2024年高考英語課件07 讀后續(xù)寫：人與動物類（故事構(gòu)造“三大套路”）-課件下載-教習(xí)網(wǎng)

讀后續(xù)寫：人與動物類 TOC \o "1-3" \h \u HYPERLINK \l "_Toc1103" Part1：經(jīng)典例文（小狗救人） PAGEREF _Toc1103 \h 1 HYPERLINK \l "_Toc5286" Part2：人與動物故事構(gòu)造套路 PAGEREF _Toc5286 \h 3 HYPERLINK \l "_Toc4030" 套路一：可愛型動物故事情節(jié) PAGEREF _Toc4030 \h 3 HYPERLINK \l "_Toc14024" 套路二：兇猛型動物故事情節(jié) PAGEREF _Toc14024 \h 6 HYPERLINK \l "_Toc25254" 套路三、主題升華句 PAGEREF _Toc25254 \h 8 HYPERLINK \l "_Toc32331" Part3：人與動物場景素材積累 PAGEREF _Toc32331 \h 8 HYPERLINK \l "_Toc1805" Part4：靈活應(yīng)用 PAGEREF _Toc1805 \h 11 HYPERLINK \l "_Toc28003" 例1：人與麻雀 PAGEREF _Toc28003 \h 11 HYPERLINK \l "_Toc15740" Part5：高考真題再現(xiàn) PAGEREF _Toc15740 \h 13 HYPERLINK \l "_Toc29971" 真題1：:小狗找到新的玩伴【2020年1月浙江卷】 PAGEREF _Toc29971 \h 13 HYPERLINK \l "_Toc796" 真題2：拍照北極熊遇險(xiǎn)【2020年7月浙江卷】 PAGEREF _Toc796 \h 16 從歷年高考的讀后續(xù)寫話題中可以看出人和動物的話題備受命題者青睞。試題文本一般從兩個角度展開，一個就是人和動物和諧相處,?要么是人類幫助動物解決問題，要么是動物幫助人類解決問題；另外一個就是，人類與動物產(chǎn)生沖突，尤其遇到勇猛高大的動物，遇到危險(xiǎn)，首先沉著冷靜與動物周旋，后來向別人求助，之后成功脫險(xiǎn)的故事。例如：人狼大戰(zhàn)：騎車旅途遭遇狼wolf追趕，脫險(xiǎn)經(jīng)歷（2017年6月浙江高考）；人熊大戰(zhàn)：北極探險(xiǎn)者給北極熊拍照，遭遇polar bear追趕的驚險(xiǎn)經(jīng)歷（2020年6?月浙江高考）；人狗和諧：父母決定給Poppy買一條小狗作伴，幫助Poppy擺脫孤獨(dú)和想念的故事（2020年1月浙江高考）；人貓和諧：作者的丈夫從討厭貓到向貓求助，趕走土撥鼠的故事（2021年3月臨沂市一模）。 Part1：經(jīng)典例文（小狗救人） Just as many families do at a point, Catherine chose to add a new family member by adopting a pet. Shortly after her daughter Kate’s birth, Catherine decided she wanted a close bond with a dog for Kate. Thus, Catherine called the dog shelter close by to inquire about adoption. After hearing about the available animals, she chose a Doberman Pinscher. Once they signed adoption papers, they named the dog Khan. Catherine was hopeful this would provide valuable lessons for her baby, such as sharing, learning to love and responsibility to care for animals. She was looking forward to having the dog join the family. Hearing of Khan’s rough background, Catherine immediately loved the dog. She was overjoyed to bring this special dog back to her family. Of course, she realized there were risks involved. Well, the obvious risks from bringing a large, potentially dangerous animal to her young baby, Catherine pushed them aside. If she had not adopted Khan, he would have been killed just a week later. So, this was his new life and second chance, and the family was hoping for the best. Everything began smoothly. They trained Khan during the first few days. However, everything changed on that fourth day when the dog acted completely out of character. The fateful day began with the usual playtime in the yard. Although baby Kate had her parents watching from a distance, they did not notice anything out of the ordinary. Kate and the new dog had been making a habit of playing out back like this. However, things were different this day. So what was actually happening out there? The two were not being loud or crazy. They began running through the backyard grass together. Again, Catherine watched the two closely. Surprisingly, things had changed within an instant! 注意： 1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150詞左右； 2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。 Khan began acting wildly all of a sudden, _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ Obviously, it was Khan who saved her baby but he barked weakly and then fell down with dying eyes. _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ One possible version: Khan began acting wildly all of a sudden. With her mouth wide open, Catherine watched Khan dragging her child, hoping he would stop. Just as she was wondering how he could suddenly become this way, Khan put down Kate outside the yard. Catherine rushed to Kate and carried her to safety while Khan barked towards the yard wildly. Catherine returned, only to find a poisonous snake crawling in the yard and she drove it away. 可汗突然開始瘋狂地表演起來。凱瑟琳張開嘴，看著汗拖著她的孩子，希望他能停下來。就在她想知道他怎么會突然變成這樣的時(shí)候，汗把凱特放在院子外面。凱瑟琳沖到凱特身邊，把她抱到安全的地方，而汗則瘋狂地向院子走去。凱瑟琳回來了，結(jié)果發(fā)現(xiàn)一條毒蛇在院子里爬行，她把它開走了。 