歷年高考英語讀后續(xù)寫真題分析
“I’m ging t miss yu s much, Pppy,” said the tall, thin teenager. He bent dwn t hug his ld friend gdbye. He std up, hugged his parents, and smiled, trying nt t let his emtins (情緒) get the better f him. His parents were nt quite able t keep theirs under cntrl. They had driven their sn several hurs ut f twn t the university where he wuld sn be living and studying. It was time t say gdbye fr nw at least. The family hugged and smiled thrugh misty eyes and then laughed. The by lifted the last bag nt his shulder, and flashed a bright smile. “I guess this is it,” he said. “I’ll see yu back hme in a mnth, kay?” His parents ndded, and they watched as he walked ut f sight int the crwds f hundreds f students and parents. The by’s mther turned t the dg, “Okay, Pppy, time t g back hme.” The huse seemed quiet as a tmb withut the by living there. All that week, Pppy didn’t seem interested in her dinner, her favrite ty, r even in her daily walk. Her wners were sad t, but they knew their sn wuld be back t visit. Pppy didn’t. They ffered the dg sme f her favrite peanut butter treats. They even let her sit n the sfa, but the ld girl just wasn’t her usual cheerful self. Her wners started t get wrried. “What shuld we d t cheer Pppy up?” asked Dad. “We’ve tried everything.” “I have an idea, but it might be a little crazy,” smiled Mm. “Withut anybdy left in the huse but us, this place culd use a bit f fun. Let’s get a little dg fr Pppy.” It didn’t take lng befre they walked thrugh the frnt dr carrying a big bx. Pppy welcmed them hme as usual, but when she saw the bx, she stpped. She put her nse n it. Her tail began wagging (擺動) ever s slwly, then faster as she caught the smell.注意：1. 所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2. 至少使用5個短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語；3. 續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語已為你寫好；4. 續(xù)寫完成后，請用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語。Paragraph 1: Dad pened the bx and a sweet little dg appeared. _____________________________Paragraph 2: A few weeks later, the by arrived hme frm university. ___________________________
閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進(jìn)行續(xù)寫，使之構(gòu)成一個完整的故事。
根據(jù)短文內(nèi)容，回答下列問題。
The by, his parents, their dg Pppy and the new little dg.
He was unwilling t part with his family and tried t cntrl his tears.
Because the by was nt at hme, and Pppy missed him a lt.
They gt a little dg fr her.
1. Wh are the characters in the stry?
2. Hw did the by feel when separating frm his family?
3. Why did Pppy seem uninterested in anything back hme?
4. What did the by’s parents d t cheer Pppy up?
1、The tall and thin teenager brught his dg with him living and studying at the university.
2、His parents saw him ff and were unwilling t part with him at the train statin.
3、The by cmfrted his family that he wuld be back in a mnth.
4、The parents and the dg were s sad that they weren’t interested in their daily rutines.
5、Pppy gt a bx with a little dg inside frm the parents.
根據(jù)你對原材料的理解，判斷以下表述是正確（T）還是錯誤（F）。
閱讀完材料，試著完成下面的故事山吧！
本篇的故事梗概： 男孩即將離家奔赴大學(xué)學(xué)習(xí)，父母帶著寵物狗Pppy 去送他。男孩 與父母依依惜別，彼此都竭力控制情緒，但后來還是含淚擁抱（此處表達(dá)了男孩與家庭成員之間的深 厚感情）。男孩離開后，家里冷清的環(huán)境讓失去了小主人的Pppy 悶悶不樂，不吃不喝，對玩具和 戶外活動都提不起興趣。女主人突然心生一計(jì)，想要給 Pppy 找個伴。某天，男孩父母回家時 Pppy 照常到門口迎接，此時她突然聞到了小狗的味道 ……。
“I’m ging t miss yu s much, Pppy,” said the tall, thin teenager. He bent dwn t hug his ld friend gdbye. He std up, hugged his parents, and smiled, trying nt t let his emtins（情緒） get the better f him.His parents were nt quite able t keep theirs under cntrl. They had driven their sn several hurs ut f twn t the university where he wuld sn be living and studying. It was time t say gdbye fr nw at least. The family hugged and smiled thrugh misty eyes and then laughed.
