專題10 書面表達(dá)-備戰(zhàn)2025年中考英語真題題源解密（浙江專用）

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【真題呈現(xiàn)】
第四部分 書面表達(dá)（共1小題，滿分20分）
61. 假如你是李華，你的英國好友Candy暑期將來中國游學(xué)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下相關(guān)信息，寫一封郵件，向她推薦一所合適的學(xué)校。
注意：
（1）郵件需包含所選學(xué)校至少兩點(diǎn)相關(guān)信息，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
（2）文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名、學(xué)校等信息；
（3）詞數(shù)80左右：郵件的首尾和第一句已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
Dear Candy
I’m excited t knw that yu are cming t China sn.
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Yurs,
Li Hua
【試題解讀】
一、寫作思路：
首先，需要確定推薦哪一所學(xué)校，并給出至少兩個(gè)相關(guān)的理由。
其次，結(jié)合Candy的興趣愛好（喜歡運(yùn)動(dòng)、對(duì)中國傳統(tǒng)藝術(shù)感興趣、喜歡中國美食），說明為什么這所學(xué)校適合她。
最后，可以簡(jiǎn)單描述學(xué)校的其他優(yōu)勢(shì)或特色。
二、寫作框架：
引言：表達(dá)對(duì)好友即將來中國的興奮之情。
主體：推薦學(xué)校并闡述理由，包括學(xué)校位置、運(yùn)動(dòng)設(shè)施、藝術(shù)活動(dòng)、美食課程等方面。
結(jié)尾：期待Candy的回復(fù)，表達(dá)對(duì)她中國之行的祝愿。
三、寫作步驟：
閱讀題目要求，確定需要包含的信息點(diǎn)。
構(gòu)思郵件內(nèi)容，確定推薦學(xué)校及其理由。
組織語言，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞和句式。
檢查郵件內(nèi)容，確保沒有語法錯(cuò)誤，信息點(diǎn)完整。
【參考答案】
參考范文一：
Dear Candy,
I’m excited t knw that yu are cming t China sn. I think my schl wuld be a great chice fr yu. It's lcated in the cuntryside, which is perfect fr enjying the peaceful envirnment and fcusing n yur studies. Plus, we have a new sprts center where yu can practice varius sprts, including the sprts yu lve. Additinally, jining lcal art clubs here will allw yu t explre traditinal Chinese art, which I knw yu're interested in. The schl als has delicius handmade fd classes, s yu can learn t ck Chinese dishes yurself!
Lking frward t yur reply and wishing yu a great trip t China.
Best wishes, Li Hua
關(guān)鍵詞匯：cuntryside, sprts center, lcal art clubs, handmade fd classes
亮點(diǎn)句式：It's lcated in the cuntryside, which is perfect fr enjying the peaceful envirnment...
參考范文二：
Dear Candy,
I’m excited t knw that yu are cming t China sn. Cnsidering yur interests, I recmmend my cusin’s schl fr yur study trip. Situated in the city center, it ffers a vibrant atmsphere and easy access t varius cultural experiences. The schl is well-knwn fr its excellent ping-png team, which aligns with yur lve fr sprts. Mrever, the hand-made fd classes will be an excellent pprtunity fr yu t delve int the art f Chinese cuisine. I believe these features make it an ideal place fr yu t immerse in Chinese culture while enjying yur favrite activities.
I can't wait t hear yur thughts and hpe yu have an unfrgettable experience in China.
Best regards, Li Hua
關(guān)鍵詞匯：city center, ping-png team, hand-made fd classes, Chinese cuisine
亮點(diǎn)句式：Situated in the city center, it ffers a vibrant atmsphere and easy access t varius cultural experiences.
參考范文三：
Dear Candy,
I’m excited t knw that yu are cming t China sn. I think yu will lve my schl. It’s lcated in the cuntryside. The air is fresh and the scenery is beautiful. We have a new sprts center where yu can play varius sprts. If yu like ping-png, yu can als jin ur schl’s table tennis club. There are lcal art clubs in ur schl. Yu can learn traditinal Chinese painting, calligraphy and paper-cutting. Mrever, we ften have activities related t traditinal Chinese art. I believe yu will have a great time here. Lking frward t yur cming.
關(guān)鍵詞匯：cuntryside、new sprts center、lcal art clubs、table tennis club、traditinal Chinese painting、calligraphy、paper-cutting、activities related t traditinal Chinese art
亮點(diǎn)句式：“I think yu will lve my schl.” 表達(dá)出強(qiáng)烈的推薦之意；“There are lcal art clubs in ur schl. Yu can learn traditinal Chinese painting, calligraphy and paper-cutting.” 詳細(xì)介紹了學(xué)校的藝術(shù)俱樂部和可學(xué)習(xí)的內(nèi)容。
參考范文四：
Dear Candy,
I’m excited t knw that yu are cming t China sn. I highly recmmend my cusin's schl. It's in the city center, cnvenient fr yu t explre. It has a gd ping-png team. And there are hand-made fd classes where yu can experience Chinese cuisine and culture. Lking frward t yur arrival.