Obviously, it was Khan who saved her baby but he barked weakly and then collapsed with dying eyes. Khan protected Kate from the poisonous creature and was attacked. Although living with the family for merely four days, he became the protector as Catherine had hoped. Catherine rushed Khan to the vet. “May God bless you”, Catherine murmured. The vet tried his best to save him. Eventually, he made it and Catherine shed a tear of relief. 顯然，是汗救了她的孩子，但他的吠聲很微弱，然后癱倒了，眼睛垂死了。可汗保護(hù)凱特不受有毒生物的傷害，并遭到了襲擊。雖然他只和家人一起生活了四天，但他還是像凱瑟琳所希望的那樣成為了保護(hù)者。凱瑟琳沖著可汗去看獸醫(yī)。“愿上帝保佑你。”凱瑟琳喃喃地說。獸醫(yī)盡力去救了它。最后，他成功了，凱瑟琳如釋了一口氣。 Part2：人與動物故事構(gòu)造兩大故事套路套路一：可愛型動物故事情節(jié) 可愛型動物，如狗，鳥等，主要構(gòu)思陪伴、忠誠，或者人救助動物生命，動物（主要是狗）救人的生命等故事情節(jié)。 1、外貌 1. a pair of large watery eyes 一雙水汪汪的大眼睛 2. two big round eyes 兩只圓溜溜的大眼睛 3. beady/sparkling/twinkling eyes 小珠般圓亮的/亮晶晶的/閃閃發(fā)亮的眼睛 4. a nose like a small black gem 一顆黑寶石般的鼻子 5. long/muscular/skinny/spindly legs 長的/肌肉發(fā)達(dá)的/皮包骨的/干瘦的腿 6. fur is as white as snow 皮毛像雪一樣潔白 7. a long little tail 一條長長的小尾巴 2、動作 wag the tail 搖尾巴 smell/sniff 嗅 bark/yap/yelp 狗吠 lick 舔 put the ears up 把耳朵豎起來 shake the whole body 抖動全身 bite the corner of the coat 咬住衣角 rub their necks and backs with their paws 用爪子摩擦它們的脖子和背部 hold it tightly with the paws 用爪子緊緊按住 fall on its back 摔得四腳朝天 run around me 圍著我跑 keep scratching you with his front paws 用前爪不停撓你 raise its whole body on its hind legs 用后腿支起全身 leap to its feet 跳起來 rest the nose in its paws 把鼻子擱在爪子里 keep its fore legs doubled up 保持前腿彎曲 3、高興 They were glad to see Poppy coming?back to her usual self（他們很高興看到Poppy又回到以前的自己）, guiding the little dog on daily walks and even introducing to it her favorite toys.（2020年1月高考浙江卷） Smiling ever so bright（笑得更加燦爛。）, he called out to his?parents, who tugged him in for a long?hug. （2020年1月高考浙江卷） Her parents watched them playing around and smiled with relief（輕松地笑了）–Poppy was back to her old cheerful self!（2020年1月高考浙江卷） 3、常見動物鹿： 1. A mother deer with a huge pair of deer horns （有一對大的鹿角）appeared in front of him, with a baby fawn(幼鹿) lying on the dry ground. （202103寧波十校） 2. The poor creature, apparently in desperate need of water, licked it up quickly with its shell-pink tongue（很快用它貝殼粉的舌頭舔乾凈）.（202103寧波十校） 3. The mother deer lowered her head and licked my boy’s cheek gently, as if expressing gratitude（低下頭舔我的男孩的臉頰，好像在表達(dá)感激）. （202103寧波十校）馬： 1. At the pen, Gina saw the horse. It was of medium size. It had a fine, soft blackcoat and one white foot（它的毛細(xì)膩柔軟,油黑油黑的,有一只腳是白色的）. There was a wide white patch (斑紋)that ran down the center of its face. Gina fell in love with it at first sight.“Wow! What a horse.” （英語周報(bào)高三第十期 2020.9.4） 2. The horse seemed to feel her kindness, sniffing her（聞了聞她）. （英語周報(bào)高三第十期 2020.9.4）狗： 1.They offered the dog some of her favorite peanut butter treats. They even let her sit on the sofa, but the old girl just wasn’t her usual cheerful self（不像往常那么快樂）. （2020年1月高考浙江卷） 2. She put her nose on it. Her tail began wagging（她的尾巴開始擺動）ever so slowly, then faster as she caught the smell.（2020年1月高考浙江卷） 3. Poppy?approached with caution, trying not to scare the puppy. Sure enough, it was only moments later that the ball of fur lifted its head out of the?box（把它的頭伸出盒子） to peek at its new home and its new friend. （2020年1月高考浙江卷） 4. Hearing his bags unloaded on the driveway, Poppy’s ears pricked up（豎起耳朵） and suddenly she was on all fours（四腳著地）. The?boy was greeted with a?cheerful?high-pitched bark. Then the front door popped open and Poppy darted to his embrace, followed by the little one who licked his fingers fondly. （2020年1月高考浙江卷）套路二：兇猛型動物故事情節(jié) 兇猛的動物，如狼、熊等，一般會給人造成生命威脅，所以主要是以遇險(xiǎn)、脫險(xiǎn)的故事情節(jié)為主。 1、害怕 Terrified（非常害怕）, Elli and I tried all the bear defense actions we knew. （2020.7高考浙江卷） Seeing the approach of the polar bear, I froze with terror, too scared to move an inch（被恐懼嚇呆，害怕到動也不能動）.（2020.7高考浙江卷） My wife Elli grasped my clothes and trembled, swallowing hard（抓住我的衣服，顫抖著，使勁吞口水）.（2020.7高考浙江卷） A numbing chill gripped me（一種麻木的寒戰(zhàn)擢緊了我）.（2020.11金華十校） Thinking of the wolf’s bloody mouth, Mac was nearly dead with fright（幾乎給嚇?biāo)溃?（2017年6月高考浙江卷） I was seized by a strong sense of horror（被一種強(qiáng)烈的恐懼感所控制）, my palms sweating.（山東省青島市2020年4月高三?？