男孩和狗狗和父母分別的情形，男孩的動作和情緒-依依不舍。
The by lifted the last bag nt his shulder, and flashed a bright smile. “I guess this is it,” he said. “I’ll see yu back hme in a mnth, kay?” His parents ndded, and they watched as he walked ut f sight int the crwds f hundreds f students and parents. The by’s mther turned t the dg, “Okay, Pppy, time t g back hme.”The huse seemed quiet as a tmb withut the by living there. All that week, Pppy didn’t seem interested in her dinner, her favrite ty, r even in her daily walk. Her wners were sad t, but they knew their sn wuld be back t visit. Pppy didn’t.
男孩最終離開，父母帶著狗狗回家。
環(huán)境描寫，襯托了男孩不在家狗狗的寂寞之情。
They ffered the dg sme f her favrite peanut butter treats. They even let her sit n the sfa, but the ld girl just wasn’t her usual cheerful self. Her wners started t get wrried. “What shuld we d t cheer Pppy up?” asked Dad. “We’ve tried everything.”“I have an idea, but it might be a little crazy,” smiled Mm. “Withut anybdy left in the huse but us, this place culd use a bit f fun. Let’s get a little dg fr Pppy.”
媽媽為了讓Pppy開心想到了找一個小狗狗陪伴她的辦法。
It didn’t take lng befre they walked thrugh the frnt dr carrying a big bx. Pppy welcmed them hme as usual but when she saw the bx, she stpped. She put her nse n it. Her tail began wagging（擺動）ever s slwly, then faster as she caught the smell.
Pppy感受到盒子時的動作表現(xiàn)：說明她興趣來了。
研讀兩段給出句，想想它們給我們提供了哪些續(xù)寫線索？
分析續(xù)寫段首，確定續(xù)寫方向 根據(jù)文章最后一句Her tail began wagging ever s slwly, then faster as she caught the smell的暗示伏筆和段首句1：Dad pened the bx and a sweet little dg appeared（爸爸打開盒子，一只可愛的小狗出現(xiàn)了）。設(shè)想以下問題獲取寫作要點(diǎn)：①Which wrds r phrases catch yur eyes?（a sweet little dg appeared）②Hw did parents get rid f lneliness at hme?③Hw did Pppy relieve her lneliness?④Hw did Pppy get alng with anther dg?
根據(jù)段首句2：A few weeks later the by arrived hme frm university（幾個星期后，男孩從大學(xué)回到家里）及時間線索詞A few weeks later?？赏ㄟ^以下問題獲取寫作要點(diǎn)：①Which wrds r phrases catch yur eyes? （the by arrived hme）②Hw did the by g back hme?③Hw did the by get ut f lneliness?④Hw did the character feel?⑤Hw culd Paragraph 2 be ended reasnably and creatively?
Paragraph 1 ：?Dad pened the bx and a sweet little dg appeared. _______________________________________________________________________Paragraph 2 ：?A few weeks later, the by arrived hme frm university. _______________________________________________________________________
Pppy 看到一只小狗之后會是什么反應(yīng)呢？應(yīng)該是開心的。所以這段續(xù)寫兩只狗狗玩的愉快。
本段應(yīng)該是男孩回家看到家里多了一只狗狗之后的反應(yīng)，他和狗狗一起玩。
Paragraph 1 ：?Dad pened the bx and a sweet little dg appeared.
Pppy apprached.
The puppy came ut
The tw dgs played tgether.
The parents were glad.
Paragraph 2 ：?A few weeks later, the by arrived hme frm university.
He was greeted by pppy and the ther dg
The by played with the tw dgs.
They were all happy.
