2024年高考英語(yǔ)課件09 讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)：助人型（故事構(gòu)造“三部曲”）-課件下載-教習(xí)網(wǎng)

讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)：助人型TOC \o "1-3" \h \u HYPERLINK \l "_Toc30310" Part1：經(jīng)典例文（披薩店員工救人） PAGEREF _Toc30310 \h 1 HYPERLINK \l "_Toc30895" Part2：助人類故事構(gòu)造三部曲 PAGEREF _Toc30895 \h 4 HYPERLINK \l "_Toc24518" 第一步：困難描寫(xiě)（消極情緒+困難處境） PAGEREF _Toc24518 \h 4 HYPERLINK \l "_Toc4380" 第二步：助人過(guò)程呈現(xiàn)（（想到辦法+動(dòng)作鏈） PAGEREF _Toc4380 \h 5 HYPERLINK \l "_Toc30710" 第三步：皆大歡喜結(jié)局（感激+感動(dòng)+升華） PAGEREF _Toc30710 \h 6 HYPERLINK \l "_Toc28788" Part3：助人場(chǎng)景描寫(xiě) PAGEREF _Toc28788 \h 7 HYPERLINK \l "_Toc13037" 一、幫助他人之后 PAGEREF _Toc13037 \h 7 HYPERLINK \l "_Toc30500" 二、發(fā)生水災(zāi)之后 PAGEREF _Toc30500 \h 8 HYPERLINK \l "_Toc31432" 三、發(fā)生誤解之后 PAGEREF _Toc31432 \h 9 HYPERLINK \l "_Toc25975" 四、發(fā)生火災(zāi)之后 PAGEREF _Toc25975 \h 10 HYPERLINK \l "_Toc20806" 五、感受善良之后 PAGEREF _Toc20806 \h 11 HYPERLINK \l "_Toc9264" 六、感受幸福之后 PAGEREF _Toc9264 \h 11 HYPERLINK \l "_Toc23200" 七、發(fā)生誤解之后 PAGEREF _Toc23200 \h 12 HYPERLINK \l "_Toc4925" 八、獲得勇氣 PAGEREF _Toc4925 \h 13 HYPERLINK \l "_Toc22861" 九、獲得自信 PAGEREF _Toc22861 \h 14 HYPERLINK \l "_Toc27732" 十、接收禮物之后 PAGEREF _Toc27732 \h 15 HYPERLINK \l "_Toc9420" 十一、老師的幫助 PAGEREF _Toc9420 \h 16 HYPERLINK \l "_Toc815" 十二、陌生人的幫助 PAGEREF _Toc815 \h 17 HYPERLINK \l "_Toc31571" Part4：靈活應(yīng)用 PAGEREF _Toc31571 \h 18 HYPERLINK \l "_Toc6377" 例1：老夫婦幫助我 PAGEREF _Toc6377 \h 18 HYPERLINK \l "_Toc11857" 例2：幫助老婦人 PAGEREF _Toc11857 \h 20 HYPERLINK \l "_Toc25359" Part5：高考真題再現(xiàn) PAGEREF _Toc25359 \h 23 HYPERLINK \l "_Toc26534" 真題1：好心的墨西哥家庭【2021年八省聯(lián)考】 PAGEREF _Toc26534 \h 23 HYPERLINK \l "_Toc11354" 真題2：買爆米花助窮人【2020年7月山東卷】 PAGEREF _Toc11354 \h 25 Part1：經(jīng)典例文（披薩店員工救人）閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫(xiě)兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。續(xù)寫(xiě)的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右。 When the employees at the Domino’s pizza place in Salem, Oregon, hadn’t received any order from Kirk Alexander for more than 2 weeks, they knew something wasn’t right. Kirk was a loyal customer and the staff all knew him. So it was natural that they got worried when they had no news about him. Their concern saved his life. Sarah Fuller, the general manager at the Domino’s branch, said that Kirk, who was 48 years old, had been a loyal customer since 2009. “He orders every day, or every other day,” Sarah said. Normally, his order came up on the screen because he ordered online. So we saw it came across the screen and we were thinking, “Oh, Kirk’s order.” After a few days without a single order, Sarah and the staff started to worry. A few Domino’s drivers had mentioned that they hadn’t seen his order come across their screen in a while. Sarah checked the system and saw that no order had come in 11 days. So they decided to investigate. Sarah decided to send Tracy Hamblen, a deliver driver, to Kirk’s place. When he got there, he immediately knew something was wrong. While the lights and TV were on, Kirk did not come to the door. Additionally, his phone went directly to voicemail. So Tracy immediately called 911. Para.1: When the police arrived at the place, ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Para.2: A few days later, Kirk was released from the hospital. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Para1: When the police arrived at the place, they heard a cry for help from the inside of the house. Inside, they found Kirk, who was in need of immediate medical help. Due to the quick actions of Tracy, Kirk is in stable condition at the Salem Hospital. The Domino’s employees received a lot of praise online for their unbelievable thoughtfulness. But they said that it was just part of their job and they were just doing their job. 當(dāng)警察到達(dá)現(xiàn)場(chǎng)時(shí)，他們聽(tīng)到了來(lái)自房子內(nèi)部的呼救聲。在里面，他們發(fā)現(xiàn)了需要立即得到醫(yī)療幫助的柯克。由于特蕾西的快速行動(dòng)，柯克在塞勒姆醫(yī)院的情況很穩(wěn)定。多米美樂(lè)的員工令人難以置信的體貼在網(wǎng)上得到了很多贊揚(yáng)。但他們說(shuō)，這只是他們工作的一部分，他們只是在做他們的工作。 Para2: A few days later, Kirk was released from the hospital. He came to the Domino’s personally with some homemade cookies to say thank--you to Sarah and the Domino’s staff. The Domino’s mentioned that “Caring for customers should not be taken at face value. We should remember that the customers determine the success of our company and in turn we can also have an impact on their lives, small or big.” Kirk’s story has made this pizza shop even more popular in the community, and it has received more orders ever since. 幾天后，柯克出院了。他親自帶著一些自制的餅干來(lái)到多米諾餐廳，對(duì)莎拉和多米諾餐廳的工作人員說(shuō)聲謝謝。多米美樂(lè)提到“照顧客戶不應(yīng)該是表面價(jià)值?！蔽覀儜?yīng)該記住，客戶決定了我們公司的成功，反過(guò)來(lái)我們也可以對(duì)他們的生活產(chǎn)生影響，無(wú)論大小。柯克的故事讓這家披薩店在社區(qū)中更受歡迎，此后它收到了更多的訂單。【解析】【分析】文章以人物為線索展開(kāi)，講述了一個(gè)披薩店的員工，細(xì)心地發(fā)現(xiàn)近期沒(méi)有收到來(lái)自老顧客Kirk的訂單，于是派人前去查看，發(fā)現(xiàn)Kirk生病并及時(shí)報(bào)警就醫(yī)，確保了Kirk的安全。員工的善舉為披薩店贏得了更多的稱贊和訂單。【詳解】1.段落續(xù)寫(xiě)： ①由第一段首句內(nèi)容“當(dāng)警察趕到現(xiàn)場(chǎng)時(shí)，”可知，第一段可描寫(xiě)警察將Kirk送到醫(yī)院的經(jīng)過(guò)。②由第二段首句內(nèi)容“幾天后，Kirk出院了?！笨芍诙慰擅鑼?xiě)Kirk出院后去披薩店感謝員工們拯救了他的生命以及該披薩店因?yàn)樯埔馀e動(dòng)而為自己贏得更多的訂單和顧客。續(xù)寫(xiě)線索：呼救——成功被救助——感謝——店員表達(dá)觀點(diǎn)——披薩店更受歡迎3.詞匯激活行為類①大聲求救：cry for help /shout for help /scream for help②受到贊揚(yáng)：received a lot of praise / be praised greatly③照顧，護(hù)理： caring for/taking care of/情緒類①.感謝：say thank--you / express appreciation / show appreciation /show his gratitude/be grateful②.