迹? 2、求助與獲救 1. At the sight of it, Elli waved her hands wildly（瘋狂地?fù)]手）, screaming, “Help!” （2020.7高考浙江卷） 2. When we were safe on the helicopter up in the air, I was amazed to spot （驚奇地發(fā)現(xiàn)）that the bear had finally torn down the fence and ran towards the food we left behind. （2020.7高考浙江卷） 3. Having pulled the massive body out of the stump, Brian cleaned the wounds （清潔傷口）and then gave him careful treatment. Becky knelt down and tended to the wolf（蹲下來照顧狼）together with Brian. （2020.11金華十校） 4. I went near the innocent one and held it in my hand and wiped the puppy（擦干小狗） till he had become dry. （山東模擬） 5. Using a rock as the supporting point, I unlocked the chain and set the wolf free（放走這只狼）. （山東省青島市2020年4月高三?？迹? 3、熊： 1. As Elli and I cooked dinner, a young male polar bear who was playing in a nearby lake sniffed, and smelled our garlic bread（嗅著，聞著我們的大蒜面包）.（2020.7高考浙江卷） 2. He pulled and bit the wire. He stood on his back legs（用他的后腿站起來） and pushed at the wooden fence posts.（2020.7高考浙江卷） 3. The bear reared up ,attacked the fence and even desired to tear down us（想要撕裂我們） with flames blazing in its eyes（怒火在他的眼里燃燒）owing to the dreadful spray. （2020.7高考浙江卷） 4. Then it attacked the back of Mac's bike, tearing open his tent bag（撕開他的帳篷袋）.（2017年6月高考浙江卷） 5. One of Mac’s friends picked out some raw meat and threw it to the wolf. Satisfied with what he got（對他得到的很滿意）, the wolf ran into the woods. （2017年6月高考浙江卷） 4、狼： 1. Pale-yellow eyes narrowed. Black lips tightened. Double sets of two-inch sharp teeth were exposed（露出它那兩排兩英寸寬的利牙）. Suddenly the wolf trembled. Its teeth clacked, and a painful cry rose from its throat（它的牙齒咔嚓響，從它的喉嚨里發(fā)出一聲痛苦的喊叫）.（2020.11金華十校） 2. The wolf’s head sank to the ground, sad yellow eyes looking at us（黃色的眼睛悲傷地看著我們）. （2020.11金華十校） 3. So angry was the wolf that it kept roaring（那只狼的太生氣了，一直咆哮） and smacking the window violently.（2020.7高考浙江卷）套路三：主題升華設(shè)計(jì) 可愛型動物主題：陪伴、珍愛生命、自然和諧、忠誠等。兇猛型動物主題：難忘的經(jīng)歷、獲得教訓(xùn)、感謝他人救助等。 1. Elli and I learned our lesson（學(xué)到一個教訓(xùn)）: Be aware of a bear with a toothache.（2020.7高考浙江卷） 2. Despite the chill autumn wind, their home was filled with the warmth of love and reunion（充滿愛和團(tuán)聚的溫暖）.（2020年1月高考浙江卷） 3. The rain that came that day was a miracle（那天下的雨是一場奇跡）, saving our farm, just like my boy saved a life.（202103寧波十校） 4. Appearing to be feeling better, the wolf slowly raised his head and gave a gentle kiss to Becky’s hand as if to express thanks（好像在表達(dá)感謝）. What a warm scene! （2020.11金華十校） Part3：人與動物場景素材積累 (01) Paragraph 1:?Harry turned and ran from the pond.?“Wait for me! It won’t be long,” he exclaimed to me. Desperate and hopeless, I closed my eyes, praying this was all a dream. And even worse, the water was so cold it felt like millions of needles were stabbing me. How I wished that I could fly out of the?icy?water like a bird!?After what seemed to be ages,?Harry?returned to the?pond, with a long oak branch in his hand. As I grabbed hold of one end of the branch, my brother started to?drag?the other with every last ounce of his strength. Thank goodness, I was able to?climb?out of the ice hole and then we galloped home.? Paragraph 2:?The moment I crashed through the kitchen door, sobbing, mum rushed over.?“Oh, my?God! Where?have?you?been?” she said in surprise.?“You're completely wet.” “It’s Harry’s fault!” I complained to her through my chattering teeth. When I told her what had happened to me, her eyes were wide with horror. All of a?sudden, she took my arm, pulled me into the bathroom and then gave me a warm bath. After that, mum dressed me in a warm?coat, wrapped me in a blanket and poured me a cup of hot milk. She sat next to me, smiling, relieved that I was all right. Sure enough, my brother was?criticized?by mum for his lack of safety awareness. (02) Paragraph 1：Sam arrived very early the next morning. He rang the doorbell and politely waited for Mrs. Proudfoot to answer. Then he could hear Roland barking and whining inside, frantic to get out. Sam stood by the door, debating with himself whether to walk the unfriendly dog to help his best friend. After a while, the door flung open and Mrs. Proudfoot came out, greeting him with a beaming smile. Surprisingly, the lazy dog grinned up at him and wagged