
本節(jié)課結(jié)束時(shí),學(xué)生能夠:1. 能夠基于寫(xiě)作目的和要求,在教師的指導(dǎo)下有效開(kāi)展寫(xiě)作準(zhǔn)備,梳理介紹介紹公園里人們從事活動(dòng)的結(jié)構(gòu),列出文章的內(nèi)容要點(diǎn);2. 能夠?qū)⒈締卧鶎W(xué)的詞匯、目標(biāo)結(jié)構(gòu)、句型以及各類功能表達(dá)遷移應(yīng)用到自己的寫(xiě)作之中,運(yùn)用現(xiàn)在進(jìn)行時(shí)介紹公園里人們從事的活動(dòng);3. 通過(guò)自評(píng)和互評(píng),不斷改進(jìn)自己的作品,使之完善,改進(jìn)初稿的結(jié)構(gòu)、內(nèi)容和語(yǔ)言。
按要求寫(xiě)出正確的單詞、詞組或句子。
發(fā)生 (動(dòng)詞) __________ 2. 時(shí)區(qū) (短語(yǔ)) ___________3. 全世界 (短語(yǔ)) __________ 4. 沖向……(短語(yǔ)) __________ 5. 匆忙(短語(yǔ)) __________ 6. 明亮地 (副詞) __________7. 緩慢地(副詞)__________ 8. 油畫(huà)(名詞)___________9. 燈光正明亮地照耀整個(gè)城市。 ___________________________10. 很多人正沖向地鐵。 _______________________ 11.黃色的出租車正接送客人。___________________12. 我的家人正參加游船。 ________________________________________
arund the wrld
Lights are shinging brightly acrss the city.
Many peple are rushing t the subway.
Yellw taxies are picking up and drpping ff the passengers
My family are taking part in a bat tur right nw
下列動(dòng)詞的現(xiàn)在分詞形式分別是什么呢?
sitting under a tree
reading a bk
ding sme cleaning
listening t music
reading a newspaper
sitting n a chair
Writing task(寫(xiě)作任務(wù))
觀察一幅公園的圖片,通過(guò)描述公園里發(fā)生的事情來(lái)寫(xiě)一個(gè)視頻腳本。要求文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、地名和校名。注意事項(xiàng):1. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)人名、校名等信息。2. 語(yǔ)言通順,意思連貫,條理清楚,書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范??梢赃m當(dāng)發(fā)揮。字?jǐn)?shù)要求:約80詞左右。
It is Sunday, and peple are ding different things in a park. Describe sme f the activities t a partner.
1. Sme peple are playing ftball n the grass.
2. A cuple is sitting under an umbrella, pssibly having a picnic.
3. A man is flying a kite in the sky.
4. Tw children are riding bicycles.
5. A persn is pushing a strller with a baby inside.
Write a vide script by describing what is happening in the park.
Nw it's ten 'clck in the mrning, and I'm at Peple's Park. Lk, the sun is shining! Let's take a lk at ...
A vide script is like a plan fr making a vide. It tells yu what peple say, what they d, and what yu see n the screen.
1. Knw Yur Gal and Wh Will WatchGal: Decide what yu want the vide t d. Maybe yu want t teach smething r make peple laugh.Wh: Think abut wh will watch. This helps yu chse the right wrds and style.2. Plan the PartsStart: Make the beginning interesting s peple want t watch mre.Middle: Tell the main stry r give the main infrmatin.End: Wrap up and leave a gd feeling.3. Write What Peple SayTalk Like Real Peple: Use wrds that sund like nrmal talking.Be Clear: Make sure it's easy t understand.Nt T Fast r Slw: Keep the talking at a gd speed.
Hw t write a vide script?
4. Say What Happens and What Yu SeeWhat Peple D: Write dwn what the actrs are ding.What Yu See: Describe the place, things, and any cl effects.Camera Stuff: Tell hw the camera shuld shw the scene (clse, far, mving).5. Add Details fr Making the VideScene Numbers: Number each part t keep track.Hw Scenes Change: Say hw ne scene ges t the next (like fading r cutting).Sunds and Music: Nte any nises r music in the backgrund.6. Check and FixRead Out Lud: Read the script ut lud t see if it sunds gd.Get Help: Ask thers fr their thughts and fix anything that needs fixing.Fix Mistakes: Check fr spelling and grammar errrs.
Nw it's ten 'clck in the mrning, and I'm at Peple's Park. Lk, the sun is shining! Let's take a lk at what's happening arund us. Over there, we see a grup f children playing n the swings. Their laughter fills the air. Nearby, a family is having a picnic under a large tree. They are enjying the pleasant weather. On the ther side, a cuple is jgging alng the park's path t stay fit and healthy. This is just a snapsht f the clurful life at Peple's Park n a beautiful Sunday mrning. It's a place where peple f all ages cme tgether t relax, exercise, and enjy the utdrs.
Writing Framewrk
While-writing
It is sunny tday . Nw it's 10 'clck in the mrning and I am at Peple's Park.
Lk! An ld man is sitting n the chair. He is reading a bk carefully.
D yu like the park?
