讀后續(xù)寫：親情類 TOC \o "1-3" \h \u  HYPERLINK \l "_Toc2901" Part1：經(jīng)典例文（送花）  PAGEREF _Toc2901 \h 1  HYPERLINK \l "_Toc11286" Part2：親情類故事構(gòu)造“三板斧”  PAGEREF _Toc11286 \h 3  HYPERLINK \l "_Toc16117" 第一板斧：沖突構(gòu)造（誤會、犯錯等）  PAGEREF _Toc16117 \h 3  HYPERLINK \l "_Toc5988" 第二板斧：沖突化解（解釋、道歉、彌補、回憶等）  PAGEREF _Toc5988 \h 4  HYPERLINK \l "_Toc18852" 第三板斧：親情升華（誠實、珍惜等）  PAGEREF _Toc18852 \h 6  HYPERLINK \l "_Toc29742" Part3：親情類場景描寫（七大關(guān)系）  PAGEREF _Toc29742 \h 7  HYPERLINK \l "_Toc5342" 一、母子關(guān)系  PAGEREF _Toc5342 \h 7  HYPERLINK \l "_Toc25940" 二、父子關(guān)系  PAGEREF _Toc25940 \h 9  HYPERLINK \l "_Toc25104" 三、 父女之間  PAGEREF _Toc25104 \h 12  HYPERLINK \l "_Toc20593" 四、 姐妹之間  PAGEREF _Toc20593 \h 13  HYPERLINK \l "_Toc2755" 五、 兄弟之間  PAGEREF _Toc2755 \h 14  HYPERLINK \l "_Toc29146" 六、 祖孫之間  PAGEREF _Toc29146 \h 15  HYPERLINK \l "_Toc18210" 七、 夫妻之間  PAGEREF _Toc18210 \h 16  HYPERLINK \l "_Toc402" Part4：靈活應(yīng)用:  PAGEREF _Toc402 \h 17  HYPERLINK \l "_Toc21916" 例1：圣誕節(jié)的禮物  PAGEREF _Toc21916 \h 17  HYPERLINK \l "_Toc30939" 例2：爸爸帶我體驗生活  PAGEREF _Toc30939 \h 19  HYPERLINK \l "_Toc29878" Part 5： 高考真題再現(xiàn)：母親節(jié)的驚喜  PAGEREF _Toc29878 \h 21  Part1：經(jīng)典例文（送花） 閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。 Recently I graduated from high school, and as a gift I received a huge hunch of flowers, 40 to be exact! I had so many that I didn't know what to do with them. The next weekend my niece and nephew, Sue and Mike, aged 6 and 7, came and suddenly I had an idea. I might let them give out these flowers to people they met on the street, and in this way they could learn how to be friendly to others. So I told them about my plan and explained that these flowers would make people feel happy and smile. They loved the idea and were eager to have a try. So at once we took every single flower and tied a smile card to it. We then went to the street with the flowers. The first flower went to a policeman. As soon as she saw the policeman, my niece ran up to him and handed him a flower. His smile was so big, but hers was even bigger! In no time, we neared the end of our flowers. It was lunch time and we went to Subway for lunch. There the kids gave a flower to the waitress, who was really excited to receive the flower. As we were eating our lunch, the waitress came up to the kids with two big chocolate cookies! She said the chocolate cookies were for them and that she really liked the flower! As they ate the cookies, my niece and nephew looked at me with the biggest smiles I had ever seen. 注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右； 2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。 With just one flower left, I said it should be given to the person who needed it most. _______________________________________________________________________________ It turned out to be a great day for us. _______________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】With just one flower left I said it should be given to the person who needed it most. Just then, my nephew caught sight of an old woman in a wheelchair nearby. “I think she’s the very person for the flower. She lives a hard life because of bad health. She needs smiles most,” said my nephew. With these words, my nephew, followed by my niece, took the flower up to her. You can imagine how happy the old woman looked! She smiled, and gave each of the kids a big kiss. It turned out to be a great day for us. We spread a lot of smiles by giving out flowers, and received a lot of smiles in return. The flowers not only made us feel good about ourselves, but also made 40 other people feel happy. I feel there is nothing more enjoyable than being friendly to people. Meanwhile, the kids learned an important lesson in the process. In fact, they can’t wait until next time they have such a chance again. They want to give out more flowers! 【詳解】通過閱讀所給文章可知，作者高中畢業(yè)時收到了很多鮮花，他打算讓侄子侄女們把花送給別人，用這樣的方式讓他們知道如何對別人友好。 續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，第一段開頭是：只剩下一朵花了，我說應(yīng)該給最需要的人……，所以應(yīng)該寫誰是最需要這朵花的人。要詳細描述為什么這個人是最需要這朵花的，同時要刻畫當這個人收到花時的感受與表現(xiàn)等。第二段開頭是：這對我們來說是偉大的一天。本段應(yīng)該寫我和侄子侄女通過送花這件事的感受及明白的道理。 【點睛】續(xù)寫部分描寫詳略得當，使用了高級詞匯和高級句子。如：catch sight of；more… than；can’t wait ；give out等高級詞匯；With these words，followed by my niece復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)作狀語等高級句式。 Part2：親情類故事構(gòu)造“三板斧” 第一板斧：沖突構(gòu)造（誤會、犯錯等） 只有沖突才能體會親情的彌足珍貴。沖突原因大致有：疏于陪伴、理念不合（代溝）、誤會等。 1、生氣 1. 