his tail, eager to go out with him. Mrs. Proudfoot put a leash on the dog, stroked his glossy head and said, “Have a good time, dear!” Without saying goodbye, Sam and the dog danced around and then dashed out of the house. Paragraph 2：A month later, Mrs. Proudfoot was delighted to find Roland fit and energetic. Obviously, Sam’s efforts paid off—Roland was healthy and active. But what pleased her most was that Sam, together with the other kids, would stay with her on weekends, chatting and laughing. Besides, they would help her clean up the yard. From then on, laughter filled her house and she no longer felt lonely. Then came the moment Sam had been looking forward to—the day he was paid for his work. What a big surprise! Tears of gratitude welled up in Barry’s eyes as he knew what Sam had done for him. Sam just stood there, smiling, glad that he could wholeheartedly support his friend when he was in trouble. (03) Paragraph 1: All of a sudden, Betty felt something touching the bottom of her foot. What was that? She wondered. A sea fish? Before she could get on the surfboard, it bumped her in the foot once again. She suddenly had the feeling that an enormous fish, bigger than her, was circling around her. A chill feeling crept up her spine as she thought of the joke Uncle Mark played on her. And then Betty saw it: a gray triangle fin sticking up through the water, heading right for her. It was a shark, a massive shark that was swimming around, not far away from her. For a split second, her heart practically skipped a beat. Paragraph 2: “Help! Help!” Betty screamed in horror. Hearing the terrible scream for help, Uncle Mark instantly realized that something bad was happening. Without thinking, he swam as quickly as he could towards Betty and yelled, “Get out! ...” But Betty seemed stuck, too scared to move. At the very moment, the shark’s jaws opened wide, showing rows of razor-sharp teeth. With all his might, Uncle Mark stabbed it in the mouth with his surfboard, scaring the monster away. And then he grabbed hold of Betty’s arm and dragged her to the beach. All this took only a few minutes, but Betty would never forget the frightening experience. (04) Paragraph 1:?He was sentenced to be torn by a lion in the public arena (競技場).?The terrifying day finally arrived. All the people in the city went there to see the brutal fight between the poor slave and a bloodthirsty beast. When?Androcles?appeared in the arena, they began to cheer and hoot. All eyes were on him, and time seemed to stop.?Overcome?by a stab of fear, he almost collapsed to the ground, his heart pounding and his knees shaking. And then came a furious roar and the great?lion?charged at him with its flaming eyes and gaping jaws. Desperate and hopeless, the slave closed his eyes and dropped his sword, thinking that he was done for.? Paragraph 2:?However, the lion didn’t act as most had imagined.?Much to their?surprise, the savage beast stopped short , knelt down and then?lickedthe slave’s hands and feet. He behaved like a pet dog. And then he let out a low roar, as if whispering to his friend, “Didn’t you recognize me?” Indeed, it was the very lion the slave had helped in the?forest. Sighing with?relief, the slave stroked his neck?gently, tears of?gratitude?welling up in his eyes. So moved were people by the story that they begged the master to set free the slave and the lion. One good turn deserves another, and in the end, Androcles, the slave, became a free man. (05) Paragraph 1:?I entered the shop, and one of the salesmen came to me. I couldn't believe my eyes.?Surely, it was my long-lost friend, Arthur, always wearing a warm smile. What a coincidence that Arthur would appear in front of me when I had?trouble! I thought. For a second, I stared at him in disbelief, my mouth hanging open. In the meanwhile Tom instantly recognized me and he gave me a huge hug. “What brings you here?” he asked with a puzzled expression on his face. So I told him that my?car?got a flat tire and that considering the poor road condition, it might?broke downon my way back home. Knowing what had happened to me, he said that he would be glad