Extensive languages(拓展性語(yǔ)言)
Famus saying,prverbs, aphrisms and Classical sample sentences(名言、諺語(yǔ)、警句與經(jīng)典例句)
Describing the Weather The sun is shining brightly, casting a warm glw ver the entire park. It's the perfect weather fr spending time utdrs. There's a gentle breeze blwing, rustling the leaves f the trees and bringing a refreshing clness t the air. The clear blue sky abve adds t the inviting atmsphere.
sme useful expressins
Greetings and Intrductin Gd mrning/afternn/evening, everyne! Welcme back t ur channel. Tday, we're bringing yu a delightful glimpse int the vibrant activities unflding at [Park Name]. Hell there! It's [time], and I'm thrilled t be here at [Park Name], where the day is just getting started. Let's dive right in and see what's catching everyne's attentin.
Describing Peple and ActivitiesOver there, a lively grup f children is playing n the swings. Their laughter and jyful screams ech thrugh the park, creating a cheerful sundtrack fr the mrning.Nearby, a family has spread ut a clrful blanket under the shade f a large tree. They're enjying a picnic, sharing fd and cnversatin, and making the mst f this lvely day tgether.On the ther side f the park, a cuple is jgging alng the winding path. They're keeping a steady pace, fcused n their wrkut, but als taking in the beautiful surrundings as they g.
A grup f senirs is gathered in a circle, practicing tai chi. Their graceful mvements are a peaceful sight, and it's clear they're finding relaxatin and balance in this tranquil setting.Sme peple are simply sitting n benches, reading bks r newspapers, taking a break frm the hustle and bustle f daily life and savring the quiet mments in the park.
General Atmsphere and CnclusinThis is just a small taste f the clrful life that fills [Park Name] n a day like tday. It's a melting pt f different ages, interests, and activities, all cming tgether in harmny.The park truly is a haven fr relaxatin, exercise, and enjying the simple pleasures f nature. It's a place where memries are made and where peple can escape the stresses f the utside wrld, even if just fr a little while.S, whether yu're a regular visitr r just passing by, [Park Name] has smething special t ffer. We hpe yu've enjyed this virtual visit with yu.
In the Park
Nw it's ten 'clck in the mrning, and I'm at Peple's Park. Lk, the sun is shining! Let's take a lk at what's happening arund us. Over there, we see a grup f children playing n the swings. Their laughter fills the air. Nearby, a family is having a picnic under a large tree. They are enjying the pleasant weather. On the ther side, a cuple is jgging alng the park's path t stay fit and healthy. This is just a snapsht f the clurful life at Peple's Park n a beautiful Sunday mrning. It's a place where peple f all ages cme tgether t relax, exercise, and enjy the utdrs.
A vide script
What are peple ding?
Finish yur wn mind map.
(完成關(guān)于你自己的思維導(dǎo)圖)
A gd passage
n grammar mistakes
wnderfulhandwriting
n spelling mistakes
beautiful sentences
Discuss in grups:
I
Present tense
Write a vide script by describing what is happening in the park.
Self-check and peer-check.
Let’s prfread
Check fr mistakes:spellinggrammar
□你分段了嗎?□你的每一段都有主旨嗎?□你包含介紹的基本信息了嗎?□ 你有拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤嗎?□ 你有語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤嗎?□ 你使用連詞and了嗎?
Let’s evaluate
評(píng)分原則本題總分15分,按各檔次給分。評(píng)分時(shí)先根據(jù)文章的內(nèi)容、語(yǔ)言質(zhì)量初步確定檔次,然后以檔次的要求來(lái)衡量,確定或調(diào)整檔次,最后給分;評(píng)分時(shí)應(yīng)考慮:內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)是否完整;時(shí)態(tài),語(yǔ)態(tài)及人稱是否正確;詞匯和句式的多樣性以及語(yǔ)言的準(zhǔn)確性;上下文的連貫性;如書(shū)寫(xiě)較差,影響表達(dá),應(yīng)視其影響程度,降低一到兩個(gè)檔次;英美兩種拼法及詞匯用法都可接受;內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)可用不同方式表達(dá),應(yīng)緊扣主題,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。
Self-check List
Exchange and crrect(交換批改)
Revise(修改)
Shw yurself
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Nw it's ten 'clck in the mrning, and I'm at Peple's Park. Lk, the sun is shining! Let's take a lk at what's happening arund us. Over there, we see a grup f children playing n the swings. Their laughter fills the air. Nearby, a family is having a picnic under a large tree. They are enjying the pleasant weather. On the ther side, a cuple is jgging alng the park's path t stay fit and healthy. This is just a snapsht f the clurful life at Peple's Park n a beautiful Sunday mrning. It's a place where peple f all ages cme tgether t relax, exercise, and enjy the utdrs.abut urselves.
Learn hw t write passages abut yur vide script.
1. Betty and Lucy _________ (use) the cmputers t d sme writing nw. 2. —Tm, where is yur father?—Oh, he ____________ (clean) his car. 3. Tday is Father’s Day. My dad is ________ (ck) a special dinner fr his father.4. The baby ________ (sleep) twelve hurs a day.5. Srry, buddy. I __________ (drive) nw. Can I call yu back later?
用單詞的正確形式填空。
is cleaning
根據(jù)漢語(yǔ)提示完成句子。
1. 約翰和彼得在哪兒踢足球? _______ are Jhn and Peter ________ sccer?2. 這兒是一張我的全家福照片。 Here is a _______ ___ my family.3. 你妹妹正在家里做作業(yè)嗎? _____ yur sister _______ her hmewrk at hme?4. 你哥哥在和誰(shuí)下國(guó)際象棋? Wh is yur brther ________ chess ______?
Where playing
Is ding
playing with
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