體貼：thoughtfulness /being considerate【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]. Inside, they found Kirk, who was in need of immediate medical help.(由關(guān)系代詞who引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，修飾先行詞Kirk。)[高分句型2]. We should remember that the customers determine the success of our company and in turn we can also have an impact on their lives, small or big.(that引導(dǎo)賓語(yǔ)從句作remember的賓語(yǔ)。) Part2：助人類故事構(gòu)造三部曲第一步：困難描寫(xiě)（消極情緒+困難處境）（1）消極情緒典型表達(dá)是：感到（這個(gè)可以有很多表達(dá)方式，并且可以結(jié)合在每一個(gè)環(huán)節(jié)中，可有非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞形式和介詞短語(yǔ)） 1. a flush of (表情緒的名詞)=a wave of...=a feeling/sense of...一陣... 2.joy/excitement/pride/anger/rage/panic/terror/sorrow/sadness/grief/embarrassment/dispointment/guilt/shame...) 3. (表情緒的名詞) flooded over sb=swept over sb ? 因...顫抖 tremble//shiver/shake (with fear, panic excitement, rage...) ? （2）進(jìn)一步細(xì)節(jié)描寫(xiě) 典型是：流淚；心里想…… 流淚： 1. Tears blurred one's eyes.????? 2. One's eyes got misty.?? 3. One's eyes misted/dimmed with tears.淚眼模糊 4. ...be close to tears幾乎要哭了 5. tears (roll down one's eyes/cheeks/face)淚水落下 ? ?困難處境 As the economy was in decline(經(jīng)濟(jì)衰退), some people in the town had lost their jobs. Many of their families were struggling to make ends meet (使收支平衡). （2020.7高考山東卷） There was a man sick in bed(臥病在床), his wife, who took care of him and could not go out to work, and their little boy. （2020.7高考山東卷） But one day, a hurricane hit the area (臺(tái)風(fēng)襲擊當(dāng)?shù)? where he lived, completely destroying his home (完全摧毀他的家) . （2021廣州2月聯(lián)考）第二步：助人過(guò)程呈現(xiàn)（想到辦法+動(dòng)作鏈）（1）突然有了一個(gè)想法：一句話表示想法典型：某人想到/明白...;?有了主意 1. It suddenly occurred to sb that?從句=It hit sb that?從句=It struck me that?從句?=It dawned on sb that?從句 2. (idea, thought...) occurred/came to sb.=...came/flashed into one's mind=...crowded in one's mind 3. One's mind began to race （2）動(dòng)作鏈 Then he got a saw (鋸子) from the truck and cut a section out of a big log on the side of the road. We rolled it over and put his jack on top, and we were in business.然后他從卡車上拿到了一把鋸子（鋸子），從路邊的一根大木頭上砍了一段。我們把它翻過(guò)來(lái)，把他的杰克頂放在上面，我們開(kāi)始做生意。【八省聯(lián)考】第三步：皆大歡喜結(jié)局（感激+感動(dòng)+升華）（1）皆大歡喜：過(guò)了一段時(shí)間，事情有了最后的轉(zhuǎn)折過(guò)了一段時(shí)間 1. not long after that,...=shortly afterwards, ...=before long, ...=It didn't take long before?從句=It took some time before從句不久, ...????? 2. for an instant/moment一瞬間 ? （2）有了結(jié)果 1. To one's surprise(delight)/Strangely enough, it turned out that?從句 2. But on second thoughts, ...但是轉(zhuǎn)而一想，... 3. But what happened next was pure magic.?接下來(lái)發(fā)生的非常奇妙（3）感謝 Now, I was definitely grateful to her for extending a helping hand(伸出援手).（2021屆湖南長(zhǎng)沙市一中高三月考三） Molly and Shawn met on Tuesday, and she says she couldn’t thank him enough (非常感謝他)and everyone involved in for what they did for her. （2020屆山東省泰安市高三第二輪復(fù)習(xí)質(zhì)量檢測(cè)（二模）英語(yǔ)試題）（4）感動(dòng) 1. Needless to say, they were deeply moved (他們被深深地感動(dòng)了), especially Bernard who finally found a way to make money for his family. （2020.7高考山東卷） 2. He was touched that I, a complete stranger, cared so much about him (如此關(guān)心他) and said he was willing to work.（2021廣州2月聯(lián)考） 3. In a flash, with tears welling up in my eyes, I was touched beyond words (感動(dòng)得說(shuō)不出話來(lái)). I felt so warm as if there were nine suns in my chest. （2021年1月八省聯(lián)考） 4. I nodded in gratitude, eyes glistening with held-back tears(眼睛因?yàn)閺?qiáng)忍的淚水而閃耀). （2021年1月八省聯(lián)考） 5. Stunned and moved(驚訝又感動(dòng)), I stared at the note, feeling a pang of guilt about my previous thought that all people were indifferent.（2021年1月八省聯(lián)考）（5）升華 It is love that makes the world go round（是愛(ài)讓世界運(yùn)轉(zhuǎn)）and Bernard felt it deep in his little heart.（2020.7高考山東卷） Everyone was happy and sweet, exposing their sets of white teeth（露出他們潔白的牙齒）.（2020.7高考山東卷） I made up my mind to pass on “l(fā)ove” to others（傳遞愛(ài)給其他人）. Just as a saying goes : “ Roses given, fragrance in hand（贈(zèng)人玫瑰，手有余香）. ”（2021年1月八省聯(lián)考） From that day on, every time I meet someone who needs help, I always reach out to them, hoping to pass on the kindness （希望傳遞善意）that Mexican family offered me.（2021年1月八省聯(lián)考） 5. Sometimes, a small act of kindness may be powerful enough to make a huge difference（會(huì)有很大不同）. Part3：助人場(chǎng)景描寫(xiě) 一、幫助他人之后 I just looked at my friend with disbelief as he told the story of the first day we met.Kyle had planned to kill himself over the weekend. He talked of how he had cleaned out his locker so his Mom wouldn’t have to do it later and was carrying his stuff home. Meanwhile,I found he looked hard at me and gave me a little smile."Thankfully, I was saved. My friend saved me from doing the unspeakable,I heard the gasp go through the crowd as this handsome, popular boy told us all about his weakest moment. When his eyes caught mine,I was able to see tears shimmered in his smiling eyes. 我只是難以置信地看著我的朋友，他講述了我們第一天見(jiàn)面的故事。凱爾計(jì)劃周末消遣。他談到了他是如何清理他的儲(chǔ)物柜的，這樣他的媽媽就不用再做了，然后把他的東西帶回家了。同時(shí)，我發(fā)現(xiàn)他狠狠地看著我，給了我一個(gè)小小的微笑。 “謝天謝地，我得救了。我的朋友不讓我做那些無(wú)法形容的事，我聽(tīng)到人群中的喘息聲，就像這個(gè)英俊、受歡迎的男孩告訴我們他最脆弱的時(shí)刻一樣。當(dāng)他的眼睛抓住我的眼睛時(shí)，我能看到他微笑的眼睛里閃爍著淚水。 I smiled back in tears. Not until that moment did I realize what big difference one small gesture had made to him. I even saw his Mom and Dad looking at me and smiling that same grateful smile. It dawned on me that never should we underestimate the power of our actions. With one small gesture we can change a person's life. For better or for worse. 