關(guān)鍵詞匯：city center、gd ping-png team、hand-made fd classes、Chinese cuisine and culture
亮點(diǎn)句式：“I highly recmmend my cusin's schl.” 直接表明推薦；“It's in the city center, cnvenient fr yu t explre.” 說明學(xué)校位置優(yōu)勢(shì)。
《課程標(biāo)準(zhǔn)》要求學(xué)生能通過書面語篇描述、介紹事物，表達(dá)個(gè)人看法，表意清晰，話語基本通順;能用所學(xué)英語，通過書面語篇簡(jiǎn)單介紹中外主要文化現(xiàn)象，語義基本連貫。試卷書面表達(dá)部分命題充分體現(xiàn)了《課程標(biāo)準(zhǔn)》對(duì)學(xué)生通過書面表達(dá)展現(xiàn)語言能力的要求。試題主要圍繞“人與社會(huì)”“人與自我”兩個(gè)方面展開、創(chuàng)設(shè)真實(shí)語境，要求學(xué)生結(jié)合個(gè)人生活經(jīng)驗(yàn)和社會(huì)生活需要，利用所學(xué)語言、文化知識(shí)及邏輯思維進(jìn)行有意義的思考、建構(gòu)、交流和書而表達(dá)，創(chuàng)造新的語篇。
【命題立意】考查學(xué)生描述、介紹熟悉的事物，表達(dá)個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)的能力以及分析問題和解決問題的能力。
【試題分析】書面表達(dá)試題設(shè)計(jì)聚焦學(xué)生校園生活，涉及學(xué)?；顒?dòng)、食物、愛好、休閑等多個(gè)話題，以及對(duì)介紹、建議和邏輯關(guān)系等書面表達(dá)技能的考查，充分體現(xiàn)素養(yǎng)導(dǎo)向。試題通過 Alice的喜好提示及My schl和 My cusin's schl一城一鄉(xiāng)兩所學(xué)校的信息支架，選一所合適的學(xué)校推薦給 Alice。表面看來是推薦學(xué)校，但不能輕易落筆。其中內(nèi)容和語言的合理性和邏輯性等是學(xué)生需要注意的方面?？傮w上該試題既貼近學(xué)生真實(shí)的校園生活，讓來自城鄉(xiāng)不同學(xué)校的學(xué)生都有機(jī)會(huì)能結(jié)合自身經(jīng)歷和感受，做出有話可說的恰當(dāng)選擇:又體現(xiàn)新課標(biāo)背景下對(duì)學(xué)生核心素養(yǎng)的考查，將英語真正融入學(xué)生生活，有利于學(xué)生積極主動(dòng)地將所學(xué)語言運(yùn)用于解決實(shí)際問題，體現(xiàn)了試題的應(yīng)用性和開放性。本題的寫作要領(lǐng)及注意事項(xiàng)簡(jiǎn)要闡述如下:
1.審題清晰，明確寫作要點(diǎn)在開始寫作前，先要仔細(xì)審題，明確寫作要點(diǎn)。本文的寫作要求結(jié)合Alice的喜好，即愛運(yùn)動(dòng)、喜歡中國傳統(tǒng)藝術(shù)和美食，及My schl和My cusin's schl一城一鄉(xiāng)兩所學(xué)校的信息支架，結(jié)合自己的生活經(jīng)驗(yàn)選擇一所合適的學(xué)校，以電子郵件的形式推薦給Alice并說明理由。一些學(xué)生審題不清、表現(xiàn)為:(1)對(duì)兩所學(xué)校都推薦了;(2)讓Alice自己選擇;(3)未在兩所學(xué)校中做出選擇、直接說“I think yu will like my schl...”，寫作目的不清晰。
2.用語得體，關(guān)注意義表達(dá)
在寫作時(shí)，要明確目標(biāo)讀者。本文的讀者是外國朋友Alice。作者與讀者之間的關(guān)系是年齡相仿的好朋友，因此需要用親近而得體的語言。寫作的目的是幫助對(duì)方選擇一所合適的學(xué)校、因此在推薦學(xué)校時(shí)、需要考慮對(duì)方的真實(shí)需求，結(jié)合自己的生活經(jīng)歷，綜合運(yùn)用所學(xué)語言知識(shí)進(jìn)行有意義的交流和表達(dá)。一些學(xué)生不關(guān)注語境，缺乏“真交際”的能力，如開頭用“I's my great hnr t intrduce...”、忽略朋友間交際語的親近面得體性;在闡述推薦理山時(shí)部分學(xué)生套用表達(dá)結(jié)構(gòu)，如“The reasns are as fllws. Here are the reasns.T start ”，忽略了應(yīng)用文的交際性。
3.表達(dá)邏輯，實(shí)現(xiàn)整合目標(biāo)
在寫作過程中，學(xué)生需要根據(jù)要點(diǎn)信息提示，如Alice的興趣愛好，Myschl和Mycusin'ssch等內(nèi)容，結(jié)合具體語境，分析交際對(duì)象和交際目的的相關(guān)性，用合乎交際思維的習(xí)慣來確定表達(dá)順序。學(xué)生可以先根據(jù)Alice的具體興趣愛好來推薦合適的學(xué)校，后明推薦理由，如學(xué)校在鄉(xiāng)村，可以結(jié)合Alice喜好和自己對(duì)鄉(xiāng)村的認(rèn)知體驗(yàn)，提供更多吸引朋友的有效細(xì)節(jié)，如:信件開頭推薦合適的學(xué)校(.knw yu lve traditinal Chinese art and fd. I think my schl is perfect fr yu.)，接著整合信息，說明推薦理( It is in the beautiful cuntryside. The lcal fd here is really fresh and delicius. I believe yu'll enjy it.)。這些信息的表述方式不是現(xiàn)成的，需要學(xué)生根據(jù)經(jīng)驗(yàn)和常識(shí)自己做出科學(xué)、合理的安排和設(shè)計(jì)。在語言上，選擇簡(jiǎn)潔、合適的詞匯與表達(dá)方式即可，通過加工和組合，有條理地表達(dá)，確保表達(dá)有邏輯、得體、有效。


1．學(xué)校將征集學(xué)生活動(dòng)室的設(shè)計(jì)方案。假設(shè)你是李華，請(qǐng)從以下兩個(gè)所給方案中選擇一個(gè)：才藝天地(Talent Crner)和義賣集市(Charity Market)。根據(jù)提示給校英語廣播欄目負(fù)責(zé)人張老師寫封郵件，完善方案并說明設(shè)計(jì)意圖。