我媽媽瞪著我，這是在我有一個重組家庭之前她從未做過的事。 “你可以撿起來的?！彼f。“那才對?！保ū究梢?，虛擬語氣） My mother glanced at me. Something she never did before I had a stepfamily. “You could have picked it up. ” she said. “That would have been the kind thing to do.” 他生氣地握緊拳頭，但是弟弟卻激動地揮著手。 He folded his fist angrily, but his younger brother waved his hands excitedly. 3.Jackson試著說什么，但Carter太生氣了，他一個字也聽不進去。（對比，夸張） Jackson kept saying something, but so angry was Carter that he couldn’t even hear a word . 2、后悔 1. 我意識到我裙子上的蝴蝶結(jié)打得很不好。我本應(yīng)該請媽媽幫忙的。 I realized how poorly I tied the string on my skirt which was over leggings. I should have asked mom for help. 3、內(nèi)疚 一想到我對他所做的一切，遺憾和內(nèi)疚就像沒休止的潮水一樣向我襲來。 Thinking about what I had done to him, regret and guilt overwhelmed me like endless tides. 每當我想到亨利濕了的書，我的臉都會變紅了。 Whenever I thought of Henry’s wet book, my face turned red. 4、煩惱 Watching Shirley’s smile fading away, Peter frowned.看著雪莉的微笑漸漸消失，彼得皺起了眉頭。（2020-2021年汕頭市高三第一學期質(zhì)量監(jiān)測） 5、傷心 當她望過她三歲妹妹的桌子時，Amanda感覺她的心情像天空一樣灰暗。（比喻） Amanda felt as gray as the sky outside when she looked across the table at her three-year-old sister. 6、犯錯 To cover his terrible action（為了掩蓋他糟糕的行為，不定式作狀語）, the terrified boy glued the pieces together hastily and put the vase back to its place.（2021 廣一模） Fearing punishment（害怕懲罰，現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語）, the suddenly inspired boy said that a neighbour’s cat jumped in from the window and he couldn’t drive it away no matter how hard he tried.（2021 廣一模） Glancing at the chocolates with hesitation,(猶豫地看著著巧克力,非謂語), the boy timidly raised his head before his mother. （2021 廣一模） 第二板斧：沖突化解（解釋、道歉、彌補、回憶等） 1、道歉 1.“對不起，”他說到，輕輕的摸摸Jackson的頭。（2021.4 湖麗衢三地聯(lián)考） “I’m so sorry.”he said, gently petting Jackson’s head. 2.他放下手，小心翼翼的看了Carter 一眼，然后低下了頭。（動作鏈）（2021.4 湖麗衢三地聯(lián)考）He put down his hand, glanced cautiously at Carter and lowered his head. 3.To her surprise, she smiled at me and expressed her apology for ignoring my loneliness （為她忽略我的孤獨道歉）as well as my difficulty with English communication.（2021年沈陽市一模） 2、原諒 1. 他媽媽把手指放在他嘴唇讓他停止說話，在他額頭上吻了一下，然后走出了書房。（動作鏈）（2021 廣一模） His mother silenced him by gently putting her finger on his lips，gave a soft kiss on his forehead and walked out of the study. 3、開心 1. “我想給你一個驚喜！”他指向一個包裝精美的盒子，眼里閃爍著光芒。（with結(jié)構(gòu)）（2021.4 湖麗衢三地聯(lián)考） “I wanted to surprise you!” he pointed at a neatly wrapped box with his eyes gleaming. 2.看到他的家人圍坐著，和諧地待在一起，卡特感覺到一種幸福感。（doing非謂語）（2021.4 湖麗衢三地聯(lián)考） Seeing his families sitting together and staying together harmoniously, Cater felt a surge of happiness. 歡快的歌唱飄蕩在房間里，兩姐妹沉浸在音樂的美中。（獨立主格）（2020.11溫州一模） Cheerful singing floating in the room, the two sisters immersed themselves in the beauty of the music. 4、感激 1. 如果沒有亨利的幫助，我就不會順利地完成我的演出了。（2021年南通市二模）But for Henry’s help, I wouldn’t have finished my performance smoothly. 2. I looked at her, tears of love and gratitude welling(well) up in my eyes.(獨立主格結(jié)構(gòu))（2021年沈陽市一模） 3. Afterwards, it was my turn to give a small lecture,in which I expressed my sincere gratitude to my mom and friends, bowing(bow) to them several times. （定語從句，非謂語） 5、回憶 1. 在這時，毫無預(yù)料地，Carter突然想起B(yǎng)illy躺在地上哭的回憶，一直在他腦海回旋，提醒著他一些事情。（無靈主語句；doing非謂語；and連接兩個同時進行的動作）（2021.4 湖麗衢三地聯(lián)考） At that moment, unexpectedly, the memory of the sight of Billy crying on the ground occurred to Carter, hovering in his mind and reminding him something . 2.看著Jackson，Carter忍不住想象他的弟弟花整天小心涂好那輛車的情景。（2021.4 湖麗衢三地聯(lián)考） Looking at Jackson, Carter couldn’t help imagining his little brother spending the whole day carefully painting the car.（2021.4 湖麗衢三地聯(lián)考） 3. “I just wish I knew how to help her,” Amanda said to herself, thinking of Li’s frightened eyes（想到Li害怕的雙眼）. （2020.11溫州一模） 第三板斧：親情升華（誠實、珍惜等） 1. From then on, the three chocolates rang the alarm in his heart every time he intended to lie, reminding him to be honest提醒他要誠實(非謂語).（2021 廣一模） 2. I nodded firmly, knowing a flower of kindness and friendship began to blossom（善良和友誼之花開放） in both of our hearts.（2021年南通市二模） 3.This experience transformed my attitude towards Henry and our relationship has also been harmonious（我們的關(guān)系變得和諧） since then.（2021年南通市二模） 4. 正是亨利的善良讓我感受到了我們家庭的溫暖。我會用心珍惜它的。