我笑著。直到那一刻，我才意識(shí)到一個(gè)小小的手勢(shì)對(duì)他產(chǎn)生了多么大的不同。我甚至看到他的爸爸媽媽看著我，也帶著同樣感激的微笑。我意識(shí)到，我們永遠(yuǎn)不應(yīng)該低估我們行動(dòng)的力量。只要用一個(gè)小小的手勢(shì)，我們就可以改變一個(gè)人的生活。為好或壞。二、發(fā)生水災(zāi)之后 The water kept rising, and there was no hope of rescue. The hours passed. Jason and Andrew didn't dare to move for fear of slipping. They dozed off and then jerked themselves awake. Every once in a while,one of them turned on his headlamp to check the water level. An hour later, the water level went down enough that they could try an escape. Stiff from keeping in one position for 12 hours, they slowly unfolded their bodies. Jason screamed in pain, but he was determined not to let it stop him. 水不斷上漲，沒(méi)有了救援的希望。幾個(gè)小時(shí)過(guò)去了。杰森和安德魯不敢動(dòng)，因?yàn)楹ε禄埂?他們打了個(gè)瞌睡，然后猛地清醒過(guò)來(lái)。每隔一段時(shí)間，其中一個(gè)人就打開(kāi)他的前照燈檢查水位。一個(gè)小時(shí)后，水位下降到足以讓他們嘗試逃跑。他們僵硬地保持在一個(gè)位置12小時(shí)，慢慢地展開(kāi)他們的身體。杰森痛苦地尖叫著，但他決心不讓它阻止他。 Slowly but steadily, the group made their way forward. Still, each time Jason moved a leg, he cried out. Over the next 90 minutes, they made their way toward the entrance, at times in chest-high water. Now, in a passage that was high enough for them to walkupright, Jason saw something flicker in the distance."Lights! I see lights!" Jason shouted out.For the first time since entering the cave, over 20 hours earlier, Jason's emotions got the best of him and tears trickled down his cheeks. 水不斷上漲，沒(méi)有了救援的希望。幾個(gè)小時(shí)過(guò)去了。杰森和安德魯不敢動(dòng)，因?yàn)楹ε禄埂?他們打了個(gè)瞌睡，然后猛地清醒過(guò)來(lái)。每隔一段時(shí)間，其中一個(gè)人就打開(kāi)他的前照燈檢查水位。一個(gè)小時(shí)后，水位下降到足以讓他們嘗試逃跑。他們僵硬地保持在一個(gè)位置12小時(shí)，慢慢地展開(kāi)他們的身體。杰森痛苦地尖叫著，但他決心不讓它阻止他。三、發(fā)生誤解之后 As she reached in her baggage, she gasped with surprise. At that moment, in her sight came the packet of cookies, which had beenjust bought by her, unopened at all. Ashamed and feeling like a thief, she finally got that the cookies were not hers but belonged to the man sitting next to her, who had calmly offered to share his last cookie with her.A sudden rush of shy blood filling the face, she instinctively look around with the hope of finding the very man to make an apology. 當(dāng)她伸手拿行李時(shí)，她驚訝地喘了一口氣。就在這時(shí)，她看到了她剛買的一包餅干，根本沒(méi)有打開(kāi)。她感到羞愧，感覺(jué)自己像個(gè)小偷，終于明白了這些餅干不是她的，而是屬于坐在她旁邊的男人，他平靜地提出和她分享他的最后一塊餅干。臉上突然涌滿了害羞的鮮血，她本能地環(huán)顧四周，希望能找到那個(gè)男人來(lái)道歉。 Surprisingly, she found the man sitting just behind her. He was just looking up and met her eyes,also with a smile on his face.The woman was at an absolute loss but gave the man a nervous laugh in return. Witha quite open mouth, she was unable to say any apology to him. Murmuring "Sorry, sorry..It was I myself who was the real cookie thief." After a while, she fell asleep on her seat with the plane flying steadily. The next day, when she arrived at her new company, the biggest surprise was waiting for her. 令人驚訝的是，她發(fā)現(xiàn)那個(gè)男人就坐在她身后。他只是抬頭看了看她的眼睛，臉上也帶著微笑。女人完全不知所措，但卻給了男人一聲緊張的笑聲作為回報(bào)。她張開(kāi)嘴，不能向他道歉。 “對(duì)不起，對(duì)不起。。真正偷餅的是我自己。” 過(guò)了一會(huì)兒，她在座位上睡著了，飛機(jī)平穩(wěn)地飛著。第二天，當(dāng)她來(lái)到她的新公司時(shí)，最大的驚喜就是在等她。四、發(fā)生火災(zāi)之后 Tom noticed the flame was reaching up. Frozen with fear, he stood rooted to the spot. He comprehended the gravity of the situation and held Jane′s hand tightly. By then, both of them were coughing and their eyes were stinging. Time seemed to stand still, though they were probably there for only two or three minutes. Tom begged Jane to run for safety as quickly as possible.Jane tried to shield her nose from the choking smoke and shook her head. She kept pounding against the door. Tom burst out crying. 湯姆注意到火焰正在升起。他嚇得僵住了，站在原地。他明白形勢(shì)的嚴(yán)重性，緊緊地握住簡(jiǎn)的手。到那時(shí)，他們倆都在咳嗽，眼睛刺痛。時(shí)間似乎靜止不動(dòng)，雖然他們可能只在那里兩三分鐘。湯姆懇求簡(jiǎn)盡快跑過(guò)去尋求安全。簡(jiǎn)想保護(hù)她的鼻子免受嗆人的煙霧，搖了搖頭。她不停地敲門。湯姆突然哭了起來(lái)。 Luckily, some neighbors passing by stopped and offered help.A sense of strength immediately replaced the mounting fear and anxiety in Jane's mind. She told them Ms. Makcik must be still in the room. They forced the door open with all their might. Sure enough, Makcik was lying in bed,unconscious. She was carried downstairs and then rushed to the hospital, where she finally came to herself. People in the neighborhood felt relieved and Jane and Tom's joy was immense. 幸運(yùn)的是，一些鄰居路過(guò)時(shí)停下來(lái)，并提供了幫助。一種力量感立刻取代了簡(jiǎn)心中日益增加的恐懼和焦慮。她告訴他們，馬克奇克女士一定還在房間里。他們竭盡全力地強(qiáng)行打開(kāi)了門。果然，馬克西克正躺在床上，失去了知覺(jué)。她被帶下樓，然后被緊急送往醫(yī)院，終于蘇醒過(guò)來(lái)。附近的人都松了一口氣，簡(jiǎn)和湯姆非常高興。五、感受善良之后 Seeing what was going on, my dad put his hand in his pocket, pulled out a $20 bill and dropped it on the ground.Then he picked it up and tapped the man on the shoulder and said,"Excuse me, sir, this fell out of your pocket." The man turned around and saw the money. He knew what was going on,he looked straight into my dad's eyes, took my dad's hand in both of his, squeezed tightly onto the $20 bill, and with his lip shaking and a tear running down his cheek, he replied,"Thank you, thankyou, sir. This really means a lot to me and my family. 水不斷上漲，沒(méi)有了救援的希望。幾個(gè)小時(shí)過(guò)去了。杰森和安德魯不敢動(dòng)，因?yàn)楹ε禄埂?他們打了個(gè)瞌睡，然后猛地清醒過(guò)來(lái)。每隔一段時(shí)間，其中一個(gè)人就打開(kāi)他的前照燈檢查水位。一個(gè)小時(shí)后，水位下降到足以讓他們嘗試逃跑。他們僵硬地保持在一個(gè)位置12小時(shí)，慢慢地展開(kāi)他們的身體。杰森痛苦地尖叫著，但他決心不讓它阻止他。 