要求：
(1)不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名和校名；
(2)詞數(shù) 80—100，文章的開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
Dear Mr. Zhang,
I’ve heard that we will have a new student activity rm.
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Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Mr. Zhang,
I’ve heard that we will have a new student activity rm. I prefer t make it a Talent Crner.
Fr sme students, it will make them feel prud when they shw their talent. S this Talent Crner is the best place which gives them a gd way t shw themselves. We can perfrm an English play every Friday, making us relaxed. And it can enable us t have a better understanding f freign culture. What’s mre, we can hld a singing cmpetitin r speech cmpetitin t enrich ur schl life.
Thank yu fr reading my e-mail.
Best wishes!
Yurs,
Li Hua
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一封電子郵件；
②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；
③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已經(jīng)給出，按照提示的要點(diǎn)逐點(diǎn)闡述，可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，并突出寫作重點(diǎn)。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，說明寫信目的，表明你最喜歡的是哪一種方案；
第二步，介紹這個(gè)方案的意義、活動(dòng)以及時(shí)間等相關(guān)信息；
第三步，書寫結(jié)語。
[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]
①prefer t d sth喜歡做某物
②enable sb. t d sth.使某人能夠做某事
③have a better understanding f對(duì)……有更好的理解
[高分句型]
①Fr sme students, it will make them feel prud when they shw their talent. (when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語從句)
②S this Talent Crner is the best place which gives them a gd way t shw themselves. (which引導(dǎo)的定語從句)
2．假定你是李明，你的英國朋友David來信向你了解中國傳統(tǒng)民間藝術(shù)，請(qǐng)結(jié)合下表提供的信息，選擇其中一項(xiàng)藝術(shù)形式給他寫一封郵件進(jìn)行介紹。
注意：
1.文中必須包含該藝術(shù)形式的兩項(xiàng)內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮（參考詞匯僅供選擇使用
或參考)：
2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名、學(xué)校等信息；
3.詞數(shù)：80~100：郵件的開頭與結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
Dear David,
Hw is everything ging? Hearing that yu’re interested in Chinese flk art, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Hpe yu’ll cme here and enjy ur traditinal beauty yurself ne day.
Yurs,
Li Ming
【答案】例文：
Dear David,
Hw is everything ging? Hearing that yu’re interested in Chinese flk art, I’d like t tell yu smething abut Chinese paper cutting.
Chinese paper cutting has a lng histry f ver 1,500 years. Paper cuttings can be seen in different parts f China. Many peple, n matter the yung r the ld, are fnd f them. Peple in the nrthern part f China d well in paper cutting. They cut paper int different shapes, like animals, flwers and s n. They are put n drs and windws during the Spring Festival and when peple celebrate smething happily. They mean welcming gd frtune. Mre and mre peple are interested in it.
Hpe yu’ll cme here and enjy ur traditinal beauty yurself ne day.