1. 爸爸打開盒子，一只可愛的小狗出現(xiàn)了。波比小心翼翼地走近，試圖不嚇到小狗。
Dad pened the bx and a sweet little dg appeared.?Pppy?apprached with cautin, trying nt t scare the puppy.
apprached with cautin
scare the puppy
2. 果然，過了一會兒，絨球才從盒子里抬起頭來偷看它的新家和新朋友。
Sure enugh, mments later, the ball f fur lifted its head ut f the bx t peek at its new hme and its new friend.
Sure enugh, it was nly mments later that the ball f fur lifted its head ut f the?bx t peek at its new hme and its new friend.
ifted its head ut f the bx t peek at
3. 爸爸媽媽高興地看著他們結(jié)識。
Mm and Dad?watched?delightedly as the tw made acquaintances.
made acquaintances
4. 他們很高興看到波比恢復(fù)了原來的樣子，他們每天帶著小狗散步，甚至向它介紹了她最喜歡的玩具。
They were glad t see Pppy cming back t her usual self, and they guided the little dg n daily walks and even intrduced t it her favrite tys.
They were glad t see Pppy cming?back t her usual self, guiding the little dg n daily walks and even intrducing t it her favrite tys.
cme back t her usual self
guide the little dg n daily walks
5. 聽到他把包從車上卸下，波比豎起耳朵，突然她四肢著地。
Pppy heared his bags unladed n the driveway, and she pricked up her ears and suddenly she was n all furs.
Hearing his bags unladed n the driveway, Pppy’s ears pricked up and suddenly she was n all furs.
Pick up ne’s ear
Be n all furs
6. 男孩被一聲歡快的犬吠聲迎接。
The?by was greeted with a?cheerful?high-pitched bark.
cheerful high-pitched bark.
7. 然后前門砰地一聲打開，波比撲到他的懷抱里，后面是那個溫柔地舔著手指的小家伙。
Then the frnt dr ppped pen and Pppy darted t his embrace, fllwed by the little ne wh licked his fingers fndly.
darted t his embrace
licked his fingers
8. 他笑得從來沒有那么燦爛過，大聲喊著他的父母，他們拉他進(jìn)來，長時間地?fù)肀е?br/>He smiled ever s bright, and then called ut t his parents, wh tugged him in fr a lng hug.
Smiling ever s bright, he called ut t his?parents, wh tugged him in fr a lng?hug.
Smile ever s bright
tugged him in
9. 盡管秋風(fēng)凜冽，他們的家卻充滿了愛與團(tuán)圓的溫暖。
Despite the chill autumn wind, their hme was filled with the warmth f lve and reunin.
Despite the chill autumn wind
lve and reunin
Dad pened the bx and a sweet little dg appeared. _______________________ (然后盒子里跳出來一小團(tuán)金色波浪狀的東西。倒裝結(jié)構(gòu)). Pppy was amazed. She watched carefully. She wagged furiusly. She barked with jy. _____________________(她微笑著，伸著舌頭審視著這個驚喜。獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu)). The little pup was nt shy and immediately started barking and jumping arund the lder dg. “That didn’t take lng,” remarked the by’s mm, as bth dgs went raring arund the huse in a happy game f chase. Dad laughed. A few weeks later, the by arrived hme frm university. _____________________ (在大學(xué)時他很想念Pppy，省略句) and was lking frward t seeing her. When he bent dwn t give her a big hug, he fell ver in surprise as a small glden clud came racing up t lick his face t. “Oh my, wh is this?” he exclaimed. _________________________________ (看著他滿臉的驚訝，他的父母笑了起來。非謂語動詞作狀語). “That’s Pee-wee,” said Dad. “I can’t believe yu gt yurselves a puppy!” “We didn’t,” replied Mm. “This puppy is fr Pppy!”