That day my father andI went back to our car and drove home without any tickets.We didn't go to the circus that night, when I asked dad why he did so, Dad said,"My child, it was a desperate, heartbreaking and embarrassing situation for a father. Surely he wasn't begging fora handout, but he reminded me of my father, when I was young." He paused for a while, as if wandering in his memory."We should appreciate what we have obtained from life and seize every opportunity to help others.We didn't go to the circus tonight, but we didn't go without. Now, who wants an ice cream?。那天，我和我父親回到我們的車?yán)?，沒(méi)有任何票就開(kāi)車回家了。那天晚上我們沒(méi)有去馬戲團(tuán)，當(dāng)我問(wèn)爸爸為什么這么做時(shí)，爸爸說(shuō)：“我的孩子，對(duì)一個(gè)父親來(lái)說(shuō)，這是一個(gè)絕望、令人心碎和尷尬的情況。他當(dāng)然不是乞求施舍，但他讓我想起了我年輕時(shí)的父親?！?他停頓了一會(huì)兒，仿佛在記憶中徘徊。我們應(yīng)該珍惜從生活中獲得的東西，抓住一切機(jī)會(huì)幫助別人。我們今晚沒(méi)有去馬戲團(tuán)，但我們沒(méi)有去。誰(shuí)要冰淇淋？。六、感受幸福之后 The driver responded,"It must feel good to be taken care of and protected like you are every day."Confused by what the driver talked about,she asked, "What do you mean?" The driver answered, "Every morning in the past week,a fine looking gentleman ina military uniform has been standing across the street watching you getting off the bus.He makes sure you cross the street safely and he watches until you enter your office building.Then he blows you a kiss,gives you a lite salute and walks away. You are one lucky lady.' 司機(jī)回答說(shuō)：“像每天一樣被照顧和保護(hù)一定會(huì)感覺(jué)很好。她對(duì)司機(jī)所說(shuō)的話感到困惑，她問(wèn)道，“你是什么意思？”司機(jī)回答說(shuō)：“在過(guò)去的一周里，每天早上，一個(gè)漂亮的軍裝紳士都站在街對(duì)面看著你下車。他確保你安全過(guò)馬路，他看著，直到你進(jìn)入你的辦公樓。然后他打了你一個(gè)吻，向你輕輕地敬禮，然后走開(kāi)了。你是一位幸運(yùn)的女士。” Tears of happiness poured down Susan's cheeks. She stood motionlessly facing the opposite side of the street as if gazing at someone. Although she couldn't physically see him, she definitely felt Mark's presence. Susan thought she was actually lucky, for he had given her a gift more powerful than sight,a gift of love that can bring light where there is darkness.Just as Mark grew a little worried, he saw his wife break into a radiant smile and blow a kiss to his direction. Finally she found back herself blind but attractive and confident as she used to be. 司機(jī)回答說(shuō)：“像每天一樣被照顧和保護(hù)一定會(huì)感覺(jué)很好。她對(duì)司機(jī)所說(shuō)的話感到困惑，她問(wèn)道，“你是什么意思？”司機(jī)回答說(shuō)：“在過(guò)去的一周里，每天早上，一個(gè)漂亮的軍裝紳士都站在街對(duì)面看著你下車。他確保你安全過(guò)馬路，他看著，直到你進(jìn)入你的辦公樓。然后他打了你一個(gè)吻，向你輕輕地敬禮，然后走開(kāi)了。你是一位幸運(yùn)的女士?！? 七、發(fā)生誤解之后 A seat beside her was empty, and Dannis occupied it.He felt a wave of anger swept over him. "Where is my wallet?" he yelled. The black-haired girl glanced up from her reading, with a confused look on her face. Dannis stood up,glared at her and shouted,"You stole my wallet!" The crowds began to gossip.The girl turned deadly pale,looking so restless that words failed her.A strange silence hung in the air. Abruptly, she leaped from the seat. 她旁邊的一個(gè)座位空著，丹尼斯坐著。他感到一陣憤怒席卷了他。 “我的錢包呢？” 他大叫。黑發(fā)女孩從閱讀中抬起頭來(lái)，臉上露出困惑的神色。丹尼斯站起來(lái)，瞪了她一眼，喊道：“你偷了我的錢包！” 人群開(kāi)始閑聊起來(lái)。那女孩臉色慘白，神情不安，言語(yǔ)使她失望。一種奇怪的沉默掛在空中。她突然從座位上跳了起來(lái)。 The girl ran and Dannis ran after her. After a while, Dannis finally grabbed her by the arm.At exactly that moment,a policeman approached them and asked about what happened.Dannis hastened to explain it while the girl frowned with a shake of her head. After further enquiries, the policeman took out a wallet and handed it to Dannis, adding that someone had found it in the toilet. What a mistake he had made! Overwhelmed by guilt, Dannis made an apology to the girl. 女孩跑了，丹尼斯追了她。過(guò)了一會(huì)兒，丹尼斯終于抓住了她的手臂。就在這時(shí)，一個(gè)警察走近他們，問(wèn)他們發(fā)生了什么事。丹尼斯急忙解釋，而女孩皺著眉頭搖了搖頭。經(jīng)過(guò)進(jìn)一步的詢問(wèn)，警察拿出一個(gè)錢包遞給丹尼斯，并補(bǔ)充說(shuō)有人在廁所里發(fā)現(xiàn)了它。他犯了什么錯(cuò)誤！由于內(nèi)疚，丹尼斯向女孩道歉。八、獲得勇氣 The boy started running again to give the kite lift.The wind on the kite was at once strong and swift, carrying him up high into the air.Closing his eyes tight, he trembled all over in panic,not daring to look down.But with the boy's inspiring words in mind, he got up his nerve and managed to keep the balance and let his fear go.As the wind carried him upward, he slowly opened his eyes, only to see the whole town from a brand-new dimension!"Give more string, please. More! he yelled to the boy excitedly. With courage,he made a great dance in the air, making other kids cheering wildly 那男孩又開(kāi)始跑去放風(fēng)箏了。風(fēng)箏上的風(fēng)立刻強(qiáng)烈而迅速，把他從高空吹到空中。他緊緊地閉上眼睛，驚恐得渾身發(fā)抖，不敢低頭看。但考慮到男孩鼓舞人心的話，他鼓起了勇氣，設(shè)法保持平衡，釋放了他的恐懼。當(dāng)風(fēng)帶著他向上走時(shí)，他慢慢地睜開(kāi)眼睛，卻從一個(gè)全新的維度看到了整個(gè)城鎮(zhèn)！“請(qǐng)?jiān)俣鄬?xiě)信吧。請(qǐng)了解更多信息！他興奮地對(duì)那男孩大喊大叫。他鼓著勇氣在空中跳了一場(chǎng)舞，讓其他孩子瘋狂地歡呼 The kite felt peaceful and delighted and new. With other kites flying around, he floated, twirled,stretched his wings and waved his rag tail, a broad smile spreading on his face. The higher he went, the greater the view. Seeing the scared, timid kite now dancing confidently, the boy was touched, believing that the kite had learned a new lesson--the best way to defeat fear is to face it bravely and optimistically. 風(fēng)箏感到平靜、快樂(lè)和新鮮事物。其他風(fēng)箏四處飛著，他漂浮著，旋轉(zhuǎn)著，展開(kāi)翅膀，搖著破尾巴，臉上洋溢著燦爛的笑容。他走得越高，視野就越大?？吹胶ε碌摹⒛懶〉娘L(fēng)箏現(xiàn)在自信地跳舞，男孩被感動(dòng)了，相信風(fēng)箏已經(jīng)吸取了新的教訓(xùn)——戰(zhàn)勝恐懼的最好方法是勇敢而樂(lè)觀地面對(duì)它。九、獲得自信 Everybody was fixing their eyes on Jenny, waiting for an explanation.Jenny didn't answer. How could she explain about the watch and its magic? No one could understand. No one could believe. "But I saw you wearing it yesterday," Miss Walker gently reminded him. For a moment Lee remained silent and then he apologized he had just remembered that.Jenny was relieved saying she had found it on the way home and decided to return it after the speech. Everybody was puzzled and asked why. Jenny again was speechless. 