Yurs,
Li Ming
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇應(yīng)用文，為電子郵件；
②時(shí)態(tài)：為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；
③提示：從表格中選擇一個(gè)傳統(tǒng)民間藝術(shù)進(jìn)行介紹，注意行文邏輯要通順，適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，并突出寫作重點(diǎn)。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，承接郵件開頭介紹自己要介紹的民間藝術(shù)——剪紙；
第二步，結(jié)合所給要點(diǎn)詳細(xì)介紹剪紙的歷史，形狀，使用場(chǎng)合等；
第三步，表達(dá)希望。
[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]
①in different parts f在……不同的地方
②be fnd f喜愛
③be interested in對(duì)……感興趣
[高分句型]
①Paper cuttings can be seen in different parts f China. (被動(dòng)語態(tài))
②They are put n drs and windws during the Spring Festival and when peple celebrate smething happily. (被動(dòng)語態(tài)；when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語從句)
【點(diǎn)睛】
3．陽光學(xué)校將于六月底舉行 2024屆九年級(jí)畢業(yè)典禮，學(xué)校英語周刊向全校學(xué)生征集典禮活動(dòng)金點(diǎn)子。假設(shè)你是該校學(xué)生李華，請(qǐng)給負(fù)責(zé)人王老師寫一封電子郵件，推薦你認(rèn)為最合適的三至四項(xiàng)活動(dòng)，并給出理由。
注意：
（1）郵件需包含表中所給的所有信息，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
（2）文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名、學(xué)校等信息；
（3）詞數(shù)：80—100詞。信件開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；
（4）郵件開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總數(shù)。
Dear Mr. Wang,
I am very glad t share my ideas abut the graduatin ceremny activities.
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Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Mr Wang,
I am very glad t share my ideas abut the graduatin ceremny activities. The graduatin ceremny is cnsidered as a time t say gdbye and thank yu t the junir high schl life and give wishes t the cming life as well. The fllwing activities are prbably sme gd chices.
The activity I want t recmmend first is t say thanks t all the teachers wh helped us and take a pht with them. When we were ging thrugh a difficult time r making prgress, teachers are always with us, supprting and helping us. They are the nes we will never frget. Als, giving wishes t ur friends is a gd idea. Althugh we will part with each ther, the friendship will last frever. Wha’s mre, it culd be a wnderful thing t invite parents t the ceremny. Parents will be glad t share yur jy with yu and als it is a prper time t shw great thanks t them.
N matter what activities we will have, thank yu fr hlding the ceremny fr us. And wish everything ges well.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【詳解】[總體分析]
題材：本文是一篇應(yīng)用文，為電子郵件；
時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；
提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已給出，注意不要有遺漏，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，注意用詞準(zhǔn)確，語句通順。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，表明寫作意圖，引出下文畢業(yè)典禮的活動(dòng)；
第二步，具體介紹三到四個(gè)活動(dòng)，并給出理由；
第三步，表達(dá)希望。
[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]
①be cnsidered as被視為
②take a pht with sb和某人合影
③g thrugh經(jīng)歷
④part with sb與某人分開
[高分句型]
① The graduatin ceremny is cnsidered as a time t say gdbye and thank yu t the junir high schl life and give wishes t the cming life as well.（被動(dòng)語態(tài)）
②The activity I want t recmmend first is t say thanks t all the teachers wh helped us and take a pht with them.（定語從句）
③When we were ging thrugh a difficult time r making prgress, teachers are always with us, supprting and helping us.（時(shí)間狀語從句）
④Althugh we will part with each ther, the friendship will last frever. （讓步狀語從句）

1．假如你是李華，你的英國筆友Michael即將結(jié)束在中國的交換生課程。他打算為家人和好友準(zhǔn)備一些中國禮物。請(qǐng)你寫一封電子郵件，向他推薦三件有特色的禮物并說明推薦的理由(禮物可以從下表中選擇或自行確定)。
注意：
(1)文中不得出現(xiàn)與你身份相關(guān)的信息。
(2)詞數(shù)：80-100。
Dear Michael,
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Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Michael,
There are many chices fr yu t chse wnderful Chinese presents.
Fr yur mther, I think a silk scarf frm Hangzhu is a nice present. It’s sft and cmfrtable. There are usually beautiful Chinese paintings n it. And yu can give yur father sme Chinese tea. It’s a kind f healthy drink with a lng histry. Paper cutting is a traditinal Chinese art. Chinese artists cut the paper int different shapes, such as flwers r buildings. I believe yur friends will like paper cuts.
I hpe these can help yu.
Li Hua
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇應(yīng)用文，為電子郵件；
②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；
③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已給出，可參考表格中給出的禮物來推薦三件有特色的禮物。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，開篇點(diǎn)題，推薦禮物；
第二步，具體推薦三種有特色的禮物；
第三步，收尾，希望能幫到對(duì)方。
[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]
①give sb. sth. 給某人某物
②traditinal Chinese art 傳統(tǒng)中國藝術(shù)
③such as 例如
[高分句型]
①There are many chices fr yu t chse wnderful Chinese presents.（There be句型）
②I believe yur friends will like paper cuts.（省略that的賓語從句）
2．假設(shè)你是李華，請(qǐng)結(jié)合表格內(nèi)容，用英語郵件向你的美國筆友Mike介紹你校本學(xué)期開設(shè)的三門勞動(dòng)課程及其目的，并談?wù)勀氵x擇的一門勞動(dòng)課程及選擇理由。
要求：
1. 必須包括表格中所有要點(diǎn)內(nèi)容，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
2. 詞數(shù)：80~100左右（開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；
3. 不得使用真實(shí)姓名、校名等有關(guān)信息。
Dear Mike,
Hw is everything ging?