to give me a hand again. Paragraph 2:?After a while, they quickly drove a pick-up truck to my car and started it.?After listening to the sound of the engine, Arthur told me that there was nothing wrong with it. And then they started to fix the tire and we chatted?happily. Arthur told me that the?thank-you note?from me inspired him to live a?meaningful?life by helping others. Soon afterwards, he got the tire fixed. He got up, wiped the sweat from his face and wished me a pleasant journey. I couldn’t thank him enough. Many years have passed, but I will never forget the lesson Arthur taught me: Life is meaningful when you can give a hand to those in trouble. (06) Paragraph 1:?A few minutes later, the bear headed back to our camp.?He exposed his sharp teeth, snarling at us, as he?ran?forward. And again the furious creature stood on his back legs and began to snap at the?fence?like a demon. It seemed that his mouth was dripping with blood and his eyes were red with rage. At the sight of it, I could feel a flicker of fear flooding over me, and?Ellis?was stunned, her mouth hanging open. It was only then that my mind began to race. Once again, I plucked my courage to blast him with pepper?spray, but without success. Then all of a sudden, came a crash of the fence falling down. Paragraph 2:?At that very moment, the helicopter arrived.?It landed in a clearing, not far from our camp, and the loud?noises?from the rescue helicopter scared the bear. For an instant, he froze, but after a while, he started to charge at us again. "Ellis!" I shrieked, "Look out!" We immediately stepped aside, spun round and galloped towards the helicopter. The moment we were into the helicopter, we collapsed, gasping with relief. As it took off, we could see the bear was hungrily eating the?bread?we had made. What a hungry bear! After we returned home?safe?and sound, we realized that something should be done for bears. (07) Paragraph 1:?Looking over my shoulder, I stared into the flashing lights of a truck.?A familiar figure leaped out,?rushed?towards me and waded into the water. Thank goodness, it was?Joe?who came to my rescue. However, the water was running so rapidly that he had to go back.?Frightened?and a little angry, I could hardly help shedding tears. How I wished that my husband were like a superman who could save me from disaster. But, after a while, it turned out that Joe returned with one end of a rope in his hand and the other end tied to the truck. He?struggled?to throw the rope to me and?shouted, "Catch! Open the door!" Paragraph 2:?I screamed that I couldn't make it.?At that moment, the sound of the raging water outside grew louder, and the car rocked more violently. Worse still, the water came up to Joe’s waist and he almost lost his footing in the water. After several vain attempts, Joe?realized?that there was no chance to make it. He put every ounce of strength into getting close to me and said soothingly, "Don't panic, honey! I'm here." With Joe's help, I burst the door open, and Joe immediately tied the rope around my waist. The moment we pulled ourselves out of the water, the car was washed away. What a narrow escape! I hugged Joe tightly, happiness and love welling up inside me. Part4：靈活應(yīng)用例1：人與麻雀閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。 It's getting hot. It's time to put on lighter clothes and open up the windows. I can't wait to do so. Yesterday, an unforeseen visit to the kitchen happened during the brief time we were out. Two daring sparrows (麻雀) had risked landing on our territory to enjoy the freshness in our sink and some other breadcrumbs (面包屑) on our kitchen counter. Actually, sparrows are everywhere. The tiny, gray -and brown birds are found on every continent except Antarctica, flying or jumping around cities, picking up leftover food on side-walks, and sometimes chasing with native bird species. These small creatures have adapted to living alongside humans- similar to pet dogs. When you come across such sudden callers, you are likely to sense it as an unwanted visitor into your comfort zone, or you might receive it as a lovely angel of life. I chose