人教版八年級下冊英語 Unit 4 Why don’t you talk to your parents？滿分話題作文范文與解析 學(xué)案 1．良好的家庭關(guān)系對青少年的健康成長很重要。但現(xiàn)實生活中，不少孩子和父母之間缺乏必要的溝通和交流。作為晚輩，我們應(yīng)該如何和父母友好相處呢？請根據(jù)下面的提示，以How to get on with parents?為題寫一篇80詞左右的文章。(文章開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)) How to get on with parents? For teenagers, it’s important to get on with parents.What should we do? 【答案】One possible version: How to get on with parents? For teenagers, it’s important to get on with parents. What should we do? Firstly,we should spend some time communicating with our parents. For example, we may talk about our teachers, classmates or the things that happen in school. Secondly, we should do something with our parents each week, such as making dinner or going shopping. We’ll improve our relationship with them in this way. Thirdly, we’d better discuss our problems with them. They will help us find better ways to solve them. It’s not easy to get on with parents. So we should learn to be understanding first. 【解析】 【詳解】 1.題干解讀：本題是一篇給提綱作文。要求根據(jù)所給的要點提示以“How to get on with parents?”為題寫一篇短文，談一談如何好人父母友好相處。注意要點齊全。 2.寫作指導(dǎo)：審題可知，文章應(yīng)采取一般現(xiàn)在時和第三人稱進行敘述，文章開頭已給出，第二段就如何與父母相處提出詳細(xì)的建議；第三段簡要地概括結(jié)尾。第二段中可以用firstly, secondly, thirdly等等引出各要點，讓人一目了然。短文要詳略得當(dāng)，中心突出，內(nèi)容上要保證要點齊全，無單詞和語法上的錯誤。 2．中學(xué)生在成長過程中經(jīng)常會碰到一些煩惱。假設(shè)你是李華，請根據(jù)下表提示，用英語寫一篇發(fā)言稿，在班會上談?wù)勀阌龅降臒酪约澳阕约旱淖龇ā? 要求：1. 詞數(shù)100左右，開頭及結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。 2. 所寫內(nèi)容必須包括表格中所有的信息，并作適當(dāng)?shù)陌l(fā)揮。 3. 不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名、校名、地名等相關(guān)信息。 Hello everyone, Hello everyone, I am Li Hua. I’d like to talk about my problems and how I deal with them. That’s all. Thank you! 【答案】Hello everyone, I am Li Hua. I’d like to talk about my problems and how I deal with them. I am not very tall and very common. But I don’t care and I believe in myself. My parents don’t understand me and I have very few friends. I encourage myself to be kind to others and learn to communicate with others very well. I often feel stressed because of my study and I don’t have many chances to join the after-class activities. I will plan my time very carefully and improve my study in a very good way. Try to join as many activities as possible and achieve a balance between study and hobbies. That’s all. Thank you! 【解析】 【詳解】 試題分析：本題是一篇給材料作文，要求用英語寫一篇發(fā)言稿，在班會上談?wù)勀阌龅降臒酪约澳阕约旱淖龇?。要求從個人外貌特點、與人溝通及學(xué)習(xí)壓力等方面進行寫作。要包含表格中所有的信息，并作適當(dāng)?shù)陌l(fā)揮。短文用第一人稱形式，一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)。 寫作亮點：短文開頭直奔主題：我想要談?wù)勎业臒兰霸鯓犹幚硭麄?；后面三段分別從外貌上的煩惱、與父母交流上的障礙、學(xué)習(xí)上的壓力幾方面分別談?wù)撟约旱臒兰疤幚淼姆绞剑鷦泳唧w，條理分明。文中的不定式作賓補、作定語、作賓語用得準(zhǔn)確恰當(dāng)；and連接的并列句、并列謂語等等都使短文顯得簡捷生動。 【考點定位】 考查提綱類作文。 3．假設(shè)你是Tina，你的筆友Tom給你發(fā)了一封電子郵件，信中他訴說了他的煩惱：他最好的朋友要過生日，他的朋友們準(zhǔn)備的禮物都很貴，可是他卻沒有足夠的錢給最好的朋友買很昂貴的禮物。請根據(jù)提示給他寫一封回信，給他一些合理的建議。 提示：1. 買禮物并不一定必須買貴的。 2. 沒有必要因為不買貴的就感到難過。 3. 同學(xué)應(yīng)該會理解。 4. 花錢太多還得向父母要。 5. 可以買花或者自制賀卡等。 _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Dear Tom, Glad to hear from you, but I’m sorry to know that you’re so worried. In my opinion, gifts are just something to show our love. They can’t be measured by money. I don’t think you need to buy an expensive gift, although your classmates will buy expensive gifts for him. If you buy one expensive gift, you will need too much money. And if you don’t have enough money, you have to ask your parents for money. And I don’t think it is a good idea. Why don’t you buy some flowers and make a beautiful birthday card for your best friend? That’ll be enough to make him happy. Yours, Tina 【解析】 【詳解】 這是一篇應(yīng)用文寫作，根據(jù)情景設(shè)置，針對電子郵件中Tom所訴說的煩惱，提出自己合理化的建議。要點提示中共列舉了5點，這也是寫作的基本框架，要求考生認(rèn)真審題，根據(jù)漢語提示，去理清自己的寫作思路，準(zhǔn)確把握句子的時態(tài)，想著如選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)挠⒄Z句式去表達。文章中出現(xiàn)了兩個if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句：If you buy one expensive gift, you will need too much money. And if you don’t have enough money, you have to ask your parents for money.復(fù)合句的使用，豐富了語言表達效果。同時，對于最后一個要點的處理采用了提建議的一種表達方式：Why don’t you buy some flowers and make a beautiful birthday card for your best friend? ，也是作者消除好友煩惱的同時提出的合理化建議，成為文章的寫作亮點。 4．假如你叫林琳，你的美國筆友Joe給你寫了一封郵件傾訴自己的煩惱。請你根據(jù)郵件的內(nèi)容，給他寫一封回信，幫助他解決煩惱。 Dear Lin Lin， I am feeling unhappy these days.I don't know why I get angry so easily now.I shouted at my parents last week and had a fight with my best friend yesterday.What should I do？Could you give me some advice? I look forward to hearing from you. Yours， Joe 要求：1.詞數(shù)為70左右。 2．要求思路清晰，層次分明。 提示詞：forgive v. 原諒solve v. 解決 ________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Dear Joe, I was glad to hear from you, but I’m sorry to hear about your problems. I think you must say sorry to your parents and your best friend. Your family and your true friends are always with you. You can tell them about your problems. I think they will forgive you and help you to solve them. Also, you can listen to soft music when you get angry. It can help you relax. Best wishes. Yours, Lin Lin 【解析】 【詳解】 試題分析：這篇作文首先要求一定要讀懂筆友的信，只有讀懂了才能知道對方遇到了什么樣的問題，通過閱讀發(fā)現(xiàn)Joe近日心情不好而且和父母、最好的朋友之間都出現(xiàn)了一點摩擦，他寫信請求幫助。我們在作文中應(yīng)該提出一些解決方案（如何和他們相處，如何對待自己的壞心情），并通過語言安慰Joe，達到寫作的目的。 寫作亮點：首先表明收到信的感受，運用了固定句型（I am glad to hear from you），其次表達了如何對待父母和朋友的觀點（say sorry to…），簡單介紹了為什么要這么做的原因（be with you ），并對Joe進行了安慰，（they will forgive you and help you to solve them），最后，為Joe提出了好建議（listen to soft music），可以說結(jié)構(gòu)完整，邏輯清晰，完成了既定的寫作目標(biāo)。 5．假設(shè)你是張偉，你的英國筆友弗蘭克(Frank)來信告訴你，他因長時間打游戲與父母發(fā)生了爭吵，他現(xiàn)在很難過。請你根據(jù)以下要點及要求，給他寫一封英文回信。 要點：1.長時間打游戲是錯的，父母是對的；2．打游戲浪費時間，傷害眼睛，不利于學(xué)習(xí)；3．理解尊重父母，與他們好好相處；4．向父母道歉，與他們溝通；5．不打游戲，努力學(xué)習(xí)，幫父母做家務(wù)。 要求：1.必須包括以上所有要點，并可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2．詞數(shù)80左右(開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù))。 Dear Frank, I've received your letter and I know you argued with your parents. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Please be happy and everything will be better. Yours, Zhang Wei 【答案】例文 Dear Frank, I've received your letter and I know you argued with your parents. I really worry about you.I think it's wrong for you to play games for a long time.Your parents are right because playing games wastes a lot of time and it's bad for your eyes and study. You should understand and respect your parents and get on well with them. In this way, you can be happy and improve yourself quickly. I also think that you should make an apology to your parents, for you have made them very sad and angry. When you meet some trouble, you'd better communicate with them. Don't play games any more, study hard and never give up. If you're free, you can help them with housework. Please be happy and everything will be better. Yours, Zhang Wei 【解析】 【詳解】 1、題干解讀：題目要求給你的筆友寫一封英文回信，要求根據(jù)所給要點解決你的英國筆友弗蘭克(Frank)遇到的一些問題。 2、例文點評：例文采用三段式；時態(tài)主要以一般現(xiàn)在時為主；例文詳細(xì)介紹了處理問題的一些建議；結(jié)構(gòu)清晰；邏輯性強。 3、高分亮點： 短語：worry about；for a long time；be bad for；get on well with；had better do sth；communicate with。 句型：I think it's wrong for you to play games for a long time；When you meet some trouble, you'd better communicate with them。 【點睛】 首先認(rèn)真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點；然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫作要點及每個要點中可能要用到的表達，例如worry about；for a long time；be bad for；get on well with；had better do sth；communicate with等；然后緊扣要點，動筆寫作，在寫作過程中，要注意句與句、段與段之間的過渡，必要時可適當(dāng)運用表示轉(zhuǎn)折、因果、并列、比較等關(guān)系的連詞，使文章過渡平穩(wěn)，自然流暢；最后，要仔細(xì)檢查有無單詞拼寫錯誤、標(biāo)點符號誤用等，還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無重復(fù)、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。 6．假設(shè)你是張偉，你的英國筆友弗蘭克 (Frank) 來信告訴你，他因長時間打游戲與父母發(fā)生了爭吵，他現(xiàn)在很難過。請你根據(jù)以下要點及要求，給他寫一封英文回信。 寫作要點： 1.長時間打游戲是錯的，父母是對的； 2. 打游戲浪費時間，傷害眼睛，不利于學(xué)習(xí)； 3. 理解尊重父母，與他們好好相處； 4. 向父母道歉，與他們溝通； 5. 不打游戲，努力學(xué)習(xí)，幫父母做家務(wù)。 寫作要求： 1.必須包括以上所有要點，并可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮； 2．詞數(shù)80左右 (開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù))。 Dear Frank, I've received your letter and I know you argued with your parents. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Please be happy and everything will be better. Yours, Zhang Wei 【答案】例文： Dear Frank, I've received your letter and I know you argued with your parents. I really worry about you. I think it's wrong for you to play games for a long time. Your parents are right because playing games wastes a lot of time and it's bad for your eyes and study. You should understand and respect your parents and get on well with them. In this way, you can be happy and improve yourself quickly. I also think that you should make an apology to your parents, for you have made them very sad and angry. When you meet some trouble, you'd better communicate with them. Don't play games any more, study hard and never give up. If you're free, you can help them with housework. Please be happy and everything will be better. Yours, Zhang Wei 【解析】 【詳解】 1. 題干解讀：這篇作文要求寫信給弗蘭克，表明對打游戲的看法，提出和父母和睦相處的建議。寫作時需承接開頭圍繞寫作提示，亮明自己的看法。 2. 寫作指導(dǎo)：審題可知，這篇短文應(yīng)以第一、二人稱和一般現(xiàn)在時為主來敘述，寫作時要寫出長時間打游戲的危害及對于改善親子關(guān)系的建議，注意主謂一致，保證無語法和單詞拼寫錯誤。 7．假如你是Li Ping，請根據(jù)以下寫作要點寫一封80詞左右的email，向你的朋友Tom說明自己不能去參加他的生日宴會。 寫作要點： 1. 感謝邀請； 2. 