（2021年南通市二模） It was Henry’s kindness that made me feel the warmth from our family. I will treasure it with all my heart. Part3：親情類場景描寫（七大關(guān)系） 一、母子關(guān)系 1. Do you mean that eve flower has its own beauty asked my mother thoughtfully.I nodded without hesitation, as if a second wasted could deprive the dandelions of thei life."The same to you," she added, her voice soft""Not everyone can be a rose,and it is also an honor to be a dandelion." Knowing that my mother had realized my pain, I took off the mask that I had worn for the whole lunch time and poured out my unease heartily She listened to me patiently and patted me on the back tenderly.Suddenly she stopped, as if to say something. “你的意思是那朵夜花有它自己的美麗嗎？”媽媽沉思地問。 我毫不猶豫地點點頭，仿佛一秒鐘的浪費就能剝奪蒲公英的生命。 “你也一樣，”她又說，“不是每個人都能成為一朵玫瑰，成為蒲公英也是一種榮譽?！?我知道媽媽已經(jīng)意識到了我的痛苦，我摘下了我整個午餐時間戴的面具，盡情地傾訴我的不安。她耐心地聽著我的話，溫柔地拍了拍我的背。 突然，她停了下來，好像在說什么。 "But you will be a beautiful narrator." Mom said. She reminded me of how fluently I could deliver my part at home.It was at that time that I understood that maybe I was more suitable for a role back stage like a narrator. From then on, I practiced my lines heart and soul with my mother at lunch time for weeks. And the performance approached ultimately Standing backstage, nervousness came flooding in me.What encouraged me to overcome it was the inspiration from the beautiful yellow dandelions. The performance that night was eventually a big success.Hearing the thunderous applause, I took pride in my role and firmly believed that even a dandelion had its own beauty. “但你將會成為一個美麗的敘述者?！眿寢屨f。她讓我想起了我在家里可以多么流利地扮演我的角色。正是在那個時候，我明白也許我更適合像敘述者這樣的角色。從那時起，我在午餐時間和母親一起練習了好幾周。演出最終站在后臺，緊張情緒涌上心頭。鼓勵我克服它的是靈感來自于美麗的黃色蒲公英。當晚的演出最終大獲成功。聽到雷鳴般的掌聲，我為自己的角色感到自豪，堅信甚至蒲公英也有自己的美。 2. "Do you mean that every flower has its own beauty?" asked my mother thoughtfully. My lips parted with nothing uttered, my eyes drooped to the ground. The dandelion blossom spread in the air, light and all silent. I felt a sinking in my heart, and my heart in my throat.A mixed sentiment of fear and desire clung upon my mind."Similarly, every individual has his own beauty," said my mother in a comforting voice. My eyebrows furrowed, my fists clenched, I murmured timidly, "but I failed playing the princess for the lines despite all the practice." “你是說每一朵花都有自己的美麗嗎？” 媽媽若有所思地問。 我的嘴唇張開了，什么也沒說，我的眼睛下垂到地上。 蒲公英的花朵在空中蔓延開來，淡淡的，所有的寂靜。 我感到我的心在下沉，我的心在我的喉嚨。 一種恐懼和欲望混合在我的腦海里。 “同樣，每個人都有自己的美麗，”母親安慰地說。 我的眉毛皺了起來，我的拳頭緊握著，我膽怯地喃喃地說，“但我沒能在所有的練習中扮演公主。 “ "But you will be a beautiful narrator," mom said.My glance steadily resting on the blossom, when I raised my head, I hardly resisted the impulse to take a glimpse.In an instant our eyes met, and it was a reflective look. The tender breeze of early spring blew my cheeks flush. Mom lowered her lean shoulder, reached out and patted on my head. A gentle smile slipped from her lips."You are the dandelion blossom, the best narrator in our garden." A faint whisper came into my ear. The perfume of grasses and bushes and,all flowers scented the mellow atmosphere. “但你將會成為一個美麗的敘述者，”媽媽說。我的目光堅定地停留在花朵上，當我抬起頭來時，我?guī)缀鯚o法抗拒要瞥一眼的沖動。剎那間，我們的眼睛相遇了，神情也在沉思。早春的微風使我的臉頰紅暈了。媽媽放下她瘦削的肩膀，伸出手來拍了拍我的頭。她嘴里露出一絲溫柔的微笑。“你是蒲公英的花朵，是我們花園里最好的敘述者?！蔽叶厒饕魂嚩Z。草和灌木叢的芳香，所有的花朵都散發(fā)著柔和的氣氛。 3. Approaching the doorway, Jenny took a deep breath. When she knocked at the door, she found the door was locked and her mother was not in.Tired and sad, she sat down in front of the house."Where could my mother be?" she wondered,"Was she stil angry with me?" Again, the scene of the quarrel appeared in her mind. She remembered her rudeness to her mother. Realizing that all the scolding from her mother was due to the fact that her mother really cared a lot about her, she felt rather ashamed, and tears began to roll down her cheeks. 走近門口，珍妮深吸了一口氣。 當她敲門時，她發(fā)現(xiàn)門被鎖著，她的母親不在。 她又累又傷心，坐在房子前面。 “我媽媽在哪兒？” 她想，“她還在生我的氣嗎？” 再次，爭吵的場景出現(xiàn)在她的腦海里。 她記得她對母親的粗魯。 意識到母親所有的責罵都是因為她母親真的很關(guān)心她，她感到相當羞愧，眼淚開始從她的臉頰滾下來。 A gentle touch on her hair called her mind back. She raised her head and saw the familiar face of her mother."Here you come! I've been looking for you, she said, tired and relieved.Jenny couldn't help throwing herself into her mother's arms."Mum, I'm so sorry and thank you for all you have done for me." She expressed her sincere apology and great gratitude. Hearing this, her mother smiled patting her back gently. 她的頭發(fā)上輕輕的一碰，使她的思想恢復(fù)了。 她抬起頭，看到了母親那張熟悉的臉。 ”“你來了！ 我一直在找你，她說，累了，松了一口氣。 珍妮忍不住撲進媽媽的懷里。 “媽媽，我很抱歉，謝謝你為我所做的一切?！?她表示真誠的道歉和極大的感謝。 聽到這話，媽媽笑著輕輕拍了拍她的背。 