每個(gè)人都把眼睛盯著珍妮，等待著解釋。珍妮沒(méi)有回答。她怎么能解釋一下這只手表和它的魔力呢？沒(méi)人能理解。沒(méi)有人能相信。“可是我昨天看到你戴著它，”沃克小姐溫柔地提醒他。李沉默了一會(huì)兒，然后他道歉了，他只記得這一點(diǎn)。珍妮在回家的路上找到了它，并決定在演講后歸還。每個(gè)人都很困惑，并被問(wèn)及為什么。珍妮又說(shuō)不出話來(lái)了。 Miss Walker smiled and asked the class to listen to Jenny's speech first.Jenny walked slowly to the front. She couldn't think properly. All round her, a sea of faces was watching.She felt so frightened and the watch didn't seem magical at all. Suddenly she saw Miss Walker's encouraging eyes.Jenny took a deep breath."I'm going to talk about swimming…." Ten minutes later the whole class stood up applauding Jenny's wonderful speech. Jenny smiled as she eventually realized the real source of confidence. 沃克老師笑了笑，讓全班同學(xué)先聽(tīng)珍妮的演講。珍妮慢慢地走到前面。她無(wú)法正常思考。她的四周，一片面海在看著。她感到很害怕，手表看起來(lái)一點(diǎn)也不神奇。突然，她看到沃克小姐鼓勵(lì)的眼睛。珍妮深吸了一口氣。 “我要談?wù)動(dòng)斡镜氖?..?！?十分鐘后全班同學(xué)起立為珍妮的精彩演講鼓掌。珍妮笑了，因?yàn)樗罱K意識(shí)到了自信的真正來(lái)源。十、接收禮物之后 I was stopped by my mother's eager,joyful look."Let's see what it is, honey. Hurry and open it."It was a blow dryer. Though this may seem but a simple gift, to me it was so much more. Being an eleven-year-old girl, I was stunned.In my world, where receiving lately outweighed giving, my mom's act of selflessness was incomprehensible. It was a huge act Tears filled my eyes and I thought in disbelief about how much my mom must love me to give up her Christmas so-could have a few more presents. 我被我母親急切而快樂(lè)的目光攔住了?！白屛覀兛纯茨鞘鞘裁词掳?，親愛(ài)的。趕快打開(kāi)它?！澳鞘且粋€(gè)吹風(fēng)機(jī)。雖然這似乎只是一份簡(jiǎn)單的禮物，但對(duì)我來(lái)說(shuō)，它更多了。作為一個(gè)11歲的女孩，我驚呆了。在我的世界里，最近接受的東西超過(guò)了付出，我媽媽的無(wú)私行為是不可理解的。這是一個(gè)巨大的表演，眼淚充滿了我的眼睛，我不相信我媽媽一定是多么愛(ài)我才能放棄她的圣誕節(jié)，所以可以再有幾份禮物。 I have always remembered that Christmas fondly: It had such an impact on me. As an adult with children in my life whom I adore, I can now understand my mom's actions.I see actually, she was not ""giving up her Christmas" as I had thought, but was finding an even greater joy in her Christmas because giving truly is better than receiving. My mom's simple act meant the world to me. Whenever I look back on my mom's giving, I will choose to give in my life. 我一直深情地記得那個(gè)圣誕節(jié)：它對(duì)我有如此的影響。作為一個(gè)在我的生活中有孩子的成年人，我現(xiàn)在可以理解我媽媽的行為。實(shí)際上，我知道，她并沒(méi)有像我想的那樣“放棄她的圣誕節(jié)”，而是在她的圣誕節(jié)中找到了更大的樂(lè)趣，因?yàn)檎嬲慕o予比接受更好。我媽媽的簡(jiǎn)單行為對(duì)我來(lái)說(shuō)意味著世界。每當(dāng)我回首媽媽的付出，我都會(huì)選擇在我的生命中付出。十一、老師的幫助 Everybody was fixing their eyes on Jenny, waiting for an explanation. Jenny didn't answer. How could she explain about the watch and its magic? No one could understand. No one could believe. "But I saw you wearing it yesterday," Miss Walker gently reminded him. For a moment Lee remained silent and then he apologized he had just remembered that.Jenny was relieved saying she had found it on the way home and decided to return it after the speech.Everybody was puzzled and asked why. Jenny again was speechless. 每個(gè)人都把眼睛盯著珍妮，等待著解釋。珍妮沒(méi)有回答。她怎么能解釋一下這只手表和它的魔力呢？沒(méi)人能理解。沒(méi)有人能相信?！暗易蛱炜匆?jiàn)你戴著它，”沃克小姐溫柔地提醒他。李沉默了一會(huì)兒，然后他道歉了，他只記得這一點(diǎn)。珍妮在回家的路上找到了它，并決定在演講后歸還。每個(gè)人都很困惑，并被問(wèn)及為什么。珍妮又說(shuō)不出話來(lái)了。 Miss Walker smiled and asked the class to listen to Jenny's speech first.Jenny walked slowly to the front. She couldn't think properly.All round her,a sea of faces was watching. She felt so frightened and the watch didn't seem magical at all. Suddenly she saw Miss Walker's encouraging eyes. Jenny took a deep breath."I'm going to talk about swimming…" Ten minutes later the whole class stood up applauding Jenny's wonderful speech.Jenny smiled as she eventually realized the real source of confidence. 沃克老師笑了笑，讓全班同學(xué)先聽(tīng)珍妮的演講。珍妮慢慢地走到前面。她無(wú)法正常思考。她的四周，一片面海在看著。她感到很害怕，手表看起來(lái)一點(diǎn)也不神奇。突然，她看到沃克小姐鼓勵(lì)的眼睛。珍妮深深地吸了一口氣。十分鐘后，全班同學(xué)起立為珍妮的精彩演講鼓掌。珍妮笑了，因?yàn)樗罱K意識(shí)到了自信的真正來(lái)源。 2. Time passed quickly that year, and before we all knew it, it was the last day of school.Our school had a very special tradition on the last day. All the teachers filled the sidewalk, waving goodbye to the kids as the buses pulled out with their horns honking.But on that particular day,Steven walked slowly to the bus, his head down, tears in his eyes.He boarded the bus reluctantly,hesitated,and then ran back off the bus to hug Mr. Rowe."I don′t want to leave you." He sobbed with red-rimmed eyes. Mr. Rowe comforted him,"I will miss you, too." 那一年時(shí)間過(guò)得很快，我們還沒(méi)意識(shí)到，那是學(xué)校的最后一天。我們學(xué)校在最后一天有一個(gè)非常特殊的傳統(tǒng)。所有的老師都擠滿了人行道，向孩子們揮手道別，車上按著喇叭離開(kāi)。但就在那一天，史蒂文慢慢地走到公交車前，低著頭，熱淚盈眶。他不情愿地登上了巴士，猶豫了一下，然后跑回來(lái)?yè)肀r。羅伊?！拔也幌腚x開(kāi)你?！彼眉t邊緣的眼睛抽泣著。Mr.羅安慰他，“我也會(huì)想念你?！? Many years later, Mr. Rowe and I were surprised when a handsome young man walked into our classroom, dressed in the Marine Corps uniform. The young man stood tall and proud.It was Steven! Mr. Rowe and I couldn't believe our eyes. He saluted and hugged Mr. Rowe tightly! "I have come back to school today just to say thanks to you!"It is my hope that every teacher is blessed with such an experience of a former student coming back to say, simply to say a very simple word of THANKS. 許多年后，當(dāng)一個(gè)穿著海軍陸戰(zhàn)隊(duì)制服的英俊年輕人走進(jìn)我們的教室時(shí)，羅先生和我感到驚訝。那個(gè)年輕人站得高高的，很驕傲。是史蒂文！我和羅先生簡(jiǎn)直不敢相信我們的眼睛。他敬禮，緊緊地?fù)肀Я_先生！ “我今天回到學(xué)校只是為了感謝你！ “我希望每一位老師都有這樣的經(jīng)歷，一位以前的學(xué)生回來(lái)說(shuō)，簡(jiǎn)單地說(shuō)一個(gè)非常簡(jiǎn)單的“謝謝。