the second option, with no hesitation while my husband preferred driving them away. After all, I've never come to stop to feel the relationship with sparrows. I recalled when I was a little girl living in the city, I lived in an apartment with a flat roof viewed from our kitchen window. Every day my mom and I would go out to feed the sparrows. She taught me how to call them with a clicking sound she made with her tongue. I have loved sparrows ever since. So every day in my spare time, I can't stop observing and celebrating their dance from our window. I stuffed them with the leftovers on our tablecloth after every meal. And I have provided them with every kind of bases and stands of our house. Undoubtedly, they feel at ease in our backyard. And that has led them to gather up courage and slide into our kitchen, bedroom or even reading room. Perhaps because they have the feeling that we don' t consider them trouble makers, but friendly neighbors. But I am slightly worried about their droppings (糞便). 注意: 1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右; 2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。 One day, they left some droppings in my husband's reading room. _______________________________________________________________________________ About two weeks later, I heard my husband calling “Oh, my God!” _______________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】One day, they left some droppings in my husband 's reading room. They happened to dirty his important work reports on the desk. He was so angry that he asked me to close the windows. I immediately did a thorough cleaning and promised that the doors and windows of the reading room will be closed tightly, and the sparrows can't break in again. My husband kept silent, and at last he calmed down. I know he is a caring person, who always loves animals. About two weeks later, I heard my husband calling “Oh, my God !” Thinking something similar happened again, I ran over to have a look. He was looking out of the window and said excitedly, “Look! What a surprise! There are three eggs in the sparrow's nest! They 're going to have babies of their own!” He was happy, like a child and unconsciously opened the closed window. After that, there are always breadcrumbs on the window platform of the reading room. 【解析】【分析】本篇書面表達(dá)是讀后續(xù)寫。通過閱讀所給文章可知，在作者生活之處有許多麻雀，作者歡迎它們的到來，在后院為它們準(zhǔn)備了食物和落腳處，作者將它們當(dāng)成了友好的鄰居，只是有點(diǎn)擔(dān)心它們的糞便。【詳解】續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，第一段開頭是：有一天，它們在我丈夫的書房里留下了一些糞便，所以應(yīng)該寫糞便落在書桌上給丈夫帶來的尷尬和懊惱，要詳細(xì)描述丈夫的動作和心理，與作者的反應(yīng)及應(yīng)對措施等。第二段開頭是：大約兩周后，我聽到我丈夫說:“哦，天哪!”本段應(yīng)該寫丈夫的感嘆、作者的好奇，并描述事情的原委，以及丈夫?qū)τ诼槿笐B(tài)度的轉(zhuǎn)變等等。要注意所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右，按要求完成寫作任務(wù)。【點(diǎn)睛】本文描寫詳略得當(dāng)，使用了高級詞匯和高級句子。如：do a thorough cleaning，break in，run over，have a look等高級詞匯；結(jié)果狀語從句，如He was so angry that he asked me to close the windows；賓語從句，如I immediately did a thorough cleaning and promised that the doors and windows of the reading room will be closed tightly, and the sparrows can't break in again；定語從句，如I know he is a caring person, who always loves animals等高級句式。 Part5：高考真題再現(xiàn) 真題1：:小狗找到新的玩伴【2020年1月浙江卷】閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進(jìn)行續(xù)寫，使之構(gòu)成一個完整的故事。 “I’m going to miss you so much, Poppy,” said the tall, thin teenager. He bent down to hug his old friend goodbye. He stood up, hugged his parents, and smiled, trying not to let his emotions (情緒) get the better of him. His parents were not quite able to keep theirs under control. They had driven their son several hours out of town to the university where he would soon be living and studying. It was time to say goodbye for now at least. The family hugged and smiled through misty eyes and then laughed. The boy lifted the last bag onto his shoulder, and flashed a bright smile. “I guess this is it.” he said. “I’ll see you back home in a month, okay?” His parents nodded, and they watched as he walked out of sight into the crowds of hundreds of students and parents. The boy’s mother turned to the dog, “Okay, Poppy, time to go back home.” The