二、父子關(guān)系 1. The man, seeing that the boy already had money started to get angry again."How can you be so selfish?Why do you want more money since you already have these bills?" the father could hardly hold his anger back and inquired with two eyebrows knitted into one. With held-back tears in his eyes, the little boy slowly and carefully counted out his money, and then looked up at his father, replying,"Because I didn't have enough before, but now I do." with big blue eyes]shining with tears. 那個男人，看到那個男孩已經(jīng)有錢了，又開始生氣了。 “你怎么這么自私？ 既然你已經(jīng)有了這些賬單，你為什么還要更多的錢？” 父親幾乎不能忍住他的憤怒，用兩個眉毛編織成一個。 小男孩含著淚水，慢慢地小心地數(shù)出他的錢，然后抬頭看著他的父親，回答說：“因為我以前沒有足夠的錢，但現(xiàn)在我有了。” 帶著藍色的大眼睛]眼淚閃閃發(fā)光。 Not knowing what his son meant, the father just stood there, waiting for his boy's explanation.Wiping away his tears and an innocent smile appearing on his face, the boy requested in a relieved voice,"Daddy, I have $20 now. Can I buy an hour from you?Please come home early tomorrow.I want to have dinner with you." Hearing the boy's small but sincere request, the father couldn't hold back his tears.Realizing he was too busy with his business to spare some time with his beloved ones, he gathered his son into his arms and apologized again and again,"Sorry., and I promise I'Il be back early tomorrow." 他不知道兒子的意思，父親就站在那里等著兒子的解釋。男孩擦去眼淚，臉上露出天真的微笑，用松了一口氣的聲音問道：“爸爸，我現(xiàn)在有$20了。我能從你那里買到一個小時嗎？請明天早點回家。我想和你共吃晚飯?！甭牭侥泻⑿《嬲\的請求，父親忍不住流住了眼淚。意識到自己忙了，沒有時間和心愛的人在一起，他把兒子抱在懷里，一遍又一遍地道歉：“抱歉。我保證明天早點回來?！? 2. The bird dropped like a rock,one wing flopping behind as it fell.I heard it thump into the dirt.Before lowering the gun,I realized what I'd done~I'd killed my first animal. "Oh no," My stomach was tied in knots and I prayed,"Oh God, please don't let it be dead." The bird lay there with blood streaming from its beak, feathers large and small scattered about.I reached out and rolled it over, but its head drooped lifelessly to the side. After burying it,I hurried home, hiding my BB gun in the closet. 那只鳥像石頭一樣落下，一只翅膀在它落下的時候撲向后面。 我聽到它砰的一聲撞到泥土里。 在放下槍之前，我意識到我做了什么~我殺了我的第一只動物。 “哦，不，”我的胃結(jié)成結(jié)，我祈禱，“哦，上帝，請不要讓它死了?！?鳥兒躺在那里，鮮血從它的喙流出來，羽毛大大小小散落在周圍。 我伸手把它翻過來，但它的頭毫無生氣地垂到一邊。 埋了它之后，我急忙回家，把我的BB槍藏在壁櫥里。 When my dad got home that evening, he asked me how my day was.I hesitated, and was momentarily uneasy that guilt crossed my face. My dad,a man of keen perception, quickly went into confrontation mode, asking what really happened.I replied, as if I had to choke the words out of my throat, tears streaming down my face. He didn't say anything but just looked at me, hand resting on my shoulder. That evening, my dad made me vow to never kill a thing again, explaining that once I got bored of animals, thenext target could be something even more priceless. 那天晚上我爸爸回家時，他問我今天過得怎么樣。 我猶豫了一下，一時感到不安，內(nèi)疚掠過我的臉。 我的父親，一個敏銳的感知，很快進入對抗模式，問到底發(fā)生了什么。 我回答說，好像我不得不掐住喉嚨里的話，眼淚從我臉上流下來。 他什么也沒說，只是看著我，手放在我的肩膀上。 那天晚上，我爸爸發(fā)誓再也不殺任何東西，解釋說一旦伊戈特厭倦了動物，下一個目標可能是更無價的東西。 2. The bird dropped like a rock,one wing flopping behind as it fell. A surge of excitement ran through me, as ifI were the king.Lowering the BB gun, I cameup to check my target. It was sill alive, with only one wing bleeding. "Why not take it home so that I can play with it?" I picked up the little creature and went home. When I placed it on the desk, it was struggling to stand up but in vain. At the sight,I began to feel a little uneasy. With the night falling, I was on pins and needles. 那只鳥像石頭一樣掉了下來，一只翅膀在它掉下來的時候向后面。 一陣興奮從我身上掠過，仿佛我是國王。 放下BB槍，我來檢查我的目標。 它還活著，只有一只翅膀在流血。 “為什么不把它帶回家讓我玩呢？” 我抱起小生物，回家了。 當我把它放在桌子上時，它掙扎著站起來，但徒勞無功。 一看，我就開始覺得有些不安。 夜幕降臨，我如坐針氈。 When my dad got home that evening, he asked me how my day was.I was dead silent.Dad merely rested his hand upon me and waited with a soft look in his eye."I.." my voice cracked and I cleared my throat."I shot a bird." "Oh?" he replied, his expression unchanging. "Where is the bird now?" I led him to the desk. Seeing the bird,dad smoothed its feathers with his gentle fingers and fixed the broken wing with a bandage. Several days later, the bird was fully recovered. Seeing it fly away,I realized I should use the real power to protect rather than hurt lives. 那天晚上我爸爸回家后，他問我今天過得怎么樣。我沉默了。爸爸只是把手放在我身上，溫柔地等待著?！拔摇！蔽业穆曇袅验_了，我清了清嗓子。“我射殺了一只鳥?！薄芭秵?？”他回答說，他的表情始終保持不變?！斑@只鳥現(xiàn)在在哪里了？”我把他領(lǐng)到桌子前?？吹竭@只鳥，爸爸用它溫柔的手指撫平了它的羽毛，用繃帶固定著折斷的翅膀。幾天后，這只鳥就完全康復(fù)了?？吹剿w走了，我意識到我應(yīng)該使用真正的力量來保護生命，而不是傷害生命。 