讀原文 劃要素 填表格
讀P1P2首句 定情節(jié)發(fā)展
列大綱 兩段12句法
I needed t d smething in my cmmunity (社區(qū)) in rder t cmplete the cmmunity service hurs required t graduate frm high schl. Sme f my friends had signed up t spend time at a sup kitchen, s I did, t. It seemed like a gd thing t d. I thught that we wuld just be passing ut dinners t thse in need, but I fund ut we wuld be ding everything frm preparing t serving the dinner. We began preparing the fd, frm mixing salad dressing t separating frzen meat. Much still needed t be dne befre dinner was served, but already utside the building many hmeless peple were gathering. It wasn’t until a cuple f hurs later that we pened the drs and began serving dinner. As the line f peple came tward me, I gt a little scared. I’d cme face t face with the hmeless: Hw shuld I act? Hw wuld they treat me? Wuld they hate me fr having mre than they did? While sme f the peple lked
very friendly, sme f them lked s dangerus. I didn’t have t much time t wrry abut it. I was assigned (分配) t serve the salad with the lady next t me. She smiled at me and said if I needed help, she’d be right there, which I fund quite cmfrting. I had never seen s many peple wanting fd. They were f all ages and natinalities. Mst f them wre clthes that were trn and dirty. Sme lked like they had tally given up n life, while thers seemed t be making the best f the situatin, smiling and jking. Sme were better ff than thers, but they all needed a gd meal and a warm place t eat. It saddened me t think f hw many peple there were wh didn’t have a place t call hme and the nly fd they gt came frm a sup kitchen.
讀原文 劃要素 填表格
many hmeless peple/the hmeless
friendlydangerus
the first time t vlunteera little scared
As they came in my directin, I put n my brightest and happiest smile.?_______________________________________________________ I was s happy that I had earned my service hurs in this way.?_______________________________________________________
As they came in my directin, I put n my brightest and happiest smile.??I was s happy that I had earned my service hurs in this way.
讀P1P2首句 定情節(jié)發(fā)展
Hw did I finish the service?
I ; the hmeless; the lady next t me
the lady next t me
the hmeless
scared and nervus
said thanks t me
I serviced the hmeless successfully
I was s happy that I had earned my service hurs in this way?
讀P1P2首句 定情節(jié)發(fā)展
My feeling abut the service.
felt it wrthwhile
n mre scared
kept n vlunteering
列大綱：兩段12句法
思考：12句話中，有哪幾句是固定內(nèi)容？
列大綱：兩段12句法
列大綱：兩段12句法
kept ffering the help
I felt scared.
It was a rewarding experience.
I was happy.
The lady smiled at me and cmfrted me.
I tk int actin.
Everything went smthly.
The hmeless thanked me.
cleared my previus prejudice
served the peple
be grateful t life
felt it duty t help thse in need
寫句式 招招升級
e.g.:1）Nervus as I felt, I did my best t keep myself calm and packed bread, salad and meat t thse in need.
招式1：讓步狀語從句 常見句式：① Althugh/Thugh/While..., ... ② , ...(倒裝) ③ Even if/Even thugh...,...
e.g.:2）Upn nticing my hurried and trembling hands, the lady next t me smilingly tld me that I shuld first rganize these peple t queue up and then hand ut salad ne by ne.
招式2：“一就” 常見句式：① Upn/On ding..., ... ② The mment/The instant/The secnd... ③ Instantly/Directly/Immediately... ④ ⑤ N sner... than...
e.g.:3）The passing time witnessed the smth prcess f this event.
招式3：無靈主語 無靈主語（表示時間、地點的名詞）+有靈動詞（see/witness）
e.g.:4）Every ne f them including thse wh lked very dangerus murmured in a cheering vice “Thank yu” and bwed t me sincerely, which brught warmth straight int my heart.
招式4：定語從句 ① thse wh lked very dangerus ... ② ..., which... (非限制性定語從句表結(jié)果）招式5：將籠統(tǒng)動詞轉(zhuǎn)換為具體動詞 : e.g.: say --- murmur
寫句式 招招升級
e.g.:5） It was nt until the night wiped ut the last ray f sun that we finished ur cmmunity service fr the hmeless.
招式6： 表示“直到才”的強調(diào)句 “It was nt until ... that ...”
e.g.:6）Nt nly did I clear my previus prejudice against thse wh deserved cmpassin and supprt, but als I served the peple wh were less frtunate than me.
招式7： Nt als... 倒裝句表示并列
e.g.:7）I suddenly came t realize that nt everyne was blessed with frtune and brn t be wealthy, and therefre, we shuld always keep grateful fr what life blessed us with.
招式8： “我突然想到” 常見句式：① I suddenly came t realize that ... ② It hit/struck me that... ③ It ccurred t me that...
e.g.:8） I felt it a duty t d what I culd fr them.
招式9： it作形式賓語 “6123”結(jié)構(gòu)6 V： feel/make/find/cnsider/believe/think1 形式賓語： it2 賓補： adj./n.3 真正賓語： t d / ding / that...
水到渠成 范文賞析
As they came in my directin, I put n my brightest and happiest smile. Nervus as I felt, I did my best t keep myself calm and packed bread, salad and meat t thse in need. Upn nticing my hurried and trembling hands, the lady next t me smilingly tld me that I shuld first rganize these peple t queue up and then hand ut salad ne by ne. I immediately sprang int actin and the passing time witnessed the smth prcess f this event. Every ne f them including thse wh lked very dangerus murmured in a cheering vice “Thank yu” and bwed t me sincerely, which brught warmth straight int my heart. It was nt until the night wiped ut the last ray f sun that we finished ur cmmunity service fr the hmeless.
范文賞析
I was s happy that I had earned my service hurs in this way. I was aware that my time spent at the sup kitchen was really a rewarding, enriching and life-changing experience. Nt nly did I clear my previus prejudice against thse wh deserved cmpassin and supprt, but als I served the peple wh were less frtunate than me. In the meanwhile, I suddenly came t realize that nt everyne was blessed with frtune and brn t be wealthy, and therefre, we shuld always keep grateful fr what life blessed us with. I nw felt it a duty t d what I culd fr them. Since that day, I have spared mre time in ffering my service pprtunity in dining halls, in the streets, in frnt f grcery stres.
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