
第一步:成長前的苦惱(負(fù)面情緒塑造)
1、孤獨(dú)I never made friends easily(從不容易交朋友), and fr a time I did little mre than get n speaking terms with sme bys. (2021年4月寧波二模) 我從來沒有輕易地交朋友(從不容易交朋友),有一段時(shí)間我只是和一些男孩交談。
2、傷心1.我在口袋里什么也沒發(fā)現(xiàn),這個(gè)事實(shí)就像一把長矛刺進(jìn)我的心臟,立刻開始流血。I fund nthing in my pcket, a fact that seemed like a spear piercing int my heart which started t bleed immediately. (2021年4月寧波二模)2.看了看周圍,我焦急地幾乎哭了起來。(2021年4月寧波二模) Lking arund anxiusly, I almst burst int crying. 3.就在我崩潰的時(shí)候,克勞利帶領(lǐng)的一群男孩從我身邊走過(2021年4月寧波二模)Just at the time I brke dwn, a grup f bys led by Crawley passed me.
3、慚愧1. She was verwhelmed / vercme/ cnsumed with guilt and shame (被內(nèi)疚和羞愧淹沒). (2020.11月濰坊高三英語期中考試)2. Suddenly she came alive(精神就為之一振),waving her arthritic(關(guān)節(jié)炎的) hands.(2021廣二模)3. A wave f guilt swept ver me(一陣恐懼向我襲來) and I had t admit the fact that I had gne t the mvies and that was the real reasn why I was late.(2020屆山東省濱州市高三第二次模擬英語試題)
4、嘲笑他們大聲地笑著,像是在尖叫“多漂亮的破表??!”(2021年4月寧波二模)They laughed ludly with Crawley screaming wrds like “What a finest brken watch!”
5、絕望我媽媽不讓我?guī)?,”我撒謊,絕望在我心中沸騰。(2021年4月寧波二模)“My mther wuldn't let me bring it,” I lied, desperatin biling inside me.
6、緊張1. Meanwhile, Karie sat restlessly in her seat with her fingers crssed (她的手指交叉著). (2020.11月濰坊高三英語期中考試)2. She tld the teacher the truth , with her heart thumping / punding/ pumping like a drum(她的心跳得像打鼓一樣). (2020.11月濰坊高三英語期中考試)3. Having paced up and dwn restlessly(不安地來回走動(dòng)) in frnt f the the teacher's ffice, she finally gathered curage and pldded in.(2020.11月濰坊高三英語期中考試)
7、害怕 I unknwingly (不知不覺地) avided interacting (interact) with anyne because I was afraid they’d laugh in my face(我很害怕他們會(huì)當(dāng)面取笑我) . (2021沈陽市一模)
第二步:成長中(蛻變塑造)
1、驚訝Raising her eyebrws in surprise, Mrs Rssi frze, as if rted n the grund(仿佛定格在那里).(2021廣二模)
2、希望Jayce lked up t him, his eyes sparkling with hpe and determinatin(閃爍著希望和決心).(2021年汕頭一模)
3、教育與成長1. “That’s nt the right way. Patience, Will. Patience,” a vice eched in my ears (一個(gè)聲音在我耳邊回響)after the bys left.(2021年4月寧波二模)2. “What was dne was dne,” thught I t myself. “What is imprtant nw is t d crrect things next(現(xiàn)在重要的是下一步要做正確的事情).” (2021年4月寧波二模)
3、教育與成長3. 盡管憤怒、尷尬和悲傷重重地籠罩在空氣中,但這個(gè)聲音還是讓我意識(shí)到我在試圖給同學(xué)留下深刻印象時(shí)犯下的錯(cuò)誤。(2021年4月寧波二模)Thugh anger, embarrassment and sadness hung heavily in the air, the vice drew me t the awareness f the mistakes I had made when I attempted t impress the bys.