十二、陌生人的幫助 I was wondering what to say when I heard the sound of footsteps out of the tent.We both looked up. It was exactly the young man in the photo but looked much stronger. The woman said something to him, looking at us smiling."Need some Mg?"he asked.It's amazing he was speaking very good English! George and I looked at each other, eyes lit up."Yes, and we were wondering if you could have one of our tyres changed." "Follow me!" he said, sounding like sort of an order. 當(dāng)我聽(tīng)到帳篷外的腳步聲時(shí)，我想說(shuō)什么。我們都抬起頭來(lái)。照片上的正是那個(gè)年輕人，但看上去更強(qiáng)壯。女人對(duì)他說(shuō)了些什么，看著我們微笑。 ”“需要鎂嗎？ ”他問(wèn)道。他說(shuō)的英語(yǔ)很好真是太棒了！喬治和我互相看了一眼，眼睛亮了起來(lái)。 “是的，我們想知道你們是否可以換一個(gè)輪胎?！?“跟我來(lái)！” 他說(shuō)，聽(tīng)起來(lái)像是命令。 We got up and together walked back to the car. The man grabbed the wheel with one hand and a spanner with the other. With an outburst of shout, the tyre was oosened up."You just need a bit of effort. Haha!" George and I stood there dumbfounded watching him finishing the whole job, gratitude and admiration rushing in my heart. The knot that had been tired up by the pain in my foot, the cold soaking rain and the stubborn flat tyre was loosened up too,in the warm tea from the woman, the heroic shout of the man, the mountain view in the distance and the joy of being alel to set off again. 我們站起來(lái)，一起走回到車?yán)?。那個(gè)人用一只手抓住輪子，另一只手抓住扳手。大叫一聲，輪胎亮了?！澳阒恍枰冻鲆稽c(diǎn)努力。哈哈哈！”我和喬治呆地站在那里看著他完成整個(gè)工作，感激和欽佩在我心中涌動(dòng)。我腳的疼痛、冰冷的雨和頑固的平輪胎也松開(kāi)了，在女人溫暖的茶里，男人的英雄吶喊，遠(yuǎn)處的山景，還有比加萊爾再次出發(fā)的喜悅。 Part4：靈活應(yīng)用例1：老夫婦幫助我閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進(jìn)行續(xù)寫(xiě)，使之構(gòu)成一個(gè)完整的故事。（滿分25分） Many years ago, when I was fresh out of school and working in Denver, I was driving to my parents' home in Missouri for Christmas. I stopped at a gas station(加油站)about 50 miles from Oklahoma City, where I was planning to stop and visit a friend. While I was standing in line at the cash register(收款臺(tái)), I said hello to an older couple who were also paying for gas. I took off, but had gone only a few miles when black smoke poured from the back of my car. I stopped and wondered what I should do. A car pulled up behind me. It was the couple I had spoken to at the gas station. They said they would take me to my friend's .We chatted on the way into the city, and when I got out of the car, the husband gave me his business card. I wrote him and his wife a thank-you note for helping me. Soon afterward, I received a Christmas present from them. Their note that came with it said that helping me had made their holidays meaningful. Years later, I drove to a meeting in a nearby town in the morning. In late afternoon I returned to my car and found that I'd left the lights on all day, and the battery(電池)was dead. Then I noticed that the Friendly Ford dealership - a shop selling cars - was right next door. I walked over and found two salesmen in the showroom. 注意： 1.所續(xù)寫(xiě)的短文詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右； 2.應(yīng)使用5個(gè)以上短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)； 3.續(xù)寫(xiě)部分分為二段，每段的開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)已經(jīng)為你寫(xiě)好； 4續(xù)寫(xiě)完成后，請(qǐng)用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)。 Paragraph 1 I entered the shop, and one of the salesman came to me. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2 After a while, they quickly drove a pickup truck to my car and started it. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 1 I entered the shop, and one of the salesman came to me. I recognized him at once. the two salesmen were the older couple, and they were the owners of the Friendly Ford dealership. “ Hey, it’s you! you ever helped me, remember?” I said to them excitedly. Yeah, we do!” the old man laughed, we run the shop to help more people. you know, it makes our life so meaningful!” 我走進(jìn)商店，其中一個(gè)推銷員來(lái)找我。我立刻認(rèn)出了他。這兩名銷售員是老夫婦，他們是友好的福特經(jīng)銷商的老板?！昂伲悄?！”你曾經(jīng)幫助過(guò)我，記得嗎？我興奮地對(duì)他們說(shuō)。是的，老人笑了，我們經(jīng)營(yíng)商店是為了幫助更多的人。你知道，這讓我們的生活如此有意義！” Paragraph 2 After a while, they quickly drove a pickup truck to my car and started it. they solved my trouble once again, but when I paid for it, they would not accept my money. they told me that when they ran the shop at first, no one had ever taken the time to write them and say thank you, but now they received more and more thank-you notes from people, which they were really happy about. 過(guò)了一會(huì)兒，他們很快就開(kāi)了一輛小貨車到我的車前，發(fā)動(dòng)了它。他們?cè)俅谓鉀Q了我的麻煩，但當(dāng)我付錢時(shí)，他們不會(huì)接受我的錢。他們告訴我，當(dāng)他們一開(kāi)始經(jīng)營(yíng)商店的時(shí)候，沒(méi)有人花時(shí)間寫(xiě)聲謝謝，但現(xiàn)在他們收到了越來(lái)越多的感謝信，他們真的很高興。