父女之間 It was a long trip back to the office.I picked up the wastebasket and poured the contents on my desk.I was carefully sorting it all out.After was removing the dirt off and spraying the whole thing with breath freshener to kill the smell of food.I carefully smoothed out the bag and put the treasures inside.I carried the whole thing home gingerly,like an injured kitten. That evening,I returned it to Molly. After dinner,I asked Molly to tell me about the stuff in the bag,and so she took it all out a piece at a time and placed the objects in a row on the dining room table.Everything had a story, a memory, or was attached to dreams and imaginary friends J managed to say"I see" very wisely several time Ad_as a_matter of fact,I did see. 這是回辦公室的長途旅行。 我拿起廢紙簍，把東西倒在桌子上。 我仔細整理了一下。 在清除污垢后，用呼吸清新劑噴灑整個東西來殺死食物的氣味。 我小心地把袋子弄平，把寶藏放進去。 我小心翼翼地把整件事帶回家，就像一只受傷的小貓。 那天晚上，我把它還給了莫莉。 晚飯后，我讓莫莉告訴我袋子里的東西，所以她一次拿出一塊，把東西排成一排放在餐廳的桌子上。 每件事都有一個故事，一個記憶，或者依附于夢想和想象中的朋友J成功地說了幾次“我明白了”事實上，我確實看到了。 To my surprise, Molly gave the bag to me once again several days later. The same bag and same stuff inside.I felt forgiven,and trusted and loved.And a little more comfortable wearing the title of father. Over several months, the bag with the note in went with me from time to time.In time Molly turned her attention to other things. She found other treasures,lost in new games, and grew up.I was left holding the bag.She gave it to me one morning and never asked for its return. And so I have it still. 令我吃驚的是，幾天后莫莉又把這個包給了我。同樣的袋子和同樣的東西。我感到被寬恕，被信任和被愛。穿上父親的頭銜會更舒服一點。幾個月多了，那個帶著紙條的包不時地跟著我走。不久，莫莉把注意力轉(zhuǎn)向了其他事情。她還發(fā)現(xiàn)了其他在新游戲中丟失的寶藏，然后長大了。我一直拿著袋子。一天早上，她把它給了我，但從來沒有要求讓它回來。所以我還在那里。 姐妹之間 Ali looked up and saw the other boys rushing ahead. Refusing to give up at this point, he jumped to his feet and ran as fast as he could.He dashed across the finish line and won the fourth prize. Thinking he would let her sister down, Ali couldn't help sobbing.Just then he suddenly heard the announcement from the broadcast that he won the third prize as the runner who collided with Ali was disqualified for breaking the rule.Holding the shoes close to his chest during the award ceremony, Ali felt overjoyed and relieved as he eventually won the shoes for his sister. 阿里抬起頭，看到其他男孩沖在前面。 在這一點上，他拒絕放棄，他跳起來，跑得盡可能快。 他沖過終點線，獲得了四等獎。 以為他會讓她妹妹失望，阿里忍不住抽泣起來。 就在這時，他突然聽到廣播中宣布，他贏得了三等獎，因為與阿里相撞的跑步者因違反規(guī)則而被取消資格。 在頒獎典禮上，阿里把鞋子緊貼在胸前，感到欣喜若狂，松了一口氣，因為他最終為他的妹妹贏得了鞋子。 Filled with delight, Ali walked home quickly. He could not wait to see his sister and share the thrilling news. On his arrival, Ali found Zahra was waiting outside. She was really nervous whether her brother had brought her what she was expecting. "Zahra, see what I have got for you" he took the prize out of his bag with his trembling hands.The instant Zahra saw the shoes, her face lit up. So thrilled was she that she threw herself at Ali."Thank you! Ali." Tears of joy welled up their eyes as the brother and sister hugged tightly together. 充滿喜悅，阿里快步走回家。 他迫不及待地要去看妹妹，分享這個驚心動魄的消息。 阿里一到，就發(fā)現(xiàn)Zahra在外面等著。 她真的很緊張，她哥哥是否給她帶來了她所期待的。 “扎赫拉，看看我給你買了什么”他用顫抖的雙手從包里拿出獎品。 扎赫拉看到鞋子的瞬間，她的臉就亮了起來。 她激動得撲向阿里。 ”“謝謝！ Ali?！?當兄妹緊緊地擁抱在一起時，喜悅的淚水涌上了他們的眼睛。 兄弟之間 There was no fence at all.It was a bridge! A bridge stretched from one side of the creek to the other!John was about to complain about everything,when he found the neighbor,his young brother,was coming across the bridge,his hands outstretched."You are quite a fellow to build this bridge after all I have said and done," said John's brother. The two brothers met in the middle,taking each other's hand and hugging each other. 根本沒有柵欄。 是一座橋！ 一座橋從小溪的一邊延伸到另一邊！ 約翰正要抱怨一切，當他發(fā)現(xiàn)鄰居，他的弟弟，正在過橋，他的手伸出。 約翰的哥哥說：“我說了這么多，你真是個造橋的好朋友。 兩兄弟在中間相遇，牽著對方的手，互相擁抱。 They turned to see the carpenter lift the toolbox onto his shoulder."No,wait! Stay a few more days.We have more jobs for you," said the older brother."I'd love to stay on." the carpenter said."but I have many more bridges to build." Observing the carpenter leaving,the two brothers waved grateful good-bye to him.What a thought-provoking story! Every day we have the choice of building a fence or a bridge.One leads to separation and anger while the other leads to openness and friendship. 他們轉(zhuǎn)過身來，看到木匠把工具箱抬到肩上?！安?，等等！ 再呆幾天。 我們有更多的工作要給你。 “我很想繼續(xù)?！?木匠說。 “但我還有很多橋要建?！?看著木匠走了，兩個兄弟向他揮手表示感謝。 多么發(fā)人深省的故事??！ 每天我們都可以選擇建造柵欄或橋梁。 一個導(dǎo)致分離和憤怒，另一個導(dǎo)致開放和友誼。 