第三步:成長后的升華(喜悅+感激+升華)
1、喜悅1. Karie grinned(grin) as she read the label n the bx.(2020.11月濰坊高三英語期中考試)2. Dad lked at the paper, with his lips curving int a smile(他的嘴唇彎成了微笑). (2020.11月濰坊高三英語期中考試)3. Hearing that, Karie grinned frm ear t ear, a wave f happiness flding ver her(幸福的浪潮涌上她的心頭). (2020.11月濰坊高三英語期中考試)
2、感激I lked at her, tears f lve and gratitude(感動(dòng)和愛的淚水)welling up in my eyes.(2021沈陽市一模)
3、升華句1. 我確信,將來每當(dāng)我失去耐心時(shí),我都會(huì)記住祖父的話。(2021年4月寧波二模)I knew fr sure that every time I lst patience in the future I wuld remember my grandfather’s wrds.2. 這是我第一次真正體會(huì)到這份禮物的意義——耐心。(2021年4月寧波二模)It was the first time that I had truly realized the meaning f the gift --- patience.
3、升華句3、Aram said, “Thanks, Mrs Rssi, fr teaching me hw t make a cake t realize my dream(實(shí)現(xiàn)我的夢(mèng)想).” Mrs Rssi held his hands, saying, “ It is yu wh teach me hw t stick t my dream(堅(jiān)持我的夢(mèng)想).”(2021廣二模)4、It dawned n Aram that(Aram突然想到) “One shuld stick t his/her dream n matter what happens.”(2021廣二模))
一、學(xué)習(xí)知識(shí)而成長知識(shí)就是力量!在改變的過程中,學(xué)習(xí)不同的知識(shí),然后才能面對(duì)各種困難和挑戰(zhàn)。比如屏幕前的你,不就是在學(xué)習(xí)讀后續(xù)寫的技巧嗎?請(qǐng)看下面的例句,也是我送給正在學(xué)習(xí)的你。It's never t late t learn. Each individual has the right t accept mre challenges and make mre?attempts.學(xué)習(xí)永遠(yuǎn)為時(shí)不晚。每個(gè)人都應(yīng)該并且有權(quán)利去接受更多的挑戰(zhàn),做更多的嘗試?!痉治觥縤ndividual這里表示“個(gè)人,個(gè)體”。make mre?attempts 做更多嘗試。
二、發(fā)揮天賦促成長認(rèn)識(shí)自身天賦,并且發(fā)揮天賦,這是改變我們的現(xiàn)狀的一個(gè)重要條件。請(qǐng)看下面的例句。Actually, every individual pssesses talent. Be brave when yu find it and als make effrts. Yu can create miracles in the end.?事實(shí)上,每個(gè)人都有天賦,發(fā)現(xiàn)它的時(shí)候要勇敢,也要付出努力,最終你會(huì)創(chuàng)造奇跡?!痉治觥縫ssess 擁有。create miracles表示創(chuàng)造奇跡。
三、追逐夢(mèng)想而成長永遠(yuǎn)不要忽視了夢(mèng)想的力量!“做人如果沒有理想,跟咸魚有什么區(qū)別呢”。請(qǐng)看下面兩個(gè)例句。?It's never t late t g fr yur dream. As lng as yu grasp every pprtunity and take full advantage f it, yu will stand a chance t realize yur dreams.追夢(mèng)永遠(yuǎn)不晚。只要你抓住機(jī)會(huì),充分利用機(jī)會(huì),你就有機(jī)會(huì)實(shí)現(xiàn)夢(mèng)想。As lng as we dare t dream and dn't let difficulties get in ur way, anything is pssible.只要我們敢于夢(mèng)想,不被困難所阻擋,一切皆有可能?!痉治觥縯ake full advantage f 充分利用, realize yur dreams表示“實(shí)現(xiàn)夢(mèng)想”
四、克服困難促而成長只有克服各種苦難,才能改變現(xiàn)狀。請(qǐng)看下面的例句。The jurney t success is nt smth. It is full f challenges and difficulties. We shuld be brave t face them. As lng as we dn’t give up hpe and make every effrt t vercme all the difficulties, we will surely achieve ur gal (success) finally.通往成功的路不會(huì)平坦,充滿挑戰(zhàn)和艱辛。我們要勇敢面對(duì)。只要不放棄希望并竭盡全力克服所有困難,我們最終會(huì)實(shí)現(xiàn)我們的目標(biāo)(成功)?!痉治觥縮mth 表示“平坦的”vercme all the difficulties 表示“克服困難”;make every effrt 表示“做出努力”;as lng as,表示“只要”,引導(dǎo)條件狀語從句。
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