根據(jù)括號中的提示，補(bǔ)出范文缺失的部分，并關(guān)注哪些語言回答了“首句精研”的問題。
閱讀以下參考范文，學(xué)習(xí)范文的精彩表達(dá)和亮點(diǎn)表述。
Dad pened the bx and a sweet little dg appeared. Then ut f the bx jumped a small mass f wavy glden thing. Pppy was amazed. She watched carefully. She wagged furiusly. She barked with jy. She smiled, her tngue hanging ut as she investigated the surprise. The little pup was nt shy and immediately started barking and jumping arund the lder dg. “That didn’t take lng,” remarked the by’s mm, as bth dgs went raring arund the huse in a happy game f chase. Dad laughed. A few weeks later, the by arrived hme frm university. He had missed Pppy while at university and was lking frward t seeing her. When he bent dwn t give her a big hug, he fell ver in surprise as a small glden clud came racing up t lick his face t. “Oh my, wh is this?” he exclaimed. His parents laughed, seeing the lk f shck n his face. “That’s Pee-wee,” said Dad. “I can’t believe yu gt yurselves a puppy!” “We didn’t,” replied Mm. “This puppy is fr Pppy!”
2020年1月浙江卷讀后續(xù)寫——邏輯連貫 (cherent)
Then ut f the bx jumped a small mass f wavy glden thing. Pppy was amazed. She watched carefully. She wagged furiusly. She barked with jy. She smiled, her tngue hanging ut as she investigated the surprise. The little pup was nt shy and immediately started barking and jumping arund the lder dg. “That didn’t take lng,” remarked the by’s mm, as bth dgs went raring arund the huse in a happy game f chase. Dad laughed.
重復(fù)、指代、同義替換等 (chesive)
What was Pppy’s reactin t the little dg? Hw did the little dg behave?
Dad pened the bx and a sweet little dg appeared.
He had missed Pppy while at university and was lking frward t seeing her. When he bent dwn t give her a big hug, he fell ver in surprise as a small glden clud came racing up t lick his face t. “Oh my, wh is this?” he exclaimed. His parents laughed, seeing the lk f shck n his face. “That’s Pee-wee,” said Dad. “I can’t believe yu gt yurselves a puppy!” “We didn’t,” replied Mm. “This puppy is fr Pppy!”
What did the by d after seeing Pppy and the new little dg? Hw did he feel?
A few weeks later, the by arrived hme frm university.
2020年1月浙江卷讀后續(xù)寫——精彩語言
Dad pened the bx and a sweet little dg appeared. Then ut f the bx jumped a small mass f wavy glden thing. Pppy was amazed. She watched carefully. She wagged furiusly. She barked with jy. She smiled, her tngue hanging ut as she investigated the surprise. The little pup was nt shy and immediately started barking and jumping arund the lder dg. “That didn’t take lng,” remarked the by’s mm, as bth dgs went raring arund the huse in a happy game f chase. Dad laughed.
A few weeks later, the by arrived hme frm university. He had missed Pppy while at university and was lking frward t seeing her. When he bent dwn t give her a big hug, he fell ver in surprise as a small glden clud came racing up t lick his face t. “Oh my, wh is this?” he exclaimed. His parents laughed, seeing the lk f shck n his face. “That’s Pee-wee,” said Dad. “I can’t believe yu gt yurselves a puppy!” “We didn’t,” replied Mm. “This puppy is fr Pppy!”
檢測一下你對范文的亮點(diǎn)語塊掌握了嗎？
閱讀下面的補(bǔ)充語料，積累一些續(xù)寫素材吧！
It lwered its head with cautin, its eyes shining with curisity. It was s sweet that Pppy culdn’t help appraching it and kissing it. It was nt lng befre the tw gt familiar with each ther. They sniffed each ther like ld friends. The parents, in great surprise, culdn’t imagine the tw dgs enjying each ther’s cmpany in the blink f an eye. The by’s parents smiled happily, packing up their wrries. Ever since then, the huse had n lnger been ruled by dead silence, but full f lud laughter. Being warmly greeted by tw lvely dgs, he was quite astnished. Strangely, he wasn’t greeted with Pppy’s usual barking, but with an unbelievable scene. He excitedly pened the dr, lking frward t gathering with his family, nly t find …

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