例2：幫助老婦人 “Hurry, Marcus!” Millie called to her brother. Marcus caught up just as the school bus arrived. The doors opened and they got their first look at the new bus driver, Mr. Cross. There was no smile on his face. He just nodded at them as they climbed the steps. Millie wondered if he ever smiled. “I miss our old driver,” she whispered. The bus traveled two more blocks, then stopped in front of a house with no one in sight. “Hey, we don’t usually stop here,” whispered Millie. Mr. Cross opened the bus doors. Millie waited to see who would get on, but nobody did. Still, Mr. Cross nodded his head, the way he had when she and Marcus boarded the bus. Then he closed the doors. “Did you see that?” Millie said. “He just opened the doors and nodded at someone, but nobody got on!” Marcus agreed. “That was strange.” The bus continued on the route, and the usual kids got on. Mr. Cross nodded at each one. During school that day, Millie kept thinking back to what had happened that morning. It didn't make sense. At the end of the day, when she and Marcus got on the bus to go home, Marcus said, “I think I figured it out. He probably stopped to pick up a ghost kid!” “A ghost kid?” Millie gulped (倒吸氣). “Maybe Mr. Cross can see ghosts,” Marcus said. “No,” said Millie. “That’s silly.” But as they rode home, Millie thought about it. What else could it be? Why else would he open the doors? The next two days, the same thing happened. The bus stopped and the doors opened. Smileless, Mr. Cross nodded, and the doors closed. Millie began to panic. This time she decided Marcus was right. “Who is this ghost kid? What if he’s sitting next to us?” They gathered courage to find out the truth. On Friday morning, the bus stopped at that house again. Their hearts raced. 注意: 1. 續(xù)寫(xiě)詞數(shù)應(yīng)為 150 左右: 2. 請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡相應(yīng)位置作答。 When Mr. Cross opened the doors and nodded to nobody, they went forward to him. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Hearing the story, in relief, they decided to visit the house and see what can be done. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 When Mr. Cross opened the doors and nodded to nobody, they went forward to him. Millie said, “Excuse me, Mr. Cross, who gets on at this stop every morning?” Mr. Cross replied, “I am afraid that there are some misunderstandings between us. I have an old friend who lives in the old house at the end of this block. Every day at this time, she will wave at me in front of the house. I can also see her in the distance and know that she is healthy and safe. I am so tall that I have to nod my head to look outside. ” 克羅斯先生開(kāi)門，沒(méi)有向任何人點(diǎn)點(diǎn)頭，他們就向他走去。米莉說(shuō)：“對(duì)不起，克羅斯先生，他每天早上都會(huì)在這里停留？”克羅斯先生回答說(shuō)：“恐怕我們之間有些誤解。”我有一個(gè)老朋友住在這個(gè)街區(qū)盡頭的老房子里。每天在這個(gè)時(shí)候，她都會(huì)在房子前向我揮手。我也可以在遠(yuǎn)處看到她，我知道她很健康，很安全。我太高了，我得點(diǎn)頭才能看外面?！? Hearing the story, in relief, they decided to visit the house and see what can be done. As approaching the house, they saw an old woman sitting on a chair with a dog next to her. They introduced themselves to this old woman. From then on, they often came to help the old woman with some housework on weekends. With the generous help of Millie and Marcus, the old woman no longer felt lonely. She often told them some old stories and they became good friends. 克羅斯先生開(kāi)門，沒(méi)有向任何人點(diǎn)點(diǎn)頭，他們就向他走去。米莉說(shuō)：“對(duì)不起，克羅斯先生，他每天早上都會(huì)在這里停留？”克羅斯先生回答說(shuō)：“恐怕我們之間有些誤解?！蔽矣幸粋€(gè)老朋友住在這個(gè)街區(qū)盡頭的老房子里。每天在這個(gè)時(shí)候，她都會(huì)在房子前向我揮手。我也可以在遠(yuǎn)處看到她，我知道她很健康，很安全。我太高了，我得點(diǎn)頭才能看外面。” 【解析】【分析】這是一篇記敘文。米莉和她的弟弟馬庫(kù)斯乘坐的校車換了司機(jī)，新司機(jī)開(kāi)車每次過(guò)兩個(gè)街區(qū)都會(huì)停下來(lái)，并沒(méi)有任何人上車，司機(jī)都會(huì)點(diǎn)一下頭。米莉和馬庫(kù)斯既害怕又納悶。終于有一天，他們決心弄清楚這件事情。【詳解】本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)是讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)。通過(guò)閱讀所給文章可知，米莉和她的弟弟乘坐的校車換了司機(jī)，新司機(jī)叫克羅斯，他們覺(jué)得新司機(jī)很陌生，臉上沒(méi)有笑容。更令他們害怕的是，校車每次過(guò)兩個(gè)街區(qū)，克羅斯先生就會(huì)把車停下來(lái)，并沒(méi)有任何人上車，但是司機(jī)都會(huì)點(diǎn)一下頭。他們很詫異，弟弟馬庫(kù)斯猜測(cè)說(shuō)，克羅斯先生在那一站接上來(lái)的是“鬼孩子”，米莉并不這么想，但是也很害怕。接下來(lái)的幾天都是這樣，他們?nèi)滩蛔×?。終于有一天，他們鼓起勇氣，決心把這個(gè)事情弄明白。續(xù)寫(xiě)部分分為兩段，第一段開(kāi)頭是：當(dāng)克羅斯先生打開(kāi)門，對(duì)著無(wú)人的地方點(diǎn)頭示意時(shí)，他們向他走去……因此，接下來(lái)應(yīng)該續(xù)寫(xiě)，司機(jī)克羅斯先生是怎樣把這個(gè)事情跟米莉姐弟解釋清楚的。原來(lái)是一場(chǎng)誤會(huì)，克羅斯先生有一位老朋友就住在這附近，這位老朋友是個(gè)老婦人，年齡大了，自己孤獨(dú)的住在這里。每次到車到這的時(shí)候，老婦人都會(huì)出來(lái)和他揮揮手，他也能從遠(yuǎn)處看看她，看到老朋友是健康的、安全的，他就放心了。第二段開(kāi)頭是：聽(tīng)到這個(gè)故事，他們松了一口氣，決定去這個(gè)房子看看能做些什么……本段續(xù)寫(xiě)他們認(rèn)識(shí)了住在房子里的老婦人，并且經(jīng)常在周末的時(shí)候來(lái)幫助老人做家務(wù)，他們也成了很好的朋友。【點(diǎn)睛】本文描寫(xiě)詳略得當(dāng)，使用了高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句子。如：wave at，in front of，in the distance，no longer等高級(jí)詞匯；定語(yǔ)從句I have an old friend who lives in the old house at the end of this block；結(jié)果狀語(yǔ)從句I am so tall that I have to nod my head to look outside；運(yùn)用了With the generous help of...的with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)等高級(jí)句式。 Part5：高考真題再現(xiàn) 真題1：好心的墨西哥家庭【2021年八省聯(lián)考】閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫(xiě)兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。 During this past year, I’ve had three instances of car trouble. Each time these things happened, I was sick of the way most people hadn’t bothered to help. One of those times, I was on the side of the road for close to three hours with my big Jeep. I put signs in the windows, big signs that said NEED A JACK (千斤頂), and offered money. Nothing. Right as I was about to give up, a Mexican family in a small truck pulled over, and the father bounded out. He sized up the situation and called for his daughter, who spoke English. He conveyed through her that he had a jack but that it was too small for the Jeep, so we would need something to support it. Then he got a saw (鋸子) from the truck and cut a section out of a big log on the side of the road. We rolled it over and put his jack on top, and we were in business. I started taking the wheel off, and then, if you can believe it, I broke his tire iron. No worries: He handed it to his wife, and she was gone in a flash down the road to buy a new tire iron. She was back in 15 minutes. We finished the job, and I was a very happy man. The two of us were dirty and sweaty. His wife prepared a pot of water for us to wash our hands. I tried to put a $20 bill in the man’s hand, but he wouldn’t take it, so instead I went up to the truck and gave it to his wife as quietly as I could. I asked the little girl where they lived. Mexico, she said. They were in Oregon so Mommy and Daddy could work on a fruit farm for the next few weeks. Then they would go home. 