This term, we have three labr curses at schl.
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Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Mike,
Hw is everything ging?
This term, we have three labr curses at schl. In the cking curse we learn hw t make traditinal fd like dumplings, zngzi and s n. In each kind f Chinese traditinal fd lie rich Chinese cultures. And we have chair-repairing curse. It’s very interesting t learn new skills and practice them.
There is als a vegetable-planting curse this term. I chse it this term. My classmates and I can plant tmates and have a lt f fun. We study plants and knw abut farming and get clse t nature. I really enjy vegetable-planting curse as they nt nly enrich ur schl life but als ffer us basic life skills.
D yu have labr curses? Lking frward t yur reply.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇應(yīng)用文，為電子郵件；
②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；
③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏，適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)完整表述內(nèi)容。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，介紹本學(xué)期開設(shè)的三門勞動(dòng)課程及其目的；
第二步，介紹自己選擇的勞動(dòng)課程。
[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]
①have a lt f fun玩得開心
②get clse t親近
③lk frward t期待
[高分句型]
①In the cking curse we learn hw t make traditinal fd like dumplings, zngzi and s n.（疑問詞+動(dòng)詞不定式結(jié)構(gòu)）
②It’s very interesting t learn new skills and practice them.（動(dòng)詞不定式作主語）
3．中國古詩詞是我們代代傳承的文化瑰寶。假定你是李華，你校將舉辦中國古詩詞文化節(jié) (Chinese Ancient Petry Day)。你想邀請(qǐng)對(duì)中國古詩詞非常感興趣的外教Mr. White參加本次活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面提示給他寫一封郵件。
要求：
（1）短文必須包括所有提示內(nèi)容，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
（2）詞數(shù)80—100詞左右，開頭結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；
（3）文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名。
T: Mr White
Frm: Li Hua
Hi, Mr White,
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Li Hua
【答案】例文：
Hi, Mr White,
I am writing t invite yu t the Chinese Ancient Petry Day at ur schl because I knw yu have great interest in Chinese ancient petry.
The festival will take place n May 20th in the schl library and it will begin at 2:00 pm. On that day, there will be varius activities. Fr example, students can admire the beauty f Chinese ancient petry by chanting. Students can als learn mre abut sme great pets like Li Bai by listening t their stries. Besides, schl prvides the mvie 30,000 Miles frm Chang’an, which enjys ppularity amng Chinese peple these days.
The festival is an excellent chance t ppularize Chinese petry. It can help us get a better understanding f Chinese culture as well.
Hpe yu can jin us. Lking frward t yur reply.
Li Hua
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一封電子郵件；
②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”和“一般將來時(shí)”；
③提示：材料表格所給內(nèi)容不得遺漏；注意郵件寫作格式和時(shí)態(tài)切換。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，表明寫作意圖；
第二步，詳細(xì)介紹古詩詞文化節(jié)舉行的時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、活動(dòng)內(nèi)容及目的等；
第三步，書寫結(jié)語，表達(dá)期待。
[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]
①take place舉行
②fr example例如
③lk frward t期待
[高分句型]
①I am writing t invite yu t the Chinese Ancient Petry Day at ur schl because I knw yu have great interest in Chinese ancient petry.（原因狀語從句）
②Besides, schl prvides the mvie 30,000 Miles frm Chang’an, which enjys ppularity amng Chinese peple these days（非限定性定語從句）
4．假設(shè)國外中學(xué)生Alex將來你校進(jìn)行為期一周的交流學(xué)習(xí)，期間計(jì)劃參加一項(xiàng)你校社團(tuán)活動(dòng)，體驗(yàn)中國文化。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下表中的提示，寫一篇英文短文，介紹其中一個(gè)社團(tuán)內(nèi)容。
注意：1. 請(qǐng)回復(fù)郵件中所提及的所有問題，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮使行文通順、連貫。
2. 郵件中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱。
3. 詞數(shù)80-100左右。
Dear Alex,
I’m s excited t hear frm yu. It’s my hnr t intrduce sme
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I’m lking frward t hearing frm yu.
Yurs,
Li Ping
【答案】例文
Dear Alex,
I’m s excited t hear frm yu. It’s my hnr t intrduce sme f the wnderful clubs in ur schl t yu. Fr me, the paper cutting club is withut dubt the mst attractive ne. In fact, paper cutting has been arund fr centuries. Here, students are able t admire sme masters’ great wrks. The mst cmmn pictures are animals, flwers and things abut Chinese histry. They are ften put n the windws as a symbl f peple’s wishes fr gd luck. Additinally, students are given the pprtunity t try paper cutting. This way, yu can enjy the beauty f this traditinal art frm by yurself.
In a wrd, jining the club is a gd chance fr yu t have a deeper understanding f Chinese culture.
I’m lking frward t hearing frm yu.