祖孫之間 When Christmas break came, Grandma got a chest cold, and I was afraid to leave her.I hadn't been home since Labor Day, and my mother was anxious to see me.I agreed to come home,but for two weeks instead of four, so I could return to Grandma and Grandpa.I said my good-byes,arranged for their temporary care and return home.As I was loading my car to go back to school, the phone rang."Grandma died last night,I'm sorry."I hung up the phone feeling like my world had ended.I had lost my friend, and that was far worse than knowing I would have to return to washing dishes.I went back at the end of four weeks, asking to begin the work-study program again.The financial aid advisor looked at me as if I had lost my mind.I explained my position, then he smiled and slid me an envelope. "This is for you, he said. 當圣誕假期來臨時，奶奶胸口感冒了，我害怕離開她。 從勞動節(jié)開始我就沒回家，我媽媽很想見我。 我同意回家，但兩個星期而不是四個星期，所以我可以回到奶奶和爺爺身邊。 我說了我的道別，安排他們暫時照顧，然后回家。 當我正在裝貨回學校時，電話響了。 “奶奶昨晚死了，對不起。 “我掛了電話，感覺我的世界已經(jīng)結(jié)束了。 我失去了我的朋友，這比我知道我必須回去洗碗要糟糕得多。 四個星期后，我又回去了，要求開始勤工儉學。 財政援助顧問看著我，好像我瘋了似的。 我解釋了我的立場，然后他笑了笑，遞給我一個信封。 “這是給你的，”他說。 The envelope was from grandma. She had known how sick she was.In the envelope was enough money to pay for the rest of my college year and a request that I take piano lessons in her memory. Moved to tears,I determined to learn piano lessons by heart and my memory of grandma motivated me to practice day and night.I don't think the piano piece was even played with more feeling than it was my second year in college. Now,years later, when I walk by a piano, I smile and think of Grandma. She is playing the piano smilingly in heaven,I am sure. 那個信封是從奶奶那里寄來的。她已經(jīng)知道自己病得有多厲害了。信封里有足夠的錢來支付我大學剩下的時間，并要求我為她上鋼琴課。我哭了，決心用心學鋼琴，對奶奶的記憶激勵我日夜練習。我甚至不認為這首鋼琴曲比我上大學的第二年更有感情。幾年后，當我走過鋼琴時，我微笑著想起了奶奶。我相信，她是在天堂微笑著彈鋼琴的。 夫妻之間 The driver responded,"It must feel good to be taken care of and protected like you are every day." Confused by what the driver talked about,she asked,"What do you mean?" The driver answered,"Every morning in the past week,a fine-looking gentleman in a military uniform has been standing across the street watching you getting off the bus.He makes sure you cross the street safely and he watches until you enter your office building.Then he blows you a kiss, gives you a salute and walks away.You are one lucky lady." 司機回答說：“每天都像你一樣受到照顧和保護，感覺一定很好?！?她被司機說的話弄糊涂了，問：“你什么意思？” 司機回答說：“過去一周的每天早晨，一位穿著軍裝的英俊紳士一直站在街對面，看著你下車。 他確保你安全過街，他看著你進入你的辦公樓。 然后他給你一個吻，給你一個敬禮，然后走開。 你真是個幸運的女士。 “ Tears of happiness poured down Susan's cheeks.With tears of happiness in her eyes, she stood motionlessly facing the opposite side of the street, as if gazing at someone.Although she couldn't physically see him, she definitely felt Mark's presence. Susan thought she was actually lucky,for he had given her a gift more powerful than sight, a gift of love that can bring light where there is darkness.Just as Mark grew a little worried,he saw his wife break in to a radiant smile and blow a kiss to his direction. Finally she found back herself, blind but attractive and confident as she used to be. 幸福的淚水順著蘇珊的臉頰流下來。 她眼里含著幸福的淚水，一動不動地站在街道對面，仿佛在凝視著某人。 雖然她看不到他的身體，但她絕對感覺到馬克的存在。 蘇珊認為她實際上是幸運的，因為他給了她一份比視力更強大的禮物，一份愛的禮物，可以在黑暗中帶來光明。 就在馬克有點擔心的時候，他看到他的妻子露出燦爛的微笑，朝他的方向吹了一個吻。 最后，她發(fā)現(xiàn)自己回來了，她失明了，但像以前一樣有吸引力和自信。 Part4：靈活應(yīng)用: 例1：圣誕節(jié)的禮物 Several years ago, I was living in New York and working for an airline, so I never got back home for?Christmas. My Christmas was happy too with some other colleagues around. But in my heart I was sad because I couldn’t stay with my family. Sometimes my colleagues would say our Christmas was filled?with tears. But this Christmas was different. I was lucky. I had the whole day off, which meant I could?stay with?my family on Christmas Eve. When Christmas morning came, I awoke to a small hand rubbing my face. “Dad,?Merry Christmas!”was all?my younger son?had time to say. He seemed to be racing against time. I knew he was hunting for?gifts?with his brother eagerly. I got down stairs just to see the two little boys’ faces as they looked at the pocket rockets Santa Claus had left them. I realized that the real Christmas was for the children who had deep belief in the amazing power of Santa Claus. At first,their fingers went almost shyly over their toys. When their inspection had been completed, the two boys ensured that the gifts were really delivered by Santa Claus and they dragged everything into the center of the living room. Delight?flooded the room. As their mother began giving out gifts, I smiled to myself,?wondering?how my unexpected gifts this year would be received. With so many Christmas spent outside, I had prepared so many gifts for my children and together with my wife. I hid them in several secret places. But the children were excellent detectives and they found all of them. They were happily opening packages constantly?thanking?considerate Santa Claus for his kindness and ability to know their desires. But I had not received a single one. I knew they had?forgotten?my existence with my absence from their Christmas these years. 