時(shí)看到的情景。 【答案】Lily went to her uncle’s home last Saturday afternoon. When she arrived, her uncle was looking through a newspaper on a chair while her aunt was reading a book on the sofa. Her cousin Johnny was watching an English movie on the computer. Their dog Jimmy was drinking water. When they saw her, they were very happy. The dog even kept jumping around her. 【解析】 【詳解】 試題分析：這是一篇提綱類作文。根據(jù)所給表格中所提供的信息，用英文描述Lily剛到她叔叔家時(shí)看到的情景。結(jié)合語境理解，可知短文應(yīng)該一般過去時(shí)態(tài)與過去進(jìn)行時(shí)態(tài)來描述，人稱為第三人稱，寫作時(shí)注意主謂一致，同時(shí)還應(yīng)注意寫作中要有適當(dāng)性的發(fā)揮，做到語句通順、語意連貫。 點(diǎn)睛：在完成寫作時(shí)，首先要把握文章的體裁，根據(jù)信息內(nèi)容可知，這是一篇記敘文寫作。人稱的選擇為第三人稱，文中要用到過去進(jìn)行時(shí)態(tài)，要正確掌握其構(gòu)成形式were/was+ doing ,注意主謂一致。寫作中要用到when/while的時(shí)間狀語從句，要區(qū)分它們的用法，與while連用的時(shí)態(tài)只能是進(jìn)行時(shí)態(tài)。 5．假如你是大明，描述上星期六晚上7點(diǎn)鐘，你們一家人都在做什么。 要求：1.詞數(shù)：80左右； 2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。 ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Hello, I'm Darning. Last Saturday evening, my family were all at home. At 7:00, my grandparents were watching TV in the room. My father was drawing a picture at the desk. My mother was washing clothes. My sister wanted to take part in a piano competition and she was playing the piano. What was my brother doing? Oh, he was chatting with his friends on the Internet. What about me? I was listening la music in my bedroom. What a happy family! 【解析】 【詳解】 這是一篇圖表，要求介紹星期六晚上7點(diǎn)鐘，你們一家人都在做什么。動(dòng)筆前先要認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn)，圍繞要點(diǎn)組織材料，然后用正確的英語句子把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來，在此基礎(chǔ)上亦可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點(diǎn)。根據(jù)材料可知本文主要是應(yīng)用過去進(jìn)行時(shí)態(tài)，注意謂語動(dòng)詞的正確形式，注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)及大小寫等問題，不要犯語法錯(cuò)誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語意連貫。 6．假如你是一名警察，昨晚10點(diǎn)住新星旅館206房間的王先生外出時(shí)房間失竊了。你詢問了其他房間的幾個(gè)鄰居當(dāng)時(shí)在干什么。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面表格提示寫一則調(diào)查報(bào)告。 注意：1.以警察的身份來寫； 2．可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，主要用過去進(jìn)行時(shí)； 3．70詞左右。文章開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Mr.Wang in Room 206 in Xinxing Hotel called to say he was stolen at 10 o'clock last night while he was out.We asked a few of his neighbors what they were doing at that time. Here is the result. Miss Li in Room 106 said she was chatting online with friends. Mr. Zhang in Room 204 was taking a shower. Mr. Liu in Room 207 was watching TV. Mr. Xia in Room 306 said he was writing a letter then. Old John in Room 105 said he was sleeping. We will keep on doing some other surveys and try to find the thief. 【解析】 【詳解】 【亮點(diǎn)說明】這篇習(xí)作的層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達(dá)流暢。文中使用了非常好的短語，例如last night，a few of，at that time，be chatting online，take a shower，watch TV，keep on doing，try to do，等。而Mr.Wang in Room 206 in Xinxing Hotel called to say he was stolen at 10 o'clock last night while he was out./ We asked a few of his neighbors what they were doing at that time. Here is the result./ Miss Li in Room 106 said she was chatting online with friends.等多種復(fù)雜從句結(jié)構(gòu)的運(yùn)用更是為文章增色不少。 點(diǎn)睛：這是一篇提綱作文。根據(jù)表格內(nèi)容可知用一般過去時(shí)，按照提示內(nèi)容逐條進(jìn)行適當(dāng)?shù)陌l(fā)揮，最后連接成一篇完整的作文即可。 