house seemed quiet as a tomb without the boy living there. All that week, Poppy didn’t seem interested in her dinner, her favorite toy, or even in her daily walk. Her owners were sad too, but they knew their son would be back to visit, Poppy didn’t. They offered the dog some of her favorite peanut butter treats. They even let her sit on the sofa, but the old girl just wasn’t her usual cheerful self. Her owners started to get worried, “What should we do to cheer Poppy up?” asked Dad. “We’ve tried everything.” “I have an idea, but it might be a little crazy,” smiled Mom. “Without anybody left in the house but us, this place could use a bit of fun. Let’s get a little dog for Poppy.” It didn’t take long before they walked through the front door carrying a big box. Poppy welcomed them home as usual, but when she saw the box, she stopped. She put her nose on it. Her tail began wagging (擺動) ever so slowly, then faster as she caught the smell. 注意：所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；至少使用5個短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語；續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語已為你寫好；續(xù)寫完成后，請用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語。 Paragraph 1 I was stuck for five or six minutes though it felt much longer. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2 That video was posted the day before Halloween. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【參考答案1】 Dad opened the box and a sweet little dog appeared. Poppy jumped with joy at the sight of the little dog. She lowered her head to watch it curiously. Then she became so excited that she accidentally knocked over the box in an attempt to get closer. With the box tipping over, out came the little one, who was not shy and instantly got familiar with Poppy. It didn’t take long before the two played around the house, cheerfully running after each other. 爸爸打開盒子，一只可愛的小狗出現(xiàn)了。波比一看到這只小狗就高興地跳了起來。她低下頭，好奇地看著它。然后她變得非常興奮，她不小心撞倒了盒子，試圖靠近。盒子翻了過來，小家伙走了出來，他并不害羞，立刻熟悉了波比。沒過多久，兩人就在房子里玩耍，高高興興地互相跑著。 A few weeks later, the boy arrived home from the university. He had been missing his parents and the dog since it was the first time that he had been away from home for such a long time. When the boy caught sight of Poppy, he went rushing toward the dog and bent down to give her a big hug. Suddenly, the boy noticed the little dog. “Oh my god, who is this?” His parents laughed at the look of surprise on his face. “It’s Poppy’s new companion.” said Mom. (155) 幾周后，這個男孩從大學(xué)走回家了。自從他第一次離家這么長時(shí)間以來，他就一直在想念父母和狗。當(dāng)男孩看到波比時(shí)，他沖向狗，彎下腰給她一個大大的擁抱。突然，那男孩注意到了那只小狗?！芭叮炷?，這是誰？”他的父母嘲笑他臉上驚訝的表情。“這是波比的新伴侶。””媽媽說。【參考答案2】 Dad opened the box and a sweet little dog appeared.It was hiding in one corner of the box, with a curious look in its eyes. Wagging its tail, it tried to climb out of the box, but it fell down on its back, unable to stand up. Upon seeing this, his parents could not help laughing. Gently, Mom picked it up from the box and put it on the floor. "Poppy, isn′t it a sweet dog? It's for you!" Mom said in a soft voice."It's your companion." Cheerful and yet a little nervous, Poppy kept running and barking at the new family member. But Much to the relief of his parents, they were like peas and carrots soon afterwards, and it seemed as if Ropp had forgotten her old friend. 爸爸打開盒子，一只可愛的小狗出現(xiàn)了。它藏在盒子的一個角落里，眼睛里有一種奇怪的神情。它搖著尾巴，試圖爬出盒子，但背部倒了下來，站不起來。一看到這一點(diǎn)，他的父母就忍不住笑了起來。媽媽輕輕地把它從盒子里拿起來，放在地板上?！斑@不是一只可愛的狗嗎？”這是給你準(zhǔn)備的！”媽媽用一種溫柔的聲音說?！斑@是你的同伴。”波比很高興，但又有點(diǎn)緊張，不停地跑著新家庭成員吠叫。但讓他的父母松了一口氣的是，不久之后它們就像豌豆和胡蘿卜一樣，羅普似乎已經(jīng)忘記了她的老朋友。 A few weeks later, the boy arrived home from university. Poppy threw herself at him and licked his hands and face excitedly, her eyes sparkling with delight and her tail wagging furiously. It took the boy for a long time to notice that there was a cute puppy beside Poppy,growling and sniffing at his feet.Immediately, he bent down,stroked its head and asked,"What an adorable puppy! Whose is it?" His parents smiled and replied,"We got it for Puppy because.." Knowing what had happened to Poppy when he was at the university, the boy was so moved that he took the old girl in his arms.Tears burred his vision as he murmured,"Poppy,I miss you, too." And quietly, Poppy raised her head and watched the young teenager like xWaby in his arms. 