Yurs,
Li Ping
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一封電子郵件；
②時(shí)態(tài)：本文應(yīng)使用“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”為主；
③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)應(yīng)注意題干給出的“介紹學(xué)校的社團(tuán)活動(dòng)”并適當(dāng)補(bǔ)充，使文章內(nèi)容充實(shí)。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，點(diǎn)題，介紹學(xué)校有好的社團(tuán)；
第二步，根據(jù)題干表格中的要點(diǎn)，介紹相關(guān)社團(tuán)的內(nèi)容，以及選擇的理由；
第三步，點(diǎn)評(píng)加入社團(tuán)是一件好事。
[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]
①in fact實(shí)際上
②in a wrd總而言之
[高分句型]
①Additinally, students are given the pprtunity t try paper cutting.（被動(dòng)語態(tài)）
②In a wrd, jining the club is a gd chance fr yu t have a deeper understanding f Chinese culture.（動(dòng)名詞作主語）
5．某學(xué)習(xí)網(wǎng)站的“Student Helper”欄目收到兩位學(xué)生的郵件。假如你是該網(wǎng)站志愿者李明，請(qǐng)就其中一封(任選)進(jìn)行回復(fù)。詞數(shù)80左右，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。
Hi, ____________,
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Li Ming
【答案】例文
Hi, May
I am glad t hear that yu have a great interest in Chinese. I wuld like t give sme advice.
First, try t say Chinese as much as pssible in and ut f class. Secnd, dn’t be afraid f making mistakes. Besides, it shuld be a gd idea t learn and sing Chinese sngs, because by ding s yu’ll learn and remember Chinese wrds mre easily. Yu can als make mre Chinese friends. They will tell yu a lt abut China and help yu learn Chinese. Last but nt least, yu shuld try t say Chinese in public. When yu have time, yu can call me in Chinese.
Li Ming
【詳解】[總體分析]：
①題材：本文是一篇應(yīng)用文，為郵件寫作；
②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；
③提示：考生根據(jù)郵件內(nèi)容，選擇一篇回復(fù)，給出如何提高中文水平或物理成績(jī)的建議。
[寫作步驟]
第一步：本文要回復(fù)的是第一封郵件，給出如何提高中文水平的建議。
第二步：具體闡述提高中文的方法。
[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]
①in and ut f class課堂內(nèi)外
②be afraid f害怕
③in pblic公開的；當(dāng)眾
[高分句型]
①First, try t say Chinese as much as pssible in and ut f class. （祈使句）
②When yu have time, yu can call me in Chinese.（時(shí)間狀語從句）

1．假設(shè)你是學(xué)生李華，你的學(xué)校將組織一個(gè)新的社團(tuán)，現(xiàn)有以下幾種計(jì)劃:
請(qǐng)給校報(bào)的Mr. King寫一封郵件，選擇一個(gè)你最喜歡的社團(tuán)，說明你選擇的理由，并對(duì)社團(tuán)后續(xù)開展活動(dòng)提出至少兩點(diǎn)建議。
要求：
1. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名、學(xué)校等信息；
2. 詞數(shù)：80~100詞左右，開頭、結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
Dear Mr. King,
I’m writing t give sme advice abut the new club ur schl will set up.
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Hpe my advice can be taken by yu.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Mr. King,
I’m writing t give sme advice abut the new club ur schl will set up. I chse t jin the reading club. I like reading. I read all kinds f bks. I especially like stry bks. Their stries have enriched my spare time life, and als made me feel the hardships f sciety. If I have time, I will pick up a bk t read. Thrugh reading, I learned a lt f knwledge, which nt nly pened my eyes, but als made me relax. After jining the bk club, I hpe we can hld regular bk briefing meetings. At the same time, we can als hld a reading speech t say what bks we like and why.
Hpe my advice can be taken by yu.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇應(yīng)用文，為電子郵件；
②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；
③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏，適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)完整表述內(nèi)容。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，開頭已給出，引出本文主題；
第二步，介紹自己選擇這個(gè)社團(tuán)的原因。
[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]
①chse t d sth選擇做某事
②all kinds f各種各樣的
③at the same time同時(shí)
[高分句型]
①If I have time, I will pick up a bk t read.（if引導(dǎo)條件狀語從句）
2．假定你是李華， 你校英語雜志社Yuth Vice打算改版， 現(xiàn)就新增欄目名稱與內(nèi)容等征求全校師生的意見。請(qǐng)你用英語給雜志社主編Simn寫一封郵件，分享你的想法。
注意：
（1）郵件必須包含所有要點(diǎn)并補(bǔ)充一個(gè)欄目；
（2）文中不得出現(xiàn)與你身份相關(guān)的信息；
（3）詞數(shù)：80~100。首尾句已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
FROM: Li Hua
TO: Simn
SUBJECT: Adding new clumns t Yuth Vice
Dear Simn,
I’m s glad that ur schl magazine Yuth Vice will renew very sn. I have sme ideas abut adding new clumns.
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I hpe yu will cnsider my advice and I believe ur schl magazine will be better!
Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Simn,
I’m s glad that ur schl magazine Yuth Vice will renew very sn. I have sme ideas abut adding new clumns.