7．假如你是一名警察，昨晚10點(diǎn)住新星旅館206房間的王先生外出時(shí)房間失竊了。你詢問了其他房間的幾個(gè)鄰居當(dāng)時(shí)在干什么。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面表格提示寫一則調(diào)查報(bào)告。 注意：1．以警察的身份來寫； 2．可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，主要用過去進(jìn)行時(shí)； 3.70詞左右。文章開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。 Mr. Wang in Room 206 in Xinxing Hotel called to say he was stolen at 10 o'clock last night while he was out. 【答案】Mr. Wang in Room 206 in Xinxing Hotel called to say he was stolen at 10 o'clock last night while he was out. We asked a few of his neighbors what they were doing at that time. Here is the result. Miss Li in Room 106 said she was chatting online with friends. Mr. Zhang in Room 204 was taking a shower. Mr. Liu in Room 207 was watching TV. Miss Xia in Room 306 said she was writing a letter then. Old John in Room 105 said he was sleeping. We will keep on doing some other surveys and try to find the thief. 【解析】 【詳解】 這是一篇提綱類作文，我們需要用正確的英語把給出的要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來。本作文中給出的要點(diǎn)比較具體,故需要準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)。寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞和句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用較高級(jí)詞匯和句型，以使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時(shí)要富于變化。 8．假設(shè)你叫王益，今天早晨上學(xué)途中，你目擊了一場(chǎng)交通事故。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下表信息，寫一篇英語短文敘述你的所見、所聞和所感。 要求：1.80詞左右；2.條理清晰，語句通順。參考詞匯：摩托車motorbike；遵守交通規(guī)則obey the traffic rules ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： This morning, on my way to school, I saw a traffic accident. It happened at 7:40 when I was waiting at the traffic lights. A man rode his motorbike and tried to cross the road when the traffic lights were red. Then the motorbike crashed into a bus. The man hurt his left leg seriously. The driver called 110 using his mobile phone. The policemen arrived at 7:50. They sent the man to hospital. I think safety is the most important thing. Everyone should obey the traffic rules. 【解析】 【詳解】 1.題干解讀：該題目屬于記敘文寫作。在寫作時(shí)應(yīng)根據(jù)題目要求講述交通事故的經(jīng)過、傷亡情況、救助過程及自己的感受。 2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文用第三人稱來寫作，時(shí)態(tài)采用一般過去時(shí)為主，講述交通事故的經(jīng)過敘述完整，條理清晰。 Last SundayMaryYou9:00~9:30read English listen to the English tapes10:00~11:00do math homeworkwatch TV12:00~1:00have lunch with Dadhave lunch with Dad2:00~3:30have a piano lessonhave a piano lesson4:00~5:00visit her friendsdo homework.Lily’s unclelooking through a newspaperLily’s auntreading a bookLily’s cousinwatching a movie Their dogdrinking waterFamily membersWhat they were doingGrandparentsWatch TVFatherDraw a pictureMotherWash clothesSisterPlay the pianoBrotherChat with friends on the InternetDamingListen to musicRoom 106 Miss Lichat online with friendsRoom 204 Mr.Zhangtake a showerRoom 207 Mr.Liuwatch TVRoom 306 Mr.Xiawrite a letterRoom 105 Old JohnsleepRoom 106 Miss LiRoom 204 Mr. ZhangRoom 207 Mr. LiuRoom 306 Miss XiaRoom 105 Old Johnchat online with friendstake a showerwatch TVwrite a lettersleep事故經(jīng)過上午7：40，你在紅綠燈處等候，當(dāng)紅燈亮?xí)r，一個(gè)男子騎著摩托車試圖穿過馬路，撞上了一輛公共汽車。傷亡情況男子傷了左腿，很嚴(yán)重。救助過程司機(jī)撥打了110，警察在7:50趕到，把這個(gè)男子送往了醫(yī)院。你的感受安全是最重要的，人人都應(yīng)該遵守交通規(guī)則。

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