幾周后，男孩從大學(xué)回家。波比撲向他，興奮地舔著他的手和臉，她的眼睛閃閃發(fā)光，她的尾巴劇烈地?cái)[動。男孩花了很長時(shí)間才注意到波比旁邊有一只可愛的小狗，在他的腳邊咆哮和嗅。他立刻彎下腰，撫摸它的頭，問：“多么可愛的小狗??！是誰的？” 他的父母笑了笑，回答說：“我們給波比買的，因?yàn)?.....”他知道波比在大學(xué)時(shí)發(fā)生了什么很感動，把那個老女孩抱在懷里。他喃喃地說：“波比，我也想你?！?然后靜靜地，波比抬起頭，看著那年輕的少年在他懷里。真題2：拍照北極熊遇險(xiǎn)【2020年7月浙江卷】第二節(jié) 讀后續(xù)寫（滿分25分）閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進(jìn)行續(xù)寫，使之構(gòu)成一個完整的故事。 One fall, my wife Elli and I had a single goal: to photograph polar bears. We were staying at a research camp outside “ the polar bear capital of the world ” — the town of Churchill in Manitoba, Canada. Taking pictures of polar bears is amazing but also dangerous. Polar bears — like all wild animals — should be photographed from a safe distance. When I’m face to face with a polar bear, I like it to be through a camera with a telephoto lens. But sometimes, that is easier said than done. This was one of those times. As Elli and I cooked dinner, a young male polar bear who was playing in a nearby lake sniffed, and smelled our garlic bread. The hungry bear followed his nose to our camp, which was surrounded by a high wire fence. He pulled and bit the wire. He stood on his back legs and pushed at the wooden fence posts. Terrified, Elli and I tried all the bear defense actions we knew. We yelled at the bear, hit pots hard, and fired blank shotgun shells into the air. Sometimes loud noises like these will scare bears off. Not this polar bear though — he just kept trying to tear down the fence with his massive paws (爪子). I radioed the camp manager for help. He told me a helicopter was on its way, but it would be 30 minutes before it arrived. Making the best of this close encounter (相遇), I took some pictures of the bear. Elli and I feared the fence wouldn’t last through 30 more minutes of the bear’s punishment. The camp manager suggested I use pepper spray. The spray burns the bears’ eyes, but doesn’t hurt them. So I approached our uninvited guest slowly and, through the fence, sprayed him in the face. With an angry roar (吼叫), the bear ran to the lake to wash his eyes. 注意： 1. 所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右； 2. 至少使用5個短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語； 3. 續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語已為你寫好； 4. 續(xù)寫完成后，請用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語。 Para 1: A few minutes later, the bear headed back to our camp. ___________________ _________________________________________________________________ Para 2: At that very moment, the helicopter arrived. _____________________________ _________________________________________________________________ One possible version: Para 1: A few minutes later, the bear headed back to our camp. Then we realized that the spray had only angered him even more, for he seemed much fiercer this time and violently pushed the fence like mad. My heart raced wildly, not knowing what to do. At this critical moment, Elli grabbed several pieces of garlic bread and threw them over the fence. It worked! The bear stopped the attack and ran to the bread. But it wasn’t long before he ate up all the bread and came back again. Para 2: At that very moment, the helicopter arrived. “Thank goodness we are saved!” Elli cried out. Once the helicopter landed, we got onto it in no time, excited and relieved. When we were safe on the helicopter up in the air, I was amazed to spot that the bear had finally torn down the fence and ran towards the food we left behind. I quickly took out the camera and photographed the rare scene — we were robbed by a polar bear! 幾分鐘后，這只熊回到了我們的營地。然后我們意識到，浪花只是更激怒了他，因?yàn)檫@次他似乎更兇狠了，而且像瘋了一樣猛烈地推了推籬笆。我的心狂狂，不知道該怎么辦。在這個關(guān)鍵時(shí)刻，埃利抓起幾塊蒜蓉面包，扔過了柵欄。它已經(jīng)成功了！熊阻止了進(jìn)攻，跑到面包邊。但沒過多久，他就吃完了所有的面包，又回來了。第2部分：就在那一刻，直升機(jī)來了?！爸x天謝地，我們得救了！”埃莉喊道。直升機(jī)一降落，我們很快就上了飛機(jī)，興奮而松了一口氣。當(dāng)我們安全地坐在直升機(jī)上時(shí)，我驚訝地發(fā)現(xiàn)這只熊終于撕掉了柵欄，向我們留下的食物跑去。我迅速拿出相機(jī)，拍攝了這個罕見的場景，我們被一只北極熊搶劫了！

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