注意：續(xù)寫(xiě)詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。 When I was about to say goodbye, the girl asked if I’d had lunch. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ After they left, I got into my Jeep and opened the paper bag. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ When I was about to say goodbye, the girl asked if I’d had lunch.Hearing what she said, I realized that I didn’t have lunch.To be honest, after working hard for several hours, I was so hungry. Feeling a bit embarrassed, I replied: “no!”The girl said with a smile, “Come on! Join us.The Mexicon sandwich is delicious!” With moved tears rolling around my eyes, I took the sandwich.After eating it like wolf, I felt that it was the tasty sandwich that I had ever had.While dining, I talked about my trouble and feelings and they shared their?interesting stories in the life.Then, the girl’s mother had another sandwich and some fruit place?din a paper bag and handed it to me,saying?gently: “Keep it and have it later! We had to go now.”?I showed my heartfelt gratitude to them and saw?them disappear in my sight. After they left, I got into my jeep and opened the?paper bag.?What surprised me a lot was that there was a sandwich,fruit?and the bill given by me.Holding the paper bag tightly, I stood still, a warm current rising in my heart.How grateful was I to the family helping me. Although most of people I met on the road were indifferent, there were still some people like this family who was so helpful and?thoughtful.From then on, I placed a jack and some common tools in my car.When meeting people in?need on the road ,I would try my best to help them like the family.Only in this way, could more and more people help each other in the future. 真題2：買爆米花助窮人【2020年7月山東卷】第二節(jié) （滿分25分）閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫(xiě)兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。 The Meredith family lived in a small community. As the economy was in decline, some people in the town had lost their jobs. Many of their families were struggling to make ends meet. People were trying to help each other meet the challenges. Mrs. Meredith was a most kind and thoughtful woman. She spent a great deal of time visiting the poor. She knew they had problems, and they needed all kinds of help. When she had time, she would bring food and medicine to them. One morning she told her children about a family she had visited the day before. There was a man sick in bed, his wife, who took care of him and could not go out to work, and their little boy. The little boy — his name was Bernard — had interested her very much. “I wish you could see him,” she said to her own children, John, Harry, and Clara. “He is such a help to his mother. He wants very much to earn some money, but I don’t see what he can do.” After their mother left the room, the children sat thinking about Bernard. “I wish we could help him to earn money,” said Clara. “His family is suffering so much.” “So do I,” said Harry. “We really should do something to assist them.” For some moments, John said nothing, but, suddenly, he sprang to his feet and cried, “I have a great idea! I have a solution that we can all help accomplish (完成) .” The other children also jumped up all attention. When John had an idea, it was sure to be a good one. “I tell you what we can do,” said John. “You know that big box of corn Uncle John sent us? Well, we can make popcorn (爆米花), and put it into paper bags, and Bernard can take it around to the houses and sell it.” 注意： 1. 續(xù)寫(xiě)詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右； 2. 請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。 When Mrs. Meredith heard of John’s idea, she thought it was a good one, too. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ With everything ready, Bernard started out on his new business. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ One possible version: When Mrs. Meredith heard of the idea, she thought it was a good one, too. Then Mrs. Meredith searched the internet and ordered a household popcorn machine. After that, Mrs. Meredith, together with her three children, paid another visit to the family and told them about the popcorn plan. Needless to say, they were deeply moved, especially Bernard who finally found a way to make money for his family. A few days later, the machine was delivered to Mrs. Meredith’s doorstep. And it wasn’t long before they got the hang of using the machine to make popcorn. With everything ready, Bernard started out on his new business. Although it was a hard time and things were tight for everybody, Bernard’s business worked out quite well. He carried the popcorn on his small bike, going from door to door to sell it. People were surprised to see such a little, poorly-dressed boy selling popcorn at their doors, but eventually almost all of them would buy a bag or two. It is love that makes the world go round and Bernard felt it deep in his little heart. (續(xù)寫(xiě)詞數(shù)：164)

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