Frm my pint f view, Great Wrks is a gd chice. We can share famus bks and learn abut favurite writers. We will increase ur knwledge and we can cmmunicate mre with thers. What’s mre, many students may be interested in Science Study. The wrld is develping at a high speed. If there is ne clumn abut the latest science discveries, we will raise interest in science and be mre creative. Besides, it’s better t add Animal Wrld, animals are ur friends and then Animal Wrld will call n students t prtect animals in danger.
I hpe yu will cnsider my advice and I believe ur schl magazine will be better!
Yurs,
Li Hua
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇電子郵件；
②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；
[寫作步驟]
第一步，首先承接短文開頭。
第二步，根據(jù)所給的材料，就新增欄目名稱與內(nèi)容等分享你的想法。
第三步，總結(jié)短文，并表達(dá)愿望。
[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]
①cmmunicate…with…與……交流……
②be interested in對(duì)……感興趣
③call n呼吁，號(hào)召
④in danger處于危險(xiǎn)之中
[高分句型]
We will increase ur knwledge and we can cmmunicate mre with thers.（and連接的并列句）
If there is ne clumn abut the latest science discveries, we will raise interest in science and be mre creative.（if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句）
I hpe yu will cnsider my advice and I believe ur schl magazine will be better!（省略that的賓語從句）
3．假如你是李平，你校英文?？习l(fā)布了一則暑期夏令營(yíng)活動(dòng)信息，請(qǐng)你給英國筆友 Mike寫一封信邀請(qǐng)他參加其中一個(gè)夏令營(yíng)，并說明推薦理由。
注意：
1.詞數(shù)為80~100詞左右；
2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使內(nèi)容充實(shí)，行文連貫；
3.文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名及學(xué)校名稱。
Dear Mike,
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Yurs,
Li Ping
【答案】Dear Mike,
Hw are yu ding? Summer hliday is cming and there are three summer camps fr us t chse. I think Music Camp is a gd chice. Let me intrduce smething abut it t yu. The Music Camp will last six days frm July 19th t 24th. There will be lts f great activities. We will watch Chinese flk music perfrmances. Besides, we’ll have the chance t take Erhu classes. I knw that yu’re interested in Erhu and I’m sure yu’ll like it. I sincerely recmmend yu t jin this camp.
I am lking frward t yur reply.
Yurs,
Li Ping
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇應(yīng)用文，為書信作文；
②時(shí)態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)及一般將來時(shí)；
③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已給出，要求根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容進(jìn)行寫作，適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，并突出寫作重點(diǎn)。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，向?qū)Ψ浇榻B自己推薦的夏令營(yíng)活動(dòng)；
第二步，具體介紹夏令營(yíng)都有哪些吸引人的活動(dòng)；
第三步，邀請(qǐng)對(duì)方參加。
[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]
①intrduce sth t sb向某人介紹某事
②have the chance t d有機(jī)會(huì)做某事
③lk frward t期待
[高分句型]
I knw that yu’re interested in Erhu and I’m sure yu’ll like it.（賓語從句）
4．假如你是Li Hua，你的英國筆友 Tm對(duì)你們學(xué)校的拓展課程很感興趣，想了解相關(guān)信息。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)表格內(nèi)的提示向他介紹部分課程及開設(shè)原因，并表達(dá)自己還希望學(xué)校開設(shè)哪門拓展課和理由。
注意：
1.短文須包括所有要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名和校名；
3.詞數(shù)：100詞左右，開頭結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
Dear Tm,
Hw’s it ging?_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best Wishes!
Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Tm,
Hw’s it ging? Learning in yur letter that yu are interested in ur special after-schl classes, I’m very glad t intrduce three f them.
Cking is the first we like because it ffers us the life skills and we can d it by urselves when parents aren’t in. English play curse, which can help us with bth acting skills and spken English, is als ur favrite. Besides, sme f us prefer basketball classes since playing basketball is nt nly gd fr ur health but als encurages us t wrk as a team. In a wrd, these fascinating prgrams make ur schl lives clrful and meaningful.
Hnestly, I d hpe IT class will be held as quickly as pssible because t be a prgrammer is my dream.
Best Wishes!
Yurs,
Li Hua
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是書信作文；
②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)；
③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏提示所給出的三個(gè)點(diǎn)，添加適當(dāng)細(xì)節(jié)，并突出寫作要點(diǎn)。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，問候?qū)Ψ饺缓蟊砻髦黝}并引出下文；
第二步，具體闡述寫作內(nèi)容。從提示中的三個(gè)點(diǎn)，烹飪，英語話劇，籃球來介紹；
第三步，書寫結(jié)語。表達(dá)自己的意愿和期許。
[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]
①are interested in對(duì)……感興趣
②be glad t d 開心去做某事
[高分句型]
①Cking is the first we like because it ffers us the life skills and we can d it by urselves when parents aren’t in.（原因狀語從句，時(shí)間狀語從句）
5．你校將舉辦英語文化節(jié)，現(xiàn)向全校學(xué)生征求活動(dòng)意見。假如你是李華，請(qǐng)用英語給負(fù)責(zé)人寫一封書信，從學(xué)校的活動(dòng)意向表中推薦2—3個(gè)活動(dòng)并闡明理由。
注意：（1）書信內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)應(yīng)選自上表，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
（2）詞數(shù)： 80-100；
（3）書信開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
Dear sir,
Fr the cming English festival, I have sme suggestins.