注意： 1.??所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為?150?左右； 2.??至少使用?5?個短文中標有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語； 3.??續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語已為你寫好； 4.??續(xù)寫完成后，請用下劃線標出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語。 Paragraph 1: I?had?to?admit?that?my?disappointment?was?growing?steadily.? Paragraph 2: Suddenly?my?wife?walked?up?to?me. 參考范文 Paragraph l: I had to admit that my disappointment was growing steadily. I was wondering whether I could get a gift when my younger son ran to me, who was really kind enough to save my face. He asked me to admire his gift which he deeply believed was carefully chosen by Santa Claus. He said happily that he would share some of the gifts of his and allow me to choose one from them. I thanked him from the bottom of my heart, still feeling disappointed. Paragraph 2: Suddenly my wife walked up to me. It seemed that she had guessed how I felt. She asked me to look at the Christmas tree which was decorated with so many boxes. I think she was showing off her efforts on the decoration but she took off a small box and passed it to me smiling and saying it was for me. I opened it and saw a letter which read.“We will never forget you. Merry Christmas!”Under the letter was a watch which was clicking with delight.I was moved to tears. 第1段： 我不得不承認，我的失望正在穩(wěn)步增長。 我在想，當我的小兒子跑到我身邊時，我是否能得到一份禮物，他真的很善良，足以拯救我的臉。 他讓我欣賞他的禮物，他深信這是圣誕老人精心挑選的。 他高興地說，他將分享他的一些禮物，并允許我從他們中選擇一個。 我從心底感謝他，仍然感到失望。 第2款： 突然我妻子走到我面前。 似乎她已經(jīng)猜到了我的感受。 她讓我看看裝飾著這么多盒子的圣誕樹。 我想她是在炫耀她在裝飾上的努力，但她脫下了一個小盒子，微笑著遞給我，說這是給我的。 我打開它，看到一封信，上面寫著：“我們永遠不會忘記你。 “圣誕快樂！”信下面是一只手表，它正高興地咔嗒作響。 我感動得流淚。 例2：爸爸帶我體驗生活 閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進行續(xù)寫，使之構(gòu)成一個完整的故事。 Doing things with my father was always fun due to his rich imagination. With his personality, it was amazing how patient Dad could be. I don't recall a time when he stood across my path; he always walked beside, guiding me with__his__own__steps. When, at 10, I announced that I was going to Africa to bring back wild animals, my mother and sisters pointed out my age, the problems of transportation and all such ordinary and unimportant facts. But not Dad. He brought home books about Africa, train and boat schedules for us to study, and even some iron bars which we used to build cages for the animals I was to bring back. When the departure day approached and I was becoming anxious, my father brought home a newspaper that told of an accident on the railroad that was to take me to Baltimore. This postponed my trip and, by the time the train tracks were repaired, he and I were off on a new and more exciting project. When a neighbor's dog killed my dog Bounce, I was determined to kill that dog. I thought it day after day,almost making myself ill with my own hate. “Let's get it done，” my father stated unexpectedly in a whisper one evening after dinner. I followed him, to discover that he had tied the dog. He gave me a gun, and then stepped back for me to do my work. The dog and I looked at each other. He shook his tail to express friendship. Suddenly the gun was too heavy for me to hold and it dropped to the ground. The dog came up and kissed my hand. The three of us walked home together, the dog jumping in front. No word was ever said about what had happened. None was needed. When President Harding died, the_funeral_train was scheduled to pass through a town about 20 miles from ours. I wanted desperately to go and see this train, but Mother pointed out that there would be school the next day and that it would be a long trip. That ended the discussion. 注意： 1. 所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右； 2. 至少使用5個短文中標有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語； 3. 續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語已為你寫好； 4. 續(xù)寫完成后，請用下劃線標出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語。 Paragraph 1： But when the day arrived, ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2： Dad put two pennies into my hand and asked me to put them on the rails. ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ One possible version： But when the day arrived, Dad did not forget. He came to me and, in a voice as near a whisper as his nature would allow, said, “Jim, boy, it's time to see the funeral train．” We drove along to the town without talking much. When we came to the railroad station, a half dozen people were talking in soft tones and looking down the tracks. Suddenly the funeral train was coming! 但當這一天到來時，爸爸并沒有忘記。他走到我跟前，輕聲說：“吉姆，孩子，該看葬禮火車了?！蔽覀儾徽f話就開車去城里。當我們來到火車站時，六個人輕聲說話，望著鐵軌。突然間，葬禮上的火車開來了！ Dad put two pennies into my hand and asked me to put them on the rails. I did as told and jumped back to hold his hand as the train went past. I could hardly breathe. So exciting were the sight and sound. After the train had left, I got back the two pennies from the tracks. Dad put one in his pocket and I kept the other. For years, Dad and I carried those coins pressed by the weight of history. And the knowledge of what we shared made me feel very close to him. 爸爸在我手里放了兩便士，讓我把它們放在鐵軌上。我照了，火車經(jīng)過時跳回去握住他的手。我?guī)缀鯚o法呼吸。這種景象和聲音是如此令人興奮?；疖囯x開后，我從鐵軌上找到了兩便士。爸爸把一個放進他的口袋里，我放了另一個。多年來，我和我都拿著那些受歷史沉重的硬幣。我們分享的知識讓我覺得和他非常親近。 Part 5： 高考真題再現(xiàn)：母親節(jié)的驚喜 2021年6月新高考全國1卷： 閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。 A MOTHER'S DAY SURPRISE The twins were filled with excitement as they thought of the surprise they were planning for Mother's Day. How pleased and proud Mother would be when they brought her breakfast in bed. They planned to make French toast and chicken porridge. They had watched their mother in the kitchen. There was nothing to it. Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what to do. The big day came at last. The alarm rang at 6 a.m. The pair went down the stairs quietly to the kitchen. They decided to boil the porridge first. They put some rice into a pot of water and left it to boil while they made the French toast. Jeff broke two eggs into a plate and added in some milk. Jema found the bread and put two slices into the egg mixture. Next, Jef turned on the second stove burner to heat up the frying pan. Everything was going smoothly until Jeff started frying the bread. The pan was too hot and the bread turned black within seconds. Jenna threw the burnt piece into the sink and put in the other slice of bread. This time, she turned down the fire so it cooked nicely. Then Jeff noticed steam shooting out of the pot and the lid starting to shake. The next minute, the porridge boiled over and put out the fire. Jenna panicked. Thankfully, Jeff stayed calm and turned off the gas quickly. But the stove was a mess now. Jenna told Jef to clean it up so they could continue to cook the rest of the porridge. But Jeff's hand touched the hot burner and he gave a cry of pain. Jenna made him put his hand in cold water. Then she caught the smell of burning. Oh dear！The piece of bread in the pan had turned black as well. 答案 As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared.?One look and he knew what they were up to. Seeing their discouraged faces, he told them to clean up the kitchen while he helped them make breakfast for Mother. The twins cheered up and did as told. Within an hour, the kitchen was cleaned, and Father had successfully made some French toast and chicken porridge as the children wished. Then he sneaked back to bed. The twins prepared the breakfast tray, added a card they had made, and then headed for their parents'?bedroom. 當這對雙胞胎失望地環(huán)顧四周時，他們的父親出現(xiàn)了。他看了一眼，他就知道他們在做什么?？吹剿麄兙趩实哪?，他讓他們打掃廚房，同時幫他們?yōu)槟赣H做早餐。這對雙胞胎高興起來，照做了。不到一個小時，廚房就打掃干凈了，父親按照孩子們的意愿，成功地做了一些法式吐司和雞肉粥。然后他偷偷溜回床上。雙胞胎準備了早餐托盤，加了一張他們做的卡片，然后前往他們父母的臥室。 The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.?"Happy Mother's Day, darling Mummy!" ?thrilled voice yelling from their throat, the twins hugged their mom tightly. Moved and excited, mother held the twins with her warm arms as well. Her eyes widened at the sight of the breakfast tray. She shook father who was pretending to snore. He whistled in astonishment when seeing the breakfast. Mother bit into a sandwich and said she had never??tasted a better one. Jeff immediately wanted to have a bite. Jenna caught her father's eye and they winked at each other secretly. 這對雙胞胎把早餐帶到樓上，叫醒了他們的母親。“母親節(jié)快樂，親愛的媽媽！”激動的聲音從他們的喉嚨里叫喊著，雙胞胎緊緊地擁抱著他們的媽媽。母親感動而激動，也用她溫暖的胳膊抱著這對雙胞胎。一看到早餐托盤，她就睜大了眼睛。她搖著假裝打鼾的父親。當他看到早餐時，他驚訝地吹著口哨。媽媽咬了咬三明治，說她從來沒有嘗過比這更好的三明治過。杰夫立刻想咬他一口。詹娜抓住了她父親的目光，他們偷偷地互相眨了眨眼。

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