道歉，說明你不能去參加他的生日宴會。 3. 簡要說明你不能參加的理由： (1) 奶奶臥病在床需要人照顧； (2) 父母出差要到香港下個月才能回來； (3) 自己的英語不是很好，英語考試即將來臨，要為英語考試準(zhǔn)備，多做聽力練習(xí)； 4. 告訴Tom你感到十分抱歉，請他見諒。祝他生日快樂！ 寫作要求： 1.不得使用真實的姓名和學(xué)校名； 2.可適當(dāng)加入細(xì)節(jié)，使內(nèi)容充實、行文連貫。 3.字跡工整、語言精練、表達準(zhǔn)確、條理清楚； 4.至少80詞。（不含已寫出的英文） Dear Tom, Thank you very much for inviting me to your birthday party.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best Wishes! Yours, Li Ping 【答案】One possible version Dear Tom, Thank you very much for inviting me to your birthday party. I’d love to go but I can’t. I have to look after my grandma because she is ill in bed. And my parents are out on business in Hong Kong. They are coming back next month. Also, my English is not so good. I must do more listening practice. I need to study for my coming English exam. I’m very sorry that I can’t go to your party. Thank you for inviting me. I hope you can have a good time. Happy birthday! Best Wishes! Yours, Li Ping 【解析】 【詳解】 1.題干解讀：該題目屬于應(yīng)用文寫作，寫作文體是郵件。在寫作時應(yīng)承接郵件開頭，按照郵件的格式來寫；首先是稱呼；然后是正文內(nèi)容，正文包含三個方面的內(nèi)容：感謝對方的邀請，拒絕對方的邀請，敘述拒絕的理由；結(jié)尾告訴對方自己無法參加的歉意以及對對方的祝福；最后落款，署名。 2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文應(yīng)該用第一人稱來敘述；時態(tài)采用一般現(xiàn)在時為主；按照郵件的格式敘述內(nèi)容；表達拒絕別人的邀請時，語言表達要委婉，態(tài)度要溫和；敘述拒絕的理由時，層次分明，條理清楚，內(nèi)容得當(dāng)；表達歉意時，誠懇真誠。 8．假如你是David，你的筆友Mark來郵件談到自己的煩惱：性格比較內(nèi)向，不善于與人交往，與同學(xué)的關(guān)系也不太融洽，所以在學(xué)習(xí)和生活中的壓力很大。請你給他回一封郵件，提一些建議。詞數(shù)：70詞左右。郵件開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計人總詞數(shù)。 Dear Mark， Thanks for your email.I am sorry to know that you are having problems at school. 【答案】Dear Mark, Thanks for your email. I am sorry to know that you are having problems at school. But I think there is no need to worry about it. You are very clever. I hope my advice can help. I think you should talk more with your friends about your problems. Try to be more outgoing and friendly to everyone. You can also tell your parents or your teachers that you need some help. Finally you should take part in some interesting activities after class to communicate often with your classmates. Hope you'll get along well with your classmates and make great progress in your study. Yours, David 【解析】 【詳解】 這是一篇給材料作文，給你的筆友Mark回信，給他提一些建議。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時，人稱為單數(shù)第一，二人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：I am sorry to……，You are……，But I think there is no need to……，You can……，F(xiàn)inally you should……, Hope you'll……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系. 點睛：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。開頭對Mark遇到的麻煩感到難過，接下來給他提了一些建議，最后希望他能和同學(xué)相處得好，并且學(xué)習(xí)進步。此處thanks for, worry about, talk with sb about sth, be friendly to, take part in, get along with, make progress等這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少。 與父母友好相處的要點· 主動交流：每天花些時間，與父母談?wù)劺蠋?，同學(xué)和學(xué)校的事； ·創(chuàng)造機會：每周至少跟父母一起做件事，比如做飯、逛商店等； ·討論問題：遇事多與父母討論，他們會幫你更好地解決問題。你的煩惱 你的做法 個頭不高，相貌平常 不必在意，相信自己 父母不理解，朋友少 學(xué)會溝通，友善待人 學(xué)習(xí)壓力大，課外活動少 ……（自主發(fā)揮，至少兩點） 

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