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I hpe my suggestins will be helpful. Thank yu!
Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】One pssible versin
Dear sir,
Fr the cming English festival, I have sme suggestins. I think watching English mvies is a gd chice. Nt nly can we enjy the perfrmance f the actrs, but we can als learn English in a fun way. Als, I recmmend telling English stries as a way t celebrate the festival, by which we can enrich ur knwledge as well as share favrite stries with each ther in English. Anther way I wuld like t recmmend is t play English sitcms. The reasn is that it helps t imprve ur spken English and acting skills. At the same time, we can learn t wrk tgether well.
I hpe my suggestins will be helpful. Thank yu!
Yurs,
Li Hua
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇應(yīng)用文，為書信作文；
②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)主要為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”和“一般將來時(shí)”；
③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已給出，要注意不要遺漏材料中的內(nèi)容，并適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)。
[寫作步驟]
①第一步，表明寫作意圖。借用“英語文化節(jié)”來引出下文中對(duì)推薦的活動(dòng)的介紹；
②第二步，具體闡述寫作內(nèi)容。從“看英文電影、講英文故事和演英語情景喜劇”三方面入手，重點(diǎn)介紹推薦這些活動(dòng)的理由；
③第三步，書寫結(jié)語。希望自己的建議能夠被采納。
[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]
①nt als 不但……而且
②as well as 和
③share sth with sb 與某人分享某物
④at the same time 同時(shí)
[高分句型]
①Nt nly can we enjy the perfrmance f the actrs, but we can als learn English in a fun way.（倒裝句）
②Als, I recmmend telling English stries as a way t celebrate the festival, by which we can enrich ur knwledge as well as share favrite stries with each ther in English.（定語從句）
③The reasn is that it helps t imprve ur spken English and acting skills. （表語從句）
I like sprts, and I’m interested in traditinal Chinese art. Chinese fd is great.
My cusin’s schl
◆in the city center
◆a gd ping-png team
◆hand-made fd classes
My schl
◆in the cuntryside
◆a new sprts center
◆lcal art clubs
Talent Crner
Meanings: a gd way t shw yurself,
Activities: perfrm a play,·
Opening time:…
Charity Market
Meanings: a gd way t raise mney,
Activities: sell secnd-hand things,
Opening time:…
Chinese Flk Art
內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)
藝術(shù)形式
Basic facts
Yur feeling
Lantern
?abut 1,800 years, ...
?use different materials, ...
?the Lantern Festival, ...
?a symbl f...
...
Paper cutting
?ver 1,500 years, ...
?cut ut different shapes, ...
?the Spring Festival, ...
?express...
...
Activities
Reasns
give best wishes t ur friends
help us a lt...
invite parents t the ceremny
share... with them
…
Presents
Reasns
a silk scarf
sft and cmfrtable;
sme Chinese paintings n it
Chinese tea
paper cuts
pieces f Chinese clay art
Chinese fans
ty pandas
…
…
Schl Labr (勞動(dòng)) Curses
The curse yu chse and yur reasn
Curses
Aims
…
? Vegetable-planting
T study plants and knw abut farming
? Cking curse:
making dumplings & Zngzi
T learn abut traditinal Chinese cultures
? Chair-repairing
T learn and practice new skills
Time
2:00 p.m., May 20th
Place
the schl library
Activities
·chant pems
·watch the mvie 30,000 Miles frm Chang’an
·...
Purpse
·ppularize Chinese petry
·…
Clubs
Intrductin
Reasns
The paper cutting club
admire sme masters’ great wrks, try paper cutting…
a traditinal art frm f beauty; a symbl f wishes fr gd luck…
The flk music club
take musical instrument classes, attend a flk music cncert…
enjy the beauty f Chinese flk music; a chance t bring the schl and yu clser…
T: studenthelper@mail.cm
Subject: Need Help!
Dear Helper,
Chinese is t difficult fr me! I really dn’t knw hw t speak well. Culd yu please tell me hw I can imprve my Chinese speaking skills?
Lking frward t yur reply.
Best wishes!
May
T: studenthelper@mail.cm
Subject: What can I d?
Dear Helper,
I’m very wrried abut my physics these days. Yu knw, it’s really hard fr me. Culd yu please tell me hw I can imprve my physics? Lking frward t yur reply.
Eric
● Reading club
●Arts and sprt club
●Hand-made wrkshp
Clumns
What
Why
Great Wrks
share famus bks,
...
increase knwledge,
...
Science Study
shw the latest discveries,
...
raise interest in science,
...
...
...
...
Special after-schl classes in ur schl
classes
reasns

Cking
1. help parents
2. master the life skills
English play
1. learn hw t act
2. imprve spken English
Basketball
1. be gd fr ur health
2. encurage teamwrk
Yur wishes

…
□sing English sngs □read English nvels
□watch English mvies □tell English stries
□make English psters □perfrm English sitcms